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Offline Takahashi Atsuko

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Re: Show me love: Chapter 3(22/09/13)
« Reply #40 on: September 23, 2013, 03:00:51 PM »
Kochiki: Yeah i'm alive xD I have e a lot of ideas to put on my fic, my inspiration is back so i think i can update chapter 4 until this weekend :)
I'm going to put mooore atsumina moments and i can tell you that NyanNyan will appear next chapter
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Re: Show me love: Chapter 3(22/09/13)
« Reply #41 on: September 23, 2013, 03:16:20 PM »
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Oh...Plz do, i'm gonna looking forward to it!!~
-Oho...So NyanNyan gonna appear in the next chapter...
-And...More AtsuMina you say??~ Ehe...Ehehehehe!!~
-Shoot, i let out a crappy laugh...Again... xD
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Re: Show me love: Chapter 3(22/09/13)
« Reply #42 on: September 23, 2013, 03:34:35 PM »
I really need to write atsumina moments xD (i need atsumina moments to survive xP)
yeah and unexpected things will be discovered next chapter :)
Oooh yeeah i have someone to revive me this is awesome xD

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Re: Show me love: Chapter 3(22/09/13)
« Reply #43 on: September 24, 2013, 11:50:52 PM »
Oh yeeaaah i'm back with chapter 4, i was fast right?  :cool1:
I hope you like it :)

Chapter 4
I left my house towards Acchan’s house, she told me this morning she went to a pet store to buy a cat for Takamina. Huuum she never gave a present like that, but what was I expecting? We never had more than friendship and if things continue like this between them, pretty soon they will be dating. I don’t care, as long as she’s happy and nobody hurt her I don’t mind her to be dating other person than me.
I sighed. I was going down the street so busy with my thoughts that I ended up hitting someone.
“Ittai “I heard a girl complaining.
Despite being much bigger than me, she ended up falling to the ground.
“Oh, sorry, wasn’t my intention, I was so distracted" I said holding out my hand, she accepted my help.
"I was also thinking about other things and did not notice where I was walking" she said with a smile.
Who is she? She's so beautiful! Come Yuko you cannot waste an opportunity like this!
"I want to apologize properly, you want to go drink a coffee?" I asked.
"But are you sure? I don’t want to be a nuisance to you "she said.
"No way, it would be great if you come with me"
"Okay, I don’t have anything to do now so it’s fine to me”
"Oh, my bad manners, I forgot to introduce myself. My name is Oshima Yuko, but you can treat me by Yuko and your name is? "
"Haruna, Kojima Haruna but can treat me by Haruna if you want"
We were both up to a place that was near there and I sent a message to Acchan warning that would be there later.
We've been talking for some time and I had the opportunity to know her better, what she likes and things like that, we were not there for long, I ended up asking Haruna to come to Acchan’s house for her to meet my best friend.
Arriving there I rang the bell and she opened the door immediately.
"Hello, come in" said Acchan.
Both entered and I drove Haruna to the living room.
"Acchan, she's Kojima Haruna, Haruna she is Maeda Atsuko"
"Hello, you can call Acchan me if you want" she said.
"Call me Haruna then" she said smiling.
"Where is Takamina?" I asked.
"It's up there with Kiko, I'll go call her" And left.
"I warn you of one thing" I said.
She looked at me watching what I would say.
"Takamina cannot talk but she doesn't have voice problems. Acchan and I found her in the middle of garbage bags full of blood and wounds. She is depressed, we're still trying to figure out what happened but we just know that two persons beat her, one of these persons we already saw, the other we doesn’t know who is “I said .
"I see ..." She said.
They entered the room and Acchan said:
"Takamina, she's Kojima Haruna"
Takamina nodded to Haruna.
"Takamina?" Haruna asked, she looked stunned and I did not realize why.
"Yes, we do not know her name so we call her Takamina" explained Acchan.
"I know her" she said.
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"I know her" Haruna said.
"What!?” I and Yuko shouted, Takamina seemed to be amazed "Haruna you know her? Tell us everything you know about her please!"
"Okay, where to start?" Takamina and I sat on the floor in front of her "Me and the Takamina... We are sisters”
"Sisters?" I asked.
Takamina looked at her and shrugged, looked like she didn’t understand.
“We have the same mother, or at least we had”
"How come you had?” Yuko asked.
" It's a long story, her father was too in love with our mother , he was completely addicted to her that when she left him, because she loved my father, he had revenge and killed my father and then our mother " She explained " He always managed to escape the police with some cheap tricks, but now I returned to take revenge "
“You know her name?” I asked.
“Perfectly, her name is Takahashi Minami"
"Is that your real name Takamina?” I asked.
She shook her head up and down.
“Her father is an animal that grudge for our mother and all that she did and left behind " She looked at Takamina " Minami , who hit you was your father and Nagano, right?"
She began to tremble with fear again and I hugged her.
“Calm down Takamina, I'm here with you"
She shook her head up and down.
"I knew it ..."
Impossible...
“It was your father who hit you and left you in the garbage?” I asked.
She shook her head up and down.
I was shocked.
“Takamina, how old are you?” Yuko asked her.
She shrugged.
"I'm 16 so she has 18 "Haruna said" He killed our mother 14 years ago”
“She was being bullied by those idiots for 14 years?” I asked.
All we looked for Takamina.
She shook her head up and down.
I hugged her tighter, poor her, she took a beating from her father, suffered, cried, was always alone for 14 years?
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“Minami did you knew your mother?" Haruna asked.
I do not remember anything from when I was small, the furthest memory I have, I was not a child at least I do not think I've had a shapely body and I was lied on my bed full of bandages . I do not remember my mother or anyone from my family.
"Do you remember me?” She asked.
Again gave a negative response.
“We played together before this happened”
Seriously?
“Takahashi Minami is that your name right?” Asked Maeda.
I gave a positive response.
Kiko jumped onto my lap and started rubbing up on my shirt. I look at Haruna, she wants to take revenge on my father because he killed our mother and her father, but what if things do not go as she wants? She will die...
I noticed the watchful look of Maeda threw me, what look was that? She looked worried but at the same time her eyes conveyed a twinkle of love. Again the urge to kiss her, but I cannot, what happened was an accident, I did not want to ... or I wanted?
"Nee Yuko, I need to go outside, get some fresh air, can you come with me?" Haruna asked.
"Sure" And they left.
When I came back to reality, Maeda approached her face to my ear and whispered:
"I 'm also thinking about it ..."
How did she know?
"I also liked"
But how?
"I want more..."
No, please don’t ... I'll be addicted to your kisses, do not understand it? It's too good for me to resist!
She approached her lips to mine, but I stopped her.
"What’s the matter, you don’t like it?” She asked.
I looked down, is not that...
“Listen, I know you had a horrible past, I am slowly discovering what happened to you. I want to know more about you, I do not want to hurt you, quite the opposite! I want to show you that life is not all that pain you feel inside you"
Maeda...
“You know you the worst side of life “as she was talking, she again approached our faces" Please, let me show you what life has to offer”
Then our lips met for the third time, it feels so good...
“Uh-huh" I heard Oshima and immediately I parted our lips, I noticed that Maeda threw Oshima a killer look “Sorry, Haruna had to leave, she gave me her number if we wanted to talk to her"
“Okay" said Maeda.
I stood up and motioned that he was going to the room.
What a shame ... Oshima saw us Aah doushiyou?
I looked through the window, as I used to do in my father's house. I saw the wind making the leaves of the trees dance which in turn hit the floor, I saw a figure stepping the leaves with angry. This figure was the front of Maeda’s house and preparing to ring the bell, that figure was...
                                                                                  …Nagano …



So want do you think guys? Please comment so i can get inspiration to writte :)


Offline olive29

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Re: Show me love: Chapter 4(24/09/13)
« Reply #44 on: September 25, 2013, 02:50:29 AM »
Haruna is Minami's sister??

Yeah..Atsumina :inlove:

Ehhhhh???!!!!

This is bad..

Nagano is there..

What will happen next?

Update soon,please...

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Re: Show me love: Chapter 4(24/09/13)
« Reply #45 on: September 25, 2013, 03:30:53 AM »
Oh crap, no.  :panic:

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Re: Show me love: Chapter 4(24/09/13)
« Reply #46 on: September 25, 2013, 06:08:30 AM »
Chapter 3 almost had heart attack when read maeda n yuko naked !
luckily just a nightmare..
chapter 4
so haruna is her sister...
and wonder how they will took revenge on minami father...
aaahhh...atsumina moment!!! only to get interrupt by yuko...
now yuko know that acchan likes minami and vice versa..
then she and haruna... ♡ hehhe
what will nagano do next?
Great fic!!
Update soon!! :D

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Re: Show me love: Chapter 4(24/09/13)
« Reply #47 on: September 25, 2013, 06:14:52 AM »
Minami is older than Haruna? Hmm thats new :)

OMG NAGANO!!! KILL THAT BITCH!!! KILL HIM!!!  :angry1:

Holy shit, whats gonna happen next? I'm sooo nervous and anxious, GAH!!!! *pulling my hair*

I hope you would update soon  :kneelbow:

p.s. YUKO!!!! Why did you ruined their kissing moment!!! My Atsumina  :pleeease:
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Re: Show me love: Chapter 4(24/09/13)
« Reply #48 on: September 25, 2013, 10:08:02 AM »
E-Eh?! Minami and Haruna are sisters?!?!
-Uwaw...What a sad past she held there...Minami that is...
-Haruna is taking revenge on who? Minami or her father??
-Her father maybe...Well, of course?? Meh...But...
-It's a kissu!!~ And geh...Yuko saw it after Haruna left the house....
-Aa...N-N-Nagano was there, in front of Atsuko's house...
-I don't really go 'doushiyo' at the kiss part, ehehe...But...
-Now i'm going 'doushiyo!!!' te...Nagano!! Leave her alone could ya??

>Man...Hope to see the next update!!~ So plz update it soon!!~ But will still be waiting for it~

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Re: Show me love: Chapter 4(24/09/13)
« Reply #49 on: September 25, 2013, 12:43:41 PM »
I am LOVING this.
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Re: Show me love: Chapter 4(24/09/13)
« Reply #50 on: September 25, 2013, 12:57:43 PM »
oh no!!!
nagano is there  :frustrated:

omg pls update soon :on gay:

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Re: Show me love: Chapter 4(24/09/13)
« Reply #51 on: September 25, 2013, 01:27:20 PM »
Haruna and Takamina are sisters?!? That was a surprise.
My sweet AtsuMina!!! They share another kiss... and as a pervert I'm waiting for the smexy time!!! xDDDD
Nagano is there.... that's bad... really bad...
Update soon!!

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Re: Show me love: Chapter 5(29/09/13)
« Reply #52 on: September 29, 2013, 06:42:32 PM »
Hiiiiiiii look who's back  :on gay:
Thanks for your comments  :kneelbow:
I'm down because acchan is dating, i want her to be with Takamina!!!!  :on speedy:
And i want to apologize to kojiyuu fans and specialy to Yuko fans, i'm reeeeeeeeeeally sorry  :kneelbow: :kneelbow: :kneelbow:

Chapter 5
Nagano?! It is not possible, and now? I gotta warn them not to open the door!
I heard the sound of the bell ringing, oh no!
I ran as fast as possible down there, Maeda was getting near the door, and now I will not arrive in time! I have to do something!
She reached out to open the door...
" No!" I said .
She looked at me, looked amazed. It was a magical moment, she could not speak, I bet she was still hearing my voice in her head.
" Takamina , you said ," she said .
The doorbell rang again.
"Do you want me to open?” She asked.
I shook my head from side to side.
We sat in silence for a few minutes until we are sure that he was no longer on the doorstep.
“What’s up?” Yuko asked suddenly appearing.
“She talked" muttered Maeda.
Oshima looked at me like not believing in the words of Maeda.
“She what? Are you okey?”She asked.
“I’m serious! I'm not kidding she talked! “Said Maeda” Takamina, speak again”
I tried again but my voice didn't come out . What the hell? Why could not I speak?
 Yuko didn't believe whatever...
I clasped my hands in front of face to Maeda apologizing for failing to speak.
She stroked my face and said:
"Don't worry Takamina, you have a beautiful voice , you know? "
I felt my face slightly flushed when it is to make me feel so hot ?
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A few days have passed since I met Haruna confess that there is something in her that attract me very much to the point of wanting to be with her, think about her all the time... It took me some time to understand that I was in love with her but I'm afraid of her answer because we know each other a few days ago. But I am determined to tell her today, that's why I asked her to go to the Natural Park at 6pm.
Now, I am here waiting for her, thinking on a way to tell her that I think I'm starting to like her. I am very nervous...
"Yuko! I'm her! "Hear the voice of Haruna.
I looked back and there she was, wearing a white dress that ended just before the knees.
"H- Hello" I said.
“Ahaha what do you have? Looks like you saw a ghost” she said.
"Sorry, you're very pretty, this dress suits you well"
She lowered her face slightly flushed.
"Thanks" she said "So what’s up?"
Calm down Yuko!
"Haruna I called you here because I have something very important to tell you"
The expression on her face changed, as if she knew what I was going to say. I started to feel too nervous, oh no, I don’t know if I can do this, I'm afraid of being rejected again.
"It is so important?" She asked.
"Yes, I have to tell you today because tomorrow may be too late"
It’s now...
"Look, I 'm not very good with words, never knew very well how to express my feelings for the people but ... "I paused” But that doesn’t stop me ... To know ... I like you more than I should"
I looked down.
“I know I only know you a few days ago, but I really like you! You're a wonderful person, very dear and sweet. The first time I saw you I felt different, something changed in me "I looked at her “I’m sorry if I'm being too sudden, but I cannot hide this from you, it is a feeling too strong to hide in a small body like mine "
 And now? She said nothing, just stared at me. I couldn’t tell if she was shocked, it was happy or sad ... Her gaze was empty.
“Haruna?"
"Yuko I’m sorry ...”
No...
"Sorry I have to go!" And ran away. I counted each step until she was out of sight.
I was rejected again. I looked down, drops began to fall from the sky, as tears fell on my face.
I left the park in small steps, people passed by me running hoping to find somewhere to shelter from the heavy rain. And now? Where am I going? I never felt so alone in my life...
In the twinkling of an eye, night fell and I still walked aimlessly through the streets. Suddenly a car stopped beside me.
“Are thou the Oshima Yuko?" I knew this guy from somewhere...
"Yes" I replied.
I noticed more two men behind me, I was trapped. One of them hit me with a baseball bat in the head, I don’t remember anything else...
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I was sitting on the couch with Acchan watching a movie, her cell phone rang and she answered:
“Mochi Mochi? Aah Oshima-san, no, Yuko is not here "She paused for a moment" If you knew something about her, please call me"
And hung up. I looked at her with a curious look.
"Yuko left home in the afternoon and has not returned home, the strange thing is that the phone is off" she explained.
Strange, did they call to Haruna?
I picked up her phone, marked Haruna’s number and gave the cell phone to Maeda.
"You think she's with Haruna?"
I shook my head up and down.
“Mochi Mochi, Haruna? Yuko is with you? Hum I understand, but don’t know where did she go? Ok, if you know anything call me, okay? "And hung up the call "She was with Haruna in the afternoon but she’s not now"
Something's not right, something happened between them?




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Re: Show me love: Chapter 5(29/09/13)
« Reply #53 on: September 29, 2013, 07:47:08 PM »
WHY!? WHY IS ALWAYS YUKO THE ONE THAT SUFFERS MORE?!!!

Now, two rejections and a hit with a baseball bat, what more?! what more?! <--- *insert drama music*

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Re: Show me love: Chapter 5(29/09/13) [BELIEVE IN ATSUMINA!!!]
« Reply #54 on: September 29, 2013, 11:11:08 PM »
Ah.. Missed your updates...

Haruna is minami's sister...

She wanted revenge...

Their father is a twisted crazy person

Now Yuko got kidnapped after being rejected

I think the ones that kidnapped Yuko is minami's father and his friend

What's going to happen next?

Would Atsuko and Haruna rescue Yuko?

Why did Haruna reject Yuko?

Is it because she wanted her hate for her revenge?

Well can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

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Re: Show me love: Chapter 5(29/09/13) [BELIEVE IN ATSUMINA!!!]
« Reply #55 on: September 30, 2013, 07:01:17 AM »
thanks for the Atsumina moments they are heal my heart a little

update soon

n.n'

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Re: Show me love: Chapter 5(29/09/13) [BELIEVE IN ATSUMINA!!!]
« Reply #56 on: September 30, 2013, 12:17:52 PM »
I'm afraid of what might happen. :sweat:

Thanks for the update and update soon.  :bow:

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Re: Show me love: Chapter 5(29/09/13) [BELIEVE IN ATSUMINA!!!]
« Reply #57 on: September 30, 2013, 01:48:22 PM »
Ah!!~ Yuko just confessed her feelings to Haruna!!~
-But was rejected...KojiYuu, this fic will be lonely without KojiYuu...
-But meh...I won't kill you because if i were, i can't see AtsuMina in action!!~
-Lol...Just kidding, anyway, wut the hell...Yuko was hit by the baseball bat!!~
-And that's gonna hurt!!~ No, my heart!! Those guys is Nagano's right??~
-Dzamn!!~ It shouldn't be like this!!~ But still wanna know what'll happen~

>Ahaha...So plz update soon!!~ I can't wait for the next one!!~ Nice update btw~

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Re: Show me love: Chapter 5(29/09/13) [BELIEVE IN ATSUMINA!!!]
« Reply #58 on: September 30, 2013, 03:27:19 PM »
i love the stories.. poor minami being bullied by her own father... :angry:
what gonna happen to yuko? i wonder why haruna reject yuko? :shocked  :panic:
gonna wait for updates...  :cow: :thumbsup

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Re: Show me love: Chapter 5(29/09/13) [BELIEVE IN ATSUMINA!!!]
« Reply #59 on: November 04, 2013, 04:50:11 PM »

very good  :thumbsup

I look forward to the Takamina could speak normally

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