Author Topic: 「Theater Rivals」Rivalry Between The WMidget - Chapter 16 [FINISHED] (Read 143054 times)

haruhi16 · « **Reply #140 on:** December 19, 2012, 03:44:37 PM »

EHHHHHHHHHHHHHH but i was expecting a sweet revenge here! I was anticipating some more!

If i were Yuko and Acchan, i would never forgive those friends who betrayed me! I will let them feel ashamed with themselves by having someone that is HOTTER and GOOD LOOKING GUY/GIRL that is also worth for their love!

Acchan and Yuko are both popular in their school, right? why not use it to get the entire school's attention being the hottest and sweetest couple? I mean, that would be really exciting, right?

Of course, for them to make them jealous to death, Yuko and Acchan will act like nothing happened and will be more interested ONLY to each other.

LOL sadist

TakaminaBG · « **Reply #141 on:** December 19, 2012, 03:52:44 PM »

Wow..... That was...... awful.......
Seriously, Kai and Haruna should've told everybody in the beginning. Look what happened now....
What will happen next? Please update SOON!!

AkemiHomura · « **Reply #142 on:** December 19, 2012, 04:01:39 PM »

I'm sorry. I don't intend to offend you but this is how I really feel.

One can just laugh it off like "Oh, It's just a fanfic. They can write whatever they want. You don't have any right to judge them".
I'm sorry, I'm this kind of person. I'm really serious about doing something. Even I feel kinda uncomfortable when writing this. So you can just skip my comment, or tell me and I will just delete it.

I got kinda emotional when reading your story. I'm Asian. So yeah, our traditions are very strict. [I guess you know what I'm going to say].
5 months for a relationship is a short time. Too short, I dare say. You can't just give the man your everything even if you love him very much.
Moreover, the man is uncertain about you. [yeah, I'm sorry *deeply bow*.

I mention the man like a baddie here even though I knew he wasn't

]
So yeah. I think I understand my Oshi's feeling there *pat oshi's back*

I'm sorry to offend you once agian *deeply bow*

Thank you for updating. Waiting for your next update.

~~If you don't work something out, I'll give you a lecture again.~~

kurogumi · « **Reply #143 on:** December 19, 2012, 04:19:30 PM »

I hate sae,hope mayu know how to solve this,or yuki will think mayu really tired with her

I hate sae!!

Thank for the update

karupin12 · « **Reply #144 on:** December 19, 2012, 04:24:33 PM »

@AkemiHomura : it's okay. I understand it

I like reading that kind of comments

@haruhi16: I like your idea

takamae · « **Reply #145 on:** December 19, 2012, 04:36:44 PM »

I really hate kai and haruna

How could they live with what happen??

I'm sorry when I say this, but I have to say it
At the beginning I can still keep my anger down
But now, I think I can't hold it anymore

Karupin12 san, you're the first and hopefully the last, that can make me hate kai and haruna
Please....don't make me hate them more

Please.....please.....

karomuwi · « **Reply #146 on:** December 19, 2012, 04:42:48 PM »

I know that AtsuYuu is not written in the forum all the time, that's why... When I started reading this fic, I wanted to see what would happen. I mean, TakaHaru is cute and sweet, and all. But the other two? They're really hurting badly. I don't know why but... I really want Atsuko to end up with Yuko. Maybe it must be my sadistic side wanting to have Kai realizing his feelings for Atsuko while she starts getting along better with Yuko. I just don't know.

This fic is really sad, and it breaks my heart everytime I read about Yuko and Atsuko getting hurt. I feel like I want something to happen between those two, and make the TakaHaru pair suffer by making them realize their true feelings for them. To be honest, if I could do anything here in the fic... I'd definitely make that pair suffer terribly. Sorry, TakaHaru fans.

But I can't bear to read Atsuko and Yuko hurting too much.

haruhi16 · « **Reply #147 on:** December 19, 2012, 04:56:45 PM »

I agree with Karochan~! (Karomuwi)

Now i feel like i want to do a collaboration with karochan in this kind of story

cause we all know that we're both sadistic authors

AND WE BOTH WANTED THE SAME THING!

Karochan~ I miss u!

21stMay · « **Reply #148 on:** December 19, 2012, 05:04:28 PM »

Karupin-San hehehe thank you for the update

Hate Kai and Haruna so much in this fic

Love Yuko And Atsuko so much

Please make an Atsuyuu

I really want Yuko to be with Atsuko and Kai haruna will feel guilty hehehe

Go Atsuyuu

Please update soon

Chanaline · « **Reply #149 on:** December 19, 2012, 05:04:39 PM »

I AGREE with Karomuwi. With Kai feeling's in the future... I want him suffer because he hurts Yuko and Atsuko... And Haruna the same thing.

And Mayuki... I HATE Sae.

I am happy that it have WMatsui!

KojiYuu44 · « **Reply #150 on:** December 19, 2012, 11:38:57 PM »

YES!!! Yuko preach man preach it

I agree with Karomuwi... but Kai and Haruna should still suffer for hurting Yuko and Atsuko

Sae needs to learn his lesson too

WMatsui are super cute and please more MariMii moments

Thanks for the update!!

chie20 · « **Reply #151 on:** December 20, 2012, 12:57:46 AM »

With each chapter gets more interesting.

I do not like what Kai and Haruna did

and Acchan & Yuuchan discovered them in 'that' moment was the worst, poor them

But the "swinger" strategy for saying it somehow is very predictable, would be more interesting Takaharu's reactions before a playgirl Acchan and Yuuchan close to someone who Haruna doesn´t like.

keep up the good work

Sydney W · « **Reply #152 on:** December 20, 2012, 01:00:51 AM »

I wonder their friendship will be the same again after what happened. Kai x Haruna should have declare their relationship to their friends instead of hidden it. It becoming more complicated. Anyway, please update the next fic soon ~

Tanchan · « **Reply #153 on:** December 20, 2012, 04:32:32 AM »

Oops, sorry Kai but I won't take your side this time. You deserve it if later you find out that you're in love with Atsuko and she's already falling for Yuko. This is probably the only fic where I don't mind if Yuko annd Acchan end up together. ~~Luckily this is Kai and not Takamina~~

Haruko · « **Reply #154 on:** December 20, 2012, 05:47:21 AM »

Quote from: haruhi16 on December 19, 2012, 03:44:37 PM

EHHHHHHHHHHHHHH but i was expecting a sweet revenge here! I was anticipating some more!
If i were Yuko and Acchan, i would never forgive those friends who betrayed me! I will let them feel ashamed with themselves by having someone that is HOTTER and GOOD LOOKING GUY/GIRL that is also worth for their love!

Acchan and Yuko are both popular in their school, right? why not use it to get the entire school's attention being the hottest and sweetest couple? I mean, that would be really exciting, right?

Of course, for them to make them jealous to death, Yuko and Acchan will act like nothing happened and will be more interested ONLY to each other.

LOL sadist

Yeah!!! YOu have my vote... i want that takaboy and haruna suffer.. >_<.. because it was a betrayal....

cisda83 · « **Reply #155 on:** December 20, 2012, 06:41:35 AM »

Well I feel sad for Atsuko and Yuko, but I don't think Kai and Haruna is at fault too.
I mean the setting of the stories is that they are very popular people that have lots of fans.
Fans can be good and bad, right?
Some more they are on a relationship before Atsuko and Yuko meet Kai and Haruna... so for Atsuko and Yuko to fall in love with them, weren't they fault
at all.
Also their friends keep teasing them (AtsukoxKai and HarunaxYuu), they are also at fault to keep encourage Atsuko and Yuko with their feeling for Kai and Haruna respectively.
I mean Kuu and Mariko knew about them, and they are the ones that teasing them more... I can say the faults lie with them some of it.
For Kai and Haruna, telling people their love lives or not.... I think I can respect their choice... I mean it's their loves lives...who are they so say anything. It's their own business. Some more, they might need more time with their relationship... I mean they are new into the relationship... so it might not be stable yet... they might need more time to be more comfortable with their new status.
As I said before, they are very popular... so before others giving them hard time whether in or out of school.
Furthermore, in the story... it seem like both Atsuko and Yuko... the first time they met Kai and Haruna respectively... they are already falling in love with them so whether they know the relationship before hand does it matter? They are going to be broken heart anyway.
Okay may be knowing the relationship before seeing them making love to each other might soften then blow but are they at fault... may be a bit.
I can't really say Kai and Haruna 100% at fault... everyone contributes in this tragedy.
In the other hand, Sae is very much at fault with what he did to YukixMayu relationship. He tried to blackmail Mayu... Mayu please quickly think... To solve your problem is very easy. 1st, tell Yuki what Sae said (about the black mail), 2nd, quit and find another job... there is always some where you can get a job. Doctors... there are always places that will need doctors. Or 3rd, Tell Yuki to ask for a break until Yuki graduate from the Uni... then continue the relationship.
But these are all my personal opinions, I don't mean to offense anyone with my comments.
I hope u guys don't mind them.
It's very good fic. Thank you for the update.
Can't wait to see the next one.

warr · « **Reply #156 on:** December 20, 2012, 01:00:47 PM »

Yeah please make Atsuyuu

karupin12 · « **Reply #157 on:** December 20, 2012, 01:24:29 PM »

It looks like everyone hates Takaharu

except for one, cisda83

I'm glad that she saw that side of the story's situation ..

but still, just like the other sadist out there want, the two still need to suffer

it's unfair if its only Yuko and Acchan

oshima zelo · « **Reply #158 on:** December 20, 2012, 01:35:55 PM »

I am a new reader here and after I read your fanfic .. your fanfic is so awesome and I can not wait for the update immediately

please to continue soon, I can not wait

and I look forward to in the next Atsuyuu

Atsuyuu love yeah

korin48 · « **Reply #159 on:** December 23, 2012, 10:58:41 AM »

Oi oi! You know me right? It's me Korin...

I like TakaHaru and AtsuYuu also but I prefer AtsuMina and KojiYuu more.....

Please update fast!!!