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What's up everyone!!! Welcome to my very first fanfiction. I’m so excited!!!! :shy2:

In this series there will be a total of 4 different couples (WMatsui, Atsumina, Kojiyuu, Saeyuki) and just to give you a hint, 4 girls will be in an all girls' yankee high school and the other four will be in an elite and private high school. :ding:

These 4 trouble-making yankee friends (Jurina, Takamina, Yuko, and Sae) will soon realize how much 4 beautiful ladies (Rena, Atsuko, Kojima, and Yuki) mean to them. How far will there love story go? Will it end with happily ever after? Will somebody get hurt and betray someone? Who knows, maybe they just weren’t meant to be. Plus, you know that sometimes love doesn’t always go as planned…  :kekeke:

READ and Find out the answers to these questions.
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Character Summaries:
Kazuhiro Girls' High (Yankee School)
Matsui Jurina:
Age: 17 (3rd Year Student)
The leader of her gang called “Conquer” and a very charming person. She loves fighting but only if she has a reason to do it (like someone who tries to punch her attractive face XD). That is probably why her teammates think of her as a great and funny leader. Later on in the story she will encounter the Student Council President Matsui Rena who is very harsh to her at first but still falls for her.


Takahashi Minami:
Age: 17 (3rd Year Student)
The Vice Leader of their gang and is the childhood friend of Jurina. She and Yuko don’t get along very well even though they’re in the same gang. But, she eventually makes up with Yuko after what happens to them. Her friends call her “Takamina” as her nickname. Even though she’s short, if you mess with her or anyone close to her it’s not a good sight. But, once you get to know her she’s very fun to be with. Her first impression with Maeda Atsuko led them to hate each other but later on they’ll find out they actually have feelings for one another.


Oshima Yuko:
Age: 17 (3rd Year Student)
She can be a pervert at times but knows when to stop herself. Yuko and Takamina have a bad relationship but that changes over time. She’s a very good observer and if she spots something that catches her eyes, no one can stop her from getting what she wants especially with that appealing smile of hers. Right when she first met Kojima Haruna she knew it was love at first sight. Now, there’s nothing holding her back to make Haruna become her one and only.


Miyazawa Sae:
Age: 17 (3rd Year Student)
She can be a player at times with the girls especially with the fact that she has a more ikemen face than most of the guys around. Even though she’s like that, when she falls for someone, she will give her whole heart to that person no matter what. Most people at their school recognize her as the “The Shadow Prince” because no one knows exactly what she’s thinking or going to do next. But, really she just wants to find that special someone who will truly understand her. When she meets Kashiwagi Yuki, things became reversed and her wish of meeting a gorgeous princess has finally ended.


Ikemen Names:
Jurina: Matsui Jun
Takamina: Takahashi Kai
Yuko: Oshima Yuu
Sae: Miyazawa Sai


Fukushima Elite High (Rich School)
Matsui Rena:
Age: 17 (3rd Year Student)
She is the Student Council President and very well-respected among her classmates. If she really wants something she can get it by acting cute and shy. In reality she is a hot-tempered girl who used to go to Kazuhiro Girls’ High but transferred to Fukushima in the second year for family reasons. Her nickname used to be “Gekikara”. She tries to keep her past a secret but, when she bumps into Jurina that secret will finally be exposed.


Maeda Atsuko:
Age: 17 (3rd Year Student)
She is the Vice President of their school and is a very good seducer at that too. Don’t look straight in her eyes or you’ll be captivated in love just like the guys that swoon over her whenever she passes them. But, if you try to do something to her I assure you the outcome won’t be good. When she first met Takamina she loathed her for what she did even though it was just an accident. But, in the end she figures out that she can’t be without her.


Kojima Haruna:
Age: 17 (3rd Year Student)
Her outside appearance can make guys and even girls fall in love with her. Some wouldn’t even want to know her inside, because she’s actually an air-headed girl who tends to daydream and becomes indecisive. But, that changes when she runs into Oshima Yuko just by coincidence. Now, she tends think of Yuko and calls it her destiny to learn more about this mysterious girl. She has tricks up her sleeves in order for her to have another chance in meeting Yuko which she still doesn’t now will lead to chaos and some pervertedness.


Kashiwagi Yuki:
Age: 17 (3rd Year Student)
She’s the ideal princess of her school. Many guys always approach her to confess their love because she has an easy going attitude. But, she rejects all of them and of course not in a hurtful way so her reputation won’t get ruined. She’s very smart but has a tendency to also be curious as well. The nickname her classmates give her is the “Reaction Queen” because she has a habit of exaggerating whatever she feels. Her dream of finding a prince charming finally came true after she met Miyazawa Sae.

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Here's the Prologue. I hope you guys enjoy it. :whistle:
Tell me if the story is interesting so far and if I get good feedbacks, then I'll continue.
Plus, I'm new to this so don't judge ok? :sweat:
Let's go!!!


“A Different Perspective” (Prologue)
10 P.M. (Night of the dance next to the gateway of Fukushima High)
“Why do we have to wear these suits to the dance?” Yuko complained. “At least, you could have let me pick out my own suit.”

“That’s the whole point in this plan right, Jurina?” Takamina said a little annoyed. “Plus, if we let you choose you’ll take forever.”

“I guess you’re right. I think this is the only way for us to surprise them, that’s why we have to dress up as guys and pretend that it will be the first time we meet them.” Jurina said with that cat-like smile on her face.”

“Hmph! Then how come we still have to wear a mask on our face. The idea of becoming ikemen guys was a different story but now this?” Yuko pouted.

“Oh, just shut up Yuko! We’re wearing masks so they won’t be able to recognize our face! It’s common sense! Plus remember what happened the last time we sneaked inside here!” Takamina exclaimed.

“What did you say, midget?!” Yuko retorted back.

“You know what I said and who you calling a midget, retard?! It was all your fault we almost got caught!” Takamina answered back.

“Why you little ***hole!” Yuko tried to punch Takamina in the face but she dodged it. “Tch!” she remarked.

“You have to do way better than that!” Takamina said with a smirk. Now it was her turn. She tried to startle Yuko with a high kick but then somebody got in the way and grabbed her foot before she could even have a chance to take her revenge.

“Hold yourself together guys!” Sae said with an alarming voice while still holding on to Takamina’s foot in the air. “We’re not here to fight. We’re here to enjoy ourselves with the people we love.” She said with a less shocking tone.”

Then they all became silent after what Sae had just told them until Takamina started to talk.

“Um, Sae I really am sorry but can you let go of my foot now, it’s starting to hurt.” Takamina uttered.

Sae looked at her left hand which was still holding her foot and let go of it. “Apology accepted but, you should know better. You’re our Vice Leader and we’re counting on you too.” She said a little disappointed.

“Yeah, Takamina you should know better” Yuko teased.

Takamina was about to say something back but Sae held up a hand and cut her off. “It’s not only Takamina’s fault, it’s your fault too Yuko.” Sae looked at her with puppy eyes.

With that Yuko couldn’t help but to give in. “OK, I’m sorry! It’s my fault too, I get it!” She confessed.

With that she smiled. “Now to end this mess, please shake hands and say ‘sorry’ to each other” Sae announced with a happier tone.

“EHHH!!!” Both Yuko and Takamina shouted in unison while looking at Sae.

“I just did a moment ago!” Yuko murmured.

“Me too!” Takamina protested.

“Just do it already or we won’t go to the dance at all!” Sae said losing her patience.

“Fine I’ll do it” Takamina held up her hand so Yuko could shake it. “I’m sorry Yuko. Are we cool now?”

Yuko looked at Takamina’s hand and hesitantly shook it. “Yeah we’re cool and I’m sorry too, Takamina” Yuko said with a smile.

With that Takamina also smile as well.

Sae wrapped her arms around both of them. Then looked back at where Jurina was standing. “Leader are you going to come with us?”

Jurina stopped spacing out and answer. “Like I woudn’t! Of course I’m coming! This was my plan after all” Jurina said with enthusiasm.

“Great! Let’s go then!” Sae said with a wide smile on her face and started to walk towards the gate with the other two still in her arms.

Jurina while staring at her team walk on ahead whispered to herself, “What would I do if Sae wasn’t here to discipline them” She just sighed. “But I’m glad that I have a team that’s very energetic” She smiled. “Hey guys! Wait for me!!!

Sae, Yuko, and Takamina looked back and said together, “Come on, Leader!”

Yuko escaped from Sae’s grasp. “The last one inside is a rotten egg!!!” Yuko shouted and started running to get a head start.

“Oh no you don’t!” Jurina yelled back. She started to run after Yuko and passing both Sae and Takamina who stared in awe.

“Ah! What, don’t leave me!” Sae too started running leaving Takamina behind not wanting to be the last one.

“Hey! Sae what do you think you’re doing! Wait up, you know I can’t run that fast!!!” Takamina said already out of breath even though she just started running.

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For the meantime, Jurina was getting closer to Yuko who was getting tired. She took this chance to take the lead.

“Seea later, Yuko!”  With that she ran passed Yuko and zoomed to the finish line which was the doorway to the inside of Fukushima High.

“Yes, I did it! I’m Number One!” Jurina chanted with delight.

“Ok, I get it you’re Number One. Don’t rub it in” Yuko said out of breath and a bit disappointed.

“Haha, sorry, I got too excited. But, you know, you did pretty good” Jurina said with her cat like smile.

“Thanks, you too” Yuko also grinned. Just then someone came into view, which was in fact, Sae.

“Dang! You guys are fast! I think I won’t be able to beat you next time either! Sae said panting but still managed to smile.

“Ok, we’re here! Remember guys, we changed our names now. Just for today anyway.” Jurina proclaimed. She pointed at Yuko. “You’re new name is Yuu, ok?”

“Got it!” Yuko answered. “That’s a pretty cool name, ‘Oshima Yuu’, it could come in handy if we ever decided to disguise ourselves again.”

“Your new name Sae is, well, Sai. I couldn’t think of anything else” Jurina said nervously. “Sorry”

“No it’s fine. I kinda like how it sounds. ‘Miyazawa Sai’, it’s a catchy name.” Sae reassured her with  a  smile. Meanwhile, they saw another figure running towards them.
 
Jurina looks around. “Ah!!! That’s probably Takamina!” She exclaimed. “We forgot all about her!”

“You’re right! She’ll kill us for this!” Sae said frightened.

“Haha! She barely made it here. What is she, some kind of turtle!” Yuko started laughing.

Finally Takamina was in front of the doorway like the others, exhausted. She saw Yuko laughing and made a sour look on her face. “What is she laughing about” She asked Jurina.

“Yo-you’re asking m-me?” Jurina started to stutter. Takamina gave her a sharp look that made her spine twitch. But before she could give her reply Sae cut in their conversation.

“Oh! It’s nothing I just told her a joke” Sae said humorously. When Takamina wasn’t looking she nudged Yuko in the ribs to make her stop.

“Ouch!” Yuko said. She looked at Sae and Jurina which both of them gave an evil stare. “Sorry” she mouthed the word.

Takamina turned back around to face them. “Really, if she thought it was so funny then why not tell me the joke, Sae” she insisted. With that Sae froze with fear.

“Ah, um, well, ok then…” Sae franticly started to think up a funny joke.

“I’m waiting” Takamina said impatiently. Then she finally thought of one that would certainly make Takamina laugh.

“I got it!” Sae whispers the joke to Takamina’s ear. With that Takamina fell to the ground and laughed hysterically.

A/N: (Sorry I couldn't think of a funny joke XD)

 Jurina was shocked by this as well as Yuko was. They both were curious of what the joke was so Jurina approached Sae and whispered to her, “Hey, what did you tell her?”
 
Sae smirks and said, “Let me just say, it involves ‘squirrels’.” Then she walked away laughing to herself too. Jurina was still confused but didn’t ask any further questions.

“Ok guys, now I’m serious!!! We wasted a lot of time fooling around here. They might be angry at us right know. So let’s go inside and part ways to wherever our girlfriends are. Do you understand?”

Takamina stopped laughing and got up and stood next to Yuko and Sae. “Roger that!!!” all of them said in unison.

“Good! Just remember that you have new names” Jurina pointed to Takamina. “Your name is now Takahashi Kai” Next she pointed to Yuko. “Yours is Oshima Yuu” Then she looks toward Sae. “Well l told you before I couldn’t think of anything else so yours is Miyazawa Sai” Finally she points to herself and said, “I will be known as Matsui Jun.”

 “Now that everyone knows there new names we can finally go inside” Yuko said cheerfully.

“We ready?” Jurina asked her team. Everyone looked at each other and nodded. “Before we go in, on the count of 3 we say our group name.” They put their hands in the center.

“One....Two....THREE…TEAM CONQUER!!!” they all raised their arms high. “Perfect, now we can go!” she said. All of them fixed their ties and suits. Then they put on their masks and headed inside. They each then went their separate ways to their own destination.

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Little did they know when they stepped in through that door, their expectations of thrill and happiness will soon disappear when they find themselves in a very difficult situation where one or the other will experience hurt and pain like never before. They each have to understand that there is ‘A Different Perspective’ to every problem.
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That was a long prologue wasn't it?
But it was worth the read. :farofflook:
If you liked it leave a comment cuz i want to know what you think.
If you didn't like it maybe Chapter 1 will change your mind, if anyone wants me too. :depressed:
Tell me if I should update.

Thanks for reading!!! :byebye:















« Last Edit: April 21, 2014, 10:58:45 PM by [EX4ce] »

Offline River1721

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OH~ This fic sounds interesting!  :cow:

YAY! Wmatsui, Kojiyuu, Atsumina,Saeyuki!  :onioncheer:

Of course Acchan is a good seducer, Rena having Gekikara mode , Yuki being the "Reaction Queen", and Haruna being an air headed girl!  :kekeke: :mon lovelaff:

The prologue sounds amazing!  :on GJ: :mon determined:

I am going to guess that Team Conquer went to a party where the girls are. :dunno: :pig huh:

Yes! Do Update this!!  :stuffed: :shy2: :on drink: :byebye: :gmon love2: :mon loveflower:

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Interesting concept, I like that  :twothumbs

One thing though, THEY WILL REMAIN AS GIRLS, RIGHT? I've seen way too many Boy version of girls x their other half for the past few weeks and its just... ugh... annoying  :smhid

anyway, looking forward to the next update  :)
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Interesting~

The WMatsui :heart:

The Atsumina~ :heart: :heart:

The Kojiyuu~~~ :heart: :heart: :heart:

And the Saeyuki!!! :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:

Can't wait!  ^.^d
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Wahh i can't wait for the next ch

Update please

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Hurt and Pain huh....?

Who would be the ones that suffered from their accoutered?

I would say Kai and Jun

What's going to happen next?

Can't wait to what kind of troubles are they going to cause?

Thank you for the interesting prologue

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:farofflook:   This sounds so good
:on slopkiss:
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ok sorry that was annoying ahahaha  :hee:
This is great give us mooaar!!!
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Thank you so much for the great feedbacks!!! :kneelbow:

I'm super happy that you guys liked it and as I promised I will start on Chapter 1.
I assure you that your questions will be answered in the upcoming chapters so stay tuned. :mon determined:

Other characters will also be in my story like Mayuyu, Sayaka... and more (probably) XD
Maybe there even might be a love triangle who knows.... :mon misch:  :glasses:

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Damn..  you just come up with my top 4 favorite OTP...  :farofflook:
KojiYuu -- my forever OTP.. a pervert squirrel prince can only match with an airhead cat princess  :luvluv1:
SaeYuki -- just simply fallin' in love with this royal couple..  :luvluv2:
AtsuMina -- the worldwide favorite couple ever...  :on woohoo:
WMatsui -- two is better than one..  :hee:

just promise me one thing,
finish it, please...  :kneelbow:
Arigatou author-san...  :kneelbow:

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Re: [EX4ce]'s Fanfiction "A Different Perspective" Chapter 1 (All Pairings)
« Reply #10 on: April 06, 2014, 12:34:22 AM »
Sorry guys for the late update. But, thanks for waiting patiently. I was busy doing my homework. :on study:

Anyway here's Chapter 1 for you. :mon XD: You're going to find out Rena's past so it's in her P.O.V.

Plus in my prologue it was only Jurina, Takamina, Yuko, and Sae talking. So now I wanted to switch it up and make Rena, Atsuko, Haruna, and Yuki be the main characters for this chapter. Don't worry they'll soon meet each other and it's going to be  very interesting. :mon heh:

Just an FYI there's new characters here.  :D

Ok let's not waste anymore time. :hee:
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New Characters:
Yoshida Hikaru:
Age: 24 (Rena’s Butler)
Rena thinks he’s not attractive, but actually he’s very handsome. Even though Rena is cold towards him, he doesn’t let that hinder him of accomplishing his duties to serve her. He will fall in love with her halfway through the story, but knows that it will be an unrequited love. Instead he will guide her to find that “somebody” who he knows will make Rena happy.


Sado
Age: 18 (Rena’s childhood friend)
Her actual name is Shinoda Mariko. When she went to Kazuhiro Girls’ High that’s how she got her nickname. She became friends with Rena in elementary school after she saw Rena being bullied by several boys. She made it her priority to keep Rena safe. But when Rena told her she would move to Fukushima Elite High for her 3rd year, she disappeared without a word. She didn’t even say goodbye.

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That's it for the new characters for now, anyway. :lol:

This chapter is kinda long but, the more details the better.

So, let's go!!!


"A Different Perspective" (Chapter 1: Am I a Murderer?)
2 weeks before the dance (Rena’s Room)
Flashback
“Gekikara!” Sado shouted. “Do it! Kill her right now!”

Gekikara approached the girl while taking out her dagger. She said biting her bloody nails, “Ne, okotteru?” Then she began to laugh. She kneeled down where the girl was and pointed the dagger directly across her heart. “You’re the last one so I’ll make it a painless death as possible”

“I beg you, spare me!” the girl pleaded. “I’ll do anything just don’t kill me!”

“Why, should we? You’re from Nakamura Girls’ High and we’re from Kazuhiro. Our schools have been enemies for years. Plus, you guys invaded our territory.” Sado said angry.

“I have a little sister. Our parents died from an accident and if I die nobody will take care of her” Now the girl had tears in her eyes.

“Then you should of thought twice before coming here.” Sado then looked at Gekikara and said, “Wait, I change my mind don’t kill her just yet, torture her instead first” she smiled. The girl wiped the tears from her eyes and looked at Sado with pure hatred.

Gekikara moved the dagger towards her face now and the girl stared at it cautiously. She then put pressure on the dagger and made a small cut. Blood trickled down her face. Gekikara started laughing when she saw the blood and she asked the girl again, “Ne, okotteru?” and continued to laugh. With this the girl took advantage and punched Gekikara in the face. The dagger she was holding fell. The girl tried to quickly get up and escape.

“Where do think you’re going?” Suddenly Sado was standing in front of her. The girl jumped back surprised.

“Weren’t you just behind me? How did you get here so fast?” She stood there confused.

“You’ll regret doing that to Gekikara and for trying to escape from us. We could of killed you a long time ago you know” Sado then kicked her in the stomach. The girl fell back down on the ground in agony. Gekikara slowly walked to where her dagger was and picked it up.

“That hurt” Gekikara was angry now. She looked at Sado.

“Finish her off. I’m getting bored” Sado said yawning.

“My pleasure” she grinned getting the dagger ready. She now walked closer towards the girl who was crawling backwards.

“Stop moving” Sado grabbed hold of her hands and now she was defenseless. She was desperately trying to break away from Sado’s grasp but nothing would work she was just too strong for her. “Hurry up Gekikara, I can’t hold on to her all day!” Sado was losing her patience.

“No, no, get away from me!!!” the girl was terrified now. “Noooo-”

With one swift strike of the Gekikara’s dagger the girl lay there lifeless.

Blood splattered everywhere then everything went black with darkness…

End of Flashback

*Beep! Beep! Beep!* Rena awoke with a stunned look on her face. She turned off her alarm clock. Then she lay back down in her bed. “Why does this nightmare always come back to haunt me?” Rena covered her face with her hands. “I get it. I already regretted that I killed her. I’ve changed and still I can’t forget what happened.” she just sighed and looked at her clock. It just turned 6:10 A.M. “It’s Monday again. I better get ready for school.” she thought to herself. So she got up out if bed and took her towel to the bathroom to take a shower.

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After she was finished getting dressed, she went down to have breakfast with her parents.

“Good morning mother, father” she said while sitting down. When the maid brought in the food, she started eating.

“How was your sleep? Did you have any dreams?” her mother asked.

Rena stopped eating and looked back at her mother. She smiled and said, “I slept well and I did have a dream. It was about someone saving me” she took another bite of her melon pan.

“Really, who was it then? Someone in your school?” her father teased.

With that Rena suddenly stood up. “I’m done eating. Thank you for the food. I’ll take my leave now. Don’t want to be late for school” she bowed and smiled, then walked away from the dining room. After her parents were out of view, she went back to having a sad face. As soon as she reached the doorway, Rena looked through the window and was surprised to see that the limousine was already parked in front. She opened the door and went down the stairs. Rena was about to open the car door but all of a sudden a hand reached out and opened it for her instead. She looked to see who it was.

“Hello, Rena-sama. I will be your new personal butler from now on.” He smiled.

“Who are you?” Rena asked confused. Then she saw her father walking down the stairs. “Father, who is he?”

“Ah, I see you guys already met” he smiled. "He will be your new butler, Rena. Introduce yourself, boy.”

“Of course, my name is Yoshida Hikaru, it’s nice to meet you” he then bowed his head. “Please, just call me Hikaru.”

“I’m counting on you Hikaru-kun to protect my daughter” Rena’s father said.

“Hai, I will protect Rena-sama with my life, sir!” he said confidently.

“Can we go now?” Rena interrupted their conversation, impatient.

“Right, you guys need to go” her father said apologetically.

Rena got in the limousine and Hikaru closed the door. He then went inside and started the limousine. They were off to Fukushima Elite High.

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When Rena finally arrived everyone she passed greeted her with a smile.

“What took you so long, Rena?” Atsuko asked.

Rena turned around and saw her best friends’ Atsuko, Yuki, and Haruna. “Gomen, it’s all because my father hired a new butler for me.”

“Are you serious?” it was Yuki who asked this time. “Is he cute or handsome?”

“What kind of question is that, Yuki? I bet he’s both cute AND handsome.” Atsuko said excited for Rena’s answer.

“What are you guys talking about?” Haruna asked cutting in their conversation.

“Weren’t you listening?” Atsuko said. But she saw that Haruna again was in her imaginary world and wasn’t paying attention.

“Tell us what he looks like” Yuki wanted to know Rena’s answer as well. Now Atsuko and Yuki looked at Rena expectantly.
 
“Um, I don’t really think he’s that attractive” Rena said in a quiet tone.

“Eh, I want to see him now just to make sure and wait, what’s his name anyway?” Atsuko said disappointed. But before Rena could answer the bell rang.

“Ah, we have to go to class now” Haruna said finally not spacing out anymore.

“At least we’re all in the same class, right?” Yuki reassured.

“Let’s talk more at lunch, ok?” Atsuko said.

“Sure…” Rena said in a sad tone.

“Great!” Yuki and Atsuko shouted in unison and didn’t notice the sad tone in Rena’s voice.

“We should go to class now before the teacher gets mad at us.” Rena started to walk on ahead leaving them behind. Haruna followed her.

“What’s wrong with Rena?” Atsuko looked at Yuki.

Yuki just shrugged her shoulders. She also doesn’t know what’s going on with Rena.

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The morning went by smoothly. But Rena didn’t join Atsuko, Yuki, and Haruna for lunch at the cafeteria. Instead she went to the roof of the school alone…

It was very windy when Rena arrived at the top. She sighed, “If only things could have been different in the past”

“Well it can’t. The past is the past. There’s nothing you can do to change it now.”

Rena was shocked to hear someone answer her. She thought she was all alone. “Who’s there?” she wasn’t expecting an answer.

“I know what you did. You killed her. You killed my Onee-chan…”

“What are you talking about?” Rena was panicking. “Answer me! Who are you?”

“You’re a MURDERER! I will not forgive you for this!”

Rena was angry now. She ran towards the door. “Show yourself!” she opened it and saw a girl running down the stairs. She ran after her. When she was on the bottom floor she looked both ways of the hallway but didn’t see anyone.

“You, Matsui Rena, is a MURDERER! Everybody will soon find out who you really are…” the girl laughed.

Rena stood there frozen. She couldn’t believe that someone knew the secret she never wanted anyone to know. Not even her parents knew about the incident. “How could this happen to me?” everything around her started to blur.“Maybe this is just another dream” she thought to herself. Then right there she saw someone in front of her. But, before she could see who it was, she collapsed on the floor due to her dizziness.

TBC........

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Wow that was intense wasn't it? XD  :frustrated:

Comment on what you thought about this chapter.

Tell me if you have any idea who that mysterious girl is. You might actually be right. But, of course I'm not going to you yet if you're right or wrong. I want you guys to be surprised. Just wait a little longer. You'll soon find out.

But, I'll still give you more clues. :twothumbs

Well, thanks again for staying with my story. :kneelbow:

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Offline River1721

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Who was the person that Rena killed ? Who is the person that knows Rena's secret ?  :dunno:  :pig huh:

YA~ Thanks for the update! Hm~ Yoshida Hikaru sounds like an interesting character   :kekeke: :mon suspect:

The ending where someone tells Rena she is a murderer sounds like Erena in Majisuka Gakuen telling Atsuko the same thing  :mon huh2: :pig madder: :mon determined:

Can't wait for the rest~  :mon XD: :stuffed: :byebye:

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Who was the person that Rena killed?

Who was the little sister?

What's going to happen to Rena next?

Who was the person who was near Rena when she fainted?

How was it that Rena didn't get arrested for killing someone?

How could her parents didn't know about that incident?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

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Wow i'm so interested with this story   :mon thumb:
Getting curious about that little sister  :mon huh:

And of course i'm waiting for the day when they meet their partners!! Especially kojiyuu~  :mon lovelaff:
Will it happen soon?
Well, i'm waiting :D thanks!

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yeeeah.. it's started...

who's the girl that made rena affraid??

curious...

can't wait for the next update...

*waiting for KojiYuu and SaeYuki moment.. ^_^

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Sorry, but my update for Chapter 2 will be delayed cuz I'm very busy with school. :kneelbow: :err:

Wait a little longer and I'll surely finish it. I won't let you guys down I promise! :mon determined:

But just so you have something to think about... the title for Chapter 2 will be "Yuko's Plan"  :mon thumb:

Oh and another new character will be in there too!!! None other than Mayuyu!!! XD

Stay tune for more!!!

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Re: [EX4ce]'s Fanfiction "A Different Perspective" Chapter 2 (All Pairings)
« Reply #16 on: April 13, 2014, 12:48:15 AM »
I'm finally done with Chapter 2!!! :banana: :pepper:

I apologize that it took me forever to finish this. It's just that I was very busy this week. :depressed: :kneelbow:

Anyway, thank you to those who have still been waiting for so long. You guys kept me motivated. :mon cute:

In this chapter, I've added in a touch of comedy just to change things up.
Only because I thought that Chapter 1 was too serious. XD

There's fighting scenes here too, Kazuhiro (Team Conquer) vs. Nakamura Gang and what happened after Rena fainted on the floor of the hallway.

This is going to be exciting. I just know it! :cow:

Okay, here I go!!! :twothumbs
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New Character:
Watanabe Mayu:
Age: 15 (1st Year Student)
She goes to Fukushima and is an admirer of Yukirin. Her friends call her “Mayuyu” as a nickname. Even though she is only fifteen years old, she acts very mature for her age, or does she? XD. She was adopted by the rich Watanabe family at the age of fourteen after they found out she was an orphan. You will soon find out that looks can be deceiving after you see the true Watanabe Mayu and about her past as well.

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I only have one new character for this chapter.

But if I need to, I'll add new characters just like how I've always have been doing. :whistle:

I'm all ready, so let's go!!!


"A Different Perspective" (Chapter 2: Yuko's Plan)
At the front of Kazuhiro Girls’ High (In the afternoon)
A/N: (BTW this is taking place after Rena fainted in the hallway.)

Four individual fights were happening… Kazuhiro (Team Conquer) vs. Nakamura Gang

“Come here shortie!” a girl wearing an eyepatch said. When Takamina heard this, her expression changed.

“Who you callin’ short!” Takamina shouted her angriness showing.

“You got a problem with that?” the girl started laughing.

Takamina smirked, “No, why would I have a problem with that? I’ll be the last one laughing when I see you on the ground in pain” then she came closer to her. “Plus, you’re going to regret ever trying to fight with me. You might even lose your other eye” now she was the one laughing.

“Shut up!” the girl was the first to strike. She was about to do an upper cut but she lost her balance due to too much strength. Takamina saw this and moved out of the way. The girl with the eyepatch fell on the ground hard.

“I didn’t even have to do anything! I wasn’t expecting that you were that clumsy!” she continued to laugh. Then just to make sure it was really her victory, she put her foot on the girl’s head.

“The first one, conquered!” Takamina did a thumbs up.

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Yuko was making a hand gesture and saying, “Oshiri! Oshiri! Oshiri!” she was circling a girl with a bat as her weapon.

“Stop joking around and fight me already!” the girl said frustrated.

“Hmph, you’re no fun at all” Yuko pouted. “But fine, if you want me to fight… I will then!” she charged towards the girl.

She wasn’t expecting that so to avoid Yuko’s attack she swung the bat. Yuko knew out of instinct that she would defend herself so she slid under it just in time. Just then Yuko smiled, “I got your oshiri!”
 
“Ahh!!!” the girl dropped her weapon and stepped back. “Hentai!!!” she screamed.

“Eh, what do you mean?” Yuko picked up the weapon. “You dropped this. Here, you can have it back.”

“No! Get away! I don’t want it” the girl ran away screaming.

“Wait, we’re not done fighting though!” Yuko yelled. “Was it something I did?” she was scratching her head and wondering what she did wrong.

“Um, I think the second one is…conquered?” Yuko was still standing there confused.

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“Stop following me!!!” Sae was being chased by a stylish looking girl.

“Wait up! Miyazawa-san! I just want your signature so I can prove to my friends that we were fighting!!! The girl had a pen and paper in her hands.

“No way, why do I have to sign that! You’re not even my friend! She stopped running, so the girl did too.

“Please, if you do I’ll leave and never come back!” the girl begged.

“Do you possibly think I would believe that you’ll never come back here? It’s totally a lie! You just want me to sign it!” Sae was mad now and walked away.

“I don’t have any other choice do I?” the girl threw away the pen and paper she was holding. “Okay, how about we settle this with a fight. If I win, you have to sign it. No excuses.”

Sae turned around, “Interesting… But if I win, I won’t sign it and you’ll go away. No excuses either.”

“Fine, we have a deal then” the girl was in her fighting stance now.

Sae smirked, “You’re really serious about this aren’t you? Then why not you make the first move” she made a gesture for her to come.

“Rahh!!!” the girl came at her ready to punch.

But Sae was even faster. She dodged it and made a counter attack. Then she put the girl’s hands behind her back just like how a police would do it and pushed her to the ground.

“Ow, ow, ouch! Okay, okay, you don’t have to sign it!!! You win! Just let me go already. It hurts!” The girl surrendered.
Sae let go of her, “Good, now get out of here and don’t come back!” she picked up the pen and paper. Then, wrote something on it. “Here, read it”

The girl took the paper and read it.

It said: “This is proof that we were fighting. She did her best in order to beat me. I think that next time she really can defeat me.  – Miyazawa Sae AKA ‘The Shadow Prince’.”
She blushed and said, “Thank you” Then ran towards the entrance to leave.

Sae just smiled. “Third one, conquered!”

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“Hey! Stop tryin’ to punch me!” Jurina said who was avoiding all the blows.

“Like I would stop! I’m doing this for my gang and school!” the leader of the gang from Nakamura Girls’ High said. She kept on punching hoping that at least one would hit Jurina on the face.

“If that’s your strategy of defeating me, you should think of something else instead!” Jurina advised.

“Fine then how about this!” she changed her position and kicked.

Jurina saw what was coming and blocked it. “I have to admit that was a close one.”

“Don’t think that’s all I can do. I have a lot of tricks up my sleeve. I was only warming up” the leader sounded confident.

“Actually, I don’t really care cuz your too slow anyway!” now Jurina was the one who kicked the girl. It was directly in the stomach and she was sent flying backwards. “Ha! That’s what you get for messin’ with my face!” she smiled.

Jurina winked, “Last one, the leader, is conquered!”

“We’ll get you back for this!!! Next time you guys will be defeated!” The leader shouted while retreating. “C’mon guys lets go back to Nakamura”

“Yeah, you better run away!” Jurina retorted back. Takamina, Yuko, and Sae were at her side now.

“You can’t defeat us cuz you’re all weak!” Takamina shouted.

“Fight someone your own size! You’re actually lucky that we gave you mercy!” Yuko was getting mad.

“And stay way if you know what’s good for you!” Sae added.
 
“Let’s go back to our hideaway before we get into another fight with someone else.” Jurina with her gang headed back inside the school.

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Headquarters of Team Conquer… (Kendo Club Room)
“I’m tired of doing the same thing each and every day!” Yuko was still angry and now threw her bag on the floor.

“What do you mean?” Jurina saw how mad Yuko was.

“What I mean is that we’ve been doing the exact same thing in our fights for the past few days now.” Yuko was more calm this time.

“How do you know that?” Sae was curious.

“Well, for a start, I’ve noticed that Takamina gets all angry when the people she fights call her short.”

“Eh, what are you saying!” Yuko held out a hand to stop Takamina from arguing.

“Let me finish before you start anything. So after that, whoever I fight always run away screaming. I have no idea why.”

Takamina laughed, “It’s probably cuz you keep on touching their osh-” she stopped after Yuko gave her the evil stare. “Okay, okay, continue”

“I would have been done by know if it weren’t for somebody interrupting me” Yuko looked at Takamina. “Anyway, when it comes to Sae there’s a whole lot of drama happening with all the girls chasing after her. I bet you never experienced a good fight Sae, have you?”

“You do have a point there. I do want to have a real fight. Where I can have a little bit of a challenge at least” Sae was beginning to realize what Yuko meant.

“Lastly, our leader here, Jurina beats her foes with a snap of her fingers.” She snapped her fingers to indicate what she was trying to say. “Just like that”

“It’s surprising that you actually memorized that” Takamina confessed.

Yuko ignored Takamina’s comment. “I got it! I have a plan. How about we sneak in to that school where all the rich kids are?”

“You mean Fukushima High?” Jurina replied.

“Yeah, that one! At least we can actually do something different for once” Yuko said eagerly.

“Are you crazy, that school is packed with guards! They’ll easily catch us!” Takamina warned.

“They won’t catch us if we can get a hold of their uniforms” Sae interrupted.

“But how are we supposed to get them?” Jurina questioned.

“Easy, I know someone who goes to Fukushima” Yuko assured them.

Now Jurina, Takamina, and Sae all looked at Yuko in awe. “What, do you think I would come up with this plan with no reason. I’m smarter than you think guys” Yuko said offended.

“Okay then, are we gonna do Yuko’s plan or not?” Jurina asked her teammates for their opinion. “I vote yes that we should do it. But it’s your decisions.” She saw Yuko’s happy face.

“I think this will be a fun and new experience for all of us so, I vote yes too” Sae looked at Yuko who was now smiling.

“The only one left to vote is you Takamina” Jurina pointed out.

Takamina looked at Yuko who was pleading. “Ah, fine, whatever, I pick yes then. I don’t really care”

“Great! Then we’ll do this plan first thing tomorrow morning” Yuko said excited. Just then the bell rang for dismissal. “Finally, school is done for today. Remember to wake up at 6:00 A.M. tomorrow and I’ll tell you guys who my friend is that goes to Fukushima tomorrow too. Well, seea guys later” with that Yuko left the room.

“Wait a minute, I’m the leader here! I’m supposed to give the commands!” Jurina demanded. But, Yuko was already gone.

“So what now, do we still wake at 6:00 tomorrow?” Sae asked.

“I don’t want to wake up early! This plan is stupid. I didn’t even want to do this!” Takamina complained.

“C’mon Takamina, it’s only for one day. Plus, we can actually see how it feels like to be rich. It’s going to be a lot of fun messing around in that school” Sae assured her.

“And if anything goes wrong, we’ll blame Yuko for it” Jurina said jokingly.

“Okay, I feel a lot better now” Takamina smiled. “I hope that something does go wrong so I can blame Yuko directly” she thought to herself.

“We should go home now. We need our sleep for tomorrow” Jurina suggested.

“You’re right. Let’s go then so we can catch up with Yuko” Sae said and went to open the door. Jurina and Takamina followed behind her. Just then they saw Yuko at the end of the hallway waving at them to hurry up. So, they ran to her side and they all walked together.

With that Jurina, Sae, Yuko, and Takamina left the school and headed to their homes. They still don’t know that tomorrow will be a big day for all of them…

Meanwhile at the Infirmary at Fukushima (The same day: The end of school)
“Rena… Rena, can you hear me…”

Rena opened her eyes slowly and then looked around. “Where am I?”

“You’re at the infirmary. Thank goodness you’re finally awake. We were getting worried” it was Atsuko who replied.

“How are you feeling? Does your head still hurt?” Yuki questioned.

Haruna approached Rena who was resting in one of the beds. She put her hand on top of Rena’s head. “She seems fine to me”

Rena smiled. “Yeah, I feel a lot better. But, how long have I been here?”

“Well, actually, school already ended” Atsuko said nervously.

“What! So that means I missed all my classes.” Rena hurriedly got up, stumbling out of the bed.

“Easy there Rena, I took care of all your assignments” Yuki winked.

 “Well I, cancelled the Student Council meeting today and rescheduled it for tomorrow” Atsuko smiled.

“And I, called your parents to let them know you’re okay and that you’ll be home a little late” Haruna added.

“You guys did all that for me?” tears started to form in Rena’s eyes.

“Of, course we did.” Yuki said. “What are friends for, right?”
 
“Plus, we know you would do the same for us, Student Council President” Atsuko teased.

“I’m really thankful that you all are my best friends” Rena smiled.

Haruna checked her phone. “Um, it just turned 4:00 P.M. We should start heading home now. Are we ready?”

“Yup, I think we’re all set to go” Atsuko ran towards the sliding door and opened it. “Who’s coming with me?”

Haruna, Rena, and Yuki looked and smiled at each other. “We are!” they all said in unison and jogged to catch up with Atsuko.

They were all chatting and laughing in the hallway until they saw a girl speed walking towards them…She had her head down and bumped into Rena. The books she was holding fell.

“I’m so sorry. I wasn’t watching where I was going. Are you okay?” Rena apologized and helped the girl pick up her books.

“I’m fine. I was in a hurry so it was also my fault.” The girl said. Rena picked up the last of her books and looked at it.

“So you’re a 1st year student and your name is Watanabe Mayu?” she asked handing the book to her.

“Yes, but, my friends prefer to call me Mayuyu.” She took the book from Rena’s hands. “Well, I have to go now. Thank you again for helping me and it’s nice meeting you-”

“Rena” she cut of Mayuyu from speaking.

“Eh?” Mayuyu didn’t understand what she just said.

“My name is Matsui Rena” she said.

“I know.” Mayuyu pointed to where the others were standing. “You’re Kashiwagi Yuki, Kojima Haruna, and Maeda Atsuko, right?” now she smiled. All of them were stunned by how Mayuyu knew their names.

“We’re 2 years above you. So how come you know us?” Atsuko was getting suspicious.

“Don’t worry, I’m not stalking you or anything like that” Mayuyu assured her. “It’s just, me and all my friends look up to you guys” she looked away. “Especially you, Kashiwagi Yuki-san”

Yuki started to blush. “Um, thank you”

“Ooh, I see you have an admirer now” Atsuko teased.

“I want an admirer too!” Haruna complained.

Rena walked towards Mayuyu and whispered in her ear. “Ganbatte ne, on making Yuki yours. She then winked.

Now it was Mayuyu who blushed. “Uh, look at the time. I hope I can see you guys again tomorrow.” She bowed and looked at Yuki. Then she ran off and turned the corner.”

“Bye!” Rena yelled in order for Mayuyu to hear her.

“Wow! What was that about?” Atsuko was staring in awe.

“What did you tell her anyway, Rena?” Yuki wanted to know.

“Oh, it was nothing.” Rena started to walk again. Yuki was just staring at her puzzled.

“Hey, wait for me!” Haruna shouted.

“Come on Yuki, let’s go home” Atsuko grabbed Yuki’s arm and they both ran to catch up.

They didn’t notice that Mayuyu was still there at the corner watching them leave.

“Rena, Rena, Rena, you don’t know the first thing about me, do you? I have many ways to make you turn back to the way you were back then. I’ll be waiting until the time is right to take my revenge on you.”  Mayuyu smirked then, walked off laughing.

To Be Continued...

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A lot happened in this chapter. :panic:

By now you should know who that mysterious girl is from Chapter 1. I gave you a big clue!

Comment on who the mysterious girl is now. Plus, it kinda obvious so... :cool2: yeah

And tell me what you guys thought of this chapter. I put all my effort in this.

Well just so you know I probably won't update again until next week. It depends on how much homework I get...

But, still stay with me! :mon geek: I'll be starting on Chapter 3 now.

See you again!!! :mon bye:








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Re: [EX4ce]'s Fanfiction "A Different Perspective" Chapter 2 (All Pairings)
« Reply #17 on: April 13, 2014, 03:54:53 AM »
Hm~ by any chance is Mayu's real personality Nezumi ?  :pig huh:
So~ just my guess but Mayuyu has to be the mysterious girl! Mayuyu even knows about Rena's past :pig madder: :hee:
What is Mayuyu up to, is she really holding feelings for Yuki or is it just part of her plan to get revenge on Rena? If Mayu really holds feelings for Yuki then I am expecting a love triangle to form!
 

Lol Yuko kept on shouting Oshiri! during her fight :mon slapass: :hiakhiakhiak:
What is Team Conquer going to face the next day? Is it Rena and the others?  :mon huh: :dunno:
Will the characters finally meet their meant to be person?! :nya: :mon inluv:

Thanks for chapter 2!! I have been dying to know what Yuko was up to!  :hee:
You definitely didn't let us readers down Author-san! :mon thumb: Especially now that Team Conquer is going to be sneaking into Fukushima High. Mayuyu being a new character here, knowing Rena's past and planning revenge!
I'll be waiting for chapter 3 ~ :mon innocent: :byebye:
« Last Edit: April 14, 2014, 01:27:19 AM by River1721 »

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Re: [EX4ce]'s Fanfiction "A Different Perspective" Chapter 2 UPDATE
« Reply #18 on: April 13, 2014, 09:39:45 PM »
What a hilarious fighting scene!  :mon lmao:
The funniest is yuko and her clueless face. Omg i laughed hard!  XD XD XD

Hmm so mayu is the mysterious girl... What is her plan? What kind of revenge?

I'm eager to waiting for the next! Totally curious about what's yuko plan and what will happen once they go to fukushima  :mon dunno:
This is exciting  :mon fyeah:

Thankyou author-san..  :D

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Re: [EX4ce]'s Fanfiction "A Different Perspective" Chapter 2 UPDATE
« Reply #19 on: April 16, 2014, 08:41:57 AM »
yuko has great fighting technique...

the oshiri grabbing...  :shakeit:  :hiakhiakhiak:

they are really have to meet real opponent...  :smhid

wait until they meet the ladies...

they will be knocked down by them...  :on kimbo:

maybe mayu is the one who want take a revenge to rena??

can't wait for the next update...

 


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