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« Reply #480 on: October 07, 2006, 06:27:24 PM »
Holy crraaapp! That was so hilarious! Miki and the window was so great. *does wut Tanachan said and imagines being a duck and seeing Miki in a car in the driver's seat* O_______O *snaps back to reality* RIP All Ducks that wander in roads

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« Reply #481 on: October 07, 2006, 07:42:13 PM »
Somehow I can imagine Miki doing something so reckless because of a bad mood.  Great scene with trying to wake her up using the car functions, Yoshizawa is such a prankster.:D

Wow, Mako-chan still has the bucket...I hope she can get it off, what kind of life is that to be a bucket head.:sweatdrop:

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« Reply #482 on: October 07, 2006, 07:45:03 PM »
YAY YOU'RE BACK! MY CAPS ARE STUCK! GREAT CHAPTER!!

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« Reply #483 on: October 08, 2006, 06:51:19 PM »
Like rndmnwierd said, YAY YOU'RE BACK! I'm so glad. Doki Doki has just been collecting dust because nothing new has happened. But that was a hilarious chapter. Just like old times. Keep on updating!

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« Reply #484 on: October 08, 2006, 07:12:17 PM »
Greaaat ~~~~~
And welcome back!!~~^^

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« Reply #485 on: October 08, 2006, 07:45:58 PM »
it was time! glad to see you back ^^
I've laughed out loud when Yossi takes Miki's head out of the window XDXD

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« Reply #486 on: October 08, 2006, 11:24:29 PM »
Awesome awesome awesome.  Lol @ leader pushing the blame onto Eyebrows.
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« Reply #487 on: October 09, 2006, 03:10:30 AM »
Oh my, I do believe yesterday was Doki Doki's Anniversary!


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« Reply #488 on: October 09, 2006, 07:15:13 AM »
Yossui caught the car keys in her left hand.

"Take my bus"

Nakazawa nodded, ushering Yossui outside the room again. "Yeah, take the obaachan mobile and pick up the girls. They're waiting for you. Once your back concider this the last favour you have to do me..."

Yossui confirmed her instructions with a lowly 'uhn' and jogged down the hallway.

"Oh, and Yocchan!"

Yossui stopped at the front door to look back at her senior.

"What?"

"You have 24 hours..."

There was a pause while Yuuko thought. "Scratch that, you have 1 hour"

The door was slammed shut leaving Yossui confused in the hallway. Call it a hunch but if Yossui wanted to see her 22nd birthday, she knew she had to get moving.

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Miki dragged her feet up the stairs. Climbing up at a snails pace.

She cursed the man who thought of putting the dorms so high up. Its was too hard..impossible even!

She...

Was...

Just...

So...

Darn...

Sleeepy.......


Yossui crashed through the doors to the staircase and ran fiercely down. Skipping 2, 3 steps at a time. Had she not been going so fast she might have see the obsticle snoozing on the steps.

"Wahh!!!"

Her left foot narrowly missed Miki's kidney, planting instead on the step above. This lead to loss of balance forcing Yossui to land her right foot on Miki's shoulder instead and fall some way down the stair case.

Her fall was broken with a crash and a lot of moaning.

"Shuh...shuuuuuuh...." Were her first more comprehendable comments. "Shuuummm...shmmmM-MIKI!!"

Miki sat up and rubbed her arm, wondering why it suddenly ached with an unbelievable pain. Seeing Yossui, scrunched up-side-down against the wall only 4 feet away from her gave her reason to believe that some tradgic accident had taken place and she had slept right through it.

"How'd ya get there?..."

Yossui untangled her legs and stood the right way up, eyes wide with disbelief.

Miki bit her lip Uh oh...
« Last Edit: October 10, 2006, 06:18:55 AM by Mikan »

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« Reply #489 on: October 09, 2006, 07:18:47 AM »
HAHA~! Yossie and Miki tumbling down a flight of stairs! Such a priceless sight! And the random "missed Miki's kidney" made me laugh too! I wonder what Yossie's mission is :]

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« Reply #490 on: October 09, 2006, 07:34:55 AM »
*jumps for joy at recieving her first comment*
OMG!! a little off topic but the new GAM PV, Melodies just SCREAMS slashyness doesnt it?!

Without a doubt this is pure gay-ness. Even by Japanese standards its pretty overly-lesbian :|

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« Reply #491 on: October 09, 2006, 08:37:20 AM »
Maybe a part on the side

She pulled her hair to the left.

No good..urgh..my nose is out of proportion

Risa scrunched up her nose and glared at her reflection. Sometimes, for no reason she hated herself. The clothes she wore, the way she looked, the way she spoke. It irriated her. These feelings didnt last forever because really, nothing does, does it. It was just something she felt at the night time.

A depression.

Late night blues.

She hit the mirror and went to rest on the bed.

"Knock knock"

Takahashi poked her head into the room to check if it was ok to come in.

"You know, normally you would actually knock instead of just saying it"

Takahashi shrugged and sat herself on the edge of the bed.

"I was wondering if I could read one of my novels in here.."

"Yeah sure"

She pointed lazily in the direction of the closet where she hid the books among other things. Like a puppy, Takahashi followed the trail and retreved a novel, anthology of fear (collectors edition), bringing it back to the bed.

From under the hair that covered her eyes, Niigaki watched her friend read the apparently true story.

She's pretty...and I'm suppose to measure up to her?...

She sighed. "Ne, Ai-chan.."

Takahashi, looked up from her pages. "Hun? Nani?"

"Atashi tte kirei?"

Niigaki was kicking herself for asking such a stupid question. She was about to say nevermind when Takahashi spoke.

"I like your eyebrows"

Niigaki furrowed her brow, not sure whether having someone like your eyebrows was a good thing or not.

"I like your nose too. And your cheeks...I-I like a lot of things about you"

She extended her finger, letting it run down Risa's cheek before resting on her chin.

"Yeah, I think you're very pretty"

[:Hey Aichan]
[:Huh, what?]
[:Am I pretty?]

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Miki stumbled into her room and collapsed onto the bed. She was a little surprise to find it empty but remembered that Aya was performing till late and had a Tv appearance early tomorrow morning. For Miki this meant she had a whole nights sleep. With no interruptions...

Beep beep buuuuurrrr beep beep

The phone danced merrily on the table. Seeming to grow progessively louder.

"RRrr! Fine, I'll answer you"

She swiped it up and put it to her ear.

"Hello?"

Hey Tan, Its Me

"Sorry you've got the wrong number"

No I dont. This is your phone isnt it?

"Sorry, there is no phone here"

Dont be stupid, Tan. What are you speaking into..

"Paper cup"

And with that she hung up..and continued her rest...with no interuptions

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« Reply #492 on: October 09, 2006, 08:41:56 AM »
YAY you're back with a bang!! The last 2 chaps were HILARIOUS!! Gosh I can't decide if I like "eyebrows" more or the whole part on Miki. Just a question though, how does Mako watch TV with a bucket on her head :lol:

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That's no way I'm not commenting on this chapter. You probably posted it just before I hit the submit button previously. I just wanna say I always love a good gokkie bit. And Risa.... I like your mayuges too and heck you're BEAUTIFUL!. :)
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« Reply #493 on: October 09, 2006, 11:06:35 AM »
:heart: :heart: love it:heart: :heart:

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« Reply #494 on: October 09, 2006, 02:10:09 PM »
Yaaay~! Ai x Risa again :] Love the Aya and Miki interaction <3~! Do we get to see the other couples finally too? ~<3~!

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« Reply #495 on: October 09, 2006, 06:53:51 PM »
Ah! Two updates since I was gone! What was the uh oh? Did Yossui swallow the keys?

Ai/Risa! *fangirls!*

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"Hello?"

Hey Tan, Its Me

"Sorry you've got the wrong number"

No I dont. This is your phone isnt it?

"Sorry, there is no phone here"

Dont be stupid, Tan. What are you speaking into..

"Paper cup"

And with that she hung up..and continued her rest...with no interuptions


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« Reply #496 on: October 09, 2006, 08:51:25 PM »
^ Agreed. Sleepy Miki is teh funny and teh cute!!! XD XD XD XD XD

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« Reply #497 on: October 10, 2006, 07:19:42 AM »
Sayumi pressed her face hard against the cold window. There was something going on next door and she wanted in. Unfortunately she wasnt invited which meant she would have to spy on them until the day she would be allowed in.

"What are you doing?" Eri stopped watching the TV for a moment to ask.

"Just looking..."

The vague answer intruged Eri. She sat up on the bed to have a look for herself. From her position she could see strangely shaped silhouettes being cast onto the ground below. She bounced off the bed and walked up behind Sayu, wrapping her arms around her waist because she was too lazy to stand up on her own.

"Looking at what?"

Sayumi pointed to the room next door's curtain which were open just a crack to let the light in. "Nakazawa's having a party again..."

Eri shrugged. "Oh, ok" and went back to watching Tv.

For another half and hour Sayumi continued to watch.

"I want to go!" She finally cried out, making Eri jump.

"All they do is drink, I dont get why you would want to go. Its not like they do anything spectacular or-"

"You're missing the point!" Sayu cut in. "The point is - Im not invited!!"

Eri couldnt understand the big deal but played along like she did. "Just sneak in...They'll be too drunk to notice"

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:Meanwhile in Miki's room:

"Zzzz....Oh...no..well...zzz...yeah ok, just one more slice of bread..thank you...zzzZ"

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*

"Look a bunny rabbit"

Mari squealed and clapped her hands like an easily amused child. Kei was an expert at kids entertainment, her speciality being balloon animals and shadow puppets.

"...A bullfrog.."

Kaori, who was helping Yuuko carry boxes of 'party supplies' from the storage cupboard to the bedroom, popped her head in the living room to see what all the commotion was all about. She smiled at the silhouette that was obviously a Square-tailed Rough-winged Pasedena Swallow.

"Oh hey that a good one"

Kei beamed "Why, thank you but please take a seat. The best is yet to come"

Kaori happily oblidged, taking the couch behind Mari.

"And now..." Kei cleared her throat. "My personal favourite...Nakazawa Yuuko-san"

The audience gasped.

"The resemblance is uncanny.."


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Rndmn - No she didnt swallow the keys...but that would be funny...I suppose Miki said Uh oh cause Yossui didnt look happy. BTW, keep an eye out becuase W will make another feauture in chapters coming soon..Also, I still love you

Yuuyami The idea for 100 was to have all the characters feature but seeing as I decided to write over 100, they will feature in future chapters as you predicted :D or atleast that is what Im trying to do :D

Lil_hamz How does she watch Tv with a bucket on her head? I have no idea..Ask her when you see her. I suppose she was just listening :D

To All 49 of you that registered as readers and the uncountable others that I love just as much ITS GOOD TO BE BACK!!! MUAHAHHAHAHA!! LONG LIVE DOKI DOKI AND JPH!P!~

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« Reply #498 on: October 10, 2006, 07:25:47 AM »
This is by far the stupidest question and I bet its really obvious now but has anyone made a connection between the dreams and the future events?

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« Reply #499 on: October 10, 2006, 08:03:23 AM »
Quote from: Mikan
This is by far the stupidest question and I bet its really obvious now but has anyone made a connection between the dreams and the future events?

There's a connection? :o I've been too busy enjoying the reading and ROFL'ing to notice. :lol:

Case in point...
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:Meanwhile in Miki's room:

"Zzzz....Oh...no..well...zzz...yeah ok, just one more slice of bread..thank you...zzzZ"
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XD XD XD

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