Innocence (Fourth Gen Love)

[SeeYa]

ahhhh!....there is no foreveR? NO! FOREVER GOOD! YES FOREVER!...well not forever...but YEAH! NO MAKI! MAKI BAD!.....what I meant was, MAKI/YOSSI BAD! RIKA/YOSSI GOOD! hope no one's gonna take rika's place..... or Yossi's.... It would be so sad if they broke up...and Maki. Is maki going to play a part in this? A BIG PART? THE PART OF THE SUPER EVIL PERSON THAT MAKES ME CRY? cuz that would be sad. because I acutally like maki. She's one of my fave H!P members.

so once again, GREAT FIC, ISHIYOSHI GOOD! MAKI BAD! ISHIYOSHI GOOD! MAKI BAD!( okay yeah Maki good too. MAKI GOOD. ISHIYOSHI BETTER)

[loreny]

yay ishiyoshi!

but yeah, very bittersweet, still really good (as usual!)

the part where rika is going through the photos and happens upon one of maki was good, i can really imagine yossie going  heh.

hmm setting us up for some traumatic times ahead eh?

[MyDearYossi]

That was sooo~ sweet!:heart:  Thanks for Ishiyoshi moment:D

[stefy]

bravo bravo...awesome ishiyoshi!!!
but i have to disagree with SeeYa, yossieMaki is not THAT bad... but then again ya ishiyoshi is still the best... haha
I think the part where yossie eplained the ex boyfriend part was alittle like too much explanation? i mean  you wouldn't wanna talk soo much about your ex wid your current lover right...
then again it might just be the way i read it... i tend to read too fast drats!

[rndmnwierd]

Next!



Aibon sighed jealously as she watched her girlfriend attach herself to Nakazawa’s side again. Ever since the woman had apologized, Nono hadn’t let their leader out of her sight. Now she barely spent anytime with Aibon, if you forgot the fact that they lived together.

And worse yet, Kago was bored. Yocchan and Rika-chan seemed really close today, even she knew better than to come between them, and Maki wasn’t around to talk to, so Aibon just sat around sighing.

Suddenly Yaguchi-san came flying into the room with a squeal, landing on Kago in the big fluffy chair she was sitting in. Slightly in pain, all the younger girl could do was blink at her weird senpai.

Mari laughed at her and started kissing her cheeks, “You’re so adorable!”

Nono was immediately by their side, whining and pulling on Yaguchi, “Aibon’s mine. Get off.”

The older teen laughed and pulled Tsuji onto the chair, too, “You guys are almost as short as me! We should all be short together!”

‘Actually, that wasn’t a bad idea’, Aibon thought to herself. She liked Yaguchi and any time with Nono was good, especially away from Nakazawa. The other girl was apparently having the same thoughts, because she gave Kago a look over Yaguchi’s shoulder.

“What would we call ourselves?” Nono tilted her head, adopting an adorable, quizzical look.

“^Youngu Morningu^?” Aibon inquired in English.

Yaguchi looked surprised, “What really? You guys would do it with me?” The girls shared another look before nodding in unison, “I’ll have to talk to Tsunku about it, but you’d be willing to work on making it big? You’d take it seriously?”

Both girls nodded again, adding a few ‘Yeah’s and ‘Sure’s to the mix. Mari got up, letting them sink together on the chair, and looked them over appraisingly. They shrank away from her intense gaze, holding onto each other absently.

Then, Yaguchi pranced out of the room and as Aibon shared yet another look with her girlfriend, she knew they were thinking the same thing, ‘What in the world was that?’


----Thanks for your comments, they make me happy!

And stefy, it was an explanation. I think that someone you're that close to, even if you break up with them, you'll still have some kind of feelings for. Hence the gush. She wanted to tell Rika about him so that there wouldn't be any secrets, but probably got a little caught up in the old days.

EVIL MAKI BAD!! I don't want to villianize anyone! That's too easy.

[SeeYa]

^^ you're right as always....I suppose it'll be much more depressing and dramatic if both people are liked, because you'll feel bad no matter which one ends up with which. Well... I can't believe I didn't comment on this before, but that part with nono and yuko was so cute!  YAY FOR RNDMNWIERD!

[YoukaiChica]

YAY FOR RNDMNWIERD!

I agree!!! There's just something about the way you write that makes this all seem so realistic. I think its the way you captured everyone's individual personality. Its just amazing that you could mimick their weird quirks.

Anyways, keep on updating! I am now officially addicted to this fanfic and I don't mind one bit. Unless you cut me off and I don't get my fix. Then I'll be sad....

[stefy]

minimoni minimoni....
i totally forgot about the minimoni part!!... their so cutee
esp kagochan

[MyDearYossi]

Hahahah! Minimoni was the first group on H!P I knew

[rndmnwierd]

You guys are too kind :embarrassed:
New chapter! Woo!



“I can’t believe they’re going to put us in a game.” Hitomi tugged on the plastic skirt in disbelief. They were to test out the new 360 degree camera angles with a PV to Dance Suru Noda. How stupid. Though the song was fun…

Anyway, it was going to be fun! Hitomi couldn’t wait. She looked over to where the twins were playing with each other’s outfits and smiled. They were actually being quiet today. They may be a handful at times, but they’re good kids.

It wouldn’t last.

She felt small, energetic arms encircle her lower waist and grinned at her crazy mentor. “You’re so cute!” It felt as though the much smaller girl was trying to pick her up, so she bent down to hoist the older teen up onto her back.

Mari laughed maniacally from her perch, grabbing a nearby long candle stick and poking the innocent twins gently. They thought this was great fun and grabbed their own, smaller sticks, beginning a vicious sword battle. Yossui had to work hard not to be hit, but the three shorties eventually ganged up on her and stabbed her until she sunk down to the ground, dying as loudly as she could.

“Oh the pain! Everything’s going dark! Ahh! Ohh! I can’t last much longer!” Mari almost fell over sideways, she was laughing so hard, and Nono and Aibon were already rolling on the floor. Finally Hitomi lay flat against the ground, Yaguchi still cracking up on top of her. She twitched and gasped a few more times for good measure, then took a deep breath and was completely still.

The three continued laughing for a while, before they calmed and started wiping tears from their eyes. Even though Yossui wasn’t moving, they knew she was faking and started tickling and pinching her without mercy. Unable to hold her charade under the onslaught, Hitomi gave up quickly.

She sat on the floor for a while, feeling lazy, and smiled happily when the smaller girls climbed into her lap and Yaguchi resumed her place on Yossui’s back. You couldn’t pay for memories like these.

There was only one thing that could make it better and that was, “What are you guys doing?” Rika spoke up warily from behind them. For making herself visible, she was immediately attacked and dragged to the ground with them, protesting all the way. Nobody listened.

Yossui wrapped an arm around her, shifting Nono so that they could all fit, and the group began talking about random things. Just whatever came to mind.

“I wonder how long it took to tile this floor.” Nono patted the ground, situating herself more into Rika’s lap.

“I wonder how long it took to clean it.” Mari pulled her knees up higher off the floor, nearly sending Hitomi to the ground.

“I wonder when the last time someone did clean was.” Aibon ran a finger along the tiles, and then looked at the dirt that had collected in disgust.

“Well, I wonder what the lunch menu is today.” Yossui’s contemplation got thoughtful nods from the three shortest.

“I wonder when we all went insane…” Rika grumbled, snuggling into her girlfriend more.

“Oh, that was sometime after breakfast.” Hitomi pulled the older girl close with a grin.



---Now, would you like this injected or smoked? It doesn't work as well if you snort.

[rndmnwierd]

......


Walking past the homeless man at the corner, Nono absently dropped some change into his cup, not even thinking about it. It was a ritual she did everyday as she passed, coming in and going home. Usually she gave him a smile and a ‘Good Morning’ but she just didn’t feel cheerful today. She did manage a weak smile at Rika, when the older girl put a hand on her shoulder.

“Don’t worry. I’m sure Aibon will come around soon. She’ll calm down, realize she was wrong and beg you to take her back.”

Yes, that’s right. Aibon and Nono aren’t speaking to each other. The older girl even went so far as to stay at Rika’s house since their argument. What was it over, you ask? A doll.

Yep, a doll.

“It was really important to me.” Nono said for what must be the hundredth time. Her mother had gotten her that doll at the first girl’s festival that she could remember and Nono loved it with all her heart. But two days ago, Aibon had broken it, and then yelled at her for leaving it out, as if the table wasn’t where it had always been.

Walking into the lobby, Nono reached up and took Rika’s hand for strength. It was gonna be a long day.

The two were immediately greeted by a concerned Yossui, who looked at Nono and asked, before she’d even said good morning, “What’s up with Aibon?” taking a second look at the distraught girl in front of her, Yossui then said, “And what’s up with you?”

“Well, hello to you too, Yocchan. I slept fine, how about you?” Rika rolled her eyes sarcastically, eliciting an apology from her girlfriend.

“Kago and I are not speaking.” Nono ‘hmph’d and turned away.

“ ‘Kago’?” The older girl repeated, “And what’s with the formal speech?” She looked really confused.

“I’m not talking to her because she won’t apologize to me.” The youngest tried to sound defiant, but it just came out sad.

Yossui nodded, “Aibon is pissed about something, that’s why I asked. I’d stay out of her way if she’s mad at you.” she patted the girl’s head gently and then squeezed Rika’s shoulder, before heading back to Kago.

Nono sighed, feeling her heart sink. ‘She’ll never apologize.’ The thought that they might not be together brought tears to her eyes and she buried her face in Rika’s shoulder. She felt soothing hands rub her back, calming her.

“Now now, don’t cry, this will work itself out. Aibon will forget why she was angry soon enough and come crawling back to you. You know she loves you.” Rika said reassuringly.

“I don’t think she does!” the girl sobbed loudly, not caring who heard. “If she really cared about me, she would respect me enough to apologize! It’s obvious I don’t mean anything to her…” she trailed off into uncontrollable cries, hiding her face in the older girl’s shirt.

Rika rubbed her back softly, feeling her heart break and Aibon watched, unnoticed, feeling low.


---.......

[YoukaiChica]

Awwww. That's so sad!! She does love you Nono, she does!!!!

And if this could all be shrunk down into pills that's how I'd like it. Then I could just carry it around with me, feeding my addiction, no matter where I was. Yup....

[SeeYa]

" Nono!!! Don't cry! Aibon didn't mean to break your doll!!!!! She'll apologize! Really she will! ( whispers to rndmnweird : She will...right? )

[Mikan]

Wow. I have read all the chapters I have missed and I must say...you certainly know how to tug on peoples heart strings.

Because I read so much in such a short time I cant really run through everything I loved because that would mean I would need to quote all those chapters so I'll do my usual, medium length spam to fill you lust for comments.

What happened to Maki, lol. Was I right before? Was she the girl in the bushes watching!

Ishiyoshi is my favourite so far. They have a sweet thing going and Im all for it. Goddamn Yossui's boyfriend. I dont know why. Just I thought I should say it.

Im not a W fan but here it is and its cute so Im happy to read it. Its nice to have fics that are not totally dependant on sex, drugs and rock and roll. Doki Doki is unfortunately that.

Yuko's graduation was hard. That really hit me and the image you painted of Nono crying into her really burnt into my brain. That's a sign of true talent.

What did Ishikawa mean by not forever? Will this be elaborated in future chapters?

[rndmnwierd]

Awwww. That's so sad!! She does love you Nono, she does!!!!

And if this could all be shrunk down into pills that's how I'd like it. Then I could just carry it around with me, feeding my addiction, no matter where I was. Yup....

Wow, it'd be really cool if there was some way to get websites on a small handheld computer.  Then you could just carry that around and not have to pop pills every five minutes.

" Nono!!! Don't cry! Aibon didn't mean to break your doll!!!!! She'll apologize! Really she will! ( whispers to rndmnweird : She will...right? )

Hmm, maybe...

Wow. I have read all the chapters I have missed and I must say...you certainly know how to tug on peoples heart strings.

Well, that's the effect I'm going for!:D

Because I read so much in such a short time I cant really run through everything I loved because that would mean I would need to quote all those chapters so I'll do my usual, medium length spam to fill you lust for comments.

Spam away 'cause I hunger!

What happened to Maki, lol. Was I right before? Was she the girl in the bushes watching!

I haven't decided, yet. But I don't think I could really work that in. Maybe. I dunno...

Ishiyoshi is my favourite so far. They have a sweet thing going and Im all for it. Goddamn Yossui's boyfriend. I dont know why. Just I thought I should say it.

Indeed. Not sure what I'm going to do with this new info yet either.

Im not a W fan but here it is and its cute so Im happy to read it. Its nice to have fics that are not totally dependant on sex, drugs and rock and roll. Doki Doki is unfortunately that.

I am a total W sap. I love them, they were the first group I was introduced to so I'm quite biased. And the only reason they're all not having sex is because they're just a few years underage.... Wait a few chapters.... Or a lot of chapters.... Maybe I'll have a sex Christmas special, 'tis the season afterall!

Yuko's graduation was hard. That really hit me and the image you painted of Nono crying into her really burnt into my brain. That's a sign of true talent.

The only footage I've ever seen of Yuko's graduation was the scene I described. It was so touching.

What did Ishikawa mean by not forever? Will this be elaborated in future chapters?

They always said that she was negative in the earlier days. Negativity never really goes away, no matter what she says today.

Also.... Just wait....



I'll probably have another chapter up tomorrow!

[lil_hamz]

“I don’t think she does!” the girl sobbed loudly, not caring who heard. “If she really cared about me, she would respect me enough to apologize! It’s obvious I don’t mean anything to her…” she trailed off into uncontrollable cries, hiding her face in the older girl’s shirt.

Sometimes its harder to tell the most important person in your life you're sorry than any other person. So please don't be sad Nono. I can't handle you being sad

[rndmnwierd]

It's tomorrow! You know what that means! Dun dun dun! Just when you thought it was safe to get back on the internet...



Rika rubbed the back of her neck uncomfortably, getting that feeling of being watched again. It had been happening all night, even though she and Yossui were in the VIP booth. She looked out the window again, only seeing the swaying of the bushes in the wind. Shrugging, she decided to ignore it and turned back to the conversation.

They talked about normal things and weird things, about the other members, and about their relationship. They ate dinner in companionable silence then ordered dessert and continued to enjoy each other’s company.

Yossui reached over and gently brushed a loose strand of hair behind Rika’s ear, sending shivers down the older girl’s spine. They had time before the waitress got back.

Rika closed her eyes when Yossui’s first kiss of the night landed on her lips, gentle and caressing, tongues slipping against each other. She lay backwards compliantly, feeling hands wander across her front. They continued in this fashion for a long time, not even noticing when the waitress peeked in on them with a smile, deciding to give them a few more minutes.

They kept everything above the waist, but Rika was still in heaven. If this was just making out, then what would it feel like when they went all the way? The thought made her blush and she drew her fingers up underneath Yossui’s shirt, just below her breasts. The younger girl moaned.

A knock at the door sent them for opposite ends of the couch, trying to smooth out clothes and hair. The waitress entered with a knowing smile, seeming pleased at their flustered expressions. As she set down their orders, she boldly asked, “So, how long have you two been together?”

Yossui stuttered, “Um, well…We, ah….” she trailed off with a blush.

“Six months.” Rika answered cheerfully, over her shock.

The waitress congratulated them and shyly asked for an autograph. The couple happily complied before they dug into their meal. They lovingly fed each other and did other lovey dovey things.

All in all, they were sickeningly sweet. Everyone within a hundred yards got sugar poisoning. But who cares about them?

After paying the check and pulling on their thick coats and oversized hats, the two set out for an after dinner stroll. Basically, they just took a round-about route to Rika’s house, where Yossui would catch a cab from or just stay the night. They childishly swung their clasped hands.

Rika felt the hairs on the back of her neck stand up and spun around, expecting to find someone watching them. There was no one there.

“Rika-chan, are you alright?” her concerned girlfriend asked of her strange behavior.

Glancing around behind her once more, Rika turned and gave a heart felt smile, “Yeah, I’m fine. C’mon, let’s go!” She decided to just forget the feeling.

What you don’t know can’t hurt you. Right?


----Silly Rika. I'm gonna tear you apart and flush you down the toilet... Mwahahaha!

[_Hitomi_]

The waitress entered with a knowing smile, seeming pleased at their flustered expressions. As she set down their orders, she boldly asked, “So, how long have you two been together?”
 
Yossui stuttered, “Um, well…We, ah….” she trailed off with a blush.
 
“Six months.” Rika answered cheerfully, over her shock.
 
The waitress congratulated them and shyly asked for an autograph.

Some1 out of the H!P knows about their relationship? O_O. It's a little dangerous... :S
 
Rika and Yossi are so cute!
I like a lot this fic ^_^

[Mikan]

LOL!!!! OH Gosh! Sorry your after comment about flushing Rika down a toilet made me laugh. I could imagine you going through all your magazines and stuff, tearing out the pages, ripping them into small pieces and with manical laughter - dropping them in the toilet with a flush...

Ok, now to comment on the chapter!
So only one chapter? Thats ok. It was an IshiYoshi one so I'll forgive you ^^

The remark about sugar poisoning was a good one. Very funny. The remark of "Who cares about them" afterwards complimented it. Its one of those small lines in their that, without conciously knowing, makes the story deeper and seem MORE like a story. As if we are being told this by an eye witness. Perhaps the waiter.

That darn waiter, how I envy her! You wrote up Ishikawa as the bold one not holding back on the truth, thats cool. A new change. How does Yossui feel about that?

Savouring their first time is good. Please keep it that way *hides from glares shot by fellow pervs*. The longer you hold out and the more tension/lust you put behind it, the more effective that final moment will be. You obviously know this already so I dont need to tell you anything about that...what I do need to tell you is that if you hold it off for too long ..im going to kill you. And please, if that cookie-filled-day does come..can I request a long (1500 words+) sweet chapter ^_^      Huahahaha!

Im looking forward to finding out who the stalker is ^^

Love of love,
Everyone's favourite Orange fruit

[rndmnwierd]

Shortie chappie now!



Aibon entered the room with a bang, slamming the door behind her. She didn’t notice Mari jump at the noise and began pacing frantically. She had been avoiding her girlfriend since she had overheard her and Rika talking about a week ago, and the guilt had been eating her up inside since. She wanted to apologize, really, but every time she set out to confront Nono, something made her freeze.

Was it her pride? Maybe. Was it fear that the older girl might just be fed up with always being hurt by her? Possibly. Whatever it was, she just couldn’t get past it and it was driving her crazy!

“Argh! What should I do!?” she started pulling at her hair.

“About what?” came the unexpected response from behind her. Startled, Aibon spun around to see Yaguchi staring at her quizzically. Maybe she would know what to do.

“I hurt Nono and I want to say sorry, but I can’t. I just can’t!” Her pacing began anew and her hands were buried in her hair.

“Well, get over it. You did something wrong, you have to fix it.” The short girl put her hands on her hips and frowned.

Kago stopped. That made sense, all she had to do was say two little words and that was it. It was her responsibility and they’d never get anywhere like this. Why had she been worried?

She cheerfully hugged the crazy teen, “Thanks!” and ran out of the room, in search of her girlfriend. Yaguchi just smiled.

---It is dangerous that they got caught...<_< >_> <_< °_°

1500+ words!? Whew. Maybe I will do that Christmas special. I can't post the perv on this site, though, since they are just fifteen.
Lol, your comment is almost as long as my chapter...