Author Topic: Sin & Punishment [Miyazawa Haru:Sins are forgiven. Agony as Punishment] (Read 7160 times)

mayuyuXlyukirinlover13 · « **on:** January 21, 2013, 11:59:53 AM »

Hello bro Readers! this will be my first SaeYuki Fanfic so please Comment and Enjoy. And just like the others it's always a Short Chapter.

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File Name: BLACK and WHITE

Patient's Name:Kashiwagi Yuki

Age: 21 years old

Birthday:July 15 1991

Date Entered: August 18 20XX

Room No# : Rm.20

Mental Condition: Unstable

Physical Condition: Stable

Diagnosis: Self-Injury Dissorder,Hallucination,Multiple personality Dissorder(2) & Depression Dissorder.

Reasons:As her Mother said She Kept changing personalities and voice when she was a Child & she kept Talking to her own.
Due to Continues Bullying for the past 12 years she has been having a more agressive side Personality and has been Inflicting Pain
to herself With or without Concious, and along those years she has been Hallucinating a Figure that she describes 'My Twin'.
And Also due to the Fact her Father Died her condition worsen until she was put in the Hospital(Asylum).

*Beep* ...... *Beep* ....

The sound of a heart Monitor Echoes inside the room. The room has 1 bed, A drawer, A big Mirror and a Window over looking the city.
The color of the Room was White. White Walls,Bed sheets, Pillows. Everything was White. And there was a Girl Lying down on the bed

Wearing Also a White Hospital Gown, She looked like an Angel just sleeping.

*Beep*......... *Beep* .....

Kashiwagi Yuki the so called "Black" and also "Angel" she has been in the Asylum for nearly half a year due to her Condition.
She has been alone. No one to Talk to. No one to see... But her 'Twin'.

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I'm Gonna leave like This for a While, I wanna know if you Guys are curious that's all

mayuyuXlyukirinlover13 · « **Reply #1 on:** January 24, 2013, 01:32:58 PM »

I wanna ask here um... Do you guys want me to continue this??

RenaChii · « **Reply #2 on:** January 24, 2013, 01:49:14 PM »

please continue~

Kazan · « **Reply #3 on:** January 24, 2013, 01:55:35 PM »

Yeah you have to continue

mayuyuXlyukirinlover13 · « **Reply #4 on:** January 24, 2013, 02:59:23 PM »

Well....While you readers wait for the Update please read this other FanFic I made.

http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=34672.msg1144565#msg1144565
http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=34684.0

ScarletWings · « **Reply #5 on:** January 24, 2013, 05:06:50 PM »

omg u're leaving with that huge cliffhanger???
of course i'm curious, sae hasn't even showed up yet omg lol
please continue this fic

wsama · « **Reply #6 on:** January 24, 2013, 11:48:51 PM »

Yes! Please continue this fic!! x3

kuro808 · « **Reply #7 on:** January 25, 2013, 08:07:52 AM »

This is very interesting

mayuyuXlyukirinlover13 · « **Reply #8 on:** January 25, 2013, 10:21:14 AM »

Again for the meantime please read my other Fafics while I try to update

mayuyuXlyukirinlover13 · « **Reply #9 on:** January 25, 2013, 12:49:24 PM »

and oh yeah here's one of my Fanfics too, an Atsumina one

http://forum.jphip.com/index.php?topic=34752.0

mayuyuXlyukirinlover13 · « **Reply #10 on:** January 27, 2013, 04:40:30 AM »

H-h-hows it goin Bros? I'm back with the update

before that this story is based on vocalod's song "Tsumi to Batsu" or ""Sin and Punishment" this version is the Girl's point of view (The nico nico chorus version)

<---- watch this and you'll know how the story goes.

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"If you only had ears like mine, then I would sing a song to you....would you hear me...?"

Kashiwagi Yuki is now 21 Years old. She's been inside the Asylum For nearly half a year. She was sent there to be cured of what they think is Abnormal and what she thinks is Fine.
The Girl has Raven black hair, A slim silky smooth and white body, Her eyes are like her hair black but beautiful, But this Beauty was locked up in a room which is pure white not like her
Supposedly called 'Twin'. Yuki was a Kind Girl,Sweet,smart,Shy, and cheerful.her father died due to a cardiac arrest which took a more negative effect in her mental state.

Her 'Twin' is Like her but her personality differs. She is Negative,smiles or enjoys others misery, says the truth (the painful one). She is beautiful like yuki but Her heart is black and so are her

words.Buts sometimes she cares for Yuki, only when "HE" is around.

she always Hurts yuki with her words she makes her realize things negatively which leads to yuki locking up in her room and fights with each other until yuki cuts herself. Before she was sent to the Asylum she had a Relationship with a boy, the boy was also her bestfriend since middle school but until 4th Year in Junior high both confessed and started going out.

the boy was always a very Cheerful guy,Cheesy on words, Sporty,Smart,Protective and Truly Caring about Yuki.He'd always pick her up when they went to school and drop her off when they'll go home together. the boy Loves her so very much.Yuki's 'Twin' has grown fond of him and Lessens the pain towards yuki. They've been together for 3 months before she was sent to the asylum. but one day she almost committed suicide fro some reason then almost attacked her own family, reason why she was brought to the asylum.

Yuki Slowly wakes up,she opens her eyes and blinks for a couple of seconds soon she sat up.she slowly took off the blanket and left her bed. she went to the near by window. The heart monitor

kept on going, Yuki was attached with wireless patches for her heart this way she could roam freely within her Room but she has a stand and a morphine attached to her wrist where her veins are and where the blood flows stronger. she soon moved to mirror and stared at herself...

"I wish--" Yuki was Cut off by someone Wearing a Black hospital gown and looks exactly like her.

"You wish to see him...? hahahah don't make me laugh you no brainier, he's not coming not today not tomorrow not ever!"

Yuki Bit her lower lip just contain the sadness of the truth she has been told. she look at her "He's Coming...I know he'll come!" the other one replied in a cold, cruel tone
"Your parents didn't come, your friends didn't come neither your so-called boyfriend will come! you keep on saying the same things over and over again! he cheated on you! he lied to you! He has no reason to VI-SIT YOU!". Yuki covered her ears and drops on her knees.

"Shut up..."
"He's never gonna come!"
"Shut up...!"
"He doesn't love you anymore!!"
"Shut Up!"
"Oh wait...He NEVER LOVED YOU"
"Just shut up...!"
"He betrayed you! Played with your feelings! he looked at you like his own toy!"
"Shut up! Shutup! Shut up!!!"

Tears rolled down Yuki's cheeks.She becoming more paranoid each day that passes. she looks aroung for anything that she could use to calm her down. suddenly a shard of glass from the Mirror broke. she took the glass and slowly slashed her wrist (Far from the vain where one will die if it had been sliced or cut deeply). heavy breathing can be heard from her. and drops of blood flowed down to the floor soon she calmed down. she held her gown on the chest where her heart is. she looked up at the figure on the mirror. 'Why....' she said in her mind then the girl in the mirror said "Because it's fun...to see you die of misery hm~" she giggled then disappeared.Yuki Cried. 'H-he'll come...I know he will....' she thought.

A Nurse arrives with her Breakfast,but as soon as she saw her she quickly placed the food onto the table of the patient. she grabbed the near by Emergency kit and did first aid on her wrist. Yuki was spacing out. she didn't care if the nurse is there all she could think of his him.

----End of Part 1-----

So how was it? did you Like? if you guys did Please leave a comment

kuro808 · « **Reply #11 on:** January 27, 2013, 04:49:09 AM »

I like the fact that the two sides meddle with each other. One body two sides awesome

mayuyuXlyukirinlover13 · « **Reply #12 on:** January 27, 2013, 08:08:31 AM »

I'm Glad you Like it ^^

fuu_kun · « **Reply #13 on:** March 01, 2013, 05:49:21 AM »

Pwease continue. TwT

kiruchi · « **Reply #14 on:** March 01, 2013, 07:32:24 AM »

Who's the guy? And (i assume) that Yuki has an interacting dual personality?
Interesting. Pls. Update.

mayuyuXlyukirinlover13 · « **Reply #15 on:** March 01, 2013, 12:50:05 PM »

Sorry if I haven't updated this Fic

It's just that I'm Stuck with Studies

fuu_kun · « **Reply #16 on:** March 01, 2013, 06:30:22 PM »

TwT dont forget le tokyo dome fanfic too :"D me love happy family <3

K-popJ-popAWESOMENESS · « **Reply #17 on:** March 09, 2013, 09:58:34 PM »

Please update~!!

mayuyuXlyukirinlover13 · « **Reply #18 on:** March 10, 2013, 01:02:19 AM »

I'll try to Update from 2 weeks from now since Finals are here and I
'm stuck studying

mayuyuXlyukirinlover13 · « **Reply #19 on:** March 18, 2013, 04:45:48 PM »

"If you only had a Heart Like mine I would...fill it with my love...would you...Feel me...?"

It was now evening, yuki was in her bed asleep. But there is someone beside her. it's her 'Twin' . her 'twin' is considered BLACK in many ways.
Yuki always calls her 'Kuro-chan' because of it.

Yuki awoke at 2 am...Restless. her thoughts raced into her mind. Will he come? Does he still love me? What If I just Miss understood? Those were the many questions within her Worried little head as she stood and walked to the window to look at the night view,but once again her thoughts was disrupted
by Kuro... "Are you that damn Serious? hahaha don't make me crack a bone laughing...he left and he will forget you...so forget that so called 'boyfriend' of yours!" . Yuki looked down and frowned...and just looked out of the window.

The Busy Streets, Lights of Cars still around even at that time. City Lights was illuminating Akihabara, but No Sound was heard
Within the Room, As Yuki Scans the Area she looked down and saw Him walking. She wanted to shout and she did.. "Haru!!! Haru!!!" She bangs the Window
Hoping he'd Notice her, "Don't waste your breath, even if he did see you he'd just walk away from you and never come back" Yuki ignored her and Continued. She drops down to the Floor on her knees and Kept banging on the Window.

"Haru! Please! Turn around!! I'm right here!! Please...." The boy Looked up. His ands were in his Pockets,his clothes were ruffled up and his hair was slightly a mess as if he went through a Struggle. He saw Yuki on her knees and crying.

"Haru!!" Yuki yelled... But he can do is close his Eyes shut tight...Bit his Lower Lip...and Run away from Yuki. Yuki cried more.... "Haru...please don't leave me here...Haru come back...I'm lonely..."
The tone of her voice softened and weaken....Then Kuro Sat beside her with a frown and soften eyes...Kuro is never Like this Except When she sees yuki In too much Pain since what yuki feels...She also Feels as well.

Kuro Strokes the Girl's hair and spoke in a soft voice...

"I told you..he's not Coming back for you...Even if he does come back even if you say 'I still Love you' ... Nothing Will ever change. He won't love you... He never loved US from the very start...So just Give it up...You saw him run right? so please...Let it go...You Can't go on like this...I Can't go on like this..." She hugged the Sorrowful girl and Yuki Hugged back and cried on the shoulder of her
Twin....
-----------After a few Hours---

*Heart Rate : 60 beats

The room was filled with Sun light due to the fact it's 8 in the morning, Yuki woke up with her Eyes slightly Sore because of crying last night...she found herself in the bed.
"H-how did I get here on my bed...?" then the door opened revealing a man wearing a white lab coat,glasses, under the coat he wore a long sleeved Polo that has a diagonal pattern. the cuffs were unbuttoned and was rolled up a bit,he also wore a necktie perfectly tied and it's pattern was black and silver,he also wore
Black slacks,belt and shoes to match his uniform.

"Oh good morning Kashiwagi-san" the man greeted Yuki with a smile as he entered the room with a tray of
Pancakes with butter and syrup and a glass of orange juice.

"Go-good morning Dr.watanabe...." she greeted him unsurely. "I made you some breakfast, it's your favorite" he said as he walked towards her. he placed the meal on a table beside her.

"How did you know it's my favorite meal every mornin doc?" she questioned him. "Your mother dropped by early this morning and told me to take care of you Like she always did to make feel a bit happier" He lied to her. The truth was Haru told him 2 in the morning but he had a scuffle with the security guards Watanabe talked to Haru then soon Haru left the facility.

"Oh I see..." Yuki said. "Well Eat up~ I'll be checking on you later" Watanabe said as she headed to the door.
"Thank you" She said "It was no big deal" Watanabe replied and left the room.Yuki Happily ate the Pancakes the doctor made....then she was overcome by someone...it was Kuro...

"that doctor...is hiding something from us....I don't trust him..." Kuro said in a cold like voice and yuki replied from inside "He seems to be a nice guy...I don't think he'd harm us..."

"Yeah...Right...It's like you said when you Met Haru...."
". . . " Yuki was Quiet then... "Well...Can I finish my Breakfast please...?" she asked her twin "Fine Whatever" then she lets Yuki eat in peace for once.

-----------After Breakfast----
*Heart Rate: 53 beats

Yuki was looking outside the window again,thinking...She then remembered something...
She walked towards her Bed and took something under her pillow...It was a Cat hat...it was given by Haru when
They first Went on a date.She Wears it on her head...then she remembered that...She'd always wear this when Haru and her goes on a date...

she fixes it and walked to the Mirror...soon she fixed a bit and place her hand on her chest....She remembers all those sweet moments they shared together...The laughter...Smiles...everything...but now her heart is filled with nothing more than empty space...She clutches her Hands on her chest...Her heart Slowed down...it beats heavily... Then in front of the mirror...was Kuro...Kuro's eyes filled with Bitterness...they were colder than her heart...a wicked smile appeared...then she Slaps Yuki hard... then Disappeared ...

"It hurts...It really hurts you know...haru...."

----------END OF PART 2-------------