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Offline Yukari

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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (Things Fall Apart: Part 2 - updated 6/6)
« Reply #140 on: June 07, 2008, 07:34:11 AM »
so moving  :mon cry:

i like how you write...  :mon cry:
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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (Things Fall Apart: Part 2 - updated 6/6)
« Reply #141 on: June 07, 2008, 09:21:28 AM »
sad and sexy is love...

i love sad and sexy...

even Yossui noticed the role reversal...

i love you!!!!
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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (Things Fall Apart: Part 2 - updated 6/6)
« Reply #142 on: June 07, 2008, 10:02:50 AM »
This story was definitely sad but it had romantic happy end :wub:

You know when I wrote that similar thread would be mentioned in my story I had in mind short story told by different person, not Hitomi or Rika but....your fic inspired me and I'll make that story longer...  XD
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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (Things Fall Apart: Part 2 - updated 6/6)
« Reply #143 on: June 07, 2008, 06:08:41 PM »
  :heart:




i love you <--- I've seen this phrase a lot tonight  :)
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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (Things Fall Apart: Part 2 - updated 6/6)
« Reply #144 on: June 07, 2008, 11:50:59 PM »
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I had to keep working...
...If I thought about it, I would have a meltdown and totally fall apart.

This is exactly why I thought Yossy continued to work, some of it was responsability, but a lot of it was to stay numb...

When my little brother was hit by a van, the doctors told us to make funeral arrangements cause he wouldn't make it past wednesday (it happened on sat.). lets just say I know what its like to sob until you feel your insides crushing and you become so weak, but you just can't stop...and then I had to go to work the next day and smile plesently to the customers, the trick is to work so hard that your aching and tired, just for the hope that as long as you're working you don't have to think about what happened, but once the work day is done it all comes rushing back...At that point you really need someone to hold, for me it was my other younger siblings and my Mom (I lived at home during all this)

...mines got a happy ending though, he lived.  that was 8 yrs ago he's 15 now.

so your fic hits home and is super sad to me on sooo many levels...

you really know how to tug the heart strings strawb3rrykream  :cry:

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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (Just an Addict - updated 6/8)
« Reply #145 on: June 09, 2008, 01:26:44 AM »
@Yukari: Thank you! :D
@tru_harmony: Yeah, sad and sexy is a good combo, huh? Love you too! :heart:
@peti-chan: Well, I'm glad I could help then. Can't wait to read it!!!
@kRisZ: Thanks for the love, right back at ya! :heart:
@wings4dreams: Wow, that's so shocking! I'm so sorry your brother was hit by a van. But I'm happy that he survived. Do you think I wrote the emotions ok? I was just thinking about how I would feel. I hope it was accurate. (From your comment, it sounds like it's fairly decent.) I'm sorry if the story brought back any bad memories, though.

Ok, this next one.....isn't really a story. I'm really not sure what it is. I have no idea what I was thinking! XD So this is not too good. But I wanna know what you guys think.
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Just an Addict

I’m addicted to her scent. The sweet, delicate aroma of fruit. It fills my mind as she stands next to me on set.

I love her body. The skin is so smooth, flawless. It’s milky white and tastes like bliss. Her face is my favorite thing. It welcomes me with a smile everyday. That smile is so infectious that I can’t help but smirk when I see it. And I love the mole on her nose. I kiss it and she grins. Her neck is slim and just so kissable. I love to just hold her arms, rubbing up and down and feeling the silky skin. Her breasts, well, they’re perfect. A little small to some people but they really are right for her. And right for me. Her stomach is one of my favorite parts. It’s flat with tiny curves in all the right places. Her belly button is adorable. And as for that area, we won’t go too much into it. But just know, I love every part of her. Her legs are phenomenal. Perfectly shaped for wrapping around me.

I can’t get enough of her touch. Those fingers make me weak and vulnerable. They stroke my stomach and I blush like crazy. Her decorated nails run circles along my back and I moan. It’s insane that she has so much power over me.

Her voice gets me every time. The sound of her saying my name, “Ai-chan” sends shivers of pleasure down my spine. When I have trouble sleeping, she sings “Koe” to me. It melts my heart and sends my mind reeling into a fantasy land. Her moans and gasps turn me on. Just the sweet angelic tone relaxes my body and mind.

My name is Takahashi Ai and I am addicted to Niigaki Risa.
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The end sentence is supposed to sound like those AA (Alcoholics Anonymous) or whatever meetings.  XD
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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (Just an Addict - updated 6/8)
« Reply #146 on: June 09, 2008, 03:11:11 AM »
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And I love the mole on her nose.

teehee i know who this is :gmon sing:
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Her decorated nails run circles along my back and I moan. It’s insane that she has so much power over me.

 :mon inluv: yup its definitly HER so that means that the narrator is...
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sound of her saying my name, “Ai-chan”


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My name is Takahashi Ai and I am addicted to Niigaki Risa.


Hi I'm takagakifan and im addicted to Ai being addicted to Risa :P
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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (Just an Addict - updated 6/8)
« Reply #147 on: June 09, 2008, 06:01:00 AM »
sweet!!!!  :luvluv1:

i love them!!

waiting a update!!
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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (Just an Addict - updated 6/8)
« Reply #148 on: June 09, 2008, 06:52:17 AM »
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My name is Takahashi Ai and I am addicted to Niigaki Risa.
WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOT!!! :rockon:
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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (Just an Addict - updated 6/8)
« Reply #149 on: June 09, 2008, 09:50:32 AM »
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Her voice gets me every time. The sound of her saying my name, “Ai-chan” sends shivers of pleasure down my spine. When I have trouble sleeping, she sings “Koe” to me. It melts my heart and sends my mind reeling into a fantasy land. Her moans and gasps turn me on. Just the sweet angelic tone relaxes my body and mind.

My name is Takahashi Ai and I am addicted to Niigaki Risa.
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just reading that made me miss my rabu-rabu... i think a lot of us will be Just an Addict to this one... (pun intended...:lol:)
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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (Just an Addict - updated 6/8)
« Reply #150 on: June 09, 2008, 05:09:42 PM »
Haha. That last one was really good. I think we are all addicted to TakaGaki :D
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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (Just an Addict - updated 6/8)
« Reply #151 on: June 09, 2008, 05:16:49 PM »
YAY~
TAKAGAKI!...

My name is Takahashi Ai and I am addicted to Niigaki Risa. DANG..i really love this line..  :wub:

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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (Just an Addict - updated 6/8)
« Reply #152 on: June 09, 2008, 06:11:12 PM »
Sweet and sexy addiction  :twisted: and the last line was just priceless... :wub:
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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (Just an Addict - updated 6/8)
« Reply #153 on: June 09, 2008, 07:49:35 PM »
another great work read! i can't get enough of your short stories!  :wub:
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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (Just Fine - updated 6/12)
« Reply #154 on: June 12, 2008, 06:08:04 PM »
@takagakifan - Your post made me smile.
@Yukari - TAKAGAKI FOREVER!!!!
@JFC - Your posts always make me laugh!
@tru_harmony - Bring back your RABU-RABU!!!! The pun made me :lol: Oh, and I always mis-type your nick at first. It always comes out as tru_haromny!
@Lolli - I think you're right... :P
@ringo-hime - The last line basically makes the whole story.
@peti-chan - The addiction is taking over us all.... XD And we love it!
@shadowolf8 - Thanks so much!

This story is kinda cute. A little weird, though. I was inspired by the MC at the Bon Kyu Bon Kyu BOMB concert with our Takagaki. The way Gaki-san was talking made me think of them as parents caring for these kids!
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Just Fine

   “Mama!”, screeched Kusumi Koharu, “Sayu took the last noodles!” Michishige Sayumi looked at the other girl and stuck her tongue out. The pair continued making faces at each other until Niigaki Risa finally came in to intervene. “Sayu, you need to share with Koharu” she scolded, “And Koharu, you need to calm down.”
    Risa returned to her seat, in the large recreation room at their office, next to Takahashi Ai. “I hope we’re taking care of them right”, she told her best friend, “I mean, we’re not Yossy and Mikitty” Ai looked at Risa and grabbed her hand. “Don’t worry, I think we’re doing just fine”, she smiled. Before she could finish her sentence, another cry was heard.
    “Papa!!”, came the shout of Tanaka Reina. Ai rolled her eyes and got up. She followed the voice to the far corner of room. Reina was sitting with Kamei Eri who was holding her hand and crying. “What’s wrong, you two?”, Ai asked, now worried. “I accidentally knocked over a glass of water while we were playing Wii”, Reina began, “I told Eri not to touch them but she tried to clean it up and cut herself.” “Both of you need to be more careful”, Ai told them. She proceeded to send Eri over to Risa to get bandaged up and cleaned up the glass herself.
   When both leaders finally returned to their seats, they looked at each other and smiled. “We’re doing just fine”, they whispered to each other as they watched their kouhai play around together.
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Damn, I didn't realize how short this one is! :lol:
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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (Just Fine - updated 6/12)
« Reply #155 on: June 12, 2008, 06:22:18 PM »
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awww that's so f-*** cute  :wub:

The children should let their mama and papa have some private time  :roll:
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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (Just Fine - updated 6/12)
« Reply #156 on: June 12, 2008, 06:27:16 PM »
Ai-chan as daddy and Risa as mommy  :on lol:

Quote from: AmberSan on June 12, 2008, 06:22:18 PM
The children should let their mama and papa have some private time  :roll:

Totally agree  :twisted:
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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (Just Fine - updated 6/12)
« Reply #157 on: June 12, 2008, 06:30:13 PM »
LOL.
that was fun to read!! ^^

haha more private time for papa and mama..  :twisted: :twisted:
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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (Just Fine - updated 6/12)
« Reply #158 on: June 12, 2008, 07:45:19 PM »
awww that was cute!!!  :wub: lol
i agree papa and mama need more alone time  :D
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Re: strawb3rrykream's notebook (Just Fine - updated 6/12)
« Reply #159 on: June 13, 2008, 12:04:56 AM »
my grandfather was right... kids (or "kids" in this case) is the roots of all problems...

mama and papa should do just fine...
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