so I would be thankful if you let me know an example of which dialogue was confusing and I do hope that the character chart update is helpful, but thanks for reading! @kuro_808:
could you elaborate more on the chunking issues and I hope the chart of characters is helpful, thanks for reading as always @kuro_black29:
AKI OMG THIS IS A LONG COMMENT!!! oh you will love the principal, she is amazing and has some things up her sleeve lol
oh Acchan's character in this story is just wow you will see so much more of her bad side lol
YukiRena is a ship you might find interesting to ship because of their personalities, so wait for them to appear more
YAS, RENA-SAMA WILL BE BADDASS IN THIS!
that beanie person role is still a secret muahaha and SAYAYUI FOR LIFE but they will have some things coming up so to shake them
yes, Jurina of course has the moves
and as for that line, well, it is always better for friends and those that mean well to say things than for let's say a drama queen or someone who means bad you know, THANKS FOR A LONG COMMENT @bunny_rabbit:
yeah for Yui it is a full plate of everything all at once, it is tough but I also hope it gets better for her
oh the families are just an intricate bunch and they will have their moments that will leave you raging more than the Sakura petals ailment lol
the JuriYuri is an interesting thought, but I won't spoil what will go for them story vise
it's tough for Yui and as for Mion, you will see more from her and even her bandmates will have more screen time, no worries, you will get to know the reasoning behind all this pretty soon I hope
oh that whole family is just *shivers* so no wonder Tomochin is like that...
MUAHAHAHA I KNEW YOU WILL LIKE LE CAR SCENE
and the plot twist might be more than what you see, but I won't spoil more~
thanks for commenting!! @MisakiShishido:
I won't reply in a long reply for you because we discussed so much more live and I hope we can do thnis again haha since I am sick in bed and want company
so I thank you for commenting on this, loving this and giving me feedback, especially fixing the typos for me @LoyalFlutist:
SHACHOU, ANY COMMENT OF YOURS IS A BLESSING FROM THE SKIES, THANK YOU!!! well I din want to spoil much so I went for illegal activity lol
Tomochin brings drama into the scene lol so no surprise you thought that
and oh the beanie person, I think it might become your favorite character later on when she/he appears
you are onto something when it comes to your theory about YokoYamamoto, but I won't say more haha and yeah their relationship IS illegal
we will definitely get more insights into the parents and correlations between the families.
thanks for commenting and reading my work!