Untitled fic (AtsuMina) - COMPLETED

[whiningwillow]

I'm a newbie here in jphip and i really wanted to share what I've written so far. Please read my fics and I hope you enjoy

Chapter 1
Name's Takahashi Minami, your average girl with twintails hanging on both sides of my head. Nothing special about me; you could say that my life is nothing special too. Born in an average family, living in the projects since birth. Sadly, i was not blessed with a height like a normal girl wants, can you believe it?! Im just 4'11. 18, barely legal but who cares, there's nothing much to do.

I study in this school named "wings of the future" name's too fancy for a school without any recognition at all.
"The youth is the future. You are the wings that will waver blah blah blah.." the usual shit that the principal kept repeating all over the years. I guess I need to bear all of this until I graduate and start looking for a job that will sustain myself, or luckily my family (saying that i'll have one which will never happen) until i die peacefully and turn into nutrients that earthly beings will enjoy and share with each other.

*shalala suteki ni kiss~ shalala sunao de kiss~*
I grabbed the goddammed phone and swiped my thumb across the smooth touch screen.

"6:30 AM alarm"

"Nee minami, your dad and i wont be home tonight. Were going somewhere. But everything that you need for tomorrow are ready."
I continue on eating my breakfast. I dont want to question where they'll be going since i know that they'll be just somewhere enjoying the time of their lives.

"Im off mom"

I grabbed my things and went out the door. I ride my bicycle off to school everyday. Its pretty much convenient for a lazy gal like me. Long walks are boring, way too boring.

"Faster ms.takahashi, before i close the gate" the guardian of the heaven's gate shouted at me. That PE teacher is way too creepy. He looks like someone out of a
hentai movie.

I opened my locker. I grabbed my slippers and changed. As i return my shoes, i noticed a white envelope lying there.
"i wonder who gave this" i said to myself.
I teared the v-shaped flop with my nails and pulled out the yellow paper inside. The letter reads:

"fountain 4pm today.."

This is the first time i received something like this. What does it mean? Prank? Project? Or worst, confession? No no no, it cant be a confession since Im in a exclusive girls school. What am I thinking. Better get to class.

"Takamina-chan!" I heard a shout behind me as I walk towards my classroom.
"Hey Oshima-san.."
"Are you free tomorrow? Mom's having her 40th birthday. Please please pretty pleaaase"
Im not good at parties since Im a home kind of person.
"Uhm..Im not so sure about that Oshima-san. My parents are away and Im left alone at home"
"Please..for a friend?" she gave me that reassuring smile.
"Okay okay, but I wont stay up late. Ok?"
"Yey! I sooooooo love you Takamina-chan" she gave me a tight hug. Her chest is pressing against me, how I envy her; She's 5ft tall yet she is well endowed.
"See you tomorrow! I'll text you the details later" and she went off.
I answered with a nod.

The letter I got earlier still bothers me. I wonder what could it be? Who could be the sender?
*thud* A chalk hit my forehead..
"Ack! Who did tha.."
"Bullseye! Ms.Takahashi! Stop daydreaming. Read the first paragraph on page 18"
"Im sorry Yamamoto-sensei.."

*School bell sounded*

Dismissal time, everyone left the room one by one. Fountain fountain fountain, it kept repeating inside my head. Anxiety grows as I was nearing the fountain. I looked at my watch, its 3:50PM. The fountain in the school grounds looks deserted.

"No ones there. A prank I guess" I said to myself with dismay
There's a girl. She was blocked from my view since she was covered by the fountain. She has short straight hair and she got a nice figure judging by the shape of her back.
"Are you by any chance the sender of the mail?" I asked the girl.
She turned her back revealing her mysterious presence. Its..its Maeda Atsuko-san the school's top student. She hastily bowed. She..she's my idol, everyone's idol to be exact.
"Hey hey, what are you doing Maeda-san"
"Sorry for dragging you all the way here. Uhm, can we talk somewhere more private?" she asked.
"Sure sure. Its not like Im in a hurry or something"

She grabbed my hand and we went to the school's home economics room which is only across the fountain. Her hand is trembling and my heart is beating fast, this is awkward.
"What do you want to talk abou.."
Her lips touched mine. Her arms wrapped around me. Her embrace tightens as I answer her long deep kisses. I cant move, my head is going blank. My lips are moving on their own. Her hands wandered around my lower half which I answered with deep faint moans.
"Maeda-san..wait.." she stopped with her advances. "It's my first kiss.."
She looked into my eyes as if staring deep into my soul. She didnt answer, we remained motionless.
"Did..."
"Shhhhh.." she placed her finger on my lips refraining me from uttering any words. "I like you Takahashi-san.. I..Im sorry for doing this so suddenly..for taking your first kiss.. I.."
I immediately placed my finger onto her lips.
"Shhhhhh..I like you too Maeda-san"

(｀_´)ゞ 高橋みなみ X 前田敦

[XxRoByNxX78]

its really interesting and a early confession update soon i want to read more 

oh and welcome 

[miayaka]

Welcome 

And I'm  happy that your first post is atsumina   

[TakaminaBG]

 
More AtsuMina!!!! Me GUSTA!!
This is really interesting, I want more kisses!! 
Please update SOON!!!

[kahem]

Simple but great thanx ^^

[whiningwillow]

Thanks guys i'll update this soon

[Haruko]

wow that was fast....

[whiningwillow]

Chapter 2
I pinched myself thinking everything was just a dream. I really dont have any attraction to the same sex but it was really different. It was special. I.. I felt like I was shackled by something out of my control. I didnt even fight back. Spur of the moment? no no no, it is as if I am feeling something I dont even know. The way she pinned me against the wall, her tight embrace, her smooth and delicate touches, they're full of emotions. An inxperienced girl like me doesnt deserve that.

I was awakened by the sound of a girl's voice. She was humming a famillar tune, a song by a group named Warota 7, my alarm in every morning of my life, Valentine Kiss.

"Breakfast in bed. I hope you like it" Maeda-san prepared the small table on my lap.
"Ehhhh??! You shouldn't have. I should be the one cooking" The presentation of the food is perfect. The taste? perfect. As expected of the best student in the school.
"Say ahhhhhh.."

After all the fuss we made inside the home economics room yesterday, I decided that we should continue in a more secluded and private place, that's how she ended up here. She called her parents telling a lame excuse that an emergency project-making came up and staying over is unavoidable. Wonderful wonderful lie. Admit it, we need to lie sometimes.

"Ano, Maeda-san, I'll be attending Oshima-san's mother's birthday party later. I wonder if you can tag along" I pulled out my phone prompting to text if my "special" friend can tag along. "I'll just drop by and say my regards"
She went around me and wrapped her arms from behind.
"Why dont we just stay here and do the "project" I told my mom about.." she whispered with a smooth touch on the middle of my lip
Oh god, why does she have to do that? Darn it, why does it have to be so tempting. Keep calm Minami, keep calm, you already promised to Oshima-san. You need to go.
"Uhm, can we just go there for just a little while, please? Then we can.."
She interrupted with a kiss on my nape which send shivers down my spine.
"..then we can have some more private time together, Mi-na-mi.." she smothered my shoulders with smooth and soft kisses. "I'll go get dressed, but better keep your visit short."
"I will.."

It's 12 in the afternoon when we arrived at Oshima-san's home, mansion to be exact. Loud music, lavish decors, busy guests, grand dresses and stuff, I think we got into the wrong place.
"Let's go back now Maeda-san.." I despised the way I look. My dress is like something out of the void. "This is..not my kind of thing"
"It doesn't matter Minami. Let's just get this over with, okay?" she gave me a smile and we proceeded inside. "And please, no more formalities. Atsuko would do"

An old man welcomed us at the front gigantic door of the mansion, I think he's the butler of the family. I've seen him before but I cant remember where and when.
"Welcome ladies, friends of Yuko-sama?" he asked in a low deep voice.
"Yes, we are her friends. Can we ask where could she be?"
Oshima-san suddenly descended the grand staircases that are so shiny that the image of my horrible dress is reflected.
"Takamina-chan!" she hugged me, like what she always do. "Im so glad that you came."
"Goodmorning Oshima-san" Acchan greeted the always-energetic Oshima-san. "I hope that you wouldn't mind me coming here"
"EHHHHHHHHHHHH????!!!!!! Ma..Maeda-san?!!"
Oshima-san pulled me suddenly on the corner.
"How did you managed to bring Maeda-san here? And why you didn't tell me about this?" she asked in a very low voice.
"Long story Oshima-san, loooooong story. I'll tell you the details next time."
"Grrrrrrrrrr..I could've prepared better. You'll pay for this Takamina-chan" she threatened
"Ehhhhhhhhhhh??!!!" I gasped. Oh god, let this be a joke.
Acchan tapped our shoulders.
"Is there a problem?" Acchan asked.
"No no no no..there's no problem Maeda-san" Oshima-san is trembling. She was shocked for sure.

The hallways are filled with heirlooms and other stuffs. Picture filled the walls, various expensive objects graced the table tops. Oshima-san talked about these things while walking across the hallway. I wonder how they could afford these kind of things. On the far end of the hallway hangs a gigantic painting, a very nice painting, Oshima-san and her family.
"Wonderful! Nee Oshima-san, how old are you in that painting?" I asked
"I was 10 that time. How I miss to be young"
We stopped in front of a room.
"It's mom's room. Party's gonna start at 1, and since both of you are early, why dont you two have a chat with her" Oshima-san suggested.

We left at 12:30PM. Time with Oshima-san's mom is fun, even Acchan had fun. We talked about lots of useless stuff under the sun.
"Want to go somewhere else Minami? Its still early" Acchan held my hand while walking towards down the street. Thinking of it, Im much of a home-kind of person, going out isnt my thing.
"I dunno, I dont know much about places around here. Plus, look at me I look horrible in this dress. Better go home and change" I've been thinking about being alone with Acchan. I just want to sit at home.
"I want to go out on a date" Acchan suddenly uttered out of the blue. "With you Minami.."
I didn't answer. My heart is beating fast. My hand started shaking without apparent reason.
"It's okay if its not today Minami. I just want to tell you so. Besides.."
I interrupted her with a kiss on her cheek.
"Take me out sometime.." I wrapped my arms around her waist and kissed her lips in the middle of the busy street. I really dont give a damn if someone sees us.
"I love you Minami.." she whispered
"I love you too.."

On the far end of the street, I saw someone behind the post as if watching us the whole time. It's Tomomi Itano..

Σ(￣。￣ﾉ)ﾉ 高橋みなみ Ｘ 前田敦

[bimbo]

OH MY GOD IT IS SO ADDICTIVE! 

Even though the 'Atsumina' progress is pretty fast 

I WANT MORE KISSES!! 

[TakaminaBG]

Wait I got confused... Did they do.. you know what?!?!
They are so cute!!!!!
Hm.. here she is the great Itano Tomomi!!
Please update SOON!

[whiningwillow]

OH MY GOD IT IS SO ADDICTIVE! 

Even though the 'Atsumina' progress is pretty fast 

I WANT MORE KISSES!! 

Wait I got confused... Did they do.. you know what?!?!
They are so cute!!!!!
Hm.. here she is the great Itano Tomomi!!
Please update SOON!

i will

[miayaka]

waw this is so fast!

On the far end of the street, I saw someone behind the post as if watching us the whole time. It's Tomomi Itano..

im interested on the next part!

[XxRoByNxX78]

great update why is tomomi there does she love takamidget ot atsuko

[stepk]

Tomomi is  spy   

I like the history, acchan so cute 

Waiting the next chapter.   

[Haruko]

Wait I got confused... Did they do.. you know what?!?!
They are so cute!!!!!
Hm.. here she is the great Itano Tomomi!!
Please update SOON!

yeah!! but i wanna know how maeda fall in love with our takaboy...

[whiningwillow]

will update in  a while thanks for the support guys

 

[whiningwillow]

Chapter 3

Mom's not coming back tonight, I guess they'll be extending their 'private' time together. I wonder if they already forgot that they have a daughter. I'm so glad that Acchan keep me company. I looked at her across the table, looking at her beauty and her warm delicate smile. Passing time wasn't so hard when you have someone doing the same like you.

"Do you want to stay at home tonight?" she asked. "You're parents aren't coming tonight right?"
"Ah, yeah..Is it okay with you? Are your parents will be okay at the idea?"
She yanked her phone out of her pocket.
"Im gonna email mom, but I think that she'll be okay with you coming over." she started typing with her phone with super speed. Things sure develop fast, it just started yesterday.
"Mom's okay with it Minami. Just pack a few things and lets go."
I hurried to my room and started packing my things. Im pretty much excited if
you're gonna ask me.

Tomochin is a friend of mine. She's kind of tomboyish and she dresses like a boy when were kids. We used to hang out together when we're in middle school. I used to go to her place to play with her. As we grow up, we seldom see each other, I wonder what happened to her. She's from another section and she's a classmate of Oshima-san. With her seeing us, it really bugs me.

Acchan's mom welcomed us upon arriving at their residence. She's a warm and delicate woman. She looks so caring and motherly. Acchan's very much like her, no wonder. Acchan does not have any siblings; an only child, like me.

As I gazed upon the pictures over the table tops, its like Im looking through Acchan's life. At the far left, you can see baby Acchan, soooooo cute. As you go right, you can see her growing. There's a pictured labeled 'Acchan's first bicycle ride', you can see her riding a red bicycle on the street, I think she's around 5 at the picture. On the far right, its her picture winning the nationals.

"Let's eat Minami." she grabbed my hand and we went to the dining room. I was surprised by the food on the table, it's like a feast and it looks amazing. I remembered the breakfast Acchan prepared earlier in the morning, its very much like this. We give thanks to the heavens for the bountiful blessings.
"Itadakimasu!"

*Viva hurricane Kanjou no uzu ni sarawareru boku ga iru  ♪~*

I excused myself to answer my phone. Its a random number. I wonder who's calling me.
"Hello? Takahashi Minami here..uhm who is this?"
"Nee Minami, its mom" oh its mom of all the people "How are you doing right now?"
"Im fine mom..Im in middle of dinner, can you call later?"
"No, its okay Minami. Im just checking you out. We'll be coming home tomorrow. Sorry Minami. Take care oand goodnight" beep beep. Mom just hang all of the sudden, as expected of my great mom. I stopped caring long ago, they could do what they want as long they fulfill their parental duties.

"Who is it Minami? You look troubled" Acchan suddenly sprung at my back. I hugged her as if there's something inside of me calling out to something that is lacking in my life, a cub seeking the care of her mom. How f****d it is? I cant explain.
"Im okay.." I uttered. As if everything's okay. Look at me, I look miserable at your arms. Tears suddenly fall from these goddamned eyes.
"Lets go to my room" her hug tightened "Dont cry. Look at you, you look like an old lady"
I gave a small smile, not really a smile but an indication that she made me happy
for being there, comforting me.

She's brushing my back with towel with a flower pattern on it. We're clumped together inside the tub filled with warm water with my back against her.
"Nee, why me Acchan?" I asked. No response from her. She continued on rubbing my back.
"A girl, below average, short, introvert, weak, frail.." I continued "..you can go for boys, Im sure everyone will like you"
Acchan started singing in a low tone..a song from Gackt.

~~We can keep walking forever
Together, now and forever
This love I clutch close to my heart
Will never change, this one unique
“I love you”~~

In love, you dont question things. Why do you like her? Is it because she's nice and pretty? Remove the nice and pretty, will you still love her?  A well-known person once said “It's much better to say that you love the person because of an unexplainable reason, a reason that is like finding a needle in a haystack.” And I'm starting to believe her.

"When we were still kids Minami, you might not remember, you're the only one who played with me in the sandbox. We're complete strangers, yet you approached me. You said 'Why are you alone? Let's play together' Ever Since that day I tried to remember you. 'My name is Minami. Let's be friends' you said that too, but I forgot to introduce myself. Then your mom carried you away saying that you should be going now. There came middle school, I transferred to Wings of The Future, I was hoping that you were also studying there. Then my hopes are answered, you are studying there. I was scared approaching you because you might not remember me, so I did my best to go up the ranks; tried my best to be the ace, so you might recognize me, but you didnt remember. I've waited until high school, until yesterday. I took the courage to talk to you, but my feelings went on an outrage. I couldn't contain it, then I kissed you" Acchan recounted.

((((；ﾟДﾟ))))))) 高橋みなみ Ｘ 前田敦

[TakaminaBG]

No kisses!?! 
Please update soon SOON!!

[stepk]

cute history   

I like it, please update   

[miayaka]

You update so fast!!
I like you!!

~~We can keep walking forever
Together, now and forever
This love I clutch close to my heart
Will never change, this one unique
“I love you”~~

my fave scene~
looking forward for the next chapter!