[ChiqinNa's Neverland] When Love Stops... (Atsumina) 03/01/2014

[chiqinna]

This is my first time making os so please be good to me~  wmatsui22 have ask me to make wmatsui os loooooooooooooooooooong time ago so I was kinda have an idea...hehe 

Title: When I was your man
Pairing: Wmatsui and a little of Mayuki

“Yuki, I’m going out now. Bye!” said Rena while putting on her shoes.
“Wait! Rena, where are you going?”
“I’m having a date… with Kato.” Said Rena smiling happily.
“Owh…have fun then…and take care!”
After Rena got out of the apartment, Yuki let out a small sigh.

Ring! Ring!
It’s Yuki’s phone.
Seeing the name on the phone screen, Yuki quickly press the green button.
“Mayu-kun~~~” said Yuki happily.
“Hey my sweet Yuki~” said Mayu on the other line.
“What is it that you call me? Don’t tell me you miss me already?” said Yuki grinning.
“I always miss you~~ by the way I just want to tell you something…”
“Hm?”
“Is Rena there?” asked Mayu.
“No. Why?”Answered Yuki.
“Nothing. I just want to tell you that, Jun has come back to Japan.” Said Mayu.
“What? When? How?” said Yuki giving her famous reaction face.
“Calm down dear~ he just arrived yesterday…He just calls me today.” Explain Mayu.
“I see… so…what is he going to do now?” asked Yuki.
“I don’t know…want to meet him?”
“Hmmm…why not? It’s been a long time we didn’t hang out together...how about I ask Rena too?” said Yuki.
“Err…I don’t think that was a good idea...Yukirin…” said Mayu.
Realized what she was saying, she put her right hand on her mouth.
“Ooopss…I forgot about that…hehe” laugh Yuki.
“I have to hang up now, bye…I love you!” said Mayu.
“un…love you too~” said Yuki.

Yuki sigh for the second time.
“I wish they were still together…” mumbled Yuki sadly.


Jun’s pov

I came back to Japan after 5 years staying in New York.

I miss Japan…

 and my friends…

and her.

The first person I call was Mayu, my best friend.
He was shocked when I tell him that I was in Japan.
I want to ask him about Rena but…me being a coward.

I bet Rena doesn’t want to know anything about me anymore.

After what I’ve done to her

Regretful was the only thing left inside me.


Today I was having a walk for the first time in Japan.
So many has changed here.
I walk into the café near the park. I took a sit on the second floor so that I can see the whole place down there.
While waiting for my coffee, I look around to enjoy the peacefulness.
As my eyes wandering around, I saw a couple of lover sitting on a bench at the park.
That woman looks…familiar.

I keep looking at her then I finally realized. It was Rena.
My heart beating faster when I saw she smiles happily.
I miss that smile. But that smile was not for me anymore.
Then I feel my heart hurt when I saw a man beside her.
I turn my eyes away from them…because I couldn’t stand seeing her with another man.

I hold my tears.

Be a man, Jun.

After I finished my coffee, I just walk back home.
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Mayu, Yuki and Jun are having lunch at the usual place that they always hang out.

“Ne…Jun, tell me…do you found any girls there? Are they hot?” asked Mayu who got smacked by his girlfriend. “Ouch!”
Jun chuckled seeing lovely couple across him.
“Nah~ I prefer Japan girl than New York girl~ although they are hot~” said Jun leaning on his chair.
“Really? Then do you still love Rena?” asked Yuki with a smile.

Mayu face palmed himself.

Yuki realized that she had promised Mayu that she wouldn’t talk about Rena in front of Jun.
Seeing Yuki’s reaction, Jun let out a small laugh.

“Don’t worry guys, I’m okay with it. Besides, I also know that Rena has someone else already. I saw her yesterday.” Said Jun with a sad smile.
Mayu and Yuki feel sad for their friend.
“Do you still love her?” asked Yuki again with serious tone.
Jun nodded. “I will always love her.” Said Jun looking down.

“Ow come on dude! Don’t be so emo~~ btw you look different now…huh? I bet many girl are falling for you~” said Mayu trying to change the atmosphere.
“Yeah~ I work out...” said Jun patting his chest.
“Hey, how about we make a party for Jun this weekend? A comeback party?” suggest Yuki.
“That sounds good honey!” said Mayu putting his arm around his girlfriend.
“Mou~ how about you Jun? Are you okay with it?” asked Yuki to Jun.
“*sighed* Do whatever you like then~ “said Jun.
“Then…can we invite Rena too?” asked Yuki with pleading eyes.
“Of course you can…if she wants to.” Said Jun sadly.
“Of course she will dude! We’ll invite everyone to this party!!” said Mayu.
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The party night

Rena comes to the party with her boyfriend. She had to because of her best friends.
She was nervous to meet Jun again, her ex-boyfriend.

The party was held at Jun’s mansion.

Jun still hasn’t come out from his room.
“Oi! Jun! Are you still in there?” shout Mayu from outside.
The door opened revealing Jun…with a white suit.
“Wow~ you look great…but I’m greater~ okay now go down everyone is waiting for you!” said Mayu while pushing him downstairs.

Everyone was having fun in the party.

But not for Jun.

Every time their eyes meets each other, his heart beat faster…but it hurt him when she smile to her new boyfriend.
He's trying his best to show his smile to everyone.
“Everyone! Since it was Jun’s party, how about Jun singing us a song?!” said Mayu to the audience using a mike.

Everybody start to cheer for Jun.

“Come on Jun! sing for us!” Yuki said pulling Jun to the piano make him sit.

He was hesitating.

Then Yuki whisper something to him.
Jun look at Yuki. “You can do it!” said Yuki patting on his shoulder.
Jun took a deep breath. Everyone is focusing on him right now.

He started to play the piano.


Same bed but it feels just a little bit bigger now
Our song on the radio but it don't sound the same
When our friends talk about you, all it does is just tear me down
'Cause my heart breaks a little when I hear your name

It all just sounds like oooooh…
Mmm, too young, too dumb to realize
That I should have bought you flowers
And held your hand

Jun sing while looking at Rena with his sincere eyes.
Rena looking other way...

Should have gave you all my hours
When I had the chance
Take you to every party
'Cause all you wanted to do was dance
Now my baby's dancing
But she's dancing with another man

My pride, my ego, my needs, and my selfish ways
Caused a good strong woman like you to walk out my life
Now I never, never get to clean up the mess I made, ohh…
And it haunts me every time I close my eyes

I still love you Rena...

it all just sounds like oooooh…
Mmm, too young, too dumb to realize
That I should have bought you flowers
And held your hand
Should have gave you all my hours
When I had the chance
Take you to every party
'Cause all you wanted to do was dance
Now my baby's dancing
But she's dancing with another man


Although it hurts
I'll be the first to say that I was wrong
Oh, I know I'm probably much too late
To try and apologize for my mistakes
But I just want you to know

I'm sorry...

I hope he buys you flowers
I hope he holds your hand
Give you all his hours
When he has the chance
Take you to every party
'Cause I remember how much you loved to dance
Do all the things I should have done
When I was your man
Do all the things I should have done
When I was your man...


After he finished, everyone was clapping for his performance.
“Wow~ you really a great singer dude!” said Mayu walking to Jun.
Jun just give a small smile.
“Cheer up dude! It’s your day~ forget about the past~” said Mayu patting Jun’s back.
“Thanks, Mayu. I feel good now.” Said Jun.

He saw Rena looking at him. Jun breath inwardly.
Rena was smiling to him.
He smile back...


done! I left it hanging there hahahahahahahahhaha   
I don't know what am I doing just now~   

[sakura_drop_]

PLEASE WRITE MOAR!!!

I WANT A CONTINUATION!!!

It's okay though if you leave an open ending too 

But write more OSs!!!

[Ruka Kikuchi]

OMG my mom LOVES this song! Nice work.

Aw... how sad... Everyone left Jun all alone.

Poor Jun... hope he finds new love.

[gek geki]

Ah its SWEETEST STORY
A LITTLE BIT SAD,BUT LOVE COULDNT ALWAYS FOREVER.
 I HOPE RENA AND JUN STILL BE FRIEND AFTER THAT PARTY.
AND WHO KNOW WHAT HAPPEN IN THE FUTURE
BECAUSE THE STORY HANGING LIKE THAT,I JUST IMAGINE THAT THEY TOGETHER AGAIN
BECAUSE YUKI KEEP ASK ABOUT JUN STILL LOVE RENA OR NOT,THAT MEAN YUKI THINK RENA STILL LOVE JUN TOO
THAT WAS JUST MY IMAGINATION

[smarty0821]

  JUN!!! 


I've read your story while listening to "When I was your Man"


And....WOW! I can feel what Jun feels...


OH GOSh!!! this is only a one shot story!!! ToT

[Rena-chan Daisuki]

Oh!!! Comon!
don't just leave it like that
u hanging it not on the right time
I'm going to cry if u just leave it
I beg you 

[kuro808]

When I was your man is such a great song.

Good one shot.  My fic was AtsuMina with this song

[KojiYuu44]

please don't leave it at that 
write more!!!
I wanna read the continuation

[Wmatsui22]

~Hi chiqinna-san 

~I thought you forgotten about that.. but I am happy that you didn't! 

~It's a great story but..... you let it hanging 

~I hope you continue this...

~Please 

~Thanks 

-WMatsui_22-

[chiqinna]

Hmmmmm....u want the continuation???!! 
fine...I'll make it for the sake of wmatsui to be together again .....maybe? 
minna minna minna!!! thanks for commenting and reading my first os!! 
wmatsui22 of course I haven't forgot about it~~ hehehe 
thanks again!! 

[cisda83]

Ah... Jurina and Mayu are males here....

Interesting...

What happened that made Jun and Rena break up?

What's going to happen next

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the OS

I hope you made this OS to a longer fic...

It's very good start of a nice fic... actually

So please continue it...

 

[chiqinna]

This is the continuation… 
enjoy!

My Reason

A year after that…
Jun and Rena had decided to becomes friend. Jun has started to move on but deep inside he still really loves Rena. He sacrifices his feelings for her just to see the one he loved happy. As long as Rena happy with Kato, it’s fine with him.
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“Papa!!! Papa!!!” shout a cute little girl happily to Jun.
Jun smile widely seeing the cute little girl running towards him and Jun kneel down to catch her onto his arms.
The cute little girl wrapped her small arms around Jun’s neck.
Jun lift her up and walk towards the house that the little girl has come out from.
“Papa~ I miss you~~~” said the little girl pouting cutely to Jun.
“Awww~ I miss you too Miiko-chan~ Papa Jun say sorry okay…I’m so busy lately that I forgot to see Miiko-chan~~” said Jun while entering the big house.

A man comes out from the kitchen to greet Jun.
“Yo! Jun! Long time no see… and Miiko-chan, stop calling Jun papa already~” said Kuu to Miiko-chan while walking to them.
“But daddy~~~” she pout cutely looking down.

Jun chuckled seeing her behavior.

“It’s okay Kuu…besides I like it when Miiko-chan calling me papa~ haha” said Jun patting the little girl’s head.
“See! Papa Jun is okay with it!” said Miiko-chan then stick out her tongue to her father.
“Then who’s your real father then?” said Kuu acting mad to his daughter.
“Mou~ of course Daddy~~ I love daddy~” said Miiko-chan running to her father and hug him.
“I love Miiko too~ now give daddy a kiss!” said Kuu then she kiss Kuu on the cheek.
“Good girl~” Kuu say then kiss her daughter also.
“Where’s Mariko-sama?” Asked Jun while looking around the big house.
“She’s at her office, still meeting. But she’ll be back soon I guess…” said Kuu looking at his watch.
“How about you? Aren’t you working today?” Asked Kuu.
“Nope~ I have a day off so I want to spend my time with Miiko today.” Said Jun smile while watching his niece playing with a doll.

“I’m home!!!” said Mariko who just back from work.
“Hey, Papa is here~” said Mariko laughing then sit on the couch beside Kuu after kissing her daughter’s forehead.
“Whatever Mariko-sama~ anyway I come here just to give this invitation card to you guys.” Said Jun giving the card to them.
“What is this? Your wedding invitation?” Joked Mariko while opening the card.
“Shut up! It’s Rena and her boyfriend…they asked me to gave it to you.” Explain Jun faking his smile.
Mariko and Kuu’s smile fade when they read the content and look at each other.
Mariko sighed. Kuu get up to make a drink for them.
“Jun, there’s no need to hide your true face to me now. I know you were sad okay.” Said Mariko looking at Jun.

Jun keeps looking down.

“Look, Jun. I know it was hard for you to forget about her but try to date with other woman. Maybe it can help you.” Said Mariko.
Jun sighed loudly.
“Nee-chan…I already going out with many girls already…but still…I just…can’t.” said Jun.
“Or you can have a date with…..Miiko-chan!” said Mariko smirked.
“Nee-chan~~!!!” whined Jun at his older sister’s joke.
“Fine~ but, hey, you still have a chance you know…ask her if she still loves you.” said Mariko looking back the card.
“I know…but I don’t think so I’m cruel enough to destroy their wedding…” said Jun.
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“Rena, you serious right? About this?” asked Yuki to Rena who’s sitting at the living room watching TV.
“Of course I am Yuki.  Kato had been waiting for me for so long already.” Said Rena.
“And Jun had been loving you for so long already.” Said Yuki looking away.
“*sighed* Yuki~~ we’re just friend okay. It’s all in the past.” Said Rena still looking at the TV.
“Yeah right~ like I don’t know you still have feelings for him.” Said Yuki frowning.
“Say who?”

“Say me! Then who else looks so in love when she watch Jun singing in a TV show right now?” said Yuki when
she looks at Rena who was watching Jun’s performance on a TV show.
Rena then realized about it then she blushed looking away from the TV screen.
“Then should I just broke Kato’s heart when I already accept his proposal?” said Rena looking down sad.

Yuki sighed.

“Come here. I’m sorry.” Said Yuki while pulling Rena into a hug. Rena sobs on her shoulder.
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Jun ask Rena to meet him. He wants to ask Rena something before she married.
“What is it Jun?” Asked Rena to Jun who sit across her.
“I just want to ask you this for the last time...” said Jun before asking her.
Rena was looking at him with curiosity.
“You really don’t …love me anymore?” Asked Jun looking at Rena’s eyes serious.
Rena’s heart beating faster when she heard it.
“N-no.” said Rena looking away.
“Look into my eyes and say it, Rena.” Said Jun with serious face.
“It’s over between us, Jun.” said Rena looking at him.
“No it’s not-“
“I’m getting married Jun!” said Rena with tears in her eyes.
Jun was really hurt when he hears that from Rena.

“You don’t love him.” Said Jun in a low voice while looking down.

“He’s a good man! Then tell me a reason why I should go back to you??” asked Rena. Jun keep quiet.
Rena then got up and walks away from Jun.
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“What should we do about them honey?” asked Yuki to her boyfriend. They are having a date right now.
“Nothing.” Said Mayu with cyborg face.
Yuki frown hearing his answer.

“Are you really their friends? Mayu?” Asked Yuki still frowning.
“No…I’m not their friend…” said Mayu still with blank face.
“What??!!” shout Yuki confused.
“I’m their savior~” smirked Mayu looking at her beloved girlfriend.
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The day has come…Rena and Kato’s wedding ceremony.
Only close family and friends were invited to the ceremony.
Rena was in her room wearing a white gown. She was looking at herself in a mirror when Yuki comes in to bring her out.
“Don’t worry Rena, you looks so beautiful already. Let’s go, everyone is waiting.” Said Yuki then Rena comes out
of the room followed by Yuki who smirked behind her.

Kato already waiting for Rena inside the church.
Rena walks inside slowly. Everybody’s eyes are on her, praising at her beauty.
Once she stops beside Kato, Kato hold her right hand, and said something.
“Rena, we’ve been together for three years, and I have the most happy, lovable moments when I’m with you. And I want to thank you, for making me happy with your smile, your laugh, I was grateful to have a girlfriend like you.” Said Kato.
“You know, after years being with you, I finally realized, I realized that in your eyes, it’s not me that you’re looking at. It’s not me that you’re searching for. It’s someone else.” Said Kato.

Rena and the others except Mayu and Yuki were confused at what Kato say.

“What are you saying, Kato?” Asked Rena.
“I’m saying that, you make a wrong decision if you get married with me. I can make you happy, but I can’t make you happier. I love you, but I don’t love you as much as he does… I know you still loves him Rena, I can see it in your eyes.” Said Kato.
“W-what do you mean? Kato…” Rena was shocked.
Kato step back and said to Rena, “look there~” while pointing to where the place where the music was played.

There, she saw Jun sitting across the piano with black suit.

‘Jun?!’ said Rena in her mind.
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Before the wedding, Kato met Jun. He told Jun that Mayu had told him everything about him and Rena. Jun was shocked at first but he understands.
Kato had made a decision to let go of Rena to go back to him. He realized that Rena’s love is not for him. But he made Jun promised him that he will take care of Rena and never make her cry.
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Rena was still confused at what happen. Her eyes still on Jun.

Then Jun started to sing.

I fell for you the moment I first saw you
You were so beautiful
I fell so deeply for you

I felt it for the first time
The thing called love, and my heart racing
I can’t help my heart feeling this way

I will go closer to you, just stay as you are
I will hold you tight so you can feel me more

Only one to protect you
Only one person to value you
The person who will love you is me

Only you are the one who makes me exist
Only you have stolen all of my heart
My All, You are the reason for me baby yeah

My heart pounds when I see you
I look and look but I want to keep looking at you
I’m in front of you, pretty sweety girl
Only you are the reason I live

I will be a bit braver, just trust me
Will you catch me so I can have you more?

Only one to protect you
Only one person to value you
The person who will love you is me

Only you are the one who makes me exist
Only you have stolen all of my heart
My All, You are the reason for me baby yeah

If something happens to you
Will you tell me? Will you lean on me?

Only one to make you smile
Only you to make you happy
The person who will only look at you is me
 
Then Jun got up and walk towards Rena...

Promise you forever
I love you, who has taken all of me
My love, You are the reason for me baby yeah

Only you are my reason

Rena shed her tears when Jun finished.
Jun stops in front of her.

"I gave you my reason already." said Jun.
Then Jun kneel down and pull out a ring box from his pocket and opened it revealing a diamond ring.
"Marry me, Rena." said Jun sincerely.

Rena was stunned. She looks at Kato. Kato only smile and nodding at her.
Mayu and Yuki were smiling watching the moment and hoping that Rena would accept it.
Suddenly one of the audience shout,"just marry him already!!".
Rena started to cry loudly.
Jun got up panicked doesn't know what to do.
"Eh? Rena? What happen? Why are you crying?" said Jun panicked.
"*sighed* Jun has never changed~" said Mayu to Yuki beside him. Yuki just nodded.
Rena suddenly hug Jun making Jun froze.
"*sob* I love you too, Jun. I love you so much!" said Rena tighten her hug.
Jun was so happy that he also hug Rena tightly.
"I promised I will be a good man to you~" said Jun crying.

"Err...Jun,can you let go, I can't breath." said Rena because Jun hug her so tight.
"No, I WON'T let you go...ever again!" said Jun.
"Just...please...it so tight!" said Rena trying to pull Jun from her.

Jun suddenly pull Rena into a passionate kiss.
Rena was kissing him back and wrapped her arms around his neck.
After the kiss, they stared at each other lovingly.

"Let's get married...now." smirked Jun.


Happy ending!!!!   



uhhhh...is it good? I feel weird after I finished it... 
I never make a love story before... ow my god!! 
hope u guys like it~ 

[kuro808]

Oh god that was impressive.

I love it!!!

[Rena-chan Daisuki]

Yeyyyy!!!!
Score!
It really is such a beautiful ending
I LOVE IT
Thank you so muh for continuing the story
 

[cisda83]

Ah... Jun letting Rena go... for Rena's happiness...

Miko is so cute, she wants so many dads.... 

Ah... Rena's getting married to Kato... while she is still in love with Jun...

She should just be with Jun... forget or trying to let go of the unhappy past that caused their separation...

It would be better for them in long run...

Wah... such a romantic gesture... playing piano and singing to her before proposing to Rena...

Excelent move there, Jun

Kato indeed is a good guy... to be able to let go of Rena after all these time... he spent dating Rena...

Yeah... Happy ending for Jun and Rena...

Thank you for the lovely update and ending...

 

[smarty0821]

YAY!!! Happy Ending!!!  Jun is really a good singer though.... I want like him ! He's my dream guy 



hahaha!! Thank you for the update! 

[POPCAT]

Man, I like this story. 

ps. read the singing part and listing to the song make it more spacial, well kind of 
 

[DC2805]

Yeah! Finally together...go get a HOT honeymoon too!

[K-popJ-popAWESOMENESS]

This should happen irl O.O I mean they always kiss on stages and with Jujubb being a kissing monster and all....

Image them marrying each other T__T even if it's just on a show *dies happy*

I loved it :DDD what will you update next oO?

[chiqinna]

kurosawa87: thank you soooo much for reading!!!! 
Rena-chan Daisuki: yay!! score!! hahah thanks for reading!!! 
cisda83: thanks you for reading~  
smarty0821: he's my dream guy too~ 
POPCAT: you're right...read the singing part while listening to it... 
DC2805: HOT honeymoon lol~ haha imagine it yourself~ hahaha 
K-popJ-popAWESOMENESS: hmm what should I update next..?  maybe a heartbreaking story...  hahahahahahaha 

anyway, thanks to everyone who ready my first os and please take care of me~~