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"Chapter 1"

Nanao Dracula, the son of the infamous Vlad the Impaler is waiting patiently for his servant to arrive. It has been a week after he sent off Dimitri to get the girl that will save him from the imperfection of his world.

A man barge into his room, he was badly injured on his right arm. The prince stood up on his chair and walk to his servant.

"Where is the girl?"

Dimitri bowed his head and fell on his knees. He didn't even bare to look at his Majesty's eyes.

"She was locked up on her room. His Highness saw me and had my right arm almost mutilated."

Nanao clenched his fist, knot forms on his forehead, his eyes turn into red and fangs begins to appear.

“I will get you, Laura.”

Sakura giggled as she writes her new story about Nanao the son of Vlad the Impaler, which was a fictional character that she made up, who fell in love with the King’s daughter of their rival Kingdom. She’s already done with the first few chapters, it’s been a week after she finishes her 1st story, about a werewolf boy, Jun the protagonist, who fell in love with the girl named Cherry, a human. You already know what happened. The mother forbids his son to never fall in love with a human because they will see them as monsters and kill their kind. Son didn’t listen and found this cute girl and fell in love. They promised to be together. The revelation of the forbidden love. Humans vs. Werewolves. The two lovers stopped the fight between their kind. The fighting has been stopped, but Cherry’s father didn’t like the idea of her daughter to be with a filthy werewolf. Cherry’s family leaves town to live somewhere far. The end. Sakura’s choices of stories don’t have a happy ending, she likes the pain brought by her stories. Sadomasochist? Kind of.

“How was your exam?” Sakura’s mother asked.

“Hmmm... It’s okay.”

“You sure?” Sakura’s father asked while reading his newspaper.

“Yup, I’m sure. Oh! I’m done with my food now. Thanks Mom.” She stood up and kissed her mother and father on the cheeks.

The sound of an old typewriter can be heard in Sakura’s room. The same typewriter that her father bought for her 11th birthday. Since she was a child, her dream is to have a typewriter where she writes her stories like a real Writer and she was very delightful when she got it.

Sakura stopped typing, closed her eyes and thinks of the next scene in her ongoing story. After a few minutes, no ideas came up, she stood up and decided to lay down on her bed for a quick nap.

Dreamland, Sakura is now on her dreamland where all her created characters came to life, surrounding her and waving at her. Her eyes roamed around and all of them are there, no single one left, Sakura can’t help to smile, then suddenly a fluffy hand takes Sakura’s hand, it was Fifi the fluffy bear. Fifi was created by the 5-year-old Sakura. The bear was dragging her to sit on the fluffy pink sofa, facing her old typewriter. Click. Her old typewriter just typed on its own, making Sakura screeched. The blue sky was painted gray, a strong wind came which makes Sakura squints her eyes. She heard her fictional characters shouting and clapping as if their idols were there. After a few minutes, the strong wind stopped and the sun came up. Sakura opened her eyes again and saw two guys standing in front of her. One was dressed up somewhat like a Disney prince, for except the color of his clothes is dark red. Sakura also noticed that this guy seems pale and his eyes glowing red. Her eyes were shifted to the other guy, who dressed ordinary, he’s wearing white long sleeves and black pants and his eyes was covered by his bangs. Sakura just stared them with confusion as they were smiling brightly.

“Finally, I have found you……. Laura/Cherry!” They said in unison.

“Eeeeeeeeh?” that’s all Sakura said.


So here I am again, wasting your precious time. Sorry if there are Grammartical errors, I'm not really good at english soooo.. Don't hate me. I don't know when will I update again, but I promise you. Yes YOU! I will not drop this story.

Oh btw, this is a mini series. Don't know how many chapters, but yeah. See yah~ on the next update

Thank you for reading  :theking
« Last Edit: October 26, 2017, 10:19:03 PM by sophcaro »
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Re: The Impaler vs. Okami (SakuNaa/JuriSaku)
« Reply #1 on: July 09, 2017, 02:35:10 PM »

Vampire Nana and werewolf Jurina...

Oooh~ now Sakura is dreaming of being in the stories she wrote.

Very interesting~ ^w^)d

Can't wait to see more!

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Re: The Impaler vs. Okami (SakuNaa/JuriSaku)
« Reply #2 on: July 09, 2017, 03:58:13 PM »
okay i move on from wmatsui :( BUT NOW LETS SHIP JURISAKU

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Re: The Impaler vs. Okami (SakuNaa/JuriSaku)
« Reply #3 on: July 10, 2017, 03:33:18 AM »
JuriSakuNaa~~  :heart: :heart: :heart:
Look at what these showrooms are making shippers do. Hahaha.
Looking forward to the next chapters~ Ganbarou~
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Re: The Impaler vs. Okami (SakuNaa/JuriSaku)
« Reply #4 on: July 10, 2017, 01:26:51 PM »
woaah a fanfic with my akb's oshimen as main chara (okada nana) nanao drakula eh, great seems i'll have another great fanfic on my reading list  :) :thumbsup

p.s : i originally am yuunaa shippers but i think sakunaa is not bad hahaha

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Re: The Impaler vs. Okami - chapter 2 (SakuNaa/JuriSaku)
« Reply #5 on: March 29, 2018, 04:20:28 PM »
"Chapter 2"

It’s been 3 months after Sakura’s weird dream. While staring at a daze, her best friend Haruppi came and sat beside her and snapped her back to reality.

“Hey Haruppi! What’s up?”

“Have you heard? There are 2 transfer students coming today?”

“Nope and I don’t care.”

Haruppi watched as her best friend fetched her notebook on her bag.

“Are you still working on that Werewolf boy’s story? Still can’t over about that Korean Movie?”

Sakura stopped writing and gave Haruppi a weird look.

“Haven’t I told you? I’m done wri-“

Sakura stopped as they heard the bell rang, which means that their first class is starting. Mr. Yokoyama, their homeroom/English teacher came.

“Good morning class!!!”

“Good morning sensei!” class said in chorus.

“I bet you guys heard that we have new students coming. So, I want you guys to be good to them.” Mr. Yokoyama roamed his eyes.

As Mr. Yokoyama signed the new students to come inside, Sakura is still busy writing her story. New students came and all the girls shrieked and all boys were disappointed.

“Kindly introduce yourselves.”

“Good morning! I’m Okada Nanao, nice to meet you all” Tall, thin, pale and has bags under his dark brown eyes, but a total head turner.

“Good morning! I’m Matsui Jun.” Jun is taller than Nanao, has piercing eyes and has a buff bod. Contrasting to Nanao’s clean cut hair, Jun has a long hair and tied in a bun. What an ikemen indeed.

After hearing the new student’s names, Sakura immediately raised her head.

“Oh, my Gosh! This can’t be true”

“There are vacant seats behind Ms. Miyawaki, you can take those.”

“Hai!” said the two.

As they walk to their respective seats, their eyes are staring directly at Sakura. The two formed a very cute smile, making Sakura lower her head and stares back at her notebook. Haruppi witnessed as the newcomers smile directly at Sakura.

“I don’t care huh? Very sneaky of you Sakura” Haruppi thought and smiles mischievously.

“Ok class guys! Let’s start with the lesson, our lesson for today’s is Pronouns. Any ideas?” Mr. Yokoyama asked.


A hand was raised and it belongs to Matsui Jun.

“Yes Matsui-kun?”

“Pronoun is a word that replaces a noun in a sentence.”

“Very good, Matsui-kun. Pronoun is a word that can function by itself as a noun phrase and that refers either to the participants in the discourse or to someone or something mentioned elsewhere in the discourse. Can anyone give me an example?”

Another hand was raised, which belongs to Nanao.

“I like Sakura.”

Murmurs can be heard as Nanao blurt out his feeling towards Sakura.

“Ok kids! Settle down!” Mr. Yokoyama slams his hands on the table to catch the attention of his students.

“Mr. Okada, your very brave to confess right now, but please pay attention to the topic. Anyways, let’s proceed. Any other example?”

“I love Sakura and I know that the feelings are mutual” Jun bravely declares.

Loud cheers were heard as the lad declares his feelings towards our heroine.

“What should I do with these kids?” thought by Mr. Yokoyama as he facepalmed himself.

“Class dismissed, and don’t forget your assignments. See you tomorrow” Mr. Yokoyama said.

“Thank you, sensei” shouted by the students.

As Yokoyama-sensei walks out, horde of girls flocks to Jun and Nanao, however, both lads had their eyes and ears focused on their prey, Sakura.

“Hey! You’re keeping a secret from me.” Haruppi said.

“Huh?” Sakura looking puzzled.

“Don’t “Huh” me. You know the transferees”

“No. I don’t” Sakura lower her head and starts to write.

“Sakura, we’ve been together, like what? Since we were kids. Don’t dare to have a secret from me.” Annoyed Haruppi said.

“Ok! Ok!” Sakura stopped writing and faced Haruppi.

“They are my created characters.”

“HAHA. Very funny, Sakura.”

“See? You don’t believe me.” Sakura started to write again but Haruppi snatched her notebook.

“Ok! I believe you. So, what’s with them?”

“I don’t know.”

“How are you, My princess?” Nanao said as he cuts in to the two girls conversation and made Sakura confusingly stares at him.

“My deepest apologies, it took me so long to be here with you. Don’t worry I will never leave your side, my love.” Nanao reaches Sakura’s face and caresses it.

Sakura and Haruppi jolted for the sudden action of Nanao.

“Get your filthy hands off my Cherry, you bloodsucking monster.” Jun said as his eyes are piercing through Nanao’s.

“What did you say you mutt? How dare you to insult a royal vamp-” Jun didn’t let him finish and grabs him by his neck


Everyone in the class stops and focused on the two lads, and it seems that no one dares to intervene.

“Bring it on! If I win, don’t every get near to Cherry.”

“Sure. Let’s start this and get ready to lose, you mutt.”



Ruka Kikuchi: Thank you for reading and finding this interesting.

sword_chen: Good for you(?) moving on with WMatsui. However, I'm still here, missing my ultimate pairing. Anyway, thank you for reading.

shortcut48: Hehehe, if you didn't mentioned me about that showroom, I wouldn't write this ff, right? Thanks bro. :rock:

FZA02: Oh! Thank you, I'm so flattered. Btw, Okada Nana is one of my akb oshimen. Again, thank you for reading.

Ayo! It's been 8 months since I posted the first chapter. Sorry, it took me so long to post the 2nd chap. I was so busy and lazy to post it tbh. Thank you guys for wasting your time reading my ff.

Thank you for reading  :theking
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Re: The Impaler vs. Okami - chapter 1 (SakuNaa/JuriSaku) 9/07/2017
« Reply #6 on: March 30, 2018, 03:19:59 PM »
ohoho, vampire vs werewolf, thought in real life jun(jurina) might be win but i put my bet on nanao, somehow the way nao talks to sakura feels real, (i'm sure naachan herself is actually romantic person)

i'll be waiting for the next chapters ganbarreee

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Re: The Impaler vs. Okami - chapter 1 (SakuNaa/JuriSaku) 9/07/2017
« Reply #7 on: April 01, 2018, 05:38:27 PM »
Vampires and Werewolves again?

*grabs Witch Hunter Hat and guns*



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Re: The Impaler vs. Okami - chapter 1 (SakuNaa/JuriSaku) 9/07/2017
« Reply #8 on: April 02, 2018, 01:05:44 AM »
*gasp* Her characters appeared in the real world?! How is that possible?! O.O

Oooooh this will be an interesting love triangle; certainly better than Twilight! lol

But whose team... Team Nanao Dracula or Team wolf J... Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm SO HARD TO CHOOSE!!!! DX

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