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Offline chichay12

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Re: Will I see you tomorrow? (Atsumina, Kojiyuu and others)
« Reply #60 on: October 28, 2012, 03:40:00 AM »
miko-san!!!
Pls update this!
Waiting for this is killing me!!

Update!!update!!update!! :banghead:  :banghead:

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Re: Will I see you tomorrow? (Atsumina, Kojiyuu and others)
« Reply #61 on: October 28, 2012, 09:31:50 AM »
Miko-san please update :banghead: I'm really curious about what's happen next :bow:

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Re: Will I see you tomorrow? (Atsumina, Kojiyuu and others)
« Reply #62 on: November 06, 2012, 10:24:14 AM »
UPDATE?
 :mon hanky: :mon hanky: :mon hanky:
ow may?
im so sorry
Miko san IM JUST SOOO EXCITED FOR THE NEXT UPDATE!
please update soon  :mon olympic:
Thankyou hehehehehehe
Atsuyuu ♥ Takayuu ♥ Atsumina ♥ Mayuki

YOSH! I'M BACK! FINALLY!!! (notreally)
Been inactive these past few months. =__=
ARRRRGHHHH DUNNO WHY!

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Re: Will I see you tomorrow? (Atsumina, Kojiyuu and others)
« Reply #63 on: November 06, 2012, 12:51:14 PM »
UPDATE?
 :mon hanky: :mon hanky: :mon hanky:
ow may?
im so sorry
Miko san IM JUST SOOO EXCITED FOR THE NEXT UPDATE!
please update soon  :mon olympic:
Thankyou hehehehehehe


I also need an update  :cry: kojiyuu~~~  :cry:



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Re: Will I see you tomorrow? (Atsumina, Kojiyuu and others)
« Reply #64 on: November 09, 2012, 08:59:09 PM »
Mikomiko San! Where are you???  :? Really REALLY need an update for this fic! Please update sooooooooon!!!!!!!  :bow:

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Re: Will I see you tomorrow? (Atsumina, Kojiyuu and others)
« Reply #65 on: November 10, 2012, 06:25:17 PM »
please update this story  :)


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Re: Will I see you tomorrow? (Atsumina, Kojiyuu and others) Chapter 7!
« Reply #66 on: November 15, 2012, 08:23:30 AM »
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Thank you for all your comments, each and every single one, I treasure a lot. So thank you for commenting and reading.  :heart: Sorry for the late update.... :bow:  but I hope you do enjoy this chapter...

haruhi16 - Haha, "Make Riku jealous" plan will come, but of course there's always twists. :p

Sydney W - The green eyed monster called jealousy has taken over Acchan...along with the remains of her hate for our poor Takamina. But I had planned for her to not warm up to Kai just yet, but while writing I couldn't help it...

hidden_player - Ahhh~ Thank you very much...its not perfect...at least I don't think this chapter is...I don't think this chapter is good...But please keep reading and commenting, I love your encouraging words. :D

arrow27- Hmmm Takamina and yuko are getting a hard time...things will get worst though...  :D Please keep reading. Thank you for your constant support. :)

Takamina_Captain- Hahaha, kill the guy bodyguards?..hmm, they annoy me aswell once in awhile. 

Haruko- Thank you! But, I don't really think this chapter is really interesting...but tell me what you think. Yes, Takamina is loved by everyone no doubt. The RayxKai scene, yes it works for everything, I love that scene.  thank you for reading.

yuuzu05- I'm really sorry there's no tomotomo in this chapter but the next defin! Thank you for reading and for commenting and for liking!  :) Thank you.

Strawberri- Thank you for giving this fic a go. :D Hope I can keep you reading!

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okotteru- I was planning this fic and before I knew it I had everyone liking Takamina... :P Maeda will eventually know...:)

yourockme- Haha yes Ray! Add in another rival!!! Muwhahah

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Crossing Crossroads- Ah don't worry, the mission things/ seriel killer will go on well until the end. It plays an important part. Sachou...Sachou...is having too much fun. hahaha.

kahem- I like clueless Takamina aswell! Hahhaha Hot Chiyuu, hopefully that can help her with her romance.

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hazwani- Yup as you wish...

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Chapter 7 - When does it stop?


"Takamina!” Mii chan exclaimed in the awkward silence, causing the said girl to look around furiously.

“Y-Yes!”

Mii chan leaned in subtly and winked at Kojiharu who also did the same action, giving a little girly giggle.

The midget saw the “not so subtly anymore” action and leaned back from her approaching sisters. Seeing this action Mii chan pulled their leader in by her arm and kissed the midget’s cheek. Kojiharu, her face tinted red also did the same, pressing her lips of the other cheek, her eyes closed as she savoured her sister’s soft cheeks.

Haruna’s heart was pounding, her lips stayed where they were even when Mii chan had already withdrawn.

Takamina stayed very still with a slight smile on her face. She loved her sister very much and the affection she was given, well she couldn’t say she didn’t like it. But she had one thought in mind…

Is the door locked? If someone were to walk in this instance, it would be very awkward.

 The gachapin like girl smirked as she heard the door click and with a loud BAM, the door slammed opened and there stood the perverted squirrel, who stared in disbelief.

“NYAN NYAN?!” Haruna quickly and reluctantly withdrew herself from Takamina’s cheek and looked down as she fiddled with her hands. Her face burning hot from the embarrassment.

Then there was that awkward silence again. Takamina looked at Yuko, whose eyes glued to Kojiharu who was busy concentrating on the bed. Mii chan looked around and opened her mouth while getting off the bed and walking to Yuko, dragging her out of the door.

“It’s not rare to see brothers kissing each other, anyways wanna go on a date with me?” Mii chan proposed which was instantly shot down.

“No. You know I love Nya-“

“To get your Nyan Nyan jealous?” Mii chan’s eyebrow quirked up and she gave a fast wink.

In response, Yuko’s face beamed and she jumped to give the blue streaked hair boy a tight hug. “I lovvvveee youuu.”

At that moment, Takamina walked out of the door with Haruna following harboring a suspicious smile on her face. Her eyes were filled with love as she gazed dreamily at the midget’s back.

I love you Takamina…

The midget squirrel growled jealously as she realized that the person she loved paid no attention to her. “Bakamina” She snarled under her breath. She had no idea who this Takamina was, but she sensed that she was the problem and wall that separated her from her Nyan Nyan. And whoever Takamina was, she had a strange thought that it could be somehow closely related to the blonde midget…

(Will I see you tomorrow?)

“Are you sure you don’t want some?” Mariko quirked an eyebrow up at the drooling girl as she held a spoonful of katsudon to Takamina’s mouth.
 
Takamina’s favourite dish was held right in front of her, and if she took one more step, just one tiny step she could taste that mouth-watering delicious looking Katsudon.

But Maeda’s voice rang in her head.
“Looks like there won’t be any dinner or bed, for little Kai tonight!”

She wasn’t able to live up to Maeda’s expectations and although she is now Tomochin’s bodyguard, when Maeda said those words she was still hers. So the most logical thing to do was to listen to Maeda and not have dinner or a bed tonight.

Takamina clenched her eyes shut, and stood up from the table, “Thank you for the meal!” She knew this was very rude, but she couldn’t help it. She was surrounded with almost 10 bowls of katsudon, which she wasn’t allowed. She hastily said as she rushed out from the dining table. As she ran she knocked over a Picasso painting on the wall.

Before anyone from the table reacted, Aoi san was already near Kai and readjusting the portrait. Takamina got up and stared at his unusual behaviour.

“Are you alright?” He then asked.

“Ah, yeah…thanks.” Kai said as he scratched the back of his head.

The night bodyguard walked back to the dining table and sat down proceeding to eat his dinner again. The gang just stared. Who knew the unusually quiet guy was so fast.

Kai quickly scanned the portrait one more time before entering his room.

“What’s with the midget?” Yuko casually asked, taking another bite into her pork.

“Her favourite dish is Katsudon. No matter where she is and what she’s feeling a bowl or two or three, would cheer her up again. She just can’t resist katsudon.” Mii chan shrugged. “So I found it really weird for her to actually not eat today…”

The blue streaked boy finished as he turned his gaze towards the black haired actress who gave a nonchalant “hmph”, as she dug into her katsudon. No one knew, but the food loving girl had lost her appetite.

Well except for Miichan, who just gave a small smirk. Guess the honest Acchan isn’t so honest about her feelings.

Yuko who was sitting next to Kuu nudged him to turn around. Mii chan did just that and was met with a full spoon of rice.

“Say Ah~~” The perverted squirrel motioned as she leaned in and gently tucked the spoon into Mii chan’s mouth. She then took her napkin and wiped the sauce off Kuu’s mouth.

Kuu couldn’t help but blush. She had always thought she would be the one feeding her husband in the future, but being fed wasn’t that bad actually.

Yuko caught the watching eyes of her target and smiled.

Nyan Nyan is watching!!! Let’s make this even more exciting.

Yuko mentally cheered.

Holding her now empty spoon which had just been in Miichan’s mouth, she took it and licked it sensually while all the time eyeing Kojipa.

“Hmmm…Kuu~” She purred as she wrapped her tongue around the spoon, licking it in several directions and oh so slowly.

Literally, everyone dropped their spoons as they saw the scene.

Haruna fidgeted in her chair, and she tried to avoid Yuko who was staring at her with a seductive look on her face.

A very seductive look.

Isn’t this…going too far? Mii chan thought but then immediately erased it as she imagined the juicy drama it could provide.

Acchan kept eating her katsudon, well more like stabbing the her bowl of katsudon, that it looked more like mashed potato than rice. STUPID KAI! STUPID KAI! As she was chanting that in her head, her phone vibrated indicating that the person she had planted the tracker on had left the house. She grimaced, took her coat and ran out of the front door.

Everyone was too focused on Yuko to realise Acchan was gone.

Tomochin watched with her mouth gaped open…her sister was sexy, maybe she had to do something like that to get Kai. She contemplated and observed her sister’s ways.

The two often disregarded boy bodyguards had a slight problem and quickly accused excused themselves to the toilet.

“If Acchan were to do that…Ah…” Sato grinned as he pinched his nose to stop the potential nosebleed.


Mariko was obviously jealous, but she stayed where she was and continued with her katsudon. This is stupid. Everything that’s Kuu’s belongs to ME! She screamed in her head, though it was hilarious to see the colour change on Riku’s face.

“Ah~…this is amazing~” Yuko continue to purr.

“THAT’S IT!” Kojipa shouted,  her face burning red as she slammed her hands on the dining table. “This is a DINING ROOM! IF you’re indicating something, THERE’S SEVERAL BEDROOMS! USE IT!” She screamed.

Quickly as possible, Kojipa rushed to her room, hiding her red blushing face.

 I’m attracted to boys. I’m attracted to boys. Takamina’s an exception. I’m attracted to boys. She chanted in her head as she drowned herself in her pillow, hitting the side of her bed as hard as she possible could.

“I can’t believe it….

…I was turned on.” 

After a while the door opened and in stepped Kuu, who surveyed the room in search of her midget leader. She looked at her table and saw a hand written note, and motioned Kojiharu to come.

“Nyan Nyan, hurry up, stop moping and come!”

A zombie like Riku rolled out of his blanket and trotted along towards Mii chan who gave him a soft pat on the back. “Why are you so dead?”

“Miichan…I’m attracted to boys, right?” Her eyes focused on her sister’s.

“Yeah…I guess, though Takamina’s an exception. Right?”

Haruna’s back instantly straightened and her eyes widen so wide you wouldn’t think it was possible. “H-H-How’d you k-k-know…”

“It’s obvious.”

A cute pink found its way to Haruna’s cheek as she fiddled with her fingers. “Is it?”

“Well to me yes, and Yuko knows you like this person called Takamina, though she doesn’t know who it is.”

The tall girl fell the ground and began punching the floor.

“How could I be so careless!...Does Takamina know?”

Mii chan rolled her eyes. “She’ll realise when you can square root three.”

“I can’t.”

“Exactly my point.”

Mii chan helped Kojiharu to stand up and she handed her sister the note. “…There’s nothing wrong, Takamina’s just gone shopping.”

The younger girl shook her head and took back the paper while pointing to the midget’s handwriting. “I don’t think so, her hand writing gives it away. It’s all rushed and scribbled; someone besides us will think it’s a bunch of scribbles. She’s on a mission.” 

“Let’s go after her?”

“At the bottom of this letter it also warns us about-“ 

KNOCK KNOCK


Mii chan took a glance at her sister before unlocking and opening the door to reveal the one person she was least expecting: Nakamura Aoi.

“O-Osu! What’s up.” Kuu greeted.

“We’re watching a movie, want to join?” He flashed one of his smiles, and honestly both the girls disguised in male outfits thought it was quite charming.

“Y-Yeah sure.” Kuu answered before motioning her sister to join aswell.

Takamina's letter:

買い物をする (going shopping)



Blueをきをつけて  (Be careful of Blue)


(Will I see you tomorrow?)


Back to her normal persona with her battle outfit, and wearing her backpack, Takamina didn’t stop when she was confronted with 10 more assassins like figures, each wielding a metal pipe.

Takamina’s gloves were bloody and dripping with blood. Her breath was rigid and she was puffing like mad. She had already lost count of how many she had defeated, but whatever she did there were always more.

Her sight was disfigured, but her eyes still held the determination and fury and only grew stronger as the mysterious men came charging towards her.

Four men were charging at her at the same time, she dodged the centre two and flipped them over using their momenteum. Her eyes looked from left to right, as she bent down and delivered a sliding round kick, knocking the other two men off their feet.

“Don’t think that’s the end of us!” The men laughed. “It’s only the start.”

“Entertain me.” The midget smirked as she held her stance.

(Will I see you tomorrow?)

Acchan followed the tracker which led her Kabukicho in Shinjuku. The indicator stopped blinking and she looked down where she was standing. The tracker was there on the ground, but the blonde was nowhere to be found. 

“Tsk, did he notice?” She scowled.

Her mind was so focused on finding the blonde that she didn’t realise someone standing behind her. The furious looking yakuza, instantly without another thought covered the actress’s  mouth and brought her to a dark alley.

The man let his hand go for one sec, and Acchan screamed for her life for the only person she had in mind. “KKKKKAAAAAIIIIIIII HHHHEEELLLPPPP”

Takamina retrieved her punch from the stomachs of the two attackers. “Maeda…” She mumbled as she ran from the alley to where the sound was located. Thankfully she was really close to the alley, Maeda was trapped in.

A stone was thrown at Maeda’s attacker’s head. “Let her go.”
“What the hell?" The guy said as he charged towards her and swung his arm, but unfortunately was caught and before he knew what was happening he was kicked in the stomach and sent careening backwards.

Unreservedly bewildered at her midget hero, Atsuko scrambled to her feet, feeling as though her shaky legs could give way any time.

Faster than the eye could follow, the small girl was crouched down, dodging the attackers punch as she buried her fist into the man’s stomach.

Atsuko blinked.

This girl was fast.

When the actress thought everything was over a hoard of assassin like men charged towards them, she was getting ready to run, but from both sides they were surrounded.

The midget girl smirked and all Acchan could visualise was a mass of movements and the occasional flash of the little girl’s pink ribbon. Atsuko was panicking, but she wanted to do something to help, she didn’t even know this stranger, yet she was risking her life, helping her. The girl was no doubt strong, escaping blows with terrifying ease.

But she was definitely outnumbered; eight against one.

She had to do something.

Desperate to help, the black haired girl picked up the tennis ball shaped stone thrown earlier. Realising how heavy it was she looked at the girl once more before lifting it with both hands and chucking it as hard as she could to one of the offenders.
A glare immediately shot at her and she gulped, while keeping her posture. She had pride and she wasn’t going to lose it.

She wasn’t going to lose her pride…but maybe her head.

Atsuko was knocked backwards, nearly hitting the ground before a soft bag slid between her and the ground. The small girl was in front of her, and the midget offered a hand to Atsuko who took it gratefully.

Looking around, Takamina saw that there was only one guy standing who she easier took down with one hand.
“Piece of cake.”

A sound of applause echoed in the dark and the midget turned to it, her face grimaced in worry. “Who are you?”
“Well done. 58 men and you took them all down, by yourself.” The figure couldn’t be seen but judging from the voice, it was a woman.

“What do you want?” The midget walked back and held Maeda’s hand.

The mysterious woman laughed.

“You.”

Sensing the shivering from the taller girl’s hand, Takamina discarded the questions she wanted to ask and ran from the alley into the city.

Maeda’s eyes never left Takamina.

Once they were at the train station, Takamina let the actress go and her eyebrows curled in anger. “Why are you here alone? Where’s your bodyguard?”

“S-sorry. I-“

“Someone like you shouldn’t be in a city like this. It’s dangerous! Leave.”

Maeda bowed in shame and when she lifted it, the midget was already gone.

(Will I see you tomorrow?)
Kai looked at his watch and realising it was time for breakfast, he jumped off the mansion roof and walked in through the front door. He had taken a shower as soon as he got back from Shinjuku, adjusted his makeup and brushed his teeth before jumping on the roof to take a short sleep before waking up and taking their “masters” to their respective workplaces.

“Good morning.” He greeted as he settled in his seat with his breakfast laid out in front of him.

Not everyone was present on the dining table, Tomochin was missing and was told that she was still sleeping in her room. Nakamura and Sato wasn’t there either.

“Your breakfast was made by her.” Mariko pointed to Ray who sat quietly on the couch. “Go talk to her please, she’s been here since forever and won’t budge.” The oldest sister leaned into Takamina’s ear and whispered. “If you make her sad again, it’ll mean war. So make up with her.”

Ray stood up and walked towards Kai who hesitantly stood up aswell.

War? “R-Ray…about last time I’m sor-“

Warm soft lips were placed on the midget’s. It took 3 entire seconds for Takamina to realise what was going on, as she pushed the Diva off her.

“KISS?!” The gang yelled. Acchan’s cereal fell from her hands and landed on the floor.

“R-R-Ray, W-W-What are you d-“

Before she could finish, the same lips were pressed against hers and the pleasant look on Ray’s face could not be missed by anyone.

“Kiss Part 2?!” Mii chan laughed.

“Ray took Kai’s first kiss.” Kojiharu added, the chopsticks she was using snapped in hard and the tall girl’s teeth clenched.

 Acchan hearing that it was Kai’s first kiss, took her cereal bowl from the ground and threw the bowl right onto Kai’s head.
“STUPID KAI!”

She threw Kai her usual glare and ran towards her room, slamming the door in the process.

Pushing away from Ray, Takamina fell to the ground and tried to comprehend the situation.

“Those words you said to me. I realise, that you said them because you care about me. No one has ever told me off before because I was the DIVA, but you, you are different. I’ve decided, Kai is mine.”

“Huh?” The midget was really really confused.

“NO! KAI IS MINE!” Kojiharu retorted while taking full possession of her sister, embracing her and to her own surprise and everyone else’s she took Takamina’s face in her hands and kissed her hard.

Yuko... Yuko, for the first time in her life was shocked…utterly and completely shocked. Didn't Riku like Takamina, why was she kissing his own brother.

I lost to a boy?

Ray blinked again and again. “KAI is MINE! You’re his brother!”

Riku pulled out from the kiss and licked his lips. “Kai…”

“I don’t care! I love him aswell!” Kojiharu exclaimed, as she carried the midget in her arms and left the scene entering her room, her face red and embarrassed.

Why did I do that?

The victim, Takamina had lost all signs of consciousness, but her last thought still lingered in her unconscious mind.

What is this? It’s like a harem manga. First, the DIVA who I had lectured a day ago kisses me twice. Next Maeda throws a cereal bowl at me out of anger?  Now I’m being kissed by my sister… I must be dreamin-

(Will I see you Tomorrow?)

Mariko and Mii chan, sat on the living room couch and sighed at the excess surprises the drama they were in control over before.

“Ne..Mari chan…this is..this is…”

Mariko looked over to Mii chan and met his eyes.

“EXCITING!” They said in unison.

"You still going to go on a date with Yuko?"

"Yeah, I am. As much as it is interesting, I think Riku should stop liking Kai, it won't work. I also think Riku does like Yuko, he's not aware of it...because of his hatred towards perversion . Hahaha."

Mariko nodded. "Another question...Tell me, I’m right when I say that Persona are all girls, right. “Takamina” is Kai, Right?”

Mii chan sighed. “You’re too smart. I’m sorry for deceiving you guys. We really wanted this position.”

Mariko patted Mii chan’s head and ruffled his wig. “It’s okay, makes things more interesting. And I love interesting. If you don't mind.....Please...tell me your names.” The older girl's eyes softened.

Mii chan beamed. “ Riku is Kojima Haruna. Kai is Takahashi Minami. And I’m…Minegishi Minami.”

“Then…can I call you Mii chan when we’re alone?” Mariko murmured.

The younger girl nodded and smiled. “Thank you for accepting me.”

A tomato coloured strip planted itself on Mariko’s face and she gave a short nod. 

Minegishi opened the roll of paper she was holding and showed Mariko the piece of paper. “Yesterday, when we were planning for something, I had Takamina to draw us.”

Mariko looked at the paper and grinned. “Pen.”

Mii chan placed the various coloured pens on the table and both of them started drawing the connections. When she drew the line between her and Mariko she hesitated until the older girl beat her it and drew a heart.

Both their smiles grew.

“Who’s Yui?” Mariko asked.

Mii chan turned to the questioner and answered with a simple:

“A friend that Takamina loves very much.”

 They smiled at the completion of the picture and held it up. “Wow, Kai-Takamina sure is popular.” Mariko commented.

“She’s perfect, that’s why.”

“She is.” The older girl laughed.



“Was she stared at a lot on the plane when in her male persona?”

“Yeah , there was this one girl-“ Mii chan started before realising she had left this Mocchi girl hanging and waiting for Takamina’s call. Oh well, Takamina had enough trouble with girls for the time being. Plus the attack on Wednesday...

End of Chapter 7

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Sorry about the lateness of this chapter. The quality of this chapter wasn't really good, I think. But I really do hope you enjoyed it. it's not very good but I hope you enjoy the little sketch I did aswell! um Can you see it? I'm not sure how to attach it properly... :cry:

Thank you for your support. I love you alllllll.  :heart:

Till next time,

Miko :cathappy:
« Last Edit: November 15, 2012, 08:51:15 AM by Mikomiko »
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Re: Will I see you tomorrow? (Atsumina, Kojiyuu and others)
« Reply #67 on: November 15, 2012, 08:40:40 AM »
So I've completely become entranced with this story! Seeing it as an Atsumina pairing, to a Takatomo pairing to a Kai/Ray pairing to a takaharu and then into Taka-Harem is.... :luvluv1:
I do wish there was more takatomo. . .since it's so rare to see  :nervous
Thank you so much for writing this and I can't wait for your next update!!  :heart:
Umeda Ayaka is my kami-oshi  :heart:
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Takamina is my spirit animal XD

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Re: Will I see you tomorrow? (Atsumina, Kojiyuu and others) CHAPTER 7 UP
« Reply #68 on: November 15, 2012, 09:27:09 AM »
OMG I love this chapter!!!!
Kojiharu wow!!! She does have guts!!!
Mariko-sama is smart as expected

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Re: Will I see you tomorrow? (Atsumina, Kojiyuu and others) CHAPTER 7 UP
« Reply #69 on: November 15, 2012, 11:05:27 AM »
Poor Kai-Takamina being threw bowl by Acchan again ! Jealously again :P
And Acchan do really care about Kai even though she anger the midget.
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STUPID KAI! STUPID KAI! As she was chanting that in her head, her phone vibrated indicating that the person she had planted the tracker on had left the house. She grimaced, took her coat and ran out of the front door.
~ Go Acchan, catch up with your lover  :twothumbs
Btw, Mariko is really too smart. Nothing can be hidden from her eyes
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Mariko nodded. "Another question...Tell me, I’m right when I say that Persona are all girls, right. “Takamina” is Kai, Right?”
   :lol:

Keep updating this fics, author-san ! Tq

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Re: Will I see you tomorrow? (Atsumina, Kojiyuu and others) CHAPTER 7 UP
« Reply #70 on: November 15, 2012, 11:09:28 AM »
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"I really Lurb YOU"
OMO OMO  :ptam-wub: :on gay:  :mon mischief:
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"I really Lurb YOU"................R comments.
:frustrated: :ptam-hbk: :mon whine:

WOoooOOwWW I envy Takamina  :pig realmad:
LOL Nyan nyan DID WHAT???  :mon taichi:
ARghhhhhHH
I really Lurb youu  :mon ghost:   ..r FICS
 :mon yoyo: :mon yoyo:
WHAHAHA
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I do wish there was more takatomo
Yess Please  :mon devcandy: XDD
well i want it because i want acchan to be JEALOUS SOO MUCHHHH HUWAHAHA
ARIGATOU for the update  :gmon fry: :gmon fry:
 :mon olympics: *WAITING for the next next next next updetoo*  :on shady: :on shady:


LOL  I realize I made a LONG REPLY ? soriii  :banghead:
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YOSH! I'M BACK! FINALLY!!! (notreally)
Been inactive these past few months. =__=
ARRRRGHHHH DUNNO WHY!

Offline haruhi16

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Re: Will I see you tomorrow? (Atsumina, Kojiyuu and others) CHAPTER 7 UP
« Reply #71 on: November 15, 2012, 11:24:11 AM »
Can you post the next chapter? I can't wait to read more! My KOJIYUU heart is breaking and ATSUMINA pairing should be in a progress!!!

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Re: Will I see you tomorrow? (Atsumina, Kojiyuu and others) CHAPTER 7 UP
« Reply #72 on: November 15, 2012, 11:51:33 AM »
LOL! when Kojiharu can square root 3! I saw her answer to that question in a vid :P Woah things def got more complicated for Takamina and yuko :P Takamina was awesome during the fight scene but I wonder why she took on the mission alone. & yay, Atsuko met "Takamina" for the 1st time :D Though poor takamina can't seem to catch a break with her considering this time she got a bowl thrown at her lol. Poor takamina is the victim to all these girl's love and Acchan takes it out on her lol :P As for Kojiharu, she must be going thru tough emotions, same with yuko, those two r def meant together :D
& nice to know one of the sisters figured out the bodyguards identities, makes sense mariko would catch on first :)
Thanks for the update, I enjoyed the chapter :) Looking forward to your next update ^^

Oh, and love Mocchi was mentiond lol poor her never got a call :P & also how Yui was mentiond, she & taka are such good friends ^^
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Re: Will I see you tomorrow? (Atsumina, Kojiyuu and others) CHAPTER 7 UP
« Reply #73 on: November 15, 2012, 12:24:56 PM »
Can you post the next chapter? I can't wait to read more! My KOJIYUU heart is breaking and ATSUMINA pairing should be in a progress!!!

I also need the next chapter!! Hahahaha!!!
Im still waiting for the kojiyuu!!!  :cry:
And yeah miichan is right! Riku also love yuko!!!!!!!!! She/he loves yuko!!!! XD



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Re: Will I see you tomorrow? (Atsumina, Kojiyuu and others) CHAPTER 7 UP
« Reply #74 on: November 15, 2012, 05:24:37 PM »
Jealous's Acchan so scar.
You break kojiyuu Heart!
Takamina/Kai got big problem!
Want more Atsumina moment and TomoTomo moment too
Pls update soonnnn :bow:
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Re: Will I see you tomorrow? (Atsumina, Kojiyuu and others) CHAPTER 7 UP
« Reply #75 on: November 15, 2012, 11:09:49 PM »
waaaaa jealous Acchan!!  XD

plese continue to the next chapter and other fic!!!  :bow: :bow:

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Re: Will I see you tomorrow? (Atsumina, Kojiyuu and others) CHAPTER 7 UP
« Reply #76 on: November 16, 2012, 12:56:32 AM »
Hahaa....I love it when miichan said "kiss part 2" its so funny   
Takamina eventhough so dense sometime but she is so perfect 
Who is this yui? I hope you can tell a bit about takamina n yui :D
Atsumina, kojiyuu, tomotomo, & marimii this couple always belong together...
I can't wait the next chapter, please update soon ^^

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Re: Will I see you tomorrow? (Atsumina, Kojiyuu and others) CHAPTER 7 UP
« Reply #77 on: November 16, 2012, 04:20:22 AM »
just started reading this fic and i like it :))
LOL at Acchan throwing the bowl at Kai!!
Thank you for the fic and plesase update soon Miko-san!!

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Re: Will I see you tomorrow? (Atsumina, Kojiyuu and others) CHAPTER 7 UP
« Reply #78 on: November 16, 2012, 05:15:44 AM »
What! are talking serious!?!.. I love this chapter really!!.. jejeje the ray`s kiss was a dejavu.. but the haruna`s kiss shock me a lot.. but the arent real sisters.. right? because they have differents last name....  jajaj atsuko reaction!!! i laugh a lot.. we know that marichan is too smart.. :D but it can help them...

the yuko`s sexy scene OMG!!! haruna turns on with that.. with cant blame her right?

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Re: Will I see you tomorrow? (Atsumina, Kojiyuu and others) CHAPTER 7 UP
« Reply #79 on: November 16, 2012, 01:27:51 PM »
Ray and Kai so deja vu.. :D But KojiHaru kissing Takamina.... I was like OMG!!!!
Everyone thinks Kai and Riku are boys and that two boys are kissing but it's actually two girls.. It's amazing!!
Please update soon!!

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