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Re: This Thing Called Love(UPDATE 1/1)
« Reply #120 on: January 02, 2009, 09:35:13 PM »
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I fight against my strong desire to just do her right here on the table. Ok, that’s a very…hot image. I don’t need that right now.

You're right Reina... really...  really hot image... *starts imagining those two... OMFG.  :mon spit: :mon bleed2: :mon blood: :mon blood:*     I wouldn't have fight over that, JUST DO IT! XDDDDDD


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I let her go and take my deformed looking cup. I touch my lips. They tingle and burn from our lips touching. It felt good and the only thing I can think about is kissing her again.

I'm waiting for the next kiss~~ HOHOOH!!! Maybe in Ai's PARTY? HOHOOOOOO

GANBARE! CAN'T WAIT!!! >/////< *starts imagining again those two... doing... :mon blood: * hahaha XD




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« Reply #121 on: January 03, 2009, 12:27:53 AM »
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This is it? She’s not going to pull away is she? Then I feel it. Her lips touching mine and I kiss her back. Her lips are so soft against mine.

Looks like third time's the charm after all :D

Once again, I'm horrible when it comes to commenting, but I've been reading since day one and loving it since. TanaKame is one of my favorite pairings, I can never stay away from good story with them in it. :lol: They're just so cute together! Can't wait to see what happens at Ai's party. :D

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Re: This Thing Called Love(UPDATE 1/1)
« Reply #122 on: January 03, 2009, 12:36:52 AM »
thanks everyone. The next chapter should be soon. And yay a new reader?! Thank you for reading and commenting. I hope to hear from you again on the next chapter.

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« Reply #123 on: January 03, 2009, 04:02:23 AM »
CHAPTER 17


“Happy birthday Takahashi-san!” Koharu wails, she the first to give Ai a hug

She always seems happy and hyper in the mornings. Where does she get it? I would normally smack someone who came yelling to me all cheery. The yelling doesn’t bother Ai, but she does has on a scowl at the mention of her birthday again. She really hates it I guess. But it’ll change when she sees the party tonight. I’m a little excited myself. I hope school goes by quick. Risa gives Ai a kiss instead of a hug, but it’s not one of those “quick” kind of kisses. They’re really going at it and they don’t seem to want to stop either. I clear my throat. They break apart smiling, sheepishly.

“Happy birthday Ai-chan.” Eri says next and gives her a quick hug.

Sayu even gives her a hug and I’m surprised she didn’t grab her butt when she hugged her. Maybe she’s scared of what Risa might do to you if she sees. I don’t blame her though. Risa looks like she’ll kill you if you look at Ai the wrong way.  It’s best to get on her good side I think. I’m the last one to give her a hug and it’s very brief.

“Cheer up. Birthday’s aren’t that bad you know.” I say to her after I hug her.

The bell rings and everyone scatters for class. I can’t wait until after school. Things are really going to get fun.

 ***

During my math class I got a text. It was a good thing I had it the volume down and put it on vibrate. I would have been in so much trouble if the teacher heard it. I wonder who could it be? No one text me during classes, it must be important. I check to see if the teacher isn’t looking and I pull my cell out of my backpack and flip it open. It's Risa.

-Come to my place at six-

I go to reply.

-I don’t know where you live-

I wait for her to reply. It didn’t take long for her to respond.

-Walk to my place with Eri. She knows where it is-

That works for me.

-Ok-

There are no replies after that. I’ll have to catch Eri before I leave. I’ll have to get my gift first too before I leave with her. I close my phone and put it back into my book bag. Can math go ANY slower and get anymore boring?! The damn bell should just ring already.

 ***

By the time it was last period, I was practically bouncing in my seat. The bell was going to ring in about a minute and even that felt like one hour. I couldn’t wait to get out of here! I stare at the clock intensely, watching each second go by. Since when were clocks really slow?! I rapidly tap my fingers against the table waiting and watching. Come on! Come on! Then it rings. YES! I grab my bag and run out. Finally! Now all I need to do is put all my books in my locker and I’m out of here.

“Hey Reina.”

I continue to put my books in my locker.

“Hey, Eri. You’re just the person I wanted to see.”

I close the door and face her. She has on this big goofy smile after I said that. She still looks cute with that look on her.

“What’s wrong?”

“I don’t know where Risa’s place is so I was hoping we could walk there together. She told me to be at her place by six. I’ll need to get my gift and change first.”

“I can take you there. No problem!” She does a salute.

I laugh. She’s a little bit of a dork, but it’s still very cute.

“Ok meet me at my house at six. I’ll see you.” I smile and walk out the building.

I’ll just have to tell my uncle about the party so he won’t wonder where I am for a few hours. I’m not going to stay out too late. It’s a school day still.

 ***

Everything is set. My uncle agreed to let me go to the party and it took me a while to settle with an outfit, but I finally made up my mind. I decided to go for a black long sleeved shirt that leaves my shoulders exposed at the neck opening, blue denim shorts, and black heels that go up to my knees. My hair is up in pigtails still. I look myself over one more time in the mirror and go out my room to put my present in a gift bag. I really hope she likes it. There’s a knock at my door when I’m done. That’s Eri. I grab my coat and open the door.

“Hey, you’re ready to go?” She smiles

“Yeah, I’m all set. Let’s hurry before we’re too late.”

I step out and lock the door. As we walk down the hall, she suddenly grabs my hand. I’m a little surprised at the action. Are we going out? Or is this just a friend thing? None of this has ever been confirmed. I think we should talk about it later. I close my hand around hers and keep walking. Holding her hand like this makes me feel so happy inside. It’s hard to describe. It’s not that type of happy you get when you hug a friend or your parents, this is…special.

 ***

“I’m glad you could make it! I was wondering where you two went. Come inside.” Risa smiles and steps aside to let us in. She takes our coats and hangs them into a near by closet.

Inside, the place is packed and music is blaring and everyone dancing or chatting. I turn around to Risa and point to my present.

“Just put that on the back table over here.” She points behind the crowd.

I squint. It’s pretty dim in here to see. I squeeze Eri’s hand to get her attention. I motion for her to walk with me toward the back table. She holds on to my hand and we squeeze through the crowd to get at the end. I’m careful to not lose the grip on my bag. If it broke I would be so pissed. We finally reach the table and I put it down with the other pile of gifts Ai has. I wonder when she’ll come.

“Hey you both came!” Sayu greets us. Koharu is next to her. “You’re looking good Reina.” She looks me up and down. I blush and look away. She still likes to embarrass me I see.

“You both look pretty. This’ll be so fun! I can’t wait to surprise Takahashi-san.” Koharu adds in, changing the subject.

“When will she come?”

Koharu scratches her head and thinks it over. Then she shrugs.

“I’m not sure, but I think she will be here soon.”

“Come get a drink with me!” Sayu yells to me

And she suddenly grabs me by the hand and pulls me. I lose the grip around Eri’s hand as I go stumbling forward. She’s pretty strong. I look back to Eri for help. She only looks at me lost. She looks a little…sad. I try to break free from Sayu’s grip, but she’s just too damn strong. Damn it! I didn’t want to worry about not be groped 24/7!  But I’m stuck with her, until I get the chance to run away that is. So I stop fighting her and go with her. I have a feeling though she’s not going to leave me alone and something bad is going to happen the more I stay around her. She stops at the snack table and pours a drink. I look around for anyone to save me. They’re all too busy doing something. Crap!

“Here, try some, it’s good.” She offers me a different cup.

I take it and eye her wearily. Did she do something to the punch? She just gives me one of her sweet smiles and bats her eyes lashes. She’s starting to creep me out. I shrug and take a sip from the cup anyway. It isn’t so bad. I guess she didn’t spike it then. I drink the whole thing. She then clings to my arm and grins at me. I go stiff.

“Uh…can I…go now?” I ask, being blunt

She pouts.

“You don’t want to talk with me?”

“Um…it’s not that it’s just…I kind of um…”

Ok I have no lie to say to save my ass. I’m stuck with her. Anything saving me right about now would do! I begin to look around franticly.

“Hey Reina I didn’t know you were here!”

I sigh. It was Yossie. Thank god, I can always count on her to save me. I think…
I smile and pull her towards me. She looks at me a little surprise. I plead to her with my eyes to get me away from Sayu. She smiles and chuckles. I think she got the message.

“Umm…I think Risa needs your help with the cake. Come on I’ll show you the way.”

I thank her silently and quickly follow her away from Sayu. I owe her big time! When we get through the crowd she turns around.

“Thank you! I thought I would never get away from her!” I cry

Yossie laughs. I frown at her. It isn’t so funny! I thought I would never get out of that hellhole. She just keeps laughing.

“Next time try and stay away from her if you don’t want to be around Sayu.”

“Hey she was the one that pulled me with her! She’s surprisingly strong.” I protest

“Reina, you’ve beat up three guys by yourself and you can’t get away from a girl?”

I’m glare at her.

“Whatever.” I mumble and walk away.

I can go back to Eri now. If only I could find her that is. It’s hard to see anything in here. Where could she have gone? Maybe I should check the kitchen. I turn back around and head towards the kitchen door. When I reach the door I can hear voices, but I can’t tell who’s they are. I push the door back and walk through. Risa and Eri are on the island table trying to add the final touches to Ai’s cake.

“There you are. I was looking for you.” Risa says

She puts the last candle on the cake and stops messing around with it.

“I needed help with the cake, but Eri helped me. It’s fine now. This is the last time I get a cake at the last minute. It wasn’t really a smart idea. Where were you?”

“Trying to get away from Sayu.” I grumble

She laughs.

“She seems to really like you. She isn’t normally this persistent to get the girl she wants.”

I shake my head.

“She’s not my type.” I answer quickly.

“Well you’re the first to reject her. I wonder how she’ll take that.” Risa frowns, worried

Ok now Sayu worries me even more. I’m definitely staying away from her! Then Risa’s cell starts to ring. She takes out her cell from her pocket and reads the caller ID screen.

“It’s Ai.” She announces

Maybe she’ll be coming over soon! Then we can get the party going. I motion for Eri to follow me out the kitchen so we can give Risa privacy. She quickly comes to my side and holds my hand again. It feels so much better having her hold my hand than Sayu. As we walk to the couch to take a seat we bump into Rika.

“Reina, Eri, it’s good to see you again. How are you two, better I hope?” She looks at us concern

“We’re fine. Thank you for saving us.”

She smiles.

“I’m glad you’re both ok. I have to go. You haven’t seen Yossie anywhere have you?”

“No, sorry.” Eri answers for me

Rika smiles and walks away, searching for Yossie. I got back to going for the couch to sit on. When will Ai get here already? Just as we sit down, the music is turned down and it’s silent. The living room lights flicker on and all eyes are on Risa, who’s standing in the middle of the room.

“Ai will be here any minute. Everyone go hide!” She yells

And everyone goes ducking for cover. I take Eri with me and hide behind the couch. Risa then shuts off the lights and hides. So we’re all waiting for Ai to just come in here and then we surprise her. I can’t wait. The lock clicks and the doorknob starts jingling. She opens the door, turns on the lights, and everyone jumps out yelling “Surprise.” She kind of reacts differently; she ends up screaming this man-ish kind of scream. I look at Eri and she laughs. I didn’t think she would have such a deep scream like that? I look back at Ai. She looks angry. This wasn’t what I had in mind. Risa comes over and gives her a kiss on the cheek then a hug. That calms her down a little.

“Uh…thank you everyone. It’s nice of you to throw a party for me.” Ai says. The crowd shouts and cheers.

Risa goes back to turning on the music and everything is back to normal. I go over to Ai to greet her. Eri comes with me. I hope she isn’t mad about us scaring the hell out of her.

“Happy birthday Ai. I hope you don’t mind the surprise party.” I tell her

She smiles and pulls me into a hug.

“I’m not…too mad. Thank you for the party.” She smiles

“I hope you’ll like our presents.” Eri adds in

“I’m sure I will.”

Eri gets happy when she says that. She’s too cute sometimes.

  ***

I spend the rest of the night avoiding Sayu and talking to Yossie and the others for a while. I meet another new friend when I was talking to them. Her name’s Matsuura Aya. I think Miki has some type of crush on her, she was actually acting nice when she was around. But Aya wasn’t being so nice, to Miki that is. I think she likes Miki, but she’s just playing hard to get. Those two are pretty funny together too. After a while I excused myself for a drink. All this talking is making me thirsty. I went to the snack table and get a cup and fill it with juice. Things are turning out great tonight.

“Reinaaaa!”

Or not. I slowly turn around. It’s Sayu again. In a second she’s holding my arm in a death grip again. I back up the most I could with her still holding on to my arm. This is not going to turn out good. I have no one to help me out of this again either.

“Uh…hi. Is there something you want?”

I shouldn’t have said that. She has on this evil smirk. Did I mention she scares me? I’m sure I have a bunch of times. Just count the times I’ve said that and times it by ten. THAT’S how scare I am right now! She nods at me. I tug to get my arm free, but it doesn’t budge. In fact, she pulls me closer to her. She has this weird glow in her eyes. I really need to get out of here. But she’s not letting me. Oh crap.

“I need to talk to you.” She grins

“Um…ok. What it…”

And in a second she kisses me. My eyes open wide. Holy freaking crap! This wasn’t what I had in mind! I freeze in shock. This was not what I expected nor something I wanted! She pulls away and I look at her freaked. I rub the back of my head and look down. I really don’t know what to say. Then someone comes running and bumps into me. I turn around. But I knew who it was and I begin to panic. It was Eri. Damn it! I go after her to the door, but when I step outside she’s already gone. This is not good. I have to talk to her. I have to tell her it’s not what she thinks it is. As old as that sounds it’s the truth. Why is she even acting like that anyway? It’s not like we’re dating. But I still feel that I have to tell her. She’s probably out somewhere crying. I feel so bad inside when I think that. I have to talk to her!
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Re: This Thing Called Love(UPDATE 1/2)
« Reply #124 on: January 03, 2009, 04:42:00 AM »
OH NOES. :OMG: Sayu broke the TanaKamei rabu rabu. T~T Just when it was getting good, too. *insert depressed sigh here*

Oh, and some stuff I noticed:
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Risa goes back to turning on the music and everything is back to normal. I go over to Ai to greet her. Eri comes with me. I hope she isn’t made about us scaring the hell out of her.

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“I’m not…too made. Thank you for the party.” She smiles
Looks like you meant "mad". That's the only thing I caught though, since I didn't look too far in depth. Those two just kinda stuck out. Good chapter! ;)

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Re: This Thing Called Love(UPDATE 1/2)
« Reply #125 on: January 03, 2009, 05:03:54 AM »
thanks. Sorry about that *blushes*

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« Reply #126 on: January 03, 2009, 07:04:23 AM »
No worries, we all make typos. :) I notice that I do as well, but no one ever tells me 'til I find them myself. :sweatdrop:

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« Reply #127 on: January 03, 2009, 09:21:47 AM »
CHAPTER 17

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“Happy birthday Takahashi-san!” Koharu wails, she the first to give Ai a hug

She always seems happy and hyper in the mornings.
Is there any time when she's not? :P



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The yelling doesn’t bother Ai, but she does has on a scowl at the mention of her birthday again. She really hates it I guess. But it’ll change when she sees the party tonight.
Let's hope so. It would really suck if Aichan walked into it and was upset.



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During my math class I got a text. It was a good thing I had it the volume down and put it on vibrate. I would have been in so much trouble if the teacher heard it.
You know what? It can get really annoying when I have to keep reminding students to put their phones on silent/vibe-mode. If it's a first offense I'll usually let it slide, but seriously, how hard is it to remember to do that?  :-\



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It's Risa.

-Come to my place at six-

I go to reply.

-I don’t know where you live-

I wait for her to reply. It didn’t take long for her to respond.

-Walk to my place with Eri. She knows where it is-

That works for me.

-Ok-
Hey, getting to spend time with Eri. How would that NOT work for her? :D



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I’ll just have to tell my uncle about the party so he won’t wonder where I am for a few hours. I’m not going to stay out too late. It’s a school day still.
Yeah, that would probably be a good idea. He's shown incredible trust in Reina, so it's the least she can do.



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I decided to go for a black long sleeved shirt that leaves my shoulders exposed at the neck opening, blue denim shorts, and black heels that go up to my knees. My hair is up in pigtails still. I look myself over one more time in the mirror and go out my room to put my present in a gift bag. I really hope she likes it.
Reina's got tissues to take care of the drool, right? Better make it the good quality stuff, since she's probably going to be drooling over Eri's outfit just as much as Eri's gonna be drooling over her outfit. :twisted:



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I step out and lock the door. As we walk down the hall, she suddenly grabs my hand. I’m a little surprised at the action. Are we going out? Or is this just a friend thing? None of this has ever been confirmed. I think we should talk about it later. I close my hand around hers and keep walking. Holding her hand like this makes me feel so happy inside. It’s hard to describe. It’s not that type of happy you get when you hug a friend or your parents, this is…special.
Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee... :wub:



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“I’m glad you could make it! I was wondering where you two went. Come inside.” Risa smiles and steps aside to let us in.
Oh, they took their sweet time getting there? ;D



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I squint. It’s pretty dim in here to see.

...

“Hey you both came!” Sayu greets us. Koharu is next to her. “You’re looking good Reina.” She looks me up and down. I blush and look away. She still likes to embarrass me I see.
Oh I'm sure Sayu doesn't mind the low lighting, eh?  O0



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“Come get a drink with me!” Sayu yells to me

And she suddenly grabs me by the hand and pulls me. I lose the grip around Eri’s hand as I go stumbling forward. She’s pretty strong. I look back to Eri for help. She only looks at me lost. She looks a little…sad. I try to break free from Sayu’s grip, but she’s just too damn strong. Damn it! I didn’t want to worry about not be groped 24/7!
  :shocked:

If it was Eri doing the groping, she probably wouldn't mind.  :grin:



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*YOSSI SAVES REINA FROM SAYU GROPAGE*
Reina = :kneelbow:
Yossi = :bigdeal:



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“I needed help with the cake, but Eri helped me. It’s fine now. This is the last time I get a cake at the last minute. It wasn’t really a smart idea. Where were you?”

“Trying to get away from Sayu.” I grumble

...

“Well you’re the first to reject her. I wonder how she’ll take that.” Risa frowns, worried
Uh oh. You know what they say about wanting things that you're told you can't have.  :shocked:



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She opens the door, turns on the lights, and everyone jumps out yelling “Surprise.” She kind of reacts differently; she ends up screaming this man-ish kind of scream. I look at Eri and she laughs. I didn’t think she would have such a deep scream like that?
The manly scream is the Aichan speciality.
:on lol:



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I meet another new friend when I was talking to them. Her name’s Matsuura Aya. I think Miki has some type of crush on her, she was actually acting nice when she was around. But Aya wasn’t being so nice, to Miki that is. I think she likes Miki, but she’s just playing hard to get. Those two are pretty funny together too.
WOOOOOOOOOO!!! Potential GAM! :rockon:



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“Reinaaaa!”

Or not. I slowly turn around. It’s Sayu again. In a second she’s holding my arm in a death grip again. I back up the most I could with her still holding on to my arm. This is not going to turn out good. I have no one to help me out of this again either.
Oh boy.
:mon scare:



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And in a second she kisses me. My eyes open wide. Holy freaking crap! This wasn’t what I had in mind! I freeze in shock. This was not what I expected nor something I wanted! She pulls away and I look at her freaked. I rub the back of my head and look down. I really don’t know what to say. Then someone comes running and bumps into me. I turn around. But I knew who it was and I begin to panic. It was Eri. Damn it! I go after her to the door, but when I step outside she’s already gone. This is not good. I have to talk to her. I have to tell her it’s not what she thinks it is.
OSHIT!!!
:OMG:

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Re: This Thing Called Love(UPDATE 1/2)
« Reply #128 on: January 03, 2009, 01:33:32 PM »
awww.
Ai-sama's parteh! love the manly scream.!!  :rofl:

TanaKame~  :wub:

SAYU!  :ptam-glow: evil. she's my fave chara!!  :ptam-shy: so evil.

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« Reply #129 on: January 03, 2009, 02:53:30 PM »
Ai-chan  scream  XD XD

Sayu evil  :twisted: , luck that Reina lost its first kiss for Eri  ;) , Reina runs behind Eri and to explain that one was misunderstanding, and says what you feel when this to close of she  :wub: .

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« Reply #130 on: January 03, 2009, 08:18:11 PM »
CHAPTER 18

After that I just couldn’t stay at the party. I was too bothered with Eri storming out. All I could think about was her. I tried to cheer up and try and stay until the end of the party. I just couldn’t. I was sulking the whole time I was here. I stood clear away from Sayu since then too. If she had the nerves to come to me, I swear she’s going to be sorry! Everyone knew I was angry. They didn’t bother to come near me. That’s probably a smart thing. But Koharu on the other hand thought it was ok to sit next to me. She has on this very serious face. Unlike her usually perky smile. I think she’s worried about me. Somehow, seeing her like that, I don’t get angry with her or try to take my anger out on her, I calm down. Just a little. Her large innocent eyes bore into mine. I try my best to give her a smile, but it fails. She looks down upset. She must have something on her mind, but she’s afraid to say it.

“Tanaka-san?” She suddenly speaks

We’re back to formalities now? I guess she’s just being careful to not piss me off. I look at her, waiting for her to say something else.

“You don’t have to worry about Kamei-san. She’ll be upset, but I know that she really cares for you and will forgive you. Just…give her, her space ok?”

She goes back to playing with her fingers and staring at her feet. I guess that’s not all she has on her mind.

“What is it? You can tell me.” I coax

“Do you…like Michishige-san?”

That one got me by surprise. I thought she would ask me something more important, but I guess this is to her. Sometimes she’s just a little strange. But that question gets me thinking. I was kind of repulsed that she kissed me, but when Eri did, I felt my insides melt into mush. I even wanted to kiss her again. Sayu…I didn’t even want the first kiss with her to happen! I’m still not sure how I should answer Koharu’s question though. I scratch the back of my head. Ok screw the thinking! I’m going to just say what I feel and whatever comes out; that’ll be that!

“No, I don’t.” I honestly reply

Koharu perks up again. That’s strange. I raise a brow.

“Why? Do YOU like Sayu?”

She sits up stiff and her eyes go wide. She shakes her head. I can see her cheeks turn a light shade of pink.

“N-no!”

Ok…that wasn’t in the slightest way smooth or easily pulled off. She turns away. Her blush is getting brighter. She goes completely silent. Well that explains a lot about her acting all-weird when she’s near Sayu. I pat her on the shoulder and get up.

“I’m going home. I’ll see you later. And tell Sayu about your feelings, maybe she might like you back.” I tell her before I leave.

I couldn’t stay around here anymore. I had too much on my mind to enjoy myself. Tomorrow I’ll have to talk to Eri and that’s if she LETS me. She really looked like she was hurt when she just ran away like that. And man could she run! I go to say bye to Risa, but it looks like she’s too busy making out with Ai.

“Uh…guys?”

They don’t move. I clear my throat loudly several times. They desperately need a room. Risa looks over Ai’s shoulder and blushes. At least she has some decency. Ai on the other hand looks really annoyed that I interrupted them. She has this strange look in her eyes too.

“I’m gonna go!” I yell over the music

Risa pushes Ai back to get through from being pinned against the wall and her. She’s still trying to be a good host. Ai seems to only notice and see, Risa.

“You’re leaving so soon?! Why? We haven’t even cut the cake yet.” She sounds upset to see me go

“I have to get home before my uncle gets mad. I’ll see you tomorrow. And happy birthday Ai.” I say to her one last time and wave.

She’s too busy with Risa to say anything back. Why can’t she wait until AFTER the party to ravage her girlfriend? Risa waves at me and I go straight out the door. Going home won’t do much for me. I won’t be able to sleep, because I’ll be thinking about Eri all night, but at least I have some things to keep me busy. I’ll play with Yuka or talk to my uncle. What would he say if I told him what’s bothering me?! Would he kick me out when he knows about the whole Eri and me thing? We’re MORE than just friends I know that. Will he tell my parents?! What would THEY think?! Gah! So many things could happen and none of them are looking too good either. Maybe I won’t tell him.


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Every since the incident at Ai’s party, Eri wasn’t talking to me. She didn’t say hello to me or hang around the others a lot either because of me. It’s been almost a week and she STILL isn’t talking to me! I felt horrible. I wasn’t my normal self. I wouldn’t hang out with Ai and the others after school. I would go straight home and sulk. I needed to talk to Eri. So I decided after school I would go to her house. Well…I was still kind of debating about that. I didn’t want to seem like I was corning her. Maybe I should ask Ai and Risa for help now since we’re at lunch. I poke around at my food inside my bento and look at them from across the table.

“Risa, Ai, can I ask you a question?” I quietly ask

It felt weird what I was going to ask them, but it was a good thing Koharu and Sayu weren’t here. I wonder where they were anyway. They usually are never late to lunch. Maybe they had class work to make up. Eri well…I knew why she wasn’t showing up.

“Sure go ahead.” Risa agrees

Ai looks at me then goes back to eating. She seems more focused on her food than hearing what I have to say.

“How long have you two been together?”

Ai’s head shoots up from her food. I shouldn’t have asked that. I look at my food and push the rice around some more.

“We’ve been together for two years.” Risa answers, easily

Wow. Two years?! That’s a LONG time! How could someone last THAT long?!
“Um…how did you know that you uh…that you two…”

“How did we know that we had feelings for each other?” Ai finishes for me

I nod. This seems harder than I thought to come with them for advice. I feel stupid for asking them such questions. I hope they aren’t too personal. Risa places a hand on Ai’s and has on this dreamy smile. She looks at Ai for a second then back at me. Ai has on a little smile too.

“At first I didn’t want to admit it to myself that I was in love with her. We were best friends before we started dating. I was worried that I would mess up our friendship if I told her. I also couldn’t tell if she liked me back.” Risa explains

That’s kind of how I am now with Eri, just minus the “us being best friends” thing.

“When did you realize it was ok to uh…have those feelings for her?”

Ai raised a brow.

“You’re full of questions aren’t you?” She chuckles “Do these questions have anything to do with you and Eri?”

They caught me. I scratch the top of my head and look aside me. And I thought I was being secretive about that.

“It’s ok if you have feelings for her Reina. You love who you love.” Risa encourages

“Yeah. Besides, I think you two will be cute together.” Ai adds in

I feel myself blushing.

“But to answer your question. I knew that it was ok when I went over her house one day to finally tell Ai how I felt. I told her everything even though I knew the risk of being rejected.”

I focus back to the story. I can see the love struck look in Risa’s eyes as she tells me how it happened. She really loves Ai. She always seems so happy around her too. And Ai seems the happiest when she’s  around Risa. It’s really cute.

“What happened after that?”

Hey I’m really curious now! They don’t have to go into detail about it. I would be HAPPY if they skipped the details! I don’t need the scarring.

“Well, she kissed me. And that was the end of that. We’ve been dating since then.” Risa smiles up at Ai and leans in to give her a quick kiss on the lips. Ai smiles and looks into her eyes. Risa turns away and goes back to me.

“I don’t know if this helps you with anything, but I think that if I didn’t tell Ai my true feelings who KNOWS who she could have been with. And I would have been very unhappy.”

It does help me actually. Ai nods agreeing with whatever Risa is saying. She really isn’t much of a talker when it comes to lunch huh?

“You should go to Eri. She might be angry with you, but if you go and tell her how much you love her, I’m sure that will change things. She could use something good in her life too since she’s going through so much at home.” Ai says

I reach over the table and hug them both at the same time. This really helped me a lot. I feel so much better. I’ve made up my mind. I’m going to visit Eri right after school. And from there I hope she can let me explain that Sayu kissed ME and not the other way around.

“Thank you.” I say, and let them go.

“No problem. We were wondering when one of you would come to us for advice. We knew it would come sooner or later. After you two were done trying to deny it to yourselves that is.” Ai laughs

I sit back into my chair and take a bite from my bento. I feel a lot happier now and less afraid. I also feel at peace with myself. I’m done fighting what I really feel. I’m just going to go with what first comes to my mind.

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Re: This Thing Called Love(UPDATE 1/3)
« Reply #131 on: January 03, 2009, 09:41:09 PM »
Takagaki encouraging Reina :mon yeah:, Koha likes Sayu, Eri without speaking with Reina almost per one week, she must be very angry.  :mon curtain:
Reina are determining to confess yours  feelings for Eri. I wait anxiously for the next chapter.  :on lol:
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Re: This Thing Called Love(UPDATE 1/3)
« Reply #132 on: January 03, 2009, 10:45:06 PM »
TakaGaki with their... *cough* experience. Go talk with Eri, Reina!! *cheers on Reina*

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« Reply #133 on: January 03, 2009, 10:46:18 PM »
No TANAKAME kiss in the party U_______U  owwwwww >__<

TakaGaki is too cute XD

I feel so sorry for Eri... but well,,,, Reina really have to confess to her,,, and clear up things...

Ganbatte Reina~~ ERI!! FORGIVE HER T_T XD kill sayu. XDDDDDDD


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« Reply #134 on: January 03, 2009, 11:06:32 PM »
Bah >< how can one person make me feel so many emotions at the same time...
I wanted to comment on the last one, but before I knew it, another chapter came up

LOL About time Tanakacchi asked for advice from Takahashi and Niigaki-san XD
It helps to move things along nicely =P

Michishige is just so.. insane (mind you I think Michishige is really funny in here) XD and I figured this would happen sooner or later as well
but could Eri not see the position they were in? I'm pretty sure Tanakacchi definitely seemed like the one the kiss was forced upon
but I guess Eri was so shocked by it that she didn't even consider to look at it carefully and think

Woo~ Mikitty and Ayaya!! XD
Tanakacchi owes Yossy quite abit though :P she's always getting saved by her one way or another

So... the lunch time that Michishige and Koharu happened to disappear.. wouldn't happen to have something along the lines of Koharu confessing would it? Well if it does, that means there's one less person off Tanakacchi's back XD
but who knows if Michishige would actually agree though, there's nothing hinting that Michishige likes Koharu that way or is even that close with her.

Takahashi is as untalkitive as always ^^; Niigaki-san is awesome for trying to be a good host though
(I'm totally jumping around here, sorry)

Eri Eri Eri Eri Eri =_____________=" listen to Tanakacchi >_> I hope things go well for the next chapter!
You're amazing to be able to update so fast!

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Re: This Thing Called Love(UPDATE 1/3)
« Reply #135 on: January 04, 2009, 04:32:44 AM »
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You're amazing to be able to update so fast!

Lol well the story is finally getting to the good parts so they're much easier to write. Also i pre-plan and pre-write every chapter. So that helps. I'll try and put the next chapter tomorrow keep a look out for it.

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lmao she's not that bad now! You'll see lol

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but who knows if Michishige would actually agree though, there's nothing hinting that Michishige likes Koharu that way or is even that close with her.

All I have to say is wait and see. hehe and i will say no more. lol

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« Reply #136 on: January 04, 2009, 06:03:04 AM »
HUzzuh for Sayu kissing Reina! haha. and HUzzuh to TakaGaki for encouraging Reina!!!  :ptam-ok:

story between TakaGaki is so cute. and Reina asking for advice.~  :ptam-glow:

yay~ for the updates!  :ptam-kiss:

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« Reply #137 on: January 04, 2009, 06:41:51 PM »
CHAPTER 19


After school I left. I didn’t go to my locker and I didn’t say bye to the others either. I had only one thing on my mind, to visit Eri. I wasn’t going to let anything get in my way of setting things right with her. I walk as fast as I could down the block and to her house. I had to catch her before she left to do something else. I’m surprised I still know where she lives. I’ve only been in front of her house once, but I find it with little struggle. I walk up the steps and knock on the door. I really hope she answers. I don’t want to face her dad or mom when they open the door. But who answers the door is something completely different than what I had in mind. A small girl that’s around seven answers the door. Did I get the right house? I’m sure I did. I don’t remember Eri mentioning she has a sister, but than again she’s never told me anything about her life and she steers clear of telling me about things at her house. The little girl tilts her head and looks at me.

“Um…is…Eri there?”

Then she does something completely strange. She starts moving her fingers in all sorts of weird shapes really fast. I look at her puzzled. What is she doing?! Maybe she’s just messing with me. If she’s trying to throw me off guard she’s done a good job of that. She stops and she turns to me to see if I understand. And I don’t have a CLUE to anything. I’ll ask again.

“Is Eri home?”

She does that crazy hand movement thing again. It isn’t cute anymore. It’s really starting to annoy me. Why can’t she just open her mouth and tell me already!? Again she looks at me and I don’t get ANYTHING she just did. What is this all about? Then some old man walks up to her and puts both his hands on her shoulder. It must be Eri’s father. I straighten up and look at him.

“I’m sorry about that. She normally doesn’t answer the door.” He apologizes, he sounds really nice

“It’s ok. She’s really shy to speak I guess.”

He shakes his head.

“It’s not that. She’s a mute. She CAN’T talk.”

WHAT?! Holy crap. I feel stupid now for getting so mad at her earlier. So all those weird hand signals was sign language? Too bad I don’t understand it. He looks kind of sad when he mentions that. I could imagine. I’m sure she gets picked on a lot at school. Poor girl.

“Eri isn’t here. She’s at work. She started today.”

“Work? Can you tell me where she is? It’s kind of important that I talk to her.”

“You won’t be able to get there on foot. It’s pretty far.”

Damn. That’s the end of my plan. I tuck my hands into my coat pockets.

“Ok, thanks.”

I turn around to leave. There goes the end of everything.

“Wait, I can take you.”

I turn back. Down the hall some older guy comes to the door looking at me. Who’s he? He has kind of similar traits to Eri’s. This must be her brother. He looks around twenty. Eri’s dad looks at him.

“Are you sure? It’s kind of long. And I could use all the help I can get around the house. Your mother needs a lot of help.” He asks

The guy nods.

“I’m sure. I won’t be too long dad.”

“Ok, but hurry back.”

There’s this loud deep chesty cough just then coming from one of the rooms down the hall. It doesn’t sound like a nice type of cough. This one sounds like it hurts. Who is that? Eri’s brother walks out the front door and tells me to follow him to his car. Was that Eri’s mom who did that bad cough? I get into the car and go back to thinking about Eri and how I’m going to start my conversation with her. I’m nervous. It feels like I have butterflies flapping around all over in my stomach. I hope the ride is long enough so that I can think of a decent way to explain everything to her.

 ***

The ride to Eri’s job was a forty-minute drive. It was way out in the open too. It wasn’t in the city more like the in the country. There were miles of empty fields and ever so often a few houses. I saw a few horses and cows grazing. It was completely different than the city. It was quiet and it smelled like horse crap really bad. I was still amazed that Eri got a job. Did she get it to keep away from me more? Or she needed the money? The car stops and I look in front of me. We stopped in front of a farm. Some old looking guy comes out from his house to us.

“This is where she’ll be just about everyday after school. Try not to visit her all the time it’ll distract her from her job.” Her brother tells me

I step out the car and bow.

“Thank you.”

He smiles faintly and pulls the car, back out into the narrow single dirt road. I look back to the old man that stood a few inches away from me. He seems annoyed that I’m here.

“Is uh…Eri here?”

He grumbles and nods. Then he points behind his house.

“She’s in the barn.”

“Thanks.”

I walk quickly as I could to the back. I’m careful to not step in horse or cow shit. This place really SMELLS. I don’t know how Eri could be able to work in here. I hate places like this. They’re dirty and they’ll mess up my clothes. If I find a stain on my heels I’m going to get pissed. I keep walking until I spot a large red barn in the back. It’s the only barn there so that narrows down my search. I hurry to the door and push it open with all my strength. There are horses, cows, and sheep in the stables. They’re all making noise now and then. I pinch my nose close at the stench. I would never work here no matter how much I need the money. As I get to the end of the tables I here squealing and giggling.

“Hey…wait your turn.”

It sounds like Eri and she’s giggling. As I get closer to the noise my stomach burns. I went over how our conversation would go in my head on the way here, but some how all my confidence has went away. I reach the last stable and look inside the open door. Eri’s in a squatting position and she’s holding a baby pig in her arms feeding it from a bottle. There’s a whole bunch of other hungry baby pigs on a pile of hay waiting to be fed. She looks so cute holding the pig. I knew she was always a caring and kind person and this shows it more. I feel myself smile. I’m so busy on watching her feed the pig that I didn’t see another pig walk it’s way over to me until it sat on my foot and started squealing at me to feed it. Eri looks at it and then notices me. Well, this wasn’t what I had in mind to let her know I was here. She has on this angry face, but then it turns more into a sad face. She puts the pig down and picks up another one to feed it.

“What do you want?”

I suddenly forgot my whole plan to this conversation. Damn it. I pick up the baby pig and walk farther into the stable. I put it with the other baby pigs on the pile of hay. I squat down to look at Eri, but she won’t look at me. This is going to be hard. I can’t tell if she’s angry or just hurt.

“Shouldn’t you be somewhere else kissing Sayu?” She grumbles

I flinch. Ouch, that hurts. I put my hands together and start playing with my fingers. I don’t know any other way to reply back then this way.

“It’s now what you think.”

Yes, it’s a common thing to say, but it’s all I can think of suddenly. Eri lifts her head and glares at me. I go back to looking at my fingers.

“Is that all you can say?” She growls

I want to say yes, because at this point it is. All the stress and pressure is limiting my ability to think of something decently and good enough. But I know if I say that she’ll never want to see me again as long as I live. So I shake my head, I sort of lie. Ok enough with this logical thinking. I’m just going to say what I feel. You can never go wrong with your feelings right?

“That night at the party…I didn’t kiss Sayu. She kissed me. I know it might be hard to believe, but it’s true.”

I finally have the courage to lift up my head and look into her eyes. She doesn’t look as mad anymore.

“I don’t like Sayu, Eri. We’re just friends and that’s it. I have no feelings for her whatsoever.”

I really hope she believes me. I can deal with others not believing me or calling me a liar, but if she does it would bother me.

“That’s the reason why you came all the way over here? To just clarify things from Ai’s party and then that would be the end of it?”

What more does she want from me?! I told her what she wanted to know! I can’t think of anything else to say. My brain can’t seem to say anything. Then I start thinking about what Risa told me today at lunch. How she ended up with Ai and how if she didn’t say something they would have never been together. I slap my forehead remembering the last part. I’m such an idiot. This is now or never and I can’t let this chance slip from me. So I skip words and do something I feel that’s natural and will explain everything in a single second. I get up take Eri by her arms and kiss her. I kiss her more passionately than I did at the pottery shop. She went tense for a few seconds, but I felt her relax and when I thought that she wasn’t going to push me away and run, I let her go and rest my arms on her waist. She even kisses me back, but it’s not wet kisses. I still let her set the pace.  I end it when the need for air was very strong. She looks at me in surprise. Now I know what to say.

“You’re ALL I want Eri. I don’t want anyone else. I want to be with you. I want only YOU to kiss me and hold me, and most importantly; I want you to say yes to dating me.” 

I speak with all my heart into each word. Hopefully this convinces her. Her face turns red and she doesn’t know what to say at first. She opens her mouth to say something, but nothing comes out. She tries again time, but it’s the same thing. So instead she nods. And I feel like I’ve won the lottery! I smile so big I show my teeth. I hug her tight not wanting to let go.

“Come on let’s leave.” I say

“I can’t. I have to work the full hour or else I won’t get paid.”

“I’ll help you then.” I say

“A-are you sure? Some of the things I have to do are messy and they stink.”

As long as she’s there I’m there too. I nod.

“It’s no big deal. Come on, let me help you.”

“Ok, come on, I have to load logs into the truck.” She holds out her hand to me.

We walk out the stable, exit the barn, and go to the truck that’s parked beside the barn. There’s a whole bunch of large and heavy logs beside it. Man this is going to be hard. Eri gets one end of the log and I get the other side. This will be a while.

 ***

Did I mention I HATE this place? Yeah well…I do! I hate it so much. After helping Eri load up the truck with those huge logs, we had another job to do. We had to let the horses out into the yard so they could run around for a while and eat. So we were doing that just fine and when all of them were inside we were done. Eri’s hour was up. So we started to leave. Eri’s brother was there to pick us up and on the way to the car, I stepped into a pothole and well…I went tumbling to the ground hard. That was embarrassing. Eri was laughing half the time as she helped me up and I got dirt all over my clothes! I was so angry. But even through all that…I had a lot of fun being around her. I like spending time with her. I really want to do it again with her some time. Eri’s brother was nice enough to drive me home too. And I gave Eri a goodbye hug before leaving. I didn’t want to kiss her in front of her brother it would be a little weird.

“I’ll see you tomorrow at school.” I say

She nods and waves. I walk into the apartment building. I kept having this stupid smile on my face the whole time I walked up the stairs. I felt completely different inside. I felt…happier.

“There you are. I was wondering where you were.” My uncle tells me from the living room. I walk pass him and he cringes.

“Is that YOU smelling like that?”

“I was at a farm helping my friend.”

He cringes.

“Go take a shower you smell so bad.”

I laugh and head to the bathroom.

“I made food! There’s some on the table if you still want some.” He yells, just as I closed the door.

“Thanks!” I say

I’m so glad things are cleared up between Eri and I. I feel so much better. I also feel like a little schoolgirl that has a huge crush on someone. I say that because I can’t seem to push away the urge to giggle. Giggling would mess up my image. But I can’t control it. I can’t wait to see her tomorrow at school!
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Re: This Thing Called Love(UPDATE 1/4)
« Reply #138 on: January 04, 2009, 08:13:18 PM »
Official TanaKamei raburabu~
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« Reply #139 on: January 04, 2009, 09:27:32 PM »
^ Lol yep and then all the fun comes in now. Woot woot! I waited forever to write it, but it's worth. I my head filled so many ideas for them. I can't wait to write them and show everyone. Thank you for the comment too. :D

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