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Re: PJ48 HIGH SCHOOL (New writer) UPDATED CHAP 4 part 1
« Reply #20 on: August 13, 2013, 02:20:26 AM »
Update soon please...  :bow:

Who are the Kami 7???

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Re: PJ48 HIGH SCHOOL (New writer) UPDATED CHAP 4 part 1
« Reply #21 on: August 13, 2013, 02:42:53 AM »
I can't wait for the next chapter. Please update soon.  :twothumbs

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Re: PJ48 HIGH SCHOOL (New writer) UPDATED CHAP 4 part 2
« Reply #22 on: August 14, 2013, 04:49:33 PM »
Hey guys it's part 2. I can finally update as I'm busy with school and all. Today is the first day I have physical education and my body's really sore :fainted:. Sorry for the late update. I'm really tired as it's evening in my country now so I can't reply you all. I'll reply to you in the next chap. Please enjoy! :on drink:

Chap 4 part 2
After we had heard that the “Kami Seven” want to have a talk, we immediately ran to the gym. As we arrived there, all of them were standing there waiting for us with some guys around them whispering. What did they want to talk about and why it have to be all of them? If it’s just a talk then this many people is quite strange. Something is definitely wrong here and I started to notice the worried look on the members faces expect Jurina of course. It have to be something serious but what is it… Wait I remember now before we got out of the gym, I had heard some guys talking about the girls club will be disbanded. Oh no! Are they here because of this? I won’t let them.
We walk closer to them and I think they notice us as they’re walking in our direction. It’s quite weird that we and the “Kami Seven” all stop walking in the middle of the gym. I can see the intense look in our members eyes and also the “Kami Seven”. Now that I think about it this is the first time I see them this close. As expected they’re more beautiful up close I think that’s why they’re admired by both male and female. Ahhh… I wished I could be like them… Okay this is really off the topic now let’s get back to the main thing. They’re all staring at each other so intensely that I can see sparks between them. I don’t think anyone want to interrupt them if they want to live peacefully and that’s include me too as I can feel shiver on my spine. Yuko is the one who speak first.
“Okay then what do you want with us?” she asks annoyed
“What do you mean by that? You all know the reason we’re here right?” says the gachapin-like girl
“That’s right don’t act like you don’t know anything!” continue the girl with emotionless girl
“Are you trying to pick a fight with us? Don’t think that we can’t hit you!” Tomochin says back angrily
“Hey don’t be so rude here we’re just here to talk and we haven’t said any sentence that looks like we want to fight you. You’re the one who said that first chiyuu~” says the chiyuu girl
“What did you say!?” ask Sashi look like she’s mad. Uh oh it’s like the third war will happen anytime
“QUITE DOWN!” shout Maeda-san as she notice the fight
“I’m sorry about my friends.” Bow Maeda-san then continue “As you have known we’re here to talk about your club. And I want you to disband the club right now.” she says firmly with a calm look on her
“HELL NO! If you want to disband the club pass me first.” shout Yuko
“YUKO!” shout Sayaka which makes her startled a little then continue “I’m sorry please give us some times to think.”
“That’s what you said the last time.” Maeda-san talk back then continue “You’re not like the boys, you haven’t won even a single match yet. We did consider about keeping you guys but it’s impossible. The club have been establish for 3 years and haven’t had any record. It’s a waste of money to provide equipments for you so this is the solution and besides who cares if you’re disbanded. I’m sorry to say this but you’re all pathetic.” says her coldly which makes me shocked and angry at the same time. Pathetic? Who does she thinks she is? I look back to the member and see them looking really sad and Sashi looks like she’s about to cry. I can’t stand watching it like this. I have to find a way to help them. I grip my fists then start to talk
“Ano… Maeda-san… If that’s what you say then can you at least give us a chance to prove that we’re not like that at all.” says me which surprised the members and makes her look at me with those cold eyes again. May be I shouldn’t have asked but I want to help everyone somehow and this is all I can think about. She brings her fingers to her chin and then speak
“Okay then if you want to prove it then choose one member to play with one member of the boys who will be choose by the coach. Who can score 10 points first wins? If you lose then disband the club immediately. Are you okay with it?” says Maeda-san looking me
“Okay no problem!” this is quite good for me to challenge one of the members of the national team and give them a lesson about talking bad behind people’s back
“Hey Takamina are you really okay with it!? The boy will be chosen by the coach who really hates us so your opponent won’t be easy!” says Yukirrin looking all worried. I smile at them and say
“Don’t worry I know what I’m doing beside I want to help the club so this is the best I could think of he he…”
“Honestly you really are reckless! Okay we’ll be counting on you and sorry for making you do this!” says Sayaka as she apologies
“I said it’s fine all you have to do is cheering for me. Just think of it like a skill test”
“All right go get them Takamina!” shout Yuko
“Good luck careful not to get hurt.” Remind Tomochin
“Go for it Takamina! I’ll be cheering you with my wota skills!”
“Uhm I don’t think that’s necessary but thanks Sashi. I’ll do my best” I say then start running to the court. I see Maeda-san talking to the coach and then go to chairs have been repaired for her and the others Kami Seven. When did they do that anyway? I look back to the coach and it looks like he’s happy. I guess my opponent will be a tough one. Huhm let’s see who it is.
After a while the coach leads one guy out of the team which surprises the girls and even the boys team. I guess he’s a good player. He has short black hair, his height is about 1m80 or even taller. Tough one he got there now I’m excited! I hear whisper around the gym
“Wow the coach really serious about this. He gets the best player in the team!”
“Yeah that’s unexpected. I think he really want the girls team to be disband huh… poor the new girl”
Oh so he’s the best player of this team. Let’s see what he got in store for me
“All right then I, Kitarie will be the judge for this match. This match is no time limit, you have to score 10 points, who score 10 points first will be the winner. Any question? Okay let’s choose randomly. The boy gets the ball first.”
She whistle and the match start. The boy has the ball first. He start looking a way to get past me then begin his attack. He bounces the ball toward me. He starts to move to the right but I stop him right way because his move is really easy to read. He runs toward me facing his back to me then begin to spin around to get pass me. That’s no use! I have known that he will use this one so I find an opening then steal his ball. Notice that the ball have been taken, he turns to me with a confused eyes. I guess that surprised him. Anyway it’s my turn now so let’s see if he can stop me.
I run to the middle of the court then begin my counter attack. I start dribbling the ball rapidly then use crossover dribble to change the ball to my left hand. After that I attacking him rapidly with my crossover which makes him back down a little and his face shows that he’s having a hard time. Losing his patience, he try to steal the ball from my hand. Well it’s not that easy to do as I bounce the ball between my legs to my hand behind my back. He loses his balance a little so I use that chance to get pass him and success. I use the layups move to score and that’s two points for me. The others look at me with big eyes expect for Maeda-san. The coach looks really surprised and angry I guess he didn’t expect that.
“Wooho you go Takamina! You’re awesome!” shout Yuko
“Great job Takamina! I love you!” shout Sashi
“Takamina-senpai! You’re the coolest!” Isn’t that a bit too much those three…haiz
The others look happy too as they give me a thump up. Now 8 points to go. Let’s do it. It’s his turn to attack and he looks really pissed. He attack me immediately when he gets the point. Wow he’s really wants to get pass me eh. Not a chance as I steal his ball again then begin to attack. I continue to score 6 more points with my three-point shoot. The boy begin to breath heavily as I having no trouble scoring at all. Looking at this situation, his coach begin to shout
“You idiot! What’s wrong with you? She’s just a girl and you can’t stop her? If you can’t win then get out of the team!”
After hearing this he begin to stand up again. Looks like he doesn’t want to be out of the team. I feel sorry for him but this is for my team so I have to win this game. I start to attack rapidly but it looks like he gets better at defense now as he locks all my attack. This is interesting! Then I’ll make my move now. I attack him a little longer than pass the ball between his legs. As he’s busy looking at the ball, I spin myself pass him then retake the ball ready to score. But he doesn’t give up, he run past me then in position to defense. He’s really give it his all but victory is my. I’ll surprise him a little. I jump up not to shoot normally but to do a dunk. He jumps up too to stop me but I was far stronger and successfully make a dunk. All of people stand from their seat to look at me. Can’t blame them because only a few girls can do a dunk not like the boys. This is the first time they see it so that’s a normal reaction. The members start to run at me and hug me
“Wow Takamina is that really a dunk!? It’s awesome!” says Yuko
“Yeah can you teach me how to do it?” says Jurina
“Hey guys you want suffocate her or sth!” shout Yukirrin
They notice that they hug me a little too hard so they let go immediately. As we’re happy that we won, the “Kami Seven” walk toward us
“It’s your win, you did a great job so your club will continue its activities.” says Maeda-san
“Thank you very much!” I say as I bow
“Don’t be it’s your effort that help you. Anyway you haven’t known all the “Kami Seven right. So I will tell you the gachapin girl is Minageshi Minami, the chiyuu girl is Kasai Tomomi, the judge in your match is Kitahara Rie, the emotionless girl Watanabe Mayu, the cat like girl is Kojima Haruna and the last one the princess like girl is Matsui Rena. We’re all in the student council with me as president and Rena as vice-president. That’s all for now so we’ll take our leave now so excuse us.” says Maeda-san then walk away. I think she’s a nice girl but why she’s talking to me she looks at me with cold eyes and really doesn’t talk too much. I wonder if I’m a bother.
 TBC

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Re: PJ48 HIGH SCHOOL (New writer) UPDATED CHAP 4 part 2
« Reply #23 on: August 14, 2013, 05:04:06 PM »
The member of Kami Seven is quite... unexpected.

But, thanks for the update... :bow:

Can't wait for the next chapter..

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Re: PJ48 HIGH SCHOOL (New writer) UPDATED CHAP 4 part 2
« Reply #24 on: August 14, 2013, 05:06:34 PM »
wooooo update  :w00t:
thanks for update :bow:

TAKAMINA SAIKYOU  XD :w00t:

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Re: PJ48 HIGH SCHOOL (New writer) UPDATED CHAP 4 part 2
« Reply #25 on: August 14, 2013, 05:24:21 PM »
Same here, olive29-san...Totally unexpected...
-Well, sorry cuz' i missed a chapter there...
-I just read it though but!! Those move are totally cool!!~
-Takamina way the go!!~ That's a dunk alright!!
-I can't do dunk that much except jump and throw it...
-I'm actually in a netball club but it's kinda same with basketball right??
-lol, that's why i fastly got addicted to your fic...
-Anyway, i'm just glad that the club was not disbanded!!~

>Plz update soon!!~ I can't wait for the next one!!~ Nice chapter btw!!~

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Re: PJ48 HIGH SCHOOL (New writer) UPDATED CHAP 4 part 2
« Reply #26 on: August 15, 2013, 03:49:55 AM »
Hell yeah! takamina is the boss!

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Re: PJ48 HIGH SCHOOL (New writer) UPDATED CHAP 4 part 2
« Reply #27 on: August 15, 2013, 01:14:38 PM »
Very Interesting!

Take that stupid basketball player!!  :ding: Never underestimate a midget!  :wahaha:

Update soon !!!  :mon whine:
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Re: PJ48 HIGH SCHOOL (New writer) UPDATED CHAP 4 part 2
« Reply #28 on: August 15, 2013, 02:40:22 PM »
Well.. I would not have guessed that you would put rue as the kami 7 but then.. Sashi partner would be Rie

Great game Minami... You're the best...

Why was Atsuko so cold towards Minami?

Can't wait to see more

Thank you

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Re: PJ48 HIGH SCHOOL (New writer) UPDATED CHAP 4 part 2
« Reply #29 on: August 15, 2013, 07:49:04 PM »
I'm sorry that I haven't commented, but I've been busy lately...

BUT! I love the update! <3 Takamina is soo cute and cool!!!

Can't wait for the next update!! <3

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Re: PJ48 HIGH SCHOOL (New writer) UPDATED CHAP 4 part 2
« Reply #30 on: August 16, 2013, 03:12:33 PM »
TAKAMINA GO GO GO!
KAMI OSHI: MATSUI RENA

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Re: PJ48 HIGH SCHOOL (New writer) UPDATED CHAP 4 part 2
« Reply #31 on: August 16, 2013, 03:37:22 PM »
still waiting for update >_< lol

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Re: PJ48 HIGH SCHOOL (New writer) UPDATED CHAP 5
« Reply #32 on: August 24, 2013, 05:08:13 PM »
Chap 5
“Minami I’ll be going now!” a little girl said to Minami
“No! Please stay! I don’t want to you to go! I want you to stay here with me!” said Minami half-shouted. It’s like she’s about to cry
“I’m sorry I can’t do that I have to move because of my father’s work and you know that. I don’t want to be separated from you either but I have to. Please don’t cry! If you do that you will make me cry too…” said the girl softly as she’s trying to hold her tears
“But…but…”
“No but Minami you have to be strong. You want to be a strong basketball player right? Don’t be such a cry baby! You remembered your promise right?”
“Of course I do!” shouted Minami which made the girl smiled widely at her
“That’s good! Don’t worry we will meet again and when that time comes you have to be a strong person okay? I promise that I will try to see you again.”
“Really!? Okay I promise!” shout Minami excitedly
“I have to go now see you!” said the girl to Minami as she ran to where her parents are with the moving truck.
“I’ll search for you just you wait! I will see you again and…”

*Aitakatta~Aitakatta~Aitakatta~Yes! Kimi ni!~*
Takamina’s phone’s alarm bell rings which make her wake up from her dream and sit up on her bed. She looks around to find her phone and turn it off. She looks at the time and it’s 5 o’clock. If you wonder why she wakes up so early it’s because she’s always go for a run before going to school. She get off the bed and go to the bathroom to brush her teeth. As she’s brushing her teeth she starts to remember about the dream.
“It has been a long time since I last dreamed about it. I wonder how she’s doing.” thinks Minami then shook her head to snap out of the thought and get ready to run.
“Whoa the morning is the best! The air feel so fresh!” shout Takamina excitedly when she gets out of the house. She starts running around the neighbor and greets everyone. Running like this makes Takamina feels relax
“Today I’m going to practice with the others after school since yesterday a lot of things happened so we postponed the practice.” Thought Takamina as she’s running.
“Even though I won that mach I’m still a little too weak from before. May be because I haven’t been practicing regularly at all. I guess I have to be serious from now on. Thinking back why Maeda-san accepted my request back then. If she wanted to disband the club that bad even brought all the Kami Seven there just to talk about it then after I had won she should express disappointment or sth. But her expression still calm and looks like she doesn’t even care about who wins. Why’s that I wonder? Well I’ll try to ask the others later.” Takamina thought to herself then continue to run back to her house to prepare for school
--On the way to school—
Takamina POV
I run to school with a basketball. I kind of like to feel the ball which makes me relax. While I’m running, I heard a scream which is a girl’s. I look around to find the source of the voice. I quickly run to the small alley which I guess is where the voice came from. My instinct is right! When I arrive, there are four guys surround a girl. Wait I think I saw that person before…whatever! Save the girl is now my first priority now!
“Hey you! Let her go!” shout me to the guys
“Huh? Who are you?” says the guy whom I belive to be their boss
“A girl? She’s got a big mouth there.” says guy 1
“What do you want this isn’t your business kid!” says guy 2.
“Yeah get lost midget!” says guy 3
What!? Midget!? Okay those guys really get on my nerves now… I’LL SHOW THEM
“Oh I see then let me show you what a midget can do then!” shout me
I quickly run to them then throw the ball to one of the guys face. When he is surprised by my attack I use that chance to land a kick to his stomach. He growl in pain. The others look at me with surprised and I think the girl is looking at me too. Huhm I have to settle this soon or the girl will be late for school (Au: Why don’t you worry about yourself first? :sweat: Beside how do you know she was on the way to school anyway!!?? :shock:).
‘So who’s next?” I says while smiling
“YOU BRAT! Go get her” shout the leader
“Too naive…”
Normal POV
After 5 minutes of fighting, the victory goes to Takamina (Au: Midget power!). The guys all lie down on the ground breathing heavily.
“So do you want another round?” says Takamina full of dangerous aura
“Urk!... RUN!!” shout the leader as they run away
Tch… coward!” says Takamina then turn around to approach the girl
“Are you oka... Maeda-san!?” to her surprised it’s Atsuko in front of her
“Oh it’s you.” says Atsuko calmly
“Okay…she doesn’t seem like she was scared at all…then what’s with the scream a while ago… What a strange girl” thought Takamina
“Thank you for saving me. You can go now I can go from here…” as she wants to stand up but she fall back down immediately. Takamina saw that so she got close to her to see what’s wrong. She sees Atsuko’s holding her ankle then remove her hand to see it’s swelling. It looks like she can’t walk to school alone in this condition. Takamina think of a way to help her
“Hop on.” says Takamina while bending down to let her get on
“Eh? It’s fine I can go by myself.”
“How can you go with your condition? I can’t let you walk by yourself like that! If you walk with that leg of yours, you’ll make it worse so listen to me. Beside you can’t be sure 100% that the same thing won’t happen again. Don’t be stubborn and hop on or I’ll carry you in bridal style. Which one will you choose?” hear Takamina says that she can’t help but to listen to her. After Atsuko climbs on her back she runs to school with full speed. But little did she know that a certain someone is smiling and blushing
TBC

Au: Hi everyone! I'm back with a new chapter. Sorry it took so long :kneelbow: I kind of having a little problem with all the homework  :fainted: :fainted:
Taka: Welcome back roto-san :hee:
Au: :shock: How can you be here so fast?
Taka: I heard that you have update a new chap so I came here immediately
Yuko, Yuki, Sae: Don't forget about us!
Sayaka, Tomochin, Jurina, Sashi: Hey there Author!
Atsuko, Chiyuu, Rena, Kitarie, Mayuu, Nyan, Miichan: Glad to see you back!
Au:.......... Is it just me or this time is more crowded than before? :stoned:
Yuko: Really!? Whatever anyway why did you leave us on such a long time huh... :shifty:
Au: *gulp* I said that I was busy with my homework right?
Yuki: Oh.... really... I heard from somewhere that you have just got a girlfriend.... It could be that you were busy with your girlfriend that you forgot about us! :shifty:
Au: Whom did you hear THAT from??
Taka: It's from your girlfriend of course!
Au:  :scared: SHE DID THAT!? Ugh I have to find her! Curse my life :on speedy:
Atsuko: And... ran off....
Mayuu: Can we go now? I want to go back and finish my anime
Sae: I haven't eat anything for dinner
Taka: Okay then let's end this. Everyone thank you for reading this fic. We'll be back soon. Don't worry it won't be long because we have a plan to make the Author to write faster :kekeke:
*Somewhere in the city* Why I can feel shiver on my spine?
Everyone: SEE YOU LATER! LOVE YOU ALL!! :on slopkiss: :on slopkiss:

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Re: PJ48 HIGH SCHOOL (New writer) UPDATED CHAP 5
« Reply #33 on: August 24, 2013, 05:25:41 PM »
finnaly an update :3

takamina kakkoi  :wub:

ehh ~? author - san already has a girlfriend  :shocked

omedetto  :D  :thumbup  :yossi:

but dont forget about your fics okay  ;)
im waiting for your update :3

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Re: PJ48 HIGH SCHOOL (New writer) UPDATED CHAP 5
« Reply #34 on: August 24, 2013, 10:03:21 PM »
Atsuko was minami's childhood friend....

Still dunno why she was cold to her though.

Can't wait to find out what's going to happen next

Thank you

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Re: PJ48 HIGH SCHOOL (New writer) UPDATED CHAP 5
« Reply #35 on: August 25, 2013, 12:54:57 AM »
Can't wait!!!!!! <3

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Re: PJ48 HIGH SCHOOL (New writer) UPDATED CHAP 5
« Reply #36 on: August 25, 2013, 03:40:29 AM »
An update...  :grin:

Takamina helps Acchan..

Takamina kakkoi... :inlove:

Can't wait for the next chapter...

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Re: PJ48 HIGH SCHOOL (New writer) UPDATED CHAP 5
« Reply #37 on: August 25, 2013, 03:51:34 AM »
Hn...dreams about her childhood friend...
-It could be Acchan but what if it's someone else??
-Argh!! Don't wanna think too much!!~ It's just...
-Takamina...You're so cool out there, i like it!!~
-Oh my??~ Will Acchan be a TsunDere after this??~
-Aw...Plz fall in love with Takamina!! *praying* Lol...

>Oh hey, plz update soon!!~ I can't wait for the next one!!~

PS: Hee~ Omedetou for getting a girlfriend..Hrm..Should i tell your gf about Yuki, Yuko and Sae kissed you?? (Still remember it!! Chapter 3!!~ Lol...)

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Re: PJ48 HIGH SCHOOL (New writer) UPDATED CHAP 5
« Reply #38 on: September 13, 2013, 03:48:26 AM »
hahaha this is really awesome!!! GO TAKAMINA GO!!! <3

My first thought when I heard Kami 7 was that it relates to the first generation members, but then again Minami wasn't in it so i thought the Kami 7 consist of Atsuko, Tomochin, Tomomi, Mariko, Haruna, Yuko, Yuki, or Mayu, the usual members... Since Mariko was the teacher, she's out, then Yuko, Yuki, and Sae is also not part of it, so they are also out. Then I thought, Atsuko, Tomochin, Tomomi, Haruna, Mayu, Rena, and I can't think of a 7th... Then Tomochin was revealed to not be in it as well, so I was stumped lol, but now I know who the Kami 7 are and I would never have guessed Kitahara to be one of them hahaha

anyway, sorry for the rambling, I really hope you could update soon!!! :D
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Re: PJ48 HIGH SCHOOL (New writer) UPDATED CHAP 5
« Reply #39 on: September 13, 2013, 04:13:42 PM »
Pleaseeee update soon.  :bow:

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