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Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 10-P2)
« Reply #80 on: April 28, 2013, 09:41:22 PM »
i'm glad mayu made yuki happy again :heart: :yep:
but... but... SAEYUKI!! wth is happening here?! :banghead: :?
sae is actually a girl, why you hide as a boy sae?  :wth
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Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 10-P2)
« Reply #81 on: April 29, 2013, 12:29:07 AM »
I knew it lol
Poor Mayu but she did the right thing

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Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 10-P2)
« Reply #82 on: April 29, 2013, 04:37:42 AM »
Wah... nice twist...

Sae as a girl... but dress up as a guy so she could get a girlfreind.

Ah... Yuki and Sae are together now...

And Mayu is happy...?

Eh.... what's going on here...

1stly Mayu wanted Sae... and now she wanted Yuki and Sae together...

What is Mayu's real feeling...?

Anyhow... it was great update... Thank you

Can't wait to see the next

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Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 10-P2)
« Reply #83 on: April 29, 2013, 10:55:35 AM »
Sae is a girl but dress as a boy :hehehe:
NO~~ Saeyuki :on blackhole:
I'm want Mayuki :on shady:
But hope in the end it'll be Mayuki :on speedy:
Mayu happy when Yuki and Sae together? :on spit:
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Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 10-P2)
« Reply #84 on: April 29, 2013, 06:42:31 PM »
Well Mayu reversed the spell and get Sae and Yuki together

She seems almost done with her mission
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Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 10-P2)
« Reply #85 on: May 01, 2013, 08:57:42 AM »
Mayuki, Saeyuki, or Saemayu???  :? :? :
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Black Chocolate *Update*
« Reply #86 on: May 09, 2013, 10:25:04 PM »
Hey guys, so I have SO MANY fanfics that are still in the making, I'm going to take a break for a while and update some of my older stories. :nervous For now, I plan to at least finish "Fire and Ice" and "Princess Protection Program" first, then return to my weekly updates on this story.

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Re: Black Chocolate *Update*
« Reply #87 on: May 10, 2013, 07:38:35 AM »
TTLuver497-san,

Just update which ever you feel easier...

I'll be waiting...

I read most of your stories anyway.... or all... I dunno.

Thank you

Can't wait to see the next chapter for any stories that you have written up until now.

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Black Chocolate (Chapter 11)
« Reply #88 on: June 24, 2013, 03:25:45 AM »
:cool1: Yes, I'm finally back!!!!!!!!! And it's my 500th post!!!!!!!! :ptam-shy:


Chapter 11-Black makeover

Mayu and Yuki were walking through town when they ran into Sae.

"Sae-chan!"

Yuki ran over and hugged her happily.

It's been about a month since the two became a couple, but...

Yuki is still a bit embarrassed by the fact that Sae's a girl. She often blushes when they hug or kiss.

"I like your outfit today, Yukirin."

"Hey, don't say like. This is really lame!"

Sae held up her chin and stared into her eyes.

"You look beautiful either way..."

She softly kissed her lips, and it just made Yuki melt.

Mayu just stood and watched as the two kissed passionately.

She learned her lesson after knowing stealing Sae from Yuki broke her heart, so she decided to make Yuki and Sae a couple again, even if she had to endure endless pain.

Sae suddenly broke the kiss and looked at Yuki shyly.

"Ano... Yukirin..."

Yuki looked up, confused.

"Would you wanna... go on a date with me tomorrow?"

Yuki was already blushing, but she blushed even harder at that statement.

"Eh?! D-d-date? With me?"

"Yeah... I mean, we've been going out for a while now, so I just thought... Can we?"

"...Ah, yeah, I guess."

Sae smiled and hugged her tight, making her face turn as red as a tomato.

"Thanks, Yukirin!"

"..Hahaha, n-no prob..."

She broke the hug and looked at her watch a bit.

"Ahh~, I gotta go. I'll see ya tomorrow!"

She ran off and waved goodbye before turning back around and dashing down the street. Yuki just shyly waved back.

"Bye..."

As she watched her run off, she made a decision in her mind and turned to Mayu.

"Mayu, please do something!"

"...'Something' as in....what?"

"Anything! I can't handle this date alone! Please!"

She bowed down at a far angle, she even got on her knees and begged.

"Yu-Yu-Yukirin, people are staring!"

"PLEASE!!!"

"..Okay, okay, just stop!"

Yuki got up and hugged Mayu tight around her neck, almost choking her.

"Oh, THANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOU!!!!!"

Mayu started coughing from lack of air and forcefully pushed her off.

"Okay, okay... *Cough* Let's go."

"Eh? Where?" Yuki asked as Mayu pulled her wrist.

"We're gonna give you a special makeover! Just for your and Sae's date."


Mayu brought her to the shop into a secret room.

It looked like a salon and there were many, many mirrors.

Yuki was looking around, amazed, when she heard a camera go off from somewhere.

She turned and saw Mayu taking pictures of her.

Yuki was so embarrassed, 'cause she felt awkward with Mayu taking pictures of her suddenly, plus she had no make-up on.

"This is your before picture."

"Mou~!"

"No buts about it, Yuki. This is so we can detect a change." she said pulling out the photo.

Yuki pouted and plopped down in a chair, only to have belts wrap around her wrists.

"HEY!!! WHAT THE HELL?!?!?!?!" she screamed as her black character came out.

"I don't want complaints."

"MAYUUUUUU!!!!!!"

Before Yuki knew it, as she was screaming, she felt Mayu flick something into her mouth. A gummy.

She chewed it a bit, tasting the juice, and swallowed it.

She suddenly felt light as a feather and her vision was blurry.

"..M-m-Mayu..."

"No complaints. Let me take car*******"

Yuki finally gave into the sweet syrup of the magic gummy candy and fell deep, deep asleep.


After an hour, Yuki woke up and rubbed her eyes, as her hands were untied.

She looked around and didn't see Mayu anywhere.

She got up and decided to look around the shop.

However, the candy shop was no longer existent and she was in someone's apartment.

The room and furniture was really clean and a bright white that blinded Yuki a bit.

She then heard another snapshot, but softer and more digital.

She turned and her eyes were wide open. She covered her mouth, gasping instead of screaming.

"M-Mayu?!"



Mayu was standing behind Yuki in a male doctor cosplay, taking pictures of her with Yuki's cellphone.

"You look beautiful as ever."

"Huh?"

She turned and saw herself in the mirror. She was beautiful, and her outfit made her look like an adult business woman.

"Wow. You did a good job, Mayu."

"What are you talking about, honey?"

"..Eh?"

There's a shock.

Since when does Mayu call her honey? They aren't married or anything.

SAE is her girlfriend.

"Yuki?"

Mayu came unknowingly closer and gave Yuki a strange look.

It was very gentle and caring, but also handsome and seductive.



"Is everything okay?"

"...Uh..."

Mayu kindly sat her down and pulled out a stethoscope.

"Will I have to give you a check up?"

Yuki was blushing like mad.

What is happening here? Why is Mayu suddenly acting like this?

She suddenly came in closer and placed her forehead against Yuki's.

"You have a fever."

"...N-n-n-n-no-o-o, I d-d-d-don-t-t...!"

Mayu pressed the stethoscope into Yuki's chest and listened to her heartbeat.

Then, she took her and Yuki's hand and put it onto hers.

"My heart's beating faster," she teasingly whispered with a grin.

"Mayu, stop. This is weird."

"Hm... It must be love sickness."

Yuki was trying to back away and run out the room, but Mayu grabbed her wrist and pulled her close, hugging her waist.

"I have the perfect cure."

She held Yuki's chin up and kissed her.

Mayu's lips were soft, delicately kissing Yuki's gentle lips.

Her lips were warm and felt good, but Yuki forcefully broke the kiss and ran away. She shut her eyes tight, touching her lips.


As she was running, she heard her footsteps echo and felt the scenery change into a long hallway.

When she stopped running and opened her eyes, she was in an unfamiliar school.

She looked out the window and saw Yankees fighting each other.

Yuki was frozen in fear. How did she get in this place?

She heard another snapshot and turned around.

Once again, Mayu was taking pictures of her.



"Mayu? What are you doing?"

Once the phone uncovered her face, she saw Mayu was chewing gum and her long hair was covered up, inside her hoodie.

Her outfit changed again and made her look more female, but her eyes...

There was darkness in her eyes.

An evil grin crept up her face as she walked closer.



"What are you calling me that for, Black?"

"Black?"

"Are..? You seem different than usual..." She cornered her into a wall and Yuki looked down as Mayu grabbed her collar.

Yuki was wearing the same uniform as Mayu, but she had a black jacket with some design on it and some of her hair was dyed red.

"What's wrong, Black? Cat got your tongue? Or, better yet..." She stood on her tiptoes and slowly began closing in the space between them. "Mouse got your tongue?"

She kissed her, but not like the Mayu before.

It was rough and a lot more deeper.

Mayu was sucking her lips, almost eating them, and bit her tongue a bit.

Yuki was trying to contain her moans, but it only got harder as the girl went on.

"Mayu... S.s-t-top... Ahh..."

Yuki can't breathe. She feels like she's gonna die in Mayu's kiss.

Her shaking hands reached up and pushed her off with all her strength, knocking her down.

"Haa.... Mayu... This is wrong..."

"...You traitor. Do you even know how I feel?"

"Eh?"

When she looked up, however, Mayu punched her right in the face.

Everything went dark.


When Yuki woke up, she was in a narrow room.

It was very futuristic, but also cold and lonely.

She heard some kind of beeping and when she turned around, she was truly amazed.



"Mayu..."

Mayu looked like someone out of a manga, and was playing with only a clear tablet.

"Mayu, you look amazing..."

She looked down and saw she was wearing an outfit similar to hers, but not exact.

It wasn't as... robotic.

"Mayu, what's happened to us? When I woke up, there was a male version of you, and then you were a Yankee, and..."

Her voice died down as she stared at Mayu more.

Her facial expression didn't change.

Emotionless. Blank.

Like a robot.

"Mayu? What's wrong? Say something."

Mayu didn't speak. Or rather, she couldn't.

Yuki could see emotion in her eyes; she was longing to talk to her.

"Mayu, speak to me!"

No answer still.

Yuki started crying as Mayu just stood there, blankly staring at her.

But, then she felt her caressing her head.

She looked up and saw Mayu smiling.

She started walking down the hallway, into a bright, white light.



Yuki followed Mayu and the two were swallowed up by the light.

When Yuki came out, she saw her structure changed into an animated version of herself.

She looked and saw Mayu was animated, too, surrounded by neon colored lights.

She took some green light and spelled out something.

"LOVE"
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"Love? Mayu, what are trying to...?"

She came close and pressed her finger against her lips.

She softly kissed then, but she couldn't feel it.

She was only digital.

"Mayu... All this time..."

It's all coming together now.

Doctor Mayu, Yankee Mayu, Cyborg Mayu, and the original Mayu are all the same person.

Their personalities are different, but they have ONE soul thing in common.

"Mayu, you are... you're..."

She started feeling sleepy again, and saw Mayu disappear, shedding a single tear and smiling.

"..You're..."


"***** ****kirin! ***Yukirin!!!"

Yuki opened her eyes and saw Mayu, her Mayu, in front of her.

"Yukirin, you wouldn't wake up now matter what I did. Are you okay?"

"Uh, yeah... Just had a weird dream was all..."

"What dream?"

Yuki didn't want Mayu to hate her, so she decided to let it off.

"Mm-mm... It's nothing. I'll get over it."

She then saw herself in the mirror.

Her hair and makeup was amazing. She looked perfect.

"Mayu. This is amazing. But... But, why did you put me to sleep?"

"I didn't want you to freak out over anything that I'd do. I wanted to do ANYTHING to make you look perfect. Also, I just wanted to surprise you."

"It's perfect." She ran up and hugged Mayu tight, making the young witch blush. "Thank you."

"..Ufufu, you're welcome, Yukirin."


Yuki's POV

I don't understand what went on in that dream.

It didn't make sense.

But, I thought it out later that night. I came up with certain explanations.

First, the male doctor Mayu.

She, or "he", was very caring and gentle, because he knew how to care for people.

Maybe, he was Mayu's desire to protect me and make me feel better.

Next, the Yankee Mayu.

She's about as strange as my Mayu and is pretty much a tsundere.

She hides her gentle side with her roughness.

She's probably Mayu's wish to be strong, but still has a softer inner character. She doesn't want to show it.

Finally, the Cyborg Mayu.

Cyborg Mayu doesn't have emotion, but I could tell she wants to be true to herself.

That's why she wrote... that word.

She represents Mayu longing to be free and let everyone know who she is, no matter if people accept her or not.

...But...

There's still one thing I wanna know.

Does my Mayu... the original Mayu feel the same as the ones in my dream?

Is Mayu... in love with me?


---TBC---

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Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 11) *500th post anniversary*
« Reply #89 on: June 24, 2013, 04:09:22 AM »
The dream scene opens up Yuki's true feelings towards Mayu
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Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 11) *500th post anniversary*
« Reply #90 on: June 24, 2013, 05:09:58 AM »
mayu did that dream or what?
did she realise her feelings?

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Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 11) *500th post anniversary*
« Reply #91 on: June 24, 2013, 05:17:56 AM »
Yeah... an update at last... Thank you...

Ah... Poor Mayu... she got to see Yuki and Sae love dovey in front of her...

But she needed to keep it up... because she wanted Yuki's happiness...

Oh.. Yuki got a dream of all different versions of Mayu, representing Mayu's personality, desire and self...

Yeah... now Yuki had a bit of a picture of Mayu's feeling for her...

Would Yuki be able to accept Mayu?

Or would she just be with Sae...?

How is the date between Yuki and Sae?

Can't wait to see if Mayuki would get their happy ending or sad ending...

Thank you for the update

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Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 11) *500th post anniversary*
« Reply #92 on: June 24, 2013, 05:32:09 AM »
Ohmygosh! Ohmygosh! Update! :fap You're back! :D

Uwaaa~ Yukirin why so lucky! You got kissed by different.versions of Mayu and on your lips! :banghead: Yaaa~ Feeling the love of Mayu for you! :wub:

Does Mayu realize her feelings for Yuki? Will Yuki able to uncover the truth behind her dreams? What will happen on SaeYuki's date? Will the feelings of Mayu going to confuse Yuki's heart? Ohmygosh! I can't wait! :thumbsup

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Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 11) *500th post anniversary*
« Reply #93 on: June 24, 2013, 07:23:23 AM »
yeyyy finally yuki understands mayus feelings

I hope mayuki will go on in the next chapters ^^^

thanks marley-chan for your update ^^
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Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 11) *500th post anniversary*
« Reply #94 on: June 24, 2013, 08:41:59 AM »
Oho, Nezumi :on gay:
The male doctor Mayu, Nezumi, the robot Mayu, they're all kiss Yuki :shy2:
I like the way Yuki think about those Mayu, it feels real :on drink:
Now, Yuki realise that Mayu's in love with her :on woohoo:
But it seems that Mayu still hasn't realised about that feeling yet :on cloudeye:
I don't want to see Saeyuki's date, I want Mayuki's :shy1:
You're gonna write a new fanfic about Mayuki :ding:
I can't wait to see it what does it like :farofflook:
Update soon, please :kneelbow:
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Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 11) *500th post anniversary*
« Reply #95 on: June 24, 2013, 01:49:01 PM »
I was exploding with happiness~~~
Doc Watanabe~ Nezumi~ Cyborg mayu~~ <3
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Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 11) *500th post anniversary*
« Reply #96 on: June 24, 2013, 04:56:55 PM »
 congrats on your 500th post :yep:
omg  :shocked yes yuki mayu is in love with you :inlove: :love:
poor mayu :cry: its must be hard to see yuki and sae dating
cyborg mayu, doc watanabe, nezumi are all so cute :cathappy:
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Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 11) *500th post anniversary*
« Reply #97 on: June 24, 2013, 05:00:58 PM »
Are you trying to said that in the next chapter mayu and yuki kissed for real?
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Black Chocolate (Chapter 12)
« Reply #98 on: June 28, 2013, 02:50:33 AM »
mo-chan: No, Mayu didn't do that. That was all in Yuki's head. :shock: :scared: ...or was it? :shifty:
cisda83: We'll just have to wait... 8) *Puts on shades like in CSI* ...and see. "KYAAAAAAHHHH!!!!!" ..Nante ne...  XD I feel extra weird today. :lol:
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kurogumi: No, not in this chapter... :P not just yet.

:farofflook: I hope you guys are ready! Big things are about to happen!!! :ding:


Chapter 12-Black's first date

Today was Yuki's first date with Sae, and Mayu intended to make it perfect by all means.

As Yuki and Sae left, she snuck out and followed them to Shibuya.

She felt they needed a new choice of fashion, cause they both looked ridiculous!

...Well, Sae, anyways.

Sae looked like a dork with a plaid shirt, matching bow tie, and shorts with suspenders.

Her sneakers looked like they were from the 50s, and her hair was a wild, but still gorgeous, mess!

Yuki didn't seem to care, though, and she made up excuses to try and go back and change.

She probably wanted to bail cuz she was so embarrassed.

Mayu did in the alleys and watched them carefully, she had to make sure they'd have a perfect day.

By all means necessary...


Once they got into a new shop, they started looking for clothes.

Problem was, Sae had NO sense of fashion, and was giving Yuki a bunch of weird combos.

On top of that, Yuki was blinded by the embarrassment and handsomeness of Sae and went along with them.

"Yukirin, you idiot! You're gonna look like a total fool wearing those!"

Mayu saw some really cute clothes on a mannequin and decided to use her magic and push it towards them.

But, instead, her magic bounced to the cashier and she went wild.

"Attention, all shoppers, everything is now on sale!!!!"

She picked up random clothes and started throwing them everywhere, not a care in the world.

They were all getting tangled together and even smacked around onto people's faces, but the magic was too strong.

Mayu smacked her head.

"Damn it! Stupid wand, look what you made me do!"

The cashier finally bumped straight into a mannequin and came to her senses.

However, at the same time, the mannequin fell off and almost hit Yuki, if it wasn't for Sae coming to save the day.

"Oh god, thanks, Sae."

Sae leaned back a bit, helping the mannequin stand back up.

"Hey, how much for one of these?"

"Oh, that's part of the 'Buy one, get one 50% off' sale for this summer."

"Yukirin, want one o' these?"

"Ah! Sure!"

Luckily, Sae actually made a good choice, and chose a perfect dress that fitted Yuki's style perfectly.

Mayu got out before they could find anything else. She didn't want to blame for anything.

She leaned against a wall and sighed with relief.

"I need this wand repaired soon..."


After they finished shopping, they both came out with new clothes on.

Yuki looked like an elegant young lady from a rich family palace, and Sae looked like a cool, celebrity type of boy...

Well, boy/girl ikemen.... >/////<

Mayu couldn't help but blush seeing them.

Her heart was beating so fast when she saw Yuki like that. She was more beautiful than ever.

"Looks like the makeover paid off."

On the other side, Sae kept complimenting Yuki like a pure ikemen, and whenever she wrapped her arm around her, Yuki blushed to high heavens.

"..Oh? Hahaha, Yukirin, you're red."

"Ahh!" Yuki quickly covered up her cheeks, nuzzling her head against Sae's shoulder.

Mayu was suddenly feeling a strange heat in her chest.

Before she knew it, her wand sparked on its own and a ball of lightning leaked out.

It bounced on the walls and hit a banana in a fruit cart.

The banana unpeeled itself, and it fell to the ground, making Sae trip.

"Uwa!!!" Sae's leg fell straight up and she fell on her butt.

"Woah! You okay?"

"Ita ta ta... Y-yeah, I'll be alright..."

She got up, rubbing her butt, and started walking again.

Mayu got mad and started batting at her wand.

"Mou~ this thing is busted today, really! Do I need to get a new one already?"

As she hit it, another spark flew and went into a window.

A metal tub floated out and fell right in front of Sae, just missing her.

"Kyaa!" Yuki screamed and hugged Sae.

Mayu was blushing mad now, cuz Yuki was so close to... well, Sae's.. her chest.

Then, she unknowingly shook in excitement and the wand sparked again.

This time, a tub came out and hit Yuki, knocking her out cold.

"Yuki!"

"Oh no... This is bad."


Yuki woke up, she was laying down on a bench in the empty park. The first thing that caught her eyes was the sunset.

She felt someone's hand on her head.

She looked around a bit and got up. She was lying on Sae's lap.

"Sae?"

Sae was fast asleep, because she got impatient for Yuki to wake up.

Yuki shook her shoulder a bit, but it did no good.

She touched her lips a bit, turning a light pink, and slowly came closer. She softly kissed Sae's plump cheek and she woke up.

"Huh? Yukirin?" She yawned a bit, stretching her arms. "You're up..."

"What happened?"

"A metal tub came out of nowhere and hit you smack in the head."

Yuki turned tomato red as she remembered what had happened. After Yuki got knocked out, Sae must've carried her ALL the way here.

And she doesn't wanna even KNOW how Sae carried her.

"You look so cute when you're asleep, y'know?"

"Eh?"

Sae gave her a warm smile and patted her head.

"Do you have an older brother?"

Yuki got pink again.

"Y-yeah. W-why?"

"Because, you're SO much like a little sister."

Yuki bit her lip, giggling a bit. She's never shown such a gentle side to anyone, especially Sae.

Mayu, hiding behind the trees, decided to take one more chance with her wand.

"Before this magic runs out, please. I beg you once more."

She gathered up every last ounce of energy in the wand and shot it up into the sky.

"Make it sunny, cheerful, and bright. This should turn this date around!"

However, unlike her prediction, loud thunder crashed as the lightning spread into the sky.

The grey clouds got darker and it started raining.

The two girls started getting soaked in the hard rain and quickly ran under a tree.

Yuki stomped her foot and pouted, really upset.

"Mou~ What the hell is this rain?! And our clothes... We were gonna go to a karaoke box! They won't let us in like this!!!"

"Yukirin..."

"What?"

Sae was smiling for some reason, staring at the rain.

"I like the rain."

"But, our date, it's..."

"It was fun!"

"EH?!"

Sae jumped up and picked two apples from the tree.

She bit one and handed the other to Yuki.

"Today was fun, no matter what happened."

Yuki sighed leaning up against the tree.

"I don't get romance at all. Love is so difficult."

"..Well, y'know what?" Sae said as she slowly approached Yuki again. "I don't care, as long as it's you."

Yuki smiled and hugged Sae tight. Even after being soaked in the rain, she felt so warm and comforting.

Sae lifted her head up and kissed her passionately.

Sae's lips tasted sweet from the apple, but also a bit salty from the rain, but it couldn't get any more deliciously irresistible in Yuki's eyes.

The two made out under the harsh rain, which only became a rhythm to match their heartbeats.


Mayu's POV

I just don't get it!

My magic has failed me all day!!

I only wanted to do the best for Yuki... What is going on?!

I took out something in my pocket.

They were special sugar cubes I made. When you suck on them, a gumball comes out, and the color and flavor represents your mood.

I held one out in my fingers. You need to ask a question to get the answer.

"Why did my magic make bad things happen?"

I popped it in my mouth and started sucking it.

Once the sugar faded, a sour taste hit my mouth.

I spat it out in my hand and a lime green gumball came out.

Lime green: Jealousy

"Jealous? I'm jealous? Why?!"

I popped another in, and this time it tasted sweeter than cotton candy.

I spat it out and this time, the gumball was pink.

"Pink? Shy? Embarrassed?"

Rose pink: In love

"What?! No way! That can't be right! I'm not in love with Sae!"

I broke up with Sae. I had to.

I can't be in love with Sae, because if Sae was under the spell and me and her were still dating, it would upset...!


O_O


Wait a minute...

It would've upset... Yuki...

Yuki...


Wait... Wait!!!

A-are you saying I'm in love with Yuki?!?!?!?!

Dun Dun DUUUUUUNNN



*Author: I told you I was feeling weird today ;) *


---TBC---


:hee: And now, I leave with this. :whistle: A special song... :on cny1: About the confusing little thing called "Love." :hee:


Imagine in either Yuki and/or Mayu's POV

I’m lonely, see, and worrying a little
 I call you, yeah, and I feel a little better
 But still, ah, I want to see you soon
 My dreams swell up big

I love you, see, and I’m a little nervous
 You kiss me, yeah, and it reassures me quite a bit
 But still, ah, I get anxious
 Love is so difficult

I’m all ready for bed
 Time to text him
 We’re going out for a bit tomorrow
 Let’s check out all kinds of towns together

Dad’s a real Debbie Downer
 He complains about everything
 But I won’t let him
 Badmouth my guy

I don’t have a crazy life
 I think and act in my own way
 I love my whole family
 But my generation chases love

I’m lonely, see, and worrying a little
 I call you, yeah, and I feel a little better
 But still, ah, I want to see you soon
 My dreams swell up big

I love you, see, and I’m a little nervous
 You kiss me, yeah, and it reassures me quite a bit
 But still, ah, I get anxious
 Love is so difficult

My allowance isn’t enough
 Life is definitely expensive
 Maybe I’ll up my shifts at my part time job
 He’s working pretty hard too

Mum wants me to bring him home
 Just out of curiosity
 Dad’s sure to have
 Plenty to say afterwards

My boyfriend’s not a wild guy
 He just has kind of weird hair
 He stands out in the town, he’s popular
 My generation wants to talk about love

I want to take classes online
 So we can open a shop together in the future

I don’t have a crazy life
 I think and act in my own way
 I love my whole family
 But my generation chases love

I’m lonely, see, and worrying a little
 I call you, yeah, and I feel a little better
 But still, ah, I want to see you soon
 My dreams swell up big

I love you, see, and I’m a little nervous
 You kiss me, yeah, and it reassures me quite a bit
 But still, ah, I get anxious
 Love is so difficult


I hope everyone enjoyed my weirdness. Also, I hope all of you look forward to my next fanfic, "Yukirin World!!!!"

:byebye: Bye~ :heart: ! Adios amigos :heart: ! Sayonara :heart: ! Bye-bye, BABY~~~ :heart: *Gunter and Tinka impression*! ...OK bye :heart: :byebye:
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:heart: l Completed: Fire and Ice l Black Chocolate l My eternal blue rose l Dishonored l The Black Rose l Fruits of a Rose l Remnants l :heart:
:heart: l Dropped: Tentomu chu l REBORN l Bite me l NMB Gakuen l YumeToki l Cafe 48 l :heart: l Hiatus/Indefinite: Samurai l Blood Bonds l Night Wind's Deed l PRISM l Time Travelers l :heart:
:heart: l Collab threads: Sky&Ruka l Ruka&Michael l :heart:
 l Compilation thread: 48G New Gen l :heart:

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Re: Black Chocolate (Chapter 12)
« Reply #99 on: June 28, 2013, 03:16:26 AM »
UPDATE~ :fap

Aaah! Seems Mayu's emotions affecting her magic! Lol :lol: i love the the photo of Mayu.. XD Lovely song.. :)

Ohman! What a disaster date for SaeYuki.. but it paid off.. They'd kissed under the rain! Congrats Yuki..! :banghead:

Oh man! I guess after that Mayu's going to be a little weird towards Yuki.. Aww.. My MaYuki heart :(

Anyway! I can't wait for the next up! :thumbsup

Oh looking forward to your next fic.. :fap

Thank you for the update :bow: :thumbsup

AWESOME ~ :twothumbs

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