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Tsundere Problem
« on: February 28, 2014, 06:25:54 AM »
HAI.! Im kinda new here so pls. bear with me. This story been bugging me for i dont know a few weeks or months so here i can get it out of my head and THANK U VERY MUUUCH kuro_808-san i could not do it without your help.



Prologue



"Pl-please go out with me" a tall girl stuttered bowed down with a letter in hand.

"Sorry but i dont feel the same way" staring at the tall girl.

The tall girl straight her back feeling sad "Do you perhaps love someone at the moment?"

"No, I dont have but my answer will be the same. Sorry."

The small girl was about to walk away but the tall girl hold her hand.

"I'll wait." shocking the small girl.

"What?" the small girl questions.

"I'll wait for you to fall in love with me." the tall girl said with full of determination. The sad feeling has been erased

"that's impossible." the small girl roll her eyes.

"I'll make it possible."

the small girl just stand there questioning how stubborn can she be.

"Haruna, don't be like a stubborn kid" the small girl unclaps their hand and walk away.

The said girl just watch the small girl walk away and clench her hands. When Haruna decided to do something seriously, she WILL not going to give uo easily that for sure.

"YUKOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!" Haruna shouts causing Yuko to look at her

"what now" Yuko began to irritate

"YUKOOO DAISUKIIII...!!!!!!!!" Haruna smiles waving her hands happily.

Yuko blushed crimson red. Did she say no to Haruna right? doesn't matter and just walks away with a red face.

"Yuko i promise that i will make you fall for me even it take for a million years for me to do it." punched the air full of confident

Haruna was satisfied for the exaggerating words she say and go home humming Heavy Rotation happily

But Yuko was opposite she nearly doesn't care. But why was she blushing Heck. I dont know too
At night Yuko was doing her homework quite forgetting easily Haruna's confession. Poor Haruna.But what Yuko does not know from that moment Haruna confesses. Her whole world she thinks is peaceful is about change. Blame Haruna for her exaggerating promise really




Is it okay? pls. comment if i did wrong or something i can fix it. im quite nervous really hehehe
 
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Re: Tsundere Problem
« Reply #1 on: February 28, 2014, 06:34:51 AM »
Lol Their roles are switched.  XD I rarely find a fanfic with Haruna the one chasing after Yuko. This looks fun. :twothumbs
« Last Edit: February 28, 2014, 06:46:54 AM by Konoe »

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Re: Tsundere Problem
« Reply #2 on: February 28, 2014, 06:39:43 AM »
 :lol: What? Kojiharu chasing Yuko now? XD

Keep on writing! There's nothing to be scared of :cathappy:

I wanna know what happen next :D
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Re: Tsundere Problem
« Reply #3 on: February 28, 2014, 06:52:03 AM »
Interesting concept at kojiharu chasing yuko
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Re: Tsundere Problem
« Reply #4 on: February 28, 2014, 07:46:09 AM »
OHh. . . :mon huh2:

Switching character haha Yuko being Tsuntsun. .

It's interesting . .  :twothumbs

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Re: Tsundere Problem
« Reply #5 on: February 28, 2014, 10:50:30 AM »
Finally !!

Haruna will felt how Yuko Suffer when she is on her Tsun tsun Attitude  ..  :farofflook:


Author-san .. I'll wait for your Update . . :kneelbow: :kneelbow:


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Re: Tsundere Problem
« Reply #6 on: February 28, 2014, 01:15:26 PM »
Please update :bow: Kojiyuu

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Re: Tsundere Problem
« Reply #7 on: February 28, 2014, 01:34:07 PM »
Kojiyuu!!!  :ding: :luvluv1: :luvluv2: :shy2: :shy1:
Role reversal? Or maybe after that Haruna will become pretty just for Yuko to chase her? Either way, it's KOJIYUU!!! Can't wait for more chapters! :on GJ: :on comhere:

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Re: Tsundere Problem
« Reply #8 on: February 28, 2014, 01:52:05 PM »
Normally the other way, but....interesting.
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Re: Tsundere Problem
« Reply #9 on: March 01, 2014, 03:10:55 AM »
Chapter 1

Haruna's POV

 Hai.! My name is Kojima Haruna. Currently studying at Akb High School and a first year there but most importantly in love with one of the most popular girls in our school. And known as The Tsundere Princess but you know Yuuchan despise that name of hers. Huh? who is Yuuchan? The LOVE of my life , Oshima Yuko she's really cute that you could die.!YES. THAT cute hehe..


"Haruna, your going to be late honey" oppss my mom calling gotta be quick.

"Yes, Mom" I shouted back

I look myself at the mirror. I look presentable at least. Okay Operation: Make My Tsundere Yuko Fall In Love. You Haruna, don't you dare give up on Yuuchan you hear me?!. I nodded.

"Mom, Ittekimasu"

"Be careful on your way and Haruna good luck on getting Yuko dear"

"Thanks Mom Bye" I saluted and close the door. I'm lucky I got a super cool mom really

 As i near the school gate, I see a small brunette girl walking nearby. Can it be?. I run toward the said girl.

"Yuuchan!!!!" As I back hug her i knew it.

"Ha-haruna" Yuko stuttered.Kawai.!!

"Ohayou, Yuuchan" As i hugged her tighter on the waist.

"Haruna, get-off-me-this-instant"As she try to get out of my hug. Now we cant get that right?.

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Yuko'POV

"I said get off me geez" I'm really starting to get irritated now.

"Hmmmm, I'll stop if you give me a kiss" As she put her chin on my head.Just Great

"WHAT?!!ARE YOU CRAZY??!!" no one dares to hug me yet darse to ask a kiss.This girl.

"Yup, Crazy for You"She whipered oh~so~gently~ to my ear.

I blushed crimson red. For a moment i stop struggling i repeat for.a.moment.

"Oww Yuuchan being a tsundere again"HAruna just giggled at what she just said.

Now i'm pissed. I found an unfound power to escape her hug.Now im facing her right now. Why was smiling there like she didn't do anything.tsk.

"I"M NOT BAKAAAAA...!!!!!!!!. I HATE youuuu..!!!!!" I quickly walk away from her. How dare she-

"YUUUCHAAAN.. I LOVE YOU TOOO..!!!" Swaying her hands and smiling like a idiot.

"BAKA..!!!!!."hmpphow can she just say that so shamelessly huh. what a girl... Does this have to happen every i repeat EVERY SINGLE time we met. The Heck right?!

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Back to Haruna' POV

I watched her walk away with a red face again really. Yuuchan sorry for always teasing you but you're just so cute being so embarassed. Oh come on,who will not wish to see it again aafter seeing it huh?. I better go to class. As i about to walk away someone get their arm around my shoulder.

"Ohayou~ Haruna" Oh it's Miichan.

"Miichan Ohayou"

This is Miichan aka Minegisho Minami, one of my childhood and best friend. A little TOO crazy sometimes but always there to help me when im trouble.Lucky me.

"Oho,Haruna you sly cat it's early in the morning and first thing to do is flirting Yuko. Geez it's only 8 in the morning.(sorry don't know when they go to school in Japan).

"Correction it's 8:05 in the morning"

Miichan rolled her eyes.

"It's the same Haruna"

"It's not"

"It is"

It's not"

She would not just back down would she? . rigtht she's miichan, hate to lose well me too

"It i-"

"God it's early in the morning what a way to do it"

"What a way to say ohayou"Typical Miichan.I rolled my eyes.

"Ohayou Takamina"

"Ohayou Haruna, Ohayou Miichan"

This is Takamina aka Takahashi Minami one of my childhood friend and bestfriend too. She's a ribbon lover. We three called ourselves
The Three Muskaters (sorry again) but Takamina dont want it cause she said she will look like a idiot that way well can't argue with that but never leave us anyway and helps who need include me of course.


"Let's go girlss to class" we just walk with her "we won't want sir bobblehead to lecture us you know guys were his favorite students of all time"

"Its so hard to be a teacher's favorite. Right? Haruna?"

"you betcha"

"Girls" she shook her head disappointedly.

"Haruna dont listen to her she's just depressed Acchan didn't get to gets that she love her" she whispered to me not so silent.

"M.I.I.C.H.A.N."

"Oho Miichan you better run"

"Planning to" and off she go.

"GET BACK HEEERE..!!!" off they go. even tho the're like that. They are the one that I guranteed that will never leave me.

"But they are really troublemakers suh as i" i shook my head

"Yuuchan" I get that heart of yours and make you fall for me.Watch me all of you.at least not now but i know someday yeah someday.
ja ne.


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Thanks for the comments , and i start chapter 1 as a introduction sorry dont'cha worry I'll proceed to the story in Chapter 2 im quite nervous really nervous sorry for the amateur writings :bow: :bow: :bow: :panic: :panic: :panic: anyway Enjoy~
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Re: Tsundere Problem
« Reply #10 on: March 01, 2014, 03:23:20 AM »
I still didn't got over to their roles. :lol:

GO KOJIHARU!!! :onioncheer:
im quite nervous really nervous sorry for the amateur writings :bow: :bow: :bow: :panic: :panic: :panic: anyway Enjoy~

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Re: Tsundere Problem
« Reply #11 on: March 01, 2014, 04:55:57 AM »
Okay. Acchan not going all over Takamina and Yuko not going all over NyanNyan's boobs? WHAT IS WRONG WITH THIS UNIVERSE?!

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Re: Tsundere Problem
« Reply #12 on: March 01, 2014, 05:08:37 AM »
"In Parallel Universe"  XD

and It's too cute to imagine Yuko being a tsundere.

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Re: Tsundere Problem
« Reply #13 on: March 01, 2014, 09:13:55 AM »
Eh... Haruna is the one that chasing Yuko here....

Normally people made the story with Yuko that chasing Haruna mostly....

So reverse situation.... Interesting

Can't wait to find out what's going to happen next

Thank you for the updates

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Re: Tsundere Problem
« Reply #14 on: March 01, 2014, 12:35:08 PM »
Yey! An Update!  :onioncheer:

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Update Soon! :twothumbs
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Re: Tsundere Problem
« Reply #15 on: March 01, 2014, 05:04:28 PM »
It seems weird to have Kojiharu chasing still but she does well doing so
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Re: Tsundere Problem
« Reply #16 on: March 01, 2014, 09:33:42 PM »
this fi  is really interesting. yuko is the tsundere one and kojiharu the clinging one hehe

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« Reply #17 on: March 01, 2014, 09:58:53 PM »
Update please~

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Tsundere Problem ANNOUNCEMENT.!
« Reply #18 on: March 02, 2014, 04:14:10 AM »
ANNOUNCEMENT

                Hi, Ladies and Gentlemen we have an announcement that we want to make for the upcoming chapters of Tsundere Problem.
But I have no idea where this come from, I'll just let the let the main character to announce it. Without furthe ado, pls. welcome, Kojima Haruna, the one who came up with this.sigh
       
                  Thank you Author-san, I will not say anything Eklabo anymore. I,Kojima Haruna have decided that Yuuchan aka Oshima Yuko just be friends i repeat be better be friends yes you all read it right friends. The explanation will be in Chapter 2, i know it's sudden very sudden but please respect it. haruna bowed down. Bye.

                   "WAIT..!!!!" one of the audience shouted. "Did you fall out of love in Yuko?!!"the audience gasped, yeah all of them.
                   
                   Unfortunately for them, Haruna just walk away.
                   
                   "uhmm,Im the Author so just like Haruna the details will be in chapter 2 pls. wait . Bye. *runs away**hides*.
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Re: Tsundere Problem
« Reply #19 on: March 03, 2014, 03:55:16 AM »
So it's NOT going to be KojiYuu? What????

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