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Re: ツMY OS---- SMOOTH CRIMINAL [7/07/2012]
« Reply #40 on: July 06, 2012, 07:40:45 PM »
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SMOOTH CRIMINAL




“At last for the long search in our mining exhibition we found it!” A man proudly announced this on national TV live, where all the press are there covering the latest scoop. In his hand he showed a sparkling jewel called a graynite, the size of it is as small as cherry fruit that has a color of green. Presently this is the most expensive mineral of all time because it is very rare more rare than a diamond.  For more than 5 years of research on this jewel at last they found it.

“So where will you put the grynite sir?” the reporter ask
“In the museum of course because that’s the only safest place here.. I know many out there wants this already” the man answered as he keeps holding the jewel in his hands.


While on someone’s house watching the television as she sat on her living room.

 “Sou..Maybe if I should get it she would be able to forgive me..” A girl talking to herself and starting to make a sketch plan and on that night she prepares her gadgets and gizmos.

When all her plan is set, she waited outside the museum stayed at the small park there and pretended to wait for someone. While in her mind she is sighting the most possible area where she could get inside, time passed by and it’s already 2am. Basically the small park in front of the museum is already quite and calm, there were only two people left there including herself, she manage to observe the other person sitting on the east side of the park.

“I bet she’s waiting for her lover” she thought while looking at the black hair length girl

When the guards were about to shift from their position she quickly seize this opportunity to go near to her target and change her usual outfit as a pro thief. Climbing up to the roof as her entrance making her way down using devices for a bandit like her. Smoothly she made her way down and slowly sneak around avoiding all the laser alarms, she can manage it well because her body is flexible enough and being small is an advantage.  Successfully she manage to surpass all the traps as she’s about to walk calmly very confident that she will be able to have the graynite, when out of the blue someone dropped above wearing the same disguise as her and quickly took the graynite stone loking at her and giving her a smirk. She was surprise seeing this action although she expected another rival from the graynite but not at the same time. Without a thought she chased that person, while running on the way she accidentally tap one of the laser alarm by her foot which causes the whole museum to noise all over. The police and guard rapidly go inside and saw two people wearing all black escaping up above. The guards run after them at the roof while the two of them get cornered, the only option left is to jump at their own risk.


“Jump!!” her rival exclaimed
“Eh??” she disbelief
“I said Jump.. If you don’t then hugged them..” Then her rival really jump leaving her

“Chotoo..argg I have no choice I wish my limbs won’t break” she closed her eyes and jump following the other thief advice. As they threw their selves on the ground the guards didn’t manage to follow them to jump as well, instead they quickly ran down and seize them but it was too late the two thief phantom were already escape and run as fast as they can even though their body is aching due to the high dropped scene they did. They manage to rest in dark hall way street, still not letting their guard down because police are now scattered searching for the two of them.

She first remove her black mask covering her face “Hey.. I’m the one who got in the museum first you must give me that!” pointing to the jewel inside her pocket
“Yeah you’re the one who got in first but I’m the one who got it” revealing her face
“Eh? You’re a girl too?” she was surprised
“Why do I look like a boy?”
“No.. of course not.. Ahhmm ano…by the way Takahashi Minami desu..”  she offers her hand (you doesn’t look like a boy but instead an angel)

“Seriously? Giving your true identity to me? Well in respect.. Call me acchan..” the tall girl with black length hair responded, not giving her full name just to be safe because they just met in this unexpected incident. They change their clothes right away and continuously walk ahead when they notices some police roaming around and the fact that they are the one they’ve been looking for. Although the police won’t identify their faces but what if they check their bags and found the clothes they wore they will probably get caught. As the two of them had no choice acchan the tall girl push takamina on the wall and kiss her torridly.

“whhaaattt are you doing? Youuu..” the short girl muttered while acchan kissing her passionately, takamina give up as her back was hardly push on the wall pinning one of her hands, she then realize that she was replying to the kiss, sliding her tongue to the other girls mouth and grabbing her waist more. When the police saw them kissing they didn’t even bother to disturb the two doing their thing. When the coast is clear and the sheriffs are gone, acchan was about to pull away but takamina grabbed her once more to continue what she had started.

“Their gone..” acchan says while gasping an amount of air
“So?” takamina raised her eye brows
“That was just a scene, I mean you.. me.. kissing.. to distract the police..” acchan looking at her
“Ah.. yeah.. I know..” takamina answered, but in fact she didn’t find what they did is just acting.
“So..we should be going now.. Separately..And thank you for your cooperation..” acchan smiled and pich her in the cheeks which cause her to blush a bit.
“You’re welcome.. Then see you around..” takamina beckon her goodbye too..


As acchan excitedly go home and talk to one of her allied who planned to steal the graynite Mariko “Marichan.. I got it..” she smiles, when she crawl her hands to her pocket and sees it, her eyes broadened as she bring out a piece of stone.

“Acchan? This isn’t the graynite.. it’s a stone.. a piece of ordinary stone..” mariko looking at it
“EHHHHH noooo… I manage to got it.. argggg that girl!! She tricked me!!” acchan is on rage
“Who is she? Did you fight someone?” mariko
“NO I didn’t, it’s just I met another thief in the museum at the same time but the police cornered us and we manage to do a truce to escape them, but she trick me!! I was the one who got the graynite first! Marichan trust me!!” acchan squealed

“I trust you and I believe in you.. You never fail me once.. Who is this girl? Did you recognize her?” mariko
“Yes.. she told me her name that’s her mistake.. She’s Takahashi Minami..” acchan
“Hmmm sou desu.. No wonder.. As I expected..” mariko let a small smile on her mouth an evil smile
“You know her?” acchan

“I really really know her.. She betrayed me 2years ago, when you’re still in Paris studying, she became my ally too.. one of the most top list like you, but there’s one mission that cause a billion value, she manage to get that but run away to us along with that amount, she didn’t even bother to explain or contact me.. I trusted her she was my friend..”
“Do you want me to find her for you?” acchan
“No need atsuko.. She will come back here.. I know that..” mariko confidently say it
“What about the graytine?”acchan
“Takamina will gave it to me..” mariko


While takamina was on her aparto resting she smilingly look at the graynite in her hands “hmm that was easy.. I regret doing it to you acchan.. but I need to.. I need to explain to mariko what happened during that time and I know this is the only thing that she would let me talk to her..she wants’ this badly, she’s really waiting for this jewel to be discovered by someone..And you acchan you’re a good kisser I hope we can meet again..” thinking what they did a while ago, while acchan was kissing her passionately she grabs her waist and slowly move her hands into the girl’s pocket, replacing the graynite of a piece of stone.


Three days had passed the media was still reporting the missing graynite, takamina decided to make the graynite as a pendant so she can wear it wherever she go and hide it to her shirt to assure that no one will take that away from her. While she was in a restaurant alone looking outside the window glass she thought she saw acchan but when she focused on the girl’s face she have just mistaken it.

“Maybe I was just thinking of her lately.. gaahh minami stop it..” she says while eating her favorite meal, she went to the comfort room to freshen up when someone locks the door. She look at the person who did that and saw that it was the girl she’s been thinking up lately.

“A..acchann..” takamina terrified
“yoroshiku minami..” acchan smiled and slowly walking towards her while takamina is back warding
“mmmm I think you doesn’t like to see me..” acchan still walking until she reach where the small girl was standing
“What do you want? If it’s the jewel..Sorry I can’t give it back to you..” takamina looking at the side avoiding the pretty girl’s brown eyes
“nah.. It’s all yours.. I’m not interested on it anymore..” acchan says as she remembers what mariko said to her that takamina will gave it to her in person

“Re..Really? So why are you here? Don’t tell me it’s a coincident” takamina still thinking that acchan might revenge for tricking her
“Nope..It’s not a coincident, as I saw you nearby and go in this restaurant.. I just wanted to know who’s with you and I found out that you’re alone so I followed you here..” acchan sweetly smiled at her that made takamina’s heart calm as the doubt just go away with one sweet smile. She was about to lean a kiss again when someone knocks and they forget that it was a comfort room, so someone will really come into the place. Takamina grab acchan’s hand as they open the door and headed immediately outside the restaurant.

“Where are we going?” acchan asks
“I don’t know..” takamina
“Let’s buy something to drink and go to your place.. How about that?” acchan pursuing her idea that takamina agrees with.
As soon as they reach takamina’s aparto they bring out the drinks they bought and started a toast at the living room. Acchan knew that her body can’t handle too much alcohol but still insisted to drink the last bottle takamina couldn’t do anything because the girl is very persuasive.

“Ne minami..” calling her first name while leaning her head on the smaller girls shoulder
“Acchan..you’re drunk you better rest..”

“oi..call me Atsuko.. *hic* that’s my first name *hic*”
“Alright Atsuko..You better rest..” takamina rephrasing her sentence
“Chottoo..*hic*.. I know already about you *hic* mariko told me *hic*”  acchn lifted her head and face takamina looking her straight in the eyes
“Shinoda Mariko? Do you know her?” takamina asking seriously
“hai..*hic* I know her very well.. and she told me about you.. why did you betrayed her? *hic*” acchan speaking drunk

“I did not.. That’s why I really wanted to take the graynite to see her, I want to explain what happen..and..mmf” before she could continue the last word acchan has her lips already.
“I like you minami..*hic*” as she pulled away
“You’re drunk.. You don’t know what you’re saying..” takamina blushed she can’t hide it because the girl cupped her cheek to focused on her

“Yes I’m drunk but I’m not numb.. I know what I’m saying.. I like you.. I want you.. *hic*” acchan still staring at her that made takamina shy and look down, the tall girl raised up her chin and kiss her again wrapping her arms around the small girl until they both fell on the floor. Acchan can’t hardly stand because of dizziness takamina raise her up bringing her on her room while the tall girl still snuggling and can’t walk properly. Takamina drop her off on the bed as the taller girls already closed her eyes flew to dreamland.

“A thief that isn’t immune to alcohol” takamina just let a small chuckle while at the girl on the bed. Knowing that there’s only one bed in her room she decided to sleep in the living at the couch, but before she could leave acchan noticed her presence and half openly her eyes, she grab the small girl’s hem line in her shirt pulling towards her.

“Stay..” acchan
“Yes I’m just right here now go back to sleep angel..” takamina stroking her hair
“No.. Stay by my side..” acchan stretch her arms and pat her right hand on the bed saying that takamina should lie there.
“Alright.. I’ll be sleeping with you..” the small girl had no choice as acchan was gripping her shirt tighly not letting go of her.

Takamina woke up first she turn to her side to view the other person beside her sleeping peacefully, while looking at her pretty face examining every part of it from her hair, forehead, eyes, nose, lips and her chin. Something caught her attention while looking down to her chin from her neck she notice some red marks on it when she’s about to peek under the blanket she was alarmed that the girl sleeping beside her was naked she immediately look to her own body too and astonish seeing herself naked also. Goosebumps run all over her body and try to remember what happen last night.

*yawn* “minami..ohayou..” the girl beside her greeted sweetly and hug her.
“ahh ummm ohayou..” takamina looking at her in furious state
“Ohh don’t give that puppy look minami.. Last night you were just like a hungry wolf eating me.. ne?” acchan giggled and kiss her on the lips still hugging her. Takamina then now remembers what she has done to drunken girl last night.

“Atsuko.. I’m sorry.. I take advantage of you..” looking at her showing her serious worried face.
“Do you regret doing it?” acchan ask her
“No..But you were drunk.. I don’t want you to think that I’m taking advantage the situation while I’m the one who’s normal” takamina
“I maybe drunk but I’m not insensitive, I felt it and I like what we did..” acchan biting her lip while her one hand was under the blanket already tracing takamina’s naked body drawing lines on her stomach downwards.
“A..atsuko.. we haven’t done our breakfast yet..” takamina panicking
“So? I shall be your breakfast.. Don’t you wanna eat me?” the aggressive girl rapidly move and climbs on top of her, doing again what they did last night.


After the squashy moments they did from bed to bathroom until to the very last part of the aparto. Takamina decided to go with acchan and meet mariko once and for all. When they reach the quarter house where mariko and acchan lives she gasp the graynite on to her chest lending some courage to face her old friend and hopes that everything will be alright.

“Acchan.. You’re home..” one of the servants greeted her
“hai and we have a special guest.. Hmm where’s marichan?” acchan
“She on the usual room..” servant
“Arigatou.. Let’s go minami..”  acchan holds her hand as takamina bowed to the servant

Knock knock “Marichan.. it’s me..” upon recognizing the voice mariko assured it was acchan
“Come in..” but her mood suddenly changed when she saw the girl behind from her clenching her fist and her eyes looking directly at the small girl.
“Nice to you see you again…Mariko..” Takamina greeted her

“I shall leave the both of you to talk.. And also I’m just on the side.. Don’t make fight just talk..urusai?” acchan with her bossy aura look at them

“Atlast takamina.. You showed up.. so what happen after your betrayal?” mariko giving a very sharp word
“I did not betrayed you..That’s why I’m here to explain..Would you let me?” takamina brings out the graynite that mariko really wanted, as long as mariko have this in her hand she sit on the chair and ready to listen as an exchange.
“Then begin..” mariko

“I did not run away after I got the sealed painting, they caught me, our opponent on that painting Nogi’s group... and I don’t how to contact you..Because they’ve locked me and shipped away from another place..” takamina her eyes are now teary

“What are you talking about? You even sent me a postcard!” mariko
“It wasn’t me! They did that to trick you! I was lost and I don’t have a single penny.. For two years I’ve work as a normal person just to gain enough savings to go back here..” takamina
“I’ve already killed their leader and her comrades are on jail.. I’ve sent them on trap..” mariko reassures her
“Well.. but that’s not my point.. I want you to believe me that I didn’t betrayed you” takamina showed her some proof that mariko faultlessly believe her with no doubt

“Takamina..gomen..For past two years I really taught you did that.. I’m sorry if I never trusted you.. I was so greedy..Having only in my mind was the treasure and I didn’t even find you..” mariko down on her knees asking for forgiveness
“It’s alright.. I think everything happens on a reason..The way are things happening now.. I’d never hated you mariko..you’re my friend.. ” takamina held her up and they hugged each other for reconciling.

“So you two are fine now?” acchan opens the door “I’m sorry if I listen..Can’t help it” giggling
“So what happen to the painting?” mariko
“I threw it on the river so that no one would have it neither us nor Nogi’s group” takamina
“Ehh??!!  Oh that’s worth a billion.. and the fish are enjoying it” mariko

“Well we can always take a new one right?” takamina
“Yeah sure..and now you’re back.. This seems to be perfect..”mariko

As they headed to the dining area to eat while walking takamina grab acchan to the side and press her on the wall, when mariko sees this she just let the two do their thing and continue to her way.

“Minami.. What now?” acchan
“You think I would let you go so easily you filthy pretty thief.. ” takamina
“Hah? What did I do?” acchan confused and she can’t move because her wrists are being hold firmly
“You stole..something from me atsuko..” takamina
”nande???” acchan
“My heart…” takamina looking at her with her eyes pleading with sincerity

“Do you have any proof?” acchan muttered
Takamina kiss her in gentle way softly biting her lips “Is that enough proof to you?”
“Nope.. I want more my handsome criminal..” the tall girl seductively say as takamina release her wrist she wrap her arms on the small girl’s neck while takamina;s hands where travelling already on her legs going up  and continue doing the she started until they end up in acchan’s room and you know already what they did there. *wink*





THE END
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« Last Edit: December 11, 2012, 07:11:12 AM by miayaka »

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Re: ツMY OS---- SMOOTH CRIMINAL [7/07/2012]
« Reply #41 on: July 06, 2012, 09:00:28 PM »
I like the ending. It was really good and cute. Imagining Takamina as a theif was really funny. Keep it up!  :onioncheer:

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Re: ツMY OS---- SMOOTH CRIMINAL [7/07/2012]
« Reply #42 on: July 07, 2012, 01:09:55 PM »
this one shot of yours is awesome..
all of your OS has a different theme of story whick i like!
keep writing and keep posting!
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Re: ツMY OS---- SMOOTH CRIMINAL [7/07/2012]
« Reply #43 on: July 07, 2012, 05:52:11 PM »
 :w00t: I like how Minami stole the graynite fom Acchan...  :twothumbs

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Sou..Maybe if I should get it she would be able to forgive me..
At first I thought Takamina have relationship with Mariko, glad it was just friendship  :P
Nice Atsumina moment at the end with the cheesy Taka~  :twothumbs

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Re: ツMY OS---- SMOOTH CRIMINAL [7/07/2012]
« Reply #44 on: July 08, 2012, 05:13:49 AM »
:w00t: I like how Minami stole the graynite fom Acchan...  :twothumbs

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Sou..Maybe if I should get it she would be able to forgive me..
At first I thought Takamina have relationship with Mariko, glad it was just friendship  :P
Nice Atsumina moment at the end with the cheesy Taka~  :twothumbs
Yeah the best way for stole something..

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Re: ツMY OS---- SMOOTH CRIMINAL [7/07/2012]
« Reply #45 on: July 08, 2012, 11:03:11 AM »


you fanfic...i like it..pls continue writing....

i love atsumina....or kai and acchan...
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Re: ツMY OS---- SMOOTH CRIMINAL [7/07/2012]
« Reply #46 on: July 10, 2012, 03:02:18 AM »
Ohohoh i like this.. so they ended up stealing the most precious treasure ever in the world.. their hearts  :luvluv2:
gahahah cheesy!!  :hiakhiakhiak: :shy2:

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Re: ツ OS---- BODY SHOT [7/13/2012]
« Reply #47 on: July 12, 2012, 08:42:39 PM »
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A/N I was supposed to post this during acchan's birthday but I change my mind teehee
I hope you'll like this one shot, a post-birthday fic..
I didn't include minors in the scene such as mayuyu and jurina lol



BODY SHOT



“Kampai!!” they all chorus as they tossed their glasses filled with champagne. Mariko, miichan, haruna, tomochin, tomomi, yukirin, Sae, mochii, takamina and of course the birthday celebrant maeda atsuko. All of them decided to have a post celebration on her birthday held at Mariko’s place.

“Gomen.. am I just in time?” yuko pant as she runs through out the door.
“Yuuchan..You’re just in time..” haruna welcoming her squirrel
“Omedatou acchan! I brought something to heat up the night more..” yuko brought out the bag

“Whoa??! Vodka! You’re really awesome yuko!” mariko
“Well that’s me oshima yuko!” the proud squirrel posed

“Oh no..not again..” takamina worrying in advance because the last time they celebrate tomochin’s birthday as far as she remembered yuko also brought some alcohol it was tequila, takamina knows what will happen tonight as she let a heavy sigh.
“How about we do a body shot tonight?” tomochin grinning, upon asking most of them agreed except for the poor captain that she had no choice again.
“So I shall now prepare the lemons and salt” Miichan


“You know this kind of drinking right? It’s exciting and hot!” tomochin she further explained. “The procedure is simple, we must draw a name in the bowl to identify our partner since our number is not even because were 11 person participating. When you got your partner’s name and it’s your turn to make the shot, you must choose whether on neck, on chest, on collar bone, on stomach or on thigh. Once you have chosen the part, lick that to moisten then pour the exact quantity of salt that you can handle and place the wedge of lemon in your partner’s mouth make them bite it softly. Then that’s it chose the part, put the salt, lick it and suck the lemon from their mouth”

“Urusai?” tomochin ask all of them, concentrating what the duck lip girl has explained.
“I like this game!” yuko biting her lower lip
“Why do we always play these kind of games every time we had a gathering?” takamina in despair
“I’m nervous..” yukirin holding her own hand

“How many bottle of vodka did you buy yuuchan?” Haruna
“Five my sweetie..Just enough for all of us I think..” yuko
“Fa..Five???I think one bottle is enough..Oh no..” takamina kneel down gasping

“Shall we start then? Time is running guys” mariko dangling the glass
“I hope I can get your name captain..” mochii wink at takamina, while acchan just look at takamina of how would she react on mochii’s phrase.
“Yosh! Let’s starto!.. Again my gratitude to all of you for making this little gathering for me..Arigatou..”acchan bowed to them

“By the way..We shall do the body shot on the second bottle..We must first warm up ourselves by the first bottle” tomochin opening the first bottle

After 2 rounds the first bottle was already empty, they can really feel the effect of the alcohol in their body, they’re not drunk only heating up. Acchan could feel her face getting warm and turning light pink while takamina forge herself to stay normal as possible and fight the alcohol effect even though she can really feel that her confident was increasing and she’s not shy anymore.

“I hate this feeling..” takamina
“I like this feeling..” yuko grinning to her
“oi oi.. you two.. come here closer.. Were about to start..” miichan pointing to the two midgets

“So who’s first? chiyuu” tomomi
“let’s draw..” sae pick a name in the fish bowl “Haruna!”
“eh?? Me..” haruna
“Yes who else is haruna here? tsk” mariko teasing her

“Alright pick a name to identify your body shot partner..hayaku..” tomochin, when haruna pick a name surprisingly the name was yuko.
“Oh.. I know she will like it..” yukirin
“Yuuchan..” haruna showed it to them
“Really nyan nyan??! That’s what you called destiny!” yuko laughing proudly and position herself as haruna came closer to her bringing a lemon and a salt.

“I choose the neck part” haruna
“Yada nyan nyan I want the thigh part..The lower the better..” yuko
“Hentai!” haruna spank the squirrel, as she initiate the ritual wetting yuko’s neck and put some salt on it she lick it gracefully like a plate which cause the small girl jokingly moan to tease her, haruna take the shot of vodka then rapidly suck the lemon on yuko’s mouth in a flash because the vodka really is a strong drink.


“That’s it? Oh I want more nyan nyan..” yuko
“Shut up yuuchan.. You wait until it’s your turn.. And if luckily you pick me..” haruna stuck her tongue out
The next round was mochii picking takamina’s name which made the ace clench her teeth and gave a fake smile, while the other’s obviously knew what she felt especially her beloved captain.

“Well faith it is.. as yuko said..” mochiii
“After this I’m dead..” takamina in her greatest frustration

Mochii chooses takamina’s collarbone as her target part, while mochii doing her shot the captain’s eyes was looking at the ace pleading that she had no choice she didn’t decide this unfortunately acchan couldn’t read thoughts so she just looked at the two and playing the uncut lemon in her hand squeezing it alternately until she burst it out when mochii sucks the lemon on takamina’s mouth.

“ah gomen.. I rip the lemon..I can’t help it, it’s so squashy..” acchan making excuse


After many rounds of shots mariko to miichan, miichan to haruna, sae to mariko, yukirin to sae, tomochin to mochii, acchan to tomomi next was yuko to takamina that was so auckward to both of them they didn’t expect this, so yuko chooses takamina’s neck the safest part she made it quickly and gulp the vodka in one blink just to finish immediately. All them was laughing at the two small girls for the first time making this kind of act. The birthday celebrant was now a bit drunk on her left was takamina guarding her behavior and along with her right side was yuko who is tough on alcohol but this time the vodka got her and made her drunk a little too. They paused the game because they were out of lemon mariko and miichan goes to the kitchen to cut some more.


“Fun fun we hit the step step ♫♫So don't keep yourself we know we love oh” acchan singing their latest collab with exile few days ago in a show.
Heat heat beat's like a skip skip♪” yuko continues it while their laughing on what they’re doing.

Takamina just look at the two and shake her head seeing the two aces singing happily with each other, when suddenly one of the ace acchan grabs her neck and place her mouth on the captain’s ear ending the song with “To the paradise take me please oh Choo choo train♫” when she pulled out acchan gave her a seductive smile that takamina knows that was no ordinary smile, it has a meaning.


When mariko and miichan was done, the shot resume and finally it was takamina’s part. When takamina pick a name the result was acchan, which made everyone smirk. Not knowing earlier when mariko and miichan was on the kitchen they sabotage the names in the fish bowl putting more acchan’s name so that the captain would really pick the celebrant. This was mariko’s idea she taught this was her birthday gift to the ace.

“Ahh it’s acchan..” takamina smiled and show the name to everyone for proof
“sou..I’ve waiting for this minami..finally you pick my name..” acchan seductively look to her

“woohooo!! This is exciting!” yuko shouted
“Takamina pick you part!” sae
“ahh..ano…”takamina couldn’t answer right away, the truth is she doesn’t know what part would she pick to place the salt.
“I know you want me..” acchan whispering to her
“……..gulp” takamina was too shy to said the part that she wants to lick the salt
“Should I say it instead?” acchan teasing her

“Atsuko…hmmmm I’d choose…” takamina
“Seriously midget I know want you want! Bring it on!” yuko giving her support
“I’d choose her thigh!” takamina burst it finally
“That’s my captain!” miichan
“Only my thigh huh?” acchan trolling


As takamina chooses that part acchan let her captain to pull up her skirt, the ace chuckling while looking at the small girl lifting her skirt. Takamina almost seeing her underwear blink twice and quickly change her view to her target shot. She lick to moisten and put some salt on the thigh as smoothly huff the salt with her tongue taking the shot she quickly stand and suck the lemon on the ace mouth. While acchan holding the lemon tightly in her mouth which made the captain pulled the lemon more, but the ace put her hands on takamina’s back head and push it more to prolong the lemon taking scene. Everyone was stunned especially yuko who was drooling already when the lemon drops from acchan’s mouth, takamina sucking her lips instead of the lemon and ended up kissing one another gently but passionately.

“I think the lemon was too sour for takamina to drop it” yukirin
“I think acchan’s lips were more fascinating than the lemon, that’s why takamina drops it” sae
“I think they need a room..” tomochin

“yuuchan you’re bleeding!!” haruna exclaimed which made the two kissing couple to stop and look at yuko who was stunned by them.
“Marichan…” acchan called

“Ah..Yeah I know that! upstairs third door on the right!”
“Guest room eh?” takamina nuzzle to her not pulling out from the hug.

“That’s what we need minami..A room..” acchan kisses her again on the lips, that made the captain no other choice but to lift her like a bride and headed directly to the room to continue what they had started.



THE END

Hope you enjoyed it..
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« Last Edit: December 11, 2012, 07:11:49 AM by miayaka »

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Re: ツ OS---- BODY SHOT [7/13/2012]
« Reply #48 on: July 12, 2012, 09:34:13 PM »
 :mon bleed2:
i want a full version of this!!!!  :bow:
this fic is so great!!!!

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Re: ツ OS---- BODY SHOT [7/13/2012]
« Reply #49 on: July 13, 2012, 06:37:39 AM »
OMG!!! happy day acchan :D with your husband :D

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Re: ツ OS---- BODY SHOT [7/13/2012]
« Reply #50 on: July 13, 2012, 02:16:26 PM »
 :nya: your one shots is really unique!

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acchan grabs her neck and place her mouth on the captain’s ear ending the song with “To the paradise take me please oh Choo choo train♫”
I can relate on this coz I saw the episode! EXILE and AKB48 singing choo choo train  :twothumbs


Make more story please!
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Re: ツ OS---- BODY SHOT acchan's belated bday fic [7/13/2012]
« Reply #51 on: July 13, 2012, 06:11:12 PM »
@wynaut yey you've watched it too!!
@axel0048full version soon XD i just need to finish some scenes in the the other story ahead
@haru9210 @Haruko Arigatou  :)

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Re: ツ OS---- BODY SHOT acchan's belated bday fic [7/13/2012]
« Reply #52 on: July 13, 2012, 06:17:19 PM »
ARIGATOU!!!!!!!! :mon XD:

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Re: ツ OS---- BODY SHOT acchan's belated bday fic [7/13/2012]
« Reply #53 on: July 13, 2012, 08:33:56 PM »
wowww...i hope acchan celebrate her birthday everyday...hehe :lol:
Please Continue!!!

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Re: ツ OS---- BODY SHOT acchan's belated bday fic [7/13/2012]
« Reply #54 on: July 14, 2012, 12:39:14 PM »
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i want a full version of this!!!!  :bow:
I AGREE!!
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Re: ツ OS---- BODY SHOT acchan's belated bday fic [7/13/2012]
« Reply #56 on: July 14, 2012, 02:40:00 PM »
I read this yesterday while I was at the bus. hahaha This made me really smile.. it's just sooo cute, I wished you continued it to what had happened in the room. trololol..  :on bleed:

 :heart: :heart: :heart: Will be looking forward for your new updates!

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Re: ツ OS---- DATING GAME [kojiyuu version] [7/19/2012]
« Reply #57 on: July 18, 2012, 07:03:32 PM »
OS Fics index




THE DATING GAME [kojiyuu version]



When yuko heard that acchan won in the dating game show which the no3b members participated she immediately called the ace on that night to seek some information.


On acchan apartment where she and takamina spend the night after the show the ace mobile rung that the two of them stopped on what they are doing in the bed.
“Atsuko you’re phone..” takamina on top of her panting
“Just don’t mind it minami..” pulling her captain closer for another kiss
“Maybe you should answer it..I bet it’s important calling you late at night..” the ribbon girl murmurs while their lips attached to each other.
“Alright..” biting the captains lips before extending her left arm to get the cell phone in the lamp desk near the bed. When saw the name yuko on the caller ID she shows it to takamina and the two was curious why the team K ace would call her this late.

“moshi moshi..”
“Acchan!! Finally you pick the phone..Sorry to disturb you..are you sleeping already?” yuko
“nope..not yet..What’s the matter yuko? Is there any problem?” acchan
“Yes there is! I heard that you won the dating game with takamidget..and..I want to do that too with nyan nyan ya know..” yuko
“Ah..hmm that’s why you called..So what can I do for you?” acchan

“Acchan the problem is they didn’t invite me to guest in that show! Because I had another shooting, but it was move so now I can participate, do you know when will the next episode be filmed? I don’t wanna ask the no3b members about it they will find out my intension especially nyan nyan..” yuko
Acchan suddenly hung up the conversation and ask takamina about it without telling yuko’s plan “Yuko the next episode would be haruna you’re right, and it will be filmed tomorrow”
“Sou..arigatou acchan..the info is sure fat huh..” yuko
“ahmm well yeah..really fast” acchan can’t hide her tickling feeling when takamina’s hand was moving inside the blanket teasing her while talking to you

“AHA! So the captain really is there! Doing some smut huh..I envy you! I miss my nyan nyan so much..I need to be on that game and make sure to win it!” yuko act crying
“Well ganbarre yuko..I know you can do it! So just inform me on tomorrow’s event alright? I’ve gotta go..goodnight and sleep well muah” acchan ended the call and face takamina again “you little hentai is that all you’ve got?” challenging the captain on top of her and they continue the long hot night *censor*

“Takamina sure is lucky tonight..” yuko mutter before closely flipping her phone.



Yuko arrived on the studio earlier than the guest no3b so that she can connive to the contestant’s. Using her cute points she manage to convince one of the girls to be replace by her and with her victory she is now part of the girls where haruna would choose later in the game.

“That was easy I never thought my puppy eye would work..” yuko chuckled as she keep on thinking how to win the game, she must win it no matter what in her thoughts. She just stops when she heard the mc stating the show.



“Minna here we are again in your most favorite dating show, as we refrain the last episode this is akb48’s no3b special, takahashi minami was the first to participate and chooses her date maeda atsuko without knowing it. Today as we continue the second member of no3b would be none other than Kojima Haruna, let’s welcome her with a round of applause”  the MC revealing haruna and take her to the seat

“As you’ve notice everyone, the rule of this dating episode is different from takahashi san, this time the three girls in the cubicle would not talk to say their answers but instead they will write it. As always I will be the one who’s going to ask the question haruna would answer it too by writing it. Now this is the twist of faith, whoever from the girls who match the same answer as haruna will get the point and the first who gets 3 points shall win in this game. The prize would be doing a body massage together brought to you by our most beloved sponsors.”

“Girls pen up where about to start”


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MC : Question number one. In your own observation what do you think is the most sexiest part of your body??
Girl No. 1 : Lips
Girl No. 2 : Eyes
Girl No. 3 (yuko) : Legs
Haruna : Legs

MC: We have a match answer here! One point to girl no. 3!
Yuko POV “Yosh! That’s me! You’re mine nyan nyan


MC: Question number two. For Valentine’s Day, which would you most like to receive?
Girl No. 1 : Candy
Girl No. 2 : Chocolate
Girl No. 3 (yuko) : Kiss
Haruna : Flowers

MC: no match answer here, Kojima san’s answer was Flowers!
Yuko POV “Wut?? But last valentine I gave her a kiss! And she likes it!


MC: Question number three. If lips were ice creams what flavor would you like to taste?
Girl No. 1 : Vanilla
Girl No. 2 : Peaches
Girl No. 3 (yuko) : Strawberry
Haruna : Strawberry and creams

MC: Should we consider this answer? *The MC asking the judges* Alright it’s considerable since the question is flavor! Girl no. 3 matches it! One more point and she will be the winner!
Yuko POV “I’m going to end this game in perfectly..no sweat!


MC: Question number four. What’s the sexiest outfit you’ve ever wore?
Girl No. 1 : a very short shorts
Girl No. 2 : backless dress
Girl No. 3 (yuko) : night lingerie gown
Haruna : night gown
MC: The game was done! Girl no.3 swipes it all!


While the mc was revealing the other girls yuko can’t help her evil laugh as she knew the results.

MC : now for the winner let us call girl no. 3 onegai reveal yourself!
“ehhh..Yuuchan?” haruna was shocked
“Is that oshima yuko? But she’s not one of the contestants right? How come?” the staffs wondered the scenario, when a sudden call to one of the staff explains that they have to replace the original girl with yuko for some emergency backout. This was maeda atsuko’s plan actually helping her friend not to get busted.

“Nyan nyan….I knew you were mine and mine alone even in this game we are destined for each other..” yuko cuddling haruna

MC: I guess we have made another couple here..Enjoy your prize girls!

After the show they headed quickly to the spa center and enjoy the body massage treatment. While changing their clothes before heading to the massage room.

“ne nyan nyan..we should go bath in the warm water together after this..” yuko grinning
“I know what you want yuuchan..” haruna
“I haven’t been receiving kisses from you lately and I miss it!” yuko asked

“You miss me? Hmmm well prove it tonight..” haruna smiled seductively and kisses the corner of her lips teasing her squirrel. Yuko was about to touch her but haruna grip her hands “Oops massage first yuuchan you really can’t wait huh..”
“Ow c’mon..” yuko in her frustration “I’m gonna make sure you will begged my name tonight nyan nyan” yuko warned her and they both go to the massage room to claim their prize.




THE END  :panic:
sorry for my ending :nervous

« Last Edit: December 11, 2012, 07:12:31 AM by miayaka »

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Re: ツ OS---- DATING GAME [kojiyuu version] [7/19/2012] update
« Reply #58 on: July 18, 2012, 08:47:25 PM »
Just read the Dating Game fics! So funny! Loved it. Especially the Kojiyuu: "Wut?? But last valentine I gave her a kiss! And she likes it!” LOOL
Need the read the others :D
Thanks for sharing!

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Re: ツ OS---- DATING GAME [kojiyuu version] [7/19/2012] update
« Reply #59 on: July 19, 2012, 12:06:48 AM »
 :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs :twothumbs
good job Yuko

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