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Halfway Gone [MariHaru] Chapter 2: The Art of Stalking
« on: September 06, 2013, 05:20:41 AM »
Hey again  :)

I announce this little project that I'm doing with a friend (Cessy10) on mine at my other fic (Fool Like Me)
This was suppose to be posted the day Mariko's graduation but something happen.
Long story short, we postponed it for a month. I'm sorry for the delay  :(

This fic will only be a short one. Maybe 8-10 chapters long? I'm not really sure about it.


A special thanks to yanouchi for the amazing poster.


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Prologue: Where it all started.

I think the phrase ‘my life flashes right before my eyes’ is overrated. I mean think about it, how could you possibly know that on the verge of death you would experience it. The people that really had this are well, you know…… now dead. How could they tell us that that is true and all of their memories come rushing through their mind if they are now dead?
 
How about the people that lived after their close encounter with the Grimm Reaper, you ask? It could be that they’re expecting it to happen that it will happen.  Do you know what I mean? After knowing that ridiculous theory, your mind will register it and when the time is right, it will happen. It’s sort of a placebo effect.
You’re probably wondering why I’m telling you this. Well …… It did happen for me.

It all started with-

Wait. Back up. Before I tell you the story, let me tell you my life before it happen.

I don’t want to tell you a cliché story but my life is at it is. Deal with it.

I work at the AAF. The Akihabara Architect Firm for seven years now with my two college buddies. Both of their name is Minami so to avoid confusion, we created nicknames. I was actually suggesting ‘Gachapin’ and ‘Midget’ but after I became deaf from the screams of protest, I let them decide on their own. So we got Miichan and Takamina.

The moment we graduated from the university, we pack all our stuff and move in to the city. We don’t know why but luck was on our side. On our first day, we immediately found a great apartment that is not quite popular in the market. It was 12% off on its original price. With no hesitation, we took it.

Then next, after just one month of unemployment, there was a mass hiring at the AAF and the three of us was hired altogether. The two Minami’s was jumping with joy and they keep telling that we are fated to be with each other and are meant to be together and blah blahblah. Stuff like that. If you ask me, I think that this all sheer coincidence. Nothing more than just mere coincidence.

Another thing that happened in the past seven years, well this has to be the really good thing that happen, I met someone. Her name is Itano Tomomi. Cute name huh? But I call her Tomochin. The way she smiles is just too damn cute for me. Especially when I see those pretty fangs. We’ve been dating for two years and let me tell you, it was the best two years of my life. She’s perfect for me but my friends think otherwise.

I can still remember when I introduce them to her over dinner.

“She’s a keeper, Mariko.” Miichan said after we got home from our dinner. “Just keep her away.”

“What? Why? What’s wrong with her?” I really can’t see why they don’t like her. She’s pretty, nice, smart, has a good career ahead of her and she’s really good kisser. We’ve been just dating for a month at that time but let me just say that she’s a really good kisser.

“She’s been nothing but nice to the two of you. She even paid for dinner.” Yeah, that is true. These two idiots got a free meal from her and that’s what they can say about her. She’s the one who insisted to meet my roommates so she said that she wants to pay for it. See, she’s a nice person. We even ate at a five star restaurant.

“There’s nothing wrong with her, it’s just that….” Takamina closed the door before us and joined in to our conversation.

“What? Tell me.”

“Ummm for starters, you don’t have anything in common with her. She’s the real opposite of you.”

“No she isn’t.”

“Yeah she is.” Miichan immediately opposed.

“No she isn’t”

“A hundred times yeah she is.”

“You know what, I’m tired. I’m going to call it a day.” I don’t want to argue with Miichan and Takamina in this time of night especially I treated these two like family. “I’m going to bed.”

“And off the record, opposites attract.” They just gave me unbelieving looks. “Just….. Just trust me on this. Ok?”

Ever since that day, they keep saying that she’s not the one. They even sabotage some of my dates. They hid my wallet, ruined my shirt, and left me with tons of paperwork just to make me late for my date.  Annoying right? I just ignore them.

There’s even an ‘incident’ during our movie date at my place. Miichan and Takamina was supposed to be in the office all night due to a big deal that’s coming up so it was the perfect opportunity to have our date night at the apartment.

Everything was fine. Snuggling under a warm blanket with freshly popped popcorn and a nice set of movies, it was a perfect night. And then-

These two came busting in with the whole office staff. They told me that their having a party at the apartment to celebrate the newly closed deal and before I could protest, the room is already filled with booze and alcohol and loud music. It really ruined my night and I was left with no choice but to drive Tomochin home.

She was pretty cool about it and told me that she didn’t really mind. There’s always a next time.







“Hey sorry I can’t answer your call right now. Leave your message after the beep. *beep*” God, I really hate getting these voice machine.

“Oh hey hon. Just calling to let you know that I’m going to pick you up at your work for dinner. I know that you’re on a business meeting so I’ll pick you up at 7.

Dress real nice cause I’m taking you somewhere special and ummm……” I struggle as I balance my phone against my cheek and shoulder.  I’m trying to keep my eyes on the road as I drive down the road down the hill.

My boss sent me to our client’s property in some rich and fancy place up in the suburbs which took me three hours to get there and another three hours to get home.

“……. And I got a surprise for you.” I’ve been preparing a gift for her, it took me months now. I need something special for our two year anniversary and I think this is the perfect gift. She always told me to be more like an adult. Start making my own decision and take charge of my life.

So in order to show it, I’m asking her to move in with me in this new Condo unit. I already paid for the down payment and we’ll just pick up the key and move in together. It was the perfect gift.

I already told my roommates about me moving out and they think I’m stupid. What’s so stupid with being the one you love? Especially this will show that I want to take our relationship to the next level.

“So ok. Call me when you get this, Ok bye.” I hang up my phone and took it from my shoulder but I lost grip at it and I accidentally drop it down on the floor.

“Shit.” I let one hand on the steering wheel and the other to try to reach for my fallen phone. I kept my focus on the road as I blindly look for it.

I took my eyes off for a second to look for it. I slightly bend down to get a better look and saw it behind the brake pedal. I glance again to see if there are any cars in front and once the coast is clear, I hurriedly went down and took my phone.

“Got it.” With the phone in my hand, I returned to my seat. As I look back at the road, from out of nowhere, I saw another car in front of me. I tried to avoid it but it was too late.

I open my eyes and BAM!---

Everything went blank, I can’t remember what exactly happen and the next thing I knew is what appears to be a bright light.


TBC

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Chapter 1 is on it's way. So do you want us to continue?
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And again, we're really sorry for not posting this a month ago just like I promise in my fic.
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Re: Halfway Gone [MariHaru] Mariko's Graduation Special Prologue
« Reply #1 on: September 06, 2013, 05:52:31 AM »
Waaaa...Mariko and Tomochin??

It's unusual..

But, later it will be MariHaru right?

Can't wait for the 1st chapter..

Update soon, please.. :bow:

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Re: Halfway Gone [MariHaru] Mariko's Graduation Special Prologue
« Reply #2 on: September 06, 2013, 06:42:18 AM »
UPDATE SOOOOOON!!!
onegaishimasu~  :kneelbow:

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Re: Halfway Gone [MariHaru] Mariko's Graduation Special Prologue
« Reply #3 on: September 06, 2013, 10:26:43 AM »
Owh my!!!! its here....its finally here....i miss you Aoi-san.... :inlove:

Its definitely a yes!! yes please continued...its MariHaru we're talking about!! XD

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Re: Halfway Gone [MariHaru] Mariko's Graduation Special Prologue
« Reply #4 on: September 06, 2013, 10:53:58 AM »
plz update it soon. onegaishimasu.....
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Re: Halfway Gone [MariHaru] Mariko's Graduation Special Prologue
« Reply #5 on: September 06, 2013, 11:58:53 AM »
Eh... Mariko and Tomochin is quite rare...

Ah... so it's going to be mariharu...

How about the rest of the pairings?

Can't wait for the 1st chapter

Thank you

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Re: Halfway Gone [MariHaru] Mariko's Graduation Special Prologue
« Reply #6 on: September 06, 2013, 01:51:53 PM »
Yay!! Finally!  :w00t:
I really love MariHaru! And Tomochin as well.  :twothumbs
Can't wait for chapter 1!  :lol:
Please update soon :D

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Re: Halfway Gone [MariHaru] Mariko's Graduation Special Prologue
« Reply #7 on: September 07, 2013, 12:57:54 AM »
MariTomo? My wish just came true  :drool:
I know this is a MariHaru fic but i took a liking on MariTomo on a fic that i'm currently reading..
Don't get me wrong, MariKoji is mt OTP   :inlove:

I hope your story goes well  :twothumbs

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Re: Halfway Gone [MariHaru] Mariko's Graduation Special Prologue
« Reply #8 on: September 07, 2013, 06:08:35 PM »
I actually read this yesterday but didn't get to comment. Sorry about that.  :nervous
I don't really read much these days but when I saw that it was MariHaru. YEY!!  XD XD
And MariTomo?!  :shocked Whoa. Haven't really imagined that pairing before.
It's pretty unexpected. But then when I read it, I suddenly remembered Tomo and Mariko sharing a smile at Saigo no Door PV. I find that scene so cute.  XD
You two are planning for 8-10 chapters? No! Make it longer! XD Kidding.  :lol: 8-10 chapters is okay, seriously.  :nervous
Anyway, please do continue!  I'm curious where this is heading. :twothumbs :twothumbs

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Re: Halfway Gone [MariHaru] Mariko's Graduation Special Prologue
« Reply #9 on: September 07, 2013, 08:07:38 PM »
Wowowowowow, I like the prologue, seriously!!!!

And MariTomo........... I wonder why wMinami dislike Tomochin when she is that cool  :?

PLEASE CONTINUE, LIKE OMFG. Been a long time since I took a liking to a mere prologue this much  :panic:
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Re: Halfway Gone [MariHaru] Mariko's Graduation Special Prologue
« Reply #10 on: September 07, 2013, 08:14:42 PM »
Wow maritomo? Quite rare huh? Btw can't wait for the update .... :D

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Re: Halfway Gone [MariHaru] Mariko's Graduation Special Chapter 1
« Reply #11 on: October 11, 2013, 01:00:14 PM »
Hey there :)

Sorry for the late update. We've been busy with school and it took a lot of our time.
But thank you for all of the support and we'll surely try our best with this story.

Now for the replies:
@olive29: Maritomo really is an unusual pairing, but we always thought that they are close. And of course it would be mariharu on later chapters, hence the title. Just updated chapter 1, thanks for reading :)

@Chichay12: We'll try our best and please be patient with us. Thanks for reading :)

@yanouchi: We know we’re so late in updating, actually we planned to update this after you’ve come back but unfortunately, we don’t know the exact date of it. And truth to be told, there was one time when we don’t know what to do in the story, that we would like to have your suggestion, but it really is unfortunate that you’re out of town right now. So anyway, here’s chapter 1. Thanks for reading :)

@noah minami: We’ll try our best to update. . So please be patient and thank you for reading Is Maritomo really that rare? They looked close though :)

@cisda83: Aren’t those two close? We think they are, or is it just us? Yup mariharu hence the title, and we also plan to put other characters and pairing there but not so much. Maybe 2-3 more pairings? Anyways, thanks for reading :)

@Kirigiri: Thank you for giving us your time to proof read, editing and giving us a decision when we don’t know what to decide. Thank you, even though this doesn’t have any benefits, you still helped us. It really means a lot, to the both of us. Really thank you :)

@BookSniffer: Although the main pair is Mariharu, we would also focus on Maritomo. We also hope that this story goes well, thanks for reading :)

@FoF: Wow, the great FoF commenting and reading our story, I never thought that the day would come, joke. :)
But it’s really an honour though, I mean you’re a great writer, we love you’re works. And we actually made this in your influence, but of course we won’t copy you, more like we can’t copy you. You’ve remembered Saigo no Door PV, while we remembered Basket Case, the part where Miichan and Mariko changed rooms. Mariko and Tomochin had their 'moments' there.  Yeah, 8-10 chapters is just our mark but it’s just a plan, we might make it longer or shorter for that matter. We’ll just leave it on the future.
Thanks for reading :) and if you don’t mind, please update

@Yuki88: Ohhh, thanks :) We are trying our hardest to bring a good story for you guys and seeing it paid off,  :twothumbs. Thanks for reading.






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Chapter 1: The Realization


“Mariko…”

“Huh?”

“Mariko…”

“Where is that voice coming from?”

“Mariko…”

“Wait. Where am I? Why can’t I see anything?”

Slowly, I opened my eyes and the first thing I saw was the clear blue sky. I can feel the asphalt road on my back and I slowly sat up.

Confused, I looked around and saw nothing but the road ahead of me.

“What happened?” I asked no one in particular. I really can’t remember what happened. I tried my hardest to remember as I retrace my steps.

“I remember leaving the site at 12. I was in my car, going back to the office, I called my girlfriend to set our date…” I glanced at my watch, curious of the time and was surprise to what I saw.

 “HOLY SHIT! It’s 5, I’m going to be late. Tomochin is going to be so mad. I better hurry…” I glanced again at my surroundings, all I can see is the view of the cliff, “Where the heck’s my car?” calmness leaving every part of my mind and body.

“Okay, okay, Mariko, keep it together. You need to remember everything. After I talked to my girlfriend’s answering machine,” I pace around as I rethink. “I dropped my phone behind the brake pedal and when I got the phone back, I saw a car headed right straight at me.”

I unconsciously placed my hand on my mouth. “Oh My God! Am I dead?” I asked myself as I checked and searched my whole body. “Apparently, I’m still alive and it appears I don’t have any bruises. I feel fine and nothing seems to be wrong, except for my car missing.”

I better call Miichan and ask her to pick me---What the heck? Where’s my phone? I continued to search my pockets. And my wallet? I’ve been robbed. First my car, then my phone and then my wallet. This is great, just great. Perfect.








After walking for an hour, I’ve finally reached the end of the hill. Good thing the office is only 30 minutes away from here, but it would only take me 15 minutes if I ride a taxi. I really wish I had my wallet right now.

“I better get going!”

Another 10 minutes of walking, I saw a park but it seems empty. No one’s around. Thinking that kids these days rather be inside and play with their computers instead of being outside, makes me feel sad. Why can’t they appreciate nature?

When I was a kid, I would always be outside. After class, I would always go to the park and just unwind for a bit. It seems to be relieving my stress.

Then at the corner of my eye, I saw someone sitting at the bench. It was a girl. I tried to approach her.

“Excuse me.”

“…” She doesn’t seem to hear me, so I tried again.

“Ano, Excuse me?”

“…” Still nothing. There’s no response from her. Maybe I’ll try a little louder.

“EXCUSE ME!”

“Oh, I didn’t see you there.” She removed her earphone that is plugged in to her ears. Oh, so that’s why she didn’t hear me.

Looking again, her long brown hair was covering her giant…I mean big, yeah big, covering her big ears. I didn’t mean it in a bad way; I mean I did retract my words and pick a much nicer word to replace it.

Oh please don’t give me that look. If you were in my place, you might have done the same thing, or better yet, much worse than I did. It’s just that it’s the first thing you would notice. Well…I did.

“Ano, can I ask for a favour? I’ve been walking for an hour now trying to get home and I had just been robbed. They took my phone, my wallet and even my car. So I’m asking you if I can borrow a couple of yen.”

“Give me your address and I’ll send it back to you. Please, I really need your help.”

Well that doesn’t sound desperate. I hope she’ll help me.

“Sure.” That went well.

“If I’m stupid, I’ll accept your offer.” And I was wrong.

“It’s not a scam. I really am telling the truth.”

“Yeah, right. That’s the oldest trick in the book, and you expect me to fall for it? I’m not stupid.”

“Look, I’m having a very off day today and all I’m asking for is a little bit of sympathy.”

“Let me be clear. GET AWAY, before I call the police.” That was some harsh words.

“Fine!” After that, I stormed off and continued on with my never ending walk. At least that’s what I feel.

I don’t know why people became so distrustful. Living in the city is really different when living where I came from. Maybe it’s my karma for calling her ears giant, I mean big. But what did I do to even deserve being robbed and walking for hours? This is so unfair!






Finally, I’m here at AFF. I’ll just get my spare money at my desk and I’ll go home and prepare for my date. I still have a good 45 minutes before 7 but I better hurry. I don’t want to be late.

I entered the lobby and saw Sasshi, short for Sashihara, real name Sashihara Rino. She manages the front desk. She is having a conversation on the phone, probably something office related.

“Hey, Sasshi!” I said as I approach her.

“Please hold.” She said to the other line.

“Is Miichan and Takamina in?” I asked when suddenly the phone beside the one she’s holding rang.

She answered it, ignoring me. Its ok, I understand. Every call here is important. I’ll just talk to her later.

I proceeded to the elevator and I’m with two other people.

“4th floor please.” I said as one of them pushed a floor button.

“…”

The nerve of some people. That guy’s hand is just inches away from the button and he can’t seem to be a gentleman and push it for me.

“Hold the elevator.” A girl came running toward the closing doors.

“Yokatta. I made it.” That was lucky. If she was a bit late, even just a second, she wouldn’t have made it.

Ah it’s Kashiwagi Yuki, my boss’ assistant. She came into the company a few years ago and she’s always by Mr. Tanaka’s side. We rarely talk and we’ve only
been exchanging hellos and small talks.

She pushed the 4th floor button and the elevator closes. This is going to be an awkward elevator ride.







I stepped out of the elevator, together with my boss’ assistant, only to find our floor deserted. Only a few people came to office. Normally it has so many people. Finding your way in and out is like finding a needle in a hay stalk.

I wonder, where is everyone?

I walked to my station and saw Takamina arranging her stuffs, preparing to leave.

‘Where is she going? It’s not even time to go home yet.’  I wondered as I slowly approach her.

“Ah Ms. Takahashi.” Yuki said as she walks behind me.

“Ms. Kashiwagi” Takamina said as she wipes her face, particularly, her eyes. Now that I have a good look on her, she’s crying. Well, not crying as in crying to the
point of hyperventilating, but just tears in her eyes that she tries so hard to supress and hide.

Why the heck is she crying? Is it because of…me?

I tried to approach Takamina but I retract my steps as Yuki beat me to it.

“It’s ok. She’s a strong woman, so I know that it’s going to be alright.” Yuki said as she comforts Takamina. This made me rethink my thoughts about her.

“I know. I just can’t help myself to be sad. And our last conversation was a bad one. I don’t want it to really be the last.”

Wait. Who the heck is this ‘she’? What’s going on here?

“Just go home for now. I’ll take care of things here.”  Yuki reach out and pats Takamina’s back.

“I.... um thank you.” With one last look, Yuki left.

“Hey, Takamina?” I said as Takamina said as she walked past me.

She looked back at me, but her gaze walks right through me.

“Hey, wait!” I said as she turned and walked out of the office.

What the heck?!?! Is this because of the prank I pulled on her this morning?

Remembering it, it kind off involves her favourite katsudon and me placing a very spicy spice there. It also involves me saying my sorry, but it appears that she
still has some grudges.

“I said I was sorry.” Ok, I know I may have gone a little too far, but come on, how many times will I have to say I’m sorry?

As Takamina left, I noticed something in her cubicle, she apparently forgot something. I actually can’t believe that of all the things she could leave, she left this.

“She’ll be back.” I said as I glanced at my watch.

“In 5…4…3…2…”

*ding*

The elevator opens with a barefoot Takamina. Oh and don’t forget her puffed eyes, a barefoot and puffy-eyed Takamina.

I couldn’t say I expected it. I almost died laughing at Takamina’s expression.

She immediately head straight to her station and wore her shoes, then she walked out. I can sense her embarrassment as she rushed through the elevator. And I can’t stop my laughter.

Takamina still fails. She will never change.

After Takamina’s little incident, I head over to my station to find that extra cash I left at my drawer.  I can finally go home and prepare for my date. I was about to reach for the handle when the phone suddenly rings.

Oh come on. It’s only been a few minutes since I’ve been here, and that old geezer can’t let me take a break. It’s like a ghost town here and he's calling me to work? Seriously, this is getting-

Woah. Did that really happen? You can’t be serious that my hand passed through the phone. Wait, this is really happening. What the hell-

Ohhhh I got it.

“Very funny, guys. The joke’s on me. Let me just say, you really outdone yourselves this time. How did you get this hologram phone to work? Nice work. You can
come out now. Show yourselves guys.”

I move my hand back and forth again and wow, the effects are incredible. It seems so real. I can just feel it pass through my hand as if it was on thin air.

Okay, why isn’t anyone answering me?

“Come on guys the joke is out. We have our share of laugh so come out now.”

“…” I looked around, still nothing. This is when I started to panic.

As the phone is still ringing, I saw Paruru walked right behind me. She took the phone and answered it.

“Hello? I’m sorry, but Miss Shinoda is out at the moment and I don’t know when she will be back. Bye now.” She puts back the phone into its place.

Paruru sure does have a unique expression, she just-

SHE PICKED UP THE PHONE! I wave my hand back and forth again but still nothing.

What’s going on? It can’t be.



TBC

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So that was Chapter 1? What do you think?
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Re: Halfway Gone [MariHaru] Mariko's Graduation Special Chapter 1
« Reply #12 on: October 11, 2013, 01:29:42 PM »
Thanks for the update, yay! I'm having MariKoji withdrawal lately so I really appreciate this update so much <3

And anyway.... Mariko.... a ghost?! XD
The weird thing is the girl in the park a.k.a. Haruna can actually see, even talk to her? What is she?! XD

Oh mannn, quick, update! *is whacked*
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Re: Halfway Gone [MariHaru] Mariko's Graduation Special Chapter 1
« Reply #13 on: October 11, 2013, 03:31:17 PM »
Yeay an update!  :farofflook: will comment later....

Aaaahh finally i'm feeling like Yuki-san too...the MariHaru withdrawal, with your update really cheer me a lot! XD

So Haruna can see Mariko, will Mariko notice it? i hope she doesn't take long like she doesn't realize that shes dead/coma?

can't wait for the next update.....feel free to pm me Aoi-san XD
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Re: Halfway Gone [MariHaru] Mariko's Graduation Special Chapter 1
« Reply #14 on: October 11, 2013, 04:01:14 PM »
I realized this story just earlier today, I can't believe I missed something as good as this. :lol:
MariTomo is really an unusual and rare pairing, you don't see that every day here in the fanfiction world; but anything is possible. :) XD
Uh-oh! Mariko-sama just had an accident! This is way we don't use phones while driving; it's not safe. :smhid

Mariko is dead? :shocked Wait she's a ghost right now; so she probably is dead or just unconscious in a hospital bed and her spirit flying around freely. :?
Nobody can see her but Haruna? I'm convince that she can see and talk to spirits. :)

Please update really soon! XD

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Re: Halfway Gone [MariHaru] Mariko's Graduation Special Chapter 1
« Reply #15 on: October 11, 2013, 06:59:21 PM »
Yeah. An update.... did mariko die??  :shocked   Hoping not.maybe her soul just wondering else where....  :nervous  glad u update it. Thank you :thumbsup

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Re: Halfway Gone [MariHaru] Mariko's Graduation Special Chapter 1
« Reply #16 on: October 14, 2013, 12:20:26 PM »
mariko just died yet she doesnt even notice XD the hologram telephone scene made me laugh.  :cow:

Thanks for update. :3
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Re: Halfway Gone [MariHaru] Mariko's Graduation Special Chapter 1
« Reply #17 on: October 15, 2013, 11:48:46 AM »
Uh, thank you for the compliment. I'm far from being what you described, but thank you for thinking that.  :nervous  :nervous
The BC Mariko and Tomochin interaction hadn't crossed my mind at all. :lol:
Honestly, I'm surprised at these turn of events. I mean, Mariko being 'halfway there' as in she's in a coma and her spirit is seemingly roaming around didn't cross my mind, though it makes sense. My mind doesn't seem to cross nowadays. Lazy mind not crossing. :lol:
I actually thought this was going to be a nurse Haruna with a recovering Mariko type of story. I don't know why I thought of that plot.  :nervous
Nontheless, it's great!  :twothumbs Looking forward to more chaps in the future. I'm curious to know if Haruna knows that Mariko is a spirit or not.  :twothumbs
Oh and...I don't mind. I will update soon. :)

Thanks for the update!  XD

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Re: Halfway Gone [MariHaru] Mariko's Graduation Special Chapter 1
« Reply #18 on: October 15, 2013, 08:55:01 PM »
When I first read this I really loved it but I thought why a mariko and tomo relationship but when I read it again I realized it was a reference to FoF's Basket Case fic :) awesome  8)  I love that fic!!!! and now I love this fic I cant wait to see how this story is going to unfold!!! since it says its a MariHaru fic  :twothumbs
Spanish original name es mary es mi amor por leo dan:
Mari(mariko)es mi amor, solo con ella
vivo la felicidad yo se que nunca a nadie
mas podria amar, por que la quiero de
verdad por eso mary por favor dame tu
mano continuemos siempre asi
despues de todo que mas te puedo
pedir si soy feliz...muy feliz.
Si un dia me faltas tu que
Dios me ayude a morir ya que
no volvera a hacer en esta vida feliz
sin ti mari...sin ti mari...si estoy
viviendo por ti... 
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English ver dow originally name mary is my love by leo dan :
My love is Mari, just with her
I live in happiness
I know I will never again
fall in love with nobody, because I
feel a true love Because of that,
Mari, give me your hand we'll
forever continue this way After all,
what can I ask you more if I am happy...
very happy If one day I will miss you,
God help me to die ,
without you Mari...
If i live my life for you...  -----------<@

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Re: Halfway Gone [MariHaru] Mariko's Graduation Special Chapter 1
« Reply #19 on: April 20, 2014, 08:54:43 PM »
Ummm hey there :)

We should start apologizing now for being REALLY late with the update. October was the last one and wow, I can't believe it took us that long. We hope you can still remember this.

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Both of us have been really busy with college. Reports, plates, thesis and everything in between has really been a handful and we kinda had a hard time juggling everything.

Now for the replies:
@Yuki88: Again, sorry for the late update. I think "late" is an understatement. Both of us has been experiencing it lately. We need our monthly fixed of Mariharu!! Hehe :nervous Thanks for reading :)

@yanouchi: Ahh yanouchi-san. I think I really apologize especially to you for having this almost 6 months delayed  :( . Thank you for your support from the beginning, and not just HWG, but also for Fool Like Me. Thank you for reading :)

@Haru_Jei: Maritomo is one of those pairings that has been unnoticed but has a lot of potential (Saw some gifs from tumblr) Sorry for the update though. Thank you for reading :)

@noah minami: This chapter will shed some light to that. Sorry for the delay. Thank you for reading :)

@leipyon: Hahaha Thinking back, that scene made us laugh just by thinking about it. We apologize for the long delayed. Thank you for reading :)

@FoF: Woah, that kind of plot can be made into a fanfic. But as much I want it to develop, I can't afford to have another fanfic that I'm pretty sure I won't be able to finish. We apologize for the late update. We are really sorry, but thank you for reading :)

@theblueknight: Who doesn't love that fic? It is the best and our all time favorite :) Sorry for the late update. Thanks for reading :)

Again, we deeply apologize for the almost half a year delayed.





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Chapter 2: The Art of Stalking

Have you ever had a nightmare and you can’t wake up? Many would say that if you sleep after a full meal, you'd definitely have a nightmare. But thinking about it, I never really had a full meal just yet and I’m currently having one of those things you call nightmares.

“Wake up, Mariko! Wake up!” I screamed at the top of my lungs. I shook myself. I even slapped my face just so I can feel the pain in my cheeks.

This is just a bad dream. Yeah, that's all it is. I’m currently at my home, on my soft bed sleeping like an innocent baby under a warm blanket.

I looked again at the phone and moved my hand forward. Slowly, I steadied my pace as I tell myself that I was just hallucinating. Then, after I was inches away, I struck my hand as fast as I could, and to my surprise, it passed through again.

No! This isn’t happening. It can’t be!

Then, at the corner of my eye, I saw my co-worker Yuko passing by me. A little background about her, I’ve known Yuko since I entered AAF. She was one of the employees that got mass hired alongside me, Miichan and Takamina, and weirdly enough, we’re on the same station. We got close over the years as we worked together, and given the fact that her station is right next to mine, we have a steady friendship.

“Yuko! Yuko! I need to talk to-” My eyes went wide again as Yuko literally went past me. I gasped for air as I felt that every molecule of my body became gas and returned to solid again.I checked myself again and looked back at the retreating back of my co-worker.

Why can’t they see me? What the hell is going on?

“Oh, Yuko, are you going there after work?” A familiar voice said, coming from the end of the hall.

Go where? To me?

“Of course, I’m going to visit my friend.” I can’t understand you, Yuko. Go to your friend?

“It’s so sad that it happened.” Mayu, what are you trying to say?

“I wish that it never did. I mean, look at this office. It’s so dull and boring.” Way to go Sae, you added more fuel to my never ending questions.

“The rest of the office will go there after work. Do you wanna come?”

“Yeah, I’m free later.” Yuko said as they walked together to the elevator. I can hear their chatters becoming less audible as they left me all by myself.

It was only me in the office. I felt alone. Nobody can see me. Nobody can hear me.

Nobody…


…….


Hold up. That’s not entirely true. Someone DID talk to me. But did that happen before I woke up?

No. I’m certain that someone did. But who?

It felt really vivid but I can still remember it. I must remember. I closed my eyes real tight and tried to picture out a memory.

Amidst the uncertainty of my memory, a face suddenly came to mind. A smooth, pale face. Brownish long straight hair. Pink plump lips with a mole at the lower right lip.

*Elevator Opens* *Sounds of footsteps*

“Hey, Ricchan. Here’s the DVD you lent me the other day. Thanks.” All this talking is making me lose focus.

“Ahhh, no problem, Paruru. So how was it?” Ahhh, this isn’t helping. I need a quiet place to think.

“It was good. The giants were scary, eating people and all. And I never thought that people could also turn into giants, or titans for that
matter.”

“…”

Giant?

“You know, last night, my cousin watched this weird elephant on TV.”

“What was weird about it?”

“The elephant’s name is Dumbo and he was part of the circus.”

“What’s weird about that?”

“It could fly.”

“Fly?!?! How? Why?”

“It has really big ears and uses them to fly.”

“You’re right, it is weird….”

“…”

Ears?

Giant. Ears.

Giant…ears?

GIANT EARS!!!

I remember it now. It was the girl at the park. She can see and talk to me. How was that possible? But who cares right now? I must find her. But what if she would think I’m scamming her again? I have no other choice. I must convince her. She’s my only hope.



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Whew! I’m….*sigh*…..here. God must really hate me. If everything I touch can pass through me, why can I still be exhausted? I’ve been walking all day and my feet are killing me.

As I reached the park, I scanned the whole premises. The sun started to set as the light illuminated the whole area. The only people left are starting to leave one by one as they anticipated night fall.

Ahhhh, I don’t see her anywhere. Maybe she already left.This is great, just great. I’ve walked basically for nothing.

Why do you hate me so much Kami-sama?

As I was about to give up, from the corner of my eye, I saw a familiar brown-haired girl leaving a grocery store.

There she is. I must approach her.

But.....what if she won’t believe me? I’ll make a fool out of myself. Oi oi oi, she’s leaving, I have to act fast.



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What a day I’m having, huh? Taken to account that for the whole day, I have walked my ass off, and to be given  MUCH confusion on what the hell is happening, I have now stooped low as I follow, no, more like stalk someone home. Never in a million years have I imagined myself doing this.

It seems like she finally arrived at her destination as she entered an average- looking building. It doesn’t strike me as fancy but it looks comfortable and livable enough. Thinking back, I remembered my gift for Tomochin. Just thinking about that made my heart beat so fast. The image of her showing me her fang-like smile as we enter the place for the first time, the way she would link her arms around mine, and the way she would give me those sweet and captivating eyes as I give her the grand tour of the place where we will make many happy memories together.

That’s what I want. To be able to be with her again, and that’s why I’m doing this. I will search Earth’s end to find out what’s happening, and I will do whatever it takes to put things back to the way it used to be. I will try even if it kills me.

I took cover behind a wall as she continued to walk towards the end of the hall. With her phone between her ears and shoulder, and grocery bags on her left hand, she used her right hand to get her keys from her purse that was clutched on her other shoulder.

“I’m telling you, everything’s fine. I’ve finally settled in at the apartment.”

As she walked inside, she proceeded to put her things at the kitchen counter. But before she returned to close the door, I quickly and swiftly sneaked inside. I made sure that I didn’t make a sound as I immediately took cover inside the first room  I saw that was fortunately open.

“You’re worse than my mother. Yes, I will lock the door every time and as a matter of fact, I’m doing it right now.”

The other person at the line should worry. I easily entered her home without her even noticing, but then again, maybe she can’t really see me just like the others.

“And yes, you can visit me, Acchan. Okay, I’ll talk to you later. I have work to do. Say hello to Mimi-chan for me. Bye bye.”

She hung up her phone and proceeded to the kitchen counter where she left her groceries. Peaking my head to the corner, I can see her taking out the things she bought.

A gallon of milk. A carton of eggs. Seems ordinary enough.

And woah-! Is that 10 pieces of melon pan? She’s even taking out more items.

5 bags of chips. 7 boxes of Pocky. 8 pieces of Papico. Forget about Dumbo, this girl can eat like Luffy from One Piece. Well, at least that's what Takamina told me.

I mean, how is this girl even alive? She mostly bought junk food, and by looking at her food cabinet, that is all she has.

My fixation on her eating habit was suddenly stopped by her humming. The tune became familiar to me as I recognized it as one of those songs Tomochin listened to in her car stereo.

“Aitakatta.Aitakatta.Aitakatta Yes! Kimini~”

It’s now or never. I have to approach her and see if this will work. Taking a deep breath, I left her room and slowly walked towards the kitchen. Her back facing me as she puts the snacks at the top closet.

My heart is pounding. My palm is sweating. My throat is clasping. Is this going to work? No, it has to work. I have no other choice if I want things back to normal.

As I mentally psyche myself, from the corner of my eyes, I saw something move. Is that a dog?

No way! It is looking directly at me? A dog can see me!? I swayed my head slowly and it seemed to be following me with those eyes.
Incredible! Maybe I should wave at it just to make sure I’m not dreaming of this.

“Woof! Woof!”

“Shhh. Be quiet, Usagi-chan, or else the landlord will find out.” Her back is still facing me as she continued to arrange her groceries.

“WOOF!!WOOF!!”

“Are you hungry? Here let me fill your-“

Time stood still the second our eyes met. Her eyes widened in surprise and mouth slightly agaped.

“GAHH! What are you doing here?!?!” Without thinking, she took the nearest frying pan and used it as a weapon.

Seriously?!?

“Don’t come any closer or else I’ll have to use this.”

“Wait! You can see me?”

“What kind of question is that? Don’t take me as a fool. I can totally see you, and who do you think you are? You’re-..... Hold on, I know
you. You’re the scammer at the park!”

“I’m not a scammer.”

“Not only you tried to scam me, but you also followed me home and robbed me!”

“I haven’t stolen anything.”

“Yet.”

“Ok, ok. I get your point, but you can see me right?” I have to make sure I’m not dreaming of this. A while ago my hand went past a phone, and worse, my whole body turned into gas and back to solid by passing through a person. How can she see me?

“Look. I don’t know what kind of mind games you’re playing, but I’m calling the police.”

“Fine, call them, but before that, can you touch me?”

That sounded wrong than it did in my head. And judging by her grossed out reaction, I’m not the only who thinks so. It was way, way wrong. Really wrong.

“A-a-are you insane? Are you even in the right mind? What the hell is wrong with you?”

“Clearly, it’s a bit off, but even though that phrase is being used by sex offenders, which of course, I didn’t mean to sound like, I’m serious about it.”

And here’s another round of cricket’s chirping as she blinked back a few times. I totally can’t blame her on this one. I mean, who wouldn’t be shocked if someone asked you that?

She finally had a grasp on reality as she tightened her grip on the frying pan and started giving me this menacing look.

“I’m giving you your last chance. Walk away now or I will call the police.” She sounded dead serious. “You give me no choice.”

“W-Wait!.....” That seemed to stop her in her tracks. “I- um…… I-If you um…… called the police….” I have no idea where I am going with this, but then, I remembered something. “How about umm… Usagi-chan?”

Her eyebrows furrowed, bewildered by my sudden statement. “What about Usagi-chan?”

“Well, if you called the police, the landlord will find out….” With that said, slowly, she started to have a grip on what I am saying. “…. And if the landlord finds out, they will take Usagi-chan away, right?”

Silence once made an appearance as I looked at her. I think the idea of her dog being taken out must have made an impact, because she looked like she was thinking of something. Her eyes downcast on the floor for a second, then suddenly back to me. I think she
noticed me looking at her.

“You’re right.” Her tensed body began to soften up. “I just sneaked her in because that greedy landlord have this rule of not allowing pets in the building. And this is the only apartment that’s nice and just right for my price range.”

“A-and that would jeopardize it if you call the cops. I mean no harm. I promise.” Will this work? She looked at me then back to her dog as it began to waggle its tail on me. Thinking back, the dog never left its eyes on me. Can this dog really see me?

“WOOF!!”

“I know I sound crazy but if you were in my position, you would do the same.”

“….”

“It might seem crazy but I got into a car accident a few hours ago. I woke up and everything was different. No one can see me. No one can talk to me. Not one single person, except you.”

“How can you be so sure that I’m the only one?”

“Cause right now you’re speaking to me. We’re having a conversation. We’re exchanging words, and best of all, you know that I’m
here.”

“No. I don’t believe that. I’m going to prove it that you are human.” With the frying pan in tow, she walked towards me. Our distance
started closing in as she stepped in front of me.

“I would be a lot more comfortable if you don’t have that in your hand.” I swallowed an unnoticed lump in my throat as the thought of getting hit with that metal that is in her hands occured in my mind.

“You really don’t have the leverage to negotiate so I’m keeping this. It’s for my own safety.” I’m pretty sure she will hit me at this point.

“W-What are you going to do?”

“To prove that what you’ve been saying are all lies. That during the whole time, you are lying.”

“W-Wait, are you going to hit me with that thing?”

“Pretty much.” What the hell?! She can’t be serious?

“Oh, I’m damn serious.” This is too much. I backed up until I can feel the wall behind my back.

“If you’re story is right, you shouldn’t feel this.” The weight of that is surely heavy.

“And what if I can?”

“Then you are going to get hurt by lying.”

“No no no.” I closed my eyes and covered my head with my hands as she started to raise it. And then—

I prepared myself for the blow to come. I’m sure it won’t hurt, right? Right?

“….”

Huh, it has been a few seconds but why isn’t she hitting?

“What are you waiting for? Do it already.”

“….”

Still, nothing. Slowly, I opened my eyes and met her widely-opened ones. Did she—?

“ Y-y-you are telling the truth.”


TBC


So that was Chapter 2. We don't know if that was good enough to be called as an update.
If you have any questions, suggestions, violent reactions, don't be afraid to ask.

PS: It's past 3 in the morning here so I will re-recheck again if I have any mistakes.

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