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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 77 - (8/15)]
« Reply #600 on: August 16, 2010, 05:33:08 AM »
OMG.  :shocked

I'm... woah. o_o *stoned*

A part of me says "Sayu, pls don't die  :cry: " cause i feel so bad for her, but the other says "Go die betch D:" so we can have our TakaGaki happily ever after xD

But I just know she won't die cause you won't let that happen xD
8D So I'll patiently wait for the next update xD


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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 77 - (8/15)]
« Reply #601 on: August 16, 2010, 05:41:02 AM »
First off Otanjoubi Omedetou

Wow I hope Sayu wasn't badly injured.....
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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 77 - (8/15)]
« Reply #602 on: August 16, 2010, 05:43:56 AM »
1st of HAPPy BELATED B-day! shame on u for not telling us! :tama-mad: lol

2nd i feel like its jun that will get pwned by mr. car XD idk why though lol
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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 77 - (8/15)]
« Reply #603 on: August 16, 2010, 05:52:40 AM »
Happy b-day!!! :w00t:

Oh dang...that's sad. I was expecting Sayu to tell Gaki that Ai is Ai-chan, but that's just sad. :(

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 77 - (8/15)]
« Reply #604 on: August 16, 2010, 05:55:17 AM »
w00t~~ happy birthday!!  :yossi: ooo, you're the same age as me!  :D

OMG... this chapter...  :gyaaah: oh mann, I started tearing up from the beginning... I feel so sorry for Sayu and Junjun also.. 
*Sayu runs into the road*
OH shietttt, this isn't happening is it!?! :pleeease: she better not die or something...

You really pulled off all the emotions in this one! :mon cry: Good job! :cow: Now I gotta go grab some tissues... :fainted: and maybe go buy a new tissue box in case this heads down the Korean drama road... :roll: ahaha

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 77 - (8/15)]
« Reply #605 on: August 16, 2010, 06:00:05 AM »
Happy Birthday :on BDay: :yossi: :yossi:

O.M.G sayu you better don't die here. if you die now we don't have that much angsty then :twisted:

and here i thought sayu will reveal ai is aichan :banghead:

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 77 - (8/15)]
« Reply #606 on: August 16, 2010, 06:46:23 AM »
 
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That's all I'm gonna comment cuz this chapter left me speechless...  :shocked
...and sad  :cry:
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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 77 - (8/15)]
« Reply #607 on: August 16, 2010, 06:46:58 AM »
HAPPY BIRTHDAY~!!

*reads the chapter*

 :shocked omg...

kinda too speechless to know what to type after reading that  :nervous but please!!! let sayu be ok!!  :cry: maybe have her realize junjun's love? ^^''


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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 76 - (8/13)]
« Reply #608 on: August 16, 2010, 07:18:19 AM »
@Beecubed: I loved your "essay"  XD  it encouraged me a lot again, i'm glad that you're enjoying all this... it makes everything seem worthwhile (and that goes to all the otehr commenters too) :D :wub:

That was probably going to be the last essay from me... I'll try not to fall behind so badly again, because it sure takes time to go through and comment on each chapter thoroughly.

Your chapters are normally pretty short, so I won't have to write essays in order to respond  :nervous

Oh, and HAPPY BELATED BIRTHDAY!  :luvuluvu:

Anyways, now....

I'm glad Gaki isn't going to deny her feelings for Ai-chan or come to some compromise for Sayu, that in itself makes me want to celebrate!

And despite knowing that Sayu is wicked and devilish and incredibly selfish, I do feel sorry for her. At least in this chapter. She seemed so... normal.  :(

Poor Jun, her inner thoughts are always so helpless. I hope at the end of the story Sayu understands just how much Jun Jun cares about her and they get together... no killing off characters please  :bleed eyes:

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She saw another girl run into the street from the opposite side.

I wasn't very clear when I read this... is this girl that Gaki sees running into the street (I'm assuming to save Sayu) Jun? I have a feeling it could be somebody like Eri... (and thus that's where Tanakame drama comes in...).

Purely speculation at this point, but I guess we'll find out, hey...

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 77 - (8/15)]
« Reply #609 on: August 16, 2010, 08:18:25 AM »
Oh no ...   :mon wtf: .. Poor Sayu ..  :cry:
u r not gonna make her die rite ?  :mon runcry:
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“Risa-chan,” Sayumi sobbed, grabbing the older girl’s hands, “please don’t do this to me.  I need you; please don’t leave me like this…”

   “I’m so sorry,” Risa murmured.

 :cry: I know .. it's too much for her ..

hmm .. Why don't u let Risa have both Ai & Sayu   :mon misch:  So it' makes both AiSayu happy  :D
And, I think .. Risa don't mind ..  :mon evillaff:

Oh .. it's late but ... ' Happy Birthday To You~ '   :tama-music: :tama-bigheart: :tama-apeshit:
Hope you had a nice time with your friends!  :deejay
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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 77 - (8/15)]
« Reply #610 on: August 16, 2010, 10:23:09 AM »
OMG! :shocked: Sayumi XD
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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 77 - (8/15)]
« Reply #611 on: August 16, 2010, 11:34:59 AM »
:on BDay: :on BDay: HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!! :on BDay: :on BDay: Hope it was a good one~!


Man, I really didn't think Risa would be so final when it came to Sayu, I thought there would be a hug or a pat on the head, a turning her over to Jun Jun or something! I'm kind of proud of her, in a way, for being so strong about her feelings. And I'm quite surprised at Sayu for not freaking out and blabbing everything, like I thought she would, in an attempt to at least destroy Risa's happiness with Ai.

But oh noes! Sayumi~! Is she okay? There can't be any evil drama without her!! :panic:

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 77 - (8/15)]
« Reply #612 on: August 16, 2010, 02:04:54 PM »
can't wait for the next chapter :shocked:

and Happy Birthday SarangAi !!! :cow:

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 77 - (8/15)]
« Reply #613 on: August 16, 2010, 02:35:47 PM »
Your killing sayu?!?!?!!! Oh nuooooz! Whyyy!

Omg so cool! Your bday is (I'm guessing) a few days before mine~!
Happy happy bustday!!! .. oops I mean birthday~!

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 77 - (8/15)]
« Reply #614 on: August 16, 2010, 05:05:21 PM »
Man missed loads agian! I've just been so busy recently!

Chapter 75: Aww pure tanakame RabuRabu  :wub: Eri saying she misses Reina when she sleeps was judt too cute!!!

Chapter 76: Well Sayu and Jun come back with a bang (or a smash anyway :lol:) At least Risa now realizes that she has hurt Sayu but why did Sayu not tell Risa the secrect she knows about Ai? was she just too upset at seening them together to think to mention it?

chapter 77: I had a hard time deciding who to feel more sorry for in this chapter, Sayu or Jun. Sayu feels like she has lost the love of her life where as Jun is listening to the love of her life say to her that she has just lost the love of her life who is another girl! :cry: Sayu wins cos she got hit by a car, will she live, Will Gaki be wracked with grief if she dies, will Jun try and get revenge on Gaki for 'killing' Sayu? what if she lives will Gaki dump Ai for Sayu out of guilt what will happen to Ai and Jun if that happens?

So many questions so next chapter please!!!

P.S. I think your coment about the story getting more seroius was pretty accurate  :nervous

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 77 - (8/15)]
« Reply #615 on: August 16, 2010, 09:44:44 PM »
@Ada: yes, i will not let that happen :P

@kurosawa87: yeah, i hope so too XD

@kawaii beam: lol no it's sayu XD

@kano-chan: and it'll get sadder... :cry:

@xanimefreak13x: LOL korean drama road??? XD  it'll be sad without even going that way :(

@fallenxangel: yeah, cuz Sayu=Angst, right? :twisted:

@Swtme03: LOLOL you and your emoticons XD and allow me to be your 400th thanker :twothumbs

@lonewind: oh we'll see about the SayuJun plot... I actually dunno yet :D

@Beecubed: it's fine~ at least i'm getting comments XD oh, and it is Junjun running out :)

@Thor87: oh no, cheating Risa isn't happening... :shocked XD

@Fushigidane: where have YOU been??? I haven't seen you around XD

@rndmnwierd: yeah, Risa can be strong as long as she has Ai :wub: and there's a reason sayu's not babbling everything, you'll see :twisted:

@junejy: next chapter is here! XD

@stefy: since when was I killing Sayu? there's no drama without her! :D

@oddball: Questions are good~~ :twothumbs


Wow, so many comments!!! Thanks for all the birthday wishes, ppl~ :twothumbs
I'm updating a little earlier today... I'm not sure if I'll have time for another one later, we'll see :D

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Chapter 78

   A light brown-haired girl pushed through the double doors of the hospital and ran into the hallway, followed by the yankii idol.  She saw her friend balled up on a small bench with her own girlfriend next to her.  Across from them was her cousin’s pianist friend, who was standing with her back against the wall, glaring down at the tile floor. 

   “What happened?” Eri growled.  “Where’s Sayumi?”

   “She’s in the emergency room,” Ai whispered.  “She’ll be okay; the ambulance got to her fast.”

   “Risa, what exactly happened?” Eri said through her teeth.  “How the hell did Sayumi get hit by a car?”

   “It’s all my fault,” Risa mumbled, clenching her fists around her hair.  “I shouldn’t have just left her there… it’s all my fault, I should’ve stopped…”

   Eri gritted her teeth and turned to face the panda. “Do you want to tell me what happened since Risa seems to be busy blaming herself?”

   “Gaki-san is right,” Junjun muttered.  “It is all her fault.”

   “Don’t give me any of that bullshit!” Eri shouted, exploding with anger.  “My one and only cousin is in the freaking emergency room!  I don’t care whose fault it was; I want to know how she got there and whether she’ll come back out safe and sound!  So somebody better start telling me what’s going on right now, damn it!”

   “Calm down, Eri,” Reina whispered, putting a hand on the turtle’s shoulder.  “This is a hospital; you have to keep your voice down.”

   “Don’t tell me to calm down!” Eri shrilled.  “Sayumi just got hit by a car!  She already has a weak body!  What if… what if she doesn’t pull through?” 

   She paused for a while as little crystals of tears started to form at the corner of her eyes.  The younger girl pulled her into a hug in an effort to console her.

   “She’s going to be fine, baby,” the yankii whispered.  “Your cousin may be weak physically but she’s strong-willed.  She’ll make it, don’t worry.”

   “It’s all my fault, Eri,” Risa mumbled, tightening her arms around her legs.  “I’m so sorry… It’s all my fault…”

   “Don’t say that,” Ai murmured.  “It wasn’t your fault, it was an accident.”

   At that moment, the red light above the room they were all waiting outside of turned off.  A man with glasses dressed in all green walked out, holding a clipboard.

   “Michishige Sayumi?” he announced.

   “Yes?” Risa answered, immediately standing up.

   “Are you a legal family member of the patient?”

   “That’s me,” Eri replied, wiping away the tears on her face.  “How’s my cousin?  What happened?”

   “Thankfully, the car didn’t hit her as hard as we thought,” the doctor said, flipping through the papers in his hand.  “A few broken ribs, fracture in her left arm, a broken left leg, and lots of bruises.  She’ll have to stay with us for a while, so she’s already been transferred to her room.  She’s in shock so she’s asleep now, but she didn’t suffer any serious head injuries so she should wake up in a couple days.”

   “Thank goodness,” Eri sighed.  All the tension that had built up seemed to come tumbling down, unbuckling her knees.  Reina caught her before she could slide down to the floor.  “Reina-chan, she’s going to be alright.  Sayumi is going to be okay…”

   “I told you,” the yankii smiled gently.  “Next time I tell you to calm down, you better calm down.”

   “We should go see her,” Eri mumbled.  “Can we go see her?”

   “She’s in her usual room,” the doctor said before walking away.

   The two girls walked through the double-doors and disappeared.  Risa finally unclenched her fists and leaned on her girlfriend’s shoulder.

   “Thank goodness…” she whispered.  “Thank goodness she’s okay…”

   “I think you deserve some rest now,” Ai said.  “It’s been a long morning.  You didn’t even eat yet.”

   “I don’t deserve anything,” Risa mumbled.  “I want to see Sayu.”

   “Gaki-san,” Junjun called, finally opening her mouth for the first time.  “May I speak to you for a while alone?”

   Her eyes were cold and black as she glared at the bean.  Risa understood why she was getting this treatment from the panda though; after all, she had just harmed the girl that she was in love with.  Junjun’s lips were pursed tightly with her fists clenched.  It looked as though she wanted to throw a punch right then and there.  In an odd way, Risa kind of wanted her to hit her.  She felt that she should accept any kind of punishment in her way.

   “Of course, Jun,” Risa answered, standing up.  “We can go outside.”

   “I’m going with you,” Ai said, resting her hand on the bean’s shoulder protectively.  She had seen the killing-intent in the pianist’s eyes.

   “No, this is between me and Junjun,” Risa whispered.  “You stay here.”

   Before the idol could protest, her lover followed the black-haired girl out of the hallway.  An uneasy feeling built up inside her stomach.  Would her girlfriend be safe?  What did Junjun want to talk about with Risa?  Where would this event leave them in the future?

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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 78 - (8/16)]
« Reply #616 on: August 16, 2010, 10:15:41 PM »
OH MA GOD now risa's gonna be all emo >.< why~?? and i hope jun wont like go all chinese asassin on the poor girl. yet i also feel sad for jun >.<
and maybe ai should go all secret agent and sneak the convo XD
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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 78 - (8/16)]
« Reply #617 on: August 16, 2010, 11:23:17 PM »
Either Jun will convince her or Risa can tell her to step up
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Re: Kokoro no Uta ~Mainly TakaGaki, TanaKame~ [UPDATE - Ch. 78 - (8/16)]
« Reply #618 on: August 17, 2010, 12:45:20 AM »
Dang! I don't think we've ever seen Eri go off like that, though I expected the reactions of the other girls. Risa beating herself up and Jun wanting to beat Risa up and Ai not wanting her girlfriend with a black eye. Is it bad that I kinda want to see that very one sided cat fight? :sweatdrop:

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« Reply #619 on: August 17, 2010, 04:59:34 AM »
First, I was like, whew! Sayu is okay. (just like I thought) Then the part with a few broken ribs and fractures and I was like  :shocked . That's not okay.

It sounded like she won't wake up for a few years. :sweatdrop:

Oh no..it's going to be even sadder?  :O :( :cry:

I need to be prepared.  :(

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