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Re: This Guy's In Love With You...(Chapter 2)
« Reply #20 on: December 24, 2012, 10:48:47 AM »
HI!

I know that it has been so long since i have updated, 2 months, I'm sorry about that, it's just that school work was really hectic, and we just started our thesis, although our prelims exam should be done before our Christmas break, our 3 professors are argh ("EPAL"), they decided to give our exams next year. :(

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    Takahashi Kai– one of Riku’s best friends, he can be really helpful at times, although there are times that he is a fail and sometimes a little dense, he is a true friend that you could count on. Despite being a gay, he is also an asexual. In short he doesn’t really need and want love in his life. But is that what his heart really says or will he really stay as a gay and asexual when he realize who his destined one is?

     Minegishi Kuu - one of Riku’s best friends, he is their fun loving friend, which would sometimes put them in a pinch but, more or less, he just wants the best for them and of course he just wants to have fun. He is a pansexual and would go after anyone who’s fun to hang out with. But when he found his true love will he still just want to have fun or is he the one who is subject of fun?

     Kashiwagi Yuki – The over protective little sister of Kojima Riku. Ever since they were little, Yuki would always protect her brother, and could mistake her as the older one. This is because they were orphaned at an early age, and they grew up with just the two of them side by side, and sometimes with the help of some distant relative. She really loves her family, and has no intention of falling in love. She works as a school nurse in the nearby university, which she and Riku graduated, their Alma matter. Will she always be the over protective sister or will she be able welcome love in her heart?


CHAPTER 2


A couple of loud inhales and exhales and loud sighs can be heard from the Kojima House hold.

“What a depressing aura. I hate it when he’s like that. Normally he’s so cheerful and charming, but now it’s a total opposite.” Sae remarked as he and his cousin, Yuki, watch Riku at their veranda.

“He’s broken hearted, the least we could do is understand him. We need to support and be his shoulder to face this predicament.” Yuki replied to Sae, who is also sad seeing his brother this way.

“I know. But damn, this atmosphere is so contagious. We better find a way to lighten up his mood. But what should we do?” Sae said trying to find a way to help Riku.

“hmm. I think I know two people who can do that.” Yuki said referring to the two people who brought her brother back home last night.

“And who could that be? I know that it’s not Ren because you just said two, and as far as I can count Ren is just a person, not two.” Sae said trying to guess who Yuki is referring to.

“I know that Ren is the first one that could make Riku happy, but right now if I see him I could kill him.” Yuki said with black aura emitting from her.

“Whoa there. He’s not here so save your aura when the time comes.” Sae said trying to calm Yuki down.

“Your right, I should save my rage.” Yuki said calming down. “Any way, I’m talking about Riku’s friends, I know that they could cheer him up.” Yuki continued.

“And how did you know that? How can you be so sure?” Sae asked.

“Well, let’s just put it this way. Who is better to cheer a gay up, than fellow gays.” Yuki explained. “Right?”

“Well, I guess it’s worth a shot.” Sae replied.

Yuki texted Kai and Kuu, to ask them if they could help cheer up her brother. After a few minutes, Kai replied to Yuki.

“We’re already working on it. I’m with Kuu and we are currently heading there right now.”

“Thank you guys. I owe you a lot.” Yuki replied.

“No need to thank us. Riku is also our friend, and friends help each other. So don’t sweat it.” Kai replied.

“Did I ever mention how much I love you guys? Because right now I really love you! But of course not in a romantic way.” Yuki exclaimed in her reply.

“We know. We are almost there. Oh and could you please prepare clothes for Riku, were taking him out for fun.” Kai requested.

“Okay, I’ll prepare his best clothes.” Yuki replied.

And with that Yuki immediately go to Riku’s room to prepare his clothes.



After Ren left, Yuko took a bath readied herself had breakfast. She hurriedly does these things so that she could have enough time to pick an anniversary present for Ren. She went to a jewellery store near her office. She had been eyeing this necklace to give to Ren, she was just waiting for a right time to buy and give it to him. It is a silver necklace with an 'R' pendant.

She was wondering if Ren would like it considering he already has a necklace that changes to pop and rock depending on his mood, I wonder if you could call it a mood necklace.
Do you want to know why I picked the necklace of all the things that I could give to Ren? Well that's because it caught my attention, I don't know why, I don't know how, but it just did. When one of my colleagues drags me to this jewellery store then there it is, within my peripheral view. It's like the necklace is asking me to buy it, I know it sounds weird but that's what I feel. So now, without further ado, I will finally buy it for Ren.


"I have been noticing that you have been staring at it for a while back since the first time you entered here." the owner of store talked to Yuko.

"Yeah, I've had hard time thinking about it, but now I've decided to buy it." Yuko replied with confidence.

"That's good to hear. Tell you what. Want to engrave something in it, for you it's free of charge." the owner suggested as he is pleased of Yuko.

"Really? Sure thank you very much." Yuko replied with enthusiasm.

"No problem, I like customers like you. So what do you want to engrave it with?" the owner asked.

"My name, Yuko, would be fine." Yuko replied.

The owner engraved the pendant with a small but readable 'Yuko' on the back and placed it in a rectangular box then gave it to Yuko, who gave the owner the exact amount of the said necklace. Then her phone rang and the name 'Acchan' was on the screen of the ringing phone. Yuko answered it.

"Where the hell are you? Our boss is here asking for you." Maeda Atsuko, the colleague that I was talking about, half shouted at the phone.

"Geez, I could hear you perfectly so you don't have to shout." Yuko said with a finger on her ear.

"No! I need to shout at you so that you can remember what I'm saying, you are always late, didn't our supervisor reprimanded you that one more late and you're fired, and he's here so that he could catch you. So hurry up." Atsuko said reminding Yuko of her situation.

"Sh*t! I almost forgot." Yuko said remembering what Atsuko said. "I'm on my way and almost there." Yuko continued as she hung up her phone and put the necklace and the phone in her bag.

Lucky for Yuko she made it in time. She was not late. And her supervisor gave her a disappointing look.

"He really wants you out of here, doesn’t he?" Atsuko said to Yuko. "Too bad for him you made it in time."

"I just got lucky today, next time he might succeed in trying." Yuko replied.

"Next time? There won't be a next time. I would call you the first thing in the morning to wake you up."  Atsuko suggested.

"That won't work. I would just go back to bed." Yuko said declining Atsuko's help, and went to her station to do her job.

"Well then I will just have to find a way to wake you up then." Atsuko said to herself, obviously plotting something, while watching Yuko's retreating back.

...

Kai and Kuu just arrived at Riku's house just to see a very sad and depressed Riku, still in his pyjama, still at the veranda, and still staring at absolutely nothing.

"How long has he been like this?" asked Kai.

"All morning, since he woke up." Yuki replied. "I'm really worried about him. It's not good to be depressed." she continued.

"We should get him ready, we have prepared something that would definitely change his mood." Kuu said.

They helped Riku to prepare and get ready when they were about to enter Riku's room.

"No! I don't want to enter my room." Riku said protesting.

“Why not? It’s your own room, you need to get dressed.” Kai replied still dragging Riku to his room.

“Because when I enter there, I would only remember Ren. And it hurts so much.” Riku is still protesting.

Riku protested and protested with all his might but to no avail. They have reached and entered his room. This would be the first time that Kai and Kuu entered Riku’s room.

“Whoa!! This is like a museum of Ren. Full of pictures, different angles, wow.” Kuu said as he described Riku’s room.

“I’m speechless.” Was all that Kai could say.

“It’s like the walls are wallpapered with Ren’s image. Everywhere you turn your head you can see Ren.” Kuu continued to be amaze at how Riku’s room is designed.

“Riku was right, if he would enter this room he would only remember Ren.” Kai said.

“Maybe we should just get rid of all these pictures.” Yuki suggested while on the motion of ripping the wall of pictures.

“Ahhh! Wait! Stop!” Riku immediately stop his sister’s hand from ripping his precious collection.

“Why? This would only bring back bad memories and pain.” Yuki asked.

“I agree.” Kai said.

“I second the motion.” Kuu said.

“Maybe we could be okay again and be together. And also these are really expensive. So please, don’t.” Riku reasoned out.

They don’t have a choice so they decided to leave the pictures alone. After the whole argument about the room and the pictures, Riku is not that depressed anymore, he’s not staring off in space anymore and we could now talk to him maybe it’s because that his two best friends are here.

“So where are we going exactly?” Riku asked. Currently seated at the backseat of Kai’s car, asking the two in front of him, Kai on the wheels and Kuu beside him.

“Hmm. It’s a surprise.” Kuu answered giggling.

“But it’s too early for our surprise and I think it’s not ready yet. So were going to take a detour first.” Kai said not taking away his eyes on the road.

First, they went to the nearest amusement park and rode some of the rides there. Then, they took Riku to an arcade, knowing Riku is an otaku for games. Then, they took a break at the café where they usually hangout and ate lunch. After that they went to a karaoke and sang AKB48 songs, with all their might.

These are some of the things that Kai and Kuu thought that might cheer Riku up, because when they were in their college days, together with their other friends, these things are their past time if they have free time.

They could see Riku smiling and having fun but they know that he is just forcing himself, there is still sadness deep within his heart that can be seen in his eyes. Their efforts weren’t enough so they decided that it’s almost time for their main surprise.



Yuko started her job and treated it as one of those ordinary days, except for later, where her boyfriend would pick her up for their date, and Yuko can’t help but smile thinking about it. Yuko’s job should be easy, where she would transact with the bank’s investors and customers, but due to her supervisor where he would always pick on her, ask her to do some errands that isn’t part of her job description and she doesn’t have any choice but to follow. Lucky for her, if she has some errands that are really hard, Acchan, Maeda Atsuko, would be there to help her. Acchan is also a teller on the bank that Yuko is working at. Here they became good friends that would help each other to make their jobs easier.

Finally, it was the time that Yuko is really waiting for, the bank’s closing time. So that she could have her most awaited Anniversary date with her most beloved boyfriend, Ren, and that she could give the necklace to him.

“Hey, Acchan, aren’t you leaving yet?” Yuko, who is ready to leave, asked Acchan, who is busy checking some files.

“Not yet, our supervisor asked me to find some files for him, but after I’m finished with this I’m definitely going out.” Acchan answered not even taking her eyes off the files.

“Going out?” Yuko asked. “No way! You have a boyfriend? How come you didn’t tell me?” Yuko continued to ask as curiosity took over her.

 “No, it’s not that. I am meeting some of my college friends at some restaurant after work. It’s seems one of them was recently heart broken.” Acchan denied and explained.

“Oh, must be hard, good thing Ren would never break my heart.” Yuko said.

“One of the perks in being loveless, you won’t be heart broken.” Acchan said as a matter of fact.

“But being in love is the most fun, exciting and the happiest feeling of all, that’s why people love, even if it sometimes results to a broken heart.” Yuko said with a huge smile on her face.

“Touché.” Acchan replied.

“So, do you need any help? I could help you.” Yuko suggested offering a helping hand.

“No need, I could handle this, and I know that you are so eager to leave and have your date right now, so don’t mind me, have fun with your boyfriend.” Acchan declined Yuko’s help.

As the two talk, a handsome guy walked inside the Bank holding a bouquet of rose.

“I appreciate the thought though, and speaking of the devil, here comes you most awaited prince.” Acchan teased.

Yuko looked at the entrance and there she saw her boyfriend, she waved at him, he waved back, then she looked back at Acchan.

“You sure?” Yuko asked again.

“Yeah, I’m fine, I can handle it. So, go! Now!” Acchan declined again and gestured Yuko to go.

“Okay, good luck on finding the files.” Yuko said wishing Acchan good luck, as she went to Ren’s side.

Acchan took a glance at a retreating Yuko, going to her boyfriend and smiled. “You too, good luck on your relationship.” She said to Yuko not really caring if she heard her or not. “They really are a happy couple. They’re perfect.” Acchan said to herself. ‘When will I find someone I could be happy with like them?’ is the question lingering on Atsuko’s head while looking for the files.



“Hey!” Yuko said to Ren as she was walking towards him.

“Hey!” Ren replied, Yuko was now right in front of him. “Here.” Giving her the bouquet of flowers.

“Aw. So sweet.” Yuko said as she gave Ren a peck on the cheeks.

“Let’s go?” Ren asked Yuko if she is ready to leave.

“Let’s go!” Yuko replied enthusiastically.

Ren called a taxi to take them on the venue of their date.

“So, where are we going?” Yuko asked seated beside Ren, their hands intertwined.

“It’s a surprise. You’ll definitely love it.” Ren replied.

Yuko just shrug it off and enjoyed the ride with her love one.



Between the three of them Riku was the most sophisticated one, and due to that they took him in one of the newly build restaurant that Kai and Kuu was sure that Riku hasn’t gone to, yet.

They entered the said restaurant. Kai and Kuu noticed that finally Riku smiled genuinely with sparkling eyes. And with that they could say that it’s a mission complete.

“Wow! I didn’t know you guys knew such restaurant.” Riku said sarcastically as the receptionist guide them to their table.

“Well, it’s just a newly opened restaurant and we happened to know the owner.” Kai replied.

“Yeah, yeah, we know her---wait 'WE' know her?” Kuu asked emphasizing the word WE.

“Yeah, the three of us knows her.” Kai answered. “She’s our childhood friend, back when we were little, but unfortunately she moved away, and now she came back here and started this business.” Kai explained.

“Eh? You mean… her?” Riku said remembering their friend.

“So she came back, huh?” Kuu said not really happy that their friend came back, because when they were little they are always bickering even on the smallest of things.

“Oi. Don’t be like that. Even if you would always argue back then, were still friends right, maybe this time you would became good friends.” Kai said to Kuu.

“Yeah, Kuu, it’s been a long time, may be things have changed and don’t you miss her.” Riku added.

“I suppose your right.” Kuu agreed. “So where is she?” Kuu asked.

“You’ll meet her soon, she’s a little busy, just enjoy the night in her amazing restaurant.” Kai said.

They are now sitting on their table. Their table has the best view of the restaurant. The perks of knowing the owner.

Kai texted someone on his phone and after a few minutes, that someone replied, “Ok, I’ll be there in a few minutes.”

Meanwhile, Kuu was also busy texting someone and received a reply, “Sorry, work got me a little late, but I’m on my way now.”

After a few more minutes, a tall slender woman made her way towards the table of the three.

Riku saw her, he stood up and showed a happy and big smile, she stopped for a second and blushed a slight color of pink at Riku’s action. Riku noticed that she stopped half way so he walked towards her instead, still wearing his smile.

“Mari-chan?” Riku was now in front of her as she stares at him. Riku then hugged her, “I’ve missed you!” And with that her face was now completely red. Luckily Kai came in and released their hug before she ran out of blood.

“It really is her. Shinoda Mariko-sama.” Kuu is just watching from his seat.

Riku and Kai, together with Mariko came back to their seats.

“Why aren’t you ordering yet?” Mariko asked. “We assure you we are not just appearances.”

“We were waiting for you.” Kai answered.

“So, what are we waiting for? Waiter---“ Mariko called the attention of the waiter but was cut off by Kuu.

“Wait!” Kuu exclaimed lowering Mariko’s hand. “We’re still waiting for one more person.”

“Who?” Riku and Kai both asked.

“It’s a secret.” Kuu answered. “She’ll be here any minute now.”



Ren paid for the driver and got out of the taxi, then held it open so that Yuko could come out. He offered out his hand which Yuko immediately held coming out of the taxi.

“Thank you.” Yuko said.

“You’re Welcome princess.” Ren replied kissing Yuko’s hand.

They entered the restaurant, Yuko was amazed, it was the best restaurant that she had ever seen. They went to the receptionist to get the table that Ren had reserved. The receptionist showed them their table. Their table is just a few tables away from where Riku, Kai, Kuu and Mariko are.

Ren called the waiter for them to order their dinner.

“Ren, could you order for me, I need to go to the ladies room.” Yuko said as she stood up her seat.

“Okay, do you have anything you want?” Ren asked as he nodded.

“No, anything’s fine, I trust your taste.” Yuko replied with a dimpled smile.

“Okay. Take your time.” Ren said while nodding again.

Yuko then headed to the comfort room to do her business and retouch re make-up.



Riku, Kai, Kuu and Mariko are still waiting for the last person to arrive when suddenly, Riku stood up.

“Where are you going?” Kai asked Riku.

“Men’s room.” Riku answered. As he went to the direction of the Comfort room.

“Kuu, how long does she want to keep us from waiting?” Kai asked Kuu, obviously impatient from all their waiting, and kind of hungry.

“I know right, I’m also impatient here, but could we just wait a little longer.” Kuu said checking his phone again to see if there are any messages. And there is.

“I’m really sorry, I’m almost there, just a few minutes more. I promise, I’ll make it up to you guys.” Was the message that he received.

“You better be sorry, people here are being impatient, and I’m really hungry, especially when we’re surrounded by people eating. You don’t need to make it up to us. Once we see you, you’re already forgiven. But please, do hurry up, I’m really HUNGRY!” was Kuu’s reply.

“Okay, okay, but we all know that you’re always hungry, so no need to say it anymore.” Was the reply and Kuu could see the sender of the message chuckling. “P.S. I’m also hungry.” There was a postscript at the end.

“In that case we are just the same, knowing you; I know that you’re always hungry also.” Kuu replied returning the tease, the Kuu chuckled.

“What’s funny?” Kai whispered to Mariko.

“I think, he just lost his mind.” Mariko replied.

“I think, it’s due to his hunger, knowing him, his always hungry, maybe he just reached his limit.” Kai said.

“Maybe we should order now, for Kuu’s sake.” Mariko said.

“I think he could still handle a few more minutes, it’s a bit impolite to start while still incomplete.” Kai replied.

“Yeah, I know, but Kuu is really creepy right now.” Mariko said.

“I know right.” Kai replied. “I wish she’s already near.”

“Yeah.” Mariko replied.



Yuko retouched her make-up, a little nervous and excited at the same time. She checked her gift, the necklace, for one more time then walked out the comfort room while putting the gift back inside her bag when suddenly…

*crash*



Riku is walking towards the comfort room, he glanced at the side, and he saw Ren. ‘Maybe I’m just imagining things. If we were still together and have a date here, he would definitely like this place.’ He thought, not really looking at his way when suddenly…

*crash*


END OF CHAPTER 2



A/N
This was supposed to be longer but i made a deadline of this chapter which is just before Christmas, i shall update/post this. So i ended it here, because if i didn't, i would not be able to meet my deadline. Actually, i have really no intentions on making chapter 2 yet, it's due to the people in our facebook group (PA), they're the reason i've updated :D

Sorry for wrong grammars, spellings. I didn't have time to send this to my proofreader, if i did i won't make the deadline.

Thank you for your Consideration and for Reading.

And I'm really sorry, i think it would be a long time again before i update, due to school work, our thesis and our exams are still not finished, still have exams next year after our break. And i have to help my cousin in her take home exams and reports.

I'm really sorry.
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Re: This Guy's In Love With You...(Chapter 2)
« Reply #21 on: December 27, 2012, 03:42:32 PM »
Can't wait for the next update..

Finally riku and yuko will meet.

everyone seem to be at the same place

i wonder what ren will do

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Re: This Guy's In Love With You...(Chapter 2)
« Reply #22 on: December 28, 2012, 12:32:38 AM »
No, I want my YukoRen to be together!!! Riku, just stfu!!! go to Mariko or whatever!!! Leave my Yuko-sama to my Ren-sama~!!!
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Re: This Guy's In Love With You...(Chapter 2)
« Reply #23 on: December 28, 2012, 03:30:36 AM »
omg is yuko and riku going to have a cat fight over ren? (lol)

gahhh ~~ can't wait to see what happens next!

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Re: This Guy's In Love With You...(Chapter 2)
« Reply #24 on: December 28, 2012, 05:20:42 AM »
Aww cessy~ That's soo sweet :D

WOSHOOO~~ CAN'T WAIT FOR THE FIGHT OF RIKU AND YUKO XD :rofl:
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Re: This Guy's In Love With You...(Chapter 2)
« Reply #25 on: December 28, 2012, 06:05:25 AM »
UPDATE NA YAN! XD
ERMEHGERD! TEH, YOUR STORY IS SO AWESOME TALAGA!
YOU MAKE UPDATE NA AH!
I REALLY WANT TO READ THE NEXT CHAPTER SO BADLY NA TEH! XD

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Re: This Guy's In Love With You...(Chapter 2)
« Reply #26 on: December 28, 2012, 08:25:28 AM »
at first I was
yuko and riku  :heart: flail much
then
yuko and riku fighting over ren?  :panic:

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Re: This Guy's In Love With You...(Chapter 2)
« Reply #27 on: December 28, 2012, 10:10:57 AM »
Cool fanfic! I wanna know what happen to Riku and Yuko!!  :luvluv1:
I already watched "The Guy's in love with you Mare" so.... :hiakhiakhiak:
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Re: This Guy's In Love With You...(Chapter 2)
« Reply #28 on: January 09, 2013, 12:10:35 AM »
This is Mendol story... I am happy with that... but making them as gay... very interesting idea...

I'll try to like them.... although I hope they are not really gay.... but bi-sexual better...

then maybe Kai can be with Atsuko, Riku can be with Mariko or Yuko, and Kuu can be with Mariko or others.

Ren is being very unfaithful from the start even if he is a bisexual... he should have one relationship one at a time not the two of them at the time.

If only Yuko knew what's going... she won't want to be with Ren then. Riku do something...

Somehow, it seem like Ren is a gold digger... which part of him is kind and caring guy?

Anyway, thank you for this interesting fic... can's wait to see the next one.

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Re: This Guy's In Love With You...(Chapter 3) April 4, 2013
« Reply #29 on: April 04, 2013, 02:57:41 PM »
     I was thinking very hard of what I will write, because the following scenes are not in the movie, it was really hard to connect events, so please bear with what I have written… I know I'm not that good, actually every time I finished a chapter and reread the chap, I say to myself, I suck, I really do, and the only reason that I write is that my friends encourage me to continue on writing, and also you people who continue to read these chapters, knowing that I suck, I'm really grateful of you guys. And maybe one more reason is that, writing makes me free, I mean it makes my very wild imagination free.

     Actually there are many things/reasons why I wasn't able to update. First and foremost is that our school work really got to me, with 2 thesis and 1 system to operate, it really was a hassle, I didn't even get enough sleep for almost a month and 3 nights without sleep. It really got to me and I'm really sorry. Next is my lack in English communicating skills, it is also the reason why this fiction is experiencing redundancy in terms. And it's really hard to translate, well the movie is 'taglish' (Filipino and English) so I need to translate some words, which I'm doing really bad at, so sorry about that. Next is that I really suck at describing, whether its, people, places or things, the way people dresses, the characteristics of the person etc. I suck at those things so once again I'm sorry.

I admit that I suck really bad, but truly want to thank you guys for actually reading my work, I really love you guys  :heart:

Again, I'm so sorry, For a really long update, And for the wrong grammar.


@chuppachup : The world is a small place, haha Yeah Riku and Yuko will meet, but Ren wouldn't do anything………Yet…. XD

@sakura_drop : I’m still debating myself about the pairings, hmm Maybe I MIGHT add some YukoRen moments next chapter, but take note of the word “might” haha XD

@vPANDAv : well, unfortunately, there wasn’t any catfight that happened, but they did meet.  Though, Someday, the catfight might happen. XD

@CheesyBits : I know right, (nilalanggam na nga ako eh) haha joke :) No fight happened, I kinda prefer it that way, I don’t want any fight, let me rephrase that, I can’t write any fight. I don’t know how to, haha XD

@Amakuchi : Awesome? Really thank you, but why do I have a feeling that I suck. Haha XD eto na po nag-update na, haha XD

@miayaka : I am trying my best to write sweet moments, but I really fail  :sweatdrop: haha Riku and Yuko might fight, but not today, maybe in the future chapters :)

@correnereyes : Nothing really happened between Riku and Yuko, maybe next or Future chapters, I’ll try my best to level the fanfic, which I’m really doing a good job in. haha XD

@cisda83 : Not really a mendol story, although I did use the characters, so maybe it is  haha  :doh: About their sexuality, I think I might base it with their pairings which I am having a hard time with haha :) I’m sorry about Ren, actually said sorry to Riku in the chapter, and trust me, in the future chapters, he will get what he deserves and pay for it, so stay tuned ;) And he actually don’t want to hurt Riku anymore, that’s why he broke up with him, I think he really loves Yuko :) haha

@Others: I really thank you for reading the Fictions, means a lot to me, I really am grateful



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     Maeda Atsuko - Riku, Kai and Kuu’s classmate and good friend in college. She is also Yuko’s office mate now. She was once jealous of Yuko and Ren’s relationship, having a loveless life, but after finding out something about Ren, all she wants now is to break them up, for Yuko’s sake. Can she break those two up or will she fail and will her loveless life be fruitful as she carries out her mission?

     Shinoda Mariko – Riku, Kai and Kuu’s childhood friend. One look and you can easily mistake her as a model. Such a beauty but still hasn't got a boyfriend. Want to know why? She still can’t get forget her first love, or rather crush. When she was little she had, and still has, a crush on Riku. But can she get over her little infatuation or be forever be bound by her unrequited affection?


Chapter 3


I stepped out of the car, as I texted my friend. “I’m about to enter the restaurant.” As I enter I immediately recognize the people I was going to meet, especially the two guys, which are my best friends, the first one is the one I was texting, second is the guy beside him. The first one waved at me, obviously very eager to see me arrive, I’m thinking that he really is hungry that made me smile as I walk toward them.



“Ah! She’s here!” Kuu exclaimed standing to get a good look at the entrance.

“Where?” Kai said. Both he and Mariko looking at the entrance.

A cute, entered the premises. Kuu waved at her and Kai just smiled. “Acchan?” Kai asked himself, not believing his eyes that their best friend, Maeda Atsuko, came.

As she walks towards them, he stood up. Then she reached their table.

“Long time no see.” Kai said to Acchan.

“Yeah, It’s been awhile.” Acchan replied. As the three of them seated.

“Acchan, I would like you to meet-“ Kuu was about to introduce Mariko to Atsuko when Atsuko cut him off.

“Ah! Mariko?” Acchan asked a little surprise to see Mariko there. “As in Shinoda Mariko-san?”

“Yes, Maeda-san, It’s such a small world.” Mariko replied with a full smile.

“Wait. You two know each other?” Kuu asked. Both he and Kai’s a little confused.

“Yeah, Shinoda-san is a big client in the bank that I was working on.” Acchan replied. “And I personally handle her account.”

“You flatter me so much, I’m just a normal entrepreneur, and not a big one.” Mariko said. “And I keep on telling you, just ‘Mariko’ is fine.”

“Yeah, since we’re all friends now. You can call her Mariko, and you can call her Atsuko.” Kuu said happily. “All that’s left is Riku, and then we could finally order.” He is happy that could now order.

“Speaking of Riku, where is he?” Acchan asked.

“Went to the Comfort room.” Kai answered.



“Ouch” Riku said holding the little bruise in his arm, while standing up.

“Aw” Yuko said holding the little bruise in her head.

Riku saw the girl that he bumped with, he was a little more worried for the girl rather than himself. He reached out and offers his help for the girl to stand and asked “Are you alright?”

Yuko saw the gesture and felt a little embarrassed, but nonetheless still accepted the help of the young man, and said “I’m fine. I’m sorry, I wasn't looking were I was going and thank you for the help.”

“Me too, I’m sorry, my was a little preoccupied with something, that I didn't see you, and I think it’s my fault so you don’t need to thank me.” Riku said.

“What’s going on here? Do you two need any help?” The receptionist said as she approached the two.

“No, we just kind of bumped at each other. No harm done, I hope.” Riku said to the receptionist.

“Yeah, all is well. I need to go now.” Yuko said as she head to their table, but not before turning around. “I’m sorry and thank you again.” She said.

Riku was left speechless and just smiled to the girl.

“So, I also need to go now.” He said as he left the receptionist to go to the Comfort room.



Inside the comfort room.

Riku was finished with his business when his phone suddenly rang and vibrated. He checked the pocket of his jacket and was a little surprise when he found 2 things in it. He’s surprise to find the name of the caller, which is Kuu, the second one, which super surprised him was a rectangular box. He first answered the call, and shoved the gift inside his pocket again.

“Why are you so slow? Can you hurry it up a little bit? We are all hungry here.” Kuu said half-shouted.

“Okay-okay, I’m done. I’m getting out now.” Riku said as he hung up the phone and got out of the comfort room.



“Hey.” Yuko said as she reached their table.

“Hey.” Ren replied offering Yuko her seat.

“Did you wait long?” Yuko asked as she took her seat.

“Not really, but I did miss you though.” Ren said with a wink.

Yuko blushed in deep pink with what Ren had said.



“Acchan?” Riku asked as he was almost at their table.

Acchan turned around and stood up to give Riku a hug. “ I've missed you.” She said.

“ I've missed you too. It’s been like what? Years.” Riku said as both of them let go of the hug.

“Why didn't I get any hug?” Kai whispered to himself.

“What did you say?” Mariko said, as she kind of heard Kai, with knowing eyes. All eyes are now on Kai.

“Nothing, I just said that I’m glad that Riku’s now here, so we could order.” Kai sweat dropped.

“I second that!” Kuu said enthusiastically.

Mariko just looked and smiled at Kai.

“What?!?” Kai asked at Mariko.

“Nothing” Mariko said her smile turned into a smirk.

Kai just rolled his eyes.

All five of them are now seating and ready to order, when suddenly…



Yuko and Ren are in the middle of dinner.

‘This is it, I’m finally going to propose to her.’ Ren thought when suddenly…



A group of friend are having dinner also at Mariko’s restaurant. They just finished their main course when someone suggested that they play truth or dare. In the middle of the game, someone chose dare, which she shouldn't have. The girl is now on her way to do what the dare is. She is now about to pull the lever of the fire alarm that would definitely make people inside the building really, really wet, and really, really angry. But she has to do what the dare says. So she finally pulled the lever. Allowing the sprinklers to activate. Making people wet and a little angry.



Due to the sprinklers, people inside the restaurant is now wet and shocked at what happened. Also due to the sprinklers, Kuu is still hungry and didn't even had the chance to call the waiter. And also because of the sprinklers, Ren wasn't able to propose to Yuko.



The next day.

Riku was sitting in a chair near their balcony, holding a piece of paper, a cup of coffee and holding his tears to fall. Apparently, the paper wasn't just any other kind of paper, it was a letter, a letter from Ren.


‘Riku, I don’t know how to tell you this, but the day of our anniversary, I was actually there to break-up with you.
I just converted, I’m finally a Christian. And the Lord doesn't want this kind of relationships, it’s in the Bible.
Sorry Riku, I don’t want to hurt you, but this is where we end. But I do want to say thank you for loving me, even my family.
You know, if ever that you’re a girl, there won’t be any problem. But this is just not going to work. I’m sorry.
I’m so sorry.’

As he read the last words, he could not hold his tears anymore as he cried, really hard. Good thing that his sister, Yuki was there, she hugged and comforted him.

“I’m finally going to let him go. He deserves to be free.” Riku said sobbing.

“If you love someone, you've got to let him go.” Yuki said consolingly.

“I know, and it really hurts.” Riku replied.

That morning did last long as Riku cried and cried. But on that day, Riku decided to let go of Ren. He decided to call his friends, to have fun, to relieve stress and most of all, to forget. And one way to forget is to find someone else.



“You know,” Kuu started. “The first time you introduced Ren to us, I know that he won’t be serious of you.”

“He loves me.” Riku answered. “He did loved me.” Correcting his first statement. Indicating that Ren did love him in the past, when they were still together.

“But look at what happened, Didn't he dumped you?” Kai said interfering. “Look, you know, Ren is still a guy, that would look for a real girl.

“That’s not true!” Riku said defending Ren. “It’s not a girl, he didn't ditch me for a girl.”

“What?!?” Both Kai and Kuu exclaimed.

“Yeah, it’s the Lord.” Riku answered.

“Wow.” Kuu said “That’s a really big rival.”

Kai nodded. “So, I’m guessing that’s your resolve? To forget him because he’s going to be a priest?”

“No, he is not going to be a priest, he just converted, he became a Christian, and according to the bible, being in a gay relationship is bad news.” Riku said.

“Oh.” Was the only thing that Kai said.

“So, what are we supposed to do now?” Kuu asked.

“I don’t know, I just…” Riku said “just want to have some fun, and maybe on the process find someone that could get me out of this heartbreak.”

"Having fun is good, I have to agree to that, but finding someone to get over a breakup, isn't really fair, especially to the person you found." Kai said, that made Riku shock and speechless.

"Yeah, it's like having your heart fix by breaking other's, especially if you still love your ex." Kuu agreed. "It's really unfair."

"...ok...fine...I won't do it, I'm not that heartless you know, I only have a broken one." Riku retorted. "But off the record, whose side are you on?"

"Of course your side, it's just that we don't want you to hurt anybody, that might turn out as another heartbreak." Kai said.

"I'll be fine and I'll be cautious." Riku said reassuring Kuu and Kai.

After the talk that they had, they finally reached the club. They entered and saw Mariko there. But before they could reach her table a guy walked to her, looks like he's hitting on her.

"Excuse me, but have we met before?" The guy asked Mariko.

"No, I don't think so." Mariko rolled her eyes. 'What the heck?!? Is he hitting on me? And why aren't they approaching me.' Mariko thought as she texted "HELLLLLPPPP!!!!!!!!" to the three boys that she was waiting for.

"But I think I do know you, or maybe you just look like her." The guy said insisting that he really knows her.

"Really? From where? And who might it be?" Mariko said with an obvious irritation.

"My next girlfriend." The guys said.

'Ok! That's the last straw!' As she was about to stand and make a scene at the club, a familiar hand stopped her.

...

As I read Mariko's text I looked at the 2 beside me, I assume they also got the text, and then I looked at Mariko, ‘She looks like she's really having a hard time with the guy. I feel sorry for the guy though, out of all the girls here in the club, does it really have to be Mariko, I mean, Mariko's pretty and all but, I think she's not the type you could or would pick up in a club like this, that is so not her. What am I doing here, blabbering on and on, when she need help.’ As I was about to approach her, someone already beat me it. I couldn't move, I couldn't do anything, I was like stuck there, just looking at the back of the one who beat me in approaching Mariko.

...

"I'm sorry honey, did you wait long?" Riku asked Mariko, with all the masculinity left in his body, as he placed his hand on her shoulder and gave her a peck on the cheek, which made Mariko blush a deep red.

"W-What took you so long?" Mariko asked as she played along.

"I'm sorry, it's just that the meeting went on and on." Riku answered. "So, what were you doing? And who is this?" Riku asked as he looked at the guy who was picking Mariko up.

"Oh nothing, this is uh..." Mariko said. "What was your name again?" Mariko asked.

"Mike, it’s Mike." The guy answered.

"So? What does Mike want?" Riku asked.

"He keeps on insisting that we knew each other." Mariko answered. "But I really don't."

"Do you really know my girlfriend?" Riku asked glaring at Mike and made Mariko blush even redder.

"I'm sorry, I think, I may have mistaken you for someone else." Mike said nervously. "Please excuse me." Mike then left them.

"Phew." They both sighed in relief.

...

"Hey?" Kai asked as he put his hand on Kuu's shoulder. "Are you okay?"

"Oh?" Kuu jumped a little to the touch, not really expecting it. "Yeah, I’m fine, it's nothing." Turning his head around facing Kai, then turning his head again looking at the interaction of Riku and Mariko.

"Don't worry, Mariko would be fine, Riku's already there." Kai assured Kuu.

"I'm not worried..." Kuu started. "It's different than that." The last few word where so soft, that Kai didn't hear it.

'What the heck is this? Why is there a big lump in my chest when I see Riku and Mariko, am I jealous? No, no, NO! This can't be, I'm not in love with Riku, and most definitely not Mariko. But what the hell is this lump?... Wait maybe I'm just jealous that they are getting very much comfortable with each other, I'm just jealous of their friendship. But I'm also their friend so what the hell? I don't know anymore.’ Kuu thought.

He just shrug whatever he was feeling and turned to Kai, with a big smile on his face, "Come on, let’s go" opting them to approach the two.

...

"Thank you." Mariko thanked Riku for saving her.

"Don't mention it." Riku said with a wink. "So what's the deal? Do you always gets picked up at clubs like this?" Riku asked.

"Not really, just a few times, this is the reason why I'm not fond of clubs." Mariko answered.

"We'll I have to say, I'm not really surprised, knowing you really are pretty and sexy, just like a model." Riku said with a laugh.

Mariko was left speechless 'OMG, what is he doing, is he making fun of me or complimenting me? If it’s the latter, OMG!' Mariko thought as she blushed again.

"Oh, I almost forgot, um… I'm sorry for what I said earlier." Riku said scratching his hair on the back of his head.

Mariko curled her eyebrows confused at what is Riku apologizing for. "About what?" She questioned.

"You know, when I called you 'honey' and 'my girlfriend'" Riku answered. That made Mariko blush again reminding her, what Riku called her.

"I-it's o-okay, I-I understand." Mariko replied stuttering and unable to hide her embarrassment.

“Hey! What happened here?” Kuu asked as he and Kai approach them.

“Let me rephrase what Kuu asked, what happened to her?” Kai asked as he notice Mariko. “Why is she blushing so much?”

“I don’t really know, maybe the guy that was hitting on her is her type, I shouldn't have shooed him away.” Riku said teasing Mariko.

“No, He’s not my type…” Mariko said. “You are…” she whispered to herself.

“What was that?” Riku asked, hinting that he did not hear what Mariko said.

“Nothing.” Mariko replied.


End Of Chapter 3



I know that this wasn't the expected meeting of Yuko and Riku, since there were people rooting for the two of them to fight, but I’m sorry, that won’t happen, Maybe, maybe not haha I still don’t know, I’m still thinking about it.

Reflection: The cat fight didn't happen, the proposal was postponed, Mariko has a trashed restaurant, Ren finally apologized to Riku (through a letter though), Mariko is still in love with Riku, Acchan and Mariko knows each other, Acchan and Riku are close, Kai and Kuu are both kinda jealous of Riku etc.

Coming up (Still tentative (I’m allowed to change my mind, aren't I?)): Riku might know the truth about Ren, he might do something about it.  :P2 Yuko and Riku might meet again for the 2nd time, And the revealing of the mysterious box in Riku's jacket. That’s all for now ;)


IMPORTANT NOTE:

I’m actually battling my mind about this. Who would be the pairing? I have a few options about it, actually I had my mind set on the pairing, but I might change my mind, so please, I really need your help. Thank you. :)
Here are the other characters i might add: Mayu, Jurina, Sayaka, Tomochin, Tomo~mi and still thinking who might add.


And I MIGHT update after a few weeks, HOPEFULLY.

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Offline ashiya

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Re: This Guy's In Love With You...(Chapter 3) April 4, 2013
« Reply #30 on: April 04, 2013, 04:58:49 PM »
This will be fun, I think you should let Jurina be a BOY here, take Ren out of YukoRiku's relationship
This Yaoi couple will be the best  :twothumbs


Mayuyu? Mayuki? Saemayu?

WTomo or KaixTomochin, nah already had MariKuu so... How 's about Saeyaka? I prefer Sayaka to be a woman here  :lol:

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Re: This Guy's In Love With You...(Chapter 3) April 4, 2013
« Reply #31 on: April 04, 2013, 08:19:51 PM »
Interesting!!
 I just read your story and I really liked it, it is very pleasant to read.

On couples .... who would be boys and which girls?

If tomochin is a man could be paired with Kai.
The saeyakas always work very well since Yuki and Sae are cousins​​.
But I get the impression that kai and Acchan are in love and Kuu is in love with Mariko .... so honestly any couple provisional would be interesting to read.

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Re: This Guy's In Love With You...(Chapter 3) April 4, 2013
« Reply #32 on: April 05, 2013, 01:01:02 AM »
YAY! UPDATE! ANOTHER LIIIIIIIIIIIIIIGHT! \o/ *just ate chocolates*

Nice update! Me want more! LOL. I sense MariHaru in le chappy. :3

He-he-he! And A lil' of MariMii in Ku's side. >:3

Neways, update ka na teh! XD

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Re: This Guy's In Love With You...(Chapter 3) April 4, 2013
« Reply #33 on: April 05, 2013, 05:19:18 AM »
Ah... what secret of Ren that Atsuko knew... that she was willing to break Yuko's relationship with Ren?

Yeah right... Ren broke up with Riku because of his new religion...?

He was cheating on Riku for years before the break up... it has got nothing to do with his new convert to new religion.

Isn't it Christianity also said not to cheat, lie and polygamy?

He broke everything that Christianity said not to do?!

He is a sin man... whether he is Christian or any other...

As a human he is very bad person... two timing someone... using Riku for his money... etc.

God should punish someone like that....

Ah.. Mariko is still crazy about Riku...

Eh... Kai seems to like Atsuko more than just a friend.... and he is supposed to be gay....

I think he just never liked anyone before... so he thought he was gay

And Kuu seems to be jealous... of Mariko being closed to someone... especially with Riku... But he doesn't notice it

Can't wait to find out the next one

Thank you for the lovely update

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Re: This Guy's In Love With You...(Chapter 3) April 4, 2013
« Reply #34 on: April 05, 2013, 09:57:42 AM »
hey

You got an interesting story here  :twothumbs Can't wait for what kind of pairings you will have.

And by the way, I'm rooting for RikuxMariko hehehe :lol:

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Re: This Guy's In Love With You...(Chapter 3) April 4, 2013
« Reply #35 on: May 17, 2013, 11:43:16 AM »
Please continue this fic.... I like it a lot   :)

I also watched the movie and it's hilarious


I'm looking forward for your next chapter! :D

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Re: This Guy's In Love With You...(Chapter 3) April 4, 2013
« Reply #36 on: May 17, 2013, 12:24:34 PM »
Cessy10-san

Please update

This story is one of my Fav.

I nearly forgot the existence of this story

So Please continue it...

Can't wait to see how the story going to develop

Thank you...

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Re: This Guy's In Love With You...(Chapter 3) April 4, 2013
« Reply #37 on: May 17, 2013, 12:28:44 PM »
shiruba_rein-san

Eh... there is a movie of this story...

I just goggle it... is it the movie title "This Guy's In Love With U Mare!"

Filipino movie...?

Thank you for the info

Can't wait to watch....

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Re: This Guy's In Love With You...(Chapter 3) April 4, 2013
« Reply #38 on: May 17, 2013, 03:18:41 PM »
@cisda83, yes that's right... it is a Filipino movie :)

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Re: This Guy's In Love With You...(Chapter 3) April 4, 2013
« Reply #39 on: May 17, 2013, 03:33:42 PM »
where are you Cessy-san?

I want Kojiyuu together hic  :cry: but they're fighting over Ren... NO
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