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Re: WMatsui: Great Escape Chapter 18
« Reply #340 on: June 29, 2013, 06:39:56 AM »
Rena...why why did you do it with Yuki?! :(

I hate you, Yuki!!!

And finally, the climax is here!


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Re: WMatsui: Great Escape Chapter 18
« Reply #341 on: June 29, 2013, 08:08:06 AM »
This is the turning point for them.  Let's go Rena and Jurina
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Re: WMatsui: Great Escape Chapter 18
« Reply #342 on: June 29, 2013, 08:13:20 AM »
OMG!!! I DIDN'T EXPECT THIS!! DWNKJDWEJKNDEWKJNDWEJ

CONTI PLS!!! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH


PS: I loved rena's story in the convention xDDDD ahahha
and the wmatsui moment in the bet *w* KYAAAAAAAAAA

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Re: WMatsui: Great Escape Chapter 18
« Reply #343 on: June 29, 2013, 08:33:45 AM »
aaah so here the escape part :D
please don't make jurina suffer  :cry: :cry:
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Re: WMatsui: Great Escape Chapter 18
« Reply #344 on: June 29, 2013, 11:25:51 AM »
Jurina was still a child at heart there..

And Rena was a otaku....

Oh... Jurina was getting better....

And they got separated now.... for Rena being arrested for kidnapping and fraud of Jurina....

What's happening with Rena...?

Who told the police about Rena and Jurina not related? Sae or Mayu?

Who would save Rena? Yuko or Yuki?

What's going to happen next?

Can't wait to see

Thank you for the update

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Re: WMatsui: Great Escape Chapter 18
« Reply #345 on: June 29, 2013, 03:14:30 PM »
What Rena kidnapped Jurina wtf, Rena was taking care of her u stupid police man f u biatch 
Update soon i wanna know why now, why are the police here now ??????
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Re: WMatsui: Great Escape Chapter 18
« Reply #346 on: June 29, 2013, 03:42:05 PM »
the cute and nice stuff was making me smile...
so happy, finally Wmatsui, kawaii~
jurina's still a cute lil kid at heart...
nooo!! bad things happening... dies...

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Re: WMatsui: Great Escape Chapter 19
« Reply #347 on: June 29, 2013, 09:50:42 PM »
Time to see what happens to Jurina and Rena! Hope you like the update!
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Chapter 19

I was held up in a cell for God knows how long until some police officers came by and took me into an interrogation room. They sat me down in a chair and then soon after another officer came in. They pulled out a couple papers and read somethings about me I'm guessing. Then the detective looked at me and then said,

"So Matsui Rena tell me, why did you take Jurina?"

"Well.. I found her living under a bridge all alone so I thought I should take her in." I said.

"Did you think about taking her to the police or looking for her parents?"

"No because I thought the police would be rough on her and send her off to some crummy foster care."

The detective stroked his hair and then said,

"Well taking her in was illegal. You should have just turned her in and we would've sent her to a nice home. Instead you took her in as your own claiming she was yours and even went to as far as creating a fake ID for her.I hope you know how much trouble you are in."

I just looked away but then the detective said,

"The longest you'll be in prison is twenty five to life depending on how good your lawyer is. I'll see you in court."

The detective had me taken back to my cell where I sat there and thought for a long time. I wondered what was happening to Jurina right now. Wondering if she was safe or not. I hope they were being nice to her and not doing anything bad. I swear if they even lay a finger on her I'll take them down hard. As I was sitting on my bed doing basically nothing, a guard came and got me saying I had a visitor. I walked over to the visitor section where there were a bunch of booths with glass walls separating them. They took me one to the far end and there sitting on the other side was Yuko! They sat me down and then I picked up the phone as Yuko held it up to her ear.

"Yuko what are you doing here?" I asked.

"I heard you got into some trouble so I came to check in on you." she said.

"I'm fine but how is Jurina? Is she safe?"

"As far as I know she's being held with Child Protective Services. Don't worry she's safe though."

"Ah thank goodness. They tell me I'll be going to jail for a long time. If you see Jurina again tell her I love her and I hope she does well in the future."

"Hey don't say things like that. Who says you'll be going to jail?"

"Eh?"

Yuko looked around to make sure there was no one watching us. Then she took out a tiny piece of paper and slid it through the holes in the glass. She told me to hide it and then right as I put it away the guard came and took me away. When I got back to my cell I pulled out the paper and unfolded it.

"Listen to me very carefully Rena. At midnight tonight there will be a low number of guards patrolling the area. The only ones you have to worry about is the ones at the front desk, the occasional two that walk the cells, the outside guards and the dogs. Listen Rena I'm not letting you go down like this so what's gonna happen is that when night falls, you're going to break out. There is a small pin taped to the back of this note. Use it to pick the lock on your cell and then get out of there. You're going to have to be careful sneaking out and try not to get caught. I'll be waiting for you outside the prison along with Jurina. If everything goes according to plan you and Jurina will be home free and you'll have to leave the city which is going to be tricky. We'll worry about those details later but for now you need to focus on getting out. We'll be waiting for you so good luck."

I took off the pin and then waited for night to come. When it was time, I got up and walked over to the cell door. I took out the pin and then picked at the lock. A couple minutes later there was a click and the door opened. I quickly slid out and then started to walk along the halls. I had to stay quite no matter what and also stay out of the light. I don't know how long it would take for them to notice I was gone and I didn't want to find out. I moved down the hall very quietly and so far things were going pretty good. Then I suddenly stopped when I heard the sound of footsteps coming my way. I could see the flashlight of a guard coming and I had to find a place to hide. I ran over to a pillar and hid behind it. My heart was racing like crazy as I heard the guard grow closer and closer. As her came closer I started to make my way around the pillar. The I stopped when I heard his footsteps had stopped.

"Yabai.." I said to myself.

I waited until the guard started to walk again and when I saw him turn the corner I quickly got out of there. I looked for a possible exit and that's when I found an open window leading to the roof. I ran over to it but then realized that I wasn't tall enough to reach it. Looking for something I could use for leverage, I saw there was a filing cabinet that I could jump off. I climbed to the top of the cabinet and that was when I heard a loud shout.

"PRISONER ESCAPE! ACTIVE THE ALARM!"

Soon after there was a loud alarm and flashing red lights. I quickly jumped off the cabinet and crawled through the open window. Soon after more lights came on and the sound of dogs barking could be heard. They had searchlights scanning the area for me and I knew I had to stay out of them. I quickly hid behind some generators to avoid the light and then moved when they moved away. I knew I had to get off the roof somehow but there were no ladders or anything to help me get down. Looks like I was going to have to jump the question was where? I looked around trying to find something to safely jump on but then suddenly there was a spotlight heading straight for me. I had no choice but to jumped and luckily I landed in some plants. However at that moment I had made some noises and now the guards were moving towards me. To make things worse they had dogs with them that could probably smell me. I had to get of my scent so I felt around and felt mud.

"Oh god.."

I had no choice but to roll in the mud and get myself covered in it. I stopped moving when I thought they were right on top of me. I could feel the dogs sniffing the bushes I was hiding in and I could feel their breaths. Luckily I passed and the dogs continued to move. I looked up ahead and I could see the car where Yuko was at. However there was also a wide open field plus a fence with barbwire on the top of it. I knew it was risky but there was no other way to get there without being detected. I had no choice so I took a deep breath and the ran as fast as I could into the field. The dogs started barking and police officers were shouting at me.

"Freeze or we'll shoot!"

They weren't kidding when they said they were going to shoot. I felt bullets shoot past me but they didn't hit me. I made it to the fence and started to climb but then suddenly I heard the police say,

"Taser taser taser!!"

I knew what that meant so I tried to climb faster but then I heard a shot fired and felt two barbs hit me and a huge blast of electricity hit me after. The shock was incredibly painful and I fell off the fence and onto the ground hard while still being shocked. The police guards were about to jump on me but then suddenly there was gunfire and the officer was killed. I looked over and saw Yuko standing there holding a gun and she said,

"Rena run!"

I got up and started running once again and this time I was able to slip under the fence because I was so skinny. I got into the car and Yuko slammed the door and then drove off.

"Rena hold still."

"Ahhhh!"

Yuko removed the taser barbs from my back which was actually quite painful. Then she said,

"Why are you covered in mud?"

"Dogs." I said.

"Ah I see."

"Where's Jurina?"

"We're on our way to get her now. When we were there we were almost discovered so we had to run."

"I see well let's get her fast then."

"Oi Yuko aren't you going to introduce us?" said a voice coming from the driver's seat.

"Ah sorry about that. Rena the one driving is Takahashi Minami. We were friends back when were in the military. The one next to her is-"

"Maeda Atsuko!"

"Yes that's Atsuko and she's Takamina's partner."

"Thank you for helping me escape." I said.

"It's nothing~ Now let's go get Jurina!"

We drove to he place where Jurina was being held and it looks like they were expecting us to be there because they had tons of guards. Minami and Atsuko were going to distract the guards while Yuko and I went to get Jurina.

"Are you ready dear?" Minami asked.

"Let's do this baby~" Atsuko said.

Then the two walked in and started shooting up the place like crazy. It was a strange distraction but it worked for now. While the guards were fighting against Atsuko and Minami, Yuko and I snuck by and started to make our way to Jurina. She was being held on the top floor. There were three floors between her and us so we were going to have to make it fast. Yuko and I dashed through the first floor without any problems and the second one had a couple guards but we easily snuck past them. However on the the third floor there were a bunch of guards and we had no choice but to fight. Surprisingly Yuko was a really good fighter for her size. She was quick and powerful with her punches. She really was a strong person. When Yuko knocked out the last guard, we moved in and when I opened the door, there was Jurina sleeping silently on the couch. I walked over and gently woke her up. When she saw me she smiled and said,

"Rena!"

"Shhh!"

"Hey they're in here!"

"Rena we gotta go!"

I quickly grabbed Jurina and the three of us ran as fast as we could. We ran all the way up to the roof where there was nowhere else to go. I thought we were screwed but then Yuko pulled out ropes and threw one end to another building. She secured the line and then handed me the other one. She said we were going to swing across. I didn't have time to debate because the guards had broken through and were almost to us. I grabbed Jurina and told her to hold on tightly and then we jumped off the building. We were falling fast but then the rope jerked us up. We swung all the way across the road and landed right on top of the car. I had to pause to take a moment to breathe because that whole thing was crazy but then Yuko pulled us both in and we drove away quickly. Sadly there were cars right behind us so we were going to have to lose them.

"Acchan time to use the big boomer!" Minami said.

"On it!"

Atsuko leaned outside the window and pulled out a small bag. She pulled a string and then unzipped the bag releasing a bunch of balls. The balls rolled in front of the cars and then exploded blowing up the cars behind it. I couldn't believe what I had just saw and then Jurina said,

"Cool!"

Yuko was laughing as we drove away safely to her home. As soon as we got inside the first thing Jurina did was hug me. She started crying and I settled her down. We were both happy to see each other and Jurina must have been so scared. She was holding me pretty tightly but then backed away.

"Rena you're all muddy."

I giggled and said,

"Hey I had to escape from a prison."

We both laughed and the Yuko had us both take a bath. After that we had a good meal and then we gathered for a meeting. Yuko sat us down and explained what was going to happen.

"Alright we got half of step one done. The next part is trying to get you guys out of the city. Now its obvious that flying you out is impossible so the next best thing is by boat."

"Boat?!" I said.

"Yes and not just any boat. We're going to sneak you onto a shipping boat heading to Europe."

"Why Europe?"

"Because its far enough where the government can't touch you."

"Now the boat we were thinking of leaves in three days and it's on the other side of Japan so we're going to drive you there and hand you off half way there to another good friend of mine. It's going to be dangerous so we have to be careful which means no screwing around. My guess is now that you two are gone there's gonna be a lot of border patrol and stuff so we're going to have to disguise you two. Tomorrow I'm meeting up with a friend who can help us. For now you two just go get some rest. We're going to need it for tomorrow."

"Thank you so much Yuko. For everything."

Jurina and I went to bed after a long day and we needed the rest. Before we went to bed, I started to wonder how exactly did we get found out? Who told the police about Jurina? The thought started to bother me but then I was stopped when I heard the sound of crying. I turned around and saw Jurina crying. I pulled her in for a hug and asked her what was wrong.

"It's.. It's all my fault Rena.. I'm the one who caused all this to happen.." she said.

"What do you mean?"

"A while back... I made a joke to one of the producers that you weren't really my mother. I told them I was joking but I guess they looked into it and... Rena I'm so sorr-"

I just silenced her and held her tightly. Well now I know how people found out.

"It's alright Jurina. I'm not mad or anything. As long as you're safe that's all that matters to me."

"R-Rena..."

"Everything is going to be alright Jurina. Now let's just sleep since we have a big day tomorrow."

"Un.."

Jurina fell asleep soon after and I wiped away the remaining tears on her face. I knew that things were going to be a lot different from now on so I guess all I can do now is hope for the best. No matter what happens though, I won't let anyone hurt Jurina. I will protect her with my life even if I die.
 
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Hope you liked it! Find out what happens next in the next update!

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Re: WMatsui: Great Escape Chapter 19
« Reply #348 on: June 29, 2013, 10:31:17 PM »
From a drama life to a crazy pack of action. XD


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Re: WMatsui: Great Escape Chapter 19
« Reply #349 on: June 29, 2013, 10:39:20 PM »
GREAT ESCAPE (as the tittle xD lol)

it's like I was watching a movie <3

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Re: WMatsui: Great Escape Chapter 19
« Reply #350 on: June 30, 2013, 12:14:10 AM »
awesome chapter~!
this reminds me of the akiba fight house ending parts kind of~~
takamina~ acchan yay~~
they were in jail for less than two chapters~

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Re: WMatsui: Great Escape Chapter 19
« Reply #351 on: June 30, 2013, 02:01:29 AM »
this fics is really something  diferent

but is good
true is that is my first time that i see your FF and i like it


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Re: WMatsui: Great Escape Chapter 19
« Reply #352 on: June 30, 2013, 03:30:25 AM »
 :shocked: KYAAAAA!!!! :mon lovelaff:

Ahh, Jurina, her little joke got them in trouble.
But Rena's being so SWEET~

I can't wait see what happens next. I really hope things will come through in the end of it all. :cathappy: :deco:
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Re: WMatsui: Great Escape Chapter 19
« Reply #353 on: June 30, 2013, 09:42:48 AM »
Ah... they needed to run away out of the country while disguising

Ah... so Jurina's the one that lead to this problem...

What's going to happen next

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

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Re: WMatsui: Great Escape Chapter 19
« Reply #354 on: June 30, 2013, 09:48:56 AM »
your story is so awesome :twothumbs

i very love your writing, your story never bored me.

wah,,,i really love your story :wub: it's really make my day :D

keep update. can't wait to know what happen next! :cow:

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Re: WMatsui: Great Escape Chapter 19
« Reply #355 on: June 30, 2013, 03:08:24 PM »
Thanks for the updates! I  :heart: the current development of this fanfic... Getting away from the troublesome trio yuki, mayu and sae and new characters like atsumina to be added in! Can't wait for the new adventure to begin!

At this moment, i guess Rena hasn't discovered her feeling for Jurina, is it more than mother-daughter or not... 8).

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Re: WMatsui: Great Escape Chapter 20 part 1
« Reply #356 on: July 06, 2013, 05:47:59 AM »
Time to find out what happens this time! As you know this is the two part chapter special so hope you like it!
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Chapter 20 part 1

The next morning we had to leave right away. By now the cops had figured out both Jurina and I were missing so we had to move quickly. The first thing the cops do is check out the house and then the friend’s houses. We got into the car and drove off into the streets. When we made it to the main highway we knew we were in good shape. No one was following us from what I saw and now all that was left was to get to the docks. As we were driving Jurina had fallen asleep and was resting on my lap. She must have been tired after all the running around and everything. As we were driving I started to talk with Yuko about things to try to pass the time.

“So Yuko you said you were in the military right?”

“Yes I did.” she said.

“How did you get there?” I asked.

“Well you see before I moved to Tokyo, I was in the military force with Takamina up there. We fought in South America against some terrorists that were planning to bomb Japan. I’m telling you the battle was fierce but somehow we managed to pull through.”

“Have you seen anyone from your old squad?”

“Well I usually see Takamina but you’re about to meet two others that I knew. One was actually my commanding officer and she will protect you guys.”

“Hey Yuko are you talking about Aki-Gori and Genki?!” Minami said.

“Yeah we’re meeting them at the docks!” Yuko said.

“That’s great! I haven’t seen the commander in a long time.”

“Well if we make it on time we won’t have any problems.”
As those two were talking Atsuko decided to come to the back and sit with me and Jurina while Yuko went up to the front. Atsuko stared at me for a long time and then said,

“You really love her don’t you?”

“Yes I do… We’ve been through so much together that I don’t ever want to lose her.” I said.

“You two have a bond similar to Minami and I.” she said.

“I guess so… How did you two meet in the first place?”

“Well during the time Minami was in the war, I was also in it but I was on the other side. I was part of the terrorist group because I was just mad for what the people had done to me and my family and I just wanted revenge. However we lost the battle and I was the only survivor. Right at the moment I thought I was going to die, Minami came in and saved me. She showed me there was a world outside of darkness and ever since we’ve been together and for once I’m happy.”

“Well it’s a good thing you met each other then.”

“Hey guys we got a problem!”

I looked up ahead and there was a road block with police checking cars and drivers. We knew this was going to end badly if we didn’t do something. It was then Atsuko moved a rug on the floor of the car and pulled up a hatch. She told me and Jurina to get in and don’t make a sound. We quickly got in just as Minami was pulling in. It was a tight squeeze where Jurina was right on top of me but I couldn’t complain. We could hear the cop asking Minami to show her license and they asked where they were going and everything. It looked like everything was going to be ok but then suddenly the cops told everyone to get out because they were going to do a search. They had no choice and now this was the time for Jurina and I to stay quiet. We could hear the cops searching the car checking the trunk and the back of seats. There was one point where it felt like they were right on top of us. However we got lucky and the officer gave us an ok. We drove away and when the coast was clear, Jurina and I came out of our hiding space.

“That was close!” Jurina said.

“It’s ok Jurina we made it through.”

“Nee Rena..”

“Yes?”

“I’m hungry.”

“Hey there’s a place up ahead we can stop at.”

Minami pulled into a quick rest stop and ran inside. She didn’t want us going outside so she brought the food inside. She handed us the bag and then we were back on the road. Jurina pulled out the food and started to eat happily. To my disappointment the food Minami got was a bunch of burgers and fries that just looked plain nasty to me so I said I wasn’t hungry. I just grabbed the coke drank it and that was all. Honestly I hate fast food and I don’t know how Jurina can eat that stuff since it’s so bad for you. Well she is young so maybe that’s why. We continued to drive until we came across a sign that said there was road work being done so we were going to have to take an alternate route. Then to our disappointment the alternate route was a long line of cars honking and yelling for the people to move. We waited for about two hours and didn’t get anywhere. There was a guy behind us honking at us telling us to move. Minami was getting angry and was shouting back but overall the whole thing was just irritating. so Minami decided to take a different route.   

“Everyone hang on!”

The car was on a ramp that lead to the top of a bridge but we weren’t that high up so Minami drove off the ramp and onto the side. Jurina nearly fell out of her seat because she wasn’t wearing her seat belt for some reason and I almost hit my head on the ceiling of the car. We hit the ground and then the car slid down a small hill. Minami then drove off full speed, rolled down the window and shouted,

“F*** you a**hole!”

She held up her middle finger and then drove away. Yuko and Atsuko were cracking up and Jurina was staring at them with a confused look. I had forgotten that Jurina doesn’t know swears or what the middle finger meant. I was about to say something but then Jurina said,

“Rena what does f*** you a**hole mean?”

Yuko had a shocked face and Atsuko smacked Minami in the head.

“Why did you say that in front of a kid?!” she said.

“Sorry I was angry!” Minami said.

While Atsuko was scolding Minami I had a curious Jurina bugging me about what all that meant. I had to think and then I said,

“Well Jurina let’s just say it’s a bad word and you should never use it. If you do people will get angry at you and you could get hurt. Oh and never stick your middle finger up because that means a bad thing as well.”

“Ok!”

“Jeez you think a kid her age would know this already.” Yuko said.

“Well she still is a child and probably wasn’t exposed to it at school.” I said.

Maybe when she gets a little older I’ll teach Jurina the meaning of the swear words. Meanwhile as we were driving Minami got back onto the main road and we kept going until Jurina said,

“Rena I gotta use the bathroom.”

There was no restroom area anywhere near us and the next one wasn’t for a while. Jurina said she had to go now so we had no choice but to stop and pull to the side. There was a woodsy area that Jurina could go to so she told me to stand in front of her and make sure no one was watching. I stood there and waited for a couple minutes and then Jurina told me it was ok to go. We started to walk back but then I grabbed Jurina and pulled her down. Up ahead was a cop car pulled up next to ours. They were talking to Minami and Atsuko and Yuko was sneaking out from the back. She made her way over to us and then she grabbed a rock and threw it at one of the officer’s heads. It knocked him out so then the other one started to head toward us. Yuko waited and then jumped up and wrapped her arm around his neck. She hit the back of his knee to get him to her level and then she strangled him to unconsciousness. We knew more cops would come after us soon so we started driving fast. It was about a half hour before we heard sirens behind us. There were the cops and there were a lot of them.

“Takamina we gotta lose them!” Yuko said.

“I got it I got it!”

Minami stopped the car and then pulled it into reverse. We backed up and made all the cop cars move away from us as we sped down the road backwards. She then swerved and turned the car around so we were heading the other way. I don’t know where Minami got her driving skills but they sure were something. The cops were right on our tail now and there were several of them. It looked like we weren’t going to get away this time so it was time for a different alternative. Minami stopped the car once again and turned it around so we were facing the cops head on. Then she opened the door and told everyone to get ready to jump. Minami hit a switch on the car and then told us to jump. I jumped up and held onto Minami as we rolled down into a ditch. A few seconds later there was an explosion and scraps of cars were flying everywhere.

"Let's move move move!"

Minami pulled me up and we all ran into the woods. The cops were right behind us despite being blown up and were right on our tail. We ran as fast as we could but then we saw more of them coming our way.

"Quick to the right!"

We turned right and then Minami pushed us down into the bushes hidden from the cops. We waited for them to pass and then we got up and ran again. We ran until we couldn't hear the cops and finally rested. I fell and rested on a rock while the others fell to the ground.

"That was close." Yuko said.

"Is everyone alright?" Minami asked.

No one was hurt thankfully and since it was getting dark we decided to make camp and then head out tomorrow. Looks like we were going to walk the rest of the way since our car was exploded. Atsuko had started a fire and Yuko was cooking some canned stuff. Jurina and I were sitting together and when the food was ready we all gathered.

"Eat up guys. We're gonna need a lot of strength tomorrow."

We started to eat in silence until Jurina said,

"So what are we gonna do now?"

"Well there's a railroad not too far from here. We can walk and from there we can sneak onto a train."

"A train?!"

I was really excited about trains because I thought they were really cool. Many people thought I was strange back in high school because of my love of trains but hey it's what I'm into. Better then that Justin Beiber crap kids listen to. We were talking normally when suddenly I felt something itchy on my back. I started scratching it like crazy but the itching wouldn't stop. Eventually Minami had to hold me down while Yuko took off my shirt. When they saw my back everyone gasped and backed away.

"What is it?!" I said.

"Rena your back has broken out into hives!" Atsuko said.

"How?!"

"You must have touched some poison ivy out here or something." Yuko said.

"Great well help me because it itches!"

I was practically rubbing my back against a tree to stop the itching but even that wasn't helping.

"We gotta stop it before it spreads."

Minami and Atsuko put on gloves and then held my arms back while Yuko pulled out some medicine that was supposed to help. As soon as it touched my skin it felt like my entire back was on fire. It burned like crazy but soon after it started to soothe the itching. As I was sitting there letting the medicine take effect, I felt someone sliding their finger on me. I turned around and saw Jurina smiling at me.

"Connect the dots!"

"Haha nice Jurina." Yuko said.

"Jurina what are you doing?" I asked.

"Jurina drew a smily face on your back out of the hive marks." Atsuko said.

"Jurina!"

I got up and started to chase her around telling her I was gonna connect the dots on her forehead. I chased her around and she tried to use Minami as a shield but Atsuko took her away and so she tried to hide behind Yuko but I grabbed her and pulled her onto the ground. Then I grabbed some cream and wrote "baka!" on her forehead. We all laughed and Yuko called us the Happy Bakas. After all the fun and laughs we went to bed and rested for tomorrow.

The next day we woke up to the sound of train whistles. The train was coming by sooner than we had expected.

"Crap everyone get up and move!"

We were dashing for the tracks and by the time we got there the train was almost past us. We caught up to the very back of it and Jurina was the first to jump. She held out her hand and I jumped up catching it. I helped Yuko up but Atsuko and Minami stayed behind.

"Tell Aki-gori and Genki I said hi!" Minami shouted.


"Bye bye!" Atsuko shouted.

"Thank you for everything!" we shouted back.

 They waved goodbye to us and then we lost sight of them. We decided to climb to the top and sit there. When we made it up we saw the sun rising and Jurina said it was really pretty with all the trees in the background. I hugged her and held her close as we watched the sun together. Now we were on the train heading towards our next destination wherever it maybe. As we were sitting there watching the train suddenly hit a bump and Jurina fell out of my arms. She rolled all the way to the edge and the fell off it. I quickly ran over and grabbed onto her arm. Now it was just me keeping her from falling off. It was hard to hold on since I wasn't very strong and I was losing my grip. Eventually I couldn't hold on and Jurina slide right out of my finger.

"Jurina!"

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Offline Shinoki

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Re: WMatsui: Great Escape Chapter 20 part 1
« Reply #357 on: July 06, 2013, 03:40:07 PM »
shock... but that was great...
lol, Jurina, so innnocent~~
hehehe~~
...the ending part of this chapter was... like...
yeah, I'm looking forward to what comes next

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Re: WMatsui: Great Escape Chapter 20 part 1
« Reply #358 on: July 06, 2013, 04:01:14 PM »
Why aren't Yuko helping to pull J up? O.o

Things are looking fine on R's side but what about Yukirin's side? There're still some unresolved problem with Mayu and Sae. Also obviously they knew about J and R's situation right?


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Re: WMatsui: Great Escape Chapter 20 part 1
« Reply #359 on: July 07, 2013, 08:56:38 AM »
MOU~ IM CURIOUS

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