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« Reply #720 on: February 25, 2007, 03:04:35 AM »
was reading this and saw comments on wanting us invisible fans to register, thanks for continuing the story! ;)

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« Reply #721 on: February 25, 2007, 08:03:52 AM »
ahhh!! invisible fan registered..wow...your something special kid, ya know that? Means a lot to a writer to have a comment on their page.  It means a hell of a lot..

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« Reply #722 on: February 25, 2007, 11:02:33 AM »
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my work or words influence someone greatly. To inspire them. To make them feel happy on that bad day. To make them giggle in that mundane office meeting ^^


so far your doing a great job there ;)

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What does fanfiction do for the reader
Primary function: Entertain
Sub function/True motive: Feed addiction


I like the "true motive" part :P

For me reading FF esp. MM/H!P makes me feel closer to the girls I love and I'm always amazed at what the writers come up with and I'm glad and thankful they share it with everyone and not only write it for themselves

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I guess Im a sucker for bed time stories about hot girls groping each other...


aren't we all? XD

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Oh and Coachie can you give me some details about yourself?


Uh, what "details" are you interested in? ;)
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« Reply #723 on: February 25, 2007, 12:42:04 PM »
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What does fanfiction do for the reader
Primary function: Entertain
Sub function/True motive: Feed addiction

I have it for sure. A H!P Fanfiction Addiction. Mainly because when you break it down books are stories (duh). I mean stories like the ones we use to tell. Back when we were clans by the fires. I suppose in fanfiction I see that. I feel like we are together being told a saga than continues every night.


Yup, exactly, feed addiction and entertain. I also like the fact that you can be close to your favourite writers, and sometimes even influence their stories to some degree. I like that feeling of proximity.

And another important thing that fanfiction does for me is to teach English! I've learnt some slang(and regular English too, of course xD) in here and I'm pretty thankful for that(mostly because now I'm able of recognizing when someone calls me 'bitch' if I ever go to an English speaking country xD)

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« Reply #724 on: February 25, 2007, 08:40:08 PM »
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ahhh!! invisible fan registered..wow...your something special kid, ya know that? Means a lot to a writer to have a comment on their page.  It means a hell of a lot..


Haha no problem, and concerning that poll, I'm a musume ^ ^

good luck with the next chapter, I'm hoping for some TakaGaki :heart:

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« Reply #725 on: March 04, 2007, 08:36:40 AM »
i've been reading this story hours on end for the past two days . i hardly get any sleep but this story is so damn interesting :khello: :ONwriggly:

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« Reply #726 on: March 04, 2007, 12:35:20 PM »
New reader...and I signed up to comment! XD Caught up with this in a couple of hours (fast reader hehe). It cracks me up, it really does. I'm addicted~

永遠に咲き続ける花なんていない、すべてはいずれ枯れて朽ち果てしまう。

Currently writing:
- Lilium-related things. God save my soul.

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- Everything Else. Too many to list.

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« Reply #727 on: March 05, 2007, 03:02:59 AM »
Hi, Welcome!!! Its nice to know more people are signing up!

Down to business!
My writers block is just getting worse I have ideas but when I write I just..cant put a sentence together! I just cant explain the pictures anymore! Its not just Fiction writing either. All my reports have taken the blow too...
Ive put this all down to stress! (What stress?:The crowd says)
We'll there is a few big ones at the moment and one in particular concerns YOU! yes YOU! I might actually be on offical hiatus indefinately. Probably no more than a week as of the 20th of March. Worst case scenario 10 months. But that seems a little harsh and a 10% likely-hood of happening.
 
Ive been working on the next chapter of Doki doki for over 2 weeks now and its still raw and unfinished I hope that over this week and the next that I can ATLEAST get that to you as a small token of my appreciation to all you readers..

And yesterday was my birthday. And Today is Doki Doki's anniversary
« Last Edit: March 05, 2007, 03:07:34 AM by Mikan »

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« Reply #728 on: March 05, 2007, 03:27:37 AM »
HeY! happy B-day! had no idea at all, sorry for being late! :ONfainted:
And... It's probably your stuff but rest asure:
we can do ANYTHING to bring Mikan-sama back! :panda_love:
So... you just need to ask, and if we can, you'll get it!
[oh! the crazy things we promise to get more doki-doki!]
I needed to put al least four letters... ¬¬'

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« Reply #729 on: March 05, 2007, 04:46:08 AM »
Happy Birthing Day! You should get a puching bag or something to beat the shit out of. Hell, a stick and a wall or just kick something until you feel less stressed. It works for me.

Or if your less violent than me, just scream. :)

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« Reply #730 on: March 05, 2007, 05:36:13 AM »
Happy (late) Birthday!!  Happy Anniversary!!  Happy March!!  :tfr9a7wg:

I agree with rndmn.  Nothing gets rid of stress like kicking the shit outta something.  And if you aren't violent yet, there's always time to start.

I really hope that your worse case scenario doesn't happen.  Whatever it is, I doubt it's pleasant.

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« Reply #731 on: March 05, 2007, 06:45:20 AM »
Quote from: Mikan;322297

Ive put this all down to stress! (What stress?:The crowd says)
We'll there is a few big ones at the moment and one in particular concerns YOU! yes YOU! I might actually be on offical hiatus indefinately. Probably no more than a week as of the 20th of March. Worst case scenario 10 months. But that seems a little harsh and a 10% likely-hood of happening.
Dang...:cry:

Well as I'm sure everyone who is either a lurker, a newbie registering just to be able to comment on this wonderful story, or a faithfull follower of the Church Of Mikan (:bow: :bow: :bow: ) would agree through whatever stress you have to work out...we'll be here waiting for that next chapter!

You probably single-handedly returned the pulse and heartbeat to this place and you damn well brought me out of lurking status to timidly post my first attempt at a fic.  (which by the way...thank you ^^)  There are many stories left for you to tell and you'll always have that faithful audience in me and I'm sure most everyone else on this board!!

Until the next one (and the next, and the next!) Bonne fête Mikan et joyeux anniversaire à Doki Doki!! :heart:
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« Reply #732 on: March 08, 2007, 06:45:08 PM »
Oh! that's so cool, we have the same birthday, that's so cool...

Happy (belated) birthday :)
I hope your writers block is...er... un blocked? :D

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« Reply #733 on: March 09, 2007, 07:04:37 AM »
Its getting there! Ty!

and yeah!! I saw that your birthday is March 3rd! HAPPY BIRTHDAY!! XD
I tried to message you but it didnt work...I wonder why..

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« Reply #734 on: March 10, 2007, 07:02:56 PM »
http://www.sendspace.com/file/ycklic

The complete text copy of Dokki Dokki, chapters 1-126

Includes everything except for the recap of the Aya/Miki situation.
If Helen Keller falls in the woods and no one is around, does she make a sound?

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« Reply #735 on: March 18, 2007, 02:32:17 PM »
I was lurking around to find fanfics to read... Then I found this thread :D

I was laughing all the time while reading Doki Doki! (finish reading like a blink of light XD) Very funny fanfic! Can't wait for the continuation! *bows to Mikan-sama*

(After reading Yuuyami's Our Cursed Gift, now I am so addicted to H!P-related fanfics XD) NOOO~ XD

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« Reply #736 on: April 05, 2007, 10:19:15 AM »
Makoto spent the night wide awake. It was cold but the warmth of Konno`s body pressed against her side served sufficent. She glanced down at her friend let her mind drift at what the days of tomorrow would be like without her. It all seemed lonely.

It would be selfish to ask her to stay. But it didnt stop the want.

The clock next to her flicked over to 2am with an electric click. Makoto sighed. It would be a long night and she couldnt lie like this for every. For one, she needed a drink. Maybe a brisk walk to tire her.

She slipped out from under Asami, replacing herself with a pillow for her friend to snuggle. Asami took it with a faint mumble and fell back into her deep sleep. Makoto put a jumper and second pair of socks on before making her way to the door, stopping short a couple of feet. She looked back at the bed and her heart struggled with the next beat. How much longer can they stay like this?
She moved back to the bed, leaning over and kissing her friend slowly on the cheek before moving on to the kitchen.



Maki listened to the clock ticking steadily on the wall. Beat after beat. A constant rythme. She rolled over and pulled the covers over her head to smother out the sound. It was a stupid decision to buy that damn clock. The thick quilt served it use to keep the noise out but let Maki to hear her thoughts.

Why did she act so harshly?...

Somewhere, her insecurities answered - Because your a loser...

She shook her head, shaking the quilt down to her shoulders. Maybe it was true. But she wasnt one to leave it up to doubt, she had to find out.




`Where is it?`

`Third shelf. Next to the nutmeg (what is that stuff for anyway?...)`

Ai stood up as high as she could on the kitchen counter while holding on Risa`s hand. She was too scared to let go and her friends was the same.

`Got it!` Ai chan held the salt box high in triumph. `Lets go!`

Risa helped her friend down and together they ran as fast as girl running hand in hand can, back Ai`s room.



`Reina?` Maki taped on the girl`s door trying her best not to be too loud but at the same time just loud enough. For the longest time there was no reply. But just she thought of turning away the door opened a jar and a wonky eye appeared in the crack.

`What?` The voice was cracked. She was obviously wasnt awake at god knows what hour it is now.

Goto rubbed her hands together trying to find the best way to open. `Im sorry...`

You have to start somewhere, right? Reina opened the door a bit further letting it rest on her shoulders. She waited for something to follow but by Maki`s blank expression it seemed as though there wouldnt be.

`Come in`

She let the door open and closed it behind Maki, switching the lock back (out of habit). The room was warm and still being heated by the heater Reina had left running while she slept. Maki took her usual chair by the window. It somehow felt weird being back here, almost nostalgic, although it had only been just over a week since their quarrel.

`Aquarius?` Maki looked up to see the Reina offering her a fresh bottle. She couldnt help but smile as Reina continued. `Im hooked on the stuff`

Maki`s smile faded as she remmebered why she was her and that it wasnt just for drinks.

`Im sorry...` She repeated with only a little more to add this time. `I wanna be your friend so...`

So let`s move on from this arguement. Let`s forget before and make something new. All the implications were left hanging in the air, not needing to be said.

`No` The short word made Maki`s stomach tightend for the moment. `Im sorry...I should have said this earlier. But...Im...not too good with apologies`

Reina bit her lip and look away from the olders gaze, the rest of her words struggling to come out. It was appart of her stubborn nature.

`I was short with you. I should have taken more time and not rushed you`

She looked up into Maki`s eyes and saw that her apology was accepted but it did nothing to relieve the awkward atmosphere. Maki put her bottle on the floor and leaned over to punch her friend on the knee. Her way of saying `Its not as bad as we make it to be`.



`Too much?`

`Just a little..`

Aya looked a little taken aback.

`Is that even possible?`

Miki scratched the back of her head. Somehow this was all rather embarrassing to explain.

`Well, when it interferes with your work - yes`

The soloist nodded, at a loss for words. The bizzareness of the conversation now setting in. Too much sex...?

`But...I like having..sex with you...` She blushed, lowering her head allowing her bangs to cover it up. Miki couldnt help but grin like the luckiest girl on earth. She wrapped her arms around Matsuura`s shoulders and spoke quietly into her ear.

`I dont mean we dont ever do it again...`



Niigaki thumbed through the pages printed freshly from her Epson Ink Jet.

`What does is say?`

`I lost the page. It was somewhere in the midd- oh- here it is..Sprinkle salt in a circle starting from the north point. All those within this circle will be some kanji I cant read protected from any bodiless spirit`

Both the girls shivered at the last two words.

`So which way is north?`

Risa peered out the window at the quater moon. She remembered that from her house if she turned right the city was directly north and that the moon always set beside her house. Therefore, if she used those same baring north would be -

`That way` She pointed at the wall. Ai didnt argue as she had no idea what so ever.

`There` Takahashi clapped her hands together and admired her slightly wonky circle (its harder than it looks).

Risa sighed with relief as she took her friend`s hand and lead her inside the ametuer tent made from bed sheets. They lay down together, facing each other, their hands resting in the middle.

`Thanks` Ai kissed Risa`s nose quickly `Youre the best`




Makoto`s sock covered feet made no sound as she crossed the floor and down the hall to the kitchen. It was quiet tonight with only the occasional faint murmur. It seemed as though most were sleeping peacefully.

`Oh Yoshizawa!` Makoto exclaimed rather loudly as she entered the kitchen, startling her sempai into spilling milk all over the table.

`Oh Fu- ahhh` The puddle ran off onto Yossui`s jumper and down her leg. The cold liquid soaking through the material.

Makoto hastily snatched some paper towels, handing them over with an apology. Yossui just shook her head.

`It`s alright. You want one?` She held up the Milo and Milk. Shaking the milk a little to see if there was actually enough to offer.

`Yeah. Thanks`

Ogawa took a seat at the kitchen table. She nodded gratefully as Yossui passed her the hot drink. It wasnt as sweet as she would make it but she drank it all to absorb some of it`s warmth. When she was done she looked up to see Yossui eyeing her contently.
 
`What?`

`Cant sleep?`

She shook her head. Yossui changed her gaze to something out the window as she sighed.

`Me neither. Graduations always stress me`

Ogawa wondered silently how she knew about the graduation. Did Tsunku tell her? How long ago? She didnt bother to ask any of these questions as her mind raced on to other things.

`Yossui...` The word slipped out quietly but still audible. Followed by another rush of thoughts. `What am I gonna do now?`

Yossui looked pensive for a moment, turning back to look her friend straight in the eye. `What ever you want and what ever you need to`

Makoto just sat and thought it all over while Yossui stayed opposite. A quiet comfort.




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I hope you liked it
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« Reply #737 on: April 05, 2007, 03:40:02 PM »
*explodes*

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« Reply #738 on: April 05, 2007, 04:06:13 PM »
 :) Yossie just knows things...Horray for an update!  :lol:

At first when Ai and Risa were searching the cupboards for something, I thought, "!@#$!!! Food play(?!)" but I guess not...

Gotta get my head outta the gutter... :)

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« Reply #739 on: April 05, 2007, 04:07:52 PM »
Lol!
What?! is it the end of the freaking world or something? There you have it - a whole chapter FULL of hideous errors and some Yossui guest appearances and thats all I get? Hahahhaa.

What about the rest of you silent readers? tell me how badly this sucked! How different was it from the rest of the series!


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See Translucent White...muahahah!!!
But Food play...now there is something interesting to write about....*puts perv cap on and munchies on PTA approved perv cookie*

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