TroubleMaker - Chapter 11 (AtsuMina) 17/02/2015

[Konoe]

Woah! Takamina kissed Acchan not once but TWICE. 

But Ray is still happy after seeing that?! She's weird indeed.

Kojiyuu moments  

Jurina and Mayu caught by Yuki in an awkward position. 

[qweakb]

I love the kissing scene between takamina and acchan 

It is  + 

I wonder what revenge acchan is going to do takamina again 
It is fun to read about this.. hehe

Kojiyuu moment is also the best..haha..   

Instead she’s happy? Happy that I kissed other girl?

Or she’s crazy? Yeah…she’s indeed crazy girl.

Send Ray to mental hospital!!!!!!!

Can I ask for more mayuki and wmatsui moment? hehe

This is suppose to be short...looks like I'm making it longer again...
I know you guys can easily guess who the person is~   

I don't know when will I update the next chap~
I'm going to be active again as a Kiss Me soon~ 

I like the story to be longer! Thank for updated!
 
For the kiss, leave it to Ryuuka-san.. 

[cisda83]

Who is it that walk on Mayu and Jurina in compromise position?

Is it Yuki?

AH... Atsuko is very scary and very angry toward Minami

And what's going on with Ray?

How can she get no feeling whatsoever when she saw Minami and Atsuko were kissing?

Does Ray really love Minami, that everything Minami do was for her sake...?

Can't wait to see the next chapter

Thank you for the update

 

[ptrd3009]

yuko is so cute and someone open the door is yuki?
can't wait for next chapter

[kahem]

Ray is really weird lol

[Haruko]

The kiss!! OMG!! and kojiyuu so sweet

[ezha]

 

[noah minami]

Haha. Takamina is such a teaser...
Acchan sure mad. Haha
Ray is happy when takamina kiss acchan??

[Archer1992]

waaw all the suspense...

very funny....


thanks

Update Soon!!!!

[ezha]

chiqinna~san get well soon and update your fanfic ....
I MISS YOU 

[anakpanti]

Ray will never feel hurt by Takamina, no matter how hard Takamina tried to hurt her.
Love is blind. 

Acchan... big shock for her! First Kiss!! 

[ykariya]

omg

Acchan in shock from the kiss

[mikaellitsa]

minami is so dead after the kiss 
cant wait fo the next one  curious to see wht ill happen between the two

[FairyNyan]

i always LOL-ed when read your fic 

esp the chasing scene 

and the last scene im sure she is our reaction queen   

[shazrey]

i love ur story
please update its soon 

[chiqinna]

This chapter have no Atsumina moments~  sorry~
I tried my best...to update for my lovely readers~ 






Chapter 8


Awkward…


Awkward…


Awkward…



Mayu and Yuki has been standing in the room for almost 15 minutes after the awkward scene Yuki saw just now.

Jurina and Lovetan were already leaving the room with a big grin on their face to Mayu.

It was the most embarrassing moment for Mayu.

Her face was really red when she got ‘caught in action’.

Now, she just standing there looking at the blank wall with a blank face, still thinking of how to start the conversation.
Meanwhile Yuki was waiting for Mayu to talk.

“What brings you here?” Mayu finally utters few words, without looking at the taller girl.

Yuki was slightly surprised with Mayu’s sudden question.

“E-eh? Uhmm… I just…want to see you…?” Yuki answered with hesitate tone as she tilted her head.

Mayu turned around to face Yuki. When she turn around, Yuki’s face was too close to hers making them both staring at each other’s eyes.

*doki doki* *doki doki*


[I think…I will just let them staring each other’s eyes forever~  ]

“Geez…Lovetan…how could she leave me alone…with my condition right now?!!” Jurina whined alone to herself as she was walking slowly through the hall due to her injury.

Lovetan had to leaves her alone because she suddenly remembers that her club has practices that evening.

While walking along the hallway, Jurina’s eyes wandering around the scenery outside the hall.

There’s a beautiful park near the dormitory. Surrounded with colorful flowers.

As her eyes were looking around the park, something attracted her attention.

She spots a long-haired girl sitting on the bench. It seems like she’s listening to music since a small headphone is covering her ears.

Jurina stopped walking and turning her whole body to the direction she’s currently looking at. She only can see the girl’s back.

“Hmmm…what a nice weather today~” smiled Jurina taking a deep breath as she watch the blooming flowers around the park. The shiny day making its more beautiful.

Her eyes turn back to look at the girl’s back.
Then she saw her taking out something from her bag. She can see that it was a melon pan.

“*chuckle* melon pan…” mumbled Jurina smiling as she watched the girl’s hand taking out the melon pan from its wrapper.

Something suddenly crossed her mind as she keeps looking at the girl’s hands.

“Melon pan?”

She then remembers about the scene in the infirmary where Rena offered her melon pan.

Jurina stares at the girl’s back for a few seconds before realizing it was…

“Rena…” gasped Jurina as an excited feeling rushing inside her.

Her smile growing bigger and bigger.



~At the park~

Rena was sitting at the bench while listening to her iPod.

She took out her favorite food, melon pan out of her bag.

She closes her eyes as she munching a piece of melon pan slowly tasting every bits of it…while listening to the music.


5 minutes later,

Rena still with her eyes closed listening to the music played in her iPod.

Without realizing someone is staring at her for quite a long time because she was really enjoying her time ‘alone’.

Meanwhile, Jurina was already near Rena, without even bothering her.

She keeps staring at the white-pale girl with a smile on her face.

‘She looks really beautiful while closing her eyes…’ thought Jurina mesmerizes by the natural beauty.

Suddenly Rena opened her eyes making Jurina who was sitting not so close beside her froze.

She takes out another piece of melon pan and munches it as she closed her eyes again.

Jurina sigh in relief silently but could not help to let out a small chuckled.

‘She still did not realizing my presence right?’ Jurina said in her mind grinning.


Meanwhile

Mayu is the first one to break their staring contest as she quickly turned around facing her back to Yuki who was also back to her sense.

‘What is this?’ Both of them thought as their heart beating faster.

“Ah...I-I’m…busy.” Mayu said without looking at the other girl.

“O-oh…w-well then…I will go…sorry for bothering you, Mayuyu.” stuttered Yuki as she walks towards the door.

“See you next time…” Yuki said as Mayu slightly nodded still not looking at Yuki.

When Yuki already out of the room, Mayu look down at her trembling hands.

“Am I feeling…nervous?” mumbled Mayu as she felt hot yet cold on her cheeks.

~

When Yuki already got out from the room, she quickly leaning her back to the door whiles her hand holding her pounding chest.

She closed her eyes as she tries to remember the moment their eyes met.

‘God…her eyes are so…beautiful~’ Yuki smiled. 'I wish I can stare at it longer~'

“Ano…”

‘Her blushing face…so cute!’ Yuki giggled to herself.

“Ano…Yuki-san~” Yuki opened her eyes and saw Takamina standing in front of her with a confused look on her face.

“E-err…yes?” Yuki still in her position.

“I want to enter my room~” Takamina said pointing at behind Yuki.

Yuki look behind her and realized she’s blocking her way to the door room.

“Oh...S-sorry…” Yuki step aside feeling embarrassed then she walks away.






Rena finally opened her eyes and took off her headphones and put it on her neck.

She stands up, walks away but stopped after a few steps.

She turned around and saw Jurina looking at her smiling.

“Hi~” Jurina finally greeted her while waving her hand at Rena.

Rena keeps looking at the younger girl.

‘Since when did she’s there?’ thought Rena.

“How long have you been there?” Asked Rena with a slightly shocked expression.

“Eh? Ermm…J-just now~ hehehe~” Lied Jurina.

Rena then just ignored Jurina and walk away.

Jurina don’t want to lose this chance so she ran up to Rena and walk beside her.

“Rena-Chan~” The way Jurina called her making Rena turned her head to look at the cat-smile girl.

“Rena-Chan, can I call you Rena-chan, Rena-chan?” Jurina gives her cat-smile at the other girl.

“Why should you?” Rena asked her as she keeps walking towards their dorm.

“B-because I want to call you Rena-chan, Rena-chan~” Jurina this time giving Rena a cute puppy eyes.

“Don’t look at me like that.” Rena replies her frankly.

“So I can call you Rena-chan?” Jurina asked excited. Rena just nodded at her.

“Go back to your room, it’s getting late.” Rena pats Jurina’s head as she walking ahead.

Jurina got excited by Rena’s action, she jump around happily until she fell because her ankle is still not recovered yet.

Rena hears Jurina’s voice so she looks behind and saw Jurina on the ground.

“Itai~~” Jurina holding her ankle with a pain expression.

“What are you doing? Get up, let me help you to your room.” Rena is standing in front of her while extending her hand.
Rena knows her injured ankle is hurt.

With Rena’s help Jurina stand up. Rena put her hand around Jurina’s waist making Jurina to frozen.

“Put your right hand on my shoulder.” Rena’s ordered making her back to her sense as she slowly put her right hand on Rena’s shoulder.

‘I’m in heaven~~~~’ Jurina smiles dreamingly at Rena as her heart beating faster.



~Monday~

“Sayaka! Faster!!” Sayaka looks like she’s panting hard already.

“We’re almost there! Hurry up!” Sae once again shout with a loud voice as she keeps telling Sayaka to go faster.

“Sae~*pant* I don’t think I can...hahhh~” Sayaka starting to slow down.

“Arghh!! I told you not to go jogging before we go to school! Now we’re getting late! Let me paddle it then!”
Sae changing their position on the bike as she is at the back seat, stepping her feet on the paddle and started to paddle fast towards the school
gate.

 “Yaaaarrhhh!!!!” shouted both of them as they riding the bike faster towards the gate before the school gate closed.

[ hahahaha I just…well~   Don't mind meh~]


The school started as usual.

Mariko and the Acchan were talking with each other while Haruna is sitting on her seat with a sleepy look.

Mariko noticed her looks like she is lack of sleep.

“Harunyan~ Are you okay?” Mariko asked her concern at her friend. Acchan also looks at Haruna.

Haruna lean her head on the desk.

“I can’t sleep well last night~ There is…” Haruna paused and look at Tomochin’s back who sit in front of her.

“There is..?” Mariko waiting for her to continue.

“There is a weird sound coming from the next room of mine~” Mumbles Haruna blushing.

“Huh?” Acchan and Mariko still don’t understand what she said as they furrowed their eyebrows.

“I heard a moaning sounds coming from…Tomochin’s room.” Haruna stated it clearly that even Tomochin can hear it.

Tomochin froze and widen her eyes when she hears what Haruna said.

“Ehhhhh?!!” Mariko and Acchan said in unison as they both turned their head towards Tomochin.

That whole day, the poor Tomochin being teased by her friends.


“Yuko~ Yuko~ Yuko~ Yuko~ Yuko-“

“Stop it Takamina! What do you want?!” Yelled Yuko at Takamina while she was trying to focus on stalking her NyanNyan having lunch. Of course they were at the terrace of the school along with Sae and Sayaka.

“Help me~” Takamina says as she started to eat her lunch.

“Help with what?” Yuko doesn’t really pay attention to Takamina.

“Umm…about Ray…”Both Sae and Sayaka also listening to her as they silently eating their foods.

Yuko finally turned her head towards Takamina. “Why Ray?” Asked her.

“Make her stop chasing after me.”Answered Takamina.

“How?” Yuko asked her as she also started to eat her lunch.

“*sigh* that’s why I ask you to help me~” Takamina said in a desperate tone.

“Maybe we could help too~” Sayaka voiced out as Sae nodded to her statement.

“What should I do then?”Takamina asked for their suggestion.

“Hmm…Ray always called you Kai right?” Takamina nodded at Sayaka.

“I have tried to make her hate me…but she keeps misunderstood my action.” Pouted Takamina.

“Ah! I got it! She likes your manly behavior!” Yuko said.

“So?” Takamina was confused.

“That’s mean you have to act girly in front of her~ who knows, she will get annoyed~” Laughed Sae as she started to imagine the girly Takamina.

“That’s kinda…embarrassing ~” said Takamina. ‘But maybe…I should try it~’

“Or…ask someone’s ikemen to distract her from you~” Sae suggest her idea as she wink.

The other three looked at Sae then the same thought popped in their mind.


~
Ray was looking around as she walks towards the hall.

Suddenly she bumps into someone making them both fall.

“S-sorry~” Said Sae who is on top of Ray.

Sae stand up then extended her hand gently towards Ray to help her to stand up.

Ray at first hesitated but then she accept her hand.

“I’m sorry again~” Sae smiled at her who kissing the back of her hand.

Ray looks like she’s blushing while Sae was grinning widely in her mind as she winking at her friends who was watching from afar.

Phase 1: Complete!


Ray saw Takamina walks towards her, in a girly way.

Ray was smiling stupidly but her smile faded when she noticed something on the midget. She’s wearing a ribbon clip on her hair.

“Hi Ray~” Takamina greeted her, in a girly way as she sway her short hair to the side.

“That acting looks…awkward.” Yuko commented on Takamina’s act again as they watching from afar.
Sae and Sayaka nodded.

Ray was speechless as she never seen this other side of her ‘Kai’.

They both sit on the bench at the park.

“Ne…Ray, why are you still chasing me when you see me kissed a girl the other day?”
Takamina decided to ask the question since the readers were curious and confused.

“Because I know~ Kai wants to make me jealous right?” Takamina’s jaw dropped when she hears the answer.

“Urmm…no~” Takamina cutely said as she still want to keep her acting.

Ray pouted at her but inside she still feels weird at her behavior.

“Ah! I have a practice for my club now~ I have to go~ bye Ray~” Takamina get up and wave at Ray in a, girly way.

“K-kai!” Ray was calling her but Takamina ignored her while skipping away from her.

“Tsk…I told her not to skip!” Sae whined as they watch Takamina skipping awkwardly.

 Phase 2: -_-



Next will be D-D-D-D-DANSOOO!!!!!   

I don't know when is the next~  but for sure it will come~ 
sorry for my english, grammar, and the nonsense! 
I'm still lacking in many aspects but i tried my best! Ganbatte!!





T.B.C~ 

[strangervs]

DANSO!!! I like it!    please make yuko danso
who knows nyan nyan will be attracted...fufufu   

[FoxKing]

“I heard a moaning sounds coming from…Tomochin’s room.” Haruna stated it clearly that even Tomochin can hear it.

Tomochin froze and widen her eyes when she hears what Haruna said.

“Ehhhhh?!!” Mariko and Acchan said in unison as they both turned their head towards Tomochin.

That whole day, the poor Tomochin being teased by her friends.

lol...

cant wait for danso...

[love angel]

 yay~ Danso...i want sae danso!!!!

 and thanks for the update...

 can`t wait for the next....

[cisda83]

Everyone seems to be having a nice time with thier chosen crushes..

But the takamina girlly self is the best plot...

What will Ray do about Minami behaviour?

Would she release Minami or getting more and more attracted?

Would ray prefer Minami or sae?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update