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SWAP ME MORE (Ch1-2) [AtsuYuu +???]
« on: August 21, 2013, 06:42:13 AM »
A/N Oha! I'm here again to offer another story :D
Disclaimer: idea came from Yamada-kun to Nananin no Majo  :)
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Who could’ve thought that someday, I’d experience life? Real life.  I was contained within a small box. I was all alone. Expectations were my entire standard until I met her. That squirrel girl. Our lives changed since then.

Emotionally, psychologically, mentally, and physically….

Wait. WHAT?!?! PHYSICALLY??!

Sigh. Yeah Physically, We’ve been exchanging bodies through a kiss.


That Kiss.



And the hell starts.

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Let's see if this works  :nervous
« Last Edit: August 29, 2013, 08:04:07 AM by imteedee »
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Re: SWAP ME MORE (Prologue) [AtsuYuu +???]
« Reply #1 on: August 21, 2013, 07:49:15 AM »
Continue it please :)



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Re: SWAP ME MORE (Prologue) [AtsuYuu +???]
« Reply #2 on: August 21, 2013, 07:55:27 AM »
 :w00t: yeah atsuyuu
Next next next next

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Re: SWAP ME MORE (Prologue) [AtsuYuu +???]
« Reply #3 on: August 21, 2013, 08:44:56 AM »
YAY~ it's Atsuyuu  :drool:
OSHIMA YUKO DAISUKI  <3
A TakaYuu Here, An AtsuYuu there and A KojiYuu everywhere
             

ALL THESE HUGS ... i want one :cry:

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Re: SWAP ME MORE (Prologue) [AtsuYuu +???]
« Reply #4 on: August 21, 2013, 09:19:38 AM »
Eh!? Body swapping?... *Interesting!*

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Re: SWAP ME MORE (Prologue) [AtsuYuu +???]
« Reply #5 on: August 21, 2013, 09:48:07 AM »
I was like 'Yossha!!!'
Wew. Never knew there were more Atsuyuu shippers than I thought.
Body swapping... Ah, the weird manga~ Acchan's new solo single will be the opening theme for the anime adaption~
Good news, I sense a possible Acchan harem in this fiction If yar gonna follow the manga.
I was thinking Acchan fits the white haired girl better though. Silent, beautiful, but is 'special'.
Oh well, I shall wait for the AtsuYuu!!!

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Re: SWAP ME MORE (Prologue) [AtsuYuu +???]
« Reply #6 on: August 21, 2013, 10:15:40 AM »
Yay!! Atsuyuu!!

Physically?? Wow!! If they often do that..  :w00t: That's mean more kissing!!  :w00t: Yay!!

Update soon!! Can't wait!!  :cow:

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Re: SWAP ME MORE (Prologue) [AtsuYuu +???]
« Reply #7 on: August 22, 2013, 12:13:15 PM »
A/N I shall make this work cause it's AtsuYuu  :panic:

@Ashura: I suddenly realized that it would be hard to follow the manga/live action, cause I'm planning to put on some other pairs, I'll just stick with the switching idea for now  :nervous I might go beyond the real story, and do some drastic changes  XD
@irgheto: technically *cough yes  :lol: :rolleyes:

well then~ for our AtsuYuu feels  :deco:
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CHAPTER 1 (Part 1)

“OSHIMAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!”  *PLAKAK!! *BOOM! *TOINK! *TOINK! *BOOM! “COME BACK HERE!!!!”
What? Oha! Oshima Yuko-desu. What? Ah! That’s my homeroom adviser. I’m used to it. The trouble-maker of Suzaku All Girls High, they say. Skipping classes is so muuuuch fun! <3 How I wish I could do this for my entire life…

Rooftop with a perfect view of the field…

“Kyaaaa~ this is life!!” as I stretched my short arms up in the air and put out my binoculars.


“Kyaaa~ this is so fun!  Oshiri <3”
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“thank you for helping, Maeda-san”

“Hai”

*ZZZZZZD

Sigh.

“….”


“………”


“………….”

“boring~”  Maeda Atsuko-desu. Ano~This is my routine. If you consider that as a routine. This is my life. A boring one. I’m used to this since I don’t know anymore. I always top the exams…. Well, literally. I don’t have any friends studying was my life.



Until…
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Yuko POV

Junior corridor…


An ordinary day as it may seem. I managed to escape from my terror adviser. Here I am wandering along the corridor alone. ALONE. ALONE.

“kyaaaaaaaa~ MY OSHIRI SHOTS! <3” as I put out my oshiri album.
“OHOHOHO! This Oshiri <3 kyaaaa~ kawaii kawaii nee~” 

*STEP *STEP *STEP  sudden footsteps won my attention.
And before me stood the Schools’s number one pride. Possessing her shoulder-length straight black hair,and cold but perfect aura, Maeda Atsuko.

*STARE… suddenly the girl turned her way and walked up the stairs.
 “That girl~”

“tch that perfect girl, always topping exams! What a pain?!”  I then decided to go up past her when suddenly….
*STEP
*STEP
*STEP
*STEP



*SLIP! “huwaaaaaaaaaaa~”

*PLAKAK!

“Ittaiii~ ittai~ fufufufu”

“tch such a pain! Whatever!” I then decided to move ahead and enter our classroom and sat on my seat. Nothing new, except for the fact that my classmates are staring at me. “Nani~ zuup with these weird people?! Tch. Mind your own business! Grr”

“Sigh” I just decided to go to the ladies room and… well nothing much. I just loiter around. I washed my face carefully and then…
“fufufu my ever cute face~ poor me, because of that Maeda Atsuko tch” I thought while looking at the mirror.
“oh yeah! That face! Tch” as I point out on the mirror.
“whoa I didn’t think Maeda-san is cute too <3 ohoho”
“wait………..”

“KYAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!”
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Rooftop…

“HUWAAAAAA!!! I’m you!!! And … and you’re me!!! What the hell?!?!” as I shout at a certain figure in front of me, reading History textbook.

“…….”

“What?!? You don’t have anything to say?! MS. PER-FECT?! You use your friggin brain now!!!” as I broke down on the floor.
“nani~ we should just think of something  that might be the cause of this phenomena” she uttered with a blank face at me.
“HUWAAAAAA! I don’t knooooooooow!! Fufufu my brain cells are dying now!! Nooo!” I uttered in despair.

“sou~ we fell…together” as she turned to the door holding the knob.

“NOTHING LESS FROM YOU! SOU~ LET’S GO NOOOW!” I happily suggested.
“But…. don’t you think it would be suspicious if someone sees us doing that” she butted in.
“sou~ let’s just switch back after class, Yuko-san” she added and there she vanished.
“fufufu really!?!...” Suddenly I realized.
“I’m Maeda-san right now… which means….OHOHOHOHO!!! Maeda-sans oshiri oppai teehee <3” I then dashed inside the cubicle inside the ladies room.

“OHOHOHO! Now is the time! What a blessing in disguise! <3” as I tucked out my shirt… Took off my ribbon… Unbutton my shirt….


“kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!! SO SOFT nyaaa~ TOO BIG!! nyaaa<3”
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After class…..

“sou~ now’s the time Maeda-san!” I announced as I stood beside Maeda-san beside me, well technically is Oshima Yuko at the moment.
“yeah” she uttered blankly.
“very well! On the count of three” as I held her tight.
“1!”
“2!”
“3!”

*JUMP

“Ittai~ ittai~” I muttered in pain. I turned my face to see how my partner was doing…
“UGH. FAIL!” as I realized we still haven’t switched back on our respective bodies.

“AGAIN!”

*FAIL


“AGAIN!”

*FAIL

“AGAIN

*FAIL

“Ittaaaai~”

“mou~ there must be something missing” she whispered as we are about to stand up. Suddenly I realized….

“Yeah.. There is, I guess” I whispered along the wind.

“Hmm?”

“We kissed” I started to move closer to her. She made a step back.

“Don’t move”

Sunset illuminating on lone corridor with wind rustles can only be heard. With my heart beating fast,



We kissed.
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Re: SWAP ME MORE (Ch1-1) [AtsuYuu +???]
« Reply #8 on: August 22, 2013, 12:45:22 PM »
Atsu atsu AtsuYuu~
Acchan's so plain... as per usual XD
And Yuko is as perverted and random as ever~
So it's no harem? Ah well. AtsuYuu feels FTW!
If only I have my laptop right now... I wanna join the AtsuYuu revolution too!!!

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Re: SWAP ME MORE (Ch1-1) [AtsuYuu +???]
« Reply #9 on: August 23, 2013, 09:53:37 AM »
pervert Yuko.. LOL!!

already got their first kiss, eh?
will there be atsuko POV??

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Re: SWAP ME MORE (Ch1-1) [AtsuYuu +???]
« Reply #10 on: August 23, 2013, 12:35:32 PM »
Perveted Yuuko. . . Can't stop laughing. .

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Re: SWAP ME MORE (Ch1-1) [AtsuYuu +???]
« Reply #11 on: August 28, 2013, 05:33:54 PM »
continue this pls?  :twothumbs

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Re: SWAP ME MORE (Ch1-1) [AtsuYuu +???]
« Reply #12 on: August 28, 2013, 11:36:08 PM »
I've seen the drama, and there also making an anime! XD This is really good. Waiting for an update! :heart:
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:heart: l Dropped: Tentomu chu l REBORN l Bite me l NMB Gakuen l YumeToki l Cafe 48 l :heart: l Hiatus/Indefinite: Samurai l Blood Bonds l Night Wind's Deed l PRISM l Time Travelers l :heart:
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Re: SWAP ME MORE (Ch1-1) [AtsuYuu +???]
« Reply #13 on: August 29, 2013, 08:03:07 AM »
A/N thanks for reading/commenting  :bow:
@TTLuver497: yeah, I like the drama too  XD
@DontMindMe: yeah, I was just at the phase where I'm thinking carefully for possible pairs to add, so I wouldn't have problems in the future following the series' plot.
@Eyecrasher: Yuko is Yuko  :lol:
@irgheto: yeah. there will be their 2nd kiss, 3rd kiss, 4th kiss and so on....  :nervous technically. I'm planning to keep Acchan's unreadable personality for the moment  :lol:
@Ashura: AtsuYuu Level: unknown  :lol:

Yeah. The real story took place in a Co-ed school, this time, it's AKB so it should be an all girls school  :wahaha: I'll take my time adjusting the story.

Still credits go to Y7M  :deco:
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CHAPTER 1 (Part 2)

Yuko POV


*CHUUU! <3


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“kyaa~ <3, MY OSHIRI! MY OPPAI! My sexseey booodeeh!! I’m back OHOHOHO!”
“yeah. We’re back now. I’ll go ahead” as the girl is about to leave the corridor.
“Sou~ we can change through kissing” as I tried to deduct what’s happening with my few left brain cells.


“Yeah. I guess so”
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The next day…

Faculty Room..


OSHIIIMAAAA!!! As the adviser slammed the perfect examination papers on the desk.

Yeah. Perfect.


Perfect 0.



“GAAAAAAAAAH. How boooring?!”
“YOU! You have to take the remedial exam! IF you fail this time! We gonna kick you OOOOOOOOUT!”
“EH?! KICK ME OUT?!?!” I asked in shock.
“YEAH! YOU BETTER TAKE THIS SERIOUSLY!!!”

Some students graduate with flying colours but in Yuko’s case… she might graduate with FLYING PAPERS.

“UGH! What the heck….”


*LIGHTING BULB


“mewhehehe I never knew I’m a genius” as the squirrel girl savoured her new found ultimate weapon.
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Someone’s POV

At the rooftop….

“Atsuko! Pleeeeeeeeeeease!” as the girl put her hands together it’s as if praising a Buddha in front of her. The girl just continued reading her booklet of History.
“UGH! Pleeeease!” the girl lowered her head even more.
The shoulder-length haired suddenly closed her book and took a step forward.

“Yuko-chan”

“EH?” as the girl lifted her head in confusion.


“kiss me”
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Student Council President’s Room

A dark-cold room with only daylight escaping through the slightly open curtains by the window lighting the president’s chair.
 “I see, don’t fail this time Vice…” as the President landed the point-ball of her pen on the finished paper.
“I will, President”  as the vice-president bowed in front of the president and eventually leaving smirk at the girl standing beside the table… the secretary.

“This is gonna be fun, nee~ secretary?” as the president adjusted on her seat looking at the Ace’s profile. The secretary just kept her blank face and gripped her hand.
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Yuko POV

“Hmm… she’s weird”


~flashback~
I saw her at the rooftop. She was reading a book as per her usual activity. “EH?! Even during lunch break she’s studying?!! Tch!” I got irritated with what’s her doing with her life. She’s lifeless. On the other hand, I pity her…. “Anyway, not my problem now”
“Atsuko!” as I approached the legendary ace of the school.
“nani?” she asked still looking at her book.

“I need your… help he~he~”


….few minutes later…


“ATSUKO! PLEEEASSE!!!” as I begged her, with my face almost kissing the floor kneeling down on her.

“Please!” *BOW
“please!” *BOW
“Please!”*BOW

I suddenly heard a snap. I lifted my head. I saw her in front of me.
“Yuko-chan” she called me. I was confused. I don’t know what’s going on her mind. She stares right through me with her blank face. My heart started to race.

“Eh?”

“Kiss me”

Shocked. I was stoned on my feet. I didn’t move.  She took a step forward and another… going closer at me. She held my shoulders and anchored her head to reach me.


She kissed me.
~end of flashback~


“mou~ she must have been doing her best for me now” as I thought of her while walking down the corridor to our classroom.
“hmm… I forgot what our next subject is” I thought as I opened our door.
“THIS IS GONNA BE MY FAVORITE SUBJECT FROM NOW ON~ <3” as I scanned the whole room full of girls changing uniforms.

“Kyaaaaaa~ PE class <3 OHOHOHO”

I was caught with the moment I unconsciously unbuttoned my shirt, not minding the surrounding when suddenly I felt a flash of a camera on me.

Yeah. I didn't notice I was standing right in front of an open window.

“Eh?”

I turned my eyes to the origin of the noise and saw 3 perverted ugly creatures taking pictures of me. No. TAKING PICTURES of Atsuko’s perfect body. I think I just felt a nerve on my forehead just popped in there.
“GRRR!!! What the hell are you doing?!?!” as I buttoned my shirt quickly and jumped right outside the window. Thankfully our classroom is at the grounds. I dashed right after them to catch the perverted culprits.

“WOI!” as I caught them at the dead area of the parking lot.
“tch! Even if you know us you won’t get ….this!” as the guy showed-off his camera.

“MWEHEHE… YOU DON’T SAY~ <3”




*FLYING KICK *BOOM *BANG *PLAKAK *CRACK



“Give me that!” as I snatched the camera from the poor beaten-up pervert’s hand and erased the photo.


“THIS BODY IS MINE” I announced.


“EH?!”

~chatter~
~chatter~
Guy1: weird.
Guy2: is she possessed?
Guy3:*NOD *NOD
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I was guilty for not taking care of her body. I decided to check up on her by sneaking close to a window. I saw me. No. I mean I saw her taking my exam.

“Ace, as expected~”

She was taking the exam calmly. LIKE AS CALM AS THE WATER. It’s as if she’s just reviewing her notes.
“Arigatou~” I muttered it’s as if I hoped it’ll reach her. I stayed. I watched out for her until she finished the exam.


“I need to apologize~”


As early as I saw her walked out from the examination room I grabbed her hand and dragged her to whichever empty classroom where I could talk to her in private. She didn’t mind though maybe because in the first place I’m actually dragging my own body.


We got inside the room. I pushed her on the wall and locked her between my short arms which gave me a very slim distance with her body. So close~




I looked down.


“Sorry~ don’t freak out, something happened ….ear~ earlier” I stuttered as I try to give a decent apology. She suddenly lifted hand and touched my chin, she lifted my head. I was mesmerized by her eyes. My heart started to race once again. She moved towards me and gave me a soft kiss.



We’re back.


“it’s okay, I think I know what you mean~” she said as she was now fixing her uniform which I apparently messed up earlier. I just stared at the unbelievable figure.



“I think it’s not a bad idea at all” she said as she exited the room.
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Re: SWAP ME MORE (Ch1-2) [AtsuYuu +???]
« Reply #14 on: August 29, 2013, 08:12:35 AM »
more pairs  :shocked  :twothumbs :twothumbs
I have an idea with the student's council identity!  :nervous

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Re: SWAP ME MORE (Ch1-2) [AtsuYuu +???]
« Reply #15 on: August 29, 2013, 08:39:27 AM »
It's... not as perverted as I thought it would be...
But Oh well, like my fic's any better XD
Since it's not harem, I'm guessing that Payuyu are targeting the Ace and Mayuyu's targeting Paruru~
Just coz I don't see Takachibi as the sadistic prez

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Re: SWAP ME MORE (Ch1-2) [AtsuYuu +???]
« Reply #16 on: August 29, 2013, 12:37:29 PM »
Hmm~ I wonder who else is playing our little game... 8)
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:heart: l Completed: Fire and Ice l Black Chocolate l My eternal blue rose l Dishonored l The Black Rose l Fruits of a Rose l Remnants l :heart:
:heart: l Dropped: Tentomu chu l REBORN l Bite me l NMB Gakuen l YumeToki l Cafe 48 l :heart: l Hiatus/Indefinite: Samurai l Blood Bonds l Night Wind's Deed l PRISM l Time Travelers l :heart:
:heart: l Collab threads: Sky&Ruka l Ruka&Michael l :heart:
 l Compilation thread: 48G New Gen l :heart:

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Re: SWAP ME MORE (Ch1-2) [AtsuYuu +???]
« Reply #17 on: August 29, 2013, 03:26:18 PM »
 :twothumbs
nice! acchan and yuuko knew how to get benefits with each other :nervous
but I guess yuuko got more benefits than acchan. . .

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Re: SWAP ME MORE (Ch1-2) [AtsuYuu +???]
« Reply #18 on: August 29, 2013, 05:56:22 PM »
hmm... i don't mind acchan being unreadable, it made the story more interesting anyway.
another pairing will come out? yey!

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Re: SWAP ME MORE (Ch1-2) [AtsuYuu +???]
« Reply #19 on: September 01, 2013, 03:59:22 PM »
I like this!!! :)

Another pairing eh? Looking forward to seeing who it is!  :twothumbs

Please update soon!! :)  :bow:

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