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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.22 (1)
« Reply #220 on: March 06, 2013, 09:38:44 AM »
I know she did a lot of bad thing but I feel bad for Rena now that Jurina rejects her

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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.22 (1)
« Reply #221 on: March 06, 2013, 10:40:59 AM »
Waaah they are really sweet!!!! Mayuki :love:

Pooor Rena...
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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.22 (1)
« Reply #222 on: March 06, 2013, 12:36:40 PM »
Is this one is already season 2?

Yuki! Yuki! Yuki! Kashiwagi Yuki!! YUKIRIN!!! LOL
(well why you confused,if i was mayu, how i called yuki yukirin? Well maybe like this one)

Mou~ why yuki stoped? Mayu's want her~ LOL

Oh jurina,she's being bad now.
And rena could not fix her problems with jurina until the beach scene when mayu ill get worse,im pity her but what can she do? She deserved that for making jurina hurt.but i want wmatsui~ aww

Aaah~ why love is hurt...hurt like heaven LOL


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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.22 (1)
« Reply #223 on: March 06, 2013, 01:16:28 PM »
eeeeh things complicated with Wmatsui  :(
Kurogumi-chan is right you don't have to think so much about how Mayu will call Yuki Yukirin use what Kurogumi-chan said  :D

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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.22 (1)
« Reply #224 on: March 06, 2013, 02:29:07 PM »
nice update,

Mayuki nice and pretty moment,
Rena was too sad~ she doesn't deserve that!!
she just force by the black queen to become like that,
how come Jurina like that? because Rena wanted to protect her and force to be Geki!!
CURSE JURI!!!

looking forward for the next updated.

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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.22 (1)
« Reply #225 on: March 06, 2013, 05:03:01 PM »
hehe yuki pulls mayu's towel away, and she should cuz mayuyu is very beautiful :lol: :P
awww mayuki so sweet and cute saying they love each other :heart: :yep: :inlove:
jurina please make up with rena, i what she did was wrong, but this i rena for godsake :(
thanx for the update :cow: :bow:
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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.22 (1)
« Reply #226 on: March 06, 2013, 07:02:24 PM »
Update *.*

They are so cute together o/ heuheu So cute of Yukirin restrain herself afraid of what might happen to Mayu. It's a very hard thing to do >< good job Yukirin! Now I want to know what Mayu is gonna do about it heuheuhe

Poor Rena ;.; she truly is regretted. Why can't Jurina accept this? >< I just want to know how this whole situations will be unfolded^^

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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.22 (1)
« Reply #227 on: March 13, 2013, 06:34:59 AM »
YUKIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIRIN
BWAHAHAHAHAH!! (LAUGHING LIKE EVIL)
PRIVATE ISLAND HUH, ISNT IT TOO BORING IF JUST TWO PERSON?
I MEAN WHAT THEY DO ALL THE TIME IN THAT PLACE?JUST KISSING EACH OTHER?
AH THANK BY THE WAY REALLY GREAT CHAPTER

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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.22 (1)
« Reply #228 on: March 14, 2013, 05:48:53 AM »
"I want you.." Mayu says red

Woah!!  :shy2: This so cute and sweet! I love it!   :inlove:  By the way... I love all of your story cmze-san! I'm silent reader before...hehehe.....  :shy1:

Thanks for your story!  :P
« Last Edit: March 14, 2013, 05:59:01 AM by Hatakeru »

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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.22 (1)
« Reply #229 on: March 15, 2013, 06:55:40 PM »
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"Yuki chan!" she whispered

"huh?" Yuki turned to look at Mayu

"I want you.." Mayu says red

Yuki blushed then looked down not knowing what to do .After a short moment Yuki looked at her girlfriend again then got closer and kissed her like previously they were kissing

Hands roaming on each other, devouring each others lips, kissing, sucking and biting with no mercy (for all the time they couldn't)
Mann~ its really HOT!! my heart racing so fast just because imagine the scene  :mon blood:
i also like the moment of renaxyuki, thinking the other possibility if yuki didn't leave rena, maybe she will ended up with rena, not mayu. i like rena but it's too late for her to get yuki. just concentrate to win jurina love back renaa, ganbatte!!  :mon blowhorn:

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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.23(2)
« Reply #230 on: April 01, 2013, 06:01:45 AM »
                                              ~Time is good as gold~
                                                             CH.23 (2)

~Still in Hawai at night~

Yuki was playing tennis while Mayu was in the balcony looking at the beach "So pretty.." she murmured then turned to look at the taller girl who seems totally focused on playing and so she sighed

"Ha! Take that I am Kashiwagi Yuki!" The tall girl says winning and smiling

"Hey Yukirin let's go to the beach!" Mayu says as she walks closer to her girlfriend
Yuki was bitting her lips "No way!" she says still focusing on the tv

Mayu pouted and disconnected everything

"What the f..." Yuki turns to look at Mayu who seems pissed

"Hey Yukirin let's go to the beach!" Mayu says in a Nezumi way

"Why am i feeling nervous?" Yuki asked to herself then smiled nervously and threw the control away (on the bed)  "hahhahaa what? *Nezumi stare* ok let's catch a cold together!" she says still smiling nervously

The two girls walked to the beach which was close from the hotel,After a few minutes..

"Mayu chan I am already tired for walking!" Yuki says complaining and sits on the sand

Mayu sighed "You would not be so tired if you would not spend 24/7 playing games"Mayu says as she sits next to Yuki  (and forgetting about me= Inner Mayu says mad)

"What? i cannot let it win!" Yuki says looking at the shorter girl

Mayu sighed again "Stupid Kashiwagi" she thought helpless pouting

Suddenly Yuki grabbed her hand and looked at their hands "Mayu chan it's so pretty like a doll" she says with a smile as she plays with their fingers

Mayu was red then looked at the taller girl with a sweet look "Maybe she is not that idiot" the CG thought stunned of how pretty Yuki looked playing with her fingers

"I do not wanna be here with nobody else and i do not care if you snore!" Yuki says smirking breaking the romantic vibe

"What? you idiot!" Mayu says embarrased

Yuki was smirking "it's kinda cute though!" she says as she pulls out her phone from her pocket

"What? i do not snore!" Mayu says like a kid

"that is why i fully and truly embrace and cherish the technology,clears every doubt!" Yuki says as she shows Mayu a video

~Video~

"Here Kashiwagi Yuki reporting from this hotel room, this is another night i cannot sleep because of this!" Yuki moves the camera which shows Mayu sleeping and snoring

"Yeah my Mayuyu is sleeping and... snoring well i do not mind she looks cute right?" Yuki asks smirking

"I guess i can stay up looking at her while she sleeps or i can *Shows the playstation 3*  na.. let's play!" Yuki says smirking

~After the video~

Mayu tried to snatch the phone but Yuki was faster

"Erase that Yuki is embarrassing!" Mayu says complaining and red as she tries to take the phone by climbing on top of the taller girl

"What? it's my phone, you can tell me what to do!" Yuki says still  avoiding Mayu's hands

Once they noticed their position,both blushed and forgot about the phone

Mayu slowly leaned not breaking their eye contact and kissed the taller girl who did nothing to stop the CG

The two girls were kissing pPosteriorionately but slowly, enjoying every second of it.

Yuki's hand took life as it own and started rubbing Mayu's thigh up and down without breaking their pPosteriorionate kiss

Soon the lack of air affected them and slowly retreat the younger girl off her

"Mayuyu.." Yuki says in a whisper as she stares the younger girl who was only looking down and touching her lips with her fingers

"What's the point? tell me what's the point..." The CG says then turns to look at the taller girl with a loose look

"About what?" Yuki asked confused and feeling the tense vibe

"About loving you if i cannot touch you or kiss you!" Mayu answered before get up and walk away to the hotel

Yuki looked how the younger girl walks mad back to the hotel, once she was out of sight she got up and and looked at the stars "I guess i love you more than that!" she whispered

~At the hotel room~

Mayu slammed the door then leaned against it and wipe away her tears with her hands "Stupid Yuki.." she murmured

Suddenly a she feels pain on her chest, she puts her hand on her heart "What the hell?" she whispered after a second the pain was gone

Mayu sat on bed and opened the drawer next to her,she found the pictures they took the first time Yuki and her go out together and also the first time Yuki kissed her

Mayu remembered "That was bold" she thought then noticed how much Yuki had change for her

"she is not Black anymore or rude or mean.."Mayu whispered looking at the ceiling then smiled and putted the pictures on her chest, eventually she fell sleep

When Yuki got back she was already sleeping so she put a blanket on the younger girl then laid next to her on bed,Yuki took her time and watched carefully every feature of the CG's face "I'll always be next to you.." she whispered before kiss her gently on her cheek

Yuki got back to her spot and took a deep breath still staring at the CG

~Meanwhile in Japan~

Matsui Jurina woke up with an awful headache normally called "hangover" she walked downstairs and noticed her older sister standing there with a bag

"Matsui san the car will be ready in a few minutes, Matsui san your breakfast is ready!" The butler says as he turns to look at Jurina

Jurina gave final step "Where are you going?" she asked coly

The butler excused himself and went to the kitchen

"Going back to school!" Rena says looking down

"What? is still holidays.." Jurina says looking at her sister

"I rather go to school before looking at you being someone you are not!" Rena replies

"Oh now i see.." Jurina says then smirks and grabs Rena by her arm

Rena was forcing with Jurina

"I forgot about Gekikara.. maybe you have someone else to kill!" Jurina says still forcing with Rena

Rena got mad cause that comment that without thinking she slapped her younger adoptive sister/ fully and truly embrace and cherishr

Jurina looked at Rena with hate on her eyes

Rena looked other way (She had seen those eyes before.. in the eyes of the people she hurt before as Gekikara)

Rena stepped back "I am sorry" she said then looked other way

"do not you ever touch me again!" Jurina shouted then run upstairs not looking back

Rena looked at the palm of her hand

The butler came "Matsui san the car is waiting!" he says as he takes Rena's back and walked with her outside

"It's raining..." Rena murmured sad and for a moment a memory crossed her mind

~Flashback~

(At school a few years ago)

In the clPosteriorroom

"Kashiwagi Yuki.." The teacher says as he looks around

Rena and Sae also looked around

"she is not here.." Another student says

"Kazama Minami.." The teacher says continuing

"Why she is not here? " Rena thought

Rena spent the morning absent thinking about her friend, when it was lunch time,she fast got up and went to look for her

Rena looked in her room then the bathroom, the recreation area but it was useless she was not there

Rena sighs

"i cannot go to play outside!" A girl says pouting

"God, the weather is awful just rain and rain!" A girl says talking to her friend as they pPosteriores next to Rena in the hall

"Maybe.." Rena murmured then walked to the racing track, the more she walks the more her clothes get soaked by the rain

Rena looked around and there was not anyone there, Rena disappointed sits on the bleacher

"I am a super bad friend.." She thought looking down then covered her eyes with her hands and sighed

Suddenly she notice that there was not raindrops falling on her anymore, she removed her hands

"Yuki chan!" Rena says shocked as she watches her friend holding the umbrella on her

"What are you doing here?? is freezing out here!" Yuki says a little irritated and getting her pjs soaked

"Ehh!" Rena gets up "i was looking for you!" she replies

Yuki was shivering "Wh..why?" she asked

"Are you okay?" Rena asked

"I caught a cold and i stole this umbrella!" Yuki replies still shivering

"What?!?! a cold! let's go!" Rena says as she takes Yuki's hand and takes her to her room

~Inside the room~

"What were you thinking? you caught a cold and you were outside in this awful weather!" Rena says walking in circles like a mad mom

Yuki smirks "What? i just followed you..the question is what were you doing?" she asked as she dries herself with a towel

"Following me?" Rena repeated

"I saw you walking outside so i stole an umbrella because you could catch a cold!" Yuki says with a smile

Rena could feel her cheeks getting red"You went outside for me.." she murmured

"do not put it that way, if you get sick who's going to help me with my homework!" Yuki says blushing looking other way as she sits on bed

Rena gets closer with another towel and helps Yuki to dry her hair..

Both girls smiled at each other

~End of the flashback~

"Matsui san your clothes are getting soaked!" The butler says waking up Rena from her thoughts

Rena smiled "It's okay!" she says before going inside the car

<Jurina was looking through her window as Rena leaves>

TO BE CONTINUED!!
Okay do not hate me for the second season, this is entertainment.. so that is what I am doing, do not hate my characters for their development and Enjoy the drama! :)
« Last Edit: April 01, 2013, 08:02:19 PM by cmze »

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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.23(2)
« Reply #231 on: April 01, 2013, 08:44:06 AM »
I'm worried about them :(
thanks for your update :D

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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.23(2)
« Reply #232 on: April 01, 2013, 09:46:43 AM »
Mayu...

Yuki...

Rena...

Jurina...

The storm coming...

The drama...LOL. I could say,this season 2...mayuki and wmatsui quarel,a big one!
Really excited! Maybe i gonna be crying out loud all the season LOL


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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.23(2)
« Reply #233 on: April 01, 2013, 10:41:36 AM »
I really still feel sorry for Rena.... even after all these time she still remember Yuki....

Her love for Yuki is no longer able to be appreciated... it liked a burden that Rena needs to carry

And Jurina still hates Rena... and unable to forgive her...

I really feel it was unfair that Yuki and Mayu able to have a happy life where as Rena just have a bad memories and guiltiness to live for....

What's going to happen next

I can't wait to find out

Thank you for the lovely update

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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.23(2)
« Reply #234 on: April 01, 2013, 12:15:39 PM »
awww mayuki so sweet :cathappy: :deco:
haha mayuyu snores, and yuki just casually video's it lol :lol:
jurina please forgive rena already :cry:
thanx for the update :cow: :bow:
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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.23(2)
« Reply #235 on: April 01, 2013, 09:04:23 PM »
WTH? is something going on with Jhip?
I never use the word embrace or cherish in the same sentence..
Why thjs chapter is kinda modified with words i don't know, sonebody can tell me what's going on?
i tried modified the chapter but it din't work  :?

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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.23(2)
« Reply #236 on: April 01, 2013, 09:28:53 PM »
yeah mine too, i thought it almost appear in the fic or reply which used word "l o v e" or something like that, and my prediction is correct, i preview my comment and then the word embrace or cherish will come. so that is why i give a space in those word.  :nervous
and to comment your fic, thanks for the update, i've been waiting for it  :heart:
please dont forget to update just a little lie, i really like that fic a lot~  :heart:

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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.23(2)
« Reply #237 on: April 01, 2013, 10:03:38 PM »
I think it is because it is 1st April!!

But because of that we don't understand some part XD

Mayu and Yuki are so sweet! But Mayu's heart hurt her :smhid Don't die!!!

Poor Rena!! She was so in love with Yuki!!! :cry:
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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.23(2)
« Reply #238 on: April 01, 2013, 11:32:16 PM »
mayu she just want touch yukirin.  :lol:
like it   XD
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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.23(2)
« Reply #239 on: April 02, 2013, 08:34:05 AM »
Nhyoooo Yuki are sweet lol even recording a weird moment huahua

Poor Renaaa ;.; So ad tha Jurina won't forgive you so soon....

Thank you for the update o/

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