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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 34 (13) ANNOUNCEMENT!! 22/09
« Reply #400 on: September 23, 2013, 12:00:51 AM »
uh... I think I can help you... but I only online at night (+7.00 GMT at my place)..... except for sunday....

well, if you don't mind.... thx

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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 34 (13) ANNOUNCEMENT!! 22/09
« Reply #401 on: September 23, 2013, 03:09:52 AM »
Itamana: Okay I just don't know how to read that time  :banghead: :lol: no,Thank u appreciate your help  :thumbsup

Mo-chan: it's fine, I don't want to disturb you.. You been reading me since forever that's a big help :peace:

Imteedee: desperate?  :lol: I just wanna conclude, I don't like the feeling of "unfinished business"  :nervous besides I wanna finish all before leaving for good.

Well I should pm u but I wanna know everyone think about the plan.

It's  simple and might be considered selfish "I want u guys to write the chapters.." If you agree I would tell you what's suppose to happen in the next chapter but you will have to develope it to write the hole chapter "Like ordering." You'll get the thanks cause you'll post it as a reply on the thread to not make A bigger MESS. 

I KNOW IT'S SELFISH AND IF U WANNA BACK OUT IT'S OKAY!  :)

(BTW: I know I just posted a new fic and some of u could think "But you just wrote something, why can't you finish the others?" I already had it so I decided to post it after a long while of thinking "should I do it or not? I'm not fully recovered and they would think I am and I might leave them again hanging.")

Somehow as weird it sounds I feel attached to my readers even if u guys don't feel the same like if I owe u something. Sorry I'm like that with everyone I don't like to disappoint!

I know my fics are not the big deal but still..
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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 34 (13) ANNOUNCEMENT!! 22/09
« Reply #402 on: September 23, 2013, 04:33:41 AM »
LOL nah, I mean  "me", I'm the one desperate to know what happens next  XD
Sure thing, well I have my time so I can do ti :)
And nah, I'll send it to you and post it, I still want to see you, the one posting chapters :P

So, we're good :)
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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 34 (13) ANNOUNCEMENT!! 22/09
« Reply #403 on: September 23, 2013, 10:08:13 PM »
Ah, sorry if you can't read it.... forget it.. LOL :lol: :lol:

can I have a try??? but i'm sorry if the result is bad...  :( :(  :bow:

like imteede-san, i'll send it to you and post it.... :thumbsup

thank you.....

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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 34 (13) ANNOUNCEMENT!! 22/09
« Reply #404 on: September 24, 2013, 01:42:58 AM »
A/N remember, cmze is still the 'brain' behind the original story..I'm just here to offer my typing service (LOL) Pardon my work, I tried to imitate  a bit cmze's writing style, which we all love, to maintain the 'feels' apparently failed, cause I have my own 'sorry'. Anyway, I'm so happy that this fict is updated. Please enjoy.

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Time is Good as Gold


Chapter 35(14)


And soon the fated day, Thursday has arrived, the day of their long-awaited class’s trip. They arrived at a certain rural area, surrounded by a mini-forest-like landform.

After all that have happened between the two, Yuki decided to stay stronger as she felt Mayu’s slowly slipping from her hands. That’s when she realized Mayu started to avoid her for no apparent reason. She kept on asking herself what went wrong, or did she even do a single bad thing to make her this ‘unaffectionate’ towards the troubled older girl. Yuki tried to approach the seemingly ‘cold’ figure in front of her, but Mayu just averted her eyes towards the not-so different expressionless girl beside her, Sae. And soon the two girls vanished from Yuki’s eyes.


“What’s wrong Mayu?” Yuki thought as she stared at her clenched wounded fist, remembering all the troubles she’s having that particular moment. She needed Mayu the most, but why isn’t she comforting me when I expected the most?
Yuki is still lost on her thoughts when she happened to pass by a group of unknown girls who are having a mini chit-chat about anything under the sun across the swarm of the students who just unloaded from the buses when suddenly a familiar name slipped out of playful tongue of a certain girl

“I learned Tomochin’s still in the hospital” said the one girl.

“I wonder what really happened to her~” the other girl responded.

Her eyes shot open as early as she heard the name, Tomochin, the one who angered her a few days ago, the monster along with Paruru and all that Black Queens who tried to reborn the dormant Gekikara deep inside Rena. It’s the only thing she didn’t want to happen aside from Mayu leaving her side.



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Mayu tried her hardest to avoid Yuki’s glances. The smaller girl totally knew what’s been happening between the two of them and yet she endured the pain of seeing the sadness coming from the taller girl who kept on staring at her with pleading eyes. “I should make things better, before I leave you Yuki~” Mayu thought as she averted her eyes from the piercing stare of Yuki and attended the gloomy figure beside her, Sae.

Sae just let a sigh as she walked towards the resting area with Mayu by her side And After a few hours of nonsensible conversations from the girls surrounding the Genking, Sae, the students heard an alerting call from the newest professor in the school, Oshima-sensei.

“Okay, so to get things right and smoothly as possible let’s organize ourselves first, okay?” Yuko, stepping on a high chair, explained in front of pool of students.

Yuki hoped she gets paired with her ladylove but all her hopes faltered as she heard a different name after Mayu’s. Rena beside her never had a chance to console the down figure and just decided to pat her shoulder.

“Mayu would be with Sae” Yuko announced as she paid a glance on the two side by side figures.

In the end, Mayu went with Sae and Yuki was paired with Mocchi, who apparently just came from a Tennis Championship outside the city. Rena gets paired with Airin.


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Meanwhile, inside a dark cold lone room, a figure can be seen recoiling in an odd manner as she buried herself under the thick mattress, Jurina. “I wonder how you feel towards me~” she thought as she tightens her hug with her knees. “How are you doing, Rena….?” Jurina thought on her depressing state one would oughtta know. 


Jurina POV



I still remember the days when we’re still younger, You were my shield, my home....

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“Jurina! Come here!” A younger Rena shouted over to Jurina who plays along with her other friends. Jurina still wearing her smile, a proof of her enjoyment with the others, walked towards the older girl.

“What’s the problem?” Jurina asked.

“Stay here….just right here~” Rena blushing uttered as she averted her eyes from the pleading eyes of the puppy girl.

“are you jealous?” Jurina asked mischievously as she shortens the proximity between the two of them.

“I’m not!” Rena turned her back and was about to go when suddenly Jurina hugged her from behind locking her up with both arms pressing her body as close as possible. The gesture made Rena ever redder.


“you’re the only one for me~”

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You’ve changed…

You hurt me a countless times…

But why?


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As soon as their activities started, Yuki couldn’t seem to find Mayu anywhere else as if being over-protective once again to her girlfriend. She felt all alone as she stated to feel failure engulfed around her scanning the swarm of students without Mayu and Sae in it. Instead the pair who caught her eyes was Rena and Airin. Yuki couldn’t help but to notice the smile plastered across the overjoyed figure beside Rena.

“Did I see her blush there?” Yuki thought as Airin unintentionally held (if not) Rena’s hand while helping the pale raven-haired woman. Yuki getting more curious or more likely irritated with such unpleasant scenery before her eyes unconsciously started to follow the two figures endlessly.

Airin’s happiness couldn’t be denied as she kept her smile towards Rena who seemed not minding anything and kept on her pace, doing the activities given by Yuko.


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Meanwhile, the squirrel teacher is almost losing her control over the seductive figure beside her who kept on clinging on her since the beginning.

“Woi! I paired you with someone else~ why are you still here?” Yuko coyly asked the tall seductive girl but in reality enjoying her presence.

“mou~ I don’t know her at all, why not pair me with you then?” the airhead girl asked as she hugged the petite teacher from her back.

“tch! You can’t be with a professor!” Yuko weakly tries the hug which she, in reality, enjoying while Haruna just tightened the hug.

“AHHH this is dangerous!!” Yuko thought almost losing her cool from the taller girl’s aggression towards her.


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“Okay, carry this and this and this…..” Sae uttered as she kept on throwing stuff on Mayu’s vulnerable slim arms. Mayu isn’t bothered at all since her mind is wandering elsewhere, thinking of a particular person, Yuki. Mayu kindly obliged on every Sae’s desires setting aside her unhealthy state. From carrying stuff one couldn’t imagine and actually isn’t even needed up to bringing Sae some food and water. All of those, Mayu did.

“Yuki, what are you doing now?” Mayu thought as she mindlessly walks beside her partner who apparently seems enjoying her evilness towards the smaller girl.


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Meanwhile on the other end of the area, two arguing figures can be seen. Yuki and Mocchi, who seem not very pleased with their progress with the activities since all they did was to ran after Rena and the seemingly in love Airin.

“See? Look! We haven’t finished anything yet! It’s your fault!” Mocchi shouted and pointed her finger at Yuki.

“Huh? WOW!! So you care now huh? Ultimate BLACK QUEEN!” Yuki answered in the same manner but empahzing the last three words. Mocchi was taken aback from the sudden statement from Yuki and just wore a blank clueless face.
 
“You don’t have to deny it~” Yuki’s eyebrows narrowed as she kept a furious stare at the figure in front of her.

“W-What are you talking about?! You’re crazy! Tch~” Mocchi stuttered as she averted her eyes from Yuki’s.

Yuki felt a little confused with Mocchi’s response, obviously denying her allegations, as a question suddenly popped inside her head. “If you’re not….then who?”


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After the activites, the students started to pool around the recreation area to have a brief rest. Yuki lost in her thoughts, as she mindlessly wandered across the area, laid at last her eyes towards a very much familiar figure, Mayu, who seems tired and pale, also slightly panting, probably because of her hard-work throughout the day. Yuki turned her eyes on the figure close the resting Mayu, Sae who kept attending the other unknown girls’ nonsensible questions towards her despite of Mayu’s condition. She couldn’t help but feel fire heat up her head and rush towards the uncaring partner of Mayu.

“What happened to Mayu?!” Yuki almost shouting at the shocked Genking before her.

“Happened? What are you talking about?!” Sae averted her eyes and turned her body away from Yuki with a grin plastered on her face.


Yuki once again paid a glance on her poor girlfriend who seems has noticed the commotion she’s making with Sae. Mayu looks terribly worried as she kept her weak eyes opened to watch her girlfriend’s actions.

“Yuki~ stop…please” Mayu pleadingly asked still supporting her weight on her knees.

Yuki couldn’t resist her cool, rushed towards Sae and launched a hard punch towards Sae. Sae being shocked with the sudden move of Yuki wasn’t able to avoid the aggression and landed on the floor.

“YOU!!!” Yuki shouted as she glared to Sae with burning eyes. Thankfully Rena who just arrived at the area was fast enough to withhold Yuki’s future advances towards the down figure.

“Yuki~ stop! Stop!” Rena uttered as she struggles on holding the burning Yuki at hand. Suddenly, the professors led by Yuko arrived at the commotion happening.

“WHAT HAPPENED?!” Yuko frantically asked among the students especially the three stars of the seemingly skit happening.

Yuki, Sae and Rena.

Finally, Yuki calmed down in Rena’s arm and turned her back but still feeling anger towards Sae. “It’s my fault” Yuki confessed as she bowed lowly on Yuko. Yuko just paid the two a very much seemingly warning stare as she drove away the swarm of student around them.


“Yuki~ we need to talk” Yuko uttered.


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Almost all of the students are now enjoying their free time towards the end of the day. Rena sitting beside Airin keeps on staring at her almost burning marshmallow at hand. Her mind wandered across her dreamland as she worries about Yuki who apparently received her sanction because of what she did to Sae. Yuko decided to isolate Yuki from the others for the time being as her sanction. It’s not more of a sanction but more like of taking precautions not to make any other person gets hurt from Yuki’s madness, Madness coming from her ‘so-called obssession’ towards her girlfriend.

“How are you now, Yuki?” Rena thought as she noticed her marshmallow already slipped and fell down from her stick as Airin kept her worried look.

“Are you alright?” Airin asked Rena.

“I guess not….” Rena responded as she stood up and walked towards the other side of the area.

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Everyone seems enjoying the bonfire. Small chit-chats can be heard around the bonfire coming out from the overly-excited figures towards the end of the day.
 
“Since we’re here, why not talk about horror stories?!” one student close to Mayu suggested.

“kyaa~ I don’t like horror stories!” the girl beside reacted as she clang on her friend.

Mayu just chuckled on their mindless conversstions, as she felt a little distracted from her reality. “Yuki, where are you?” she thought as she’s not being able to find Yuki with her eyes. Feeling a huge guilt from not attending her girlfriend’s needs she opted to grab a pack of marshmallows resting in her front and paved her way towards where Yuki might be at.

Her brisk steps seemed endless as she wandered across the pool of students. Until she found Yuki…

But she’s not alone..

Rena’s with her…

Hugging her.

Mayu felt weak as if a sharp knife has stabbed on her heart seeing Yuki on other's arms. Tears began to form and pool on the corners of her eyes. She stood alone watching the two hug each other.

And soon the poor marshmallows have escaped from her weak grip.


Mayu left.


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~few moments ago~

“I knew you’re here” Rena uttered as she found Yuki sitting alone on the far away corner from where she was. Yuki just smiled at her and tapped the space beside her. Rena accepted the offer and sat beside the down figure.

“Does it hurt?” Rena asked without looking to Yuki. Yuki kept her silence.

“I’ll be here..no matter what..” Rena murmured as she held Yuki’s clenched fist. Yuki nodded softly understanding Rena’s warm support on her.


“I-I just….” Yuki’s voice started to crumble as she was about to cry.

“Ssshh….” Rena uttered as she pulled Yuki on her arms and hugged the figure tightly. Yuki just surrendered on her misery as her silent cries echoed.


“I’ll be here, Yuki”

Yuki calming down as if she felt energized from Rena's warm support suddenly plastered a fierce expression as she remembered her recent interaction with Mocchi.

"Mocchi..." Yuki uttered with a blank face. Rena just turned her head towards Yuki. "hmmm.."


"She's clueless...."  Yuki uttered as Rena fell upon the confusing air filling them.




~Part end~
« Last Edit: September 24, 2013, 02:17:07 AM by imteedee »
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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 35 (14)
« Reply #405 on: September 24, 2013, 02:15:23 AM »
NICE!!  :heart:

My writing suck yours it's way better!!   :bow:

Thank you for posting  :thumbsup

Now I'm the fan waiting for more!!  :shakeit:

Please update soon! :)





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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 35 (14)
« Reply #406 on: September 24, 2013, 02:19:27 AM »
Now, see cmze? now you know how are we feeling chapter after chapter!

haha it's weird even if i knew what's gonna happen couldn't help but to react as a Fan!!

OMG! Mayu AGAIN for the NTH time! what are you doing?!??! Don't let Yuki goooo!!  :cry:

I sitll like your cheesy style though  XD
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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 35 (14)
« Reply #407 on: September 24, 2013, 07:13:22 AM »
cmze, please get well soon..

Thanks for the updated imteede who willingly to help cmze for the story :kneelbow:
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Oshimen : Takamina and Mayu
Favorite pair : TakaAstu, Mayukirin, KumiYuria, Wmatsui, JirinaMayu etc.
(After reading the fanfic, my favorite pair just keep increasing :( )

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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 35 (14)
« Reply #408 on: September 24, 2013, 11:32:42 AM »
thank you so much for Imteedee-san and cmze-san for the update!
You guys really did a good job!  :twothumbs
Poor Mayu..  :cry: how many already she saw YukiRena moments~
and that break her heart even more but she is trying to leave Yuki for good..
can't wait for the next update!
I wish I could help but I will ended with nonsense things so I just will support you guys to finish the fics!  :thumbsup
and I hope you get well and healthy soon cmze-san!

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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 35 (14)
« Reply #409 on: September 24, 2013, 08:11:03 PM »
sae baka! why you treat mayu as a slave! :angry:
mou rena go back to jurina!! :temper:
mayuyu :cry: yuki and rena made mayuyu cry! :scolding: yuki you owe mayuyu big time!! :on redcard:
thanx for the update cmze-san and Imteedee-san  :cow: :bow:
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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 35 (14)
« Reply #410 on: October 11, 2013, 09:08:00 PM »
Hello everyone..  :grin:

I'm sorry if I'm not coming with good news but I have to tell you this is the last time I'll be online I'm sorry :nervous

This message is to tell you I'm out, I'm sorry!   :peace:

Inteedee and itanma has now what happen in this fanfic~ if they want they can finish it!

I hope they do..

If anyone wants any of my fanfics you can have it and finish it I don't mind, you would do me a favor..  :thumbsup

Thanks for everything~

GOOD BYE~ wish u the best!!

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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 35 (14) ANNOUNCEMENT!!
« Reply #411 on: October 11, 2013, 09:08:36 PM »
                                  ~Time is good as gold~

Hello everyone.. another fanfic? Yeahh my sister's girlfriend is almost over so i had to make another one! :P

My cyborg:  Feeling happy cause the new story line! :) 

I'm everything you need: Feeling uninspired!x_X;

Wild love: Every chapter gives me headache..because so much ideas on my head!!  ;)

Akb boarding school: keeping it longer cause it's my only fanfic which have my many pairings! xD  (but also think it's time to end)

My sister's girlfriend : Everything good has to end! :D

Kojijuu fanfic: Yep this one has to end too! :P

Loving you: It's to replace my sister girlfriend.. i think hope is going to be good as that one ^^;

Time is good as gold: I wanted to make a sad fanfic so hope you like it.. (MaYuki btw)

                                             CH. 1

So many people around me,touching me and checking my pulse..

"I'm okay as long she's by my side.." i tried to murmure but they didn't hear me cause my voice is not strong

"Doctor her pulse is dropping!" A nurse says worried

"They're carrying me on a stretcher and now i can't hear a thing that they're talking but does it really matter listen to them?"

"No,because i don't wanna hear anyway! i'm happy couse what i got in this short period.. i been in love,i been out of love, i been mad,i been sad,i been hungry"

But those feelins are nothing compare to her smile..

"I'll never forget that smile and also the name of the one who owned it.."

"Kashiwagi Yuki.." I murmure while i look up to the lights of the hospital that are on the ceiling

Many people had the wrong description of her..

*They would say she is strong (i would say she's vulnerable)

*They would say she has everything thag anyone wants ( i would say she's lonely)

The would say she's cruel (i would say she's just a kid)

*They would say she's unpredictable (i would say she's unique)

*They would say she's cold  (i would say she's sweet)

*They would say she's heartless (i would say she has too much love to give)

*They would call her black (i would call her Yukirin)

 The beginning: Before the little pov

In one of the most expensive girls school in Japan..

~Outside the headmaster office~

 "Yuki chan why you insist to not repect our teachers, Look where it got you to the principal office and i think they called your parents!" A handsome tomboy girl says while sits next to her friend

Yuki only looked other way annoyed

"Sae chan maths is about to start,let's go!" A girl says while takes her arm to pull her up

Sae sighs and gets up"Rena chan, i wanna stay here supporting Yuki chan!" she says complaining

"i think Yuki chan want us to go..Now" Rena says while pushes Sae with her

Yuki ignore the two and waited for her parents to come

Soon the headmaster's secretary told her to enter to the office

~Insisde the office~

Yuki sitted in front of the headmaster

"So Kashiwagi san when are you going to stop coming to my office?" The headmaster asked

Yuki ignored her

"i called your parents..*noise of the door opening*

Yuki smirks then turns her head and her smirk fade away when she saw her butler coming closer

"You again!" She shouted mad as she get up

"Kashiwagi san" The butler says shocked

"They are never going to come!" Yuki murmured looking other way

"They're on a business trip!" The butler says as she sits next to Yuki

Yuki runs away from the office pushing away the secretary who was entering to the office bringing coffee

"Get off my way!" Yuki says as she pushes her

"Kashiwagi san!" The headmaster shouted

"don't worry we'll pay for everything.." The butler says moving her head side to side

~Outside in the hall~ was already lunchtime so everyone was on the halls walking or chatting

"Yuki chan.." Someone says and grabs her by her arm

Yuki looked at the girl "let go bitch!" she says as she pushes her to the lockers

"Yuki chan!" Sae says worried but then someone grabbed her hand

"don't.." Rena murmured serious

Everyone looked at the scene

"what's wrong with you?"  Another girl with short hair asked as she helps the first girl to get up

"That's not of yor bussines!" Yuki says mad as she walks away with a black aura

Everyone moving of her way..

"Thanks Jurina!" The girl says

"Don't worry Sasshi!" Jurina replies with a smile then looked at the figure who was already many steps forward and pouted

"That girl.. i wish she'll pay everything she does to anyone in this school!" Jurina murmured

"Her family gives big donations to this school so she's the Queen!" Another girl says as she picks Sasshi's books from the floor

"Yui.." Sasshi says then smiled

~After a few minutes~
Yuki entered to her room still mad and started to destroy everything around

 "who needs you?" she shouted as she throws all the things that was on her desk on the floor then used a bat to destroy the tv

Sae and Rena stood outside hearing her friend shouting and destroying everything inside the room

"what are you looking at?" Sae asked to some girls who were also listening

*The girls walked away*

Soon Yuki got tired of crying and shouting so she throwed herself on bed and fell sleep

*Once Rena and Sae notice that they went to their room*

~After a few hours~

Mayuyu Are you sure about that? A sad mother asks as she watches her doughter putting her clothes inside a bag

"Mom,i'm gonna be fine that's school is amazing and i really wanna study there!" Mayu replies with a smile

"but.. you know.." Mayu's mom says sad

"Mom *sighs* i wanna live as a normal teenege girl before dying.." Mayu says as walks closer and hugs her mom

"You're my special child and you're not going to die!" She says as she kisses Mayu's head

Mayu breaks the hug and closes her bag "Now take me to that school!"

~Inside the car~

"You know i'm really proud of you.." Mayu's dad says with a smile

Mayu smile as she looks through the window

"entering to a rich kids school,it's not an easy thing so good luck!" Mayu's dad says

"Thanks.." Mayu says

"You know Mayu you always been strong,your stupid doctor thought you wouldn't make it to 16 years old but here you are!" Her dad says while drives

*Mayu's mom hit him on his head with a newspaper*

Mayu smiles

They got to the gates

"Those are big gates..." Mayu thought as they passes

(They got to the school)

Mayu's dad got out of the car "This place looks like a castle!" he said stunned and took her bag

"I can do it myself!" Mayu says as she gets out and takes the bag

"You have your pills there honey! right?" her mom asks

"yes!" Mayu replies then she kisses her mom and dad and walks away inside

*The two worried parents entered to the car and left*

Mayu looked amazed everything inside the school "this place is totally different from my other school!" she murmured as she walks the hall and everyone looks at her

"Hello new girl.. i'm Matsui Jurina!" a girl says as she extends her hand

Mayu was shocked first but then shook her hand "i'm Watanabe Mayu!" she replied with a smile
 
"You're pretty" Jurina says smiling

"Oh.. thanks!" Mayu says feeling strange

Jurina let go Mayu's hand  "you have to go to the secretary to tell you where's your room and give you your uniforms and books!"

"okay where she is?" Mayu asked

"In the other building,this is the building of the rooms passing the basketball court and the running track you'll see a big building that one is the classrooms,headmaster and secretary building!" Jurina says as she points to the other building

Mayu sighs "Thanks Jurina!" she says as she walks away

"be carefull with the players there..at this hours Black is running" Jurina murmured

As she walks,she couldn't help admire the big campus the school have

So many girls making sports

Mayu stopped walking and looked at the girls playing basketball "i wish i could do that.." she murmure sad as her right hand reach her chest

"hey!" Someone shouts then pushed Mayu and rolled on the floor with her

"Yuki chan.." Rena says

Mayu was on top of the other girl

Both had eye contact for a moment till the taller girl pushed Mayu off her

"Are you stupid or blind?"The taller girl asked yelling mad as she gets up

"Sorry.." Mayu replied as she gets up

"Yuki chan calm down!" Rena says

Yuki takes Mayu by her arm " Look at my knees i'm bleeding!" she says as she presses tigher on her arm while she looks on Mayu's eyes

"you're hurting me!" Mayu says in pain also looking at Yuki

"hey let go!"  A girl says
 
"Jurina.." Mayu says

Yuki let go Mayu's arm and turned to look at Jurina "you stupid kid again!" she says

"Let's go Mayu.." Jurina says serious

Yuki pouted "just because she's your adopted sister!" she murmured looking at Rena then walked away

Rena looked other way sad then followed her friend

Mayu and Jurina looked at the older girls walking away

what's wrong with her? Mayu asked

what's not wrong with her? Jurina answered

Jurina helped Mayu with everything and even led her to her room which was the same as her

We're roomies! Jurina says smiling and hugging Mayu
while she opens the door

Ta-da! Jurina says showing the room

*It was a cool room a littler,two desks,a tv and many other things*

"My bed is this one!" Jurina says as climbs to her bed

Mayu smiles "okay i'll take the one down.." she says as he puts her bag on it

Jurina gets down "i'll bring some snacks to celebrate wait for me!" she says as she leaves

Mayu nods then starts putting out the things of her bag while she puts her things on her desk she notices a mirror on the wall

She looked herself at it and  fixed her hair then opened a few buttons of her shirt

"It's a new start please don't ruin it!" Mayu says as she sees the scar on her chest then sighs

TO BE CONTINUED!! COMMENT!!

Offline mayuki_daisuki

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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 35 (14)
« Reply #412 on: October 11, 2013, 10:36:32 PM »
cmze-san!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :ptam-wub: :ptam-hbk: :OMG: :frustrated: :gyaaah: :pleeease: :tantrum: :on speedy: :mon ref: :mon spit: :mon scare: :mon hanky: :mon waterworks: :mon nwei: :mon runcry: :mon love:
you are literally one of my favourite writers!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :shocked :shocked :shocked :shocked :shocked :shocked :shocked :shocked :shocked :panic: :panic: :panic: :panic: :panic: :panic: :panic: :panic: :panic: :panic:
i will miss you and your wonderful fanfics!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i really wish you woudn't leave!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :ptam-cry: :badluck: :fainted: :mon cry:
thank you for all you done!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :cow: :bow: from mayuki_daisuki
« Last Edit: October 11, 2013, 10:59:34 PM by mayuki_daisuki »
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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 35 (14)
« Reply #413 on: October 12, 2013, 03:04:35 AM »
I'm feeling down.... really. can't even find a suitable emoticon how sad I'm feeling right now.
my hat is off. saluting.

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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 35 (14)
« Reply #414 on: October 12, 2013, 03:25:40 AM »
 :OMG: :OMG: :OMG: :OMG:  :gyaaah: :gyaaah: :gyaaah: :gyaaah: :fainted: :fainted: :fainted: :on speedy: :on speedy: :on speedy:


 :dizzy: I'll respect your decision >< I hope you decide to come back when you get well =] In that mean time, I'll truly miss you  :heart:  Actually I miss you already :love:

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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 35 (14)
« Reply #415 on: October 12, 2013, 03:32:31 AM »
...me... I'm crying...

let's just say that I respect you a lot... cmze-san... sayonara...
I hope you get better though I have no idea what illness you had(or still have depending on the situation...)...
(I'm going to be mad and cry if you die or something! >.<!!)

Your fics were some of the first AKB fanfics that I'd read if I think about it...
Sayonara? No, rather than that... I hope we can meet you again.

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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 35 (14)
« Reply #416 on: October 12, 2013, 01:21:40 PM »
My favourite author, I can't say anything if that was your decision.  :cry:

I think you deserve a LEGEND AUTHOR in this thread for making so many of awesome fics with awesome stories.

I will always remember you!

yeah...and I'm thinking again, I don't want to involve on continue your fics,

I hope Imteedee-san or other author could do it.

I don't want to ruin it with my nonsense. there are many other great authors.

I'm not good enough. be healthy!  :heart:

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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 35 (14)
« Reply #417 on: October 12, 2013, 06:29:42 PM »
I JUST ENTERED HERE FOR YOU!!!  :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry:
What should  I do? I read your fics since always I CAN'T BELIEVE IT!!!

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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 35 (14)
« Reply #418 on: October 12, 2013, 06:42:56 PM »
Announcement:

I would like you guys to know, as paying respect to one of my favorite writers (well in fact, the very reason why I even registered in this forum, as you can see on my very first post in Jhpip)

this is definitely one of the best fanfics I've ever read so far :O *I even made an account here just to comment* nyahaha very well done

I'm going to fulfill the ending of 'Time is Good as Gold' together with the help of other trusted writers (mayuki-daisuki, itamana)  However, the other fics are out of my hands anymore, to be honest I'd rather leave it like that than seeing somebody else updating it other than cmze. I'm very sorry. I'm with you guys, I am trully very sad hearing such news.

cmze, you'll be missed. I hope I get to see you on other forums in the future.

imteedee
« Last Edit: October 12, 2013, 06:55:14 PM by imteedee »
my hat is off. saluting.

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Re: ~Time is good as gold~ MaYuki CH. 35 (14)
« Reply #419 on: October 12, 2013, 08:34:14 PM »
But I just asked her or his fanfic MY BOYFRIEND AND  MY FIANCE  and  said "Do as you please :sweatdrop:"
So I want to update that fic of course I'm not ginious like him or her but I'll try  :nervous
You make me feel bad cause  I want that fanfic!!!  :cry:

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