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Re: Untitled (Chapter Six: Kusumi Koharu)
« Reply #20 on: March 18, 2009, 04:22:50 PM »
@ringo-hime: No Koharu is not mean. Sorry if I confused you.  :sweatdrop:

@shadowolf8: Yes Lone I am fast! XD Glad you like the pairing!
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Aika studied over the dresses that Koharu wanted her to try on.

"Are you sure about this?" Aika held up a silver, shiny dress.

"It will match those earrings of yours." Koharu replied.

'I wonder if she will like the dress when I try it on.' Aika went to one of the fitting rooms and put on the dress.

Three minutes later, she walked out of the fitting room and she noticed a shocked reaction from Koharu.

"You look....you look...I think I'm going to have a nosebleed! You look so...gorgeous!"

"It was you Koharu! Thanks so much!" Aika hugged Koharu again.

"You're welcome." Koharu said warmly.

"I'm going to go change, okay?" Aika smiled.

She closed the fitting room door behind her.

'I'm going to go change, okay? What was I thinking?' Aika shook her head.

'I've had a crush on this girl for a month, can she possibly feel the same way?'

Aika changed and gave the dress to Koharu.

"Okay, wait for me at the front of the store." Koharu winked, taking out cash and paying the cashier.

'That girl has so much money.' Aika thought as she waited in front.

It didn't take long waiting for Koharu. Actually, she only came in two minutes.

"Here you go," Koharu gave Aika her bags. "Let's sit for a moment."

"Okay." Aika replied, finding a bench.

"All right! A bench!" Koharu's quick shout nearly scared Aika to death.

"Are you okay?" Aika giggled.

"I'm fine, just hyper. Now sit." Koharu replied, her voice shaking. Aika obeyed her command.

"Aika, can I tell you something?"

"Yes," Aika replied, looking at Koharu with concern. "What is it?"

"I....like you." Koharu said in a whisper.

"What?" Aika heard Koharu, but she wanted to hear her answer again.

"I like you." Koharu said a little louder.

"What?"

"I LIKE YOU MITSUI AIKA!" Koharu shouted, a little too loudly. Everyone was looking at her. Even Eri, Sayumi, and Reina looked at Koharu. They winked at Aika. Aika returned it and gave them a thumbs-up.

"Quit looking at us and move on with your lives!" Aika didn't shout, but she was close to. They returned to what they were doing.

"....So, what do you think? How do you feel?"

"Koharu....I like you too." Aika took Koharu's hand.

"Let's get out of here," Koharu got off the bench. "I'll take you home."

"You're going to walk me home?" Aika asked, grinning.

"Yes my lady." Koharu kissed Aika's hand.

'Oh my god. Oh my god. Oh my god, calm down Aika.' Aika nearly panicked in her thoughts.

"Okay. It's not very far from here."

And the pair walked to Aika's house.
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Cute.  :D I have to say, I like the pairing too.  :D

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Re: Untitled (Chapter Seven: Mitsui Aika)
« Reply #21 on: March 18, 2009, 04:38:09 PM »
 :wub: :wub: lol they are a cute~ couple!! lol  :wub: :wub:although i have this fishy feeling that something may happen lol but idk what, keep up the writing Ruru!!

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Re: Untitled (Chapter Seven: Mitsui Aika)
« Reply #22 on: March 18, 2009, 05:21:06 PM »
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!
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Re: Untitled (Chapter Eight: Li Chun/JunJun)
« Reply #23 on: March 18, 2009, 07:10:32 PM »
@shadowolf8: Thanks Lone.

@JFC: I know. :D KohaMittsi are a cute couple. (I still can't think of a name for those two. XD)
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"Ah, it's still wet." JunJun murmured to herself, wet grass getting on her boots.

The tall Chinese girl shrugged her shoulders and kept walking. She was too busy studying her Japanese.

"I need some coffee." JunJun said to herself, closing the Japanese dictionary.

"Then I can come with you." A short Chinese girl spoke, opening the door.

"I'm sorry, do I know you?" JunJun's head titled to the side. She looked puzzled.

"No, silly." The girl spoke in Japanese. JunJun knew what was going on.

"Okay." JunJun entered the cafe, still puzzled. All she wanted was coffee, and she encounters a weird girl.

"My name is LinLin." The girl shook JunJun's hand.

"JunJun," JunJun replied. "But my real name is Li Chun."

"You're the taller exchange student!" LinLin pointed. "My real name is Qian Lin. People at school say you're tall."

"That's true." JunJun blushed a little. That girl was embarrasing the crap out of her.

"Um...did you have too much...sugar or something?" JunJun asked bravely.

"No," LinLin replied. "I just need coffee, something to...keep me up, you know?"

"Why?" The taller Chinese girl was a little curious.

"Don't you know that the exchange students are throwing a party tonight?" The younger girl's eyes were sparkling.

JunJun had no idea why she was enjoying her conversation with LinLin.

"It's Friday already?" JunJun was a little shocked.

"Yep." LinLin replied, nodding.

"Oh man, I didn't even pick out an outfit!" JunJun banged her head on the table. She rubbed her head.

"Li Chun! Are you okay?" LinLin asked her in Chinese.

"Hai." JunJun replied in Japanese.

"Clumsy Li Chun." LinLin started laughing. JunJun blushed.

"Funny Qian Lin." JunJun chuckled.

"Do you mind if you will come to the party with me JunJun? As friends?" JunJun could tell LinLin blurted that out.

"Uh...yeah sure." JunJun replied, nodding.

"Okay, good." LinLin got up from her seat and left.

'There's something suspicious about that girl.' JunJun thought.

A few minutes later, JunJun left the cafe.

And then she realized.

She didn't get her coffee.
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Okay, that was kind of rushed.  :banghead:

But I've never had a fic with JunLin in it, so yeah this is my first time.   XD

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Re: Untitled (Chapter Eight: Li Chun/JunJun)
« Reply #24 on: March 18, 2009, 10:32:11 PM »
 :twothumbs yeah! jujun and linlin!! lol party?!? lol hmmm i wonder what will happen ^^

Ruru that was rushed? it didn't seem like it ^^ i'm really liking this fic~~ so many paring but more fun~~~ and  :wub: :wub: lol

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Re: Untitled (Chapter Eight: Li Chun/JunJun)
« Reply #25 on: March 19, 2009, 03:36:25 AM »
JUNLIN!!! :rockon:

If this is how Linlin is before coffee, imagine what she's like AFTER coffee!
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Re: Untitled (Chapter Nine: Qian Lin/LinLin)
« Reply #26 on: March 19, 2009, 05:33:33 AM »
@shadowolf8: It wasn't? I was typing too fast. XD

@JFC: She'd go crazy.
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LinLin stepped out of the taxi as she reached ShenShen's apartment.

'She's the student from Taiwan, ne?' She looked at the map. "Yep." she replied, her breath visible in the night.

"Yep what?" Arms wrapped around LinLin's waist.

"Back off!" LinLin tried to break free of the person's grasp.

"Relax, it's me, JunJun." JunJun whispered in LinLin's ear.

'Wait a minute, she looks at me crazy, and the next thing I know she's attached to me.' LinLin thought.

"You like me don't you?" LinLin whispered with a smirk, hoping to get a reply.

"Uh..yes?" JunJun replied with a tiny voice.

"Haha." LinLin laughed. 'God, I like her.' the short Chinese girl thought.

"Hi you...two?" ShenShen opened the door. "Is there something..."

"No." JunJun and LinLin said at the same time, LinLin could feel JunJun's arms unwrapping from her waist.

"It was a surprise attack." LinLin quickly came up with a lie, well, kind of.

"...Well come on in!" ShenShen walked to her apartment, room 567.

"Okay!" LinLin went back to her bubbly self.

ShenShen opened the door, and it didn't look bad. Actually, it kind of seemed...nice for a party. No alcohol.

"Do you want to sit down LinLin?" JunJun pulled up a chair.

"Sure," LinLin replied, sitting down in the chair. "Thank you."

"You're welcome." JunJun blushed, looking up at the ceiling.

"Do you need me to get anything?" ShenShen asked.

"Um...two Coca Colas please." LinLin held up two fingers.

"Okay, I'll be right back." ShenShen searched in her refridgerator to find one.

While ShenShen was searching, LinLin and JunJun were quiet for a while.

"You look great today, a little calm." JunJun ran a hand through LinLin's silky, brown hair.

"Thank you." LinLin could only say that. 'I need to stop.'

"Here you go." ShenShen gave the girls their sodas, and went to go talk to Youko.

The girls didn't even get a chance to thank ShenShen.

"I am a little calm today, which is not like me at all." LinLin said out loud.

"I like it when you're calm, I liked it when you were hyper." JunJun laughed. "And I just met you."

"I guess you have a strong like for me." LinLin smirked, her eyes sparkling.

"Maybe...I...do." JunJun replied, her face close to LinLin's.

LinLin felt her heartbeat go faster.

"I...love you JunJun. Ever since the last couple of weeks." And they kissed.
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Short, but I think you can get used to it.

Tenth chapter goes back to Takahashi Ai! :D

Just wanted to introduce all of Momusu first. :)

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Re: Untitled (Chapter Nine: Qian Lin/LinLin)
« Reply #27 on: March 19, 2009, 06:44:12 AM »
 XD lol room 567?!? lol nice ruru~ lol

they kissed!?!?  :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub: :wub: KAWAII~~~~~ lol yeah i'm a little hyper at the moment ^^ XP

lol the nest chapter is Ai's hmmm i wonder how this between her and Risa will pan out ^^ XD lol ooooo can't wait~~~~ lol mou~~~ i really need to read ur other lol fic!!! *head back to H!O and reads the fic while checking on the DAH thread lol*

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Re: Untitled (Chapter Nine: Qian Lin/LinLin)
« Reply #28 on: March 19, 2009, 03:39:12 PM »
Love is in the Air.... ♀ x ♀

xD


God!! She knows she's HOT!

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Re: Untitled (Chapter Nine: Qian Lin/LinLin)
« Reply #29 on: March 19, 2009, 10:58:50 PM »
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!
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Re: Untitled (Chapter Ten: Takahashi Ai)
« Reply #30 on: March 19, 2009, 11:19:26 PM »
@shadowolf8: OMG Lone. XD Maybe too hyper.

@Haruka: Haha. XD

@JFC:  :lol:
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"It's still wet outside?" Ai asked herself, sitting up in her bed and looking out the window.

She looked at her alarm clock. 7:25.

'Okay, I have enough time to see Risa.' Ai flopped back in her bed, tossing and turning.

'Let me get dressed first.' Ai zoomed out of her bed and headed towards the bathroom.

She got dressed in her dull, boring, uniform and went downstairs to get some cereal.

There was a knock on the door. "It's Risa!" Ai quickly unlocked the door and opened it.

"Hey Risa."

"Hey Ai, can I come in?"

"Ano...sure!" Ai was completely lost in thought.

The two girls sat down in front of the big screen TV, watching anime, well Risa was watching anime, but Ai couldn't stop looking at her.

"Risa, did you dye your hair?" Ai finally had the guts to ask.

"Oh yes, brown." Risa replied.

"Hmm..." Ai ran her fingers through Risa's hair. "I like it."

"Thank you." Risa looked at her watch. "It's 8:30, let's go."

Ai put her bowl (which was now empty) in the dishwasher, and walked hand-in-hand with Risa to school.

"Hey you two!" Konno Asami and Ogawa Makoto jumped from the bushes.

"You two can't scare me." Ai looked at the two girls with cold eyes.

"They scared me." Risa wrapped her arms around Ai's waist, shaking in fear.

"Sorry Ga-." Konno stopped and stared.

"Oh my god, Gaki you dyed your hair!" Makoto jumped up and down.

"Finally, she gets rid of the cursed black." Konno whispered, but Risa started freaking out.

"My hair is cursed?!" Ai was frozen.

"No Risa, they're just being silly. After all it is MaKonno after all."

"MaKonno?" Risa's head titled to the side.

"It's a new nickname I came up for those two." Ai, Risa, Makoto, and Konno reached the school.

"Aww man, we're already at school." Makoto pouted and folded her arms.

"I can pout better than you!" Konno pouted and folded her arms also.

"Let's go." Ai whispered to Risa, and they went inside the building to go to their homeroom.
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Gotta love the Gokkies. XD

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Re: Untitled (Chapter Ten: Takahashi Ai)
« Reply #31 on: March 20, 2009, 01:06:29 AM »
Quote
Gotta love the Gokkies. XD
They're like a pre-made, ready-to-go double date. :lol:

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Re: Untitled (Chapter Ten: Takahashi Ai)
« Reply #32 on: March 20, 2009, 06:48:44 AM »
OMG~~~!! You write so fast. I need to go back and read this from the front. Don't stop the updates coming though :D

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Re: Untitled (Chapter Ten: Takahashi Ai)
« Reply #33 on: March 20, 2009, 07:02:40 AM »
RURU!!! XD lol

 :wub: :wub: awwww takagaki love~~~~~~ lol nice chapter~~~
Next one is Risa right??

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Re: Untitled (Chapter Eleven: Niigaki Risa)
« Reply #34 on: March 20, 2009, 10:22:05 PM »
@JFC: After reading so many fanfics about them, I thought the same thing. :lol:

@lil_hamz: Yeah, I update pretty fast. XD

@lonewind: YOU CHANGED YOUR NAME LONE! Yay! *happy*

Next up is Risa!
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Risa went to her locker to unpack her things. She obviously knew today was going to be a boring day, but at least Ai was with her.

"Hey Risa," Konno whispered in a quiet voice. "Can I ask you something?"

"Um, sure Konkon." Risa shut her locker and locked it.

"I really like someone." Konno's hand started shaking.

"It's Mako-chan, isn't it?" Risa smirked. She knew it was obvious.

"....Yeah." Konno blushed, her cheeks red.

"Just tell her how you feel, it will work out fine. Believe me." Risa put her hand on Konno's shoulder.

"Hai," Konno nodded. "Thanks for helping me out Gaki-san."

"You're welcome Konkon." Risa smiled, happy that she gave advice to her best friend.

"Let's go, I want to see Mako-chan." Konno said as the tardy bell rang. They got to homeroom just in time.

"Alright minna, we have a new student today, will you please come up here?"

The tall, boyish student went yo the front of the class. Most girls started blushing.

"Class, this is Yoshizawa Hitomi. She recently made the futsal team." The teacher introduced the new student.

"Nice to meet you." Hitomi bowed. "But please call me Yossie."

"Hi Yossie!" Kago Ai & Tsuji Nozomi, the funny couple, shouted.

"Hi Yossie!" Everyone in the class said afterwards.

Risa looked over at Fujimoto Miki, who was smirking. 'Oh god, a new groping target.' Risa thought.

She looked over at Ishikawa Rika, who was immediately head-over-heels for Yossie.

"She's handsome," Risa heard Makoto whispered. "But I like Konno better." Risa's eyes went big.

Makoto went back to talking to Konno about Yossie.

"What do you think about her Ai?" Risa asked the quiet girl.

"Very boyish, but she seems like a nice girl." Ai replied, observant.

"Looks like she's Miki's next target." The two girls laughed.

"Oh man, poor Yossie." Ai said between giggles.

"Now, let's get back to doing equations." The teacher wrote a math equation on the bored as everyone groaned.

'This is going to be a long day.' Risa sighed as she took notes.
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Yep, The Gokkies/4th Generation Momusu and the Rokkies (except Miki) are in different homerooms. :lol:

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Re: Untitled (Chapter Eleven: Niigaki Risa)
« Reply #35 on: March 21, 2009, 01:26:24 AM »
lol hai! i changed my name to lonewind ^^ lol

XD miki's new target!! hmmm did someone get influence from the rp XD hmmm i can't wait~~

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Re: Untitled (Chapter Twelve: Yoshizawa Hitomi)
« Reply #36 on: March 21, 2009, 02:33:01 AM »
@lonewind: RP? I have no idea what you're talking about Lone. :sweatdrop:
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Class was fun today for Yossie. Some people talked to her, got to know her, and she even recieved love letters!

....Okay, that was weird, but Yossie was fine with it.

The bell rang, and two very weird girls introduced themselves.

"I'm Konno Asami." The girl with the long, red hair bowed.

"And I'm Ogawa Makoto." The girl with the short hair shook Yossie's hand.

"Nice to meet you." Yossie replied, bowing but she quickly yelped and grabbed her butt.

She turned around to see a girl giggling. "You're Fujimoto aren't you?" Yossie glared.

"Yeah, I just felt like groping you. Bye!" Miki walked off with some girl.

Yossie's eyes went big at the word "grope". 'Man, that Risa girl wasn't kidding when she said that I was her next groping victim.' she thought.

"I'm sorry Yossie." Makoto and Konno patted Yossie's shoulders.

"Ah, it's okay," Yossie replied. "I can get over it."

"Hey Yossie," A short girl walked beside her. "I'm-"

"Ishikawa Rika, ne? Very nice to meet you." Yossie grabbed Rika's hand and kissed it. Rika blushed, while Makoto & Konno's mouths were open.

"OMG YOSSIE YOU'RE A GENTLEMAN!" Makoto shouted, her voice echoing in the hallway.

Silence.

"....I'll take care of her." Konno and Makoto went to their next class.

Yossie was just about to say something when the tardy bell rang.

"What class do you have next?" Rika asked.

"Um..." Yossie unfolded the crumpled paper. "I have science."

"Great! I have that class too." Rika's eyes were sparkling.

"Alright, let's walk there." Yossie took Rika's hand and they went to their science class.
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I'm kind of in a rush today....XD

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Re: Untitled (Chapter Twelve: Yoshizawa Hitomi)
« Reply #37 on: March 21, 2009, 02:56:49 AM »
 XD Miki's too funny, do i sense a yossie/rika pairing? man another classic!!! ^^

o btw the rp over on H!O well miki's back in action lol

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Re: Untitled (Chapter Twelve: Yoshizawa Hitomi)
« Reply #38 on: March 21, 2009, 05:55:19 AM »
TakaGaki knows how Miki thinks. One look was all it took. XD

And daaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaamn Yossi's smooth. 8)

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Re: Untitled (Chapter Thirteen: Konno Asami)
« Reply #39 on: March 22, 2009, 05:13:08 AM »
@lonewind: Oh yeah that rp... :w00t:

@JFC: Thanks. :D
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Konno was the only student taking notes and paying attention, while the others students were too busy writing notes or sleeping, even though it was only 3 something. However, Konno wanted to do the same thing, but she needed to work on her studies first.

She looked over at Makoto, who was knocked out. She didn't move at all.

'She looks peaceful while she's sleeping.' Konno thought, her face feeling hot.

"I know you're looking at me." Makoto whispered, slowly opening her eyes.

"Wakey wakey Mako-chan." Konno smiled.

"You know," Makoto grabbed Konno's hand. "I really like it when you smile. It makes me happy."

"Should we really be talking about this?" Konno whispered, realizing that they were in class.

"The bell's about to ring." Right after Makoto said that, the bell rang, and Konno went to her locker and packed her things.

'What do I do? She grabbed my hand, told me she liked my smile.....oh god.' Konno couldn't believe it. She blushed deeply.

"What are you thinking about?" Makoto slammed Konno's locker. "Looks like you packed everything."

"You." Konno's entire body froze.

"Me?" Makoto grabbed Konno's hand. "What about me?"

"You're holding my hand." Konno replied.

"And?"

"Well..."

"Well?"

"I kind of..."

"Kind of what?"

"Like it."

Makoto chuckled. Konno stared at her blankly. 'What's so funny.'

"Oh Konno, do you know how long I've liked you?" Makoto finally asked. They were now walking home.

"How long?" Konno was curious to know, but Ai and Risa walked up to them.

"Hey you two!" Risa waved.

"Hey." Makoto and Konno said with a monotone.

"What's up with you guys?" Ai sounded a little concerned, but got over it. "Anyway, do you two want to go eat with us?"

"We're just wondering because it can be like a double date!" Risa blurted out.

"But I haven't even told her that I love her yet!" Konno blurted.

"Konno..." Makoto looked at Konno, whose face was now crimson. "You love me?"

"Yes." Konno nodded.

"USO!!!!!!!!!!!!!" Risa shouted, very shocked.

"So, are you coming with us or not?" Ai asked, not suprised by this. Konno could tell.

"Are we coming? Of course we are!" Makoto kissed Konno on the cheek, which made the both of them blush.

Ai and Risa laughed. "Awww, you guys are so adorable together."

"Thanks." Konno and Makoto said at the same time.

"MaKonno." Ai whispered loudly for Konno & Makoto to hear.

"Shut up!" The two said at the same and the four girls went to find a resturant.
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Like I said before, you gotta love the Gokkies.

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