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« Reply #380 on: November 06, 2006, 10:55:55 PM »
len.chan......the suspense is killing me.....what are you going to do to my ayaya??? wuu.....i swear to God, if u make her die of sum kind of heart disease......i'll.......

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« Reply #381 on: November 06, 2006, 11:28:27 PM »
let's see...

how stefy said, the fact that Miki went to see Aya searching for comfort it can seem a predictable drama-like move... but you know me guys... I'm full of surprises :ONglasses:

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len.chan......the suspense is killing me.....what are you going to do to my ayaya??? wuu.....i swear to God, if u make her die of sum kind of heart disease......i'll.......

"Henshin!"

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I hope you get the picture.....


I told you, don't worry XD
Is true that I dislike Aya a little (she won a little place in my heart with the GAM thing..) but I'm not such a bad person to kill her in the fic, Miki doesn't deserve such a pain...

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« Reply #382 on: November 07, 2006, 02:50:03 PM »
wait a minute.... i don't get it which part of the fic hinted that aya will die?

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« Reply #383 on: November 10, 2006, 06:09:23 PM »
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    wait a minute.... i don't get it which part of the fic hinted that aya will die?


there isn't any hint about that. I don't know why kazitakato thought that I was going to do something bad to Aya XDXD


***51***


Walking through the corridors, Miki was thinking about the past few days. She had’n talked with Yocchan since the other girl confessed her secret, just the necessary as leader and subleader. The situation was killing her slowly. The more she thought about it the more she wanted to run to Yossi and tell her that it was all right, that she didn’t care about what happened with Ishikawa. But she can’t, she can’t even try it, because every time they were alone Yossi ran away with a lame excuse.

Just like now.

There she was, walking towards her, with her eyes fixed in the ground, maybe afraid to look at the older.

“Yocchan…”

But Yossi, with a simple ‘hi’, kept walking and soon she disappeared from her sight.


***



“Have you seen that?”
“What?”
“Miki and Yoshizawa-san, they don’t even talk to each other”

Gaki-san raised her eyes from the magazine she was reading and looked towards Miki that was still standing a few meters from them. After a quick glance, she returned to her fashion news.

“Maybe they argued” said Risa reading at the same time “With all that GAM thing it’s easy for Yoshizawa-san to feel jealous”
“What GAM thing?” asked Ai-chan.

Risa turned surprised to her girlfriend who was looking at her with a clueless face.

“Do you really live on Earth?” asked the younger “EVERYBODY knows about the kiss!”
“Wait… they’ve kissed? When?”

The younger sighed and closed the magazine.

“Sometimes I wonder if you really pay attention to the world around you”
“I’m paying attention to you now so, tell me”
“It’s easy. They had to kiss in the last shot of her new PV. I don’t think that it’s a big thing but people began to talk again about Mikitty and Matsuura-san together.”

Hearing that, Takahashi searched quickly in her pocket and took her cell-phone.

“See? You’re not paying attention…” sighed Risa.
“It’s not that” answered Ai-chan leaning to her girlfriend and giving her a quick kiss on the lips “I have to tell Mako-chan about this”

Resigned, Gaki-san returned to her magazine. She knew that it would be useless to try to make Ai-chan understand that it could be worst if she told Makoto. That girl could be able to take the first flight to Tokyo just to kick Miki’s ass, or at least, to try it. The last that Yoshizawa-san needed was a catfight for her. But again, her girlfriend was too stubborn to understand that.

“Aah~” she sighed “These things were easier with Kon-Kon around…”


***



Yossi keep walking without going anywhere. She had been doing that for the last few days during the rehearsal’s breaks as a way to avoid the girls, especially one of them. She wasn’t strong enough to face Miki after what happened.

The girl that was in front of her right now it wasn’t easy to face either.

“What have you done to her?”

Aya Matsuura, the lovely Ayaya, had transformed herself in an aggressive girl able to kill anyone who could hurt her best friend. Her face was serious enough to make Yossi understand that she couldn’t run away so easily from that confrontation.

“If you love her so much why do you make her cry?!”

Why I keep hurting the people I love?

“You know what?” said the younger in a defiant way “Now it’s my chance to do something. Miki won’t need you anymore”

“She doesn’t need you anymore…”

Yossi remained in silence while watching Aya leaving. When she was completely alone again she dropped to the floor and buried her face in her kneels.

“The same again, huh?” she said to herself “Yoshizawa…, you’re such a looser…”

Her thoughts were suddenly interrupted by the sound of her cell-phone. It was a message, a really short one:

She loves you
Fight oh!


That was enough to make her smile for the first time in days.

“You always so timely, Mako-chan…”

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« Reply #384 on: November 10, 2006, 06:13:18 PM »
Go Mako-chan! Fight oh Yossui!

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« Reply #385 on: November 10, 2006, 10:30:30 PM »
Oh yes! Fight Yossi! You can do it XD

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« Reply #386 on: November 10, 2006, 10:33:51 PM »
Yossie, you can do it! BELIEVE~! -gives her a hardhat-

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« Reply #387 on: November 10, 2006, 10:42:39 PM »
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there isn't any hint about that. I don't know why kazitakato thought that I was going to do something bad to Aya XDXD


:pen_sorry: sori...i just thought u might kill her off coz she's getting in the way of YoMiki and that u actually said b4 this that u don't like her that much (but i luv her...lots) so it's be no problem for u to kill her....

so, gomme...if i scared u...i'll just watch over Ayaya......for now...

p/s: but i still have my eyes on u.....:pen_eat: when u eat....:pen_sleep:when u sleep.....just in case u harm my Ayaya..... :ONcool1: *just joking*

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« Reply #388 on: November 10, 2006, 11:00:45 PM »
Go yossie go!!!^^
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« Reply #389 on: November 12, 2006, 08:45:02 AM »
Haven't commented for some time, because everytime after I finish reading I forget to comment :evil:  anyways, this time I remembered.

The way this story is going is pretty interesting, I'll be keeping an eye on this thread closely to see what happens next :ONding: I don't even really like YoMiki but I hope they end up together, or at least end up happy even without each other.

Until the next chapter :ONbyebye: I just wanted to use this emoticon <_<

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« Reply #390 on: November 12, 2006, 01:28:48 PM »
mokoto got over obsessing over yossie huh, the message from her was sweeet.. hope it gives yossie enuf strength to carry on!! yocchan fight oh fight oh fighttt!!

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« Reply #391 on: November 13, 2006, 11:05:35 PM »
well, no Yossi fighting here... but you're going to discover something interesting  :ONhee:


***52***


I can’t do it, I can’t do it! Definitely not! What the hell I was thinking when I accepted this? What the hell was Shiba-chan thinking when she proposed it?! This must be some kind of punishment for flirting with her so much lately. I should learn to stop playing with the wrong girls…

Well, there’s no turning back. If I want this to work, Erika can’t feel any bit of doubt from me or she’s gonna suspect about my real intentions… This is for Yocchan’s sake, don’t ruin it now Maki…

“I always wanted to know how it feels…”
“What?” asked Maki without stopping what she was doing.
“To be with Gottsan, to taste your kisses…”

That’s… good? As long as she keeps talking, maybe I’ll be able to make her speak about what I want to know…


Shibata’s plan was simple. To make Erika to loose her mind, take advantage of this and make her speak. It should be easy for someone like Maki. Of course, the younger wasn’t so sure about it when all this started. But now, hearing Miyoshi’s words, she began to believe in Shiba-chan. Maybe, there was an opportunity.

“I didn’t know that you were interested on me…” said Gocchin kissing the other girl’s neck “I’ve always thought that you’re with Rika-chan”
“Don’t act like a fool with me” answered Erika “You knew that she was with Yoshizawa-san.

Maki’s hands began to explore under Erika’s shirt. Things were going good… Maybe it was time to try something that she was talking with Shibata a few days ago. The older suspected that it couldn’t be a coincidence that the problems between Yossi and Rika began exactly when Biyuuden was formed…

“Yeah, but they broke up almost a year ago…” began to say Gocchin, hoping that the next step wasn’t to go too further “…and something tells me that I have to thank you for that…”

Erika seemed a bit surprised by Maki’s words but, far from deny any accusation, she laughed and kissed Gottsan deeply.

“I knew it…” she said recovering her breath.

Gocchin heart skipped a bit. She felt already caught.

“I knew that you would be happy with it…”

What?!

“Yoshizawa-san never deserved you…” continued the older “Leaving you the way she did it was unforgivable”

Wait… Wait! Is she saying what I think she’s saying? It’s all about me? Think straight Maki…She wasn’t even here when all that happened…


“How do you know about that?” asked Gocchin trying to make things clear.
“You talk too much, Gottsan”

Maki didn’t complaint. She knew that it would be too risky to keep talking, at least for a few minutes…


***


“I thought that everybody had forgotten about that already…”

Nono took a piece of her cake and proceed to enjoy it.

“…since Makochan was the most interested in all this and she’s already gone”
“Yeah, but I’ve became more worried lately” said Shibata “This isn’t just about Rika-chan and Yossi anymore. There are a lot of people involved already”

The younger left the fork in the table, leant her back in the chair and crossed her arms.

“I understand” she said adopting a serious pose “There’s something I can do?”
“Don’t worry, we’re working in something already”
“We?”
“Yeah, Ma…”

The conversation was suddenly interrupted by Ayumi’s cell-phone. She took it and looked at the mail sender’s id.

Speaking of the devil…

“Mission accomplished. Now I need some of your love to clean any remain of her touch, pleeease~”

“Someone important?” asked a curious Nono.
“No… Just work” lied Shibata.
“You must really love your work to smile like this…”

I was… smiling?

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« Reply #392 on: November 13, 2006, 11:15:33 PM »
OOOOH What now :]

Shicchin loooove <3 <3 <3

Now that Ayumi Goto alias from the Hello!Project mini-musical makes me think she's married her by now, haha XD!

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« Reply #393 on: November 13, 2006, 11:33:35 PM »
Somebody is falling in love:ONhee:

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« Reply #394 on: November 13, 2006, 11:46:27 PM »
Ou mai gaaaaah!!! I was going to go to bed, but somehow I knew that I had to check this before that XD

I'm sooooo happy for Maki right now. She has someone to love:panda_love:

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« Reply #395 on: November 14, 2006, 10:03:40 AM »
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“Someone important?” asked a curious Nono.
“No… Just work” lied Shibata.
“You must really love your work to smile like this…”

I was… smiling?


This line is 1 of the best lines ever written in this forum. :bow:

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« Reply #396 on: November 14, 2006, 10:32:49 AM »
There's so many twists in this fic, it's a joy to read them. :thumbsup :kgreat:

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« Reply #397 on: November 14, 2006, 05:11:36 PM »
man that was good.......oh, and it's allbcoz of Gocchan??? Now i've lost count. 1st there was YoMiki, but earlier it was YoRika, then AyaRika.....i've lost count.....help me :ONomg:

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« Reply #398 on: November 14, 2006, 06:21:11 PM »
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“Someone important?” asked a curious Nono.


Was that intentional? It made me giggle.

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« Reply #399 on: November 15, 2006, 02:06:04 AM »
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Was that intentional? It made me giggle.


Ha!! I saw that too and I giggled as well. But its about time for Maki to get some lovin! And the last little dialogue was so cute. Good job with this. I really really enjoy this story.

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