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Offline takamae

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Re: newbie here OTL (Atsumina fic) Chapter 8 *update*
« Reply #60 on: January 19, 2013, 01:55:33 AM »
WHAT!!!! it's so freakin easy for them to break up
What's the matter with atsumina??  :angry:

Please....please...make them made up  :bow:  :bow:
Thank you :)

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Re: newbie here OTL (Atsumina fic) Chapter 8 *update*
« Reply #61 on: January 19, 2013, 04:50:31 AM »
WHAT!!!! it's so freakin easy for them to break up
What's the matter with atsumina??  :angry:

Please....please...make them made up  :bow:  :bow:
Thank you :)


my fics are so short so i've been pretty much trying to pack things up to finish the story (the whole story) fast..sorry about that  :sweat:


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Re: newbie here OTL (Atsumina fic) Chapter 8 *update*
« Reply #62 on: January 19, 2013, 05:08:46 AM »
wait..what?!!? no way!! takabaka WTF are you doing?!.... -_______- my atsumina heart

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Re: newbie here OTL (Atsumina fic) Chapter 8 *update*
« Reply #63 on: January 19, 2013, 11:43:55 AM »
OMG, can't wait for the next chapter~

Go Taka~Tomo :D

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Re: newbie here OTL (Atsumina fic) Chapter 8 *update*
« Reply #64 on: January 19, 2013, 03:07:25 PM »
whatt ??! Why it's flow soo fastt ? I mean, your story is great, i really enjoy that, but why it's seem like the final chapter is coming up faster than i thought :(
please made up all stuff, acchan and takamina deserve a clear explaination.

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Re: newbie here OTL (Atsumina fic) Chapter 8 *update*
« Reply #65 on: January 19, 2013, 03:47:31 PM »
WHAT!!!! it's so freakin easy for them to break up
What's the matter with atsumina??  :angry:

Please....please...make them made up  :bow:  :bow:
Thank you :)


my fics are so short so i've been pretty much trying to pack things up to finish the story (the whole story) fast..sorry about that  :sweat:



As long as in the end astumina forever :)
Sorry.... but I just love them, still you are the writer so it's up to you
I can only hope  :bow:

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Re: newbie here OTL (Atsumina fic) Chapter 9 *update*
« Reply #66 on: January 19, 2013, 06:24:20 PM »
They already broke up!?  :angry:

Minami~ don't be like that  :panic:

Acchan! do something! :panic:

Please update soon~  :bow:
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Re: newbie here OTL (Atsumina fic) Chapter 9 *update*
« Reply #67 on: January 22, 2013, 01:20:23 PM »
Wah.. Minami is heartbroken about that...

Well Tomochin is taking advantage of Minami's weak state...

What are you doing Minami... snap out of it...

Well can't wait to see the next

Thank you for the update

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Re: newbie here OTL (Atsumina fic) Chapter 9 *update*
« Reply #68 on: January 22, 2013, 04:07:54 PM »
Why? Takamina why dont you chasing Acchan? :banghead: :banghead:
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Re: newbie here OTL (Atsumina fic) Chapter 9 *update*
« Reply #69 on: January 25, 2013, 06:48:59 AM »
Chapter 10

"Nee Minami, do you want to go out today?" Tomochin said while undoing the wrap of the bento I brought "The doctor said that I will be discharged today, right?"
I opened the blinds of the hospital room. The weather's nice on a cold Sunday morning.
"Lemme think about it Tomochin. You shouldn't push yourself too much, okay? Besides, there's a lot of no-class-days this week" she gave me that too-cute-to-disregard pout. I really wanted to go, but she needs to recover.


It's been two days since. Acchan, what happened? I kept asking what happened that day. I know that it was all just a miscommunication, why does it have to end up like this? I thought I found someone worth keeping. I thought that every day's a perfect day, but I guess nothing's perfect right? My heart is still hurting. It hurts so badly.


"I'll just go outside Tomochin.." I turned my back on her, hiding my eyes that are starting to burst in tears.
"Okay" Tomochin answered "Please make it short, don't make the food wait"


Is it too late?
Is it too soon?
Or
We're just not the right fit?


It's 3 in the afternoon. I started fixing her things, since her parents is out-of-town because of work. They asked me to watch over Tomochin until they come back.
"Nee Minami"
"What is it Tomochin?" I asked.
"Take me somewhere later. Please?" I guess she really wants to go out. "Even if it's just for a while"
I guess it wouldn't hurt to say yes.
"Okay okay" I gave her a smile.

I'm pushing her wheelchair she's been sitting on. 'She hasn't fully recovered' said the doctor earlier.
It seems that there's a small bazaar over the park, so we decided to go there. There's a lot of people, it seems it's a Xmas bazaar.
"Nee Minami, can we look around for a bit?" she asked
"Sure Tomochin. But we should go home after a while ok? It's getting dark already" I answered.
She nodded happily.

We stopped at every shop that we see. There's a lot of wonderful yet strange things that are being sold. We tried some food that are new to us like cabbage flavored ice-cream that is surprisingly good, chili-flavored candy from Mexico which is sweet instead of spicy and a whole lot more. We laughed and smiled at each other. We shared each other stories that are quite nostalgic-like. I completely forgot everything that happened the other day, thank you Tomochin.

Suddenly, fireworks shot up to the sky in synchronized patterns and motions. We both looked up in the beauty of the sky that is glittering above us. I took a glance on Tomochin's entranced look, she looks cute and her lips are still pouting. This memory, I will surely recall this constantly. She made me happy, I hope I made her happy as well.

"Tomochin"
"What is it Minami?"
I gave her a kiss on her cheek.
"I'm happy, I hope that I made you happy tonight"
She stood up and she wrapped her arms around me.
"Thank you Minami" she whispered

"Tomochin.."
"Minami?"
"I could get used to this."
"Get used to what?"
"To what are we doing right now. This hugging and kissing"
"..."

I closed my eyes and kissed her lips under the color-filled sky.

Soon these feelings that I still have for 'her' will fade like the seasons.

Sayonara..


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Thank you for reading and for supporting this fic of mine. I'll be ending this fic in a matter of chapters. What do you think will happen in the following chapters guys? :)


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Offline Haruko

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Re: newbie here OTL (Atsumina fic) Chapter 10 *update*
« Reply #70 on: January 25, 2013, 07:09:55 AM »
DAFAQ!! what da hell are you doing?!?! .. O_O

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Re: newbie here OTL (Atsumina fic) Chapter 10 *update*
« Reply #71 on: January 25, 2013, 07:22:42 AM »
DAFAQ!! what da hell are you doing?!?! .. O_O

gomen gomen :(

but wait for the next chapter.. ; A ;


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Re: newbie here OTL (Atsumina fic) Chapter 10 *update*
« Reply #72 on: January 25, 2013, 07:27:30 AM »
so... Takamina really break with Atsuko and go out with tomochin :dunno: :dunno:
well.. I have no problem with that coz I like Takatomo too
Thank for update and waiting for you :byebye: :byebye:
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Re: newbie here OTL (Atsumina fic) Chapter 10 *update*
« Reply #73 on: January 25, 2013, 08:25:53 AM »
takamina had broke up with acchan for two days but now she's with tomochin ? Minami looks like a player for me. o_O

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Re: newbie here OTL (Atsumina fic) Chapter 10 *update*
« Reply #74 on: January 25, 2013, 09:27:29 AM »
Speechless and mad  :angry:

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Re: newbie here OTL (Atsumina fic) Chapter 10 *update*
« Reply #75 on: January 25, 2013, 09:31:52 AM »
Eh?! Takamina and Tomochin didn't waste time lol

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Re: newbie here OTL (Atsumina fic) Chapter 10 *update*
« Reply #76 on: January 25, 2013, 01:09:21 PM »
WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING!?! AtsuMina broke up!? :scolding:
My heart broken!  :ptam-hbk:
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Re: newbie here OTL (Atsumina fic) Chapter 10 *update*
« Reply #77 on: January 25, 2013, 03:04:07 PM »
That was fast...

Tomochin and Takamina are a couple already?!

my Atsumina  :on speedy:

Bring back my Atsumina!  :angry1:

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Re: newbie here OTL (Atsumina fic) Chapter 10 *update*
« Reply #78 on: January 25, 2013, 07:15:54 PM »
And if acchan discover this.  :O
acchan will be mad.
Atsumina come back.

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Re: newbie here OTL (Atsumina fic) Chapter 10 *update*
« Reply #79 on: January 26, 2013, 04:51:59 AM »
Atsumina is gone...

TakaTomo is here.... well I can understand Takamina being with Tomochin but honestly... Takamina think....

Hope Takamina relies everything before too late... one of them going to be hurt.. whether is Tomochin or Atsuko...

Anyway, great update... Thank you... can't wait to see the next

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