Author Topic: Untitled (Chapter Twenty Seven: Kago Ai) (Read 26077 times)

Number3 · « **Reply #40 on:** March 22, 2009, 07:33:31 AM »

So far, you've got all my favorite couples

I thank you for that

lonewind · « **Reply #41 on:** March 22, 2009, 10:15:41 AM »

same here!!!

Yossi/Rika~~

Makoto/Konno~~~

TakaGaki~~~~~

Tankamei~~~~~~

well you can tell which pairing is my fav~~~~~~

Hotaru · « **Reply #42 on:** March 23, 2009, 12:57:31 AM »

@Number3: Hi new reader! You're welcome!

@lonewind: OMG Lone.

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"Let's go in here." Ai pointed to a curry resturant. Risa, Makoto, and Konno nodded, and they went inside.

The four girls found a table and sat down in their seats.

"So, what do you think about the new girl, Yossie?" Makoto brought up, taking Konno's hand.

"You really don't let go do you?" Konno joked.

"Nope." Makoto replied, grinning.

"Uh...Yossie...I know she's Miki's new groping target." Ai replied to Makoto's question.

"She might be starting a new relationship with Ishikawa Rika-chan." Konno stated confidentally.

"USO!!!!!!!!!!" Risa exclaimed. The entire resturant was silent and glaring at the four girls.

Makoto glared back, while Konno was looking down. Risa blushed, while Ai put her arm around Risa's shoulders. They eventually started talking when the waiter asked for their drinks.

"Coca-Cola." The four girls said at the same time. Makoto started laughing, then Konno.

"It's true," Makoto went back to the subject. "Yossie did kiss Rika's hand."

"Already?" Ai was shocked. "Dang, that girl must be smooth."

"She did recieve a lot of love letters, most of them were from Miki." Risa rolled her eyes.

"Here you go, four Coca-Colas." The waiter came back from the noisy kitchen and gave the girls their drinks.

"Thank you." The four girls thanked the waiter.

"No problem, I'll get your curry ready." the waiter replied, walking back into the kitchen.

"Ai-chan," Makoto put down the beverage. "Do you mind if Konno and I can stay over at your house?"

"Yeah me too?" Risa smirked.

"Let me see if I can ask my dad first, then you guys can stay."

"Okay." The three girls said.

Makoto looked at Konno, who was smiling. 'She has such a beautiful smile.' she thought.

"Let's go ahead and eat, I think the ramen shop is closing." Ai said, quickly eating her curry.

Makoto nodded. She knew on Fridays Ai's father would not come home after a while when he closes his shop. It has happened numerous times before.

'I hope he says yes.' Makoto thought, eating her curry before leaving the resturant.
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A really crappy chapter, I know. Still gotta love the Gokkies.

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lonewind · « **Reply #43 on:** March 23, 2009, 08:00:52 AM »

Oooo i wonder what's going to happen at the Takahashi's residence?

lol mou~ u added lol new chapters? hmm i wonder what the pattern is now?

lol i also love how ur fic is still called untitled. lol it kinda suits is maybe? idk

JFC · « **Reply #44 on:** March 23, 2009, 06:41:33 PM »

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"But I haven't even told her that I love her yet!" Konno blurted.

"Konno..." Makoto looked at Konno, whose face was now crimson. "You love me?"

"Yes." Konno nodded.

"USO!!!!!!!!!!!!!" Risa shouted, very shocked.

Best...part...EVAR!!!

Hotaru · « **Reply #45 on:** March 25, 2009, 03:32:48 AM »

@lonewind: I'm going to keep the title for now.

@JFC: Thanks.

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When Eri, Sayumi, and Reina stepped inside the mall, Sayumi immediately made a run for her favorite accessory store.

"Hey Reina, do you want to go to the hat shack?" Eri asked, pointing to the store across from where the two were standing.

"Sure!" Reina replied, walking with Eri to the store.

The two were just about to walk into the store until two women were fighting up front.

"Listen Natsumi, I wasn't looking at Mari!" The tall woman with brownish hair argued. The shorter woman, or Natsumi, just shook her head.

"Yes you were, quit lying to me Maki." Natsumi replied in what was almost a whisper, and she went the direction where Eri and Reina were, bumping into Eri by accident. 'The woman didn't even bother to apolgize.' Eri thought.

Eri and Reina walked into the store and tried on random hats.

"I like this one." Reina picked out a purple visor that had a cat on it.

"Neko, Neko." Eri poked Reina's cheek. Reina giggled and blushed.

"Turtle, Turtle." Reina poked Eri's cheek. 'She's so funny when she's not lonely and cold. And she's so...cute.'

Eri grinned at the thought and gazed into Reina's eyes.

"Um...Eri? Eri? Turtle?" Reina snapped her fingers.

After a few seconds, Eri finally came to her senses. "Oh! I'm going to try to find a hat with a turtle on it." Eri went to a different rack of hats.

There were none, so she went back to Reina, who was paying for the hat.

"You're actually buying it?" Eri asked when she got up to the counter.

"Of course I would buy it." Reina replied, waiting for her cash.

'Same old Reina: cute, funny, and hilarious.' Eri smiled.

"I have something to tell you Eri." Reina said, taking Eri to a bench.

"What is it?" Eri asked, hoping that Reina would tell her anything.

"Um...." Reina fiddled with her thumbs. "I think I'm in love with you Eri."

Eri's eyes grew big and wide. She was so shocked.

But Eri couldn't reply because...

"Hey you guys! Let's go! There are some cute earrings that you guys must see!" Sayumi shouted, her voice echoing in the nearly quiet mall.

Reina and Eri looked at each other and nodded, following Sayumi.

But when the two got up, Eri replied, "I love you too Reina."
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Gotta love Sayumi. Gotta love Eri. Gotta love Reina.

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JFC · « **Reply #46 on:** March 25, 2009, 04:12:57 AM »

NacchiGoto =

TanaKame =

lonewind · « **Reply #47 on:** March 25, 2009, 04:27:13 AM »

= Tanakamei~

cute chapter ruru ^^ lol i thought u were going to end the chapter wit out Eri's reply.

Haruka · « **Reply #48 on:** March 25, 2009, 09:58:51 PM »

I <3~ TanaKamei *-*

Damn!!! It's almost all my favorite couples xD

Like it a lot *u*

Hotaru · « **Reply #49 on:** March 26, 2009, 03:35:35 AM »

@JFC: Haha.

@lonewind: Why would I do that?

@Haruka: Thanks.

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After Sayumi left Eri and Reina alone for a while, Sayumi went to her favorite accessory store and noticed Koharu.

"Hey Koha-Pinku." Sayumi waved to her friend.

"Oh, hey Sayu-Pinku." Koharu replied, her eyes still guled to the earrings rack.

"Thinking about someone?" Sayumi asked, telling that Koharu was obviously thinking about something.

"Mitsui Aika." Koharu replied. 'Oh, Mittsi. The girl who is very talkative.' Sayumi remembered the girl.

"You like her?" Sayumi found a pair of star earrings and tried them on.

"Yes." Koharu murumered.

"Oh, well tell her how you feel," Sayumi gave Koharu advice. "She might feel the same way."

"Okay, thank you." Koharu went to another accessory store before Sayumi could say "Thank you".

Sayumi looked at some more things in the store. They had some animal earrings, like a dog, cat, a turtle, and......

A bunny.

"ERI-CHAN! REINA-CHAN!" Sayumi sprinted towards the bench, finding the two girls talking.

"Hey you guys! Let's go! There are some cute earrings that you guys must see!" Sayumi shouted, her voice echoing in the nearly quiet mall.

"Okay." The two girls replied.

Sayumi heard Eri whisper something to Reina, and the two girls giggled and held hands.

'Reina probably told Eri that she likes her.' Sayumi thought, going into the store.

"Come on!" Sayumi motioned them to come over to the earrings section.

Both girls stared in silence.

"Turtle earrings!" Eri exclaimed, picking up the earrings and going to the counter.

"Cat earrings." Reina also picked up the earrings and went to the counter.

Sayumi picked up the bunny earrings and stood behind Reina in line.

The three girls bought the earrings.

"I'm hungry." Eri said.

"Cotton candy?" Sayumi asked, pointing to a cotton candy stand.

"Heck yeah!" The three went over to the stand and got their cotton candy.
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YAY!!!!!

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lonewind · « **Reply #50 on:** March 26, 2009, 04:00:58 AM »

i love the earring part! lol a turtle, cat and bunny, a nice combo

another cute and funny chapter ruru ^^

JFC · « **Reply #51 on:** March 26, 2009, 04:18:15 AM »

Poor Sayu's the only one that hasn't hooked up with anyone yet.

lonewind · « **Reply #52 on:** March 26, 2009, 04:55:01 AM »

^
she may

there are still other members from MM, but i do wonder who will be with her? so far there's
Tankamei, TakaGaki, Konkon/Makoto, Koharu/Aika, JunLin (lol new name combo), then the Yossie/Rika/Miki/and i think Aya? lol but i'm sure there's someone that will be with sayu ^^

YumePouk · « **Reply #53 on:** March 26, 2009, 09:20:21 AM »

*go out of my hiding place

*

Great Story

Sayumi is really a kind person
But I wonder who she loves???
The earring part is really sweet <3 <3

I want to know what will happen at Ai-chan place >____<

Keep up ur work
Ganabatte kudasai

ringo-hime · « **Reply #54 on:** March 26, 2009, 12:37:41 PM »

oh cute!!!!!

Koha pinku and Sayu Pinku~

earringsss~

Hotaru · « **Reply #55 on:** March 27, 2009, 03:35:56 AM »

I just realized I got a thank you for the first time. Yay!

On to the comments...

@lonewind:

@JFC: Sayumi's just going to be the matchmaker...for now.

@YumePouk: YUME-CHAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Glad you like it!

@ringo-hime: But those are some cute nicknames, ne?
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"Blue for me!" Reina requested as she waited for her cotton candy.

"Yellow for me!" Eri requested right after Reina.

"Pinku for me!" Sayumi requested.

"Coming right up girls." the cotton candy man made Reina's cotton candy.

As the girls waited, Reina looked over at Eri, her cheeks turning red.

"You look cute when your cheeks are red Neko." Eri kissed Reina's cheek.

Reina's cheeks were crimson. She chuckled.

"You look cute too Turtle." Reina kissed Eri back, this time on the lips.

"Hello?!?" a voice broke the kiss.

"Oh, sorry Sayumi." the girls went to get their cotton candy.

"Thank you." Sayumi took her pink cotton candy from the man.

"You're welcome. Have a good evening girls." The man said.

The girls went to go sit down at a table, the mall being a little bit more crowded.

While the girls went to go to the table, they heard a shout.

"I LIKE YOU MITSUI AIKA."

'Is that Koharu? Does she like Aika?' Reina thought.

'At least I have Eri.' Reina held Eri's hand.

"Koharu asked me for some advice." Sayumi shrugged her shoulders.

"You give great advice Sayu." Reina patted Sayumi's shoulder.

"Usa-chan peace!" The girls sat down at their table.

"So, what is everyone doing Sunday?" Sayumi immediately asked, grinning.

"I don't know." Reina and Eri's voices were in a monotone.

"You guys are no fun." Sayumi laughed.

Reina's cellphone rang.

"Moshi Moshi?" Reina answered, realizing that the caller was her mother.

"Reina, please come home. You can talk with Eri and Sayumi later." her mother answered and she hung up before Reina could get a response.

"I have to go you guys. Bye." Reina left the two girls and ran home.
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A short/sucky chapter.

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JFC · « **Reply #56 on:** March 27, 2009, 05:17:15 AM »

Dang, Reina barely said more than "moshi moshi" and her mom already knew that she was with Eri and Sayu.

lonewind · « **Reply #57 on:** March 27, 2009, 05:28:52 AM »

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"You give great advice Sayu." Reina patted Sayumi's shoulder.

i love that line after reading how Koharu yelled out how she love Mitsui ^^

funny chapter ruru ^^

YumePouk · « **Reply #58 on:** March 27, 2009, 08:13:18 AM »

HAI~~ Ruru ^^
TanaKamei little kiss moment was sweet

Funny chapter

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"Moshi Moshi?" Reina answered, realizing that the caller was her mother.

"Reina, please come home. You can talk with Eri and Sayumi later." her mother answered and she hung up before Reina could get a response.

"I have to go you guys. Bye." Reina left the two girls and ran home.

Lmoa. It's like I, When I hang out with friends and my mom call to I to help her to do somethings >_<

Keep it up ^^v

ringo-hime · « **Reply #59 on:** March 27, 2009, 09:11:03 AM »

lol! so that was from Sayu!?!!

hehe. now what mother?!