Author Topic: Doki Doki (Read 152584 times)

Mikan · « **Reply #200 on:** July 27, 2006, 09:37:20 AM »

"..and so mad when they wouldnt let me where the red kimono for the show.."

On the inside Miki was worried she would pass out from boredom and drown in her icecream. On the outside she kept an interested, caring yet sexy expression plastered on her face. Touching Abe's hand every now and again to sympathise.

"...did you ever go to one of their concerts?"

Miki shook her head. Not really knowing who's concert she hadnt attended.

"...well the lead singer got married last month...did you hear about that? I couldnt believe it you know...he asked me out once...wasn't my type...What about you Mikitan?Got a boyfriend?"

She needed to speed things up. With the clock ticking away there wasnt much time left. She leaned forward over the table, pushing her breasts together. The plan worked when Abe couldnt help her gaze flicker between the seductress and her massive bust. Miki slid the straw to her milkshake in and out of her mouth, licking the froath whilst gazing aimlessly out the window and sighed. "Never had much luck with boys"

Abe dragged her eyes out of Miki's chest and keep them safely on the young girls face. "Dont worry, you'll meet your prince one day"

Miki slowly dragged the straw out her mouth, dropping it back in the glass and put on a entirely fake smile. "..One day.." She repeated.

Abe excused herself. "I'll just go to the bathroom then we'll go back to my place for the movie, ok?"

Miki nodded and waited for Abe to be totally out of view before she pulled out her phone. The clock said she only had another 15 minutes of Nacchi-time left. At the pace things are going now - that wasnt enough. Time to move into emergancy mode.

Abe rinsed her hands under the tap but was more focused at the reflection of herself in the mirror. "Yosh!" She cheered at herself and turned for the door. The door was locked with Miki standing over the handle. In one swift, move Abe was pushed against the wall and her mouth filled with Miki's tongue. A hand ran over the silky material of the sun dress and up the naked thigh. With Miki's other free hand she held Abe's way above her head, out of the way. One of those hands broke free and brought all activity to a halt with one loud slap.

Miki fell back on her arse with a look of innocent surprise while Abe just looked the surprised part. Without hesitation she sprinted out of the bathroom leaving Miki in disapointment on the floor.

- Im off to juku! Sorry I couldnt write more. I would have loved too..

freya86 · « **Reply #201 on:** July 27, 2006, 10:42:53 AM »

*lmao* Miki, Miki, that wasn't very subtle at all!

This "competition" is just so muc fun!!! I'm really curious who'll win in the end ...

Elle_Driver · « **Reply #202 on:** July 27, 2006, 11:06:42 AM »

Abe doesn't seem to know what's good. I'm sure I would have liked it...

Now I'm excited who's next!

huggumwuggums · « **Reply #203 on:** July 27, 2006, 11:07:15 AM »

I love the direction that the story is going..It's getting really, really interesting..

rndmnwierd · « **Reply #204 on:** July 27, 2006, 09:37:44 PM »

I've been Reading Doki Doki longer than I've been a member of the Forum, and I gotta say that this is my favorite story so far. I like the randomness of the plot. Random is good. I was a little worried when bluekinoko left, but I'm impressed with the way Mikan has kept up the story. And I'm definitely looking forward to more of the 'Abe Games'. Keep up the good work.
Lub and cheese.

len.chan · « **Reply #205 on:** July 27, 2006, 09:49:21 PM »

yay! i like Miki's 'emergency mode' XDXD
so, let's see who's next..

Mikan · « **Reply #206 on:** July 28, 2006, 01:26:43 PM »

Miki returned home with a red hand print on her face as a trophy. A small Thank god you messed up party was in process. As the rules stated a two hour cooling off period between attacks was needed. These were all precautions to make sure Nacchi was unaware of how much she was being toyed with.

To cope with the disturbing encounter with Miki in the bathroom Nacchi flipped through several girly magazines. They made her feel young and straight again. Once she had devoured all her pink reading material she stepped down a notch to SEVENTEEN and then finally to balance everything - NANA. This whole process took up 3 hours and 42 minutes of the day.

While Abe was in her room the party continued. Requesting a fill in on the events that unfolded in the icecream palour. Miki did so reluctantly but left out certain bits.

2:56pm - Abe leaves her rooms.

A radio buzzes in Maki's back pocket.

Ksssshh....This is open-mouth. Do you copy?...Kshhhhh

Maki pulled the radio she had borrowed from the security out of her pocket.

"This is Fish-face. What's the situation, open-mouth?"

Kssshh....Requesting a new code name...Kshhh

Yossui swiped the radio out of Maki's hands with a exasperated sigh.

"Open-jaw this Mr. Moonlight. Request denied. Is there anything else?"

The radio hissed with inactivity before springing to life again.

Oh yeah...Target A has left her room. Im persuing on foot

"What the hell ..." Miki rolled her eyes in disbelief at how serious they were all taking it.

Maki slapped her knee. "That's right we havent thought of you're code name yet. It's for the radio only..you dont need to use it all the time"

Miki rolled her eyes in the opposite direction. The party were thinking hard. Reina finally stopped biting her nails and raised her hand. "I got it! Ice Queen!"

"That doesnt even make sense!" Miki glared.

"No...no I think it suits you" Yossui grinned.

Miki folded her arms. "Oh yeah?"

The radio hissed again and interupted the growing arguement.

This is closet-space. Target A has been sighted coming down from the 3rd floor. Over

Miki raised her eye brows. It was Reina who filled her in. "Eri found out what's going on and she wanted in"

Maki raised her hand for quiet as she made her next annoucement to both the party and radio. "Fish-face reporting. Everyone - move to you're positions! Cool off time is offically over and stage 2 is now in motion. On your mark - Get set - Go"

By the time that last word had left her mouth the room was already empty.

katatsumuri · « **Reply #207 on:** July 28, 2006, 02:24:25 PM »

The new chapter is funny.

smoothee · « **Reply #208 on:** July 28, 2006, 02:42:13 PM »

awesome plot mikan!! keep it up!!

huggumwuggums · « **Reply #209 on:** July 28, 2006, 04:24:01 PM »

Quote from: Mikan

Ksssshh....This is open-mouth. Do you copy?...Kshhhhh

Maki pulled the radio she had borrowed from the security out of her pocket.

"This is Fish-face. What's the situation, open-mouth?"

Kssshh....Requesting a new code name...Kshhh

:ROFL

len.chan · « **Reply #210 on:** July 28, 2006, 05:01:21 PM »

Quote from: huggumwuggums

:ROFL

i second that

WaffleT · « **Reply #211 on:** July 28, 2006, 05:06:48 PM »

Quote from: Mikan

Miki rolled her eyes in the opposite direction. The party were thinking hard. Reina finally stopped biting her nails and raised her hand. "I got it! Ice Queen!"

hehe what an honour, the ice queen has got a mention in your fic!
wonderfully written and i love these 'games'

write more sensei *steals pichfork and prods*

JFC · « **Reply #212 on:** July 28, 2006, 10:03:57 PM »

Who's "open-mouth"? Konkon?

loreny · « **Reply #213 on:** July 28, 2006, 10:12:13 PM »

I'm guessing its Makoto? (Just remembering on Utaban they always make fun of her for having her mouth open all the time)

len.chan · « **Reply #214 on:** July 28, 2006, 10:25:23 PM »

Mako. Kon-kon isn't playing, remember?

JFC · « **Reply #215 on:** July 29, 2006, 01:24:28 AM »

Oh right.

Mikan · « **Reply #216 on:** July 29, 2006, 02:12:59 PM »

Yossui bolted up the stares with the intention of meeting Abe half way. Little did she know that Abe had changed directions. Gasping for breathe on the 4th level of the staircase she reached for her radio.

"...Open-mouth do you copy?Mr.Moonlight reporting..."

As soon as she let go of the talk button she recieved her reply.

Im here, what's up?

"...Uhh Where is Target A?..."

There was a slight hesitation.

Morning Musume floor. End of the hall. Over

Yossui stood up relieved that all the Futsal practice had kept her in good condition and sprinted down the steps. Jumping three of four at a time.

The door to the Morning Musume level opened with a loud clack as it hit the wall leaving a tiny scratch. Yossui slowed down to see what she'd done but sped up when she remember that something more important was on the line. Trying to look casual she power walked down the hall looking Abe.

"You look so cool! What's the ocassion!" A sweet voice asked. Too sweet that it made Yossui cringe. It was the last person she wanted to run into.

"I was just -"

"Yoshiko?"

Yossui began to scream internally. Things were getting worse by the minute. From behind Ishikawa, Ayaka poked her head out.

"Yossui, we have been looking for you. Have you been hiding or something" Ayaka asked, linking her arm through her friends. Ishikawa approached her from the other side and did the same.

"You're looking really cool in the jacket. Trying to impress someone are you?"

Ishikawa's face went red with anger at the thought. She gave Yossui a subtle nip on the arm.

"Ow, no. I just havent worn this in a while.." Yossui informed the two girls, giving the most convincing smile as she pulled her arms free. "I actually gotta run"

Ishikawa folded her arms. Any rumour that Yossui was anyone elses put her in a bad mood. "Where are you going?"

Yossui stuttered. "I-I-um-is-am...no where special"

Ayaka looked confused but seeing as this was Yoshiko, she was willing to forgive. "I brought around those American movies you wanted to see and a present I got you when I was on vacation"

Now Yossui was the one confused. She must have totally forgotten about these movies she apparently wanted to see and it seemed there was no way to get out of this tight situation without seeming rude to Ayaka or suspicious to Rika. She had to give in.

Like a true gentleman Yossui linked arms with the two gorgeous girls and walked them back to her room. A little way down the hall a closet was jimmied open. Makoto emerged laughing evilly as she put the jimming tool back in the new leather bag labeled Kamei's emergancy kit and placed it in her backpack. From her pocket she took out a pen and pad and started making quick notes. She was the official secretary for the games.

3:12pm - Yossui hits obstacle

She puts the pen and pad back into her pocket and pats herself on the back for a trap well set. "Nobody messes with P-Mako" She remarked, before jogging off to the real location of Abe Natsumi.

Mikan · « **Reply #217 on:** July 29, 2006, 03:02:11 PM »

Sorry for the delay. Its hard finding time to write. I dont know how Bluekinoko did it!

Well, to make up for it I will spend all tonight writing and writing so I can submit lots more tomorrow to make up for it!

Please pass this story onto your friends. Doki Doki's birthday is June 7th so for its 2 month aniversary a 4,000+ views would be cool! Or so its my aim!

Let's do our best! See you next time!

smoothee · « **Reply #218 on:** July 29, 2006, 04:47:57 PM »

Quote from: Mikan

Sorry for the delay. Its hard finding time to write. I dont know how Bluekinoko did it!

Well, to make up for it I will spend all tonight writing and writing so I can submit lots more tomorrow to make up for it!

Please pass this story onto your friends. Doki Doki's birthday is June 7th so for its 2 month aniversary a 4,000+ views would be cool! Or so its my aim!

Let's do our best! See you next time!

dont worry about it!! just write whenever you can!!

as my present to doki doki i have gone back and forth between fanfic page and doki to get its view to 4000

WAHAHAH!! well the first time i found this fic i read it all in one view.. so i guess if i had been here since the start i wouldve contributed more..

but there you go!! 4000+!!!

HAPPY ANNIVERSARY!!

keep up the good work!!

rndmnwierd · « **Reply #219 on:** July 29, 2006, 06:34:07 PM »

Yay for code names, backstabbing, and jealous Rika. Lol.

I love this fic.
Oh! Happy Anniversary Doki Doki!