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Re: Playgirls 03/4/13 Chapter 2 (Mayuki Tomotomo Atsuyuu)
« Reply #40 on: April 04, 2013, 11:00:52 AM »
I have a feeling Mayu grows a lot in the story with Yuko and Tomomi's help

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Re: Playgirls 03/4/13 Chapter 2 (Mayuki Tomotomo Atsuyuu)
« Reply #41 on: April 04, 2013, 11:47:36 AM »
Author, how I know that you've been on AFF?

The style of writing, AFF have almost the same style

And I've been reading on AFF for 1 year or more, So I know what AFF have

Btw what's your name on AFF?

nice update btw!

Wait what? Rena and Mayu? *takes out a knife slowly* Mayu....you do somqthing to Geki, I kill you!!  xD kidding, I can't kill you xD

Update soon I can't wait! :D


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Re: Playgirls 03/4/13 Chapter 2 (Mayuki Tomotomo Atsuyuu)
« Reply #42 on: April 05, 2013, 03:16:31 PM »
that's one stern Rena we've got here  XD
And Rena pulled Mayuyu just to force her helped Rena to pick up books.
 :inlove: I wonder what Mayu will do to Rena...

And perv Yuko is perv. :lol: Haruna!! Yuko is cheating on you~~ :panic: :thumbup

So curious. Waiting for your next update.

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Re: Playgirls 03/4/13 Chapter 2 (Mayuki Tomotomo Atsuyuu)
« Reply #43 on: April 05, 2013, 05:07:32 PM »
Just want to know the next!

Wha- Rena and Mayu..
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Re: Playgirls 03/4/13 Chapter 2 (Mayuki Tomotomo Atsuyuu)
« Reply #44 on: April 07, 2013, 06:51:37 AM »
play and be played... hope there'll be more funs than angst in this fanfic! thanks for the update!  :love:
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Re: Playgirls 03/4/13 Chapter 2 (Mayuki Tomotomo Atsuyuu)
« Reply #45 on: April 07, 2013, 10:38:33 AM »
Waah Mayu started her "mission" :catglare:
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Re: Playgirls 03/4/13 Chapter 2 (Mayuki Tomotomo Atsuyuu)
« Reply #46 on: April 07, 2013, 05:53:28 PM »
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Re: Playgirls 03/4/13 Chapter 2 (Mayuki Tomotomo Atsuyuu)
« Reply #47 on: April 07, 2013, 08:37:58 PM »
A/N: OMFG SERIOUSLY SAYAKA IS GRADUATING FROM AKB48 ARE U SERIOUS NOOOOOOO KASAI AND TOMOCHIN TO ARE YOU KIDDING AISH why do I get the feeling that some others will be leaving to I mean for some reason I just have this mad feeling Takamina and Yuko hav plans to and I just cant shake that feeling off someone please tell me what im feeling is just paronia

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Chapter 3

"Why do we need school?"

"To gain intelligence something that you to lack."

"Mean."

"And proud."

"Whatever but I still dont see why we need school."

"And why is that Yuko?"

"Because for subjects like sport there is a Wii history they are all dead maths we have calculators and geography I can buy a globe."

"Hence the reason you are failing all your subjects because of your simple and lacking mind."

"Whatever Mayu and Yuko where is your current girlfriend?"

"Who Haruna?"

"Well who else .... wait dont answer that."

"Ha well she is actually ...... I dont have a clue."

"Its not like you care."

"Bingo Tomomi."

"Which reminds me you have a date after school with Mastui Rena right?"

"Yes why?"

"She is Yuki's cousin."

"This should be interesting then anyway we should head to class before the bell rings who knows maybe being in class early will boost your brain cells."

After school

I made my way to the gate to see Yuki talking to her cousin Rena my date for the evening. Yuki didnt look to pleased but then who could blame her she didnt like me and I didnt like her and there was no point in trying to change that. I seen Rena say something which made Yuki's face turn red with anger and she gripped her bag hard. When she noticed me she charged forward taking me by the collar and lifting me up off of my feet. I looked into her eyes and smirked she doesnt scare me she has no affect on me all she is is a spoilt brat. "Why are you smiling cybrog?" She asked glaring. "I didnt know you liked it rough thats why." I explained her face went sligtly red but her grip around my collar remained strong. "So are you going to let go I have  date and she looks pretty pissed right now more at you than me though." I said trying to pull her pale hands away from me. "Hurt her and I sweare I will kill you." She threatened dropping me onto my feet. I chuckled then replied "Im shaking with fear." she shot one more glare my way then stormed passed towards her two bestfriends who waited at the opposite side of the gate where Rena stood.

I walked foward towards her and held out my hand to her so she would take it in her own. "Sorry about my cousin she is a little protective of me I will talk to her later." Rena said interwinding her hand with my own. I just put on a fake smile and nodded signalling that it was okay to which she just smiled in reply. The two of us walked hand in hand out of the school the annoying raven headed girl continuously asking me over and over again where we are heading my only reply was its a secret. While she wasnt looking I quickly took out my phone and texted Yuko and Tomomi asking them to set up our first date place so I could take Rena. Seconds later they sent me a reply saying okay.

This girl doesnt know who she is falling for.

We started some small chit chat which then turned into her asking me some questions.

"So how many girls have you dated in the past?"

Quickly I made up a number in my head then halfed then quartered.

"2.5 or 2."

"Huh 2 or 2.5 I dont get the hole 2.5 thing?"

"Well one was really small and I was never really sure if we were or not dating."

"Oh did you love them?"

"Yer of course."

She smiled at me then turned her head so she could look where she was walking. I took this chance to sigh silently and roll my eyes at this girls stupid questions I have dated more than to its about 20 and I have never loved any of them you really should believe your cousin. "So when are we going to arrive at this date you played and I still need to hear you say sorry." She said I stopped us in our tracks I felt someone watching us. I quickly checked the surroundings finding nothing suspicious I shrugged the feeling off and carried on leading Rena to where the date was being held. 

Not long now.

After a couple of minutes we arrived at where the date was being held. I seen a smirking Yuko and Tomomi in 'our' restaurant through the opened window. No its not really ours it was an abandoned building we done it up an placed a couple of tables inside saying that it was ours and girls just love it. We order take out and say we cooked it they call us great cooks. These girls couldnt be anymore stupid.

"In there?"

"Well duh where else I own it."

"What that resteraunt?"

"Yes now lets go inside."

I dragged her inside the 'restaurant' and was greeted with Yuko dressed in a waitress uniform. "May I lead you to your table?" She asked bowing to the two of us. "Yes." I answered Rena looked dumbfounded I smirked at Yuko only to get a cheeky grin in reply. She lead us to a random table by the window and I pulled out the chair so Rena could sit dow. She blushed and looked down shyly then sat down while I pushed her chair foward so she was close to the table. "Is this enough for me to say I'm sorry?" I asked sitting down infront of her. "Yes and I have to say this is amazing but why arent there any other people?" This girl asks to many questions but I just replied with the usual answer myself Yuko and Tomomi say to our targets when they ask "I said that for today only me and yourself can enter the restaraunt I wouldnt want any trying to steal your beauty away from me." Her face went bright red and I just high fived myslelf inwardly works everytime.

Seriously to easy.

Yuko then came foward and handed us the menus. "Dont bother just get us the usual." I said pushing away the menus. "Are you sure can thisn girl handle spice?" She asked whispering into my ear. "I then replied back into her ear "Well my mouth can cool hers down." Yuko chuckled then nodded taking away the menus.

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Yuko walked away the menus in hand into the kitchen. "Tomomi we need to order one spice special and ramen." She said placing the menus down on the counter. "Again Mayu cant handle spice though." Said Tomomi with a questioning look. "Well its not for her."

"Oh right I will order it now."

Tomomi picked up the phone and dialed a take aways number.

"Moshi moshi ........ hai I would like to order ramen and a spice special ...... why is that? ..... oh yes fine I am on my way sayonara."

"Whats with that look?"

"I have to go pick up the damn food their delievery boy hasnt turned in for work."

"Ha bye bye Tomomi ~~~~~"

"I hate you."

"Love you too."

"Go die."

"Only if you die with me."

"Grow up."

"Oh you that is something I can not do."

"Yer yer cya later."

Tomomi left through the back way leaving her coat since it wasnt cold out even if it was winter. It didnt take long for her to arrive but when she did she stopped when she felt a horrible feeling that someone was following she turned a corner and not long after Kasai Tomomi came before her. "So you are the one thats been following next time do a better job." She sneered pushing Kasai out of her way then turned around and said "Next time I will call the police stalker." Kasai's face fell she felt anger build up inside her. She only followed Tomomi because her two friends told her to plus she did find her sort of pretty okay maybe a little pretty okay very. But who wouldnt Itano Tomomi was gorgeous and that smile that shown her fang well that gave the poor girl a cuteness over load and a heart attack. After all not even you can deny that its not adorable.

"I'm not a stalker I just happaned to be heading the same way as you."

"Yer sure...."

TBC ......

A/N: Everyone is leaving anyway thanks for the comments thanks for the thank yous thanks for reading also I hope you liked this chapter

Does anyone know any good Tanashige or Atsumina fics Tanashige is from morning musume for those who dont know and I have been shipping them alot the only fic I have found is Neighbours and that hasnt been updated in a while ='(

Also does anyone find it weird that once Kasai announced graduation Tomochin did not long after TOMOTOMO has to be real lol

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@Adam: Lol hope you had fun wid my crazy family last night lol hope you liked this chap

@Mayuki_daisuki: Mayu is planning many things especially now she knows that Rena is Yuki's cousin lol hope you liked this chap

@Rochilu: Thanks and Mayu is slick huh lol and Yuko is funny gotta to say I love the hole Tomoyuu thing I have going on lol hope you liked this chap

@Stv_wong: Thanks for the help I hope I got them rigth and I will be sending you more pm's about them if that is okay and yer Yuko is funny hope you liked this chap

@Kazan: Slight Tomochin action and small Yuko action but mostly Mayu I promise some Atsuyuu coming up and hope you liked this chap

@Kurosawa87: The three of them will grow yes after all they are like family and glad you liked it and how long have u started to write AKB fics for arent u on the H!P part mostly lol and hope you liked the fic

@K-popJ-popAWESOMENESS: My name on AFF is XxRoByNxX and keep your knife out after all Mayu is a player and hope you liked this chap

@Hirasawaizumi: Bingo Haruna Yuko is cheating on you and yup a very stern Rena and I think she will just play with her hope you liked this chap

@Chanaline: Mayu's mission has started hope you liked this chap

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Re: Playgirls 07/4/13 Chapter 3 (Mayuki Tomotomo Atsuyuu)
« Reply #48 on: April 07, 2013, 08:56:44 PM »
Wow this is good lol i like the effort they to to impress the girls is awesome and its mean tho lol and yeah I did lol it was very funny and I enjoyed myself lol and I'll have to invite you to mine sometime lol

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Re: Playgirls 07/4/13 Chapter 3 (Mayuki Tomotomo Atsuyuu)
« Reply #49 on: April 07, 2013, 09:40:30 PM »
I liked the way how Mayu was talking LOL

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Re: Playgirls 07/4/13 Chapter 3 (Mayuki Tomotomo Atsuyuu)
« Reply #50 on: April 07, 2013, 10:11:23 PM »
Author, I've seen that name A LOT!

Would you mind to PM me any story of yours?

No need if you don't want to

*puts down knife and takes out a gun* knife they say....Mayu....do NEVER EVER DO SOMETHING TO MY BABY!!

Update soon I can't wait :D

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Re: Playgirls 07/4/13 Chapter 3 (Mayuki Tomotomo Atsuyuu)
« Reply #51 on: April 07, 2013, 11:17:25 PM »
It's a good fic thank you ;)
Please update soon :)

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Re: Playgirls 07/4/13 Chapter 3 (Mayuki Tomotomo Atsuyuu)
« Reply #52 on: April 08, 2013, 12:03:33 AM »
mayu your so evil :twisted:, i cant help but feel so sorry for rena :(
haha yes mayu cannot handle spice :lol:, but rena loves it XD
i dont want sayaka to graduate, and tomotomo are'nt together :cry: :banghead:
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Re: Playgirls 07/4/13 Chapter 3 (Mayuki Tomotomo Atsuyuu)
« Reply #53 on: April 08, 2013, 01:16:24 AM »
 :thumbsup yeah i like it. Thank for update.Expect a lot more later told about
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Re: Playgirls 07/4/13 Chapter 3 (Mayuki Tomotomo Atsuyuu)
« Reply #54 on: April 08, 2013, 04:09:52 AM »
This is good.  :twothumbs Glad I could help  XD

Aish... Yuko is only playing around with Kojipa. Kojiyuu shippers won't like this  :lol:

He? Rena is Yuki's cousin :shocked


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Re: Playgirls 07/4/13 Chapter 3 (Mayuki Tomotomo Atsuyuu)
« Reply #55 on: April 15, 2013, 05:09:11 AM »
waiting for Atsuyuu :hee:
please update :mon cute:

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Re: Playgirls 07/4/13 Chapter 3 (Mayuki Tomotomo Atsuyuu)
« Reply #56 on: April 15, 2013, 06:23:42 PM »
I would wonder how Yuko would handle Rena in general with her spicy and sweet side :nervous

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Re: Playgirls 07/4/13 Chapter 3 (Mayuki Tomotomo Atsuyuu)
« Reply #57 on: April 26, 2013, 04:23:38 AM »
This plot is like... WOW!!! :thumbsup :thumbsup :thumbsup  :w00t: :w00t: :wub: :wub:

Can't wait for more :peace:

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Re: Playgirls 07/4/13 Chapter 3 (Mayuki Tomotomo Atsuyuu)
« Reply #58 on: June 09, 2013, 11:47:37 PM »
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"I'm not a stalker I just happaned to be heading the same way as you."

Excuses. XD
Anywho, this looks good. Can't wait to see more of Mayuyu's evil side!  :drool: :inlove:

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Re: Playgirls 07/4/13 Chapter 3 (Mayuki Tomotomo Atsuyuu)
« Reply #59 on: August 01, 2013, 08:12:52 AM »
(seems I've been begging the whole day today  :mon hanky: )

Update pleeease this is new to me, wish i found this earlier  :mon waterworks:

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