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Re: Blank face ( chapter 11)
« Reply #100 on: June 06, 2013, 09:40:15 AM »
Omg.. What's gonna happen from now on?

So many things had happen and it's only the beginning?

Can't wait to see the rest of the story!

MAYUKI ~ YUKIRENA ~ ATSUMINA ~ KOJIYUU ~ TOMOTOMO♪

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Re: Blank face ( chapter 11)
« Reply #101 on: June 06, 2013, 09:49:58 AM »
Two updates since I read last... great

Yuki's boyfriend was such a jerk...

Poor Yuki, she was going to get hurt...

Poor Mayu... she could not do anything about Yuki or her feeling for Yuki

Wah... Mayu was so great... the way she made Yuki broke up with the boyfriend...

Making it believable that Mayu was taking Yuki's boyfriend...

She lost her best friend... and her chance to be with Yuki... for Yuki's own good...

Overall everyone moved on with their lives... and also Mayu..

She went out with Jurina... well even though not her 1st love but someone that had cared for her from the start...

Really more troubles from whom later? Yoshihiku or others?

Can't wait to see the next

Thank you for the update

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Re: Blank face ( chapter 11)
« Reply #102 on: June 06, 2013, 09:52:34 AM »
The beginning of problems?  :shocked
Are they gonna be hurt?
Anyway like the new updated
Pls updated soon!!!!  :wub:

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Re: Blank face ( chapter 11)
« Reply #103 on: June 07, 2013, 02:45:11 AM »
Poor Mayuyu, I really feel bad for her T_T

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Re: Blank face ( chapter 11)
« Reply #104 on: June 07, 2013, 04:05:58 AM »
Chapter 12



Years passed, I’m now 21 years old, I finish my college in peace with Jurina by my side, and also with the help of my friends. So many things happened in the past, like when I confess my parents about my sexuality. Of course they been shock, sad and mad. They even kick me out, but later then accepted me. That’s the first time I saw my father cried, yes, he cried for me. He cried for my forgiveness, he said, “he will never make the same mistake like his father did” yes my father been kick out in his early age, because he got my mother pregnant in the age of 18, After I accepted his apology, he also announce that I’m having a baby brother. Of course I’m happy, I’m having a little brother. Now I’m not the only one that gonna handle all of our family business.

In my second year of college, I finally introduce Jurina to my parents, And they immediate like her, with her charm and charisma. They even joke “when is the wedding?” it made me happy, and proud. Time by time I truly fell in love with Jurina. I take away her innocence, and she also took mine. We drown our self in passion of lust and love.

We face our problems with a smiling face, I help her study, and she also help me. We also go to the same college like our sempai did. But I never saw Yuki, Rena said to me, Yuki found herself a new lover. Miyazawa Sae a varsity player in a different school. I’m happy that she finally moved on, and found herself a new lover. I happy because she’s happy.

Once I finally graduated, my father let me handle some of our family business. I handle 3 restaurant here in Tokyo, two western style and one western-japanese style restaurant. I just need to make sure our business won’t go bankrupt. After that I can do whatever I want.  And also  when we finish our college, Me and Jurina buy a house and moved in together.

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When I wake up in I saw my girlfriend sleeping beside naked. I rubbed my eyes and do a stretch. But I guess that stretch make her woke up

“Good morning”

she said to me while rubbing her eyes, and hug me. I just look at her and kissed her cheek and replied to “Wake up, or you’re gonna be late for work”

“Tsk.. I don’t wanna go to work today”

she said and now kissing my neck. I push her away and said “Jurina you need to go to work, You’re hotel gonna have an event today”

“Mou I wanna sleep all day, with you Mayu”

I just get up from the bed and whispered to her “come on get up, Let have shower TO-GE-THER” then she immediate get up and drag me to the bathroom.

After that, we prepare our self for work. Jurina handle one of their family business, She manage a five star hotel here in Tokyo. Maybe that one of the reason my parents love her.

“Mayu let’s go on a date later”

she said, I just smile at her and nodded my head

“I gonna picked you up in 8”

she said, then kiss me on the lips, and said her goodbye. After that I also go to my car and drive away from my work.

Everything seems normal, our guest come in and have fun with their family and friends while having a delicious meal from us. My Oshiriko chan even visit me and have lunch with Nyan Nyan. Oh yeah after I go to college Yuko discover my likes for behind. And formed our self a group that we called oshiri sister.

“Nee Mayu-chan you look beautiful as usual, but not as beautiful as my Nyan Nyan “ Yuko said then smile at me

“Yuu-chan stop that” Kojima said, while smacking Yuko’s head from embarrassment

I just laugh at them, they seems happy like usual.  But my smile change when I saw a girl come and entered my store. The girl that became my best friend, the girl that cause me pain and made me fall in love. Yuko notice my expression change, and look at the direction that I’m looking. She just smile at me and patted my head.

“Mayu you’re already over her, right?”

she asked me, while Nyan Nyan just looking at me. I just nodded my head and smile at her.

The waiter greeted Yuki and offered her to have a sit. But then she notice Yuko and Nyan Nyan sitting in on the other table. So she came near us. I don’t think she notice me, Well since college my style and look change, I even change my hairstyle. I became more mature. 

“Nee Yuko, Nyan Nyan whose this cutie?” Yuki ask

Yuko and Nyan Nyan just widen their eyes and look at me. While I just look the other way, and trying to hide my face.

“Yuki?” Yuko ask, while giving her a awkward look

“yes?” Yuki responds while showing her smile

“You can’t be serious? You know her” Yuko said seriously

Then Yuki look at me closely then widen her eyes when she see me

“Long time no see Yuki” I said to her, while smiling

“You” she said, with a shock expression then run away from our table.

While she running away she bump into a another girl, but the girl grab her

“ahh Yuki you’re already here” she said

“Sae let go of me!!” Yuki scream at her

We stand up from our sit and come closer to them, when then Yuki got away from the other girls grip she run fast, without noticing that she’s near the road and a car heading too fast to her direction

“YUKI!!!”

I run, as fast as I can and push her away to the side. But then I saw a car heading towards me.

“MAYU!!!” I heard Yuko shout

It happened so fast, when I open my eyes I saw Yuki staring at me  with a shock expression while sitting in the side.  I feel pain all over my body, but this pain is nothing. It’s nothing compare when I first saw Yuki’s video in her ex- boyfriends room. That video crush my heart into million pieces, and I cried all night long just for that..

“MAYU!!!”

I heard Yuko’s voice again, I felt a hand grab me and I shut my eyes due to pain. And cough some blood

“Nyan Nyan call the ambulance fast!!!” Yuko shout again

I trying to stay awake but I can’t, my eyes suddenly getting heavier and heavier, until all I see is all black…. I let the darkness devoured me.
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END OF MAYU’S POV




hope you enjoy my season one minna


I think my season two gonna take a while, and Yeah thank's for all the comments minna

« Last Edit: June 07, 2013, 11:34:20 AM by -gibson-mayulover »

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Re: Blank face ( chapter 12) season one ending
« Reply #105 on: June 07, 2013, 04:17:56 AM »
NO!! Mayu can't die!

Omg! Pls update season 2!

Need to know what happen..

MAYUKI ~ YUKIRENA ~ ATSUMINA ~ KOJIYUU ~ TOMOTOMO♪

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Re: Blank face ( chapter 12) season one ending
« Reply #106 on: June 07, 2013, 04:47:46 AM »
Ah... so Mayu and Jurina already moved in together...

May be before long they might have gotten married...

Ah... Yuki was still unable to forget the betrayal that Mayu did to her...

Eh... Yuki was with Sae (a girl)?

OMG... Mayu got hit by a car just to save Yuki...

I think Mayu still liked Yuki... maybe even loved her... more than Sae....

Because for Yuki... Mayu dared to rush over to save Yuki....

Ah... Mayu still felt broken heart over the sex video she found in Yuki's ex-boyfriend computer....

What's going to happen to Mayu?

Would she be okay?

Would there be drama between Mayu, Jurina, Yuki and Sae?

What Yuki's reaction about Mayu's heroic act?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

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Re: Blank face ( chapter 12) season one ending
« Reply #107 on: June 07, 2013, 04:55:14 AM »
SHOCK :shocked OH MY GOSH~

:banghead: While i was reading a few paragraphs from the start i thought it's going to.be happy ending thank you then the moment Yuki came and recognizes Mayu then ran away and Mayu... she..got...hit...by...a...car..
:shocked :cry: :banghead: CLIFFY~!

Can't wait for season 2.. Take your time Gibson-san.. Will.be waiting for your return.. :thumbsup

Will Mayu survive the.accident? Will everything be okay?


Thank you :twothumbs  :bow:
« Last Edit: June 07, 2013, 05:09:17 AM by kenjoy12 »

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Re: Blank face ( chapter 12) season one ending
« Reply #108 on: June 07, 2013, 05:00:36 AM »
Hope Mayu survives to lead into the next season
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Re: Blank face ( chapter 12) season one ending
« Reply #109 on: June 07, 2013, 05:41:58 AM »
WHAT JUST HAPPENED!? why would you do that Mayuyuuu :pleeease:
you are so meanie  :tantrum:
I hope your next season is comingo soon. I want to continue reading your fic

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Re: Blank face ( chapter 12) season one ending
« Reply #110 on: June 07, 2013, 05:47:47 AM »
It would be nice if season 2 yuki POV

I want to know what yuki think about mayu's here
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Re: Blank face ( chapter 12) season one ending
« Reply #111 on: June 07, 2013, 05:48:09 AM »
omg mayu!! :banghead:
Season 2 where are you??
Pls update soon :on gay:

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Re: Blank face ( chapter 12) season one ending
« Reply #112 on: June 07, 2013, 05:49:33 AM »
Wow. It's rare that I read and actually really like a Mayuki fic, but then again, this has JuriMayu, my OTP beside WMatsui.

For season 2, I'm sensing amnesia. XD

Now the question is will she lose all of her memories or only till her high school years when she's still fully in love in Yukirin and forget her love for J. Well this is just a reader's prediction anyway. XD

Nevertheless, I can only see J's being heartbroken next season unless Rena miraclely break up with Airin. XD

As for Yukirin, I'm sure the rest will tell her the whole story and horribly feel guilty about it.


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Re: Blank face ( chapter 12) season one ending
« Reply #113 on: June 07, 2013, 06:17:26 AM »
So now Mayu and Jurina are living together they also did many couple things :on gay:
Maybe they're gonna get married :on drink:
Although Yuki's having a new lover- Sae but she still doesn't forgive Mayu for betray her :sweat:
OMG!!!! She reaction strongly when seeing Mayu and almost got hit by a car :stoned:
But Mayu has rushed over and save her :on woohoo:
Despite the fact that, Mayu'll gotten hit by a car instead Yuki :on cloudeye:
She thought it doesn't hurt as much as when she saw the video of them making out in that jerk computer :on chew:
NO~~ Mayu don't die :pleeease: Just make her lost all her memories or just her high school's time and the times with Yuki, gibson-san :kekeke:
Can't wait to see season 2 :scared:
Update it soon, please :gyaaah:
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Re: Blank face ( chapter 12) season one ending
« Reply #114 on: June 07, 2013, 06:42:48 AM »
MAYU!!

JURINA WILL BE SAD HERE,WELL NOT JUST HER.

LET SEE,UMM...
EVEN THOUGH MAYU ALREADY MOVE ON,BUT SHE STILL CARE ABOUT YUKI,SHE SACRIFFICE SOO MUCH,HER FRIENDSHIP,AND EVEN RISK HER LIFE

I WOULD BE DISAPPOINTED IF YUKI THREAT HER BAD AFTER WHAT MAYU'S DO FOR HER.

MAYBE ITS TIME FOR YUKI TO KNOWN THE TRUTH.
THATS WHY YUKI POV NEEDED HERE.
BUT I DONT WANT YUKI GET MAYU EASILY,I WANT HER AT LEAST TRYING HARD TO WIN MAYU HEART.
BECAUSE EVEN MAYUYU STILL CARE FOR YUKI,SHE TRULY IN LOVE WITH JURINA TOO,MAYU SPEND MORE QUALITY TIME WITH JURINA ,EVEN LIVING TOGETHER AND ALL STUFF THEY DO.

AND,BESIDE,I THINK JURINA WONT LET YUKI TO CLOSE WITH MAYU ANYMORE,NOT BECAUSE MAYU'S IS JURINA NOW.

I SENSE THAT JURINA WOULD MAD AT YUKI,ITS HER FAULT AT ALL,

YUKO AND THE OTHER WILL SURELY TOLD YUKI THE TRUTH,WELL MAYBE HEHE

ITS WOULD BE SHOCKING NEWS FOR YUKI,



CANT WAIT SEASON 2j

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Re: Blank face ( chapter 12) season one ending
« Reply #115 on: June 07, 2013, 07:07:06 AM »
Mayu has an accident!!!!  :shocked

Mayu's parents just had their daughter back but now Mayu got into accident!!!!! She will be useless than before!!!!

Jurina sure will kill Yuki because her action and caused Mayu into an accident!!!!

Anyway thanks for the new updated!!!!

Are u continuing the Royal Academy?

Hope the new season is coming soon!!!!

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Re: Blank face ( chapter 12) season one ending
« Reply #116 on: June 07, 2013, 09:27:45 AM »
well well well so it's the end of the season 1  :glasses: first I want to tell you thank you for this great FanFiction  :hee:                                                         
even that you played with my emotion so much  :fainted: And sorry about the fact I didn't make a proper comment always I don't have really the time  :err:
you know I'm really no surprised to see at the end that Mayu jumped to save Yuki's life for the one she loves :farofflook:
Maybe many years passed and many things happened but she couldn't forget Yuki eve, when she tried by going out with Jurina  :bigdeal:
I know that in the chapter said tat she is in love with Jurina but... I think that dint the fact to see this person I mean Jurina made her think that she loves her  :dunno:
But it not the truth!! Mayu is still madnly in love with Yuki or should I say blindly in love  :on thumbb: She is always talking about Yuki even whzn she is with Jurina maybe she doesn't show it to Jurina but still she show to us in her POV  :stuffed:
What she did at the end showed me that even she said she loves Jurina still her soul belongs to Yuki.  :shy2:
The truth I voted that Yuki deserve Mayu cause when I think about it Mayu suffered too much because of her love for Yuki  :smoke: and forgeting Yuki was not really a good solution cause she couldn't even after all these years so I want them to be together even it's not  that easy.  :bigdeal: I know I like Jurina and she is my ohimen  :onioncheer: but for this fic I think Mayu should be with Yuki not with Jurina.  :glasses:
Okey that was my point of view    :sweat:
I 'll be waiting for your 2nd season!  :hehehe:
mo-chan deshita! :on woohoo:
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Re: Blank face ( chapter 12) season one ending
« Reply #117 on: June 07, 2013, 10:14:26 AM »
No, Mayu can't die :panic:

I have a feeling Jurina is gonna get hurt next season, poor Jurina :cry:
Well, Yuki is Mayu's first love after all.

Waiting for season 2 :cow:

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Re: Blank face ( chapter 12) season one ending
« Reply #118 on: June 07, 2013, 12:55:48 PM »
Sorry but I'm like "Pfffff.... It is JuriMayu... Don't want to read...."

But I still read... WHY?!

Your story is really interesting even if it have a pair that I don't really like ^^

Want to cry  :cry:

Why Mayu need to have something like this... :cry:
Mayuki = Cutest couple



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Re: Blank face ( chapter 12) season one ending
« Reply #119 on: June 07, 2013, 02:35:51 PM »
bruaaaakkkkk  :pimp:
I know Jurina is a kind person but,
you and we all know Jurina pair is Rena and Mayu will always belong to Yuki  :twothumbs
and I know this fic is mayuki, right?? :deco:

so whatever ur plan, whatever trouble u made between mayu and yuki,
pleaaase make the togetger at the end  :inlove: (dont make yuki easy to get mayu back  :thumbsup


okay thank for the update...
take ur time (but dont be so long, remember us who waaiting for the continuation) ehehehh



and goodluck for everything ubdo  :lol:
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