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Re: Clueless guy ever!!! (KAIXACCHAN) NEW Chapter 3!
« Reply #20 on: February 20, 2013, 10:01:07 PM »
Eh.... Ray is also here in this fic... Wah... is there love triangle by any chance with Ray-Kai-Atsuko?

Going to be interesting to see if there is one...   :drool:

Atsuko is jealous every now and then with Mochi especially.

Eh... Atsuko kissed Kai... They get to see each other half naked....  They are loving it :wub: :inlove:

Riku and Yuko seem to like each other... may be in love... (but 'no dating' rule is an obstacle)

Ah... Mariko and Kuu seem to be interested to each other...

Yeah... what are they going to do with their love life...?   :?

Are they going to quit AKB to be with their lovers?  :?

How their love life developing next?  :?

What's going to happen next... can't wait  :drool:

Thank you for the update

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PS: fausto, thank you for telling me... that the hour was fine... just not in English way.... I understand what you mean then.

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Re: Clueless guy ever!!! (KAIXACCHAN) NEW Chapter 3!
« Reply #21 on: February 20, 2013, 10:22:53 PM »
3 words... great great great!!!  :inlove: I really like your story!  :wub:

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Re: Re: Clueless guy ever!!! (KAIXACCHAN) NEW Chapter 3!
« Reply #22 on: February 21, 2013, 12:49:18 AM »
Awesome ! Why do I sense that Kai got a job at the city and no longer see Acchan, few years then only meet again at the concert ~~ !!

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Re: Clueless guy ever!!! (KAIXACCHAN) NEW Chapter 3!
« Reply #23 on: February 21, 2013, 02:21:11 AM »
wow many things happen.. first maritroll is teasing everyone love it!! and kuuuuuuuuuuuu!! hell yeah

OMG kojiyuu are the best!!! I want touch riku too :B so badly :B

Jejej  Acchan kiss kai but kai doesn´t kiss her back.. jeje aww takaboy you are so  clueless.. and we love you for that :B... Love your fic :B keep going

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Re: Clueless guy ever!!! (KAIXACCHAN) NEW Chapter 3!
« Reply #24 on: February 21, 2013, 03:54:21 AM »
ohmygod.....
Kissu :on gay:

Fausto i dont like ur fic!
I LOVE IT!!! :banghead:

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Re: Clueless guy ever!!! (KAIXACCHAN) NEW Chapter 3!
« Reply #25 on: February 21, 2013, 05:46:27 AM »
so many good things happening in this fic
i love it
Yuko is sucha pervert  :lol:
Kai and Acchan's relationship seems to be going in a great direction
Mariko is interested in Kuu... i wonder how they will turn out

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Re: Clueless guy ever!!! (KAIXACCHAN) NEW Chapter 3!
« Reply #26 on: February 21, 2013, 06:23:38 AM »
Another kiss!! Another kiss!! Please!!

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Re: Clueless guy ever!!! (KAIXACCHAN) NEW Chapter 3!
« Reply #27 on: February 21, 2013, 01:20:03 PM »
Acchan kiss Kai!! Really fast!!  :hiakhiakhiak:
What!?!? Ray x Kai x Acchan x Mocchi!?!?  :mon scare:
Yuko and Riku like each other...or love? perhaps?  :hehehe:
Wow! They saw each other half-naked and kissing!!!  :luvluv1:
I LOL and love at the same time at that mail scene :mon inluv:
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What happened to "No dating rule"?!?!?  :shock:

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Re: Re: Clueless guy ever!!! (KAIXACCHAN) NEW Chapter 3!
« Reply #28 on: February 21, 2013, 11:44:04 PM »
great fic I want the next please :)

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Re: Clueless guy ever!!! (KAIXACCHAN) Double update chapter 4 & 5!!
« Reply #29 on: March 05, 2013, 11:45:03 AM »
Hello, I'm back, sorry I didn't have internet for a while because I was in Berlin. SO!! UPDATE!!! :lol:
@Kurosawa87: Mariko is so funny, but maybe trolling is dangerous sometimes^^
@Cisda83: I love to read your comments about the fic, thank you for being so much into it, it makes me feel really happy :) Please keep reading it :bow:
@Sofylerry: A big thank you to you!!
@Sydney W: Yeah, why not? But that's not exactly what I've planned :P I have to admit that I don't really like waiting for years in fics to gather characters again  :smhid
@Haruko: Yeah, I want to touch Riku too, well more Kai but that's okay :twisted: Yeah Kai is clueless but I admit that it's funny and charming :panic:
@Chichay12: I'm waiting for your comment everytime I update  :inlove:
@Koyiyuu44: Thank you for your interest for my fic :twothumbs
@Chemicalstar: Kiss huh? Maybe... :P
@Correneyes: Sorry that you had to wait, here it is!!
@Mae: Thank you very much!



Chapter 4


KAI


 Today I don't feel so well, I have to spend the entire day in school because we have class about the project and more. I didn't really sleep a lot since I work at the theater and I begin to feel weak...
Riku has a match tonight and after it, him and Yuko have some secret plans, and Kuu has a gala night in a big restorant, so I'm all alone tonight.
"Kai, are you sleeping again?"
"Ah, sorry Ray, I was thinking."
She sits next to me and smiles.
"You should rest."
"I can't, I have to work" I sigh.
"Handsome and poor, this is sexy" she giggles.
I don't know much about Ray, she's a rich girl because her father has a big company, and she is in the same class as me. She talks to me since the first day and always saying nice things about me. It's weird...
I don't have much friends at school because I go home right after class and Riku and Kuu are enough to me.
"Do you have time for a coffee now?" Asks Ray as she gets up.
"Hm, not really, I'm late on the project so I have to work at the library, sorry."
"Well... I'm a stubborn girl so, one day you will go out with me Takahashi Kai!^^"
She laughs and leaves, I don't know why she wants to go for a drink so much with me...

The rest of the day is boring, I'm not concentrated today, and I don't have enough ideas for Morphosis like I had when I worked with Atsuko. Maybe I need her for that...
When I think about it, I only want to call her by her first name since I've started, it suits her so well!
She kissed me that night. I didn't tell anybody yet, I don't know if I can, this is probably a mistake. She was feeling bad and I helped her, that's all. Why she would be interested ina guy like me when she can have anyone? Or nobody because of the rule... I can't imagine a sec that she is non sense. But it was so crazy, her lips were so perfect on mine, the kiss, I could feel her body, so hot and close to me. This was like a fantasm...
"Young man, we're closing."
"Eeh?!"
I stop daydreaming and understand that the woman is kicking me out of the library.

The day is ending when I go home, I decide to eat meat and pastas because I need strenght. But before, I go to Riku's bedroom and do some exercices on his bench. For the basketball he has to maintain his physic and he allows me to borrow his material when I want.
I practice for about an hour until my muscles are begging me to stop and go shower.
Because I'm alone, I walk in the appartment in boxer. I eat my meal watching an action movie on my computer, I like to be alone sometimes.
As I finsh my pastas, the doorbell rings.This must be Kuu who has once again forgot his keys. I go open the door, ready to make fun of him when she appears.
Atsuko...
I freeze when I realize that she is at my door, in front of me, and that I'm...half naked!!! I blush like crazy and she seems to do the same when she sees me.
Calm down man, you can't freak out or you'd be a fool...
"Hello...Acchan...Give me...2 sec" I say very slowly as I step back and go to my room to dress up.
It's okay, you did well, she didn't notice anything. I come back in the living room with a white shirt and jeans. She had close the door and is standing there.
"Are you okay? How do you know I..."
"Yuko told me. Riku..."
"Ah, yes. Hm, do you want to drink something? Coffee? Tea?"
"Tea, please."
"Okay, sit."
She does and I prepare the tea.
"I'm sorry to show up like this, I'm not even supposed to..."
"No, no, it's okay. Do you need something?"
"Ano..."
As she speaks, the flat phone rings, I don't pick up since we have an answerphone.
«  Kai-kun!! I'm with Riku right now, great right? ANYWAY! Did you see the pics of Acchan's photobook that I sent you today? It's so hot right??! I sent you them 'coz without you I wouldn't have met Riku, so this is my gift!^^ Sweet dreams midget!! »

I don't know if I can be more ashamed than right now in my whole life...Yuko, I'm gonna kill you!! This is so embarrassing...
"Kai?"
"Y-Yes?"
Atsuko gets uo and comes closer to me while I'm finishing the tea
"Did you see it?" She asks in a soft voice.
"Hm...Yes."
"And?"
"And what?" I give her the mug, trying not to shake.
"Did you like it, baka?^^"
"...Of course..."
I step back, I don't want to be near her or it could became obvious that I loved this pictures.
"That's it...K-a-i?" She whispers as she comes even closer, I can feel her breath on me.
Atsuko, don't be such a tease...I beg, I can't really control myself.
"KAI, I'm here!!"
Oh thanks god, Kuu is here! And he seems...drunk. Acchan quickly steps back and drinks her tea.
"Oh, you're not alone! Maeda-san!! Gorgeous, as always!! Right Kai?"
"Kuu, are you drunk?"
"Oh, I think so dear, the client offered me drinks so..."he smiles like a fool.
Atsuko seems to be amused by this, Kuu sits on the couch and sighs.
"I've cook two hundred « Blanquette de veau » tonight...so Kai, no katsudon today..."
"It's okay" I laugh, "you already did five times this week!^^"
"What? Five time? It's your favorite dish or what?" Asks Acchan.
"Exactly!" Smiles Kuu. "You do that and Kai loves you for the rest of his life^^"
"Hm... Good to know" smirks the tall girl as she looks at me.
I blush and try to find a way to escape this situation.
"Maeda-san, do you think that Shinoda-san likes me?"
I open wide eyes, I didn't know that he likes her.
"You can call me Acchan, and...I don't know; Are you interested?^^"
"Yeah..." he smirks. "She's classy and very funny, such an hot body... I could cook her something..."
"Ah, Mariko loves food, this is definetly the way to seduce her" she laughs. "I think you have your chance, Kuu-chan."
"Kuu-chan? Wow, Acchan, you're so sweet...It's only because Kai is my friend that I stay out of the game!"
He quickly falls asleep on the sofa, Atsuko drinks her tea and gets up, smiling in such a cute way.
"Well, I have to go, it's late."
"Wait, you didn't tell me why you came" I say following her to the door.
"It wasn't very important, I was just..."
She seems sad, I can see it in her eyes. I can't hold it.
"Atsuko, are you okay? You are sad..." I caress her cheek.
She looks at me with cute eyes, I can't resist her. I remember her soft lips... I kiss her softly while my heart is burning into my chest, those sweet and pink lips... I close my eyes, I can't separate her lips from mine. I kiss her again as she answers, this is a perfect moment.
When I step back, worried about her reaction, she seems shocked, I don't know if it's good or bad.
"Atsuko...I...Sorry, you seemed sad and..."
"…"
"Sorry, I'm sorry.  Don't be upset..."
"…"
"Okay, hm, let me take you home, it's too late to walk alone."
I quickly take the keys of the motorbike and drags her out. I'm very worried about her, why doesn't she talk to me...?




ATSUKO

The wind is waking me up, I need to regain my spirit. My arms are around Kai's body wile he drives. I didn't speak since he kissed me, I was so surprised and stocked that I couldn't say a word...
I feel good here, and I don't want it to end. The smooth drive, the night and the fresh air are perfect, I feel melancholia and security, happiness and serenity.

I sigh when I saw that we arrive at the building. I don't think yuko will be there, and I'm worried to be alone in there. Kai turns off the engine and helps me to gets up. I give him his helmet back and smile.
"Thank you."
"You're welcome, I don't want you to be alone at night..."
He smiles, he's really handsome at the night ligt like this.
"Okay, goodnight Kai."
"Goodnigt Atsuko, sleep well."
As I open the door, a pervert squirell jumps on me, screaming.
"YAA!!!"
"Yuko" I laug, "you're already here?"
"Yes, Riku drove me home twenty minutes ago."
"Really? Was it fun?" I ask as I take off my coat and shoes.
"The match was exciting! Riku was awesome! He won!"
I'm amused by her mimics, I look at her jumping accross the room.
"This boy is really great, I tell you! And you? Where were you?!"
"Hm, Kai drove me ome too, I was at his appartment."
I see a pervert sparkle in her eyes, I'm screwed.
"Serioulsy?! What happened??"
"Nothing. I saw Kuu, he's interested in Mariko!^^"
"Really?^^ Riku said that he was only interested in cooking."
We smirk, amused to see Kuu's parade on Mariko in advance.
"I'm going to bad, I'm sleepy, I say as I go to my bedroom."


I was sad tonight talking with Yuko, and then I went to see kai, he comforted me and kissed me. I know it's going to be a mess, but I want to try to know him better; I really start to like him a lot...


From: Kai
To: Acchan
Content:
Try not to be sad
like this again. It
hurts me. You're
made for smile
everyday.
Sleep well.



Yeah...It's gonna be hard not to fall in love.









CHAPTER 5



KAI


"I don't know man, this girl is different...She's always too excited and says too many tings but... she's funny and great!"
"So, you want to date her?" Asks Kuu with a smile.
"I think so, but she can't so...We'll see."
"Hm, I see wat you mean, I want to be with Shinoda-san, I'm gonna call her today."
I listen to them as I hurry up and eat my breakfast, I'm late at school.
"Boys, don't forget that they're from AKB, so forbidden!"
"So funny Kai, you were the first with Acchan."
"Yeah, yeah, I'm going!" I say as I leave the appartment and take the moto.

I only have school tis morning, and then I go to the theater for five ours. «  Morphosis » is going well but I still have a lot of work to do, the plans and the proposition, budget...
I park the engine and notice Ray that is waiting for me in front of the entrance.
"Hello Kai, late again!"
"Yeah, I didn't sleep well... How are you?"
"Good, I wanted to speak to you."
"Okay, do you mind if we speak as we go to class?"
"No, no."
I have to admit that I'm more concerned about being in class at time than by Ray speaking, but of course, I don't say it.
"So, what is it ? Do you need my help ?"
"Hm... You could say that..."
I sit about the project ? Because I don't think that...
"Kai, do you love me ?"
"Eeh ?! What ?" I ask as I freeze.
"I said, do you love me ? Do you want to be my boyfriend ?"
She looks so calm asking me this...Such a direct girl.
"Ano...Ray...I-I... This is..."
"Yeah, I think that you don't."
I feel relief, don't need to answer that then, conversation must be over.
"But, I have a proposition for you" she continues.
"A proposition ?"
"You don't love me. You are the perfect boyfriend : smart, hot and kind. But you're desperatly poor. I want you to be my boyfriend, and I'm rich. Do you understand ?"
"N-Not really..." I mumble, afraid of her plan.
"Simple. I pay you to be my boyfriend. 60 000 yens per week."
"What ?! Pay me ?! 60 000 yens ?!"
I'm so shocked that I look like a fool, this girl wants me to fake a relationship for money ? Like an escort boy ?!
"I know this might sound offending but you don't want to be with me but I want you, and you need money, that I have. This is a good deal."
"B-But... If I don't love you, it's fake. That doesn't bother you ?"
"You know Kai, I'm a rich girl, alone and sad. With you by my side, it will be less sad. Give me the illusion. Nothing much : dates, dinners, movies and hold my hand. That's it."
Wow... I can't believe it. Ray is a nice girl, sometimes funny and pretty but she's not my type, too superficial. I don't know what to say...
"I know it's shocking for you, but I let you until noon to decide. This is an exclusive offer. Don't be late !"
She leaves me to enter the room before me. I go sit at my desk and try to recover my mind. Ray wants to give me 60 000 a week to date her. Yes or no ?
NO : I don't love her/ She thinks I'm a toy/ i can't kiss her like that/ I can't accept money for this/ This isn't right.
YES : I need money/ This is not so complicated/ This is well paid/ I could buy presents for atsuko/ I'll make her happy.
Raah, what am I thinking ? What should Riku do ? No, wait, Riku would have date this girl already... And Kuu ? No, Ray wouldn't ask him... Shit, what should I do ? I have my studies and rent to pay, and the work at the theater is not enough, I don't want to start my future as a poor boy. I don't really have the choice here, I need this « job ».

"So, what did you decide ?" Smiles Rays as she walks next to me.
"...Okay, I'll do it."
I'm not proud of me, I even feel a little dirty, but I try not to think about it.
"How long ?" I ask watching my feet.
"Dunno. As much as I want to ; or as you can handle it^^ But you don't have the right t be sad okay ?"
"Sure" I force a smile and stop at my moto. I need to got to work.
"Okay, I see you at the theater when you're done, okay?"
"'kay."


God... What did I do... ? I hate being so dependant with money, this is always a way to have troubles...
I do this one week then I try to find a second job.

Kaoru is not here today, I'm just with Taku and Yuka, two other staff members. We have to clean and prepare the practice room first, and check the electronic stuff.
"How are you, Kai ?" Asks me Taku with a smile.
"Good, but girls are evil" I sigh.
"I heard you^^" says Yuka with a smirk.
"Sorry for that..."
"No worries, you're right, we are too complicated."
I like Yuka, she is older than me and she always has something nice to say to me. She's like a sister to me, something like that...

We go in the practice room and I take off my sweat to clean the mirrors, so i'm now in a white tank. As I wash the surface, I notice someone in the reflect, at the corner of the room. Atsuko.
I turned back and smile to her. She's wearing the Beginner dance outfit, white and translucid shirt, black skirt and black make up. I try hard not to droll because she's so gorgeous like a fantasm. I'm afraid I'm getting hard right in front of her.
"H-Hello... Atsuko."
She smiles and walks towards me. This must be a dream.
"Hello, Kai. It's nice to see you."
"…"
Those lips, the eyes in black, the aura around her...
"Are you okay ?" She whispers at my ears.
"F-For now yeah..."
"Good ! By the way, I brought your shirt. Sorry, I spent the night wearing it. I think it smells like me now."
Calm down Kai, don't try to imagine Atsuko naked in your shirt...TOO LATE !!
"Are you picturing it ...?" she smirks.
"W-What ?!No !!"
"Hm...Too bad... See you !"
She leaves...like that ?! « Too bad » ? What do you mean ? I knew it, girls are evil ! I don't get it... Atsuko is a teaser, I know that, but what's the point with me ? She didn't like that I kissed her adn now she's teasing me. That must be revenge. I have to ignore it or she's gonna do it again.
Okay Kai, new plan, ignore the gorgeous Atsuko.
Easy...right ?




ATSUKO


"Is it me or he's wearing a white tank ?"
"Yes, Mariko."
"Is it me or you have a weakness for guys in white tank ?"
"Yes, Mariko."
"Is it me or you have a weakness for Kai ?"
"Mariko..."
"You forgot the « yes » Acchan^^ Aah, I love this story, the Ace and some sexy and young technician..."
"Don't say that ! Stop joking around, and Kuu ?"
"What about him ?"
"Did he call you ?"
"Yes. He wants to cook me curry rice."
"And... ?"
"And I said yes, it's always a free curry rice^^"
This troll is so silly...^^
I warm my muscles before practicing, in two days I have a team A stage, I need to review the choregrapies.
When I come back in the practice room, Kai is not there anymore. I feel a little disappointed but I need to focus on work.
Dancing is making me feel ggod, I'm not sportie but U love to dance, it's a way to free myself, and I can express without words.


I dance  for three hours with the team. I feel great and excited when I go in the change room. As I want to go eat something, I receive a phone call from my manager from my manager.
«  Moshi moshi ?
Maeda-san, takeshi desu. Can we meet tomorrow, I have a drama offer for you.
Really ? Sure!^^
Okay, let's eat together tomorrow. Have a good day, Maeda-san. »


A drama offer ? This is great, I really want to succeed in being an actress. As I walk through the corridors, I slow down when I see Kai in the material room, checking the mics. I come into the room silently.
"Kai ?"
He gasps and turns back to me.
"Ah, Atsuko. Are you okay ?"
Yes, actually my agent just said that I had a drama offer.
"Really ?" He smiles. "This is great ! Congratulation !!"
"Thank you, I'm happy to be able to act again !"
"I'm sure you will be great, Atsuko."
I smile to him, I think it could be the right moment to do something.
« Kai, I know you think that girls are evils, but there is one very pretty here for you^^ - aah, eeh, thank you Yuka – Yes, Kai, don't make your girlfriend wait ! »
I freeze hearing this girl's voice on the walkie-talkie. I look at Kai with eyes wide open.
"Sorry Acchan, I have to go...Do you want to accompany me, you are going home right ?"
"...Y-Yes. Hm...Kai, why Yuka said that girls are evil ?"
"Ah, nothing^^ This is silly..."
We arrive in the hall and I see Yuka with a girl talking to he. When she sees Kai, she smiles brightly and doesn't listen to the older girl anymore.
"Kai !!"
She jumps in his arms and hugs him. I feel the fire on my cheeks as I see her all over him, my heart beats like crazy and I realize that I'm really angry.
"Hm...Hello again Ray. How are you ?"
"Better now !!"
Better now ? That's how I feel when he's around...
"Maeda-san ?! Wow, I love you ! I mean, sorry, you're my oshimen !"
Shit...She's one of my fan, fans are gods for idoles, I need to be polite. Atsuko, don't think about this idiot anymore.
"Thank you very much" I bow.
Yeah, well, that's all I could do. I'm very angry.
"Acchan, this is Ray, she's in my class."
"Yes, I'm his girlfriend, right baby ? Well, can you offer me a ride home ?"
"Sure..."
As I look to Kai, I see that he blushes and acts weird. But I don't care, I just want to stop him right now.
"Okay, let's go ! Have a nice day, Maeda-san."
I smile and look at them leaving, this guy is a fool. Why did he kiss me if I already has a girlfriend … ?
Maybe we don't know each other since long but I thought he was honest...
This is a bad day, I have to call the girls, I don't want to be alone tonight. Maybe we could cook together.
I have to forget about all this.


Voilà!! Tell me what you think, please  :bow:




 


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Re: Clueless guy ever!!! (KAIXACCHAN) Double update chapter 4 & 5!!
« Reply #30 on: March 05, 2013, 12:28:31 PM »
ill be back to give proper comment  :thumbsup

@Chichay12: I'm waiting for your comment everytime I update  :inlove:
 

kyaAAaaaaAA!!!
i really love all ur fic!!
so weather u like it or not..i will comment!!XD
ATSUMINA FTW... :heart: :heart:
ray using all her money go get kai..tsk.... :on kimbo:
i think ray really loves kai..he just using kai financial problem to get what he want..
DAMMED YOU RAY!!

fausto-san~~
thank you for the update!!
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« Last Edit: March 05, 2013, 01:10:49 PM by Chichay12 »

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Re: Clueless guy ever!!! (KAIXACCHAN) Double update chapter 4 & 5!!
« Reply #31 on: March 05, 2013, 12:31:31 PM »
Damn!! Thank you for double release!!!!!  :banghead:
Whoooa! MORE KISS!!!! :drool:
I hate Ray!!  :angry: that is bribe!!! DX
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Re: Clueless guy ever!!! (KAIXACCHAN) Double update chapter 4 & 5!!
« Reply #32 on: March 05, 2013, 12:54:32 PM »
nooooooooooo ray will break the pure love of atsuko and kai!

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Re: Clueless guy ever!!! (KAIXACCHAN) Double update chapter 4 & 5!!
« Reply #33 on: March 05, 2013, 05:53:29 PM »
WOW. Thanks for update!! I almost get crazy to wait for it. It's too long, author-san!
Okay, let's talk about the story!!

I REALLY LOVE THE KAIxACCHAN moment!!
Please make another moment like this author-san!!

RAY!! WHO DO YOU THINK YOU ARE???!!! Arrrgghh I hate it when it comes to The Rich Ray!
And.. why does Kai being so fool?!
Well I think that he want to be with Acchan, but thinking about the AKB'S rule, maybe he just 'sigh' and thought that to be with her is impossible too.. maybe that's why he took the offer from Ray.

POOR ACCHAN... Kai was a fool. He dumped Acchan without noticing it!
But don't be sad, Acchan. Kai needs you to reach his dream!

KAI CAN'T WORK PROPERLY FOR MORPHOSIS WITHOUT YOU. HE NEEDS YOU. HE WILL BE BACK TO YOU!!! GO KaixAcchan!!!!

And OMG, I wonder what happened to Yuko and Riku.

I hope that in the next chapter Kai will realize what he choosed was wrong. acchan doesn't need his money, and he just hurted acchan's heart. he has to be though with Ray.leave her!!

WAIT!! Talking about the next chapter, you said it's a double update. but where's the 5th chapter???!!! come on update it! yeah yeah

By the way, thanks for the update!! please update the next chapter sooner (don't be too long like this one). You know that a lot of people are waiting for your story, author-san!!
« Last Edit: March 05, 2013, 05:58:52 PM by chemicalstar »

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Re: Re: Clueless guy ever!!! (KAIXACCHAN) Double update chapter 4 & 5!!
« Reply #34 on: March 05, 2013, 06:03:30 PM »
Ouch that had to hurt for acchan

Kai made the conscious decision but truthfully he really needed to consider in being poor and happy XD

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Re: Clueless guy ever!!! (KAIXACCHAN) Double update chapter 4 & 5!!
« Reply #35 on: March 06, 2013, 03:32:16 AM »
OMG!! Kai you are a idiot!!! ... Aww I love atsuko when teased Kai :B.. yeah! I want a jelousy acchan rather an sad acchan, fight for you husband!

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Re: Clueless guy ever!!! (KAIXACCHAN) Double update chapter 4 & 5!!
« Reply #36 on: March 06, 2013, 05:57:52 AM »
Thank you for the 2 chapters

Ah... Kai is so clueless as to why Ray wants to talk and go out with him... it's so funny

Eh... he might not be so clueless about his feeling for Atsuko... since he seems to day-dreaming about Atsuko.

Kuu is asking for Mariko already.... he is going to start making his moves soon enough

Eh... why did Atsuko seem so sad...? and silence after the kiss that they shared?

Ah... Atsuko is scared to fall in love with Kai, even if she is already there...why? coz' of her career or trust?

Oh My.... what kind of guy is Kai... I understand that he needs the money but being paid to date someone.... is like an escort...?

I don't think Atsuko is going to be happy when she find out that the presents that she would get from Kai is from the money that he earned fake date someone.

And Ray.... is she so desperate to be with Kai... that she doesn't care that Kai used her for money...? She should just try to move on... as Kai said... she is very pretty and rich... any other guys would be happy to be with her, even love her... she doesn't need this fake boyfriend thing...

I hope one or both of them relish this arrangement doom to hurt and trouble themselves and others.

Yup... as I thought... that arrangement that Kai had with Ray is going to back fire him somehow.... now Atsuko thinks Kai is a player... or trying to two-timing both Ray and Atsuko.

Poor Atsuko... I think she is going to try to move on.

Kai, you better tell Atsuko the truth if you want a relationship with her in the future and cancel the arrangement that you have with Ray without taking any of her money.

What's going to happen next... I can't wait to know

Thank you for the double update... it was interesting and great as usual

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Re: Re: Clueless guy ever!!! (KAIXACCHAN) Double update chapter 4 & 5!!
« Reply #37 on: March 06, 2013, 11:18:42 PM »
Thank you for update this double chapter is so great
Please update soon :)

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Re: Clueless guy ever!!! (KAIXACCHAN) UPDATE CHAPTER 6
« Reply #38 on: March 12, 2013, 05:01:44 PM »
Hello, sorry for the wait, I tried to update as fast as I could  :)

@Chichay12: You're so true about Ray, can you pay to get what you want...dunno, maybe I could pay for a dinner with Acchan  :nervous :panic: Please comment this one too  :bow:
correnereyes: More kiss huh? Let see...maybe :P I want more too^^
Minami-chan: Yeah Ray is a problem for their love... :twisted:
chemicalstar: Sorry to make you wait each time  :cry: Thank you for being so in the story, and yes it was a double update but I forgot to write "chapter 5" in the text :nervous
kurosawa87: Being poor is difficult, he's too stressed to live like that...^^ thank you for reading!
Haruko: You have the same taste than me, so I hope that you're satisfy each time you read my fics :nervous
cisda83: I think Kai is always really dense, and Acchan is sad because it's hard to deal with AKB and love...For the kiss, I think it blew her mind and she couldn't really talk after this  :D Thank you agin for your comment :thumbup
mae: Thank you to you too :)2


Chapter 6


KAI



« Hey guys ! » I say as I enter the flat, Kuu and Riku are again playing video games together. Those guys are real geeks...
« Hey man, come and sit ! »
« So, what's up ? » I ask sitting in front of them, resting a little, I'm too tired today.
« Oh, Riku doesn't stop talking about how great Yuko-san is great and pervert... » sighs Kuu while Riku is smirking.
« Really ? Tell me about this » I say smiling. I want to hear about that, it's interesting to see Riku into a different girl.
«  Well...I don't know what to say Kai, she's funny and athletic... » He stop talking for few seconds and then smiles like a fool « Last time, we were here, and I was playing on my psp, I was really into it you know, and Yuko was calling me for few times. Because I didn't answer, she suddenly lifted her shirt to show me her boobs, trying to get attention ! This was so great man, you see, I love her way to see things, she's not a prude but she can be sexy... »
« I see. It's good, you seem really into her. » I'm truly happy for him, but it keeps bothering me. «  But don't forget that she's an AKB girl, it can be dangerous to bring her here, you're not supposed to have access to her. »
« Yeah, tell me about it, you were the first flying around an AKB member^^ »
«  I'm not flying around anyone... »I pout « By the way guys... I have a girlfriend now... » I say blushing. I don't really now why I'm telling them this, but this is hard to keep this for me, I'm still feeling guilty.
« WHAT??! » screams Kuu as he stands up and shakes me. « You have what ??!! »
« Easy... I said I may have a girlfriend. Well, more like I'm a boyfriend now. It seems... »
Riku puts the game on pause and looks at me with a question mark on his face.
«  What ? So you have a girlfriend or not ? »
« Ray asked me to date her. But I wasn't interested... So she proposed me to pay me to be her boyfriend. »
« ... »
« Please say something, it's already hard... » I beg, it's an akward moment ;
« Pal, you're unique^^ » laughs Kuu. « Why are you doing it ? The money right ? »
« Right, she's paying me way more than the theater, and I can deny this is not an hard job... But I feel bad about this, it's awkard. »
« Dude, do you have to sleep with her ? » asks me Riku with a big smile on his face.
« Riku ! You're such a pervert ! Of course not ! »
« Wouldn't be bad, Ray is a pretty girl... » he shrughs his shoulders.
« Yeah, well, she's not my type... » I pout.
« Right, I forgot, your type is only Maeda Atsuko^^ »
I blush, I don't mind that Riku is joking about that, I know it's never mean. But I'm embarassed that it's so obvious about Atsuko, I feel like a teen fantasming on the perfect idol seeing on TV.
« And you Kuu, how is it going with Shinoda-san ? » I ask tochange the subject.
« Hm, I'm planning on asking her to eat a curry rice with me, at her home. » he says with a satisfied smile on his face.
« Wow Kuu, this is direct ! Well done man ! » laughs Riku.
« Good for you, she is a great girl. Well, I need to go to sleep boys, see you later ! »
I go to my room and try to sleep, not thinking about all the latest events in my life.


KUU


I try not to be too nervous when I knock at Shinoda-san's door. But it's really hard...
Atsuko gave me her address and now I feel like an idiot being here with my receipe, trying to avoid anyone in the street because I'm not supposed to be there.
The door opens and I see the surprise on her face.
« Minesgishi-san, what are you doing here ? »
« Ano, hello, Shinoda-san, I have a curry rice in this, I would like to know if you're interested... » I say, trying not to blush when our eyes meet.
« ...Come on in. »
I follow her and feel a little relief when the dorr is closed. The house is really clean and beautiful, a lot of pictures on the wall and all over the furnitures.
« Are you done ? » smiles Shinoda-san.
« Ah, yes, you do a lot of pictures, like on twitter right ? You're a passionate. »
« You follow me on twitter ? » she smirks.
« Maybe... » I pout.
She smiles and show me the kitchen where I put the curry.
« You didn't have to cook for me you know, I'm not foodless^^ »
« Didn't say I've cooked for you, it's only that I've made too much so... »
She seems amused by my cold tone, I don't know how to behave with her, but it seems like a game to her. She warms the dish on the microwave and I take this occasion to look at her closely. She wears a weird dress, black and white, with a really stylish line.
« Did you do this dress ? »
« No, why ? » she frowns.
« It's just that it's different and beautiful, you could have been the creator since you like to create clothes... »
« ...So, are you hungry ? »
I swear, she just blushed.
« Yes^^ »
I look at her spinning around the kitchen table like a fairy.
« Do you know Kai for a long time ? »
« Hm, actually he's my roomate for 6 months now, so is Riku »
« He seems nice » she says as she gives me some curry rice and sits at the table.
« He is, the perfect boyfriend »
She eats a bit of my dish, I'm so nervous of her reaction that I stare at her, trying to figure out what she is thinking.
« You're not eating?Is it poisonned ? Is Yuko paying you to kill me?^^ »
I laugh and take my fork.
« I'm just waiting for you to start. Do you like it ? »
« It's delicious ! »
« Yatta, the queen is happy » I smile, really relief.
She smirks and leans toward me.
« Are you gonna cook for me everyday ? » she asks with a husky voice.
« ...If so, you should pay me for that. »
« Money again ? I knew you were a bad boy... » she fakes a sad sigh.
My phone rings and I pick up after apologizing.
« KUU !! »
I isolate the phone from my ear as Yuko screams.
« Kuu-kun ! I know you're with Mariko ! In her house ! »
« Oshima-san ? How do you know ? »
« Well, Acchan knows, Tomochin knows and Yuki knows. After a little bit of...physical torture, by the way Mariko, Yuki's boobs are really the best, well she told me and tadaa !! »
« Okay, what a story ! Do you want some curry rice ? »

Mariko laughs as she listens to our conversation.
« No ! Listen to me Kuu, Mariko is an old and alone funny idole, so could you please do something ? »
« Hm... »
I look at Mariko, it seems like she's waiting to see what I'm gonna say. « Surely Shinoda-san doesn't have your beautiful brest but she looks youger than you, and she seems to enjoy my food so, I think she's gonna do something for me »
« Aaah I see, you're already scared of her...Gentleman Kuu, could you pass me Mariko please ? »
« Sure »

I give her the phone and finish my rice as she speaks with Oshima-san. I can't say what they're saying but Mariko has a malicious smile on her lips so I fear the worst.
She finally hangs up and give me the phone back.
«  Thank you, Kuu »
« My pleasure. Okay, I'm going, I work at 6am so...and you must be tired. »
I get up and take my coat.
« Okay, thank you for the meal. It would be great if you would do that again...sometimes. If you do,   I could give you something. »
« ...Something like what ? »
« Hm...Maybe... » she leans on me and gets closer to my lips, I can feel her breath on my mouth. I close my eyes as she's gonna kiss me. « Something like that... If you cook well... »
Wow...She didn't kiss me, so Mariko is a sadistic teaser, huh ? Well, that expected...And I love that^^

I go home with a big smile on my face, I'm defintely in love with her.



ATSUKO


« So basically, they want you for the first girl rôle in the drama. You would play Yamagushi Megumi, a young girl who starts her first job as a cook in a good restorant. There is competition, problems and some happy moments, as always. What do you think ?
« Yeah sure, this is great ! »
I smile, drinking ly orange juice. I'm at my meeting with my agent, Takeshi-san. We are talking in a nice little restorant and I can't help but being excited about this new drama.
« So you would start in a week, and you're closest partner is Sato Takeru, do you know him ? »
« Hm...I think I see who is he. »
« Okay, the I call the director tomorrow and I'll tell you if it's still okay, and all the details okay ? »
« Great, thank you very much ! »

When the meeting ends, I decide to go so some shopping alone, it will cheer me up and I need some time alone.
I go first in my favorite clothes shop^which sales only unique pieces, they knowme and are really nice to me.
« Hello, Maeda-san, welcome to our shop ! »
« Hello ! How are you ? »
« Fine, thank you. I let you look at the clothes. »
I nod and walk in the store, singing « Flying get » with a low voice.
« Hello, Atsuko »
I gasp, recognizing this voice. I almost  lose the dress I have on my hand, seeing the person in front of me.
Kai.
« Hello »
« How are you ? » he smiles.
Looking at him, I see that he wears a long sleeves white tee-shirt and a black pant. Because of the V-neck shirt, I can see his nape and collar, this is really beautiful. This is one of the prettiest part in a boy body.
« Atsuko ? »
« Hm ? Ah yes » I could be used to you calling me by my first name. Only you do that with that weet tone... « What are you doing here ? »
« Ano... » he blushes « Hm... I need to buy something for... »
« Ray, right ? Your girlfriend » I say with a cold voice.
He frowns and look at me with a sad glare.
« Yeah...Tell me, do you have time to see the progress on Morphosis ? I would like to have your opinion. »
« I don't know...I'm starting my drama soon... »
I'm dying to say yes, all I want is to spend some time with him and work on his project. But I can't stand the fact that he is with a girl, he loves someone, he dates her and buys her some clothes...
« Oh, so you do it ? It's great ! I get it, you're too busy, it's okay. By the way, you're beautiful today, well, as always. »
Baka, stop making me compliments, this is worse.
« I have to go, bye » I say as I give the dress to the woman and leave the store.
I'm silly, I loved the dress and I... love this guy.




KAI



« Excuse me, hum, I would like to buy this dress, please. »
« This one ? The one Maeda-san left ? » asks the woman.
« Yes, actually I was looking for something that could be beautiful on her. And this dress, is perfect. »
Yes, i know, I'm a coward ? I couldn't tell her that it was all about her. She spoke about Ray and I remembered I was supposed to have a girlfriend. This situation is really weird, I don't like it but... at least now I've pay my rent and I can buy presents for Acchan.
I have to admit that I'm disappointed that she's no longer interested in Morphosis, but I can understand, she's an idol, and she is very busy lately...

I pay the saler and leave the the shop with the bag in my hand. Today is my day off, I came shopping with Riku's motorbike, I really love it.
I decided to exercice today, this morning I've work so now it's sporty time ;

After eating really light lunch , I do some muscular exercices for about two hours listenting to music. It's motivating me. My ipod is on random mode and suddenly « Kaze wa fuiteiru » music flows in my ears. I try to focus here without success...
I drink a full bottle of water and breath deeply, my muscle are henting but it feels good.
I scratch my ipod on my arm and go gor a footing outside. I'm gonna run in the park near home , it's gonna help me relax and think about something else.


The wind is giving me hard time, but I push on my legs and feel my body eliminating bad stuff.
While running, I lookt at this simple park and realize that I really appreciate it. It's because it's quiet, discreet, full of trees and with a little lake. There is no installation in it, just few benches where you can watch the birds on the water.
I want the kind of serenity for my project, like when you know that you're safe, comfortable and free. Like when you're in love.
Like when I think about Atsuko.
I can't deny that she is inspiring me for this.


When I go back home, I take the decision to invite Ray to dinner ; She's right, I need to be the boyfriend she is waiting for, I owe her that.

We eat in a italian restorant because i know she loves this food. She seems happy and I feel relief, this is an akward situation, I still don't know why she picked me, and I would be sad if Id disappoint her.
I drive her home and say her goodnight, kissing her on the cheeks.

When I finally fall onmy bed, Im' exhausted. Tomorrow, I work at the theater, I don't even know if she will be there...




The next part will be here soon, I already wrote it, I just need to tape it on my computer. Thank you to you all :)



 


 


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Re: Re: Clueless guy ever!!! (KAIXACCHAN) UPDATE CHAPTER 6
« Reply #39 on: March 12, 2013, 05:18:35 PM »
More misunderstanding/gap going between Atsuko & Kai. Oh my !!

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