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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.11
« Reply #100 on: November 27, 2012, 08:38:08 PM »
Nice update,
Mayuki moment,
it was too sweet & peaceful,
hope no people to bother their fake honeymoon,
I got something bad about the guy pull wanted to drag Mayu,(maybe i think too much)
suddenly in Paris a guy know how to speak Japanese, and wanted to drag a girl, (it seem very fishy)

Would Rena wanted to protect Yuki?
that y she be the leader of the Black Queen like Acchan?
or Gekikara is another person??

Looking forward for the next update.

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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.11
« Reply #101 on: November 27, 2012, 11:10:10 PM »
MaYuki sweet time in Paris  :heart:
And now I'm curious about Geki/Rena thing.


Looking forward to the next chapter, thanks cmze-san

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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.11
« Reply #102 on: November 28, 2012, 12:28:05 AM »
So cute~
I wonder how would be the confrontation between Rena and Yuki

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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.11
« Reply #103 on: November 29, 2012, 02:26:01 AM »
 Interesting story !!!  :bow:

Maaaayuuuuuukiiiiii  :twothumbs

Thanks for the update!!!   :grin:

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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.11
« Reply #104 on: December 02, 2012, 02:32:31 PM »
please update soon thank u :heart: :deco:
My kami-oshi is Mayuyu, and my oshimen is Oku Manami.

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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.11
« Reply #105 on: December 02, 2012, 05:34:17 PM »
Kyaaaaa~ AWESOME.. New reader here.. Hope you update soon..

Reading fics of AKB48.. It just made my day..

MaYuki~! is LOVE  :wub: :wub: :wub:

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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.12
« Reply #106 on: December 03, 2012, 01:15:27 AM »
                                  ~Time is good as gold~
                                            CH.12

Yuki openned her eyes fast,she noticed Mayu was hugging her so she hugged back with a wide smile plastered on her face 

"Mayu chan!" She says squeezing the yonger girl but she didn't open her eyes so she tried

"Yuki you're squeezing me!" Mayu replied with her eyes still closed 

Yuki knelt on bed "c'mon Mayu chan wake up is a beatiful day in PARIS!!" she shouts as she shakes Mayu 

"Ahh! ahh! i'm up!" Mayu says as she sits on bed and looks at Yuki who's smirking 

"what? what's wrong?" The CG asked worried 

Yuki smiled widely "I want some cuddling time now!" she shouts and hugs on Mayu 

Yuki landed on top of Mayu and hugged her tight then took a deep breath to inhale her scent,Yuki's head was Mayu's chest she wad with her eyes closed 

Mayu could do nothing but smile and play with her hair "you know you're just a person who has so much love to give,you're so adorable!"

Yuki hugs Mayu tigher still with her head on her chest replies smiling "it's just that i need to touch you,feel you,hold you,kiss you and  i can't control myself!" 

Mayu blushed "Yuki.." she murmured and looked at Yuki with a sweet look and wrapped her arms around Yuki to hold her tigher 

"I never wanna be separate from you!" Mayu thought soon tears were on the corner of Mayu's eyes but she hild it,she didn't wanna ruin the trip 

Yuki got up "Cuddling time is over but don't worry there will be a second part!" she says as she grabs her clothes 

Mayu smiled then turned on the tv 

~ They changed their clothes and soon left their room~ 

The two found a beatiful restaurant..

Yuki was talking but Mayu could do nothing but stare and think:

"I'm in the moon,i don't know how this happened! why you looked at me? there are many other girls,boys that would totally go out with you..."

*Yuki kept talking and smiling*

"you're rich,smart,beatiful why you chose me? don't tell me that you supposed to be mine since the beginning,as a payback for this.." Mayu thought then touches her chest 

"Yeah,it because of that.. you're mine! that's why you didn't give up on me even though you knew about my illness now i can't let you go.. we're soulmates planned to meet in the way.. i'll never forget you Kashiwagi Yuki"

Mayu looked down then smiled 

"Mayu chan taste it! it's delucious!" Yuki says as she takes a spoon 

Mayu looked around to the people.. 

"Why you mind about them?" Yuki asked frowning 

Mayu sighed "i forgot you're no the type who rathers hide!" she says 

Yuki smiled "there you go!" she says with the spoon on Mayu's mouth 

*Soon the two ate and went out*

Yuki walked the streets of Paris hand in hand with Mayu 

"Take a picture of that Mayuyu!" Yuki says amazed as a little kid 

"then over there two!" Yuki shouts pointing 

Mayu moves fast and takes another picture,After a few seconds Yuki became a picture maniac and starts bossy around Mayu 

Mayu got mad "Don't boss me around!" she says irriated 

Yuki looked at mad Mayu "then give me your phone mine doesn't have battery,i forgot ti charge!" she says smiling 

Mayu pouted and walked away 

Yuki frowned "Hey where are you going?" she asked as she walks behind 
 
"If you love Paris so much then marry it!" Mayu says mad as she walks 

Yuki was speechless "Could it be a person that might get jealous cause a city?" she wondered 

"Are you jealous?" Yuki asked 

Mayu pouted "of course not,it's just you don't give me your attention!" she says looking other way 

Yuki puts her finger on her chin "Is not that the meaning of jealousy?" she wondered then grabbed Mayu's arm 

"what are you doing?" Mayu asked 

"Let's sit here and watch this lake" Yuki says as she makes Mayu seat next to her 

"What?!?" Mayu asked 

"where are we?" Yuki asked 

Mayu sighed "Square de l'ile de france " she says then looked at the view and calmed 

Yuki got closer and putted her hand on Mayu's head "Jealous Mayu is cute!" she says smirking 

Mayu crossed her arms "i wasn't jealous!" she says as she cross her arms 

Yuki only smiles then looks at the view again and sighed "I always been in this kinda places since i was a kid."

*Mayu looked at Yuki*

"They would always say those places are specials and beatiful.."  Yuki gets up and takes a rock 

*Mayu look changed to a sad one*

" To me those words were a lie,when i was here i didn't see anything special or beatiful.I just felt even more lonely than before but.. " Yuki throws the rock away then turned to look at Mayu and smiled 

"Today.. you're here with me!" she says with her charming smile "

Mayu smiled then got up and hugged Yuki "I feel the same way.." she says still hugging Yuki 

Yuki smirked "i thought you were poor!" she says 

Mayu punched Yuki's arm softly "About my feelings for you Baka!" 

Yuki stuck her tongue out

Mayu looked at Yuki "I think we're soulmates,that's why this feelings grow so fast!" she says serious 

Yuki smiled but then pulled out something from her pocket "here.. i'm glad you feel the same way that i do!" 

"what's this?" Mayu asked then looked at the bracelet 

"a really cool bracelet!" Yuki says with a smile 

"what? stop buying me things!"  Mayu replies as she tries to walk away but Yuki grabbed her wrist 

"It's a gift!" Yuki says 

"no, i don't want it!" Mayu replies but somehow Yuki was stronger and end up putting it on her wrist 

"well well!" A guy a says while other comes behind him 

Yuki putted Mayu behind her "who are you?" 

"what?! you don't recognized my face!" The other guy says as she comes closer 

"ohh you!" Yuki says with a careless manner 

"This girl beat me brother,let's finish her!" He says mad pointing at Yuki 

"Fight with me!" The older one of the 2 brothers shouts then runs to Yuki 

Yuki pushed Mayu away then dodge the punch 

"amazing!" Another girl says in french 

Yuki was dodging every punch and kick

"Is this a martial arts show?" A bunch of kids wondered 

Yuki was bragging her abilities and make the older brother look ridiculous 

*Many kids records with their phones*

After a few seconds the younger one grabbed Yuki from behind 
 
"what!?" Yuki exclaimed 

"you thought i would stay here watching?" The younger asks 

The older punched Yuki on her stomach full energy 

"Yukii!!" Mayu shouted she wss about to run to her

"Stop there!" Yuki shouts "now i'm mad!" she says 

"ohh i'm so scare!" The older brother says 

Yuki stepped on the foot of the guy that was holding her 

"Ouchh!" He shouts in pain,Yuki use her elbow and hit him on his face 

"Ehh!" The older one says impress then reacted and tried to punch Yuki but she dodge it and punched him on his stomach 

He bent to handle the pain with his hands on his stomach  so Yuki got closer and finish him with a hard punch on his face (he loose a tooth! cause Yuki wears rings) 

Mayu grabbed Yuki 

"Let's go Mayu!"

The two girls head back to the hotel without saying a word 

~At the room~ 

Mayu was sad she thought this somehow was her fault even if Yuki doesn't show that punch hurt 

Mayu looked around and noticed Yuki wasn't around "where did she go?" she thought as she opens the door of the bathroom 

Yuki looked stopped unzipping her shorts "hi.." she says frowning 

(Yuki was only wearing her bra and was about to unzip her shorts when Mayu openned the door) 

Mayu looked at Yuki who just move to close the key of water and then looked at the CG

Mayu blushed then looked other way  "you're arms and stomach are red.." 

Yuki looked at it "it's truth maybe cause that guy grabbed me and the other punched me on my stomach!" she says surprised 

Mayu got closer and saw Yuki's knuckles 

Yuki looked other way "it's fine,once i shower i'll be fine!" she says smiling

Mayu looked down "This is all my fault,we should had gone to the police to put that guy in jail for a bit then he wouldn't disturb us and they  wouldn't hurt you!" 

Yuki laughed then hugged Mayu "silly Mayu,shower with me!" she says laughing 

"what!??" Mayu asked then got super red 

"easy tiger,i'm not saying we should do it naked.We can use our underwear like this!" Yuki says as she removes her shorts "Like a swimsuit!" she shouts and gets on the bubble tub then looked at Mayu 

Mayu was blushing hard "i think a vein already exploted on my brain!" she thought

"c'mon Mayu this tub is kinda big for me alone!" Yuki shouts with a smile 

Mayu was about to unbutton her shirt but then remembered the scar on her chest and stopped 

Yuki remembered also so she got out of the tub and putted herself in front of Mayu 

Inner Mayu 1:This is badddd she's all wet..  SO HOT!!
Inner Mayu 2 cover her eyes: DON'T LOOK IF U WANNA LIVE!! 
Innner Mayu 3 drooling : I'm gonna die happy!! 

"Mayu chan is so beatiful!" Yuki says as puts her hands on Mayu's first button 

"Everything about you perfect,perfect skin,perfect tone,perfect butt,perfect smile" She says as she starts unbutonning her shirt 

"Yuki.." Mayu murmures blushing hard looking other way 

Yuki smiled "but there's one place that makes me more happier than anyother!" she says as she end with the buttons and looks at Mayu's chest 

Mayu was redder looking other way then a cold finger traces her scar softly 

"Yuki.." She murmured as she sees Yuki tracing her finger 

"This brought you to me..we'll get through this!" The taller girl says as she unzips Mayu's skirt,it slips down 

Let's go Mayu chan! Yuki says with  a smile and pulls Mayu with her 

The played with the water,they even played as if their hands were ducks,then made riciculous hairstyles with the shampoo 

"Mayu chan bring my phone!" Yuki says as she tries to maintain her hair up 

Mayu fast got out of the bathroom and saw Yuki's iphone charing,she disconected it then she unlock it and putted the camera but she couldn't help to see in the corner a picture of her of this afternoon,Mayu scrolled the pictures as she walks to the bathroom "this are a lot pictures of me when i was distracted even videos,that's why her phone died!" 

The CG smiled then entered to the bathroom to the bathroom and found Yuki depressed 

"Gravity is my enemy,why you took so long? did you take a nap on the way?" The tall girl asked pouting 

Mayu only smiled then putted the phone aside  to enter to the tub and kiss the bossy girl

~After a few seconds~

Mayu breaks the kiss and looks at Yuki in the eyes "i feel like my chest is going to explote!" 

"what??? do i take you to the hospital?" Yuki asked nervous 

*Mayu laughed*

*Yuki pouted*

Mayu got on Yuki's lap and looked at her in the eyes "I love you.." she says with a smile 

Yuki grabbed Mayu by her waist then smiled "I love you too!" Then kissed her 

~Meanwhile in Nagoya~ 

Rena and Jurina were watching a movie in Rena's room 

Suddenly her phone rang 

*Jurina paused the movie*

Rena opened a drawer and pull out a phone 

*A new text message*

Dear Gekikara take a look at this please.. 

 "a link.." she murmured then clicked on it and soon a video openned 

"Yuki.." Rena murmured 

*The video was Yuki fighting in Paris* 

"what the hell are you doing in Paris? did you.. Acchan!" Rena whispered mad then noticed Mayu when she grabbed Yuki in the end of the video 

Rena was squeezing her phone cause her anger 

"I didn't know you had another phone!" Jurina says as she tries to take it from Rena's hand 

Rena reacted fast and grabbed Jurina by her collar

"Rena.. Rena chan!" Jurina as she's trying to breathe 

Rena mad look changed to "her" 

"Jurina i'm sorry!" Rena says 

Jurina looked at Rena as she catch her breath 

Jurina left the room.. 

Rena looked other way "Sorry.." 

TO BE CONTINUED!! COMMENT!!

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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.12
« Reply #107 on: December 03, 2012, 01:56:57 AM »
Rena the bad guy..
Rena.. I can't believe you now T.T

Why did you plan to hurt your own friend just because of..
Because of.. Got no comment now..

Rena the bad guy T.T

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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.12
« Reply #108 on: December 03, 2012, 02:25:36 AM »
“........”

Great...,


Lovely...,


awesome...,


incredible...,


hilarious...,


Beautiful...,


Touching...,



Can't describe how i felt when i read mayuki moment...

I cant fine a word to describe that,so i will comment about rena and jurina in nagoya,

Heck!! So that guy is the black queen underling! I cant believe that,a rich people really scary...

Hope they will fine until they comeback to japan...awww


Rena! Wow now im wondering who rena really love? Its yuki or jurina LOL


Thank for the update cmze-san!!
RENA-SAMA!!!

YUKI-SAMA!!!

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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.12
« Reply #109 on: December 03, 2012, 09:15:58 AM »
wow mayuki were so lovely  :deco:
but I really can't understand Rena and poor Jurina :catglare:

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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.12
« Reply #110 on: December 03, 2012, 11:00:38 AM »
Nice Update.

NO WAY!! Rena cant be bad,
there must have some explaination on Rena side,
Mayuki moment just as sweet as ever,
but Rena cant be bad, I dun believe in it, sure got reason.

Loooking forward for the next update.

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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.12
« Reply #111 on: December 03, 2012, 11:57:35 AM »
YUKIRIN IS SO SWEEEETTTT!!!!

Rena!!! Why is she get mad when she sees Yuki with Mayu???
She is bad... Noooooo!
Mayuki = Cutest couple



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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.12
« Reply #112 on: December 03, 2012, 12:27:02 PM »
why Rena mad??
 :?  :?  :?
did mayu or yuki do somehing wrong???

thanks for the update... :twothumbs
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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.13
« Reply #113 on: December 04, 2012, 08:03:42 AM »
                                  ~Time is good as gold~
                                            CH.13

~On the plane getting back to Japan~

Yuki was lost in her thoughts when Mayu moved her head and brought her back to earth 

Yuki looked at Mayu who was sleeping on her shoulder then smiled "Cute" she thought "i'm sure we can deal with all this" she murmured then kissed Mayu on her forhead 

~At the limo~ 

Yuki was still thinking but then Mayu grabbed her hand and smiled to her 

"Mayuyu i was thinking.." Yuki says looking at her 

"Mayuyu? *Mayu frowned* yes,i kinda noticed you been thinking a lot!" The CG says looking at the taller girl

Yuki pouted "Yeah i like to call you like that do you have a problem? or somebody else called you like that before?"

Mayu putted her finger on her chin "hmmm" 

"what?!? who is he? i'm going to kill him!" Yuki says taking Mayu by her shirt and putting her close to her face

Mayu pouts "my mom jerk!" she shouts 

"Huh?" Yuki let go Mayu's shirt "Sorry hahaha sorry!" she says smiling nervous 

Mayu crossed her arms and looked other way "you're a jerk!" she says mad

Yuko kept smiling nervous "c'mon it was your fault!" 

"ehhh!!" Mayu turned to look at Yuki with "WTF? face" 

The limo stopped..

"what's wrong?" Mayu asked 

Yuki smiled "you see that car behind us.. well you have to go with it" 

"what?!? why?" Mayu asked 

Yuki smiles and explain nervous "I don't like doing this but if they see us together they would know you're important to me and would try to do something against you so it might be good if we pretend at school that we're indiferent.." 

"Eh!?" Mayu says as Yuki gets out of the limo then openned Mayu's door then pulled her out 

The chauffeur already took Mayu's bag and put it on the other car 

Mayu only looked at Yuki who was waving and smiling
 
"I hate you..stupid Yuki" The CG thought as she walks to the other car ignoring Yuki 

Yuki was waiting for a flying kiss or something from the CG but she never did 

Yuki was standing there

"Kashiwagi san the car already left" The chauffeur says 

Yuki looked at the chauffeur "no flying kiss,no wave..psst mean CG!"  she thought then entered to the limo

~At school~ 

Mayu arrived first,she went to her room and saw Jurina laying on her bed listening music 

"Hello Mayu chan!" Jurina says not so happy 

"What's wrong? no smile?" Mayu asked as she puts her bag on the floot and sits next to Jurina 

"It's Rena chan!" Jurina says looking down *flash of the scene last night* 

Mayu pouted "you two have a really weird relantionship!" she says with a sighs

Jurina looked at Mayu "it's not weird,i'm in love with her since i met her!"  

Mayu was confused "Your parents didn't adopt you when you were a baby?"
 
"No.." Jurina replied as she gets up then leaves the room 

"What did i say?" Mayu wondered 

Jurina walked the hall "That wasn't Rena.. my Rena is kind and full of love" she thought 

"Yuki why you didn't tell me that you wouldn't stay here the weekend,i lost my weekend here!" Sae says complaining as she walks with Yuki the hall 

Yuki stopped walking and looked at Sae "Sorry,it wasn't planned!" she says with a smile 

Sae's jaw dropped "Are.. you.. apologizing?" she asked 

Yuki facepalmed herself "Stupid cyborg!" she thought "maybe" she says with digusted face 

Sae putted her arm around Yuki's shoulder "That a face of you that i didn't know!" she says laughing 

Yuki looked at Sae "Do you want me to punch you in your pretty face instead?" she asked serious 

"Ok.. ok! now you're you!" Sae says as she removes her arms 

Both walked to Yuki's room..

Jurina was shocked "what was that?" she thought 

~At Yuki's room~

The two entered to the room and remembered at the same time 

"The bird!" Both shouts and turned to look at the mini fridge 

There was a note on it..

Yuki pouted then putted her bag aside  "son of a.." she murmures as she walks to grab the note that was on the mini fridge

Sae putted her chin on Yuki's shoulder to read the note 

Yuki felt the weight then looked at Sae "What the hell are you doing?" 

Sae removed her head "i wanted to watch!" she says careless and snatches the paper 

Yuki was with her eyes on fire "This shoulder it's not for you!" she shouts 

Sae looked at Yuki serious "They want to meet you and you're worried about your shoulder!" she says

Yuko eyes got back to normal "it will be fine!" she says then opens the fridge 
 
"Noo!" Sae shouts and tries to stop Yuki 

Both looked at the fridge 

"It's clean.." the two says at the same time 

Yuki smiled "At least they clean that up.."

Sae looked at Yuki "You idiot,don't think this lightly!" she says shaking Yuki 

Yuki release herself "i have something to do,see you later!" she says as she walks away 

Yuki walked the hall "i wonder if Mayu chan is still mad!" she murmures then a hand grabbed her 

"Kashiwagi san!"

"Sensei!"

"Let's go,i'll invite yoy something to eat!" Mariko sensei says with a smile 

Yuki pouted "i really wanted to see Mayu before that meet!" she thinks then sighed and agreed with the sensei 

~Both eating at the recreation area~ 

So how was it? Mariko asked then proceed to drink her coffee 

"I thought you didn't care!" Yuki says careless 

Mariko pouts "don't tease me kid" she says serious 

Yuki smirked "She told me nothing that i didn't know already so she wasn't helpful at all!" 

"What?!?" Mariko replied shocked 

"I just need to find their hiding places.." Yuki says in low tone of voice 

"Yuki chan!" someone says 

"what?" Yuki turned her head mad then saw Akicha smiling at her 

"I missed you!" She said then proceeds sit next to Yuki and hugs her 

"What did i do?" Yuki complained looking at the ceiling 

"did you miss me?" Akicha asked 

"There is your answer!" Mariko sensei says smiling as she gets up and leaves 

"what!??!  don't leave me here with this maniac!" Yuki shouts desperate 
 
"i was looking for you since i got here but i couldn't find you,what you been doing huh?" Akicha asked 

Yuki looked at Akicha "My answer.." she thought 

Inner Yuki one: "what hell she was talking about? Mariko sensei is crazy,she should date someone!"
Inner Yuki two: "do this girl shut up? i wish she had a mute button and also Mayu sometimes!"
Inner Yuki three:" Destiny would be so cruel if Mayu cross that door and sees this girl hugging me!" 
Inner Yuki four with glasses: "Ehh! now i know Akicha is the headmaster granddaughter,she can get us the planes of this school!" 

Yuki got back to earth "You don't have to hug me that much! you know? btw can you get me the school planes humm.. please!" 

"Huh? so cuteeee! if you ask it that way sure!" Akicha says hugging Yuki more 

Yuki smiled nervous "why i have to deal with this things?" 

Soon Jurina and Mayu entered to the recreation area 

The first thing Mayu saw was that new girl hugging.. her Yuki 

Mayu blinked a few time while Yuki was nervous 

Inner Yuki one: "WTF?"
Inner Yuki two: "When i wanted to bully her,you didn't put her on my way and now i don't want her around.. what did i do to you?" she shouts looking up 
Yuki number three: THIS IS NOT WHAT IT LOOKS LIKE! THIS IS NOT WHAT IT LOOKS LIKE! she shouts several times running around 
Yuki number four with glasses: "You can't tell her that now it can be dangerous,apologize later!" she says as she fixes her glasses 

Mayu and Jurina sitted..

"why are you looking at them?" Jurina asked 

"No,i wasn't!" Mayu says and look down to avoid Yuki's gaze 

Yuki number three: Still running around shouting and crying 
Yuki number four: "You're doing this to protect her so be quiet!"

Akicha looked at Yuki "why are you looking at that girl?" she asked then got up "ohh that's the ordinary girl i was talking about my friends says that you defend her from the black queens,is it truth?" she asked poiting at Mayu

Jurina almost chokes with her juice 

Yuki gets up and looks at Mayu "No.. why would i?" she asked annoyed 

Mayu was shocked 

Akicha smiled "i knew it!" she says as  clings on Yuki's arm and both walked away 

Mayu clenched her fist 

Jurina looked at Mayu "Are you okay?" she asked 

"Yeah totally!" The CG says as she gets up and leaves the recreation area 

"damn girls are crazy!" Jurina thought

~ Walking the hall~ 

Yuki was feeling terrible and still ennoying Akicha is clinging on her 

"hope Mayu won't be so mad" She thought 

"Rena chan!" Akicha says happy 

Yuki fast reacted and looked at her friend 

"Hi Yuki chan.." Rena says with a smile 

*Yuki remembered the note about who could be part of the black queens*

"Hi Rena chan!" Yuki says then looks at Akicha "Don't you have something to do.. GO!" she says annoyed 

"Ohh okay i'll get those stupid school planes then i'll be back baby!" Akicha says with a wink the she walked away 

"Did she say school planes?" Rena thought shocked with her eyes opened wide 

"Stupid Akicha!" Yuki thought 

~The hallway was empty~ 

Rena smiled at her "do you still have plans of destroying the black queens?" she asked still with a smile 

Yuki felt strange somehow that kind and happy aura of Rena dissapeared and was replaced for a dark one 

"No,i don't really care,they hurt me pretty bad last time.. i should not cross their way!" Yuki says serious 

"LIAR!!" Rena thought then hugged Yuki 

Yuki blinked a few times then felt that Rena was squeezing her hard 

"Rena.. Rena! you're hurting me!" Yuki says forcing then realesed from her embrace

"Sorry,i just want you to be okay!" Rena says with a smile 

Yuki could believe it "i should go now!" she says then walked away 

Entered to the newspaper room that was empty and pulled a black phone from her pocket 

"Get rid of all  school's planes that you find in the headmaster's office NOW!" She shouted 

Yuki walked to the hall and her feet led her in Mayu's door "she was worried about Rena but she was more worried about what Mayu thinks!" xD

Yuki opened the door with her key and found Mayu playing with her computer 

Mayu turned to look at Yuki and ignored her 

"hello to you too!" The taller girl says as she grabs the other chair from the other desk and puts it next to Mayu then sits 

Mayu kept playing ignoring Yuki 

"I don't like this!" Yuki says irritated 

Mayu kept playing 

Yuki looked at Mayu "Please listen!" 

Mayu kept ignoring her 

Yuki poute then sighs "Stupid cyborg!" she murmured 

Mayu pouted a little but kept ignoring Yuki 

Yuko looked down "This irritates me!" she shouts then takes Mayu's laptop and smash it on the floor hard

*Mayu was mouth open*

Yuko looked at Mayu then bent and moved Mayu's chair to make her look at her 

"I DO ALL THIS TO PROTECT YOU! YOU ARE THE MOST IMPORTANT THING I HAVE,THAT AKICHA DON'T MEAN ANYTHING AND YOU MEAN EVERYTHING!" Yuki shouts 

Mayu was still in shock:

"You..didn't..have..to..ruin..my..computer!" 

Yuki smiles nervously "you ignored me! don't worry i'll buy you a new one" she says nervous

Mayu get up mad then looked at Yuki 

"remember that you love me!" Yuki says nervous 

Mayu sighed "did you hit your head when you were younger? what kind of person smashes a laptop against the floor?"  she asked 

Yuki smiles widely " many times but you still love me!" she says gets closer and kisses Mayu on the lips 

TO BE CONTINUED!! COMMENT!!

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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.13
« Reply #114 on: December 04, 2012, 10:38:37 AM »
Omg! You updated before I had time to comment. :( :)

Ch 12 was super cute *.* I loved the bathroom scene :heart

And this one ehehe Yuki is still explosive xp

Wait... Jurina and Rena are actual sisters? So... they have a incestuous relationship?  :w00t:

Thank you o/

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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.13
« Reply #115 on: December 04, 2012, 10:45:24 AM »
Scary~

This chapter somehow give me a goosebump! Its scare me,that rena~ woooo~

Somehow i know that yuki,maybe never ever get the school planes...and its akicha fault! Aaa~ what a waste!

Gods,renaaaa why why? Why she's so scary...i really want to know why she's doing that...for what?? For yuki? For jurina? Or for herself?

Oh and why the black queen kept targeting yuki?isn't mayu that they targeting first? Why they dont do any move toward mayu's?? Just because yuki protect mayu,doesn't mean they can't bully her. They still can do without yuki know right?


Jurina and rena,they a lover? But they seem do secrety their relationship,why isn't its fine?jurina not a scholarship student like mayu.and the one who want do secretly its rena...why?


Wow too much questioning from me eh but there just a maybe,that was just my though that i like to comment in this fic,because i like this fic soo much,so i just cant control what im thinking about the story,the character.LOL

Im sorry cmze-san if im too much LOL i cant help it.


Thank for the update
RENA-SAMA!!!

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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.13
« Reply #116 on: December 04, 2012, 12:12:35 PM »
nice update,
So something happen to the wMatsui,
Rena is more and more mystery, why she want to do something like that?
why the black queen keep target Yuki, because of that Rena need make a move?
due Rena is the head of the black queen that why she need to do something like that?
hope the next update can explain it. :cry:

looking forward for the next update.

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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.13
« Reply #117 on: December 04, 2012, 12:39:39 PM »
Rena is jealous??? NO??? :?

She reacted really strangely!

Aaah Why are she like this???

Mayu and Yuki are funny(for me...)
Mayuki = Cutest couple



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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.13
« Reply #118 on: December 04, 2012, 01:09:03 PM »
Hohoho interesting, those Black Queens >:] I want moreeeeee XDDDD

You make me can't stop my imagination cmze <3333 Pls try to update as soon as you can XD Thank you

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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.13
« Reply #119 on: December 04, 2012, 02:16:17 PM »
Cmze-san!  XD

Gosh. Yuki and Mayu is so..so.. sweet  :wub:
The Bath tub scene is so cute! I'm melting.  XD

Oh yeah, and what's up with Rena-chan? She's acting weird. Is she obsessed with Yukirin? gosh. I hope not. Poor Jurina.  :cry:
Waah. :panic: I can't wait anymore!  :lol: Hope Yuki finds out the truth soon.

Thanks for your fast update, cmze-san!  :bow:  :bow:

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