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MaYuki's OS : Bitter and Sweet's life
« on: October 17, 2012, 05:19:24 PM »
Right , hey there guys . This idea just pop in my mind and it's my first time make a oneshot .  :) I hope you guys  enjoy it ^^"

A new light

people say I'm cute , they say to me that they like me as a friend , and most of them even say that I'm her best friend ... But I know that , all of that was just a lie .. a lie that they though I will trust them ..  All of them are the same ... In front of me they say a compliment and many positive things about me to make me trust them as a close friend , but in the back they say a horrible things and many negative things about me .. Why did they do that ? I don't understand ... Moreover , I don't do anything bad nor saying bad things to them ..                                                     
In the past then until now .. Things like that even become my routine life now .. When I was in Junior high school , I trust a friend .. I mean close friend , her name was Oota aika .. We promise that we will not betray each other as a friend .. But they snap my one and only friend from me .... Why do they like to make and see me suffer .. I don't understand  why .. And because of that , look at me .. I even look like a yankee now , and even become rebellious to my parents and everyone .... But until that person come to my life and make my day little by little become brighter

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one day , I do my daily routine like always .. Wake up , take a bath , breakfast and then go to school ... I don't know why I go to school when I know that there will be nothing special for me and it will only give me trouble .. But today is different .. I feel like today , something positive gonna happen to me and it will change my life , so I decide to go to school ..

Once I got there , like always , they look at me with a glare and insulting stare .. When I look at their face , they immediately look other way and pretend that nothings happening ... What a bunch of annoyance ..

I go inside the classroom .. No one greet me or even take a look at me like I was no one here .. Well , just take it 'like a ghost' , not 'like a boss' .. I just stare at the view outside of the window , looking at the sky like that was the most interesting thing in my life ... I snap out of my day dreaming when someone come to my table ...

" Hello , cyborg .. Long time no see , eh ? " She said that to me with a smirk , a girl that I always think that she was very VERY annoying .. Hearing that , I just look to the outside of the window and ignore her babbling many negative thing about me , until she realize that I ignore all of her saying about ... Well , I don't know cause I don't hear what she's saying anyway.

" Oi !! Do you hear me or not ??!! " She start to half-shouting , but I just ignore her , until I feel the pain in my cheek .. She slap me , making all of the students look at us because of the sound .. All of their activities stop when they hear that sound of slap .. What a mess ... I just touch my redden cheek with my palm , still ignoring her .. I think that decision make her even become more angry , but duh , I don't care about it ..

As I keep on ignoring her , she grab my collar and raise me up , make me chock .. Luckily , there's a teacher come to the class .

" Hey , what are you doing !? " The teacher said in disbelief to that annoying girl . She just stutter what she's saying , making me grin .

" Girl , What happen to your cheek ? " The teacher ask me .

" She slap me sensei .. " I say before that annoying girl manage to finish her words , making her death glaring me , while I just smirk seeing her reaction .

" you come to principal office room now ..  And you girl , if your cheek is hurt , you better go to the nursery room " the teacher said .

" Hai , sensei " I said . The teacher bring that annoying girl to the principal room .. Before she was out of sight , she gave me a glare , while I just give a smirk to her . After that , in a second , all of the student already not looking at me , and they start to do their activities again .. Haih , For a morning it's already too much for me ..

A few minutes later , the school bell ring , and all of the students sit properly and then the teacher come to my class .

" We have a new transfer student here , so please be quiet .. " The teacher announced .. She give a signal to that transfer student to come in . She walk inside the class , wearing a  smile on her face .. I think she's cute though .. Raven hair color , white and smooth skin , and pretty face .. Ugh , what am I talking about ? Keep your excitement down , Mayu ! Act like a boss , like a boss ! Her coming in my school or whether i say in my classroom is not changing my life anyway ..

" My name is Kashiwagi yuki .. Pleased to meet you guys .. Please take care of me " she bow . I look to the whole classroom .. The boys seems to like her , while the girls is wearing an 'admiring face' . Once again , I look to the whole classroom , the only empty table was right beside me .. Aih , what a bother ...

" Right , Kashiwagi san , you can sit beside Watanabe san .. Watanabe san please raise your hand .. " The teacher said , I raise my hand in a slow movement .. that girl walk to my direction , I mean her new seat places . She give me a smile , while I just keep wearing my poker face on . Seems like her face show a little bit disappointment .. Well , of course I don't know why .. First and second lesson  : mathematics . Great , the lesson that I hate start in this messy morning .

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Finally , the recess bell was ringing ,  Thank God ! I walk to the rooftop , after I arrive at that place , I lay my body on the floor , forming a sleep position , but then I hear a voice , calling my last name .. Why do this person cut my break time !?

Feeling annoyed , I immediately sit up wearing ' what the heck ' look .. But when I saw that person , my face become more relax , and in a second , my angry face become poker face .

" What are you doing in here ? " I ask her , still wearing a poker face .

" W-well , I think you're kind of lonely .... So I decide to accompany you " a smile plastered again in her face . There's no doubt , she so cute .. And kind too .. But wait , I can't trust anyone .. Enough of being betrayed , I'm sick of being betrayed ..

"What happen to your cheek ? " She ask me while tilting her head cutely . 

"It's none of your business " I reply her coldly .. I'm sorry for being so cold kashiwagi san , I'm afraid that I will be betrayed again .. When I look at her , she's wearing a disappoint face ... Again .. Why does she wearing that face ?? Does she really really want to become my friend ?? But ... I can't .. There's no other choice ... I'm sorry ..

" I - I see .... I'm sorry then ... See you later , Watanabe san .. " She smile sadly at me , and then left ..... I lean on the wall , thinking about all of the things in this morning until now . Finally , I decide to follow her , to find if she's a betrayer or not .. I finally found her , talking with the others . I have no choice to hear what they're talking about for a while . I take a peek and see that annoying girl again talking with kashiwagi san and the others .

" That cyborg .... She's so annoying " that annoying girl said . take a mirror of yourself , dude . You're annoying too . Wait I think I mention too many ' annoying ' eh ? Must be because I always watch annoying orange ..

" Yeah , what's wrong with her .. If anyone kind to her  , she always reply it coldly .. " The other girl say . Well , don't blame me , it's because I'm always getting betrayed .

After that , many of negative things mention by them . See ? They all are just the same , I'm sick of it .

" ... I think I don't think of her that way " kashiwagi san said . It's startled me when she say that .

" .... I feel the pain and loneliness inside her eyes ... She's actually kind and cute girl , I can say that .. It just maybe she's having a trauma or incident in her past , so she always make a range to become friend with us .. " She said . Making me speechless .. It's the first time some one is on my side when there's no me ... And she even know my feeling inside ...

" Yea , maybe you're right .. " The others say while Rolling her eyes
 
" I trust in her .. She can change " she said , wearing a smile .

" Yea yea , whatever .. We better go back to our class now , enough of this chit chat " the girl said . They start to leave while chatting a different topics . I repeating  again in my though her words , after finish of the repeating scene I smile , not a evil smile , not a sad smile ... But a joyful smile .

END

So , that's it ... I hope it's not boring or awful .. And about the ending , I'm sorry if it was weird .. If it's not bothering please give me a critic so that will make me improve ..  :D
PS : sorry if there was a mistake ^^" :banghead:
« Last Edit: January 05, 2013, 06:56:46 PM by Kuumin1234 »

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Re: Mayuki Oneshot { a new light }
« Reply #1 on: October 17, 2012, 09:01:37 PM »
eh?! just a one-shot!? nooooooooo!

I like this....please make at least part 2? please!!!!!!

But I like it anyways, its really good, poor Mayu.
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Re: Mayuki Oneshot { a new light }
« Reply #2 on: October 17, 2012, 10:16:42 PM »
yeah part 2 please~ *puppy face*

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Re: Mayuki Oneshot { a new light }
« Reply #3 on: October 17, 2012, 10:59:55 PM »
It's quite nice actually^^

Good that Mayu found someone to trust o/

Just wonder what happened after :)

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Re: Mayuki Oneshot { a new light }
« Reply #4 on: October 18, 2012, 05:44:02 PM »
@yuukimoko : haha , ok , this is the second part , I hope you like it :D and thank you very much yuukimoko-san :kneelbow:

@kahem : ok then kahem-san , below is the second part ^^ , I hope you like it :) and thank you very much :hee:

@Bbsis : yes good for Mayuyu , haha :D :lol: thank you very much Bbsis-san :onioncheer:

@anzai48 : woa , it's anzai48-san *Q* , I love your fanfic very much ( about the vampires ) , it was very good and interesting and   ...... Errr .. Whatever !! The point is I love it :nya: and yes poor mayu ... And this is the second part , I hope you like it and thank you very much :kneelbow:

 So here is the second part , I hope that you guys like it :)

A new light ( Second part )

" I trust in her .. She can change " she said , wearing a smile .

" Yea yea , whatever .. We better go back to our class now , enough of this chit chat " the girl said . They start to leave while chatting a different topics . I repeating  again in my though her words , after finish of the repeating scene I smile , not a evil smile , not a sad smile ... But a joyful smile .

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I walk to the classroom .. Wearing my usual poker face ... She look at me but she's not smiling , she just stare at me .. When I smile to her , her face seems so shock and I see a pink tint in her cheek ... I don't have an idea what was that , but I think it was kind of funny to see her reaction like that ... My smile plastered in my face only stand for a few second as I see the teacher come back to our class ... Now , it was a physical education lesson ... Well , I don't hate this lesson as much as I hate Mathematics though ..

I walk to the change room , Of course by myself .. All of the girls were chatting all along the walk , I just keep silent while I eat a chewing gum ... I feel there's someone staring at me , but well ..  you now I'm an ignorant type so I ignore it .

When the physical education start , the teacher said to us that we will play a basketball and then he divide us into a group .. I hear he's calling for kashiwagi san , while he said we may start our practice match .. Feeling something strange and fishy , I decide to follow them .

I keep on following them secretly without their knowing .. the teacher start a conversation with her to distract kashiwagi san for focusing where will she go .... Next thing that I know , they already in a room .. Dark room that I think there will be no one will come to this place ... I lean on the wall near the door , to make me discover what are they doing .. I take a little peek to the room , I see the teacher was talking to her but time by time , He walk slowly to kashiwagi san while she wearing a confuse look .. I look at other direction to make me calm from this tense .. Then , I hear a little yell , I think it was Kashiwagi san voice .. I immediately take a peek back at the room , and I saw the teacher holding Kashiwagi san wrist and he say something in a small voice , but then I can hear what was his saying in clear voice .

" Wh-what are you doing sensei ?? " Kashiwagi san said ... Her voice seem so frightened .

" Relax , Yuki-chan.. I promise I will be gentle .. " The teacher said ... From his voice , I can imagine that he's saying that with a evil smirk on his face .

" No... Don't do this sensei " she reply it , with a more frightened voice ... But the teacher just keep his position like that , and then his other hand start to rip off her clothes , making her yell ... After that , he start to laugh devilishly .

" Just shout as many as you want , there will be nobody in this kind of places " he said , following by a laugh while Kashiwagi san body was trembling and she's even cannot say a word because of her fright ... My hand form into a fist as I gulp at .. My Sweat dropped from my head to the floor .. In a second of calming myself , I go into that dark room .. Only to see the teacher's back and Kashiwagi san on the floor , lying unstable .

" Hey , what are you doing !? " I shout , mad at the view of what has he done to a student . Wow , I don't believe myself that I'm actually shouting .. This is super duper ultra rare for me to shout . He look at me ... At First , his face shown a worry look , but then , it shows an evil smirk .

" Ah , Watanabe san .. Good to see you " he said , making me irritated .

" Enough of this , answer me !! What have you done to her !? " I shout to him again , but he keep on wearing a calm face .

" Well , it's simple .. I just fu** her up ,  Nothing to worry about it for you ........ Little cyborg " he said , showing his evil smirk again . And then he start to move more closer to her and touch her chest , making her to trembling even more .

" STOP THAT !! What the heck !? Stop that or else I will tell the other teachers and the principal about this !! " I said as I point my index finger to him with an angry face ... This is not normal for me ..

" Go on .. Tell the other about this .. They will not trust you anyway ... You're just a lonely girl who don't even have a single friend .. Even your parents are not on your side .... Oh , Haha maybe because you don't appreciate them and they're getting sick of you , WHAT A POOR GIRL !! " He said , making me angry but luckily I can aside my angry thought ..... I keep on silent , focusing on my own though .. then I got an idea of what will I do next .

" .. Light bulb .. " I said , a grin was plastered on my face .

" .. What .. ? " He ask confusedly . I take out my handphone secretly , and secretly go to the recorded menu without he know it .

" Well , maybe they will trust me .. " I said , ignoring his question .

" Pfttt .. You gotta be kidding me ... True that I , Kenta Sakiko , fu** up Kashiwagi Yuki .. But they never ever trust you anyway ... Because you have no friends and always getting lonely , like a lion that have no group .. Ah ! In short , You're just a peace of trash " he said as he give me an insulting look . Good thing that I manage to hold on my anger .. Or else my plan will be ruined .

" Hahh .. " I give him a sigh . His face show a confuse look again ... You made a greatest mistake , Mr.idiot

" Well , how about if I recorded it ? " I say showing my handphone to him , then I click the replay button .

" Pfttt .. You gotta be kidding me ... True that I , Kenta Sakiko , fu** up Kashiwagi Yuki .. But they never ever trust you an------ " before it was finish , he punch my 'already swollen cheek' , making me fall down and sent my hand phone flying in the air and fall down fatally .. Thank God it was not broken , Because it was the only way for me to make them trust it ... I though he will kick my hand phone and broke it , but my though was wrong .. He came to me , pull me by hand from laying on the ground position to stand up , and push me roughly to the wall . I yell cause of the pain of hitting the wall .

He run to me and then punch my stomach , making me shout in pain . Then , he keep on punching me everywhere , my vision even get blurry , but I keep my eyes open .. I have to let Kashiwagi san save first . I kick him right on his stomach , but his body only move a bit . I already not having a hope to wins against him on that time , but soon when I was about to unconscious , that teacher receive a hit by a metal from behind ... Kashiwagi san hit him in the back of his head ... That teacher lay down on the floor and put his hand on his head because of the pain while Kashiwagi san take my hand phone and then put my hand around her neck , and help me to run .

We run as fast as we can , and when we was running to the direction of the principle room , we meet another teacher .. He see us with a disbelief face , and then he help us to the nursery room . He lay me down on the bed , while I try to say .

" S-sensei ... P..lease bri..ng the p-pri..nciple he-.. here .. " I say weakly . Soon , he nod and then leave to call for the principle . I look at Kashiwagi san , while she look at me with a worry eyes .

" P-lease ... Expl-ain i-t .. A-bou-t all .... Of t-this .. " I say , and then all of my vision turning dark .

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I open my eyes , greeted by a sunlight ... My vision was blur for once due to the sudden light ... It's taking a time for me to let my vision become clear .

" Ah , you already wake up " A voice said .

" K-kashiwagi san ? " I ask .

" Yes , it's me .. Thank goodness you wake up , I'm so worried about you ..... Thank you for already save me from that teacher Watanabe san .. And don't worry , I already explained all of the incident to mr xxx ( principal ) , and that P.E teacher already got fired and arrested by the police .. " She smile to me ... That beautiful smile always make me feel comfortable whenever I see it .

".. Call me Mayu " I said as I smile . Her cheek show a pink tint again , how cute

" Ma-mayu ... A-ah ! You can call me Yuki too then " she said as she stuttering , while I just keep on smiling ... Maybe ... I mean definitely My life will become great if I'm with her ..

Knowing that I will be friend her makes me happy .. She's like an angel that save human from the sins , as for me , she's like an angel that save me from my dark world and lead me to a bright world .. I'm glad that she's save me . I hope that she will be always beside me .. It's the first time in my life that I feel this happy before , and I'm very glad to meet her this way .

END

End ... Sorry if there's a mistake , I hope you guys like it :) please give a critic if you don't mind .. Thank you very much :hee: :kneelbow:

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Re: Mayuki Oneshot { a new light }
« Reply #5 on: October 18, 2012, 06:47:06 PM »
Wow it is a really great fanfic :thumbsup ... It haven't got a love but it is really lovely!!! :D

I love when Mayu said that she don't believe herself when she shout. It was soooo funny!! :lol:

Her life become to change :thumbsup
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« Reply #6 on: October 18, 2012, 07:18:01 PM »
Yes! thanks for part 2!!!!

Yey! Mayu saved Yukirin!!!!!!!

And now they are together~ well, only friends....but still!

Thanks again~
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« Reply #7 on: October 19, 2012, 08:48:08 AM »
So they are just a friend in the end?

How about part 3? Just kidding but if...if...what if...part 3..? LOL

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« Reply #8 on: October 19, 2012, 01:20:03 PM »
@Chanaline : thank you very much chanaline-san , I really appreaciate it  :)  and yeah , her life change .. sorry if it was not so lovely , because in this story  I made Mayu and Yuki story on the beginning about mayu change , like the title name : ' A new light ' , so there was no lovey dovey moment  ... i hope you understand what I mean because for me , it's difficult to explain it in english  :nervous  and by the way thank you very much Chanaline-san  :bingo:

@yuukimoko : haha , your welcome ^^ i'm sorry if it makes you disappointed because they only become friend .... i made they only become friend because this story is actually only about the change in mayu life ... i'm sorry if it makes you disappointed , i'm truly sorry  :bow: and thank you very much yuukimoko-san  :oops:  :kneelbow:

@kurogumi : yes , sorry if it makes you disappointed :cry: errr...well.. sorry , i'm sorry , i'm truly sorry kurogumi-san but this FF actually only about the change in mayu life so i can't make the part 3 .... urgh , i'm truly sorry  :banghead: but later , i will make sure to write about the real mayuki  :D and thank you so much kurogumi-san  :hee:

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Re: Mayuki Oneshot { a new light }
« Reply #9 on: October 22, 2012, 10:14:03 AM »
 :shocked This is great!

That PE teacher  :angry:
I'm glad that Mayu finally got a friend that she can trust  :D

Thank you for your update!
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« Reply #10 on: October 22, 2012, 10:07:11 PM »
Don't be sorry  ;) I like this!! I understand what do you mean... I know what you want to say to me :thumbsup And me too,  it's difficult to explain something in English because I'm really bad in this.
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« Reply #11 on: November 02, 2012, 01:21:04 PM »
@Megumi : ah , Thank you very much Megumi-san :oops: yea .. I'm glad too that Mayu has a friend that she can trust  :D

@anzai48 : Thank you very much anzai48-san :) btw , I'm looking forward for your fic  :D

@Chanaline : Hha , Thank you very much Chanaline-san  :) I'm glad that you understand what I mean  :D

So ... I made another OS ( I'm very sorry ..  it was so short , haha ..  :sweatdrop: )

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* You smile , I smile *

I'm Matsui Jurina , you're Matsui Rena . I'm a girl , you're a girl . I like cool things , you like cute things . You like my unique , I like all about you . You love me as a friend , I love you as a more than a friend . I love you , you like me .

Day start like usual , nothing special . Once I reach the school , I smile when I see you walking to the school .. I remembered the first time I saw you , you already capture my heart . I run to you and greet you with a smile , soon you greet me back with a smile too .

Something strange about you lately .. Every time the class started , you always peek outside the window and not focused in the lesson . Whenever the teacher asking you a question according to the lesson , you cannot answered it .. Well , I think it's not a big deal , so I just ignored it , and continue to focus on the lesson .

Finally the bell is ringing . I stand up from my seat and walk to your desk . Normally , you will notice me when I walk to you , but this time it's different , you just keep staring outside the window . I pat your shoulder and you snap out and look at me . I ask you to go to canteen but you said you can't and apologize to me . I smile and say 'no need to sorry , it's okay' , soon you smiled too . Then , I go outside the classroom to get a lunch for me .

Minute have passed , and finally I got the food . The canteen is very crowded , so I decide to eat at the hall . It's a coincidence that there's a basketball match . My ear is hurting because of those fangirling scream . Really , I'm not kidding . At first , I look one by one their fangirl . I see nothing that seems to distracted me except for one thing , I saw you in the middle of the fangirl . Different from the others , you're not screaming .. But you just look at them with admires . I see your eyes seems to follow one of the players , then I realize that you're looking at the captain of the basketball team . I hear and see you supporting him .. At that time I don't know if I'm jealous or not , but I just peacefully watching their match as I try to not let my ear got hurt by those screaming .

Hours , Days and Months have passed . Everyday in the class , you look outside like usual , even now for me it's on the list of your daily activities . Today , you seems a little bit different .. Your mind seems not focusing on anything .

Last bell is ringing , means school has ended . Everyone in the class already leave , only I and her alone in the class . You approach me with a serious face , which make me a little bit confused . You seems hesitate for a moment . You take a deep breath and ask if I would help her . I though that it was not a big thing , but unexpectedly you ask me to help you confess your feeling to someone . As I hear your sentences , the world seems to fall upon me . I'm very shock , sad and depressed hearing that , but I just keep that on my heart and forced a smile , one of my side is glad that you don't realize it but the other side of me is sad .

I told you some of confidence word that make you have the courage ..  why do I help her to confessed to him instead of telling her the truth ? I don't know the answer .

Finally you have the courage to tell him . We go to the basketball court and there he is , sitting on the bench with a tired face . I say to her to wait here , while I ask him to come here .. He accept it and I said to him to wait for a while . Then , I push Rena to face him , while I just hearing their conversation at the far to make sure that she got accepted . gladly you got accepted , I smile .. A smile that mix of sadness and joy . In the edge of my eyes , I realize that there's a tears , but then I just wipe it and go back to my house , leaving them alone .

The next day , when I go to school , you greet me . Remembering yesterday makes my heart pain , but I just greet you back and wear a usual face that I'm using it everyday .


Why do I smile ? Why do I cry ? Why did I help you to confess to him ? Why don't I tell you my real feeling ? Why do I just keep on lying to myself and you ? Maybe because we're both girls . Maybe because I don't have the courage to tell you . Maybe because I'm afraid that you will rejected me .

I don't care if you don't know my feeling for you .

I don't care if this love's stays unrequited .

As long as I can be beside you , I'm already satisfied .

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Very sorry .. It was very short .. And pardon me if there's a wrong grammar ... If It's not bothering , please give a critic or comment  :nervous

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« Reply #12 on: November 02, 2012, 01:23:51 PM »
U-uwa .. I forgot to change the subject ... So sorry , ( mind : how clumsy am I .. ) Err ... Can I ask you guys a question ... How to change the subject name ?  :nervous sorry if I'm so stupid ^^" ( I already try once , but It's not changing )

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Re: Mayuki Oneshot { a new light }
« Reply #13 on: November 02, 2012, 01:41:22 PM »
*First, you modify ur first post in the thread and edit the the subject :3
I'm the lazy author who rarely updates.

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Re: Second OS - You smile , I smile ( Wmatsui pairing )
« Reply #14 on: November 02, 2012, 02:18:06 PM »
Ah , it change .... Thank you very much chuuupuffss-san  :kneelbow:

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Re: Second OS - You smile , I smile ( Wmatsui pairing )
« Reply #15 on: November 02, 2012, 02:30:57 PM »
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I don't care if you don't know my feeling for you .

I don't care if this love's stays unrequited .

As long as I can be beside you , I'm already satisfied .

Jurina...you don't care, but I do!!!!!!!!! :bleed eyes: Why didn't you just confess, love is love be it with a man or woman, you fall in love with a person not a gender  :cry: Gahhhh~~~~MY WMATSUI HEART CAN'T HANDLE SAD ANGST. Thankyou kuumin1234  :bow: :bow: :bow: Please write more wmatsui angst LOL, I'm actually probably quite the masochist 'XD  :peace:

Looking foward to more one shots~ :heart:

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Re: Second OS - You smile , I smile ( Wmatsui pairing )
« Reply #16 on: November 02, 2012, 04:31:38 PM »
Uwahhh , Jurina you should have tell your real feeling to Rena ...  :cry: thank you for the update btw  :thumbsup

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Re: Second OS - You smile , I smile ( Wmatsui pairing )
« Reply #17 on: November 02, 2012, 05:08:24 PM »
Uwaah ;__; so sad. But I'm proud of Jurina's gentle..
Soon she'll know your feeling Jurina..

Thanks for the OS

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Re: Second OS - You smile , I smile ( Wmatsui pairing )
« Reply #18 on: November 03, 2012, 04:51:55 AM »
aww juriboy you need to confess is not good for health... to keep it only for yourself..

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Re: Second OS - You smile , I smile ( Wmatsui pairing )
« Reply #19 on: November 03, 2012, 05:06:58 AM »
i love angsts. especially if its wmatsui xD
nicely done author!

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