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« Reply #80 on: September 02, 2006, 07:08:25 PM »
I do notice the views, but it's hard gauging everyone's reaction if they don't tell me things. I'm okay now, I was just bleh before....

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« Reply #81 on: September 02, 2006, 07:10:19 PM »
Thanks you guys, I'm glad to have your comments. :D :D :D


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thats so sweet!!..... its during the i wish pv right?


And yeah, the making of had some classic Ishiyoshi, but I thought that it spoke for itself so I didn't touch it.

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« Reply #82 on: September 03, 2006, 12:00:10 AM »
Don't even think about stop writing!:cry:  
Altough I like Aibon+Nono, I would like to read more Ishiyoshi:D  But everything you write is fine to me:heart:

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« Reply #83 on: September 03, 2006, 01:02:54 AM »
heh i :heart:  ishiyoshi aswell  XD

but this is very cute, i loved aibon in that suit in the I Wish PV :P

please write more!!

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« Reply #84 on: September 03, 2006, 02:10:34 PM »
I'm a little late here, but the last chapter was very cute indeed. But doesn't it seem like Kago is always the one that has to be excused? Not like I mind much, it's just an observation xD

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« Reply #85 on: September 03, 2006, 04:44:57 PM »
C'mon an ishiyoshi update :P XD

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« Reply #86 on: September 03, 2006, 04:46:04 PM »
yeah yeah! it's IshiYoshi time!

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« Reply #87 on: September 04, 2006, 06:44:29 AM »
keep up the good work.

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« Reply #88 on: September 04, 2006, 10:58:25 AM »
You guys may have to wait for my major Ishiyoshi spam. I'm actually working on plot now! Gasp! But, I hope this will tide you over.





Hitomi wondered how Kei and Maki ever managed to have a life outside Hello!Pro, plopping down onto the hard floor in the corner of the dance room. If it wasn’t for the fact that Rika had Tanpopo practice tonight, she would have felt really bad at canceling their dinner plans.

She looked up when Maki sat down next to her, “What’s up?” Goto was cool and not crazy, like Yaguchi.

“I should be asking you that. You’ve been weird all night.” Maki gave her a concerned look.

“It probably has to do with Rika.” Kei said, sitting down on her other side.

Yossui shot her a sharp glare, “What does she have to do with anything?”

Kei laughed, “You two are only the most obvious secret couple ever. And Mari just called to complain about her being distracted too.”

Yossui rolled her eyes, was nothing sacred here? At least Rika was thinking about her. “Morning Musume is just a bunch of busybodies.” she scoffed playfully, receiving shoves on both sides.

“Why don’t we call it quits for today?” Maki suggested lightly, “It’s not like we’re getting any work done anyway. So go get Rika and do something special.”

The older girl smiled at her senpai, it was nice to have someone who understood. She called a farewell to her partners and exited the room, only to run smack into Nono. “Sorry. Where are you headed?” They fell into step with each other.

“I’m going to get Aibon. What about you?” the younger girl seemed extremely happy for some reason.

“Rika and I have plans. What’s up with you?” it seemed like Tsuji was just waiting for someone to ask because she beamed as she announced.

“Aibon and I are getting an apartment!” It sounded like it was a dream come true for her, but Yossui thought it wasn’t smart to put the two troublemakers together without supervision.

 She smiled nervously, “That’s great Nono.” The girl didn’t seem to notice her lack of enthusiasm and went on about how cool it was living away from her parents and with her best friend. Yossui just nodded, wishing the hall was shorter so that they could get to the Tanpopo dance room faster.

Suddenly, Tsuji sprinted down the hall and lunged at Kago, coming out of the room, tackling her girlfriend to the floor. They rolled as they hit the ground, ensuring the least amount of pain possible, but they kept rolling until they hit the wall with a thud, laughing like maniacs. The other three exiting the room just watched blankly as Yossui walked up to join them.

As one the four turned their backs on the youngest pair and decided to just ignore the chaos going on behind them, “So, “ Kaori started, “What are your plans for the evening?” she turned to Yossui questioningly and they began to walk towards the elevators.

“Oh just dinner.” she shared a secret smile with Rika as they stepped into the elevator. They rode down chatting comfortably with their senpai and they went their separate ways at the lobby. Walking out the door, Yossui reached for her girlfriend’s hand, sighing happily when she took it a leaned in close.

They walked off together in the night, unaware of the pair of eyes trailing them.




---...Actually, that only brushes against the Ishiyoshi bubble... Sorry. ;;;-_-

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« Reply #89 on: September 04, 2006, 01:36:28 PM »
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Who's that mystery person:o

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« Reply #90 on: September 04, 2006, 05:25:37 PM »
tabloids? thats all i can think of...

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« Reply #91 on: September 04, 2006, 10:36:42 PM »
All I'll say, is that they will get a few more mentions so you don't forget about them, and then the bomb will fall.
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« Reply #92 on: September 04, 2006, 10:46:24 PM »
They walked off together in the night, unaware of the pair of eyes trailing them.

a journalist!!!!

[size=-2]or some crazy man looking for girls...[/size]

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« Reply #93 on: September 05, 2006, 11:26:12 AM »
God, it's so much easier for me to write Aibon/Nono for some reason. But fear not, for today, after school, I begin work on my Ishiyoshi chapter.




Setting the last box aside with a sigh, Nono flopped backwards onto the bed, reaching over to flip on the radio. She, and Aibon, were in the process of moving all their stuff into their new apartment. It was slow going. They kept getting distracted and taking breaks, so it had taken them all day just to move the boxes inside. Now they just had to unpack.

Nono sighed again.

A warm body suddenly attached itself to her side and a kiss pressed against her cheek, “This was fun, huh?” Aibon giggled.

“Fun?” the older girl scoffed, “We didn’t get anything done. We’re so lazy.”

“But it was fun, right?” the younger girl was starting to pout.

“Yeah, I had fun.” She wrapped her arm comfortably around her girlfriend and they listened to the radio in silence. She squirmed when the younger girl started drawing shapes on her side, “That tickles.”

Aibon giggled again, “I know.” She walked her fingers up Nono’s ribs and across her chest, stopping over her heart. She held her hand there a moment before replacing it with her ear. “I can hear you heartbeat.” she said unnecessarily, seeming fascinated.

The older girl remained quiet, breathing evenly so that she didn’t disturb her girlfriend’s concentration. She had rarely seen her this focused, it made her all tingly inside.

Suddenly, Aibon perked up, “Hey!” she shouted, enthused. “Turn it up!”

Nono was confused, “What?” Then she realized what was playing on the radio, I Wish.

The younger girl lunged across her, pressing down hard on her ribs, and reached for the volume, blasting the song, “It’s us!” she clapped delightedly, sitting up on her knees.

Nono looked up at her girlfriend, who was straddling her hips, and tried to regain her breath, “Yeah, that’s us.” She stated flatly.

Aibon started laughing, bouncing up and down almost painfully wild on the older girl. “That’s so cool! We’re on the radio!”

“That’s great baby.” Nono sounded as though someone was jiggling her voice box as fast as they could, it wasn’t that far off. “Now please stop crushing my organs, I may need those someday.”

The younger girl immediately stopped moving and leaned down to press an apologetic kiss to her girlfriend’s throat. “I’m sorry, but think of how many people are listening to us right now. Didn’t you used to sing to the songs playing? Actually, I know you still do.” she ignored the glare that earned her, “People love us. We’re household names!”

“That’s creepy.” Nono absently tugged on the younger girl’s shirt, pulling her to lie down comfortably on top of her. “Imagine fanboys covering their room in our pictures. Buying photobooks with our swimsuit shots in them.” she shuddered, bringing a giggle from the girl resting on her, “Old men lusting after us. Ugh.”

“But we have fans! I’m sure we have girl fans too.” Aibon started planting tiny kisses on the older girl’s face, “Relax.” She sealed their lips together, gently brushing their tongues against each other.

“Relax, she says. I’m freaking out.” Nono said in between kisses, it was a common line between them, an inside joke. She rested her hands just under the younger girl’s shirt, massaging her back with gentle fingers, feeling small hands do the same on her ribs.

She started dragging her thumbs in circles on her girlfriend’s front, just above her hipbones and gasped when sharp nails traced the soft skin under her breasts. Things had never gotten this heated between them before and Nono wasn’t sure she was ready to go much farther.

She said as much and the hands stilled instantly, “I love you, Aibon, but I can’t. Not yet.” she was relieved when the younger girl smiled cheerfully at her and leaned forward to rest her head over her heart again, stretching her arms above her head and tangling her fingers in Nono’s hair.

“I don’t really think either of us should be doing that so soon. I mean we have only been dating for four months. Besides, do you even know what to do?” the younger girl tilted her head up slightly, but was unable to see her girlfriend’s eyes at her angle, she didn’t bother lifting her head off her comfortably pillow.

“Not really.” There was silence for a while, only broken by the radio, until Nono finally said, “Let’s just kiss some more.” The response was a pair of enthusiastic lips pressing her down into the bed.



-As always, feedback is good. I'll probably post another short one later today.

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« Reply #94 on: September 05, 2006, 07:40:25 PM »
Awww I loved that. Great update. Aibon and Nono r so cute. I can only imagine what a mess the apartment will be in a few weeks XD

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« Reply #95 on: September 05, 2006, 10:18:08 PM »
Here's the short I was talking about!



Rika smiled and placed some change in the cup of a homeless man as she passed, rounding the corner and walking the last few feet to the door humming cheerfully. As she entered the lobby she gave a good morning to the receptionist, who always seemed to be on the phone.

Her smile didn’t fade at all as she walked into the open den to see the rest of the yonki huddled around Maki on the furthest couch in awe. Why should her happiness wane? It was just Maki. So she was cool, so she had the beauty of a goddess, even at her young age. So what if she was the only real competition Rika had for her beloved Hitomi-chan?

She only really feared Maki breaking them apart because she was sure that was the only way it would happen. They were happy together; maybe they were even in love. But watching Yossui become so engrossed in the younger girl’s words, she had doubts about how long they would last.

After all, if Maki came calling, Rika was sure that she would drop Hitomi in a heartbeat.

Pushing aside her thoughts, Rika reinforced her smile and walked over with a hearty good morning and took a seat between Maki and Yossui. “So, what were you talking about?” It wasn’t hard to lose herself in her senpai’s words.



---I'm not sure how to portray Maki, seeing as she's not my favorite. Or anything close at all...

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« Reply #96 on: September 06, 2006, 02:27:04 AM »
I think you did a terrific job of portraying Maki. And a terrific job in general! I love this fanfic. Its short but sweet and just right.

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« Reply #97 on: September 06, 2006, 04:23:51 AM »
great job yet again... wonder what will hapen next rika getting jealous?
i don't understand this part tho... "if Maki came calling, Rika was sure that she would drop Hitomi in a heartbeat."

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« Reply #98 on: September 07, 2006, 04:55:38 AM »
Quote from: stefy
great job yet again... wonder what will hapen next rika getting jealous?
i don't understand this part tho... "if Maki came calling, Rika was sure that she would drop Hitomi in a heartbeat."


Exactly what I was wondering. Does EVERYONE love maki here? ;)

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« Reply #99 on: September 07, 2006, 05:18:51 AM »
Yes, everyone loves Maki. Or they at least worship the ground she walks on...

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