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EPILOGUE part I BELOW
EPILOGUE part II
CHAPTER 1
CHAPTER 2
CHAPTER 3
CHAPTER 4
CHAPTER 5
CHAPTER 6
CHAPTER 7
CHAPTER 8
CHAPTER 9
CHAPTER 10
CHAPTER 11
CHAPTER 12
CHAPTER 13 PART I
CHAPTER 13 PART II (DARE OR BARE)
CHAPTER 14(QUALITY TIME)
CHAPTER 15 (JEALOUS CAT)
CHAPTER 16 PART I (SEMI FINALS)
CHAPTER 16 PART II (CHAMPIONSHIP and AFTER PARTY)
CHAPTER 17 (PLANS)
CHAPTER 18 (SURPRISES)
CHAPTER 19 (VOWS)UPDATED!!






I know its kinda weird but I made the epilogue first in my fic  :?, to assure the flow of the story, so that i won’t lose in my own story line…sorry minna.. I hope you enjoy this, this my first fic..pls do comment  I really appreciate it. :nervous
i was inspired by all of the authors here.. esp to flean and moe so love their fic, and now im making some of atsumina, kojiyuu and other i guess..  :nervous

AIRFORCE RANKING
Wing Commander – Oshima Mai
ELITE TEAM
Squadron Leader- Takahashi Minami
Flight Lieutenants- Yukirin, Sayaka
Flying Officers-  Yuko, Micchan, Haruna, Mariko, Sae, Acchan, Mayu, Tomochin and Rena.
Officer Cadets- Sashiko, Tomomi Kasai, Jurina



EPILOGUE

After all we’ve been through, to our bad times, our misunderstanding, our fights, jealousy and of course to our ever sweet moments ‘till now. The first kiss (that was accidental), the second kiss (I counted it as our true first kiss), our confession (in the middle of our mission how can I forget that), our first date as a normal couple, I mean normal people (not workers taking their break), the sweet night moments we spend together and my ever failed proposal that makes you cry (I don’t know if you cried for my failure or you cried for happiness). All of these memories are still fresh in my head and so in my heart I promise to love you even more each day. We’ve been best friends for 4 years and a couple for 2 years. Today is our first anniversary as a married couple sharing my name to you is my priceless pride already.

“Hey Squadron Leader Midget! Are you done? Remember were going to buy flowers and set the place right? “ Yuko her best friend tapping her back.
“ah right! What time is it?” Takamina ask yuko as she watches the gift being wrapped by the lady.
“time for us to go, like there’s only 2 hours left duh~ after we brought the flower were heading back to the headquarters right? Remember the 30 minute meeting?” miichan answers takamina in a hurry way.
“Sh*t the meeting! I almost forgot we better hurry ” takamina with her adrenaline rush word.
“here’s the gift all set and ready, thank you and come back again” the sales clerk bow to them and gave them the gift.
“Arigatou” the trio chorused.

The 3 of them heading to the flower shop, picking the flowers they have already reserved. Then rush back to the headquarters. They keep the items in a safe room where officer cadet sashiko was there one of their truce in the upcoming surprise. Just 3 minutes before the time they arrived, they are the last one to fit the table. Wing Commander Mai Flight Lieutenant Yukirin and Flight Lieutenant Sayaka was already there, The Flying officer are complete too (except Haruna who’s having a 1 year leave on the field, but she can come always in the headquarters if she wants too)consisting of Mariko, Sae, Acchan, Mayu, Tomochin and Rena.

“Flying officer Minegishi , Flying officer Oshima and Squadron Leader Takahashi Minami, oh crap you’re almost late where have you been? Shall we start? I’m acting as the boss here, sorry com! Let’s proceed shall we? So that we can still prepare for our special mission ” sayaka exclaimed and gave takamina a wink.
“What special mission?” Acchan curiously ask and staring directly to takamina.
oh god her eyes, I can’t resist” takamina’s thoughts
“Fight it! You want to screw our hardships this day?” Yuko murmured to her as she noticed takamina was being glazed.
“oh that mission, its not really a mission acchan I just want them to go to the field to check if our new cadets are ready for their first flying mission, just to give a few words to them and the pros and cons” Commander  Mai saves takamina after being caught off guard by her wife.
“Yeah, that’s it! Thanks for answering commander” takamina gave acchan a sweet smile as acchan smiles back takamina then sits along with yuko and miichan. 

The meeting lasted for 30 minutes, they just discussed the cadets upcoming mission and who are going to handle them, basically not them because they want other officer to experience more. They have been in the sky field for almost 7 years, all of them in one aligning team always 16 people in a survival mission, before having a back up team, they must fly first and study the location above, but in the end these elite team will go forth and succeeded, with the risk of having a wounded body after the mission but still they manage to stay alive and stick together as a team.  After the meeting Commander mai request acchan to walk with her in the airbase (it’s not that far) to see the new models of aircrafts. Each flying officer has her own aircraft all design accordingly to their personality. (mai is part of takamina’s truce to make acchan busy)

“I still remember when I first fly my suit (plane) I was so nervous back then but when you’re up there everything seems so clear and lite. Fighting together with your friends up there is sure is an incredible feeling.” Acchan stated as she reminisce her flying days as a cadet before.
“but you surprise us acchan, you have the skill, no wonder you’re the the flying ace ‘till now”  mai proudly stated to her giving her a salute, the black length hair girl responded too. Until all of a sudden acchan turn her vision 360 and everything turn black. Mai captured her in her arms when she’s about to fall. “acchan!! Acchan!! Wake up!!”

MEANWHILE, back in the headquarters takamina’s allies are busy preparing for the surprise, she planned to do the celebration in the field because that was the place when they first met with her beloved, the table is ready the flowers are set, the food is still in the kitchen but almost ready. Then a tall lady arrived cuddling a baby wrapped in a blanket. “are we late?” the lady said in a worry. “no just in time, were still preparing haruna” mariko said as she touched the baby’s hand and played it.

“NYAN NYAN!!~~ ” yuko shouts as she seen her wife cuddling their baby, she then kiss haruna on the lips and kiss the baby in the head. “oooh so cute just like mommy you got my dimples, here let me have her my sweetie” yuko get the baby as haruna smiled to her lovable squirrel.
“I hope she’s not perverted like you” miichan said while laughing.
“I think she has nyan nyan’s attitude because she so behave, unlike yuko she can’t stay in one place, look at her she’s just listening” tomochin said as she’s observing the 4 month old little baby staring to them and had a face of “what are they saying?”
“takamina papa need some help? I want to help too, you help me with yuko before so I want to be part of this also.” Haruna explained as she go near to the table and start arranging the flowers.
“TAKAMINA SAMA! You have to stop that now! Acchan had collapse in the airbase all of a sudden and commander mai send her to the hospital pls follow them” sashiko, explain running her breath away. Mai called her immediately to tell takamina the incident. Without any talk all of them headed to the hospital, except sashiko , tomomi, jurina and rena they agreed to stay and keep the preparation safe in any case.

In the Hospital
“nurse please tell us where takahashi atsuko’s room now!” takamina immediately give an order as if the nurse is in her command. “nurse please, we are in a panic situation here” sayaka said in a calm voice to the nurse. “second floor room 12 officer” the nurse notice they were officer because of their uniform. “thank you” miichan expressed.

TBC..

i'll update tomorrow evening  :nervous
how was it?  :panic: please leave a comment 
im about to post the continuation but im sleepy  :yawn:



« Last Edit: July 11, 2012, 08:52:05 PM by miayaka »

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Re: Flying with you (atsumina,kojiyuu and other)
« Reply #1 on: June 01, 2012, 08:18:11 PM »
Haha!! So finally you posted it!!  XD  When I saw the tittle 'Flying' I thought it's gonna be 'Flying Get'..lololo.. :lol:

Another army, I mean air force themed fic.. nice2.. me like..  :twothumbs

and why do I feel like there's gonna be a good news on the next update? or maybe not..lol.. but I do hope so..  XD

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Re: Flying with you (atsumina,kojiyuu and other)
« Reply #2 on: June 01, 2012, 08:21:00 PM »
I like your story, its good and very interesting.
i started laughing when Yuko called Takamina "Squadron Leader Midget" :lol:
i wonder what happened to Atsuko??? :?
so please continue the hard work :on GJ:
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Re: Flying with you (atsumina,kojiyuu and other)
« Reply #3 on: June 01, 2012, 09:01:38 PM »
OMG!!!!! I love your story pls keep updating  :bow:

Pls. update immediately pls....... :)
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« Reply #4 on: June 02, 2012, 12:16:16 AM »
Sugee!

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Re: Flying with you (atsumina,kojiyuu and other)
« Reply #5 on: June 02, 2012, 03:20:57 AM »
Wow. Interesting. So, Acchan's name is Takahashi Atsuko? LOL. :thumbup I wonder what happen to Acchan all of sudden. :? And, Somehow, I love those three [Minegishi, Yuko, Takamina]. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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Re: Flying with you (atsumina,kojiyuu and other)
« Reply #6 on: June 02, 2012, 11:24:23 AM »
Acchan!!!!! I wonder if it's what I think hehe
Kojiyuu couple is so cute!!!! And their baby too!!! What's her/him name?

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« Reply #7 on: June 02, 2012, 11:56:51 AM »
OMG KOJIYUU COUPLE HAS A BABY?!?!?! OMGGG

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Re: Flying with you (atsumina,kojiyuu and other) UPDATED
« Reply #8 on: June 02, 2012, 03:37:42 PM »
Thank you for all of your comments minna  XD, it made me happy.. As I promise here’s the continuation of my epilogue LOL my epilogue is kinda long, but I will post the chapter 1 after this, just need to fix the situation.. 
I will hang up the epilogue just a little hehehe maybe *wink*

EPILOGUE continuation..

“damn this elevator!, I can’t wait anymore” takamina being impatient pressing the up button. “thar thar relax, breathe in breathe out takamina, com mai is there I know shes taking care of your wifey”  mariko holding both shoulders of their leader.
“how can I calm down, I don’t know what happen to her all these days she’s so healthy and just an hour ago she was smiling at me then she’s now in the hospital, kame sama help us!” her tears begun to appear. 
*Ting* the elevator finally open up, “you know we could take the stairs, I think it’s faster if we just walk, by the way acchan’s room is in second floor haist, but never mind we’re already here” mayu sighs.
“No! I don’t want my nyan nyan to walk carrying our sleeping princess, nyan nyan kissu kissu” ”yuuchan were on the elevator and our baby is here I can’t do that maybe later”
“oi! Stop that you PDA couple were here already” sayaka interrupts them.
Takamina leading the rush to room 12, she can’t stop her feet anymore like she’s being magnet. There she saw mai and the doctor going out of the room, and mai bow to the doctor thanking her.
“commander mai!” takamina salutes but before she could ask her many questions miichan and the others bump to her and ask already what happened and they are all exaggerating.
“is acchan really sick?” sae
 “does she need blood? Oh my were not on the same type” yukirin
“is she going to be on operation?” “is she can’t speak anymore?” “does she forgets everything?” “are you going to cut her hands?” everybody is on the ruckus asking all of the questions in the doctor, while mai just looking at them and shaking her head. She looks at takamina who has the face of “wtf are you saying am I going to lose her? “ takamina face went pale then suddenly the doctor broke out her silence and shout.
“What the heck is wrong with you people? Is this the first time you’ve heard a woman collapse then she suddenly need an operation or got an amnesia ? hey!! All of you listen! Look here!”waving her hand and pointing it to her eyes. “where is takahashi minami?” “I am” takamina finally speaks, she lost her energy thinking and listening to all the questions her comrades speculates.
 “She’s looking for you always she’s more worried about your reaction when she had a collapse, but she’s conscious now and the nurse is taking care of her”
“can I see her now? Please doctor let me see her!” takamina being impatient again, she regain her consciousness when she heard the doctor’s word “not yet, I must tell you something first” the doctor acted weirdly “oh no! here it goes I don’t wanna listen” the crowd murmurs “shut up!! guys please let her speak to end this. So doctor tell me im ready whatever it is now!” ordering again. “Squadron takahashi (the doctor shows a sad face) im afraid…well um..(takamina and the others being silent and nervous)how can I say this its hard, im married too you know and I know this feeling”

“the F*ck!!! Say it already im getting nervous here!!”  “takamidget language pls my baby is here although she’s sleeping she can still heard voices in her dreams” yuko for the first time react on her own use of language. Everyone gazing at her and had a WOW face. “yuuchan that’s so sweeeet” haruna kiss her on lips. “well that just for today because the baby is here” yuko smirking and blushing.

“so am I going to say it or not?” doctor waving exclaiming to them.
“You’re the one delaying it doctor we are all listening ” mayu with a duh~ face yukirin tilt her head with that childish expression.
“well squadron leader takahashi minami, your wife atsuko from this day on you must take care of here triple times you’ve been doing”
“ehhh??!!” everyone in chorus


The doctor held takamina’s hands and shake it “Congartulations! your wife is 6 weeks pregnant” the doctor’s clear voice and smiling to her and said it calmly “hahaha I got you officer! I was just acting before to raise the tension sorry hahaha” the doctor laughing and everyone is just staring at her in an troll face. “by the way soon to be fathered officer takahashi, your wife doesn’t know this yet, I want you to be the one to tell her, because this is your precious moment in your life” the doctor said it seriously. Takamina sobbing for happiness she couldn’t explained she never felt this before even winning over their enemies in the sky, she’s shaking all over then mariko hugged her tightly “omedatou takamina, im so happy for the both of you atlast the product of your love, go now to her and you better not cry so you can explain it to her clearly, acchan is a tsundere ya know”

“hai, I’ll be going, thank you very much” takmina bowing to all of them.
She then knock on room 12, the nurse open it as she’s about to go out and let her enter, everyone was outside talking to the doctor jabbling around in happiness, takamina looks at them like “this is it”.. yuko gave her a fist signing you can do it.
Acchan was looking the other way in the room, in the windows side. She then turn when she saw someone is coming and its takamina. Acchan lift up her body to sat, takamina rush as she assist atsuko to sit properly, with pillows on her back. She then kisses her on her forehead while holding her hands.
“minami, are you crying? Your eyes are red.. im ok  its just a collapse the doctor says im healthy, there’s nothing to worry” acchan cupped her cheek and gave her prettiest smile that takamina’s heart melt like butter. “im just worried about you I thought im going to lose you, I can’t bear that atsuko I really can’t, but now im the happiest wanna know why?”

“un why? Feels weird” 

Takamina gently place her hand on acchan’s tummy, “atsuko I love you even more, you having our child..your pregnant” takamina’s eyes are teary and she can’t stop her emotion as she said it to her wife.

Acchan felt weird she couldn’t believe it, like she was shocked for a moment after minami’s words sink on to her, “Im pregnant? I’m having another life inside me” her thoughts. Touching her own tummy now acchan feels weird she then smiles and tears rolled to her cheeks, she didn’t noticed she was crying, she’s just feeling the happiness inside her. Minami sat beside her on the bed and hugged her caressing her cheeks. “minami..i don’t know how to express it, she smiles and while tears on her eyes” minami pressed her lips on hers. Acchan replies the kiss, their making it gentle at first but acchan pulled out to take a breath she then pulls minami closer to her and as expected from the ace she’s so bold, making a torrid kiss inside the room, in the hospital room “you sure is agressive” “shhh” acchan continue to kiss her, while their lips where busy battling minami’s hands was about to move inside acchan’s clothes but the door suddenly opens, “ei! Continue that later there’s a baby here she just woke up” yuko shielding her baby while the atsumina couple is kissing. The couple then stop and look at each other blushing. “yuko your always interrupting us

“Omedatou acchan!takamina!”  the team happily greeted them
“you should be more careful from now on and avoid some negative emotions to make the baby happy and healthy ”nyan nyan expressed as she gave the baby to yuko.
“i hope the baby will get acchan’s asset” mariko smirked
“eh?? What do you mean by that? Am I not a good looking person?” takamina point her hands on her chest. “yes you are..” acchan hugs her on the back that makes takamina blush
“good thing tomomi’s not here, she will be jealous and ask me about this” tomochin sigh
“yukirin I want that too” “eh?? Not now your still not in the proper age maybe 2 years after” yuki pat mayu on the head.
“don’t tell me your jealous too?” sayaka gave sae an eyebrow “lets talk about that later” sae being shy
“you can continue that later, I gave her already a shot that ease her dizziness to avoid collapse, there’s no need to admit her she can now go after signing this clearance by his husband” the doctor appeared and gave them some paper to sign. “alright the celebration is up!” miichan shout
“atsuko before we go home lets go back to akiba air base I want to show you something very important”
“as you wish my darling” then she kissed again takamina on the lips not caring for all the people watching them. Takamina then gestures to miichan to follow up sashiko on the base to prepare the surprise. “ai ai captain” the gachapin wink.

TBC..
after this im posting the chapter1 today too..
im hanging the epilogue guys.. i hope you'll like it..  :nervous

@kahem idk the name of kojiyuu baby yet.. im still thinking
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« Reply #9 on: June 02, 2012, 04:10:45 PM »
Wow. Cool~ Atsuko is Pregnant. LOL. The others were Jealous. I can't wait to see the Baby! It must be so Cute. Thanks for the Update. :thumbup
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« Reply #10 on: June 02, 2012, 06:20:39 PM »
Before I continue the epilogue I must post the chapter1 to know the beginning of the story,
don’t worry this isn’t that long.. my epilogue is more long than the chapter
atsumina baby in the epilogue will be continue after these chapters :nervous
this fic is almost finish, im just editing them to add some scenes to be more exciting please do leave your comment THANK YOU :nervous..
The names of the machines in my fic are excerpt from the anime skygirls,
because im having a hard time making names on the mobile suit (plane). I now present..


CHAPTER 1


7 years ago, akiba airbase was accepting applicants for batch 48 cadets, among thousands of applicants from different countries and places only 16 have passed. Akiba airbase is not just an ordinary airforce team, they are the one that is most equipped and most advance in terms of technology specially in their aircraft.
So that a lot of applicants wants to be part of this aircraft team.
They are not hiring based on physical appearance, they have an exclusive evaluation of each of the cadet to fit the position. 
akiP the marshal of the royal airforce he is the head of all, followed by TGSK the air chief  marshal.

“it seems batch 48 has the lowest numbers of accepted cadets, but they are all impressive I must admit that, they have the skills I wonder if their the one who will fit the mobile suit ” akiP tells TGSK while looking at the forms containing the personal profile of batch48. “I agree I’ll meet them today in the afternoon to welcome them to the base”

16 girls arrived in the akiba airbased, all of them are good looking, strangers to one another except for the two girls who are childhood friends and luckily both of them accepted as cadets. “whoa this sure is awesome, I mean fantastic, oh no its cool!! Whatever I can’t describe it I want to explore it and the airplanes so huge” yuko blabbing to her best friend takamina “that’s an aircraft, a mobile suit that’s they’ve called it” a girl corrected yuko “hi sorry to interrupt the discussion, ive just studied about aircrafts and I fond to know them, by the way my name is miichan I hope we can get along” “my name is takahashi minami you can call me takamina and this blabbing girl is my bestfriend yuko nice to meet you” “nice to meet you” yuko then duet takamina with her greeting. The three of them headed in the base, wandering around the aircrafts, the engines, the weapon and more, they noticed that they the only one wandering the area. “I wonder if only the 3 of us are hired, well we must be fully skilled hahaha” yuko exclaimed proudly “oh holy crap, here we go again yuko I think were late!!!! Welcome to the club miichan, gaaaa first day of meeting and we are late, what a bad start!” takamina running dragging the two.

TGSK is talking and welcoming the cadets, “I guess your only 13, your supposed to be 16”
“gomenasai, were late” the 3 of them breathe heavily as they arrived in the meeting place.
“were lost”miichan answers quickly to hide their mistake while fonding with the engines.
“alright I understand since this is your first time here, but I don’t want to happened this next time we are very strict when it comes to time, please recognize your name as I call you”

All the girls look at them, a tall cat like girl chuckling on them and gave them a smile.
“I found my destiny, so gorgeous, flawless, pretty my dream girl oh my..i want to know her name I want to get close to her, I want her to be my roommate, I like her already~~” yuko whispered to takamina and miichan while giving her a sigh.

“akimoto sayaka” “hai”
“miyazawa sae” “hai”
“watanabe mayu” “hai”
“oshima yuko” “hai”
“Minegishi minami” “hai, gomen just call me miichan..arigatou”
“shinoda mariko” “hai”
“maeda atsuko” “hai”
Takamina turn to her right side in she sees the girl “she has the prettiest smile here, I wonder if shes friendly”
“Sashihara rino” “hai”
“itano tomochin” “hai”
“kasai tomomi” “chiyuu”
“eh??!” everyone looks at her
hmm shes cute though”  tomochin POV
“kashiwagi yuki” “hai”
interesting..” mayu POV
“takahashi minami” “hai”
“kojima haruna” “hai”
oh so shes haruna, my nyan nyan be ready I will do everything to get close to you” yuko POV with an evil laugh
“matsui jurina” “hai”
“matsui rena” “hai”
“eh?! You two siblings?” sae ask, “nope” both answers in rapidly and smile
And last but not the least “Kuramochi Asuka” “hai” she then gives a wink to takamina

“oi my friend here has already a fan huh, wink wink wink” yuko teasing her
“What’s with that girl shes weird, giving me a wink, I bet I’d be happy if maeda san would do that”
Not knowing maeda atsuko was looking at takamina without noticing “she’s cute also her height, I want to know her more”  Atsuko POV
“I sense some romance here, first day of meeting weee I hope I can get mine too” miichan says while looking at the other girls.

“OK girls listen carefully, I will announce your roommate and your rooms, youre equally divided by four”
“maeda,oshima,shinoda,itano”
“takahashi,kojima,minegeshi,kashiwagi”
“watanabe,matsui,matsui, miyazawa”
“kasai,akimoto,sashihara,kuramochi”

“so here’s the key the dorm is located at the east wing of the base, your things are already there, be sure to rest tonight and let us meet again tomorrow at exactly 7am in the air based to begin the training, no more lates, if so punishment will acquire (takamina,yuko and miichan gulped). Again welcome batch48!”
At the DORM, all access are complete, hotspring, gym, theater room, gamezone, it was like a five start hotel. They really made this to keep the cadets stress free after training or after work. All facilities are complete from indoor to outdoor. Their dorm is exclusively for batch48, its was like a big hotel that has 4 huge rooms, the sala is wide, the kitchen is perfect and their room was fir to their taste as a girl, the beds has already their name, each bed is design according to their personality, this is part of the research team of the akiba airbase to know exactly what the person is, from her hobby to her likes and to her foods and culture.

TBC...
tomorrow will update the rest of the chapters..  :nervous
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Re: Flying with you (atsumina,kojiyuu and other)
« Reply #11 on: June 02, 2012, 07:11:27 PM »
Kojiyuu have baby?! must be very cute  :wub: :wub:
and Atsuko is pregnant too~  :wub: :wub:

I'm waiting for how the story flow~ thanks for update^^

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« Reply #12 on: June 02, 2012, 07:40:00 PM »
Lovely couples with their baby. Please continue on next chapter.

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« Reply #13 on: June 02, 2012, 07:56:20 PM »
Oh! Atsumina~~ XD
At first I gotten really worried about Atsuko when she collapse!!!
I though of soooo many possibilities which are mostly... of course negative..
The possibility of pregnancy also came across my brain but my mind just keeps saying something else.. :nervous
Thank god it wasn't anything serious.. :D And Congratulations to Taka papa and Atsuko mama~~ ^^

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Re: Flying with you (atsumina,kojiyuu and other)
« Reply #14 on: June 03, 2012, 04:02:54 AM »
interesting begginig :D... love it you start for the last chapter.. good move..

Im interesting in this story more because their epilogue :D

aww kojiyuu baby.. and atsumina baby..

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Re: Flying with you (atsumina,kojiyuu and other)
« Reply #15 on: June 03, 2012, 04:24:35 AM »
Wow. an Update. So, this is a Flashback? or Maybe... not? Well, Whatever. And, They already interested in each other. Love in the first sight.  XD I got nothing left to say. Just... Thanks for the Update.
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Re: Flying with you (atsumina,kojiyuu and other)
« Reply #16 on: June 03, 2012, 10:18:55 AM »
Yay !! It is very interresting :thumbsup

I love the the beginning :heart: (if that is the beginning and not a Flashback :D)
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Re: Flying with you (atsumina,kojiyuu and other)
« Reply #17 on: June 03, 2012, 03:46:13 PM »
The Chapters are the flashbacks but the epilogue is the present.. i need to post more of the chapter first before continuing the epilogue..
thank you for your comments minna.. i'll be posting the chapter2 later..  :jphip:

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Re: Flying with you (atsumina,kojiyuu and other)
« Reply #18 on: June 03, 2012, 07:01:42 PM »
CHAPTER 2

(the chapters are all flashbacks only the epilogue is the present, but before I continue the epilogue I must post the entire chapters)

Going to their own room, all of them was amazed it’s like their own bed in the room, they immediately unpack their things and arrange it in the cabinets, the training uniforms are also well prepared. Introduction of names in each other has begun in each room and greeted nicely. Yuko went out, she knock on room 2 where takamina and miichan is there, but beside that of course trying to get close already to haruna.
“ei takamina! Want to exchange rooms with me? Maeda san is my roommate ya know” yuko raising her eyebrow to temp takamina.
“oist its against the rules look!” miichan pointing at the rule poster at the back of the door.

NO ONE IS ALLOWED TO EXCHANGE ROOMS, BE COMFORTABLE AND GET ALONG WITH EACH OTHER

Yuko  facepalm “oh common,”
Haruna goes out from the bathroom, wearing only a bathrobe. “oh sorry, we have a visitor, I just take a shower just to freshen up before dinner, im kojima haruna nice to meet you” offering a hand
Yuko’s mix emotion happiness and pervertness, takamina and miichan looking at her and giving her a finger snap, she can’t stop looking haruna’s flawless skin “ah! oshima yuko, your soon to be girlfriend, um I  mean we will definitely be friends a very very close friends” 
“let’s go outside let’s look at the place and meet the others, haruna see you downtairs  ja ne!” takamina dragging a stiff yuko.

Downstairs at the sala there was this black length hair girl sitting, wearing a glassed and reading some books.
Takamina thoughts (I wonder if she made any friends yet, maybe she’s a loner, but then she’s still pretty in that serious face) yuko noticed takamina’s eyes staring at her roommate.
“hey acchan! Come with us! We are searching the place lets go outside in the garden it’s a nice weather today, lest take this day as a day off before the training, read that book later” yuko waving at her.
“h…hai..”
Takamina POV (since when did they become close, already calling her acchan)
“ah takahashi minami desu, just call me takamina” “maeda atsuko, just call me acchan too” she then shows her smile and pulls takamina’s hands to shake it formally. Takamina still looking at her blushing and then look at the ground because acchan noticed it and chuckles. “your cute minami, is it ok if I call you that?”
“yeah sure anything you like” (why is my heart beating so fast, I can’t stop it, am I sick?)
Miichan then breaks their hands. “yosh lets go to garden!”

After the first day of meeting everyone, time passed rapidly.  It’s been four years since they have met each others, two years of intense training on the field, mudding their self out, having wounds, sharing their flying experience and more. They’ve become so close to one another, especially when they have given a work day off. Going to karaoke, shopping, food tripping and dating O_O .
 
Today after their light rescue mission takamina and yuko decided to go the hot tub (located at their dorm, it really huge that all of them can fit in)while everyone is in their room, takamina decided to go to the tub first then knock on yuko’s room to follow her. While in the tub taka remove her robe (you should be naked  when going to the hot tub its like an hot spring but just indoor) she’s not shy today because as she have seen she’s the only one there. Takamina then leaves her robe then splash to the tub, putting a towel on her face and facing east, the door was on the west so when someone has to come they can see only see takamina’s back.  The shower room was on the north side, yuko then enter the room and see’s  the midget’s sexy back.

“is that you yuko?” takamina talking while the towel still in her face.
“hai this is me, who do you expect? Your ever loving crush Acchan? Your thinking bold takamina! That’s good! learn it from me hahahaha” yuko proudly laugh.
“eh? What are you thinking im just assuring it is you, shut up yuko someone might hear us”
“We’re the only one here ya know so its safe to talk about your acchan”
“Speaking of her, I wonder what gift I should be given on her birthday, it will be next week help me! You were roommates so you knew already what she wants right? Im really thinking about it everyday everytime I see her”
“ohhh whattaa sweet secret admirer you are, my friend midget”
“look who’s talking, a pervert midget herself” takamina then deepens her body on the hot water.
“me and my nyan nyan are dating for almost a year,hmm lemme think what did I gave to her during her birthday, I remember I gave her a kiss and she slapped me, but that’s ok atleast I’ve kissed her ”

While yuko talking this to takamina, she notice a bathrobe on the shower room hanging, she knows this isn’t takamina’s robe because she place it near on the tub, she then take a peek but when she’s about to see it the wooden half door open and a pair of hands clasp to her mouth “sshhh” the girl gestures to her to keep silent (oh my god takamidget is dead, acchan is here? When? How? Maybe she gotten first here and takamina didn’t noticed, oh crap and she hears what we’re discussing, oh well I think this is good though for her to know, but my bestfriend oh no! what should I do what should I do!! Does acchan already hate her for all the confessions we have discussed? What is she thinking now! Damn this we should be more careful, what if she rejected my friend midget, what if she’s not going to talk to her, what am I thinking I should talk to acchan and make an excuse..YES! that’s it)

When takamina enters the room, acchan was already there in the shower changing to her clothes, she was about to go out when yuko arrives and then mention her name, she listen for a moment because she was interested in takamina’s words about on her birthday. She was just blushing the entire time of the conversation, acchan POV “why not ask me already what I want, I just want to spend my birthday with you confess to me already minami you baka!
“yuko are you still listening? Come here already in the tub! So that I won’t having a hard time talking to you” takamina louding her voice.
Acchan remove her hands on yuko’s mouth to talk and signing that don’t tell her im here.
“ye ye yess.. im coming..” nervous yuko hurried to the tub, acchan stayed there and didn’t go out in the shower,  until the two midgets are finish, still takamina didn’t noticed the other shower cubicle that someone is there. Acchan finally goes out when the two was done and heading to their room.
Downstairs everyone gather to have their dinner sayaka shouts to the others to come down already or else she would eat their meal,  acchan and yuko at the same time headed down stairs.

“acchan, what happen during in the tub room, sorry, we didn’t mean, I mean I didn’t know that your there really, it was not takamina’s intention to talk about you, I’ve started it.” Yuko explain with worried eye’s
“it’s ok yuko, I understand, it made me happy though” acchan just smirked.
“eh? So you mean? Your not angry with takamina? You mean you like her too? You mean you mean you mean??!!!  You could be lovers!” yuko’s excitement blurt out.
“that depends on your best friend if she has the guts to tell me” she just smile confidently.

After the dinner, the rest of them go their room and wants to sleep already because of tiredness during the day, while kojiyuu couple is in the sala doing some lovey dovey moments.  Upstairs takamina not looking in the way busy reviewing the schedule for tomorrow, bump her feet on the rolled carpet that cause her to fall, fortunately she falls to acchan who’s reading a book and not noticing takamina was coming on her way. Takamina tops on acchan, the book throw afar and the papers on taka’s hand falling in the air one by one, as if the time has stop, they didn’t notice their lips sealed on each other. The taller girl just staring on the person on top of her shocked at the moment.

“hey!! What are you two doing?? What happened here? I heard bumps so I got out, maybe I should get back in my room it seems your enjoying the bump together” miichan just realize that she was wrong timing on checking the bump sound.
“gomen, its my fault I should have look in my way” takamina hurried to get up her heart beating so fast, she offers the girl a hand to get up too.
“no, im not looking in my way too, im sorry minami” acchan blushing pink, looking in the ground so that takamina won’t notice it.

Takamina POV “my first kiss, that was my first kiss deg deg deg, my heart pumps fast, her lips is so soft, I feel her breath, I smell her scent, this girl falls me like crazy, atsuko I really like you,not like anymore I do.. really love you..

Both of them apologizing to each other and headed to their room, they can’t sleep it’s just too weird.

“minami..” acchan’s last word before falling asleep while touching her lips.


TBC~~ how was it?  :nervous
please leave a comment minna.. i'll post the next chapter tomorrow.. :jphip:







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Re: Flying with you (atsumina,kojiyuu and other)
« Reply #19 on: June 03, 2012, 09:19:30 PM »
yey,another atsumina!!
And i really like the other character!keep up the good work,i really like ur plot!im waiting to ur nxt update!!  :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs

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