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« Reply #320 on: September 28, 2006, 02:33:25 AM »
Awww~! Piano is love :] ~! I bet it's a composition Yossie tried to write!

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« Reply #321 on: September 28, 2006, 04:21:24 AM »
Yay Yomiki! <_< >_> <_< Dammit...

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« Reply #322 on: September 28, 2006, 06:23:20 AM »
I have been waiting for this so long. But it doesn't matter, 'cos it's worth to wait :heart:

Hope your PC is ok now...XD

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« Reply #323 on: September 28, 2006, 02:39:17 PM »
yeahhhh!~^^ very very good ^_^

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« Reply #324 on: September 30, 2006, 10:45:02 AM »
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Yay Yomiki! <_< >_> <_< Dammit...

I love when you contradict yourself that way XDXD


***44***


Ishikawa was looking the crowd walking outside through the glass of the cafeteria.  The cup of coffee in her hands was almost cold, but she wasn’t paying attention to it, not even to her best friend, who was seated in front of her trying to hold a conversation with her without luck.

“Where are you, Rika-chan?”
“What do you mean?” asked Ishikawa turning her head to look at Shibata “I’m right here”
“No, you’re not. Where’s my friend?” asked the girl worried “What happened to the cheerful Rika-chan that I knew?”
“I can’t be happy all the time”

Ayumi lent back in the chair and crossed her arms.

“You used to be, ‘till Erika step into your life”
“You don’t know anything about that” replied Rika with the coldest voice ever.
“Then maybe it’s time for you to tell me?”
“It’s none of your business”
“You’re my best friend, of course it is!”

Shibata raised too much her voice and all the people in the cafeteria looked at her. She was ashamed, but seeing that Ishikawa was going to leave, she stood up from the chair and took her friend’s hand.

“Rika-chan, please” she said making her friend to sit again “I’m not the only one worried”

Ishikawa’s face turned from angry to surprise. There were more people who knew about Erika?

“Some girls came to me ‘cause they saw you with her and wanna know what’s happening. They think that she’s using you”
“That’s silly. Why would want Erika to use me?”
“I don’t know. The only thing I’m sure about is that, since the day she joined, you’ve changed. And I’m not talking just about your attitude towards me… What happened with Yoshizawa? One day you tell me you’re madly in love with her and the next…”
“Stop it”

Ishikawa didn’t let her friend to finish the sentence. She turned again her head towards the glass and looked at the people outside. She needed to think the words carefully before saying anything.

“I’m not going to tell you what happened with Yossi ‘cause that’s something between us and nobody else. And about Erika…, maybe I’m the one who’s using her”
“What do you mean?”
“She was just in the right place at the right time”

The way that her friend was talking began to desperate Shibata. Rika-chan wasn’t answering her questions and was making things even more confused. But she needed to know more. It wasn’t only to reassure the other girls.

“So… she helped you with something about Yossi?” tried to ask again.

Rika-chan didn’t answer and looked at her watch.

“It’s late. I have to go”

Ayumi couldn’t do anything to hold her friend. She just stayed in her chair looking at Ishikawa leaving the cafeteria.

Maybe she didn’t get any answer to her worries, but there was something that she was sure about. Something really big happened with Yoshizawa and Erika had something to do in it. She just needed to know what.
« Last Edit: September 30, 2006, 10:47:16 AM by len.chan »

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« Reply #325 on: September 30, 2006, 11:52:51 AM »
muhahaha love it!^^

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« Reply #326 on: September 30, 2006, 03:04:57 PM »
Yay~! About time Ayumi's getting herself involved! Wonder how she'll find out :]

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« Reply #327 on: September 30, 2006, 10:04:07 PM »
Shiba-chan is cool! No one ever writes about her.

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« Reply #328 on: September 30, 2006, 10:26:49 PM »
well, i felt like i needed to have Shiba-chan in the history. She's Rika's best friend and, as it seems, a cool and kind girl. She can give to the fic some good vibrations... Not everything has to be lies and betrayals XDXD

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« Reply #329 on: October 01, 2006, 02:50:04 AM »
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well, i felt like i needed to have Shiba-chan in the history. She's Rika's best friend and, as it seems, a cool and kind girl. She can give to the fic some good vibrations... Not everything has to be lies and betrayals XDXD


That's a good plot device but not good to base your story on. Shibata rulez!

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« Reply #330 on: October 01, 2006, 04:54:11 AM »
hooray~! new chapters XD
Go! go! Shiba-chan! Hope she can help sort things out for everyone.

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« Reply #331 on: October 01, 2006, 10:38:42 AM »
nice story keep it up

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« Reply #332 on: October 04, 2006, 03:41:11 PM »
Emotional fic you've got here. I finally got a chance to sit down and read through the entire fic and I've gotta say I'm loving it! I also like how you portrayed Maki as someone who's always there for Yossie and supporting her. She needs someone to love her back! Hehe. Also love how you show that people can have their dark sides... Anyway, good work, keep it up and looking forward to reading more!

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« Reply #333 on: October 05, 2006, 12:20:25 AM »
uaah.. finally... I didn't want to go to bed until this wasn't finnished XD

first, as always, thanks for the comments. And wellcome goosefish.. I know it takes some time to read all the chapters ^^

About Maki... I think that people will be happy with this chapter XDXD


***45***




The music coming from the stereo stopped suddenly and Maki could see clearly who was there through the mirror in front of her. Of course it wasn’t one of the dancers, they left almost an hour ago, but she wasn’t expecting a visit from that person either.

She leant to take her towel and the bottle of water from the floor and walked towards the person standing in the wall while she wiped out the sweat of her face and neck.

“So… what’s a pretty girl like you doing here so late?” asked Gocchin before drink some water.
“I’ve discovered something about Rika and I wanna know if you knew about it”
“If I would knew something I’d told you, that’s what we agreed”
“Yeah… but, the last time we talked was…” the voice of the girl sound a bit nervous “…you know… weird?”

Maki couldn’t help but laugh while she was going to the corner to take her sports bag. Then, she returned where the other girl was and looked at the older who seemed to be really uncomfortable.

“Shiba-chan…, it was just one night” said Maki leaning to the other girl’s face dangerously “You thought that I was going to feel awkward to talk to you because of that?”
“Well… I’m feeling that way right now”

The younger caught the hint in Ayumi’s words and realized how close she was actually. She didn’t do it on purpose. It was just that her body acted without thinking, like a defence mechanism against the loneliness. The maxim: if you are cold, find somebody to warm you up.

“Ok… ehm… If you’re going to feel better, we can go to some other place to talk, you know, with more people”
“What do you suggest?” asked Shibata a bit more comfortable
“You had dinner already? Because I’m starving…”


***


There was nothing interesting on TV. Miki was on the couch pressing buttons randomly, trying to find something to watch while her girlfriend was in the kitchen making some dinner. Finally, she found a documental channel and left the control on the table.

“What are you watching?” asked Yossi passing a plate with sandwiches to Miki.
“Lions” answered her, taking a sandwich and giving a bite.
“Oh”

When Hitomi sat on the couch next to her, Miki left the sandwich on the plate again and rested her head on her girlfriend’s shoulder, while one of her hands was playing on the edge of Yossi’s shirt.

“You know… TV’s boring and I’m not really hungry…”

Another hand skipped under the fabric and caressed the skin. But before she could go further, Yossi took away the hands of her girlfriend from there.

“Miki.., not tonight”
“What’s wrong?” asked Fujimoto worried “It still hurts?”
“Yeah… a little…” answered the younger trying to avoid Miki’s eyes.

Fujimoto knew that something wasn’t right. Yocchan spent the whole day avoiding touching her, sometimes even to look at her. But maybe it was just her imagination.., maybe she didn’t sleep well the last night and was tired.., maybe… maybe she was trying to find something to forget how guilty she was feeling for spent the last night with Aya and not with her girlfriend…

“Yocchan… sorry again for leaving you alone yesterday”
“Forget it. It’s in the past already and the past is something you don’t have to worry about”
“Ok”

Miki surrounded Yossi’s waist with her arms and buried her face on her girlfriend’s chest.

You’ve already forgotten your past, Yocchan?
   

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“Can you tell me why the hell our conversations have to end always in your bed?!”
“Mmh… ‘cause I’m irresistible?”

Gocchin’s answer seemed to piss of Shibata even more, who shot her a murderous look through the sheets where she was hiding her naked body.

“Ok… sorry” apologized Maki sitting in the bed near the other girl “But it wasn’t my fault that the restaurant was closed. It was late already and you didn’t refuse my treat to dinner at home”
“I know…”
“Then don’t look at me as if I was the devil or something…”

Ayumi didn’t know what to think. Even knowing how Maki was she let her to take the control over her body, exactly as the first time. She hated to loose control on herself that way but there was something in the eyes of the younger that she couldn’t resist.

“Shiba-chan? You’re ok?”

Looking at the hand of the other girl shaking in front of her Shibata realized that she was staring at Maki lost in her thoughts.

“Yeah… Ehm… What we should do about Rika-chan?” she said trying to forget that she was still naked in the bed.
“Well… I know that she and Yocchan are hiding something big, but I still don’t know what” Maki scratched her head and drop herself again in the bed “And now with what you’ve told me about Erika… things are even more complicated”
“I have a doubt…”
“Yeah?”
“How do you know so much about what’s happening between Rika and Yoshizawa?”
“I have my sources…”
“And your not going to tell me?” asked Shiba-chan leaning closer to Maki, forgetting to take the sheets with her.

Maki smiled with mischief at the view and then answered with a sexy and playful tone.

“Let me think about it…”
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« Reply #334 on: October 05, 2006, 12:29:02 AM »
wow!. Thanks for the update!. I'm going to read it right now!. Good night!

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« Reply #335 on: October 05, 2006, 02:00:00 AM »
Yay! Random Ayumi x Maki! This is getting interesting <3 Maki playing the role of someone clueless to Ayu, Jee, I wonder where this is going :]!

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« Reply #336 on: October 05, 2006, 04:56:38 AM »
Good god! Maki's a pimp!



 Go Maki!!

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« Reply #337 on: October 05, 2006, 05:35:45 AM »
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“Can you tell me why the hell our conversations have to end always in your bed?!”
“Mmh… ‘cause I’m irresistible?”


Wow. That was the best damn quote out of the whole chapter. It was amazing!! Good job! I've been waiting for this update.

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« Reply #338 on: October 05, 2006, 10:56:36 AM »
WHUU! I have been waiting:D  Thanks!

Hah, Maki. What are you doing?XD

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« Reply #339 on: October 05, 2006, 05:03:03 PM »
GJ!!!
Gocchin x Shiba-chan is ...LOVE!

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