Author Topic: Facts of Fiction [Note!!! (not an update ^^;; )] (Read 59738 times)

glcorps2002 · « **Reply #160 on:** March 20, 2007, 11:08:06 PM »

I feel this relationship will not end well, but good luck to those two anyway.

Ame-kun · « **Reply #161 on:** March 20, 2007, 11:28:38 PM »

Omg, I lost all vision from the blood rushing out of my head through my nose.:pen_bleed:
That was extremely sexy, it reminds me of a Kill Bill match.
- 2 hot chicks
- 2 swords (or sword-like weapon that can be used as a sword)
- 1 steamy make-out session (not in Kill Bill but oh the possibilities)

"O the great heavens... sent a poet":ONfarofflook:

I LOVE YOU SAIKAMI!! I'm gonna give you a surprise gift

Though I dont really have any real talent, this is the best I can do for ya ^_^ (I hate drawing hands)

orangesocks · « **Reply #162 on:** March 21, 2007, 04:44:03 AM »

Aww, thank God Aya didn't mean to kill Miki!!! And WOW, your description of the battle was really vivid! :ONluvluv2:

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'The younger turned to face the other with a kind smile. “We’re simply people. Nothing more, nothing less.”'

Horray for Aya's simple logic! After all, love is love! :tfr9a7wg:

JFC · « **Reply #163 on:** March 21, 2007, 05:34:52 AM »

Geez, I was hoping for some angst and crying and melodramatic shit like Miki telling Aya she loves her just as Aya swings the katana for the death blow.

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Oh well, what you got is good too.

At this point, I can see why Aya initially reacted the way she did (i.e. by freaking out and pursuing Miki like a psycho). It was never about her feeling betrayed by Miki. It was just the shock and fear of knowing the person she cared about the most was the one thing she was trained to hate and kill without emotion. Definitely a major emotional struggle on her part. In the end, she had to see if she was strong enough to risk their friendship against her "job", which obviously, she is.

Oooooooooooooh can't wait to see how Reina/Maki/Yuko react when they find out about this.

rndmnwierd · « **Reply #164 on:** March 21, 2007, 05:36:34 AM »

*drools* Xo

ferrar1 · « **Reply #165 on:** March 21, 2007, 06:50:01 AM »

somehow i think there'll be another vampire hunter... right?

iacus · « **Reply #166 on:** March 21, 2007, 08:01:40 AM »

Quote from: Yuuyami;334264

-wedge- xD

HOW THE HELL DO YOU KEEP DOING THAT!?! It's really starting to creep me out.

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. . .Oh right The fic. I really really like the fact you made Eri and Yuko a couple. I also like how you resolved the whole Miki/Aya situation *cough*and how they had sex*cough*Though I can't really tell where your going with the rest of the plot I'll gladly stay along for the ride. Keep up the good work.

YoukaiChica · « **Reply #167 on:** March 21, 2007, 04:13:42 PM »

Whew. I was worried Aya would kill Miki. There were so many close calls and at one point I thought that Miki was just going to see if Aya would really kill her! But I should have known better, shouldn't I? Aya loves her Mikitty even if she is a vampire. And the fight was so amazing. Nicely done, nicely done.

Saikami · « **Reply #168 on:** March 21, 2007, 09:36:57 PM »

Quote from: Ame-kun;334377

Omg, I lost all vision from the blood rushing out of my head through my nose.:pen_bleed:
That was extremely sexy, it reminds me of a Kill Bill match.
- 2 hot chicks
- 2 swords (or sword-like weapon that can be used as a sword)
- 1 steamy make-out session (not in Kill Bill but oh the possibilities)

"O the great heavens... sent a poet":ONfarofflook:

I LOVE YOU SAIKAMI!! I'm gonna give you a surprise gift

Though I dont really have any real talent, this is the best I can do for ya ^_^ (I hate drawing hands)

AWW!! Thank you! :ONluvluv2: It's really cute and good <3 Ah, we all hate drawing hands don't we? But I think it turned out really nice!

C60533 · « **Reply #169 on:** March 21, 2007, 11:37:24 PM »

GAM love! After an awesome fight. So...now that Miki's a happy vampire...she won't try to kill Reina, right?

Ame-kun · « **Reply #170 on:** March 22, 2007, 02:13:21 AM »

I'm glad you loved my fanart :ONshy1: .

JFC · « **Reply #171 on:** March 22, 2007, 05:59:18 AM »

Quote from: C60533;335179

GAM love! After an awesome fight. So...now that Miki's a happy vampire...she won't try to kill Reina, right?

Well, the initial reason why Miki wanted to kill Reina was because Reina let it slip to Aya that Miki was a vampire. Now since that issue has been *ahem*, resolved between Miki and Aya Reina should be in the clear.

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Notice I said "SHOULD BE". Knowing Miki she'll probably have some fun at Reina's expense over it.
:ONwahaha:

black velvet · « **Reply #172 on:** March 22, 2007, 03:52:24 PM »

I had a feeling that all of this aggressive behavior would lead to something spectacular.

I'm pleased that Aya and Miki didn't kill each other, but can a relationship between a hunter and a vampire really last? *thinks back to Buffy*Also, I must say, you should continue writing battle scenes, because they're so awesome and descriptive! I can practically envision everything that happens.

Anywho, wonderful chapter! I'm also wondering where this is going . . .

coachie · « **Reply #173 on:** March 22, 2007, 07:32:13 PM »

phew, I'm relieved they didn't kill each other
anything else I wanted to say has essentially already been said by my fellowreaders (damn you JFC

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Owaranai_sLaVe · « **Reply #174 on:** March 23, 2007, 02:31:28 AM »

WAAAAHHHH THE HEEELLL?! *crying* They were supposed to kill each other! What happened?!?!? They made out (and much more)?! *grumble mumble* Ah sigh.... Of course, I mean, who the hell can resist Miki anyway? *mopes*

Of course Gotou is hot.. if you cover up her face, her body is almost the exact replica of BoA! And BoA's always hot

*although I think she might be a little lighter in complexion than BoA*

-Owaranai_sLaVe

JFC · « **Reply #175 on:** March 23, 2007, 03:41:57 AM »

Quote from: coachie;335664

(damn you JFC )

You gotta be faster coachie!

Ren · « **Reply #176 on:** March 23, 2007, 12:52:16 PM »

Wah Saikami, I finished reading all of the chapters after I got home from university. :baa60776:

I wonder what kind of things Reina wrote in her 80++ chapters of fanfiction. Does it include her pervy dream/imagination about vamp Maki? :ONwriggly:

The pairing of Nakazawa/Kamei has never cross my head. :ONxD:

During the Aya/Miki fight, I imagined Miki with the lolita dress she used for the catwalk

, and Aya in her Sukeban Deka tight outfit. HAWT :ONwriggly:

And I love the Reina comment about how Miki is trying to get into her pants because Miki can't get into Aya's anymore. :ONwahaha:

Ame-kun: Cute drawings :baa60776:

When I was reading through the chapters, I thought "Is Saikami = Yuuyami?

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Can't wait for the next chapters! :ONkneelbow:

00HB · « **Reply #177 on:** April 02, 2007, 02:16:44 AM »

Yo! Back again to reading this post! (now in the new forum xD)
Amazing fight scene! you know... they are called GAM for a reason!

And I lloking forward to see what will happen next!

[Hum.... Maybe Yossie is some kind of sucubu... well... would make scense!]

stefy · « **Reply #178 on:** April 02, 2007, 05:09:05 PM »

woah... interesting fight.. EVEN more interesting ending!
But while reading I was kinda enticipating that Miki would initiate the first kiss tho... darn Aya got to her first
I wonder when Aya changed her mind to NOT kill miki... or did she not wanna kill her from the very start?

joyce · « **Reply #179 on:** April 04, 2007, 01:44:55 AM »

omg, love the action in here! it's really awesome!

reina x maki's love.. . the thoughts inside them are funny!