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Offline mikaellitsa

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Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 6 NEW
« Reply #80 on: November 06, 2013, 05:19:39 PM »
interesting wanna see what minami will do
that's your fault acchan go and fix it  :angry:

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Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 6 NEW
« Reply #81 on: November 06, 2013, 07:01:51 PM »
aww minami why you so cold toward acchan....
please let acchan talk with you....
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nice fanfic....


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Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 6 NEW
« Reply #82 on: November 07, 2013, 01:44:18 AM »
Well Poor Minami... being left in the morning by Atsuko...

But Poor Atsuko too for being insecure about what it was all meant to Minami then...

Well everything develop nicely for Wmatsui, MariMii and Saeyaka

Would Atsumina be able to clear the air?

How would they get together?

How are they going to confess their feelings for one another?

What's about KojiYuu?

So what's going to happen next?

More dancing and practices I guess...

Can't wait to see the next

Thank you for the update

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Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 6 NEW
« Reply #83 on: November 07, 2013, 01:53:09 AM »
Wowhoo!! Update  :deco:

Why Minami so cold to Maeda  :angry:  :?

Maeda fighting!! Don't give up on Minami

Cant wait fir the next ch

Please update :bow:  :bow:

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Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 6 NEW
« Reply #84 on: November 07, 2013, 03:59:04 AM »
awww.. come on acchan! talk to her!

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Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 6 NEW
« Reply #85 on: November 07, 2013, 01:23:06 PM »
wahhhh fasuto!!
i cant believed i miss ur new update!! damn u school  :err:

oh well better late than never  :nervous
awww.. come on acchan! talk to her!
^same reaction XD
come on acchan just kiss her again and stop thinking ur mother  :doh:
i want my atsumina smexy update again  :ding: *teehee*

fausto thank u for the update :on gay:
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Re: Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 6 NEW
« Reply #86 on: November 10, 2013, 12:34:51 AM »
hope everything went better for atsumina

thanks and continue soon...

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Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 6 NEW
« Reply #87 on: November 11, 2013, 07:12:39 AM »
Hehehe Love it! :D

Oi Bakamina! always concentrated on your work... TALK TO ACCHAN  :angry1:

Hope to see more of the other pairings as well! :)

Update soon!  :twothumbs  :bow:

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Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 6 NEW
« Reply #88 on: November 12, 2013, 03:52:53 PM »
I just read the update Fausto-san. Thank youu.

Even though AtsuMina is not together yet, I like the drama.  :w00t:

I kinda like Takamina's "Poker Face" side. Atleast that's how I call it.  :D

I hope you update again soon. Thanks.  :bow:

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Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 6 NEW
« Reply #89 on: November 13, 2013, 03:34:45 AM »
i cant read the smut part  T_ T  :sweatdrop:
i love the fanfic more post please
atusmina  :wub:  :inlove:  :drool:  :heart:  :heart:

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Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 6 NEW
« Reply #90 on: November 15, 2013, 05:08:38 PM »
I can't read the smut! T_T

So Acchan left takamina after? And takamina felt hurt?... I'm sorry i couldn't read that part  :sweatdrop:

I can't wait for the next chap.!

I wonder what takamina would do? :?
I'll be waiting! :twothumbs :twothumbs
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Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 6 NEW
« Reply #91 on: November 30, 2013, 02:36:09 AM »
heyyy!!! XD

I didn't get to read the smut part, but I bet it was good and steamy. I completely understand why Minami was being cold to Atsuko... I would too, I think, if the girl I made love with just walked out on me afterwards. Since Atsuko realized her feelings, I hope Minami would forgive her  :)

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Re: Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 6 NEW
« Reply #92 on: December 02, 2013, 01:41:19 AM »
more atsumina  please  i cant wait more days T_T

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Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 6 NEW
« Reply #93 on: December 25, 2013, 07:30:10 AM »
Love it!! :heart:

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Re: Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 6 NEW
« Reply #94 on: January 07, 2014, 07:01:07 PM »
update please... update....

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Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 7 UPDATE
« Reply #95 on: January 28, 2014, 01:58:27 PM »
Hey :nervous I know it's been a while but here I am. Mostly thanx to @Chichay12 :heart:





CHAPTER 7 : A shadow in the heart



8pm. Minami's rooftop


She was sat in the big chair, a glass of vodka with redbull in her hand. Eyes in emptybess, she was there for an hour now, but it didn't matter. She didn't even move when Jurina sat in front of her.
« Everyone is asking for you downstairs... This view is really beautiful, I don't think anyone realize when they come here. But I do, it's beautiful everyday. »
« … Did you come here to told me to stop drinking ? Coz'... »
« No. I just wanted to spend a moment with you. And if you want to share your drink it's okay for me » smiled Jurina.
For the first time in the week, Minami smiled. She really like this girl, she was funny and really wise. The midget was hiding for a week now from everyone, and now she felt like she needed to talk to Juri.
« I quit my job » she sighed before drinking.
« When ? »
« Last week »
« You don't need money anymore ? »
« I do, but I'm not in a good mood those days and my boss was too kind and to oold, I can't take the risk to be nasty. »
« I see... How do you make money then ? »
« … I know someone, he said I could be paid to fight. But don't tell the others okay, I don't want them to have a bad model »
« No problem »
« You're thinking that I'm pathetic, right ? »
« No, not at all. You're having an hard time, and since you're helping us so much we can at least give you a break. The girl are just worried but they'll understand. Sayaka and I can take your responsability for a while, you can trust us » said Jurina with a serious face.
« Huh » smiled Minami kindly, « you are really mature for your age... »
« You're raising me, remember^^ »
« Seriously, I'm proud of you. I fell like I need you by my side those days. »
« No problem, I will drink Redbull only » she laughed.
« Right, but don't worry about me too much, you are interested in Rena, right ? »
« Yeah... » blushed the young girl. « But, I don't think it's gonna work... »
« Why ? »
« She's really nice girl but I feel like she's not for me, she's embarassed when we're together. This is silly, she deserves better. »
« … Listen, I've fall in love with Atsuko, and for a second I thought that it will be possible, that even if I was a little lost, I could give her what she needed. But I was wrong, it's too late for me. But you, you are a great kid, you have a good future and Rena is a nice girl. Be kind to her, treat her like she deserves and then it's all good. »
Jurina nodded and stood up.
« I'll take that advice, but I want to say something too. Thanks to you I'm better person, I'm good in school and I got mature. I don't think that makes you a bad person for Atsuko. Just saying... I will go now. »
« Hm, goodnight » whispered Minami before finishing her drink.


The alcohol was already warming her body, and her thought were non sense. She needed to fight really early in the morning, but she had planned to go to school on the afternoon.
What was the point of all this..., Honestly she had no clue, something had changed since that day. The night with Atsuko was beyond all that she could have imagine, but waking up alone was the worse.
Atsuko must have think that it was a huge mistake, be scared that she had to commit to her... And somehow it was like an epiphany, Minami wasn't a good person, and Atsuko was too wonderful for her.
For a wek now, the midget couldn't feel anything, she was feeling empty inside, and she just wanted to fight and wait. Wait for something to happen...



10am, at school


Jurina was sitting next to the window, looking at the empty schoolyard. She was thinking about her talk with Takamina yesterday.


From : Unknown
To : Rena
Content :
Good morning ! :) How are u today ?
You look beautiful, as always  :drool:

From : Rena
To : Jurina
Content :
Jurina?Is it u ? How did
you get my number ?

From : Jurina
To : Rena
Content :
Hehe, I'm not telling you that^^
I'm boring, could u move ur hair
so I can see ur neck ? :yep:

Jurina saw the cute girl blushing and smiling looking at her phone. Then, Rena moved slowly her hair on one side, so Jurina could perfectly look at her white skin.


From : Rena
To : Jurina
Content :
So ? Are u satisfied ?

From : Jurina
To : Rena
Content :
Fully  :bleed eyes: Thank u Rena-chan.

From : Juri, I need to sing
tomorrow night in a bar, can
u play the guitar ?

From : Jurina
To : Captain
Content :
Sure, tell me what u
want to play and it's done.

From : Jurina
To : Rena
Content :
I'm playing tomorrow night
in a bar, can u come ?

From : Rena
To : Jurina
Content :
I need to ask my  parents first,
but maybe  :yep:




2.20pm, history class



The teacher was talking about the current government when Minami opened the door. Atsuko looked at her, her heart suddenly beat so fast. The short girl had bruises on her face and looked absent.
« Takahashi-san, you're late. »
« No kidding... » she sighed without looking at him.
She sat at her table and look by the window. Atsuko couldn't focus on the lesson anymore, she was dying to look behind and see what Minami was doing.


7pm, Minami's flat


« Rino, finish your essay before playing PS3 ! » said Sayaka while washing the vegetables.
« Hai ! Can Rie help me ? »
« Only if you work girls »
« Sure^^ »
Minami was preparing the ingredients for the pizza next to her.
« Could you make sure Yuko do the dishes after please »
« Okay, you're not eating with us ? »
« No, I'm not hungry. Take that, I have no time to buy food » said the captain giving Sayaka 14 000 yens in cash.
« Do I need to be worried ? » frowned Sayaka taking the money.
« I'm begging not to »
« Okay »
« Thank you. But call me if you need something okay ? I'm still here for you guys. »
« Sure. Take care. »

« What are we doing for the contest ? » asked Miichan sitting next to Yuko.
« What do you mean ? »
« You know, Takamina is always absent, and it's her who leads us so... »
« Well, I guess we'll be training with the others, and, wait and see... I'll lead for now if it's okay with you. »
« Alright, I will continue the costumes with Mariko »


7.30pm, in a coffee

« Atsuko, do you want to shop with me tomorrow afternoon ? »
« I don't know Rena, I'm not feeling well... »
« Please, you have to help me find something for tomorrow night. »
« What's happening tomorrow night ? »
« Jurina is doing a live performance with Takahashi-san in a bar. She invited me » blushed Rena.
Atsuko frowned.
« Minami is singing in a bar with Jurina ? »
« Yes » she smiled.
« Why would she do that... ? » asked Atsuko, more for herself.
« I don't know, but I want to go ! Oh Acchan, come with me ! »
« What ? No ! »
« Why not ? Don't tell me you didn't like Takahashi's voice »
« Are you aware of what happened between her and I ? »
« Yes, but it's just a concert, and this situation is silly. Come, with someone if you want. »
Atsuko thought about it, maybe it wasn't such a bad idea after all. This dumb midget was acting non sense, and she needed to know it.
« You're right. I'll come »
« Great. Now, will you come with me, to shop ? »
« Okay... »

Thank you for reading this  :bow:

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Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 7 UPDATE
« Reply #96 on: January 28, 2014, 02:13:57 PM »
Mostly thanx to @Chichay12 :heart:
your very welcome fausto  :on woohoo:

saving the spot XD
i want my atsumina to reconcile and have some smexy moment again  :luvluv2:

OMG FAUSTO...reading your trend in the first page really make me smile..but reading your new update really MADE my DAY :on slopkiss:

and im really glad that my atsumina comrade is back  :hiakhiakhiak:
more update please :on gay:

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Re: Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 7 UPDATE
« Reply #97 on: January 28, 2014, 02:41:43 PM »
Yes Acchan go and find what happen to the captain

Hope Takamina didn't run away

Please updatesoon

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Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 7 UPDATE
« Reply #98 on: January 28, 2014, 03:16:25 PM »
owh..u r update its  XD  XD   :twothumbs
arigatou...its make my day  :twothumbs

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Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 7 UPDATE
« Reply #99 on: January 29, 2014, 06:53:11 AM »
Ah...an update at last... been a while

Great update as usual...

Can't wait to see the next

Thank you for the update

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