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Tentomu chu!! desu~ *Dropped*
« on: May 18, 2014, 02:21:47 AM »
New AKB fanfic project, starring the Three Musketeers and Tentomu chu!! Hope you enjoy! :heart:





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Prologue   




Arc 1: Miniskirt no yousei

Chapter 1 - "We have magical powers?! I'll become an idol, chu!!": Part 1  Part 2

Chapter 2 - "I can transform?! The seven members finally meet, chu!!": Part 1  Part 2

Chapter 3 - "What's our group name?! Magical girl idols, chu!!": Part 1  Part 2  Part 3

Chapter 4 - "Can we control our powers?! Training starts, chu!!": Part 1  Part 2

Chapter 5 - "Follow the leader! Mako's big spotlight moment, chu!!": Part 1  Part 2

Chapter 6 - "Sixth sense?! Nana's big secret, chu!!": Part 1  Part 2

Chapter 7 - "Responsibility as the oldest! Nagisa's ALL-OUT mode, chu!!": Part 1  Part 2

Chapter 8 - "Sudden breakup?! Mio and Meru's big fight, chu!!": Part 1  Part 2

Chapter 9 - "Double trouble! There are TWO Ryouha-tan's, chu!!": Part 1  Part 2  Part 3

Chapter 10 - "I'm not afraid of anything! Miki faces her fears, chu!!": Part 1  Part 2

Chapter 11 - "We're gonna put on a show! I am an idol, after all, chu!!": Part 1  Part 2

Chapter 12 - "The values of friendship. The promise of intertwined stars, chu!!"




Arc 2: Erande Rainbow

Chapter 13 - "Awaken, the power of the Rainbow Prism! Tentomu chu, Power Up, chu!!"

Chapter 14 - "The names we bear. Dreaming under a starry sky, chu!!"

Chapter 15 - "Please, Cinderella! A chance encounter with the Shinjuku Girls, chu!!": Part 1  Part 2

Chapter 16 - "Hidden in the night. Memories, secrets, and true feelings, chu!!"

Chapter 17 - "Nogizaka has super powers, too?! Awakening the power inside, chu!!": Part 1  Part 2

Chapter 18 - "Breaking through the silence. Nana travels to the Spirit Realm, chu!!": Part 1  Part 2

Chapter 19 - "Never eat a poison apple. Mio becomes Snow White, chu!!": Part 1  Part 2

Chapter 20 - "Mixed up! Seriously?! Ryouha and Nagisa swapped bodies, chu?!": Part 1  Part 2

Chapter 21 - "Bon appétit! Chef Meru takes on the heat, chu!!": Part 1  Part 2

Chapter 22 - "My Prince-sama! Miki has fallen in love, chu!!": Part 1  Part 2

Chapter 23 - "The melody until today. One final goodbye, chu!!"

Chapter 24 - "Silent Christmas. Tragedy strikes Mako, chu!!"

Chapter 25 -- "Shattered memories. Mako awakens, chu!!"

Chapter 26 -- "Fragments of the past. Mako and Naanya's tragic past, chu!!"





Arc 3: Smile Kamikakushi

Chapter 27 -- "A mysterious new arrival. Magical Witch Yuria-Peace, chu!!": Part 1  Part 2

Chapter 28 -- Chapter 28 -- "Knight from the future! Fates connected by the stars, chu!!" 

Chapter 29 -- "At the New Years' Eve live, an unexpected happening?! A mischievous little devil, chu!!": Part 1  Part 2

Chapter 30 -- "The eternal promise. The legend of the Moon Princess, chu!!"

Chapter 31 -- "What the heart wants. Miki regains her True Wings, chu!!": Part 1  Part 2

Chapter 32 -- "The Sakae48 Crisis! Ryouha's realization, chu!!" 

Chapter 33 -- "The Sakae VS Namba war!!! Nagisa's tears, chu!!"

Chapter 34 -- "A wonderous dream adventure! Sakura-tan in Wonderland, chu!!"








Comments are much appreciated :heart:
« Last Edit: June 13, 2017, 04:50:22 AM by Ruka Kikuchi »
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:heart: l Completed: Fire and Ice l Black Chocolate l My eternal blue rose l Dishonored l The Black Rose l Fruits of a Rose l Remnants l :heart:
:heart: l Dropped: Tentomu chu l REBORN l Bite me l NMB Gakuen l YumeToki l Cafe 48 l :heart: l Hiatus/Indefinite: Samurai l Blood Bonds l Night Wind's Deed l PRISM l Time Travelers l :heart:
:heart: l Collab threads: Sky&Ruka l Ruka&Michael l :heart:
 l Compilation thread: 48G New Gen l :heart:

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Re: Tentomu chu!! desu~ (Only on Tumblr)
« Reply #1 on: May 18, 2014, 07:51:54 AM »
Yay tentoumuchu based fic!!!

I like the concept of them having power. Though that Sailor Moon explanation lolol
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Re: Tentomu chu!! desu~ (Only on Tumblr)
« Reply #2 on: May 18, 2014, 12:29:49 PM »
Yay tentoumuchu based fic!!!

I like the concept of them having power. Though that Sailor Moon explanation lolol

@Yuki88: Eh? Does it look like Sailor Moon? I never noticed. XD I love Sailor Moon!
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:heart: l Completed: Fire and Ice l Black Chocolate l My eternal blue rose l Dishonored l The Black Rose l Fruits of a Rose l Remnants l :heart:
:heart: l Dropped: Tentomu chu l REBORN l Bite me l NMB Gakuen l YumeToki l Cafe 48 l :heart: l Hiatus/Indefinite: Samurai l Blood Bonds l Night Wind's Deed l PRISM l Time Travelers l :heart:
:heart: l Collab threads: Sky&Ruka l Ruka&Michael l :heart:
 l Compilation thread: 48G New Gen l :heart:

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Re: Tentomu chu!! desu~ (Only on Tumblr)
« Reply #3 on: May 18, 2014, 06:15:51 PM »
I mean this part!!

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"In other words, it’s like what happens in a Sailor Moon manga or such."

"So, you just say a few words, or do something that activates the ring’s power…"

"And, poof. You’ve got magic."

"Oh~. OK~ I get it now. We’re like magical girls, that’s SO COOL!"

and yes I love Sailor Moon too!  XD
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Re: Tentomu chu!! desu~ (Only on Tumblr)
« Reply #4 on: May 19, 2014, 03:19:13 AM »
I mean this part!!

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"In other words, it’s like what happens in a Sailor Moon manga or such."

"So, you just say a few words, or do something that activates the ring’s power…"

"And, poof. You’ve got magic."

"Oh~. OK~ I get it now. We’re like magical girls, that’s SO COOL!"

and yes I love Sailor Moon too!  XD

Oh yeah, that part! XD I forgot about that. Sorry.
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:heart: l Completed: Fire and Ice l Black Chocolate l My eternal blue rose l Dishonored l The Black Rose l Fruits of a Rose l Remnants l :heart:
:heart: l Dropped: Tentomu chu l REBORN l Bite me l NMB Gakuen l YumeToki l Cafe 48 l :heart: l Hiatus/Indefinite: Samurai l Blood Bonds l Night Wind's Deed l PRISM l Time Travelers l :heart:
:heart: l Collab threads: Sky&Ruka l Ruka&Michael l :heart:
 l Compilation thread: 48G New Gen l :heart:

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Re: Tentomu chu!! desu~ (Only on Tumblr)
« Reply #5 on: May 19, 2014, 09:05:41 AM »
HAHAHA OMG I love how you portrayed Ryoha. I can totally imagine her acting like that XD

And yay finally first battery!
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Re: Tentomu chu!! desu~ (Only on Tumblr)
« Reply #6 on: May 19, 2014, 12:22:41 PM »
HAHAHA OMG I love how you portrayed Ryoha. I can totally imagine her acting like that XD

And yay finally first battery!

I've been watching a few TV shows that they star in to learn a bit about their personalities.

On Sekai wo muchu sasemasu seigen, they said Ryouha was the shy type, so I tried to incorporate that in.
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:heart: l Completed: Fire and Ice l Black Chocolate l My eternal blue rose l Dishonored l The Black Rose l Fruits of a Rose l Remnants l :heart:
:heart: l Dropped: Tentomu chu l REBORN l Bite me l NMB Gakuen l YumeToki l Cafe 48 l :heart: l Hiatus/Indefinite: Samurai l Blood Bonds l Night Wind's Deed l PRISM l Time Travelers l :heart:
:heart: l Collab threads: Sky&Ruka l Ruka&Michael l :heart:
 l Compilation thread: 48G New Gen l :heart:

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Re: Tentomu chu!! desu~ (Only on Tumblr)
« Reply #7 on: May 21, 2014, 05:30:00 AM »
Uwaa~ Tentomu chu! story! This will be great! :fap

Mahou shoujo! :twothumbs

Weee! Three Musketeers! :fap

Can't wait for more. :twothumbs

Thanks for the update and hardwork. :bow:

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Re: Tentomu chu!! desu~ (Only on Tumblr)
« Reply #8 on: May 21, 2014, 12:42:52 PM »
Uwaa~ Tentomu chu! story! This will be great! :fap

Mahou shoujo! :twothumbs

Weee! Three Musketeers! :fap

Can't wait for more. :twothumbs

Thanks for the update and hardwork. :bow:

Glad you like it. I've always loved the idea of combining mahou shoujo and idols. Like Macross or Symphogear, and AKB0048(even though those are all mecha. XD But it's the same basic idea!)
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:heart: l Completed: Fire and Ice l Black Chocolate l My eternal blue rose l Dishonored l The Black Rose l Fruits of a Rose l Remnants l :heart:
:heart: l Dropped: Tentomu chu l REBORN l Bite me l NMB Gakuen l YumeToki l Cafe 48 l :heart: l Hiatus/Indefinite: Samurai l Blood Bonds l Night Wind's Deed l PRISM l Time Travelers l :heart:
:heart: l Collab threads: Sky&Ruka l Ruka&Michael l :heart:
 l Compilation thread: 48G New Gen l :heart:

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« Reply #9 on: May 28, 2014, 12:26:59 AM »
Love it! :D
...MAHOU SHOUJO!!! WAHAHAHAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
...wait, ignore that. Just me acting creepy~
Anyways, nod nod~ (*totally not getting a message across, but just know that this is really great)

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Re: Tentomu chu!! desu~ (Only on Tumblr)
« Reply #10 on: May 28, 2014, 12:50:40 AM »
Love it! :D
...MAHOU SHOUJO!!! WAHAHAHAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
...wait, ignore that. Just me acting creepy~
Anyways, nod nod~ (*totally not getting a message across, but just know that this is really great)

Haha you're not creepy. I understand you like lolis and mahou shoujo XD

And don't worry. The story will slowly start to tie up.

And as for message, before the main plot of the story, we'll have each of the members storylines be introduced soon.
« Last Edit: July 17, 2014, 09:42:23 PM by Ruka Kikuchi »
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:heart: l Completed: Fire and Ice l Black Chocolate l My eternal blue rose l Dishonored l The Black Rose l Fruits of a Rose l Remnants l :heart:
:heart: l Dropped: Tentomu chu l REBORN l Bite me l NMB Gakuen l YumeToki l Cafe 48 l :heart: l Hiatus/Indefinite: Samurai l Blood Bonds l Night Wind's Deed l PRISM l Time Travelers l :heart:
:heart: l Collab threads: Sky&Ruka l Ruka&Michael l :heart:
 l Compilation thread: 48G New Gen l :heart:

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« Reply #11 on: May 28, 2014, 02:01:07 AM »
MECCHA KAWAIIIIIII >w<
and kakkoii ~
I like it Mako-chan's the leader...
hoo can't wait for their training sesion! XD
just love to read alot of fiction story

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Re: Tentomu chu!! desu~ (Only on Tumblr)
« Reply #12 on: May 28, 2014, 02:30:08 AM »
MECCHA KAWAIIIIIII >w<
and kakkoii ~
I like it Mako-chan's the leader...
hoo can't wait for their training sesion! XD

Glad you love it! Just posted Chapter 3~ :heart: Check it out!
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:heart: l Completed: Fire and Ice l Black Chocolate l My eternal blue rose l Dishonored l The Black Rose l Fruits of a Rose l Remnants l :heart:
:heart: l Dropped: Tentomu chu l REBORN l Bite me l NMB Gakuen l YumeToki l Cafe 48 l :heart: l Hiatus/Indefinite: Samurai l Blood Bonds l Night Wind's Deed l PRISM l Time Travelers l :heart:
:heart: l Collab threads: Sky&Ruka l Ruka&Michael l :heart:
 l Compilation thread: 48G New Gen l :heart:

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« Reply #13 on: May 28, 2014, 01:28:34 PM »
SPECIAL CONTEST!!!

PM me special alternate(and ridiculous) "names" for Tentomu chu!! Make it as silly as you want, be creative!!!

Good luck, and your name might be in the next chapter!!! :heart:
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:heart: l Completed: Fire and Ice l Black Chocolate l My eternal blue rose l Dishonored l The Black Rose l Fruits of a Rose l Remnants l :heart:
:heart: l Dropped: Tentomu chu l REBORN l Bite me l NMB Gakuen l YumeToki l Cafe 48 l :heart: l Hiatus/Indefinite: Samurai l Blood Bonds l Night Wind's Deed l PRISM l Time Travelers l :heart:
:heart: l Collab threads: Sky&Ruka l Ruka&Michael l :heart:
 l Compilation thread: 48G New Gen l :heart:

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« Reply #14 on: May 28, 2014, 03:01:28 PM »
The alternate name is for the group or the girls?
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« Reply #15 on: May 28, 2014, 04:23:03 PM »
The alternate name is for the group or the girls?

Yeah, since in the story right now, they don't have a group name yet. I just wanted to have fun and let everyone come up with silly group names for them.

Do you have any?
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:heart: l Completed: Fire and Ice l Black Chocolate l My eternal blue rose l Dishonored l The Black Rose l Fruits of a Rose l Remnants l :heart:
:heart: l Dropped: Tentomu chu l REBORN l Bite me l NMB Gakuen l YumeToki l Cafe 48 l :heart: l Hiatus/Indefinite: Samurai l Blood Bonds l Night Wind's Deed l PRISM l Time Travelers l :heart:
:heart: l Collab threads: Sky&Ruka l Ruka&Michael l :heart:
 l Compilation thread: 48G New Gen l :heart:

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« Reply #16 on: May 28, 2014, 05:47:05 PM »
LOL No. I am a bit uncreative when it comes to naming............... I'll go straight naming them Ladybug LOL.
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« Reply #17 on: May 28, 2014, 10:15:38 PM »
It's loveeeee/Ai dayo~~~!!!!!! :D (My reaction to when Mako's was revealed.)
Hohohohohoho...
It's been confirmed as a fact that I'm a lolicon XD
Anyways, I wonder what their group name will turn out to be?
Will it be something normal or something that transcends universes XD ?

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Re: Tentomu chu!! desu~ (Only on Tumblr)
« Reply #18 on: May 29, 2014, 01:53:15 AM »
It's loveeeee/Ai dayo~~~!!!!!! :D (My reaction to when Mako's was revealed.)
Hohohohohoho...
It's been confirmed as a fact that I'm a lolicon XD
Anyways, I wonder what their group name will turn out to be?
Will it be something normal or something that transcends universes XD ?

Do you wanna enter the contest? Just send me some crazy name ideas and I might put them in. XD
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:heart: l Completed: Fire and Ice l Black Chocolate l My eternal blue rose l Dishonored l The Black Rose l Fruits of a Rose l Remnants l :heart:
:heart: l Dropped: Tentomu chu l REBORN l Bite me l NMB Gakuen l YumeToki l Cafe 48 l :heart: l Hiatus/Indefinite: Samurai l Blood Bonds l Night Wind's Deed l PRISM l Time Travelers l :heart:
:heart: l Collab threads: Sky&Ruka l Ruka&Michael l :heart:
 l Compilation thread: 48G New Gen l :heart:

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« Reply #19 on: May 29, 2014, 05:02:04 PM »
I honestly didn't expect that you'd make me read this, Ruka-san -___-

But, WHOAAA!! So these girls are like idols with magical powers? Somehow reminds me of AKB0048 and cross it with Pretty Cure ._.

You made my Umechan as Kitsune?? Honestly, I DID NOT EXPECT THAT.

Hmm.. Mako got herself a good pressure now as the ace and the holder of Muse's fragment..


Will be waitin for your next update then..~

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