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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 64 - (8/4)]
« Reply #440 on: August 05, 2010, 12:45:33 AM »
I got a pm... It was hot, butbutbut I think it's too much for me. :mon blood: :imdead: I did not expect something like that. Made me a little less innocent. :sweat: Thanks for the pm! :D

Ch. 64 is so cute!!! Takagaki!!! :mon lovelaff: Glad Kamei remembered what happened.  :cow:

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 64 - (8/4)]
« Reply #441 on: August 05, 2010, 01:04:15 AM »
-delurks for the time being-

I've been following your fic for awhile, and I really love it! (: If it's alright, may I request chapter 63 via PM, pretty please? <3

Thank you, thank you! And remember that you have bunches of lurkers supporting you. ;D lol

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 64 - (8/4)]
« Reply #442 on: August 05, 2010, 04:05:18 AM »
AWWW~ That was soooo cute! :mon inluv:
You totally made my day~ Thank you!!!  :mon lovelaff:
I've been having a bad day today and so I decided to check if you updated... when I saw that you did, a smile came upon my face already :mon fu:
And now, after reading your update, I am rolling around in the cute fluff of this chapter, hehe. :mon inluv: :luvluv1: :nya:
Mannn, this chapter is so much win~ :cow:

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 64 - (8/4)]
« Reply #443 on: August 05, 2010, 04:21:42 AM »
Thanks for the PM...
Chapter 63 it''s hot! :on bleed:
Chapter 64 pretty sweety cute :lol:

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 64 - (8/4)]
« Reply #444 on: August 05, 2010, 05:35:02 AM »
nekkidness XD

hmm ch. 64 has a deja vu feeling and waiting for the realization :D
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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 64 - (8/4)]
« Reply #445 on: August 05, 2010, 05:55:29 AM »
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~~~Hi, i was lurking from the very beginning~~ :ph43r:
I really like love it
Can you pretty pretty please ... send me the chapter 63 ??
pleaseee :pleeease:
than you  so much  ! <3
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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 64 - (8/4)]
« Reply #446 on: August 05, 2010, 06:30:06 AM »
gyaa! Tanakame is pure hotness  :drool:
Eri almost let me all dry  :mon blood: :mon blood: :mon blood:, I lost too much blood  XD
TakaGaki is so cute. :wub: When I read
“Don’t test my patience anymore, Risa.  I’m very close to losing control right now. "
My mind went crazy  :panic: :panic:
moar please  :twothumbs excellent job, as always

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 64 - (8/4)]
« Reply #447 on: August 05, 2010, 06:30:50 AM »
Thank for the PM :twothumbs
It's sooooo  hot *dies*

Chapter 64 - this chapter is very cute ,TanaKame part is so sweet :wub:

I really love you story!!! :heart:
 keep it up~

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 64 - (8/4)]
« Reply #448 on: August 05, 2010, 06:51:55 AM »
 XD animefreak was rite ... this thread is indeed FLYING  :twothumbs
Yoooo .. Writer!! Any Update for today ...  :mon squee:
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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 64 - (8/4)]
« Reply #449 on: August 05, 2010, 07:03:05 AM »
thx for the pm

It was really hot   .. i was afraid of Eri's reaction the next morning..
thx again <3

Chap 64 ~~ awwww TakaGaki it's so sweet  xD   

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 64 - (8/4)]
« Reply #450 on: August 05, 2010, 08:26:18 AM »
Sorry, no comment replies again!  Only because there are so many lurkers and previous chapter comments and recent chapter comments,,, it's too hectic :panic: XD

But I DO read EVERY SINGLE post... you guys have NO IDEA how much they motivate me :twothumbs

But I got some bad news.... I have writer's block :shocked
AFter this chapter, I have no idea what to write... I actually had to force this one out of my brains too :(

Anyway, here's the chapter...

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Chapter 65

   “And that’s a wrap!  Otsukaresama deshita!”

   “Otsukaresama deshita!”

   “Otsukareina!”

   The two High-Queen members walked off the set of Song Fighter after bidding farewell to the hosts and all the camera staff.  They were both wearing the red-and-black costumes for their new single, “Cinderella Complex”. 

   When they left the filming studio, both singers were met with their respective girlfriend.  Eri handed Reina a handkerchief after giving her a quick peck on the cheek.  Risa handed Ai a water bottle while keeping eye contact with her, as if they were communicating through telepathy.

   “Otsukaresama, High-Queen,” Eri said.  “That was a good recording.”

   “You guys were watching?” Ai asked.

   “We left at the last five minutes so we could get you that,” Risa said, pointing at the water bottle in the older singer’s hand. 

   “I see,” Ai nodded, kissing her girlfriend’s forehead.  “Arigatou.”

   “Can we go get something to eat?” Reina muttered.  “I haven’t eaten anything since last night so I could fit into this skirt.”

   “I made it a little bigger because you said the costume was too tight on you last time,” Eri said, surprised.

   “Yeah, but I didn’t know you were actually going to make it bigger,” Reina explained.  “That’s why I worked hard not make my skirt fall in the middle of recording.”

   “Okay, I get it,” the turtle laughed.  “You go change; I’ll run out to the convenience store and get something for you and Ai to eat.”

   “I don’t need anything, Eri,” the leader said.  “I wasn’t as self-conscious of my body as Reina was last night.”

   “Yeah, yeah, I’m the stupid one,” Reina muttered, walking away from her friends.  Eri followed behind her until she reached the elevator and went inside.

   “You should go change too, Ai,” Risa insisted.  “And I think you should still eat something.  It’s almost lunch time anyway.”

   “But I’m full already,” Ai joked.  “All I need is your ‘love~’.”  The singer sang the last word in the tune of “Everyday Everywhere”.

   “That was corny,” Risa laughed.  “You have to come up with better lines if you want to flatter me.”

   “Yeah, I guess I do,” Ai chuckled, as she took hold of the bean’s hand.  “Come on, I want to show you something.”

   The leader led her girlfriend down the hallway and into an empty room.  It was a huge meeting room, with an incredibly long table and rows of chairs.  The two girls walked to the head of the table and stood facing each other.

   “Remember when I said I was going to give you something to remember me by?” Ai asked.

   “Yes,” Risa answered, “but I really don’t need anything—”

   “Well, I already had it made so you have to take it,” Ai grinned. 

   She reached towards the back of her neck and unhooked one of the many necklaces.  She held it up for the younger girl to see.  After examining it closely, Risa realized that it was a circular locket with an engraved heart around her name.  The pendent was no bigger than a coin.  She opened it and there was a small picture of Ai, smiling at her.

   “It’s beautiful,” Risa gasped.  “Thank you, Ai… I love it.”

   “There’s only one in the world so you have to keep it safe,” Ai smiled.  She reached down her own chest and held up an identical pendent, except there was an engraved heart around the leader’s name.  “This one is mine, but I need your picture in it.  So get one for me by the next time we see each other, okay?”

   The bean nodded in response.  “Will you put it on for me?”

   Ai took hold of both ends of Risa’s necklace.  She reached her arms around Risa’s neck and put her head on her shoulders to check the hook, as though she was hugging her.  She then backed away, leaving the new pendent swinging around her girlfriend’s neck.

   “Just one question,” Risa said, narrowing her eyes.  “How much did you pay for this?  You didn’t overspend, did you?”

   “… I paid a reasonable amount for such a necklace,” Ai mumbled.  “Don’t worry about that, Risa.  I just wanted to get you something everlasting, that’s all.”

   “The price of ‘forever’ isn’t cheap,” the younger girl teased.

   “Now you’re just getting too figurative,” the leader laughed.  Risa also smiled as she put her arms around Ai’s neck and kissed her.

   “I really love it, thank you.” she whispered.  “You have no idea how happy I am.”

   “Why don’t you show me, then?” Ai grinned.

   Risa laughed softly as she placed another kiss upon Ai’s sweet lips.  They both started off slow; but soon, the two lovers were working their tongues consistently inside each others mouths.  Soon, Ai’s hold around Risa’s waist tightened and the younger girl moaned into their lip lock. 

   Seeing that her girlfriend was enjoying their make-out session, Ai pushed her back towards the table, knocking the head chair out of the way.  Risa reached behind and gripped the edge of the table, trying not to fall.  The leader shifted the younger girl up a little bit, encouraging her to sit on the table, which Risa obliged to.  Ai broke away from the kiss but kept her arms around Risa’s waist.

   “Do you want to continue the experiment from the party?” she questioned in a husky voice.  “See how far you can go?”

   “I guess we won’t know unless we try,” the bean whispered in response.

   The leader took that as her cue to press her lip against Risa’s neck, bringing out a sigh.  The younger girl leaned her head back more as she spread her legs apart to hold her girlfriend closer.  When Ai licked a little bit of her skin, Risa responded by moaning while biting down on her bottom lip. 

   The leader smirked as her kisses slowly traveled down to Risa’s chest.  Ai slipped her hands under the younger girl’s shirt and stroked her smooth skin, making the victim arch her back and gasp.  The singer reached up and played with her girlfriend’s bras straps before unclasping the hook, which took Risa by surprise.  But she didn’t think to stop her older girlfriend; she was feeling even braver than she did at the party. 

   So Risa sat still, breathing heavily, as Ai lifted her shirt up with her loose undergarment to reveal her bare chest.  She looked away, blushing, feeling embarrassed by the way she was exposed.  Subconsciously, she put her arms around herself in an attempt to conceal her body.  But Ai took hold of her wrists and put them around her own neck. 

   “Don’t be scared,” the leader whispered as she gently stroked her girlfriend’s perky breasts.  “You look beautiful.”

   “Like I said,” Risa gasped, her breathing getting heavier as Ai’s stroking turned into massaging, “you need better lines to convince me.”

   The leader chuckled as she placed a kiss upon her girlfriend’s chest.  She took in the sensitive nub into her mouth and lightly sucked on it, getting a loud cry that stopped midway in response.  Ai continued to flick her tongue over the spot as she massaged the other mold, causing Risa to tighten her jaws so as not to yell out too loudly.

   The leader felt that her girlfriend’s responses to her actions were better than she had expected, and decided to take a bolder approach.  She slowly slid her hand down from Risa’s chest, to her bare stomach, to her upper thighs, then to her…

   “There you two are; I was looking all over— GAH!”

   Risa screamed as she turned away from the open door, where the blushing turtle stood, covering her face.

   “Haven’t you ever heard of knocking?” Ai growled, hooking her girlfriend’s bra back on.

   “I didn’t see anything!” Eri babbled.  “I just heard your voices in here and I had something to ask you, Ai, and then—”

   “It’s okay, Kameha,” Risa interrupted, pulling down her shirt and jumping off the table.  “I, um, was about to leave anyway.  Uh, you can talk to Ai now.”

   With that, the bean quickly skittered out of the room, avoiding eye contact with her friend.  Eri kept her head down but continued to shake it back and forth, not sure of where to look.  Ai sighed as her girlfriend left, and glared at the intruder.

   “Is it urgent?” the leader growled.  “If it’s not, then I suggest you start begging for forgiveness—”

   “It’s urgent on my account!” the turtle yelled.  “I… I have a dilemma.  And I need your help, Ai.”

   “… Okay,” Ai sighed, her responsible nature taking over.  “What is it?”

   “Um… well… I…”

   “… Eri, just spit it out…”

   “You see, the thing is…”

   “… Yes…?”

   “What does Reina look for in sex?” Eri blurted out.

   “That’s easy, that’s— wait, what?” the leader yelled, doing a double-take.  “Did you just ask me what Reina looks for in… sex?”

   “I thought maybe you knew!” Eri insisted, blushing bright red.  “I mean, you’ve known her for such a long time…”

   “Hey, we’re not that close!” the leader shouted, feeling her cheeks getting hot from embarrassment.  “That area is your business!”

   “Not yet…” Eri mumbled.  “But I realized it’s going to be her birthday soon… so I thought… maybe…”

   “I don’t need the details!” Ai interrupted.

   “So, do you have any idea?” Eri pleaded.

   “Um… you’re asking the wrong person here…” Ai mumbled.  “I… uh… wouldn’t know what Reina’s taste in… sex… is.” 

   An awkward silence followed.  Both girls were staring down at their feet, not knowing what to do.  Eri felt terribly stupid for asking while Ai felt terribly stupid for speaking so gracelessly. 

   “Okay…” Eri mumbled.  “Um, thanks for listening.  Sorry for being a bother.”

   “No, no, not a bother at all!” Ai said, her voice flying up a couple octaves.  “So… uh… I guess I’ll go change now.”

   “Yeah… you should go change.”

   “Yeah, I should.”

   “Yeah…”

   After another awkward pause, the singer quickly shuffled out of the room.

   “That has got to be the most awkward moment of my entire life,” Ai thought, quickly marching down the hallway.  “But… those two are already at that stage, huh?  I wonder how long it will take for me and Risa…?

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... Okay, now I hit a wall. :banghead:
This is bad, I really have to think of something.. :?
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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 65 - (8/5)]
« Reply #451 on: August 05, 2010, 08:47:46 AM »
^ nice chapter and Eri wanting to know Reina's secret is funny

my suggestion: write a one-shot
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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 65 - (8/5)]
« Reply #452 on: August 05, 2010, 08:50:50 AM »
Holy cow! :cow: That was cute and hot! :mon bleed2: Even I feel embarrassed when Kamei found them during their make out session.  :oops:

Why? Why was there an interruptionnn?! :mon headbang:

And lol at Kamei asking Ai-chan such questions.. :lol:

Awesome chapter! I love it! :mon thumb:

It's so good, I need moarrr~! :farofflook:

Don't worry! Take your time. :grin: I'm sure you'll think of even more good stuff. :thumbsup
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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 65 - (8/5)]
« Reply #453 on: August 05, 2010, 08:51:14 AM »
My suggestion : write the AiGaki perv once and for all and make us happy  :grin:
LOL xD

<3 Great chap, I uh... very much enjoyed it  :drool:
Can't wait for your next update  :heart:

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 65 - (8/5)]
« Reply #454 on: August 05, 2010, 10:35:37 AM »
LOL  XD Ada .. I like ur suggestion  :grin:
Chp. 65 wahhhhhhhhhh ... when i first read the chp, I thought my wish come true (perv. TakaGaki chp.)  :D and then ...  that little turtle is sooooooooooooooooooooooo disturbing  :panic:  :panic:  :panic:
Js take ur time SarangAi! I am sure you'll come up with an excellent plot again  :roll: (n' pull out all the lurkers  :lol:)
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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 65 - (8/5)]
« Reply #455 on: August 05, 2010, 01:20:14 PM »
Hot Takagaki make out session and then... D:Noo~ XP Why, Eri!? Why?! And then awkwardness XD

As for writers block, why don't you try going back to what inspired you in the first place. Or just take a break all together and come back to it later. Either way, all your fans will be here waiting for you.

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 65 - (8/5)]
« Reply #456 on: August 05, 2010, 02:24:53 PM »
Darnnit, Eri! Why'd you have to interrupt the hot takagaki make-out session!!  :angry1:
But aww, Eri's so clueless~ :wub: asking a question like that... I can't really stay mad at her. XD
Heh, if Risa doesn't like Ai's corny lines, I'll gladly take them~ :mon misch:
ACKK~ writer's block SUCKS!!  :banghead: think of something~ think of something... heh, or you can always write us some pervs in the mean time, LOL, until something comes up. :mon fyeah:
Hmm, what about writing about Sayu? I wonder how she's doing. :P
Good luck!  :omamori:

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 65 - (8/5)]
« Reply #457 on: August 05, 2010, 03:55:51 PM »
no! eri why did you do that!! :frustrated: :farofflook:

anyway you can always try some one-shots or so? :hee:

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 65 - (8/5)]
« Reply #458 on: August 05, 2010, 04:27:25 PM »
Man I miss a few chapters, AGAIN!, I know I'm sorry I do try to keep up but ur to fast for me to kep up :doh:

What I come bact too is an avalance of pure fluff  :inlove: Though poor Ai getting asked about what Riena's sex habbits are  :lol: I think that would be the most awkward moment of anyones life!

Hmm things are getting to happy and lovey, why do I get the feeling that Sayu's dastardly plan may soon come into play? :cry:

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 65 - (8/5)]
« Reply #459 on: August 05, 2010, 05:10:31 PM »
DANG so close~!!!! why eri why now~ D: XD lol at the akward moment of the month XDDDDDDDDDD maybe ai knows reina pretty well but she dosent have to know EVERYTHING XDD

and writers block dose suck >.< as other ppl said before maybe write a oneshot or 2 or like just take a mini break and do stuff that u enjoy for a bit. it might raise ur insperation XD or as ada said wite that dang perv....or maybe u should do a takagaki oneshot perv! XD even better! killing 2 birds with one stone! XD.....lol
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