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Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 6 [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui+more]
« Reply #60 on: February 08, 2013, 11:41:00 AM »
yeah... great update as always....Thank you

Wah.. Mayu really likes to play trick on Black...

By saying to takamina that she needs to 'thank's' someone... it means she needs to kiss that person's cheek.

Black was very suprise... I think...

Atsuko and takamina are together... they are introducing themselves... good 1st step... can't wait to find out more....

So Rena (Geki) was adopted by Jurina's parents... and left home after that... but why Jurina live with Miichan cs...?

More think to find out...

Can't wait to see the next update

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Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 6 [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui+more]
« Reply #61 on: February 08, 2013, 12:01:17 PM »
kyaaaa!! XD
nice update!!! :inlove:
thank you!!thank you!!thank you!! :bow:

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Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 6 [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui+more]
« Reply #62 on: February 08, 2013, 01:29:08 PM »
so Rena and Jurina are sisters but not related blood

Mayuki&WMatsui
Jurina is my oshi forever!! (>w<)/
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Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 6 [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui+more]
« Reply #63 on: February 08, 2013, 02:13:40 PM »
yeahh, please put acchan pov!
I like your atsumina scene, but i still didnt know what will going happen to their relationship, i feels like acchan being a mother and minami is acchan's young daughter ahahaa
need more story about wmatsui also~

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Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 6 [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui+more]
« Reply #64 on: February 08, 2013, 04:11:26 PM »
Thank you! I want more of Wmatsui!  :)
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Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 6 [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui+more]
« Reply #65 on: February 08, 2013, 05:26:07 PM »
you should put Acchan's POV
I want more Atsumina moment :)
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Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 6 [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui+more]
« Reply #66 on: February 08, 2013, 05:46:10 PM »
Thank you for this update!

It was funny!! Acchan like Takamina...

Black is so idiot!!
Mayuki = Cutest couple



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Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 6 [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui+more]
« Reply #67 on: February 08, 2013, 10:55:54 PM »
they are so sweet
Waiting the moment
when minami now fall in love   :wub:
I like dream  XD

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Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 6 [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui+more]
« Reply #68 on: February 09, 2013, 05:07:00 AM »
ATSUMINA
For LIFE!!!
Thank you for the update..
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Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 6 [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui+more]
« Reply #69 on: February 09, 2013, 11:10:12 AM »
so I'll put Acchan pov for the next chapter!!  :hehehe:
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Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 6 [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui+more]
« Reply #70 on: February 10, 2013, 09:19:45 AM »
So jurina is rena sister,yuki is mayu bodyguard,and acchan is err...something related with takamina maybe LOL


LoL its funny fate,i waiting when rena meet jurina
Black will confused why her friend have relation with mayu friends,first takamina and now jurina


Thank for the update,want the next chapter
RENA-SAMA!!!

YUKI-SAMA!!!

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Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 6 [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui+more]
« Reply #71 on: February 10, 2013, 09:04:11 PM »
Everyday atsumina!!!
I know Im flooding comments but i cant resist it before i go to sleep!

im waiting for the scene where taka falls for her beloved  :heart:
i love your fic!


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Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 7 [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui+more]
« Reply #73 on: February 14, 2013, 09:13:46 AM »
Chapter 7

flashback

Acchan’s pov

I couln’t stop thinking about this girl...
Arrgghh!!!
I keep walking and walking to anywhere my feet lead me to.
Then, I realized that I already near the playground...
I don’t see her shadow here...
Wait, what am I thinking?
Uggghh...
I close my eyes trying not to think about that girl but then… I heard someone’s sobbed.
Where is this sound comes from?
I look around and I saw a small girl...
She sits on the ground while putting her knees to her chest and buried her head to her arms…
I know that figure…
From the ribbon on her head I already know it’s her...
I felt like my feet moves on its own to the girl,
I took a deep breath before I asked her…
I don’t know why I felt so nervous right now...

“Are you okay?”

The moment she  look up at me, my heart start to beat faster, but her eyes, her brown eyes makes me feels warm inside…
“I’m scared…”
She tells me. Her arms still on her knees.
“Why are you scared?” I asked her again.
“Mayuyu left me…” said her sad.
Mayuyu? Who is Mayuyu? Maybe her friend that day...
Or her guardian…?
What should I do now?
Maybe I should comfort her first.

“Hmm…Mayuyu will not leave you…maybe she just going to buy something...” I said to her.
She just looked at me.
Hmmm…maybe I should buy something for her...
Candy maybe?
That’s what people always do to make a kid stop crying or to make them happy right?
She’s not a kid… but I think this will work...
“How about we go to buy something for you?” said me to her.
“But I don’t know you...Miichan said don’t talk to strangers” said her.
She’s really innocent…
“Okay, my name is Acchan…and your name is?” Asked me.
“Takamina...”
“Well, we know each other now right?” asked me again.
“Un.” Answered her.
“Don’t worry, I’m a good person. We go buy food first then we come back here okay?” tell me to convince her.

Yeah...a good person you are~

She nodded.
“Come on.” I extend my hand to help her to stand up.
“Let’s go.” I said to her.
I was about to let go of her hand but she held my hand tight.
I feel happy when she tightens her grip on my hand.
Maybe I should just let her be.
Then we walk to buy candy.

When we walk, she keeps asking me nonstop...

She asks me happily...

Acchan, what is your favorite food?
I just answered whatever comes to my mind...
Then she starts telling me about her favorite foods…

Acchan, do you like ice cream?
Food again…

Acchan, can I play with you after this?
I just nodded to her…
She always with her wide smile on her face…
I love seeing her smile though…

Seeing her smile like that makes me forgot about other things, my problem, work,
about the real Maeda Atsuko, the world I’m in right now,





*At Miichan’s house

Mayuyu and Takamina just arrived. Black already went home after sending them.
“Non-chan! Non!” Shout Takamina happily seeing her younger sister at the living room.
“Ah! Oneechan!” replied kanon the hugged her beloved sister.
Mayuyu took off her bag and put it on the couch.
“Ne…Non-chan, today I met new friend, her name is Acchan! She is so nice! Look! She buys me candy!” tell Takamina
happily to her while showing the candies.
“Really? She is soooo nice...” said Kanon.
“Un!”
“Okay,*sniff**sniff* you smell bad oneechan...let’s take a bath!!” said Kanon while smelling Takamina’s body.
“Take a bath??” asked Jurina with smirked who suddenly come out from the kitchen as she hear Kanon.
All of them look at each other’s including Mayuyu who also smirked.

“Let’s take a bath together then!!!” shout Mayuyu then run to the bathroom followed by Jurina, Takamina, and Kanon.

Their bathroom is quite big so they always take a bath together.
It’s not just taking a bath that make them so excited,
it’s because they are playing around in the bathroom, making a bubbles,
rubbing each other’s back, singing in a loud voice ignoring their neighbors
, dancing, jumping, like a kids, even though there is already a kid there..

Then, Lovetan and Miichan just arrived.
They heard the noise in the bathroom.
“Did they take a bath together?” asked Miichan looking at Lovetan.
“It’s not fair!!! They didn’t wait for me!!!” said Lovetan then she run to the bathroom leaving miichan.
“Wait, I want to join too!!!” shout Miichan.
Of course Miichan doesn’t want to be alone...

The readers want to join to??  :kekeke: Teehee~




Meanwhile

Somewhere else.

A girl with a tomboyish look walking towards one of the room and knock on the door.
“Come in” tell the person inside.
She come in and the sit on the chair. The looks like an office, there is a table,
 two chairs in front and a big chair that the man is sitting facing his back to the girl.

“What did you got there?” asked the man.
“*grin* Watanabe Mayu, the only daughter of Watanabe Hiroshi, currently still studying at Sakura High School...” tell the girl.
“Hmmm...” the man while showing himself to the tomboyish girl and smirked.
“I heard that her relationship with her father is not going well.. and currently she lives with her friends.” Tell her again.
“Thats a good news...I can easily bring down Watanabe Hiroshi like this” smirked the man.

“But...there is a but.. hehe.. I think Watanabe Hiroshi has hired a bodyguard to guard his daughter,
a woman bodyguard.. I think he knows already your plan.” Said the girl again.
“I see...so he try to protect his daughter this time..*smirked* lets see if that bodyguard is that strong enough to protect her..” said him.

“then, where is my pay?” asked the girl.
“Tsk...i will transfer the money to your account. Don’t worry, you still have other works to do for me... Sae..”
“Well, I can do any work you ask me to..as long as there is a payment for that..” smirked her.
“Of course...I will give anything you wish.. as long as you did your work..” said the man also smirked.
“So...what should i do next?” asked Sae.

“Hmmm...I want you to keep watching over that Watanabe Mayu, and beware of her bodyguard,
we don’t know yet how strong is her.. maybe, you could become a friend with Watanabe Mayu, that would makes our plan easier..” explained the man.
“no problem...thats easy...Sae can do anything you know..” smirked Sae then she got up and got out of the room.

“as long as you gave me money..” thought Sae while smirking.




t.b.c

sorry its short update~ hehe
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« Last Edit: March 24, 2013, 08:55:33 AM by chiqinna »

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Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 7 [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui+more]
« Reply #74 on: February 14, 2013, 12:08:49 PM »
thanks for the update... XD
i'm looking forward for the update..~
yoroshiku ne~ :bow:

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Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 7 [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui+more]
« Reply #75 on: February 14, 2013, 01:05:45 PM »
Thanks for your update :bow:
They take a bath together...Seem fun :onioncheer:
Sae in this fic is a bad guy, intersting  :wahaha:
Hope you'll update soon!!!
I look forward it  :on woohoo:
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Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 7 [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui+more]
« Reply #76 on: February 14, 2013, 02:00:44 PM »
thanks for update :)
I want to join too :cry: :drool:
Sae appear :O
I'm waiting for your next update :bow: :bow:
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Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 7 [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui+more]
« Reply #77 on: February 14, 2013, 05:44:53 PM »
uhh acchan you love minami  XD
sae   :w00t:
thanks for update  :thumbsup

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Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 7 [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui+more]
« Reply #78 on: February 15, 2013, 02:32:04 AM »
aww atsumina.. :B

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Re: You Are My Sunshine - Chapter 7 [Atsumina,Mayuki,Wmatsui+more]
« Reply #79 on: February 15, 2013, 02:36:49 AM »
Thanks for the update!!! Great chapter :)
Atsuko and Minami are so cute *__*

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