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« Reply #140 on: September 08, 2006, 02:35:04 PM »
I miss them too. :cry: Such a cute chapter, it was really sweet. I've become emotionally hooked onto this fanfic...I swear one day I'm going to go to school half crying because of something in here. XD
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« Reply #141 on: September 08, 2006, 05:06:41 PM »
awwww how sad... i miss them both too i nv knew how much i miss them until they left... i remember watching mokoto's grad hello morning and thinking... where's konno??

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« Reply #142 on: September 08, 2006, 10:34:02 PM »
I miss them so much! Its not gonna be the same without them. But atleast we'll still have them in fanfics

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« Reply #143 on: September 09, 2006, 12:52:12 AM »
:cry::cry::cry::cry::cry::cry: I miss thEEMMMMMMMM!!! WAAAHHHHH!!!!

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« Reply #144 on: September 10, 2006, 09:06:58 AM »
Chapter 25


[Day After Theme Park Outing]

“Anyone remember what day it is?”

Sayumi bounded happily over to the others who were all stretched out in various positions in the members’ lounge area.

“Ermmm, 10 days to Asami-chan’s graduation?”

Makoto answered thoughtfully. Her head was moving up and down slowly in accordance to the rhythmic breathing of Konno whose stomach she was lying on.

“No.”

“It’s the day Nintendo’s latest game console launches?”

Ai offered helpfully. She remembered circling the date on her planner so she wouldn’t forget to place an order for it.

The daggers Sayumi shot from her eyes told her otherwise. Chuckling, Risa pressed the glass of orange juice she was holding to Ai so she could advert her eyes from the seething girl.

“Oh I know!”

Reina shouted eagerly and retrieved her legs from hanging over Risa’s to get into a kneeing position on the couch.

“It’s Yakiniku day at that restaurant we go to.”

NO! It’s my birthday!”

Sayumi screamed in such a high-pitched tone that everyone had to rush and cover their ears before their poor eardrums sustained permanent damage.

“Ahhh it’s Shige-san’s birthday.”

Konno was the first to realize. Feeling apologetic for having forgotten the cute girl’s birthday, she thought of how to make amends.

“Mako-chan and I are going to the karaoke later. Why don’t you join us?”

“No thanks. I wouldn’t want to ruin your date with Mako-chan.”

“We could go have Yakiniku?”

“Or we could go get you that console. It has awesome functions.”

Nothing the girls said could cheer Sayumi up. She was now extremely depressed that everyone had forgotten her birthday.

Risa who had been keeping quiet all this time finally spoke up.

“Why don’t you accompany her Kamei?”

Nodding hard at Sayumi, Eri pinched her nose lovingly.

“I’ll celebrate with you.”

Not saying a word, Sayumi with her head hanging low, let Eri wrap her arms around her shoulders and lead her back to their rooms.

“You think the plan worked?”

“Fabulously.”

Reina winked and grinned widely. Everything was going according to plan.

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Wordsworth: Thanks. I kinda liked how the last chapter went too.

ChrNo: YAY rabbit likes me, USACHAN PEACE!! :P

Saikami: I really gotta thank you for 'feeling' this fic like you do. I'm so touched :cry:

Stefy: Exactly! It will never be the same again not seeing how much KonKon loves her food and Makoto acting hilarious :(

KrazyForKamei: Just cuz of what you said I’ll try to keep them alive in my fic

rndmnwierd: Let’s bawl together, WAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH :cry: :cry: :cry:
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« Reply #145 on: September 10, 2006, 09:51:24 AM »
Poor Sayu. How could they forget? :9bbc76d5:

She doesn't know that she's in for a big surprise. Nice acting by the girls though. Wonder what they have in store for her.

But I'm pretty sure that getting a kiss from Eri or even by just spending the day with her could be one the best presents Sayu could ever get. :baa60776:

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« Reply #146 on: September 10, 2006, 12:27:51 PM »
aah...i kinda know what sayu feels lol...almost everyone forgot my bday this year lol even my family...only 3 great friends sent me a phone msg haha, and one of them 2 months later XD...

back to the fic,

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“Ahhh it’s Shige-san’s birthday.”
“Mako-chan and I are going to the karaoke later. Why don’t you join us?”

“No thanks. I wouldn’t want to ruin your date with Mako-chan.”

“We could go have Yakiniku?”

“Or we could go get you that console. It has awesome functions.”


that made me laugh so hard....

wonder what will be the surprise :D

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« Reply #147 on: September 10, 2006, 04:10:26 PM »
I'm going to have to be boring and just say that this is a great read.

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« Reply #148 on: September 10, 2006, 06:28:02 PM »
Poor Sayyuuu but yay a little slice of kameshige ^_^. I hope more will be in the next chapter since is Sayu's birthday and all. Great chapter

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« Reply #149 on: September 10, 2006, 06:36:51 PM »
Aww, they must have something planned for her. ^__^ I felt bad for Sayu, but then I realized something must be up! I'm so excited for the next chapter! :D :heart::heart: And I love how they all suggested something that they thought was going on that day, like Ai-chan and the game system. XD I laughed so hard! Oh, and I'm glad my emotions towards this fic have touched you, it's really a great fic. Keep it up! :D
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« Reply #150 on: September 10, 2006, 07:37:35 PM »
Oooo, set ups are fun! Can't wait.

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« Reply #151 on: September 11, 2006, 07:59:22 AM »
Another latecomer here... wow, this fic is highly addictive, read up to now in one sitting. Really interested to see what happens next, keep up the great work :).

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« Reply #152 on: September 15, 2006, 04:53:48 PM »
Chapter 26


Everyone was talking in hush tones and Konno looked up at Makoto who was meddling with the light switch.

“I hope Shige-san wasn’t too upset by our little gag earlier.”

“She’ll be fine. I bet she’ll be really happy when she finds out we had everything planned”

The group had crowded together in one of the spare rooms of the apartment block, which was already decorated with bright streamers and colored paper over the past few days.

Now armed with balloons, light sticks, poppers and confetti, they lay in wait for the crucial moment.

Finally hearing footsteps approaching, everyone shushed up and rushed to huddle at their respective hiding places.

When the doorknob turned with a click and Eri pushed the door open, everyone jumped out and yelled at the top of their voices.

SURPRISE!!!

“Ai-chan, Gaki-san, Reina. Kon-chan and Mako-chan….”

Tears had formed in Sayumi’s eyes when she realized what was going on. All of the gokkies and rokkies had gathered together to create this surprise birthday party just for her.

“I’m so….touched. Thank you all…. so much.”

Running up to everyone, Sayumi grabbed anyone she could and enveloped them in a great big bear hug.

“Group hug!”

Eri shouted loudly and embraced Sayumi from behind completing the inter generation hug.

Between squeezes and kisses, tears and laughter, Sayumi stated in the most determined voice she could muster.

“This isn’t just a birthday party for me. It’s a party to celebrate us coming to know each other. It’s also a celebration to cheer on Kon-chan and Mako-chan for their approaching graduations.”

“Wow Sayu, that’s so… mature and sweet.”

Risa patted Sayumi’s head in a kindly gesture. She had done it once on Eri when she had been one of the fastest runners and won the track event at the Sports Festival and another time on Reina when she got off a roller coaster ride in a wreck on Scream CM.

Now it was the remaining rokkie’s turn to be recognized by it.

“Stop hitting on my Sayu will you.”

Eri pulled Sayumi closer to herself, all of a sudden being rather possessive.

“Ah someone is jealous.”

Konno put her hand to her mouth and tried to cover a wide grin that had appeared on her face.

“Oh come on Eririn, it would be nice to share.”

Ai nudged Eri in the ribs and placed a hand on Sayumi’s arm suggestively.

“Yep, sharing is caring you know.”

Risa couldn’t help but ssexy beast. It was rare of Ai to tease anyone ever. So for that reason alone she wouldn’t let slip the chance of chorusing with Ai.  



“Besides, we shared.”

Reina gestured to the three people involved in the ‘Ferris wheel escapades’ and struck a winking pose just for the heck of it.

“Not today. It’s Sayu’s special day so I’m not sharing her with anyone.”

Eri declared with her infamous slightly puffed up cheeks that she always did on the World Children’s Game segment.



Then tiptoeing slightly to reach the taller girl, Eri planted her own pouty lips onto Sayumi’s.

The world seemed to stop spinning as the group watched the duo in slience, lost in their own world. For Sayumi, this was the best birthday present she could ever receive - Kamei Eri.


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wordsworth: Birthday kiss from Eri! Sayu must be in 7th heaven :lol:

ChrNo: I got that before too. But in the end its alright as long you had a great day in the end right? :D

Erink: Thank you :)

KrazyForkamei: Definitely KameiShige for this special day :P

Saikami: It’s the down before the up and boy is it gonna be a real up and up XD

Rndmnwierd: Yes they’re fun aren’t they, I love set-ups too :heart:

TydusArandor: Glad you liked this. Do continue reading  :)
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« Reply #153 on: September 15, 2006, 06:34:24 PM »
So Sayu did get the best gift after all. :panda_kiss: She must be very, very happy. :panda_love:

But to get it in front of the other go/rokkies? Sharing is caring anyway. :)

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« Reply #154 on: September 15, 2006, 07:53:56 PM »
Kameshige :heart: that was really cute

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« Reply #155 on: September 15, 2006, 08:23:14 PM »
AH!! KAWAII!!! Lol at the sharing.

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« Reply #156 on: September 15, 2006, 09:17:18 PM »
Haha, sharing IS caring! XD I love it, very cute. :3
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« Reply #157 on: September 17, 2006, 06:10:24 PM »
Chapter 27


“Ahem!”

Makoto cleared her throat loudly and tapped her foot to get everyone’s undivided attention. Reluctantly, KameiShige broke their kiss and turned to face their senior.

“Well since the couple here already started demonstrating what we can do, let’s all have some fun tonight!”

Shouting at the top of her lungs in her usual genki voice, Makoto jumped animatedly around the others super hyped about the upcoming ‘fun night’.

“Wait wait, before we all lose ourselves, which I believe will happen soon enough, lets take a group photo.”

Whipping out the bulky Polaroid camera she had brought along, Risa ordered everybody to get together under the colorful streamers hanging from the ceiling.

“You’re still using that ancient thing?”

Reina poked at the camera in Gaki’s hands and didn’t bother to hide her bemused expression.

“Hey it works perfectly well. And it’s instant.”

Risa protested making a monkey face which included sticking her tongue out at Reina. Then pushing her towards the rest who had already gathered together, Risa rested the camera on a nearby table and set it to timer mode.

As the timer light on the camera started to flash a couple of times, Risa had an unexpected flash of  inspiration.

“Lets yell something other than boring old cheese.”

“Great idea!”

“Cool!”

With everyone for the idea, Risa told them her plan excitedly. When the final flash on the camera went off, the group of seven people was caught forever in a comical and sentimental picture that carried great memories.



[Risa’s Room Later That Night]

It was well into the wee hours of the morning when the gang split up and went back to rest in their respective rooms. Of course not everyone went back alone. But Risa did and left Ai and Reina to enjoy themselves with whatever they had planned next.

After taking a refreshing shower and with her hair almost completely dry, Risa lay lazily on her bed. Stroking the Polaroid photo with her forefinger lovingly, she couldn’t help but grin upon seeing the faces of her friends in the picture.

The gokkies were standing at the back with Makoto and Asami in the center. Ai was beside Asami while Risa was beside Makoto. Of course they all had their arms around each other’s shoulders.

The three younger girls were squatted in front of the group and Sayumi had her arms tightly wrapped around Eri’s waist while Reina was trying her hardest to squeeze in between them.

However the most important point of the photo was the bright beaming smile each girl wore on her face.

Picking up a yellow glitter pen sticking in the pen holder of her desk, Risa scribbled across the photo in her nicest handwriting what they had yelled out earlier.

“The lines are blurred!” For this was two generations that really didn’t feel awkward together despite the difference in ages and seniority.



Pulling open the drawer of her bedside table, Risa took out the leather bound book she kept inside. Turning to the page after her last entry, she started to write her newest entry.

Date: July 14th 2006      
Weather: Cool and cloudy
Feelings: Happy yet sad

Dear diary…

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wordsworth: Sayumi doesn't mind returning Eri's kiss no matter where they are XD  

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rndmnwierd: Who is/ are kawaii? Me included? :P

Saikami: Remember these words. They come in handy from time to time ;)
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« Reply #158 on: September 17, 2006, 07:03:35 PM »
Sure you're cute too!

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Eh? Cuz she isn't with Ai and Reina?

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« Reply #159 on: September 17, 2006, 07:37:25 PM »
my thoughts exactly....
"Feelings: Happy yet sad" cus' she can't get Ai all to herself?

“The lines are blurred!” yay~ love that part, so thats what they said...

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