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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.15
« Reply #140 on: December 23, 2012, 09:47:42 AM »
Yay an update!!!

They are so sweet!!!!!

Poor sasshi...
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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.15
« Reply #141 on: December 23, 2012, 09:57:54 AM »
Thanks for the update I've been waiting for this  :D
I really love your fanfic!

Love Mayuki :heart:

I wanna know what will happpen to sashi  :(
No matter how impossible you think it is...

You have to try it...

Before saying it's really impossible!

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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.15
« Reply #142 on: December 23, 2012, 02:47:39 PM »
Thank you for updating, cmze!!  :wub:

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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.15
« Reply #143 on: December 23, 2012, 03:10:36 PM »
Hey Cmze, I'm glad you're back! Hope everything is settled down now^^

Nice update o/ hhueheuhe full of kisses *.*

I wonder what happened >< why Rena was in Mayu's and Jurina's room? Alone with Mayu.....

Hhuehue soon you will get used to it. O/

Thank you and welcome back^^

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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.15
« Reply #144 on: December 23, 2012, 04:03:11 PM »
How im express this,im really thankful you update this,finally even if this one is kind of short than your usual update,im really happy with this chapter.

Aww they comeback mayuki,
Yuki need to feel,touch,hold,and kissed mayu aww~
And mayu cant resist it!

Still wondering what happen with wmatsui,looks like they had a awkward relationship,but rena still care and lovely toward jurina,
maybe it cause of black queen incident in the past?(well i dont know LOL)
Jurina get yuki hit on her face right,im wondering how rena reaction...


And the past:

Hope sashi fine...its not easy to join the black queen though~

The one who easily get jealous is you yuki LOL
Love when yuki being care and protective toward mayu's~

Oh if yuki already called mayu "mayuyu" then when mayu called yuki "yukirin"?


Ah thank for the update cmze-san
 Hope the next update fast LOL just kidding,you can get your time to write




Again thank you for this awesome update

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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.15
« Reply #145 on: December 23, 2012, 06:25:27 PM »
Wow, Yuki is so sweet!!!  :inlove:
Sasshi collapsed because of geki's kick.  XD I hope she recover with that.  :nervous

Thanks a lot for this update cmze-san! And Welcome back!  :nervous

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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.15
« Reply #146 on: December 29, 2012, 01:10:34 PM »
Plase update soon

I love this fic so much!! Please please

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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.15
« Reply #147 on: December 29, 2012, 07:57:31 PM »
nice update,
I know that this already update quite a time,
but I have no time to read because of work,  :fainted: :fainted:
so Sasshi make a move to join black queen to search more information about them,
Why Rena so scary?? For me she still not a bad person, sure have a reason,
Mayuki moment was nice too, seem that Yuki have no new idea about the black queen,
Mayu was still a CG, due have feeling but act cool there,

Looking forward for the next update.

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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.15
« Reply #148 on: December 30, 2012, 03:31:16 PM »
i love this fanfic please update soon cuz i keep reading the chapters again and again (although i mean im not tired of reading it again and again) its just im really looking forward to the next chapter thanx and sorry to hear what happened to ur latop mine broke to  :) :love:
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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.16
« Reply #149 on: January 03, 2013, 05:45:28 AM »
                                                  ~Time is good as gold~
                                                                   CH.16

(At Yuki's room)

Two high school girls were kissing on bed,the shorter was on top making sure to touch what she wanted to touch since the first time she saw the taller girl

"Mayu.." The taller girl called but was ignored by the younger girl who was busy unbuttoning her shirt

"okay this is best study session that i ever had but we need to actually study you know!" Yuki says buttoning her shirt and catching. her breath

Mayu just looked at her "huh?"

Yuki moved Mayu off her and putted her next to her "now let's study" the taller one says nervous

(Suddenly Mayu's phone rang, it was Jurina asking her to come to her room and not giving more details)

(At the room)

The two girls were shocked while Jurina just stood there watching their reactions

"Those bastards!" Yuki murmured clenching her fist and looking at the mirror which had written with lipstick "WE HAVEN'T FORGOT ABOUT U!!"

Mayu took a deep breath then turned to look at Yuki who got closer and grabbed her hand "i won't let them get to you!" she says serious then kissed Mayu's forhead <forgetting about Jurina's existence>

Jurina was shocked also "Since when Yuki cares about Mayu and why she kissed her on her forhead?" she thought

Yuki left the room

Mayu starts to clean the mirror while Jurina looks at her

(MEANWHILE)

Yuki walked the halls looking at everyone then she received a text message from an unknown number

"Meet me at the bathroom,third cubicle from right to left"

Yuki run to the bathroom

[Once there she chose the third from the right to the left]

Yuki looked around but nothing seemed out of normal inside the cubicle till a paper appeared,she took from the floor and read it:

Yuki chan

It's me Sasshi i can not use my phone they took it away from me,they don't trust me so they're keeping an eye on me. I still don't know where are their hiding places because they knock me before take me there the only thing i know is that you're their enemy and that Mayu is important to you so they're going after her please don't panic that's what Gekikara wants!"

Yuki broke the paper "Gekikara!"  then got out of the bathroom

She walked the hall to Mayu's room,she opened the door and saw Mayu talking to Jurina

"How. did you opened the door?" Jurina asked

Yuki show her key then takes the Mayu's clothes and starts putting them in a bag

"Yuki chan what are you doing?" Mayu asked trying to stop Yuki

"You're coming to my room!" Yuki says as she keeps packing

"but this is my room" Mayu retores

Yuki stops packing and takes Mayu by her shoulders "i'm not going to let you here alone so please come with me.." she says serious

"okay.." Mayu replies

The two end packing so Yuki carried the bag while Mayu carries her laptop

Everyone in the hall were looking at them

"I heard she was being a target of the black queens maybe she's going home" Everyone comments

Yuki sighs "stupid girls" she thought

Everyone was mouth open when Yuki opened her door and Mayu got in

"Yuki chan!" Sae says smiling then noticed Mayu "you.. what are you doing here?"
Mayu looked down

Yuki grabbed her hand "This is her room too!" she says serious

"EHHH WHEN THAT HAPPENED?!?" Sae asked with a shocked face

Mayu and Yuki frowned

"You two.. huh? so honeymoon okay now i'm leaving!" Sae says smirking then leaves fast

Mayu scratched her head while Yuki was all red

(Meanwhile) in a dark room in the school

"where am i? is this another test?" Sasshi asked with her eyes covered and hanging upside down

"Take it off... " a voice says

Soon Sasshi could see "what the hell?" she asked while watches a big tarantula inside a box and also what it seems to be a letter

"Are you sure you still want this?" a voice asked

Sasshi gulped

"If she bites you're completely screw up" One of the girls says laughing

Sasshi pouted and she was nervous

"don't pee your pants please!" One of the girls says smirking

[Meanwhile]

Mayu fell sleep while Yuki only watches her then she got up and covered with the blanket,she leaned and kissed the CG's forehead sweetly

"i'm sorry but this was the only way to keep safe my crystal CG" Yuki whispered before heading out

Yuki walked out to the court to run a little for her surprised there was somebody else stretching

"Yuki chan!"

"Rena chan!"

The two girls looked at each other

"How you been?" Rena asked

"Fine" Yuki coldly replies

"I heard Mayu moved to your room!"" Rena says with a smirk

"Yeah" Yuki replies coldly again

Rena puts her hand on her eye "You have changed.." she says with a smirk

Yuki looked at Rena "so are you" she replies

Rena get serious "You're not better!" she says while gets closer to Yuki

"what happened to you? it feels like i'm not talking to Rena Matsui!" Yuki says

"i became stronger!" Rena replies looking at her hand

Somehow Rena reminded her Atsuko they way she looked at her hand with that loose look

"Be careful Yuki" Rena says before walking away

TO BE CONTINUED!!

Sorry if it's boring but like i said i have no music and it's hard getting my songs!!

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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.16
« Reply #150 on: January 03, 2013, 10:56:51 AM »
Go protect your cyborg Yuki!!!
btw.... i'm really curious about Rena..why is she being like that??
hmm...  :glasses:
nice update cmze-san!!
I don't know since I got in this fanfic i started reading A LOT!! xD


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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.16
« Reply #151 on: January 03, 2013, 10:57:39 AM »
I'm missing you here cmze-san  XD It's been a long time since I last saw you update your fic.
So now Mayu is the same room with Yuki......and Sae. Or will Sae sleep in another room?  :? (hope so  :P)
Love the Mayuki scene in the beginning.  :wub:

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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.16
« Reply #152 on: January 03, 2013, 12:05:39 PM »
Wooooah Rena is a bad girl!!!

Mayuki scene is so sweet!!! they are in the same room now! :inlove:
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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.16
« Reply #153 on: January 03, 2013, 02:31:58 PM »
thanx for updating  :deco:
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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.16
« Reply #154 on: January 03, 2013, 03:10:31 PM »
love the story, more updates please  :)
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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.16
« Reply #155 on: January 04, 2013, 12:54:45 AM »
OMG! Rena practically declared war to Yuki =O

Good mayuki moment *.* Is Yuki afraid of something? Why she turned Mayu down like that?

It was good update o/ Can't wait to read more o/

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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.16
« Reply #156 on: January 04, 2013, 05:45:58 AM »
Rena~ (T^T) i still trust you...

there must be a reason why you do that~

and if im right maybe its involved her relationship status with jurina
(well maybe~,i cant think another reason) LOL


As for mayuki,sweet as always

Wow,now their relationship became expose,looks like jurina and sae know too and another student~

Mayu and yuki,they are now a roommate aww

Sashi fighting!!! You can do it!

Thing of this chapter,it seems that yuki already know that rena and gekikara is the same person...its a war!

Love is war!!

Thank for the update cmze-san
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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.16
« Reply #157 on: January 05, 2013, 07:41:51 AM »
NICE UPDATE,
If Rena is like Acchan,
which means she is trying to protect Yuki??
Rena i know u r there,
as kind as ever,
except she got double personalities.
Yuki leave her room??
OMG... How bout Mayu there?

Looking forward for the next update.

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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.17
« Reply #158 on: January 07, 2013, 05:38:00 AM »
                                                  ~Time is good as gold~
                                                                   
Well as u know i recovered many songs and i'm happy for that thanks you all for your help!!! SO HERE'S A NEW CHAPTER ENJOY.You know the fic so don't get confuse with the past and the future..

(AT THE HOSPITAL)

Mayu woke up early,she looked at her room and sighed "This place is depressive!" she thought but then something got her attention

"Yuki chan.." the cyborg murmured softly then looked at the girl who was sleeping on a chair with her head close to Mayu's hand

Mayu smiled "no matter what i say.. you always do what you want in the end!" she thought then tucked Yuki's hair behind her ear "I love you" she murmured

Yuki also opened her eyes and sitted,she looked at the cg "Good morning Mayu chan!" she says with a smile

The younger girl also smiled "Good morning Yuki chan!" she replies with a soft smile

Yuki gets up and stretches "Today is going to be a good day!" she says with a smile forming her lips

Mayu was shocked "Yuki is not acting like herself.." she thought

"i'll go get you breakfast,don't miss me too much!" The taller girl says with a smile then runs away fast

Mayu was confused "what's going on?" she murmured looking around

(A Few Minutes passed)

Mayu took a deep breath then somebody entered with a wheelchair, he seems like a doctor he was all covered with that blue uniform,the only thing that Mayu could see was his eyes which were so familiar

The doctor pointed to the wheelchair

"You want me to get on the wheelchair?" Mayu asked

The doctor nodded

Mayu looked other way "I think you got the wrong room, i can't get out of this room!" she says sad as she puts her hand on her chest

The doc grabbed Mayu's hand and made her get up to get on the wheelchair..

"what are you doin?" Mayu asked as she tries to stop him but he was stronger

Mayu kicked him

"Ouucchh Mayuyu!"

"Ehh Yukirin!" Mayu says as she watches her girlfriend rubbing her leg

"Kidnapping you!" Yuki answers and rides the wheelchair fast

Everyone in the hall were confused nurses,doctors etc

Soon some nurses noticed what was happening and run behind them

The two got out of the hospital and car was already waiting

Yuki grabs Mayu bridal style and get her on the car then thy engine the car leaving the nurses and guards behind

"Sae chan! Rena chan! Jurina chan! Sasshi!" Mayu says surprised then smiled

The girls smiled and say hi with a smile

"That was a sweet scape!" Sae chan says with a smile

Jurina hugs Mayu

Mayu turned to look at Yuki and smiled "Thank you Yukirin!" she says happy and kisses her cheek

"Love is in the Air!" Sasshi says with a smile

"The truth i was dying there.." Mayu thought a little sad

                                                            CH.17

(AT YUKI'S ROOM)

Yuki openned her eyes and looked at the beauty sleepig next to her,she touched her lips softly with her finger "so pretty I can't resist,I want kiss now!" she thought while slowly leans closer "But if i kiss her like this,she might think that i brought her here just for this.." 

Yuki pouted then retrieve herself and looked at the watch next to her "It's too early still!" she sighed

(Suddenly something hard hit her door!!!)

Mayu woke up because the noise while Yuki was already walking to the door

"What was that?" The younger girl asked

"Sshhh" Yuki replied as she walks slowly to the door

Once in front of it Yuki gulped while Mayu then gets up "Yuki don't" she says worried

Yuki looked at Mayu "i have to!" she says before openning the door

Both girls were shocked, there wasn't anybody else then Yuki noticed a box on the floor

"A shoes box!" Yuki says as she grabs it then closes the door and puts it on her desk

Mayu looked at the box "what's this?" she asked

"i don't know let's open it!" Yuki says lightly ready to open it but Mayu stopped her
"what if it has something dangerous?" Mayu asked grabbing Yuki's hand worried

"We have to find out!" Yuki says as she releases her hand and open the box

Mayu and Yuki blinked a few times then touched the things that were inside the box

"This is an old phone don't you think?" Yuki asks while examinates it

Mayu looked at the phone then looked at the papers "This files.. don't tell me these are the girls who used to be part of the black queens?"

"No way!" Yuki says and snatches the papers

"There is Maeda san's file" Mayu says

Yuki read a little "where this box comes from?" she asked

"Maybe is a trap or a bait!" Mayu replied

~MEANWHILE~

Mariko sensei walked the hall "yes, i did it Takamina you don't have to tell me twice!" the teacher replies then hangs up

<In Paris>

"Why you did that Takamina?" Acchan asked

"well what they do it's not okay so i had to help" Takamina says with a smile

Acchan pouted "you shouldn't have to do that, you're only getting her more troubles!"

"i was trying to help,besides my research is not that bad hope she finds out what she has to do with that phone!" Takamina says smiling

Acchan sighs "well i guess that's why i fell in love with you cause your sense of justice!" she says as she walks closee to the midget girl and gives her a sweet kiss on her forehead

Both looked at eachother then smiled

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

"Mayu chan wait up!" Yuki says as she walks behind her then putted her arm on her neck

Mayu blushed

"Good morning Mayu chan!" Jurina says interrupting the two girls

Yuki pouted

"Hello you too Kashiwagi san!" Jurina says not so happy

Yuki ignored her and pushed Mayu closer to her

"There's not doubt from hate to love there's only one step!" Jurina says smirking

Everyone around the hall were also looking Yuki and Mayu's interaction

Suddenly someone else appeared

"You see Rena i told you about these two!"'Sae says pointing to Yuki and Mayu

Mayu was kinda embarrassed because the attention

Everyone was gossiping around

Yuki and Rena had eye contact "Eye contact tension"

"So it's official" Someone around murmured then smirked

Yuki walked away with Mayu then stopped in an empty hall

"what was that? i thought you wanted to nobody know about us!" Mayu says

Yuki scratched her head "yeah,i wanted that!" she answers scratching her head

"But there's no way in hell i'll let that little pimp around you!" she thought

Mayu looked other way

"what you're not happy that everyone knows that you're mine?" Yuki.asked grabbing Mayu by her shoulders

Mayu looked at Yuki in the eyes "why you don't let me go home? this is dangerous!" she says worried

Yuki was shocked first but then she only hugged Mayu tight

Mayu also roamed her arms around the older girl

"i promise nothing bad is going to happen to you,i'm here for you Mayu!"'The taller girl says serious with her chin on Mayu's head

Mayu blushed somehow when Yuki do this to her or hugs her this waymakes her feel safe and protected

"i can't let you go,our time is good as gold!" Yuki thought as a tear rolls her cheek

TO BE CONTINUED!!

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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.17
« Reply #159 on: January 07, 2013, 06:53:27 AM »
I wondering what is jurina role in this story,
i mean everyone here have their interesting role right?
 There must be something for jurina LOL

Umm am i forgeting Sae? LOL

Ok lets start with the hospital scene~

yukirin danso!! LOL
Where are they going to?
vacation?
is that dangerous for mayu?
her còndition is not good as before right?
she's really on the edge of dying
But its gonna be a great day yay~


And the past scene,

Yeah they official now,all people in the school would know mayuki~ LOL

Oh and wow takamina present! Hope with that they can solve the problem

Rena...ah i dont know LOL

Yukirin fighting!!! Its gonna be a battle to protect someone precious in your life
Rena-chan fighting!! For something that i still dont know what LOL


Thank for this update cmze-san
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