Time is good as gold - CH. 44(MaYuki) | 12/06/2021

[DC2805]

hoping the Wmatsui will be alright...haiz...

Yuki & Mayu are so loving... cool!

[gek geki]

MAYU 

SO IT START,YUKI COULD DO NOTHING,SHE JUST WAIT THE DAY WHEN SHE LOST MAYU 
YUKI SCARED LOSE MAYU I GUESS.

ABOUT RENA,HMM SHE STILL LOVE YUKI, SHE STILL DOESN'T LOOK JURINA AS SOMEONE SHE COULD LOVE,BUT HOPE SOMEDAY
LOVE WMATSUI 

THANK 

[cmze]

                                              ~Time is good as gold~
                                                             CH.24(3)

~On the plane flying back to school~

Mayu was sleeping with her head on Yuki's shoulder while Yuki was lost in her thoughts, she sighed just by the thought of why they been fighting lately..

"Even though were on paradise we manage to ruin it.." The taller girl thought then looked at the girl who was sleeping on her shoulder

~At school~

Matsui Rena was sitting on her desk checking facebook from her computer,she looked everyone's profile till she got bore  "there's nothing interesting here" she says with a sigh then looked a picture next to her (It was her,Yuki and Sae smiling)

Rena looked at the picture for a moment somehow she felt nostalgic but happy soon her hand got on the mouse scrolling up the search bar. Once there she thought it for a minute before writing "Kashi..."

Suddenly someone opened the door,Rena turned around

"Hello Rena chan!" Sae says with a smile as she enters

Rena gets up and hugs her friend "God i missed you!" she says as she hugs her friend

Sae also smiled as she hugs Rena then she noticed what was on Rena's screen "Yeah i can see that.." she says as her smile fades

~Meanwhile~

Walking the hall..

"Jurina chan i'm so glad you're back!" A girl says wiking at Jurina as she walks to her room

Jurina ignored her and kept walking

After a few minutes of walking without thinking she was in front of Rena's door

"Why did i walk here?" she wondered staring at the door then looked down and clenched her fists "I'm nobody's shadow!" she murmured hurt

Suddenly the door opens revealing a smiling Rena and Sae

"Jurina chan!" Rena says shocked 

Sae put her hand on Jurina's head "Hello Jurina chan!" she says with a smile

"Sae chan.." Rena says not knowing how Jurina might react looking at Sae

Jurina removed the hand off her harshly then just walked away

The two older girls looks as Jurina walks away "What's wrong with her?" the tomboy asked

Rena looked other way sad

~At the entrance of the school~

Yuki got down her and Mayu's suitcase from the taxi "Why did you have to visit your parents now? you bought many things in Hawai Mayuyu!" the tall girl says complaining as she grabs the suitacases and tries to walk inside the school building

Yuki walked inside the building with the two suitcases luckily for her Sae and Rena were about to walk outside so they crossed paths

"Yuki chan!" Rena says with a smile

"Girls!" Yuki says sweat and happy

Sae smirked "You look awful!" she says then helps her friend with one suitcase

"Holidays!" Yuki says pouting as she grabs the other suitcase

The three girls walked to Yuki's room

Once there, Yuki throwed herself on bed while Sae turned on the tv, Rena looked at her friend on bed

"Where's Mayu chan?" Rena asked

"She went to see her parents!" Yuki says as she sits and fans herself

"We should leave her rest!" Sae says looking at Rena who smiled

"yeah rest we'll see you later!" Rena says as she opens the door and Sae follows her with a smirk

The door closes

"Idiots, if you wanna date do it.. i don't care" Yuki says as she lays back and looks at the ceiling

~ At the hospital~

The doctor ended her examination on Mayu..

"I guess now i need to replace my heart as soon as possible right doc?" Mayu asked as she buttons her shirt with a smirk

"We still have time Watanabe san" the doctor says as she sits to watch new pictures of Mayu's heart

"Doc i have question!" Mayu says looking at the doctor who was really focused on her computer screen

"What is it?" She asked

"Can i have sex?" Mayu asked

The doctor looks at Mayu "You know it's dangerous.. you can't do that" she says a little irritated

"I can't do this! i can't do that! because everything is dangerous!" Mayu says a little mad

"What's wrong with you? look what we accomplished..you're here now!" The doctor says as she gets up shocked

"I'm tired, i wanna live!" Mayu says as her tears were about to come out

The doctor puts her hands on Mayu's shoulder's "I know it's hard but think it twice!" she says looking at Mayu in the eyes

Mayu breaks their eye contact "what do you know? you don't live in a crystal body!" she says as her tears rolls her cheeks

~ Meanwhile~

Sae and Rena were at the bleachers sitting watching some girls playing basketball

"Yuki chan seems different.." Rena says as she watches the girls play

Sae turns to look at Rena " Can i ask you something?" she asks not so sure

"What's wrong?" Rena ask also turning her attention to Sae

"Do you still love Yuki chan?" Sae asked

Rena blushed but then just shook her head and got serious "doesn't matter now She must hate me now, i hurt the one she love!" she says sad

"Why? why you're not able to get her out of your brain?" Sae asked mad as she gets down the leaves Rena alone in the bleachers

Rena was shocked

"Love is so unfair!" Sae thinks as she walks to the girls that were playing and ask them to let her play

Rena gets up and walks back to her room. As she gets closer to her room she sees Yuki standing there knocking the door

"Yuki chan!" Rena says happy

"Hey.." Yuki says calmly

Rena opens the door then invites her in, Yuki looked at the room "i almost forgot how was your room like.." Yuki says

Rena sits on bed then smiled "if you feel like forgetting you can pass by anytime!" she says blushing

Yuki smiled then run to the bed to jump on it

Rena laughed "You're crazy!" she says enjoying the moment

Yuki putted her head on Rena's lap "Like the old times" she murmured

"just like that.." Rena says with sweet look

Yuki smiled "Rena chan play with my like you used to.." she says grabbing Rena's hand

Rena blushes but then plays with Yuki's hair like she used to when they were younger

"How is been everything?" Rena asked as she keep playing with Yuki's hair

Yuki closed her eyes "complicated.." she murmured

Rena noticed Yuki was still tired so she didn't ask anything more

"I missed being spoiled..." Yuki says yawning then hugs Rena's lap

After a few minutes Yuki fell sleep on her lap, Rena noticed and slowly moved Yuki to put her comfortably on bed

"lay next to me.." Yuki says with her eyes closed

Rena did what she was told and lied next to her friend on bed

Suddenly Yuki's left arm got on Rena's waist and pulled her even closer to her

Rena looked at the door " i forgot to lock.." she thought (knowing that if she gets up to lock the door there's a possibility Yuki won't hug her again but if she don't someone can open the door and see them even Mayu herself!!) then she looked at Yuki sleeping face and smirked "It will be what it has to be.." she thought then closed her eyes

~ Meanwhile at the basketball court~

Sae was playing hard even thought it was sunny day and everyone didn't want to play anymore

"Sae chan we're already tired" The girls says complaining sitting on the floor

"You're so weak!" Sae says coldly

"If you keep playing like that you'll end up in a hospital!" One of the players says

Sae laughed "I never been i a hospital!" she says still laughing then she stopped laughing

~ 2 years ago before everything~

Everything was blurry

"Sae we're completely dissapointed, driving drunk and since when you drink and drive?" A voice asks mad

Sae looked around "What happened? where am i?" she asked

"You're in the hispital, you had accident cause driving drunk!" Sae's mom says mad

"Now i remember!" Sae says as she looks all the flowers on her room

"You father says you're grounded and forget about spending Christmas with us, look all the trouble you got me into!" Sae's mother says

Sae smiles awkwardly then gets up

"What Sae get back to bed!" Her mother says worried

Sae smiles "I'm okay!" she says searching for something between the flowers

Sae's mother phone rang so she got out to pick up

"Here's it is Rena chan's flowers!" Sae says smiling then remembers "Yuki was next to me inside the car.. i bet Rena bought me better flowers" she murmured then went to search for Yuki's room

(Sae's mother didn't noticed cause she was talking with her lover)

Sae found Yuki's room and slowly opened the door "i know that skinny body.." she thought looking at the scene

Yuki was on bed unconscious while other girl was giving her a kiss on the lips

Sae was totally shocked "Rena chan.." she whispered as a tear rolls her cheek

[ The flowers Rena bought for Sae certainly were very expensive but the one she brought for Yuki were white carnations which Rena thinks must be given to a special somebody]

TO BE CONTINUED!!! COMMENT COMMENT i became such a Yuki x Rena shipper haven't i? well don't hate me!!

[cisda83]

Ah... Jurina is still angry...

Poor Rena... so sad

AH... so Sae was such a bad and naughty girl... getting into trouble and accident

Can't wait to find the next

Thank you for the update

 

[ashiya]

I just dont understand

Jurina's still mad about Rena? And Sae knew something about her???
lol Mayu's question, but she loves Yuki, Yuki loves Mayu or Rena?
And Rena loves Yuki, and Jurina?

...

[momondmozide]

WOOHOOW NICE UPDATE!!! CANT WAIT TO SEE WHAT WILL HAPPENING NEXT.

BTW, CMZE SAN DONT FORGET TO UPDATE "LOVING YOU" I LOVE THAT FIC EITHER.

[kurogumi]

Ah i loved it!

Finally SAE story,aww after read this chapter i realized those 3 have a sad past,sad moment,but fortunately they're best friend!
I believe,no matters what happend they will care for each other,protect each other.
Its not shocking me if they love each other,its normal.
i mean rena love yuki,yuki love rena too before she meet mayu,and sae love rena
But look at the present,they still friends! Even they hurting each other LOL what amazing story cmze-san

And about mayu,LOL why you ask the doctor about sex mayu?LOL you know the answer,even yuki know that! That why she reject you


As for jurina,jurina fighting!
Someday rena will set her eyes on you LOL


Thank for the update cmze-san

[Shinoki]

note to self, try to keep track of fanfiction
I started this one on april 1st, april fools day
and now I forgot what happened.....
poor mayuyu.... worries

[kahem]

OMG when Mayuyu asked the doctor her question, I was like "what?! did she just say what I think she said?!" lol

[Rena-chan Daisuki]

Somehow after i'm reading this chapter i kinda know what will happen
that 'cause their future when Mayu already lying in the bed of hospital

as always nice update

[gek geki]

SAE-- -->RENA<-- -->YUKI<-- -->MAYU

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                      JURINA


GAHHHHH!!!! YUKI IS LUCKY PERSON!!

NO MAYU!! 



WONDERING IF MAYU BEING HOSPITALISED CAUSE OF YUKI TE-HE

[Sherin]

Not a new reader but my first comment here.

It's been a while since I read this fic and I have no idea what's going on. The most complicated OTP case is definitely WMatsui and that is the only reason I read this fic. (*point to self* a loyal WMatsui shipper).

I knew how Jurina forgave Rena during the beach scence with everyone which was a total letdown seeing how this is a serious fight and yet all they did was hug and everything solved. Not heart warming at all. = ='

I still don't get the Black Queen's motive and the fact that Rena just back to normal like that. Aren't she supposed to have some mental problem?

You put in a lot of complicated stuff in the story but you don't fully solve them  and answer them all out.

And to be honest, Yukirin is the character I don't get the most. It's normal for a character to be cold and then kind, but this cold and kind Yukirin is totally off. =\

Well with all that said, I'm still gonna wait for the next chapter and enjoy WMatsui's argument. I love it when Jurina is mad with Rena.

Hopefully you'll give WMatsui more credit by talking about their past (about the adoption and such) and the fact that sth has to be done about Rena's Gekikara self. Put Jurina for the job for that. (>.<)/

PS: Sorry for the sudden critic, but I'm one of those lurker who won't review unless I really like the story and i usually go direct to the author. Even though this is a Mayuki fic, I still enjoy WMatsui small part.

[cmze]

Hi Sherin.. i don't usually reply i'm a lazy person

You really caught me..i'm such a bad writer sorry 

1)I'm not WMatsui biggest shipper as you noticed, Jurina was added to be with Rena in the end and during the fic "They would have a little space for their romance" that's what i thought when i imagined the whole fic. Now new ideas came so i thought the scond season would be like "Memories" to glue everything the little space and details i didn't fill because "i'm idiot!" 

There will be plenty of WMatsui's past but you'll have to wait because i still don't know how to put that.. like i said new ideas came and change many things!! 

2)The Black Queens= These days people are crazy, didn't you see what happened in Boston? some people have twisted minds "They don't need a motive, they just did it!!" so it's almost the same with the Black Queens except they say "They do it to protect the school honor" to hide their cruel intentions because it's fun for them feeling powerful.

3) It's part of the mystery if u mean Rena's chapter! xD if it's not because of that "It's because i forgot and i should reread my fic!" 

4) Yuki's character is weird= she's a lonely child pretending to be someone cold and mean because she's scare that someone might hurt her, which is normal because her family is dysfunctional..

5) About Rena= Rena created Gekikara as a defense mechanism for the circumstances she was in as part of the Black Queen!!
but she still manage to stay in control and not loose all herself in it [It's like in that moment she stood Grey… not white or Black but Gray]

6) Don't worry like i said the second season is to fill the blanks!! SORRY FOR MY ENGLISH I REALLY SUCK ON IT!! 

Thanks for reading!!

[Sherin]

Lol, don't worry I'm a lazy reader myself.

1) I always like the whole past and future flashback idea, but it's just you don't describe it properly. But it's hard cuz even the best author out there have a hard time with flashbacks that's why they tend to minimize them as few as possible.

2) But this is not really bullying anymore...the school should have done sth about this. But it's probably just me taking things too seriously sometimes when it comes to fics. = =' And I thought Boston is becuz of terrorist. That's a different story though. ^^'

3/5) I totally understand Rena's history. Hence mental disorder. It's not like Gekikara just disappeared from thin air like that. Seriously she could kill someone even in grey zone.

4) I understand what character you're trying to make Yukirin into. A bad horrible person with kind-heart. But seriously, you should read your own fic since the first chapter till now. Again I'm just too serious when it comes to fics. Don't mind me. = ='

6) No worry, I'm not an English native speaker myself and it doesn't mean a native speaker always write good fics. And good luck.

PS: I'm looking forward to the WMatsui part. ^^ I don't ship anything beside WMatsui and JuriMayu but I still like Mayuki.

[BbSis]

Before I made my comment about the update....

I couldn't help but read your answer cmze, about the questions sherin did. And well, it's just a suggestion (and sorry for the intrusion ^^" ), but since you are kind of lazy to read your fic (you said so), why don't you take notes of the main happenings of the fic (and for each fic you have). For exemple:
- mayu have a heart desease and have short lifetime.
- yuki havebad temper, and only is sweet with friends and mayu.
...
- rena was geki, she regreted, but jurina is mad at her

(I picked the obvious things to make exemples) It don't need to be long. Key words works pretty well(at least with me). Write your ideas for future chapters like this help a lot too. Like that, you don't exactly need to reread your writing from time to time (unless you want). And with only a fast look you won't get lost.


NOW the comment for the update!

What a polygon love!!! There are new feelings, but the old feelings are still there.

Jurina and Rena was kind of acting a bit 'fake' incestuous in the beginning. We can see Jurina acting tough with Rena about the Geki thing, but it's obvious she still loves her. But what about Rena?

Mayuuuu how ugly, lying to your girlfriend again! Asking about sex? I see... Mayukiwill have their night and mayu will end up in the hospital...

I'm curious to see if someone will catch Rena and Yuki huahauhauha

Thank you for the update o/

[cmze]

 

1) My english is terrible.. what do you expect? 

2) Which Dean care about something like that "Usually they make themselves blind to that kind of thing to not look bad" since is a rich people school.. and yet we don't know if they were terrorist, i mean the guy has a sick throat so i'll put another example "what about the guy who killed many persons at the cinema in Colorado or all the twisted people we heard about while we were growing on the news

3) Well she's trying hard to forget her time like that since Yuki and Sae don't pay attention to it or ask about she feels beter..

4) Don't know how to answer on that.. i like that character but i have the little feeling you'll dislike it more in this season!

6) Go easy on me! 

BbSis:

Thanks for the advice

Yeah there's gonna be a really hard geometric figure, i don't know which one because geometric is not my thing!! 

SAE-- -->RENA<-- -->YUKI<-- -->MAYU

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                      JURINA

[Sherin]

1. No it's not. I've been reading your fics for a long while and you've improve alot. Especially the spacing and the way you write characters' dialogues is much easier to read now.

2.Ok this is out of topic so let stop it there.

3/4. It's just you need to prepare the characters' personalities and background more properly.

6. I am. You would see me on your tail all the time if I'm not. Ask Sayuki, Cheesy, Javs and such...well mostly WMatsui author. Now I'm not saying I'm a good writer or anything as I've stopped writing fics since long ago, but I just want to see authors and fics that I'm reading improve more. I guess that's kinda selfish of me.

[cmze]

Apreacite that! 

I'll work harder!!

[Chanaline]

I want to know the next!!!

[m00nchild]

Nice update.

So Rena have change,
and Juri wanted to forgive Rena but still can't accept the fact,
Mayu wanted to have sex but too dangerous will she don't care about the doctor advice?
Sae still love Rena and can't let down the feeling.
This love triangle is so complicated.

Looking forward for the next update.