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« Reply #180 on: September 24, 2006, 03:01:30 PM »
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“Sorry about it but I needed some er…. lessons on how to…. make Eri happy.”
:o And this is going to start a chain reaction? O_O? Can't wait to find out! (oh, and I'm not sick anymore :heart:)
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« Reply #181 on: September 24, 2006, 05:20:48 PM »
*reads Reina's lovey-dovey part*

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!

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« Reply #182 on: September 24, 2006, 06:26:09 PM »
So adorible! Ai x Reina <33333333333

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« Reply #183 on: September 24, 2006, 08:08:32 PM »
Lol! Lessons to "make Eri happy"...if that means what I think its means this is going to very amusing. And Reina's in *in sing song voice* lo0o0o0ove...thats so cute.

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« Reply #184 on: September 25, 2006, 12:07:13 AM »
hehe are you reading my mind or something? I swear I have an unposted/unfinished story about Eri and Sayu inside a closet together. XD

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« Reply #185 on: September 25, 2006, 06:37:06 AM »
I wonder what happened inside the dark closet... :)

Lessons to make Eri happy? Tell her that you want to challenge her for longest time not blinking, then let her win XD

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« Reply #186 on: September 25, 2006, 02:33:55 PM »
:o I can't wait. And the threesome down to two? Or are they just sharing?

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« Reply #187 on: September 30, 2006, 10:33:39 AM »
Chapter 30


It was late at night and normally this part of the apartment block would be silent but tonight was different. The lights to one of the dance studios were on and inside practicing were two members from the popular girl group Morning Musume.



[Dance Studio]

Almost everyone had gone off after the practice three hours ago leaving Ai and Risa behind. This was the consequence of Risa being ordered sternly by the dance instructor to polish up her routine before practice the next day. Bidding Reina goodbye earlier, Ai had firmly decided to keep Risa company while she finished up.

“You alright Gaki? You seem a little out of it.”

Walking over to Risa who was packing up her stuff into the bag lying on the floor, Ai watched with concern at the girl who had blood-shot eyes and looked pretty tired.

“I’m fine. I think I need the restroom though.”

Risa avoided Ai’s eyes and made up an excuse to leave the studio. She needed to escape to the security of someplace secluded before she lost it.

“Sure, I’ll wait for you.”

Ai took Risa’s bag out of her hands as soon as she stood up and slung it over her right shoulder.

“I’ll be back in a bit.”

Giving Ai a small smile, Risa walked out of the studio towards the restroom that was just nearby.

With Risa gone, Ai’s mind drifted off to the events at the rehearsal earlier. Deep in thought as she was doing so, Ai was certain something was up with Risa as she kept missing steps the whole time.

She was worried that the instructor would point her out to give her a piece of her mind. And unfortunately that did happen.

As the minutes on the large mental clock in the studio ticked by, Risa still wasn’t back and the older girl began to get worried. Putting their things down onto the floor, she set out to find the youngest gokkie.



[By the Pool]

“Put your hand here. No…. here!”

Reina threw up her hands in exasperation. Tutoring Sayumi was like trying to teach a cow to do tricks. If that was even possible. Now she wondered how Ai could have accomplished getting Sayumi to understand their confusing dance steps so many times before.

A sense of newfound admiration filled her up for the girl she already adored as she compared flawless Ai to the clumsy girl lying next to her.

“My hand is here. Wait…. where’s here again?”

Sayumi slid her hand slowly down Reina’s thigh trying to find that specific spot that would get Eri excited. According to Reina, it was a surefire method and worked every single time.

“Not there, HERE!!”

Grabbing Sayumi’s hand roughly, Reina slapped it down onto her own thigh a little more forcefully than she had planned. It stinged a little but it couldn’t be helped with the irritation that was growing with every second that passed.

“With your ability to follow instructions, I really wonder if you can operate machinery.”

Trying extremely hard to not yell at Sayumi took every ounce of Reina’s patience. They have been at it for about an hour and Sayumi didn’t look close to mastering the concept at all. Desperate to get the lesson over, Reina thought of a new idea that might hopefully do the trick.

“Let’s try to get into the mood here. Maybe then it’ll work.”

“Okay. So what do we do?”

“We strip.”

“If that’s what I have to do to learn this, so be it.”

Undoing the buttons on her outer coat, Sayumi paused a while and looked up at Reina to mutter something before going back to the rest of her buttons.

“You know, I can work a hairdryer just fine.”


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ChrNo: So many emotion icons in ya post. For some reason it makes me really happy :lol:

Saikami: YAY!! Three cheers to not being sick anymore :)

JFC: Isn't Reina in love just so cute :heart:  

Yuuyami: Ai x Reina is adorable. What about Ai and Gaki? They are cute too XD

KrazyForKamei: I think you are one of the BIGGEST Kamei fan around. What am I talking about? You are KrazyForKamei :P

DO Me DO Me: Well KameiShige is hard to resist. I wanna read more of them from you. I know you'll make it good :P  

wordsworth: MUAHAHAHAHHA that's a good one. Can anyone actually beat Eri at not blinking :lol:

rndmnwierd: I don't know if you call that sharing? Do you XD
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« Reply #188 on: September 30, 2006, 03:02:39 PM »
Yes, everything is adorible XD~! Wondering what's on Mame's mind though ; ; But the Reina and Sayu tutorage is a good relief of comedy :] ~!

(squeeage for first post of this chapter)

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« Reply #189 on: September 30, 2006, 03:38:07 PM »
haha now reina and sayu? omg if eri or ai finds out....... DRAMA hmm maybe eri or ai will find out.......

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« Reply #190 on: September 30, 2006, 04:27:18 PM »
Oh no, what happened to Gaki-san.:cry:

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Tutoring Sayumi was like trying to teach a cow to do tricks.If that was even possible.


That's harsh. but it's possible.Eri thaught her some dance moves right. Which means Eri is indeed from another world :P

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« Reply #191 on: September 30, 2006, 06:02:22 PM »
Yes I am proud to say Im one of the biggest Kamei fans! ^_^ *waves the "JOIN THE EVERLASTING ETERNAL ERI EMPIRE IMMIDIATELY" flag*

And great chapter! I understand Reina's frustration...Sayu is a little slow at times XD...I wonder wuts wrong with Risa though...now I have something to ponder on...*thinks*

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« Reply #192 on: September 30, 2006, 10:08:44 PM »
Poor Gaki, she's not going to go all repressed suicide bombing is she? Have you seen that movie yet?

Lol @ Reina and Sayu.

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« Reply #193 on: October 01, 2006, 10:40:43 AM »
Awww gaki all sad made me a little sad too :(  i think ai is making risa sad again :cry: and now i'm afraid that the one to find Sayu and Reina will be gaki !

anyways great chap! (kameshige:heart: :heart: )

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« Reply #194 on: October 01, 2006, 11:04:59 AM »
Aaah, haven't visited for a while, glad I did today. The latest chapter was... interesting on many levels. Somehow, when I start reading, I can't seem to pull my eyes away from this. Seriously, last time I was reading while doing some work but I ended up having to read it all before actually going back to my work.. :evil: The Reina and Sayu thing was amusing,that's just Sayu isn't it :D Anyways, I hope Risa will be okay very soon, Risa being sad makes me sad too :(


But if you must, the sadness may go on a little longer >_<

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« Reply #195 on: October 01, 2006, 02:08:07 PM »
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[By the Pool]

why a pool ? what pool ? Swimming pool ? Pool table ? Billard-table ?? XD

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“My hand is here. Wait…. where’s here again?”


:ROTFLMAO: :ROTFLMAO: :ROTFLMAO: :ROTFLMAO: :ROTFLMAO:

at first i really didn't know what was the "make Eri happy" stuff and what Reina was trying to teach her untill i read
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Sayumi slid her hand slowly down Reina’s thigh trying to find that specific spot that would get Eri excited


hum...XD


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“Let’s try to get into the mood here. Maybe then it’ll work.”

“Okay. So what do we do?”

“We strip.


i was like WHAT ? in a public place ? are they crazy ? XD
even if "It was late at night "...omg XD XD XD

why is Risa sad ? :cry:

nice chapter, i like how you put sad+fun :)  


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it's just that sometimes, i really don't know what to say and emoticons really show what i want to express. i'm happy if you were happy about it :bounce:

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« Reply #196 on: October 09, 2006, 02:57:17 AM »
Chapter 31


Standing at the entrance of the isolated washroom, Ai stared down at the walkway that led to the cubicles. For some reason it seemed never ending and awfully dark.

Perhaps it was because of the single light that was flickering in a rhythmic manner, or maybe it was due to the shadows that ran silently along the wall.

“I really shouldn’t be here.”

A part of Ai told her to run for it but yet another component of her mind reminded her that she couldn’t leave without finding Risa first. Taking a deep breath, Ai took careful steps down the walkway and reached out her hand to push at the door of the first cubicle.

The door swung open slowly with a soft creaking sound raising the hairs on Ai’s arm.  For a second she imagined herself bolting for the exit and was surprised that her hands and legs had continued moving on to the next cubicle.

The second, third and fourth cubicles didn’t include Risa either and Ai was beginning to think she had somehow missed the girl when she came out in search of her.

Before she had the chance to push open the door of the last cubicle, Ai heard a soft wailing like sound coming from behind it. Scared out of her wits, she almost screamed like crazy until she recognized the owner of that voice. Risa?



[In the Bushes]

“I’m being invaded by bugs. Must we really do it here?”

Rubbing at her arms, Reina grumbled at Sayumi loudly. They were hidden in some bushes near the swimming pool as Sayumi tried her darnest to master the ‘happy art’.

Pleeeeeeeeeeease Reina. We can’t do it by the pool. What if someone sees us.”

With her husky voice and huge doleful eyes, Sayumi tried working her kawaii charms on Reina to get her to remain concealed within the prickly shrubbery.  

“You really mean what if Eri sees us.”

As lousy a mood as she was in before, Reina couldn’t help but take a dig at Sayumi. She really does like her fellow rokkies even if she appears harsh at times. And seeing how much effort Sayumi was putting in for Eri’s sake, Reina actually felt a little respect for the girl.



“You’re getting better. So stripping was a good idea after all. Or are you really just a little taken by me?”

It was meant to be another poke at Sayumi but the way Shige-san recoiled and looked away, told the young yankee that her remark struck closer to home than she had intended.



[Toilet Cubicle]

“Risa what’s wrong?”

Kneeling down next to Risa who was crouching in a corner of the small cubicle, Ai stroked her head gently to try and get the sobbing girl to talk.

“Ai-chan….”

Was all Risa said before continuing to cry once more. It took all of Ai’s willpower to not cry along with Risa when she saw the tears streaming down her cheeks. Hugging her close and taking her snuggly into her arms, Ai rested her chin on Risa’s head.

“You know you can tell me anything right? I’m always here.”

They remained in that position for some time until Risa calmed down enough to talk about what was troubling her.  

“I was so stupid for even thinking that someone like me will able to fit in a group as good as Morning Musume. I was never popular and not really needed. Maybe I should leave with Mako-chin and KonKon.”

Pulling the hands holding her away, Risa leaned back against the cold walls and looked towards the cubicle door that was left ajar by Ai.

“Why do you say stuff like that?”


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Yuuyami: Yippee, adorable is good *thumbs up* :P

stefy: Definitely more drama will be on the way if I can help it XD

wordsworth: Its actually not so much of Sayu being a lousy pupil than Reina being an impatient tutor :D

KrazyForKamei: Have you guessed what Risa is upset about yet :)

rndmnwierd: There are a few repressed bombing shows. Which one do you mean? But no I don’t think Gaki-san is that extreme XD

sukoshi: Ai-chan isn’t the mastermind here but I shan’t comment on your 2nd remark yet :P

TydusArandor: Welcome back! I kinda like the sad parts too :(

ChrNo: It’s a swimming pool. 2 chapters ago in 29, Sayumi went to ask Reina for help when she was having a swim in the pool ;)
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« Reply #197 on: October 09, 2006, 03:05:28 AM »
NOOOO!! Risa can't leave Morning Musume!!! :cry:  this is so touching...
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« Reply #198 on: October 09, 2006, 03:22:21 AM »
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ChrNo: It’s a swimming pool. 2 chapters ago in 29, Sayumi went to ask Reina for help when she was having a swim in the pool ;)

aaaah...exact...sorry i forgot that...

cubicle...you actually wrote 8 times this word XD i don't know why i count it...oh well i found that word funny XD sorry...

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[In the Bushes]

“I’m being invaded by bugs. Must we really do it here?”

:lmao:  i hate bugs, so that makes me hate bushes and flowers hahaha...so hard for me to eventually offer some...you make them do it,whatever it is, in some weird places huh XD

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Pleeeeeeeeeeease Reina. We can’t do it by the pool. What if someone sees us.”

what a responsible thought XD

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With her husky voice and huge doleful eyes, Sayumi tried working her kawaii charms on Reina to get her to remain concealed within the prickly shrubbery.

:ROTFLMAO:
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“You really mean what if Eri sees us.”
i havn't even thought about that one XD

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Or are you really just a little taken by me?”
what a girl hahahaha

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It was meant to be another poke at Sayumi but the way Shige-san recoiled and looked away, told the young yankee that her remark struck closer to home than she had intended.

:ROTFLMAO: :ROTFLMAO: :ROTFLMAO:  

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“Why do you say stuff like that?”

i second that !?

again, i like how you wrote sad/funny/sad parts heh...
nice chapter :)

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« Reply #199 on: October 09, 2006, 03:31:36 AM »
By repressed bombing, I meant the plot of Sukeban Deka. Any of them, actually, I'm sure they're all the same.
Poor Gaki, though. And lol at Sayu and Reina, doing the do in the bushes.

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