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Offline JurinaN

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Back From The Start - chapter 5 (WMatsui) 4/29/2018 [REMAKE]
« on: September 26, 2016, 10:04:12 AM »
Chapter 1
 
     Music can be heard from the studio.Inside this studio,there is one girl who dancing nonstop.Sweat can be seen running from her head,her clothes begin to get wet and pants can be heard from this girl.It seem the girl begin to feel tired but even so,she still doesn't want to stop.

      From afar,there a birl looking girl that watches her.The girl shaked her head and slowly walk to the radio and stoped it.The girl who is dancing right now suddenly stopped.

    ''Churi! why you stop the music?''ask the girl.
     
     ''Jurina,what I told you about overworking yourself?''the bird looking girl who is called Churi said to Jurina.

     ''I can't help it.There are a few step that I still can't  master''

      ''Yeah I know.Even so,you still have to rest.I don't want to see you in that condition again.Please?''Churi eyes start to tear up.

  Jurina want to protest but when she saw Churi watery eyes she can't help but to agree.Without ask more,she understand what Churi mention about.It was about her when she have to stayed at hospital for one month because of overworking.
 
      ''Ok,but I still have to change first''
 
       ''I wait here'' said Churi smiling.
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Outside
 
 The two girls begin to walk out and call for a taxi to go home.Suddenly,  ''Ah!Its Rena san''yell Churi.

       ''Where,where? Where is Rena'',ask Jurina trying hard to find the older Matsui.

      ''There at the board'',
 
Jurina look to the board that Churi is pointing and saw a poster of Rena about her new drama.

       ''Wah,it is been a long time I last saw or speak to her.Look her life is just fine.After graduation,she got more job as an actress.I am so happy for her,right Jurina?'',

 Jurina who look lost in her though recover after Churi asked her''Y-Yeah''

       ''Jurina,you okay?''ask Churi start to concern over Jurina after saw her reaction.

      ''I am ok.Look the taxi here''Jurina enter the taxi and followed by Churi.Without Churi knowing,Jurina take a glance at Rena picture and though sadly  'You life look just fine Rena chan,but me...'she sigh.


Sorry if the story is boring and if my english was bad :nervous It was my first fanfic.
« Last Edit: April 29, 2018, 01:31:13 PM by JurinaN »
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Offline LuckyMatsui

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Re: Back From The Start Chapter 1
« Reply #1 on: September 26, 2016, 11:07:45 AM »
Waiting for the next chapter Author-san :)
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Re: Back From The Start
« Reply #2 on: September 27, 2016, 08:03:33 PM »
Yeahhh more drama :luvluv1:
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Offline Haruko

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Re: Back From The Start
« Reply #3 on: September 28, 2016, 06:01:43 AM »
yea wmatsui!! yes!! saeyuki!!
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Re: Back From The Start
« Reply #4 on: September 29, 2016, 11:58:43 PM »
woo...
so interesting!
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Offline key17

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Re: Back From The Start
« Reply #5 on: October 02, 2016, 05:46:54 PM »
I miss wmatsui and want to read more story but you give me this?? Rena and other guy?? Kissing?? Whyyyyyy??   :temper: :on voodoo: :tantrum: :tantrum:
Oh well, update soon pleaseeee, i'm waiting  :whistle:  :on drink:
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Re: Back From The Start
« Reply #6 on: October 08, 2016, 02:25:02 PM »
Noooo.... JURINA!!!!
Give me more.. :OMG:
I hate Cliffhanger.. :banghead:
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Offline Minami-chan

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Re: Back From The Start
« Reply #7 on: October 15, 2016, 03:58:58 PM »
God has turned back!
The good news is that as you know what will happen, can make things even better and did before.
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Re: Back From The Start
« Reply #8 on: October 15, 2016, 07:53:55 PM »
Wow. Everything  Really is back from the start. Now Jurina need to restart again her idol life and gain her popularity, and at the same time make the right choices so she will not lose Rena.
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Offline Minami-chan

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Re: Back From The Start
« Reply #9 on: November 07, 2016, 09:02:53 PM »
Please, don't leave the story.
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Re: Back From The Start
« Reply #10 on: November 07, 2016, 09:07:10 PM »
Jurina went back in time?!?!?! O______O

Holy........guacamole.
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Re: Back From The Start
« Reply #11 on: November 09, 2016, 11:22:36 AM »
Oh jurina you have missed such a precious chance to talk to Rena-chan
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Re: Back From The Start
« Reply #12 on: November 09, 2016, 02:23:57 PM »
Actually Jurina is in advantage over all the other girls.
She already knows the choreography, knows what happened at the events and how the fans will react.
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Offline SheenC

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Re: Back From The Start
« Reply #13 on: November 10, 2016, 08:37:22 PM »
Thanks for update.

Nice jurina you lost your great chance! You know exactly how precious rena time is.
Good back to the past means jurina can fix everything right.  8) (include that kissing monster habit  :lol:)
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Re: Back From The Start
« Reply #14 on: November 10, 2016, 10:07:25 PM »
Since she knows what events will happen... does that mean she will change them or will they stay the same?

Like, would her knowing and trying to re-create certain events create a paradox and change them?
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Re: Back From The Start
« Reply #15 on: November 10, 2016, 11:02:08 PM »
Quote from: Ruka Kikuchi on November 10, 2016, 10:07:25 PM
Since she knows what events will happen... does that mean she will change them or will they stay the same?

Like, would her knowing and trying to re-create certain events create a paradox and change them?

I think the same that you
If you think about it. She can take advantage to reach higher than what has arrived. You can position yourself better, in terms of all decisions you make.
As well as being 20 years mentally will be much closer to reindeer since Rena really is 17 years old.
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Re: Back From The Start
« Reply #16 on: November 13, 2016, 05:12:50 AM »
Ckckck Rena-chan, you should admit that you're a lolicon :bingo:
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Re: Back From The Start
« Reply #17 on: November 13, 2016, 10:31:44 PM »
Thank you for continuing.
It's a good story.
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Offline Rufy SaeYuki

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Re: Back From The Start
« Reply #18 on: December 23, 2016, 08:11:42 AM »
thanks to make Sae be Yuki couple..
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