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Great comment for rochilu,i was thinking about that too bu nooò!! I dont want yuki or mayu die

But how about this,since i love rena too so how about jurina giving her heart?at least she trying to do that but ja ja jang! Rena againt that idea! What so dramatic! LOL
Jurina want mayu and yuki happy thats why

LOL i cross the boundary.dot worry that just my wild imagination LOL
I imagine that because rena need to know how jurina mean a lot for her LOL


Sorry for my weird comment cmze-san and thank for the update.i cant helped but comment again after read all reader comment LOL
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Okay we need to talk.. not i'm kidding :shakeit: but i read the commments and realized that u guys FORGOT THIS IS A SAD FANFIC and i wanna play with your feelings!!!  :nervous  :shakeit:

Elo: Thay's normal hahahha but haven't you noticed what Yuki meant "She misses the old times when everything wasn't complicated" As an author i would say "She wants some peaceful time.. and maybe Rena?!"  :nervous

X_Last-Cross_X: In the season one as could see Jurina is the type of person who like justice, she always thought that the Black were the worst in the world and now she knows her dear,kind Rena was leader of it.. as an author i would says "she feels betrayed"

Sherin: Everything is in the past :rofl: and well like i said is a sad fanfic  :grin:

Chichay12: Thanks for the love  :wub: i hope i can update soon since like i said i have many things to resolve but the truth the comments makes me happy and makes me wanna update so soon! :)

Mo-chan: You better hold on tight.. WELCOME TO THE ROLLERCOASTER OF EMOTIONS!!  :twisted:

mayuki_daisuki: The truth they (WMatsui) won't get together any time soon sorryb :oops:  thanks to all the things i have planned  :nervous but keep reading please!!  :bow:  btw IT WASN'T SAE!! :X

cisda83: Many things will happen and probably you would "CMZE SAN WHY DID YOU THAT??????" or you could ljke it!!  :grin:

ashiya: This a Mayuki fanfic with a lot of confusion!!  :shakeit: :grin:

 Rena-chan Daisuki: Don't be sad.. it's just a fic EVENTUALLY SHE'L HAVE HER HAPPY ENDING!!  :D

tfme3638: Well i think this one is a mature Mayu besides Yuki over protects her and makes her more aware about her illness!! since my pov :\ don't worry you'll have your moments of WMatsui :thumbup

rochilu: Why you brought that up? that's part of the second season since now will see how she takes her pills and have her beeper
she's in the waiting list!! :)

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 kurogumi: Thanks for the support, that  story was fun!!  :D




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Now I get It thanks and update soon
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Then i would like to enjoy this roller coster of emotion


And you're right this is your first sad fic,itr really weird if its dont have tearsful drama

Make the character suffers a lot,tears a lot LOL like akb documentary no flowers without rain,so yeah they need some rain LOL


Ooh i cant wait when mayu take a lot pills in front of yuki~



Every Tearsdrop is Waterfall
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GÀAA~AAAH!!!
YES YES NEEDED SAD DRAMA!!
EVEN IT WOULD HURTFUL WHEN I READ SAD STORY,BUT IT MUST!

MAYUKI AND WMATSUI NEED SAD DRAMA
ITS ALREADY SAD FROM CHAPTER 1

I NOTICE,MAYU HEART ATTACK ALWAYS HAPPEN WHEN SHE MAD AT YUKI

FIRST TIME ITS WHEN SHE MAD BECAUSE YUKI SNACTH HER PAPER

SECOND,WHEN SHE MAD AT HAWAII CAUSE YUKI WONT TOUCH HER

THIRD? I DONT KNOW BUT LOOKS LIKE IT GONNA BE HAPPEN SOON,MAYBE YUKI AND RENA PHOTO INCIDENT WOULD MAKE HER GET THE ATTACK AGAIN,AND MAYBE THIS TIME SHE CANT HIDDEN IT FROM YUKI
4...5...6...7...it would happen anytime any moment

WMATSUI:
I WANT RENA WHO CONFESS HER FEELING TOWARD JURINA!

LOVE YOUR FANFIC ARIGATOU,THANK YOU

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Well can't wait to see how you are going to develop the story...

The story is very colorful... in term of feelings

Making me feel anger, sad, happy, etc... while reading it...

I can't wait to feel something again... for the next chapter...

Thank you for the great colorful story...

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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.26 (5)
« Reply #286 on: May 12, 2013, 02:22:04 AM »
                                             ~Time is good as gold~
                                                        CH.26(5)

After the picture incident, the hours passed fast in the classroom except for the fact that the girls were tense, Yuki won't look or talk to Rena while Mayu completely ignores Yuki and Sae looks at Rena a "hopeless look"

"Well that's it class.. see you tomorrow!" The sensei says as the bell ring.

Everyone got up Yuki followed Mayu to their dorm..

~Once inside~

Mayu grabbed her laptop and laid on bed with her headphones, Yuki sighed as she puts her bag on the floor then sits on the edge of the bed to talk to Mayu.

Mayu ignores and keeps listening to music.

"Mayuyu.." Yuki called several times moving softly Mayu's leg but got no answer from the shorter girl.

Yuki scratched her head then got up "WHY YOU WANNA FIGHT FOR SOMETHING THAT LITTLE?!?" she shouted mad and hysterical.

"Do you like her?" Mayu asked removing her headphones.

Somehow Yuki calmed and turned to look at Mayu kinda shocked for her question "What?!" she still had that expression on her face.

"Do you still love her?" Mayu asked as Nezumi [ Cold eyes and cold expressions]

Somehow this part of Mayu really transmits coldness, Yuki looked down "How can you ask something like that after everything i've done?!?!" she asked furious then looked at her.

"I had to make sure since you seem comfortable sleeping with her" Mayu coldly replied.

"She's my friend!!" Yuki replied trying to control her anger.

"I don't sleep hugging my friends" Mayu says coldly and calmed

"It's different!!" Yuki replies irritated by that question.

"Great you can sleep with Rena but i can't sleep with anybody else because it's different!" Mayu says mocking

"Yes, she's more than a friend but i don't love her!" Yuki says serious.

"Are you listening to yourself? you're trying hard to not make excuses!" Mayu says looking other way.

Yuki pouts "I can't talk to you like this!" she says then walked away and slammed the door while Mayu gets up and follows her without Yuki notice.

~ Meanwhile ~

Jurina was at the bleachers looking the page where's Yuki's and Rena's picture sleeping together..

"Love is a bitch!" Sae says as she sits next her.

Jurina pouted "Who told you sit with me?" she asked irritated looking at Sae.

Sae smiles and puts her arm around Jurina's neck "C'mon Jurina chan, we share the same pain!" she says still with a smile.

"Ahhhh let me go, who said you can put your arm around my neck?" Jurina asked trying to break free.

Suddenly the vibe changed..

"Why we choose the bad ones all the time?" Sae asked looking down.

Jurina stopped resisting and also asked herself the same question "I guess you can stay with me a little!" she says looking other way.

Sae smiles "I knew you were a good kid!" she says still with her arm still around Jurina's neck.

"If your face gets an icher closer to my face, I'm gonna hit you so bad!" Jurina says irritated by her company

~ Meanwhile~

Rena had a good time at the library but some girls gossiping about what happned this morning ruined it so she rather take the book and go to her room to read peacefully.

On her way to her room she sees Yuki walking to her, Rena smiled "Yu..." she passed next to her and ignored her.

Rena turned around to see Yuki walking away not even looking back "Yuki chan" she murmured sad, once she was out of sight suddenly someone appeared.

"Can we talk in private?" A voice asked.

Rena turned around to face the other person "Mayu" she whispered kinda shocked.

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On her way to nowhere..

"How can she think like that? Is she an idiot? Everything i've done for her, why she would think that i love Rena?" Yuki sighed and sat on the grass.

"This is complicated!" Yuki says then lays her back on the grass and looks at the sky "i never think about those feelings.." she whispered still looking at the clouds hypnotized.
 
         {LIKE THE OLD TIMES: HOW THE PLAYING WITH HAIR STARTED}
                                                  Yuki's backstory

[When Rena and Yuki were 14]  "At the Kashiwagi Mansion"

"Good afternoon Kashiwagi san" The butler says.

Yuki looked around "My parents are not home right?" she asked.

"They left a few minutes ago, if i not mistaken they went to England for the weekend!" The butler answers

"Nice!" Yuki says as she pulls Rena and Sae with her to her room.

~In Yuki's room~

"Finally you invited us to your home!" Sae says smirking and laying on her bed

"Well like you heard my parents left for the weekend.." Yuki replies coldly as she turns on the tv.

Rena was looking closely Yuki's things then looked a picture on Yuki's desk of her with a guy "Is... he... your..boyfriend?" she asked shyly as she grabs the picture.

Yuki got closer and snatched the picture "Who told you to grab this?" she asked mad.

Rena was shocked and soon apoligized.

"C'mon Yuki don't be so cruel, it's just an old picture!" Sae says as she gets up and taps Yuki's back.

Yuki looked down "I'm sorry Rena chan!" she says serious.

Rena looked at her with a sweet look "It's okay!" she replies with a smile.

[They spend the night playing around like a pijama party and the three girls slept in the same bed because it was a really big bed]

~ In the middle of the night~

"save him!" Yuki shouted and woke up all sweat, she looked at her friends who were still sleeping then decided to get up and went to the kitchen for a glass of water.

Rena also woke up and noticed Yuki was gone so she decide to go downstairs to look for her, it didn't take long cause she found her sitting in the stairs..

"Yuki chan are you okay?" Rena says and fast go to her.

Yuki wiped her tears "I'm fine.." she replies with more tears on the corner of her eyes then got up ready to get back to bed but Rena grabbed her by her wrist.

"We're friends, you can talk to me!" Rena says looking down.

Yuki stood there for a second [not knowing what to do or say] while Rena waited for the worst like (she would get mad)

Suddenly Yuki wrapped her arms around Rena who was shocked and blushing "He took the wrong choice! I'm the wrong choice!" she says crying on Rena's shoulder.

"Yuki chan.." Rena murmured and hugged Yuki tighter.

After a few minutes Yuki calmed and both sat on the stairs.

"I'm sorry i had a nightmare..i don't wanna sleep but i'm sleepy" Yuki said looking sad 

Rena smiled "You can stay here, i won't let you have that nightmare again!" she says tapping her lap

Yuki put her head on Rena's lap "Thank you.." she says with a little smile forming her sleeps

Runs blushed but then smiled and automatically her fingers started to play with Yuki's hair..

"Rena i'm sorry about your mother.." Yuki says sad.

Rena a little smiles "It's okay...i'm sorry about your brother!"

Yuki looked at Rena "How did you know?" she asked.

"your eyes..." Rena replies as she keeps playing with Yuki's hair.

"Do i look like him that much?that's why my parents hate me because i remind them about him but i'm not like him!" Yuki says as tears comes out then gets up.

"What? no, i don't think your parents hate you!" Rena says as she gets up also.

"You don't know my parents.. " Yuki replied wiping her tears.

"Yuki chan!" Rena says sad

"They wanted me to die instead of him,they always tell me how perfect he was and how i'm not that's why they act like i don't exist!" Yuki says full of hate as she wipes her tears.

Rena hugs Yuki "I will always be by your side no matter what!" Rena whispers.

Yuki was shocked first but then also hugged Rena..

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(At Rena's room)

"Stay away from Yuki!" Mayu says serious

Rena looked at her then sighed "We're friends!" she says as she puts the books on her desk.

"She loves me!" Mayu says looking at Rena.

"Then what are you doing here?" Rena asked

"Look whatever feeling you felt before holidays, it's just a nostalgic feeling nothing else!" Mayu says before leaving.

"Is way more than that!" Rena whispered then grabbed one book and started reading on bed but realized she couldn't focus so she took some shorts and a shirt and went to run at the racing track.

~ After some hours already night time~ At MaYuki's room

Yuki entered to the room and saw Mayu reading a manga on bed already on her pjs (White t-shirt and shorts)

Mayu puts the manga aside and gets up to welcome her girlfriend with a kiss.

Yuki looked at Mayu incredulous "What happened? weren't you mad?" she asked confused.

"Well i remembered that since Hawai you haven't kissed me properly!" Mayu says playing with Yuki's shirt.

Yuki smiles "Well it's been like i don't know many hours since we haven't kiss!" she says and steals a peck from Mayu

Mayu smiles then puts her arms around Yuki's neck and kisses her.

"I missed you!" Yuki says between bold kisses and hands roaming Mayu's body.

Mayu put one of her hands on Yuki's waist to pull her to bed but Yuki noticed that and stopped their kiss.

"What are you doing?" Yuki asked confused

Mayu looked into Yuki's eyes "don't you love me?" she asked as she gets on bed.

"Mayuyu..we talked about this before!" Yuki says holding back her hair with her right hand.

"I bet if i was Rena you wouldn't think it that much!" Mayu says looking other way

Yuki turned around biting her lips mad then took off her tie and threw it.

"There's nothing happening between me and Rena!" Yuki says before leaving and slamming the door for second time this day.

Yuki walked around the school still mad cause Mayu's words, she thought it will be better walking around the campus since it calms her.

Yuki walks the campus looking for a good place to think but she couldn't help cross way with Rena who was going back to her dorm.

Yuki passes next to her and ignored her for second time.

Rena turns "Yuki chan!" she calls.

Yuki stops walking but still Rena was facing her back "What's going on? why you're ignoring me?" she asked

Yuki turns around mad and takes Rena by her arm "You still ask it, How could you do this to me? i thought you were the same kind Rena but i was wrong, you only want revenge and want to destroy Mayu and Me.. YOU'RE GEKIKARA YOU'RE NEVER GOING TO CHANGE!" she shouted then let go her arm and walks away mad

[Note: Nobody was around]

Those words hurt Rena in the deepest part of her heart and tears wanted to show but she was still froze, Yuki looked at her with hate on her eyes while saying those words..

As Yuki walks her mind and heart thinks she was too cruel and that she should get back and apologize, every steps she gives the more bad she feels, soon her bar breaks and turns around  to get back.

Rena looked at Yuki coming back to her so she walked to her also..

The two stood looking at eachother for a moment before Yuki hug Rena tight "Forgive me.. Forgive me!" Yuki says to the crying Rena.

Rena hugged Yuki tight also as if the world was about to end.

Yuki wiped Rena's tears with her fingers before connect their foreheads both had their eyes closed as Rena's tears rolls her cheeks.

[ If other person see them could say it's a couple giving love to eachother!]

Mayu had few minutes looking for Yuki and now she found her, she can't believe what she's seeing her heart aches..

"Yukirin..." she manage to whisper as she puts her right hand on her chest because she feels she can't breathe and someone is stabbing her heart.

Without the two notice she walked away to the school even thought it was hard because her body wasn't responding well.

Once in her room she took her pills and laid on bed looking at the ceilling feeling like her heart is coming out of her chest..

TO BE CONTINUED!! COMMENT COMMENT!!  :shakeit:

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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.26 (5)
« Reply #287 on: May 12, 2013, 02:54:43 AM »
Mayu is so jealous...Jurina and Sae are so sad... about a picture of Rena and Yuki sleeping beside each other?

Yuki might still like Rena... but love even but not in love with her.... Rena was her 1st love...

You can forget all your other lovers but you can never forget your 1st love, 1st kiss and 1st time, etc...

Whether they are good or bad... You always remember them...

Ah.. Yuki what the heck... how could Yuki blame Rena for the photo when she wasn't the one that taking it right?

Rena and Yuki have bond over the death of their loves one.... they are similar in someway... They have been each other stone then....

Ah... Mayu is trying to kill herself over what? Misunderstanding...?

Honestly... both Mayu and Yuki need to start having proper communication... They both were a bit closed off and unable to open up to each other....

Same with Jurina.. she should just stop hurting Rena.... she did not want to be Geki... she was pushed to do it... if not Jurina was going to be hurt...

When Yuki was not there... Jurina is her everything... even when Yuki was there... Rena would still think Jurina is important....

What's going to happen next to Mayuki and WMatsui?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.26 (5)
« Reply #288 on: May 12, 2013, 02:59:53 AM »
fast update......
Rena-chan!!!
Jurina barely shows up....
Mayuyu can still be Nezumi despite her problems...
Misunderstandings... smashed head into wall....
Personally, I find Yuki and Rena like sisters, not lovers......
I don't hate people for their writing, so don't worry~

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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.26 (5)
« Reply #289 on: May 12, 2013, 03:03:17 AM »
ITS FULL OF MISSUNDERSTOOD!!!
MAYU SHOULD KNOW THAT YUKI AND RENA ARE BEST FRIEND
THEY REALLY CLOSE!

MAYU AND YUKI THEY ARE FIGHT! FIGHT! AND FIGHT!
HOPE THEY FINE AGAIN
BUT APOLOGIZE NOW ITS NOT WORKING
ON THIS SITUATION,I REALLY WANT TO KNOW WHAT MAYU FOR YUKI?
I MEAN WHAT THE DIFFERENT BETWEEN RENA AND MAYU FOR YUKÌ?

YUKI ONCE SAID THAT MAYU IS HER EVERYTHING,THE QUESTION IS WHY?
THEY KNOW EACH OTHER NOT SO LONG LIKE RENA DO,SO WHY MAYU MEAN A LOT FOR YUKI THAN RENA?


MAYU NEED TO KNOW THE ANSWER,SINCE FOR MAYU,YUKI LOVING HER IS LIKE A DREAM COME TRUE,SHE JUST AN ILLNESS GIRL WHO WAITING HDR DEATH COMING...



THANK,I KNOW ITS SELFISH BUT I WANT THE NEYT UPDATE ALREADY,ITS BEAUTIFUL

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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.26 (5)
« Reply #290 on: May 12, 2013, 03:09:26 AM »
mayu, don't be too mad at yuki, she still loves you :cry:
i feel sorry for jurina and sae,  :( their so depressed cuz they both liked rena
awww rena chan, what yuki said was quite harsh, at least she said sorry now though :yep:
i don't like yuki's parents :smhid poor yuki has such a sad past :mon runcry:
mayu it's not what it looks like :shocked ahhh mayu is not feeling well again if her body isn't responding wel :panic:
thanx for the update :cow: :bow:
« Last Edit: May 12, 2013, 03:46:13 AM by mayuki_daisuki »
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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.26 (5)
« Reply #291 on: May 12, 2013, 05:29:51 AM »
fast and long update :)
im getting curious about what what will happen next :D


cant wait for the continuation :)  :twothumbs
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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.26 (5)
« Reply #292 on: May 12, 2013, 05:46:43 AM »
haha xD i don't know, maybe was because i read all at once (?
omg ! no no, Mayuyu TnT your poor little heart, gambatte! you need to talk with Yuki and all will be clear! also her doctor said that she CAN'T do it, god Mayu think!  >n< Yuki just want to protect you u.u
but i understand her, the situation that she saw was really compromising  and she could missunderstood it easily

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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.26 (5)
« Reply #293 on: May 12, 2013, 07:11:53 AM »
As a human,

its normal to missunderstood

Its normal to scared

Its normal to worried

Especially when its about someone you really love...someone you care...

In mayu case,her position its not secured

She have an illness,maybe she worried yuki would leave her someday...

She became posessive toward yuki...

Maybe in her eyes,rena is more suitable for yuki,she's smart,beauty,and more important she's healthy

Mayu easily get jealous,but maybe well just maybe,looking yuki with rena is the best thing.

Because if yuki still with mayu,it just make yuki hurt...


As for yuki case,

Yuki being over protective,she being frustrated and scared like hell to lose mayu's

She felt hopeless inside,she dont know what to do to keep mayu by herself forever,rena is her comfort here...

Of course maybe she's already think the solution,but that solution maybe wont make her and mayu together in the future,and she scared,she didn't want imagine mayu with someone else beside her,but dont want life without mayu too

Its frustrating...

Time is running out for both two,mayu heart became weak and weak...




Jurina and Sae?you two just wait and see LOL


And i see that except yuki and jurina,the other dont know about mayu condition...

Oh and if rena is yuki comfort here,then jurina is mayu's


Aah its really sad fic.just read this chapter make me hurt bx thinking LOL





Thank for the update cmze-san
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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.26 (5)
« Reply #294 on: May 12, 2013, 11:08:31 AM »
drama sad drama (T.T)/ 
It really hurts me seeing Mayu broke hearted (-_-)
so Rena Yuki's confort from the first
Yuki loved Rena and Mayu for the same reason because she was alone she needed someone *-*
Rena and Mayu's personality are very different I can say that they have an opposite personality
It is clear that Rena wanted Yuki cause now she know that Yuki loved her from the first and Rena too needs someone now cause Jurina won't talk to her and she is angry at her
so there is a hole on her heart
for Mayu I'm curious what is she going to do? getting jealous and angry again or admit the truth that she is getting Yuki mesirable and very sad and letting go Yuki being happy with her first love
Yuki is so complicated she doesn't take responsability of what she is doing she just doing what comforting her she is the weakest person's here
What I.understand now that Yuki wants both Rena and Mayu by her side because she can't choose
if she won't choose then she will hurt both of them
Yuki is selfish...

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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.26 (5)
« Reply #295 on: May 12, 2013, 12:01:39 PM »
Aw Mayu you and Yuki needs to have a talk :P

Jurina forgive Rena FOR FUAQ SAKE :scolding:
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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.26 (5)
« Reply #296 on: May 12, 2013, 04:37:35 PM »
Noooooooo! Why MAyu? Nooooooo!

I don't want to have something like this :cry:! Poor Mayu :(
Mayuki = Cutest couple



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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.26 (5)
« Reply #297 on: May 15, 2013, 04:32:19 AM »
NOOOOO!!!!!!  :frustrated:
WHY WHY WHY??!!!!
I WOULD GIVE MY HEART TO MAYU IF I COULD~~~  :mon waterworks: :mon waterworks:
BUT YUKI'S NOT AT FAULT ALSO...
 :cry: IS MAYU GOING TO DIE ALSO IN THE END? OR THERE WILL BE SOMEONE WHO DONOR A HEART TO HER?  :dunno:
AHH~ I WAS THINKING TOO FAR ALREADY~
THANKS FOR THE UPDATE CMZE-SAN!!  :gmon bang: LOVE YOUR STORY!  :twothumbs

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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.27 (6)
« Reply #298 on: May 19, 2013, 01:27:33 PM »
                                             ~Time is good as gold~
                                                        CH.27 (6)

(The next day) ~At Rena's room~

Kashiwagi Yuki slowly opened her eyes as she stretches, she looked around the room and noticed Rena sleeping next to her, Yuki held back her hair then got up quietly, she walked to the door but before open it she looked at Rena sleeping for a second then got back to her room.

(In her room)

Yuki stares Mayu while she sleeps, she got closer slowly sat on the edge of the bed "Can we stop fighting?" she wondered as she plays with Mayu's fingers helpless and remembering all the fights they had lately.

Mayu moved her hand away from whatever it was disturbing her fingers, Yuki looked down for a moment then got up and grabbed her other uniform and went to the bathroom to take a shower.

Yuki walks the empty hall "Is really early.." she murmured careless and keeps walking, once she arrived to her destiny she took off her clothes and got in one of the showers. She opened the faucet and relaxed with the water on her skin.

"Nothing better than this!" She thought relaxed.

[Noise of broken mirror]

Yuki opened her eyes then took her towel and got out from the shower, she walked slowly looking for the source of that noise till she step into something "Ouch!" she looked to her foot and she had a piece of glass inside, she removed it carefully as it bleeds then notice the mirrors were broken and there wasn't anyone around..

"DAMN IT!!" Yuki says mad.

After some minutes Yuki got back to her room jumping with one foot, Mayu was already up..

"What happened to you?" Mayu asked worried as she sees Yuki wearing just a towel and jumping in one feet.

Yuki sits on bed "Broken mirror!" she answered looking other way.

Mayu grabbed her first aid kid then kneels and takes Yuki's feet "Don't use alcohol!" the taller girl says.

"I won't!" Mayu says as she looking at her wound on her feet.

"OUCHHH TOLD YOU NO ALCOHOL!!!!!" Yuki shouted in pain.

Nezumi smirked then started putting bands.

"Cruel!" Yuki says before sighing in defeat.

"It's getting late, i should go get ready!" Mayu says before get up to grab her things.

"What? no! don't go to the bathroom!" Yuki says as she gets up and grabs Mayu by her arm.

"Why not?" Mayu asked coldly.

"It's dangerous!" Yuki says worried.

"I have to shower!" Mayu says with a bore face.

Yuki took a deep breath "i'll go with you!" she says resign and let go Mayu's arm

Mayu starts gathering her things..

~After 20 min~

The headmaster made everyone in the school gather in the auditorium..

Mayu and Yuki sat next to each other, Sae sat next to Jurina while Rena sat apart.

Yuki couldn't help to look at Rena many times, Mayu noticed that but still didn't want to make a scene now..

Sae was flirting with many girls and teaching Jurina while Rena steals glances at Yuki and Jurina once in a while, she doesn't really understand "Since whenJurina and Sae are friends they quite the opposite of each other?"

The headmaster was really mad " In 30 years of teaching I've never seen anything like this! really i'm going to get to last instance in this situation because I will not let this act of vandalism happen at this school! she says firmly.

Yuki also started looking at everyone's reactions but everyone was acting pretty normal.

"Poor woman she doesn't know anything that happens in her school!" Nezumi murmured.

Yuki looked at Mayu for a second "Is this my Mayuyu?" she thought.

The reunion ended and everyone got to their classrooms, the day passed fast and Yuki was impatient "I need to talk to Rena!" is the only things repeating on her brain again and again.

The bell rang..

"Rena chan we need to talk!" Yuki fast said as she gets up.

Sae looked at Yuki then moved her head side to side while Mayu ignored it and left the classroom.

Everyone were also waiting for Rena's reply..

Rena looked at Mayu leaving "o..okay" she replied shocked.

Yuki got closer then grabbed her hand and dragged her to her dorm.

~Meanwhile~

Mayu in the hall bumped Jurina.

"Ouch!" Jurina complained while Mayu ignored her.

Jurina grabbed Mayu by her arm which cause Mayu to turn and look at her "Jurina chan!" she says.

"You bumped me hard, what's going on? trouble in heaven?" Jurina asked

Mayu looked down.

"C'mon let's have fun a little!" Jurina says with a smile

Mayu smiles, she remembered what it's like to be Jurina's romie [Playing games,reading manga or watch a movie]

Both walked to Jurina's room..

~In Yuki's room~

Yuki pulls out a box and shows it to Rena "I know i shouldn't ask about this but.. they might try to hurt us and i need to know who they are! she says serious

Rena takes the box and sits on the edge of the bed, she takes a deep breath before start talking..

"Where you get this stuff?" Rena asked serious.

Yuki scratched the back of her head "It was on my door one morning! except this which was in a box that looked like a book in the library!" she replies pulling out the letter and the key  and showing it to Rena.

Rena read the letter and soon her tears started to gather on the corner of her eyes.

"Rena chan are you okay?" Yuki asked as she sits next to her.

Rena's tears were already rolling her cheeks "I know who this person is!" she replies.

Yuki only looked at her shocked.

"Yagami Kumi!" Rena replies as more tears rolls her cheeks.

"What that means?" Yuki asked more interested.

~ 2 Years ago During the 2 months Yuki left~

"Hello everyone I'm Kizaki Yuria, i'm 15 and hope we can be friends!" An excited girl says happy.

Rena wasn't paying attention she was looking through the window hopeless "Why you left me?" she wondered

"Matsui san you're not listening, you will tutor Kizaki san so treat her well our school is honored to have a girl with that IQ!" The teacher says in front of Rena waking her up from her thoughts

Rena just nodded.

The bell rang and Rena was gathering her things.

"Matsui san can you show me the school please?" Yuria asked with a smile.

Rena was about to reject her but then remembered how feels to be the new one so she agreed.

Both walked around the campus...

"Wow this school is really for reach people, i never thought i could get in that scholarship program is amazing!" Yuria says happy as she watches girls playing on the court.

"Scholarship program? you shouldn't say that loud.." Rena says looking down

"why not?" Yuria asked.

"Just don't do it okay?" Rena says walking away.

"Hey wait up!" Yuria says running behind her.

During the first 3 weeks everything was fine Yuria and Rena became really close friends till one day..

"Look what you did you idiot!" Tomochin says mad looking at the ice cream on her blazer.

"I'm sorry, i didn't mean to!" Yuria says trying to clean it.

"Don't touch me you insect!" Tomochin says mad.

"I'm already saying sorry, you don't have to be rude!" Yuria says before turning around.

"Don't give your back on me!" Tomochin says mad and grabbed Yuria by her arm both started fighting and rolling on the floor..

Soon two teachers separate the girls and took them to the headmaster office which was totally on Yuria's side.

"Are you insane?" Tomochin asked kicking the desk.

"Kizaki san is a really important student she could had chose another school but she chose us so please behave!" The headmaster says serious

"This scholarship is the best thing could ever happen to me so please don't kick me out!" Kizaki says looking down.

Tomochin smirked "I'm sorry Yuria.." she says still with a smirk then got up and left the office

The headmaster and Yuria were shocked but the problem solved..

After that Yuria started having troubles somebody threw all her books from the classroom window, somebody cut all her uniforms, somebody wrote in the bathroom mirror "GO BACK HOME"

Rena felt really bad about it, she didn't know how to help Yuria mostly because she knew that they would kidnap her on friday and maybe hurt her hard if she doesn't agree to leave the school.

~Wednesday~ at the bleachers in the afternoon

Rena was sad looking at the sunset alone "I can't help her... if i do they might hurt <Jurina's face smiling> i can't let that happen!" She thinks having an inner fight and clenching her fist.

Soon her tears rolled "Damn it!! i'm not strong...i'm alone" she murmured looking how her tears wet her thighs.

"There you are!" Jurina says with a smile

Rena fast wiped her tears as Jurina gets next to her "Are you avoiding me?" she asked

"Uh no.." Rena replied confused

Jurina pulled out handkerchief and started drying Rena's face..

"Is fine if you cry alone but.. remember you're not alone!" Jurina says with a smile

Rena was blushing and for a second forgot all her dilemmas "Jurina has that effect on me.." she thought with a little smile but then it fade away

Jurina looked at Rena.

"Jurina chan would you please always stay by my side?" Rena asked as she leans her head on Jurina's left shoulder.

Jurina putted her right hand on Rena's hair "You don't need to ask that, i'll always be by your side.. Rena chan I love you!" Jurina says blushing

"Even if one day i take the wrong the choice?" Rena asked as more tears rolls her cheeks

"Always, you always be my kind Rena!!" Jurina replies firmly

After a moment Rena got up "We'll leave this school forever, so prepare your bag!" she says

Where are you going?" Jurina asked.

"To prepare mine!" Rena says as she walks away.

"I guess she's serious!" Jurina says with a smile.

Rena run to Yuria's room fast..

~Once there~

"What's going on? Why you knocked like that?" Yuria asked confus.

"You need to leave this school NOW!" Rena says as she looks for Yuria's suitcase.

"Rena chan.. Are you feeling okay?" Yuria asked stopping Rena and looking at her in the eyes

"They want to hurt you!" Rena says

"Who?" Yuria asked shaking

"The Black Queens!" Rena shouts.

Suddenly somebody knocked the door..

"Don't open it!" Rena says

"Easy, it will be alright!" Yuria says as she walks to the door and opens it  "no one!" she says and turns to look at Rena.

Rena was shocked she couldn't believe who was behind Yuria, she put handkerchief Yuri's noise.

"Hi Rena chan!" Kitahara Rie says with a smile as she makes Yuria sleep

Soon two other Black Queens entered with their school uniforms and grabbed Rena

"You have been reckless!" Haruka says with a smile

"Shibuya will get mad at you!" Oba Mina says then puts a handkerchief on Rena's nose too, to make her sleep

~ After many hours or the next day At Rena's room~  9:00 am

Jurina was staring a Rena sleeping "Maybe she's like this cause.." she thought looking other way sad.

After a few seconds Rena opens her eyes "Ehhh.. what?" she was shocked looking around

"You really don't wake up easily!" Jurina says with a smile.

"Yuria? Where's Yuria?" Rena asked then got up and walked out.

"Rena chan wait up!" Jurina goes after her

Rena run to her room, she sees many candles, flowers and a picture of her on the door..

"What's this?" Rena asked shaking not believing

"Last night she was bit by spider several times.. the spider poison wasn't that strong but she was allergic to spiders!" Jurina says looking down

Rena kneels, she feels how the world was on mute by itself and automatically her tears came out "i tried.." she says crying even more

Jurina looked at her older sister and she feels her own tears on the corner of her eyes [It makes her really sad l, seeing Rena like that]

Jurina grabbed Rena but this one pushed her away and run.away..

"Rena chan!" Jurina says sad

Rena went wash room, moved the dryer and waited there patiently for the others

After class as usual the same always 5 Black Queens would reunite there to hang out..

"Look is Rena chan she already woke up fro her sleep!" Haruka says smirking

"Did you heard already about that don't you?" Oba mina asked

"It was accident we didn't know she was allergic!" Rie said looking down.

"We played too hard" Sato says

"Why hurting other people?" Rena asked still sad

"It's fun!" Akicha says with a smile

Rena opened her eyes wide "Fun.." then got up and grabbed Akicha by her her neck

"Wow somebody thinks is strong?" Akicha says smiling while the others were ready to kick Rena.

"Fun!" Rena says with a smile

Akicha smiled also but she didn't expect Rena would punch her on her stomach hard..

The other four girls tried to punch Rena but she was faster, she dodge their punches and in a blink of an eye, she was the last one standing..

"Are you mad!" Rena asked

The others were on the floor "When you became strong?" Haruka asked

"That was fun... call me Gekikara!" Rena says kicking Haruka on her stomach and stepping on Akicha's leg before leaving

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"After a year appeared a girl called Yagami Kumi she wanted revenge but once she told me why she came for... i just had to send her away from all this!" Rena says sad looking down

Yuki hugged Rena "I'm sorry.. " she whispers

Rena blushes and hugs Yuki also.

 "This time i'm here!"  Yuki says still hugging Rena.

"I missed you!" Rena whispered inhaling Yuki's scent.

The two girls connected their foreheads and somehow Rena got closer  so their lips touched

Both blushed they didn't stopped looking into each other's eyes.

(To be continued..)

~Meanwhile~

Jurina was surfing on the ned while Mayu was changing channels "Somehow i feel there's a part that Rena can reach that i can't.." she says

"What?" Jurina asked and turned to look at the CG

"There's a part of Yuki that i can't reach and Rena can... i think i might end up losing!" Mayu says  a little sad

"Maybe those two had real love in the end.." Jurina says a little depressed

"Maybe.." Mayu murmured putting her hand on her chest

TO BE CONTUNUED!!! COMMENT!! :)

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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH.27 (6)
« Reply #299 on: May 19, 2013, 01:44:56 PM »
Hi there cmze-san, it's been a long time commenting in your fic  :P
I'm missing Mayuki lately (no Mayuki fics update, and the real Mayuki is also....), and Mayu and Yuki in this fic are having a fight  :(
Nah, just write what you want  :P I'm still reading it, but I hope to see Mayuki moments soon  :P
Thanks for the update  XD

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